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话题：最爱的课堂奇妙之旅
七年级上学期同步写作课讲义
请根据表格内容，以“My Good Friend”为题用英文写一篇短文介绍自己的朋友王浩。
姓名 王浩
年龄 14岁
上课时间 周一至周五
最喜欢的科目 科学 原因：有用、有趣
最喜爱的日子 星期三 原因：星期三下午有科学课
最喜爱的老师 科学老师Mrs Li 原因：非常有趣、喜欢在课堂上做游戏
要求：
1. 词数70左右；
2. 文章应包含所有要点，可进行适当发挥使文章通顺连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等相关信息。
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【审题指导】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
【思维导图】
首先，表明写作意图。直接说明要介绍好朋友王浩；
其次，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍他最喜欢的科目、最喜爱的日子及最喜爱的老师，同时解释原因。
【遣词造句】
他喜欢它，是因为它有用和有趣。（原因状语从句）
He likes it because it’s useful and interesting.
2.他最喜欢的日子是星期三，因为周三下午有科学课。
His favourite day is Wednesday because he has science on Wednesday afternoon.
【参考范文】
My Good Friend
I have a good friend. His name is Wang Hao. He is 14 years old. He has classes from Monday to Friday. His favourite subject is science. He likes it because it’s useful and interesting. His favourite day is Wednesday because he has science on Wednesday afternoon. His science teacher, Mrs Li, is his favourite teacher. Because Mrs Li is great fun. She always plays games with them in classes.
学校准备举办以“My Favourite Subject”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿，介绍你最喜欢的科目并说明原因。
提示：
1. What is your favourite subject
2. Why do you like the subject best
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于50词。
My Favourite Subject
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【审题指导】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【思维导图】
首先，简要交代“我”演讲的话题；I want to talk about my favourite subject.
其次，详细介绍“我”最喜欢的科目及原因；I think it is……
最后，对演讲做出总结。That's all my favourite subject.
【遣词造句】
I.我认为它很有用和很有趣。（省略that的宾语从句）
think it is useful and interesting.
【参考范文】
My Favourite Subject
Hello, boys and girls. Today I want to talk about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is English. I have English classes from Monday to Friday. I think it is useful and interesting. Ms. Lee is my English teacher. All the students in my class think she’s very nice. She often helps us with our English. And she teaches English in an interesting way. In her class, we not only learn a lot about English, but also have fun.
That’s all about my favourite subject. What about you
1. 学科名称
English, math, science, music, art, P.E., history, geography
2. 课堂活动
take notes, do experiments, role-play, group work, class discussion, listen to the teacher
3. 情感表达
enjoy, love, find... interesting/fun, be good at, feel excited, look forward to
4. 优点描述
improve my skills, help me think, relax my mind, make friends, solve problems
基础句型
1. I like English best because I can make new words my friends.
2. In science class, we do interesting experiments and learn about the world.
3. My teacher often plays games with us, so learning feels like fun.
进阶句型
1. Not only do I enjoy the class, but I also improve my skills.
2. When I'm in music class, I feel like dancing in the sunshine.
3. One of the reasons why I like it is that it helps me relax after study.
1. "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy."（只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子变傻瓜）
2. "Learning is like rowing upstream: if you don't advance, you will be pushed back."（逆水行舟，不进则退）
3. "Interest is the best teacher."（兴趣是最好的老师）
1. 开头（引入主题）
My favorite subject is... because it brings me lots of fun.
/ Among all the subjects, I like... best. Let me tell you why.
2. 中间（展开理由）
First, it's interesting. For example, in... class, we often...
Second, it helps me... When I..., I feel...
What's more, the teacher is very kind. He/She always...
3. 结尾（总结感受）
In short, I think... is the most useful subject for me.
/ This subject teaches me that learning can be both fun and meaningful.
（1）
（23-24七年级上·广西南宁·期末）假如你是李华，你校英文周刊正在以“My favourite school day”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英文写一篇文章投稿，介绍周一至周五，你最喜欢的上学日。内容包括：
1.你最喜欢的上学日是哪一天；
2.喜欢的两个理由（喜欢的课程、课后活动等）；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.写全要点；
2.词数为70左右；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：subject ( n．学科), basketball (n．篮球), listen to music (听音乐)
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【答案】例文
My favourite school day
My favourite school day is Friday. I have music on Friday and it’s my favourite subject. I love listening to music. I always have a good time in music classes. After school, I like playing basketball with my friends in the park near my home. I haven’t got lessons on Saturday, so I can play it for about two hours.
I love Friday so much. I’m always happy on Friday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍自己最喜欢的上学日及喜欢的理由展开论述，并谈谈自己的感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的上学日；
第二步，阐述自己喜欢这个日子的理由；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① like doing sth喜欢做某事
② listen to听
③have a good time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
① I love listening to music.（动名词作宾语）
② I haven’t got lessons on Saturday, so I can play it for about two hours.（so连接并列句）
4．（23-24七年级上·辽宁大连·期末）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom向你介绍了他们学校的课程科目后，想了解你们学校课程开设的情况，请根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件。
1. 你们学校开设的主要课程科目；
2. 你最喜欢的科目是什么？
3. 你喜欢这门（些）科目的理由。
要求：
1. 中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，60～70词左右。
Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for telling me many subjects about your school.
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Love,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for telling me many subjects about your school. Now let me tell you something about mine.
Now I am a nine-grade student. In my school, I have a lot of subjects, such as Chinese, math, English, politics, history, science and so on. Of all the subjects, I like English and science best. I think English is very interesting and useful. I like science because I want to be a scientist in the future.
What do you want to be when you grow up Please write to me soon.
Love,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对后文的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍学校开设了哪些科目，自己最喜欢的科目是什么以及喜欢该科目的理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②such as例如
③like...best最喜欢
④in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①I like science because I want to be a scientist in the future.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②What do you want to be when you grow up （when引导的时间状语从句）
（2）
假如你是 Mike，请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的英语学科。
提示:
（1）Why do you like English
（2）How do you learn it
（3）…
要求：
（1）短文须包括提示中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, I’m Mike.
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【答案】例文
Hello, I’m Mike. My favourite subject is English. I like it because it is interesting. And I like my English teacher. She is kind. She helps me a lot. She always encourages me to speak English. I have English classes at school every day. Now I can speak a little English. I can read English books. And I see English movies on weekends. I think it is useful for me. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己，并表明自己喜欢的科目是英语；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢英语的原因及如何学习英语；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己很喜欢英语。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②at school在学校
③on weekends周末
[高分句型]
①I like it because it is interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think it is useful to me. (省略that的宾语从句)
（3）
请根据提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的科目。
提示：（1）What’s your favourite subject Why
（2）How do you learn it
（3）…
要求：（1）短文须包括提示中的所有要点，并适当发挥。
（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Hello, I’m Mike.
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【答案】例文：
Hello, I’m Mike. My favourite subject is English. I like it because it is interesting. And I like my English teacher. She is kind and patient. She helps me a lot. She always encourages me to speak English. I have English classes at school every day. Now I can speak English better. I can read English books. And I see English movies on weekends. I think it is useful to me. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍作者最喜欢的科目是英语；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢英语的原因及如何学习英语；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己很喜欢英语。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②at school在学校
③it is useful to sb对某人有用
[高分句型]
①I like it because it is interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think it is useful to me. (省略that的宾语从句)
（4）
随着社会的发展，中国已经踏上了国际化的道路。为了鼓励同学们学好英语，你们学校英文网站“My English Learning”专栏开展征文活动。假如你是李华，请你写一篇英语短文，给该专栏投稿。
内容包括：
1. What’s your problem of English learning
2. How do you learn English well
3. What’s your tips for English learning
要求：
1. 不得在文中出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 词数60左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
English is useful, but sometimes we have difficulty learning English.
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【答案】例文
English is useful, but sometimes we have difficulty learning English. It’s hard for me to follow my English teacher in class. I ask my teacher for help. She asks me to listen to talks in English and then read the sentences. I also start to watch English movies. With hard work, English learning is interesting and easy for me now.
Here are other useful ways to learn English well. First, practice English with your partner. Second, keep a diary every day.
Have fun with English!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你学习英语的问题；
第二步，介绍你是如何把英语学好的；
第三步，最后给出学习英语的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①ask ab for help向某人求助
②ask sb to do sth让某人做某事
③keep a diary写日记
[高分句型]
①It’s hard for me to follow my English teacher in class. （动词不定式作主语）
②She asks me to listen to talks in English and then read the sentences.（and并列句）
（5）
（24-25七年级上·山东菏泽·期末）假如你是余晓明，在某英语学习论坛看到下面这个帖子，请你认真阅读该贴，并用英语回复它。
要求：
1. 回帖需包含帖子中的所有问题，可适当发挥；
2. 内容充实，结构完整，语言准确，书写规范；
3.70词左右。
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【答案】例文
I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.
My favorite subject is English. I like English because it is a global language and it can help me to communicate with people from different countries. To learn English well, I practice speaking with my friends and teachers. I also read English books and newspapers, and watch English movies.
I want to be an English teacher in the future. I will care about all of my students and try my best to teach them well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：介绍自己的学校生活，包括最喜欢的科目，喜欢该科目的原因，如何学习该科目，以及未来想做什么，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明愿意分享自己的学校生活，引出下文；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目，原因，以及如何学习该科目，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，说明自己未来想做的职业，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①global language 全球性语言，通用语言
②communicate with… 和……交流
③try my best 尽力
[高分句型]
①I like English because it is a global language and it can help me to communicate with people from different countries.（原因状语从句）
②To learn English well, I practice speaking with my friends and teachers.（不定式做目的状语）
（6）
（24-25七年级上·山东济南·期末）在你的学习生活中，一定做过很多让自己感到幸福快乐的事，如帮助别人、读书、志愿服务等。请以“_________ Make(s) Me Happy”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你做某件事的经历和感受。
要求：
(1)请补全标题；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；
(3)语言表达准确，行文连贯，书写规范，词数80-90左右。
________ Make(s) Me Happy
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【答案】例文：
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
In my study life, there’s one thing that always brings me great joy and happiness—helping others.
Once, I saw a classmate struggling with his math homework. He looked so worried and upset. Without hesitation, I went over and offered to help him. Together, we worked through the problems step by step. After an hour, he finally understood and smiled happily. Seeing his smile, I felt a sense of achievement and happiness.
Helping others not only makes them feel better but also gives me a deep sense of fulfillment. It makes me realize that even small acts of kindness can bring big changes and happiness to people’s lives. Every time I help someone, my heart is filled with warmth and joy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示： 写作要点包括做某件事的经历和由此产生的快乐感受，考生需围绕这一中心，详细叙述事件经过，并突出个人的情感体验。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题并表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细叙述做这件事的具体经历和感受；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①struggling with与……斗争，努力应对
②offered to主动提出
③a sense of achievement成就感
④a deep sense of fulfillment深深的满足感
⑤be filled with充满
[高分句型]
It makes me realize that even small acts of kindness can bring big changes and happiness to people’s lives.（that引导的宾语从句）

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