Unit 2 Home Sweet Home单元写作检测练习题(含答案解析)2025新人教版八年级英语上册

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2025新人教版八年级英语上册第二单元写作检测练习题
1.中学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽的观念。请你根据所给标题和下图内容,就家务劳动写一篇英语短文发表自己的观点并投递至校英语报。
提示:(1)Do you agree with the boy’s words
(2) Do you often do housework What do you usually do
(3)Should young students learn to do housework Please give at least two reasons.
要求:
(1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4)词数:不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Should Young Students Learn to Do Housework
As you can see in the picture,
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2.家是我们心灵的港湾,成长的摇篮,为家庭做力所能及的贡献是我们每个家庭成员应尽的义务。“书香重庆,红岩少年”阅读和写作大赛的新栏目“Sharing Corner”开启了英文征稿活动,希望同学们分享一次你为家庭做贡献的经历或故事(如分担家务,陪伴家人等)并谈谈你的感受。请你根据要点的提示,写文章参与此征文活动。
要求:1.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.书写规范,内容连贯,文中不能出现地名、学校、姓名等真实信息。
参考要点:
Opinions: our duty, do chores, care, help…with, work hard, tired…
Experience: time; what to do: sweep the floor, clean the house, cook dinner, look after, learn skills…
Feelings: be proud, a feeling of satisfaction, helpful, happy…
Love Family, Be Helpful
Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family. _______________________________________________________________
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3.假设你是李华,你的英语老师MissLi想了解同学们日常做家务的情况。请你根据以下内容提示,用英语写一封信,告诉MissLi你做家务的情况。
提示:
1.你做家务的时间;
2.你做的具体家务(至少四项);
3.你对做家务的感想。
注意:
1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人信息;
4.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Miss Li,
How are you I'd like to tell you something about chores that I do.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.随着社会的变化,越来越多的人认为中学生应当掌握基本的生活技能。假如你是李明,请你根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇演讲稿。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名;
3. 语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:independence独立 responsibility责任
More Skills, Better Life
Good morning, dear all,
I am happy to give a talk today.__________________________________________________
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Thanks for your listening!
5.你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“Family life”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示,选择不少于四个方面,写一篇短文,介绍你的家庭生活。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My family life
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6.假如你是孙丽,想重新装饰你的房间,可是又拿不定主意如何装修,于是你想请你的好朋友肖红帮忙想办法。请根据以下提示,用英语给她写一个电子邮件,说明你的想法。
房间现状 黄色,想粉刷成淡蓝色
相约时间及事项 周日上午购买所需物品:涂料、刷子、纸和胶水
记得带两把剪刀过来,选挂墙上的照片
周日下午做剪纸,粉刷墙壁
写作要求:1.文中须包含所给的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hi Xiao Hong,
It was fun to have an idea to decorate my room again. However, now I have no idea of how to decorate it for sure. Can you help me
Right now, the walls are yellow. I want to paint the walls light blue. What do you think about the colour _______________________________________________________________________
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Let me know what you think.
Yours,
Sun Li
7.家是心灵的港湾,家和万事兴。家务让屋檐下的温馨触手可及,交流使彼此的心跳同频共振。你校正在开展以“How to Make a Home Warm”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下的图文提示,结合自身经历,用英语撰写一篇征文,谈谈你如何通过具体行动为家庭增添温暖,并分享你的收获。
What to do: Housework Communication … How to do: Do the dishes; clean the room Have heart-to-heart talks …
Why you do that: Be independent Understand each other’s feelings Others: …
要求:
1. 短文必须包括图文中的所有信息,可适当增加细节;
2. 结合1—2个具体事例说明;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
4. 词数不少于80,文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
How to Make a Home Warm
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8.根据教育部要求,现在很多学校已经将劳动教育纳入课程中。为了倡导更多同学们尊重劳动,热爱劳动,学校英语俱乐部以“Let’s enjoy doing housework”为题开展征文活动。请根据下面的信息和要求,谈谈你对做家务的看法,并号召同学们一起参与做家务。
要求:
1. 须包含所有提示内容,并适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,语义连贯,书写正确;
3. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息。
Let’s enjoy doing housework
Dear friends,
It’s my pleasure to say something about doing housework!
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9.劳动是人生的必修课,通过劳动我们才能更好地成长。而家务劳动是一种爱的表现,每一个细小的动作都是对家的呵护和热爱。请你以“Doing Housework Makes Me________”为题,写一篇英语短文。
写作要求:
1. 结合实际,用适当的词补全标题;
2. 短文必须包含思维导图中的要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的个人信息;
4. 逻辑清晰,内容完整,书写规范,不少于80词。
Doing Housework Makes Me ________
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10.英文有句谚语“No place like home.”家是幸福温暖的港湾。假如你是Sandy,请你以“Home, Sweet Home”为题写一篇短文介绍你的家。
要点指导:1. 你家的居住环境;
2. 你的家庭成员及家庭成员之间是如何相处的;(互助、互爱、互相信任)
3. 为了让你的家更加美好,你打算……(分担家务;经常与家人沟通交流……)
注意:1. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 短文必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Home, Sweet Home
I am Sandy. ________________________________________________________________
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答案解析
1.中学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽的观念。请你根据所给标题和下图内容,就家务劳动写一篇英语短文发表自己的观点并投递至校英语报。
提示:(1)Do you agree with the boy’s words
(2) Do you often do housework What do you usually do
(3)Should young students learn to do housework Please give at least two reasons.
要求:
(1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4)词数:不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Should Young Students Learn to Do Housework
As you can see in the picture,
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【答案】例文:
Should Young Students Learn to Do Housework
As you can see in the picture, a little boy who is doing housework says to his mother, “Could you please pay more ” Clearly, he does housework as a way to make money. I don’t agree with his words. I think it’s our duty to do housework.
I often help my parents do housework. At home, I usually clean the room and make my bed. Sometimes I cook for my family. It’s very good to do chores. Firstly, it can keep us healthy and strong. Some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise. Secondly, to do housework can share our parents’ work. They must be happy if we can help them.
So I think young students should learn how to do housework.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文,围绕中学生是否应该学做家务展开论述。
②时态:时态为一般现在时陈述观点、做法、理由。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中对男孩言论的看法、个人做家务情况、中学生应学做家务的理由的介绍要点,适当添加细节,突出观点的合理性与说服力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借已给开头引出对男孩言论的态度及观点。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从个人做家务情况、应学做家务的理由几方面,说明观点依据。
第三步,书写结语。强调中学生应学做家务。
[亮点词汇]
①agree with同意
②duty责任
③physical exercise体育锻炼
④share分担
[高分句型]
①As you can see in the picture, a little boy who is doing housework says to his mother, “Could you please pay more ” (as you can see引出图片内容,who引导定语从句修饰男孩,开启论述)
②I think it’s our duty to do housework. (“it’s+名词+to do sth.”句型,清晰陈述观点)
③Some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise. (be regarded as短语,说明做家务的好处)
2.家是我们心灵的港湾,成长的摇篮,为家庭做力所能及的贡献是我们每个家庭成员应尽的义务。“书香重庆,红岩少年”阅读和写作大赛的新栏目“Sharing Corner”开启了英文征稿活动,希望同学们分享一次你为家庭做贡献的经历或故事(如分担家务,陪伴家人等)并谈谈你的感受。请你根据要点的提示,写文章参与此征文活动。
要求:1.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.书写规范,内容连贯,文中不能出现地名、学校、姓名等真实信息。
参考要点:
Opinions: our duty, do chores, care, help…with, work hard, tired…
Experience: time; what to do: sweep the floor, clean the house, cook dinner, look after, learn skills…
Feelings: be proud, a feeling of satisfaction, helpful, happy…
Love Family, Be Helpful
Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family. _______________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Love Family, Be Helpful
Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family.
Last month, I decided to help my parents more. I started by sweeping the floor and cleaning the house. At first, it was tiring, but I soon got used to it. Later, I also tried cooking dinner. Although I was nervous, my mother taught me some cooking skills. When I served the meal, I felt really proud and satisfied.
I realized that helping my family is not only our duty but also a great way to show love. It brings us closer and makes everyone happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述清晰合理。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,介绍自己为家庭做贡献的一次经历;
第三步,表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①get used to习惯于
②decide to do sth决定做某事
③at first起初
[高分句型]
①Although I was nervous, my mother taught me some cooking skills. (although引导让步状语从句)
②When I served the meal, I felt really proud and satisfied. (when引导时间状语从句)
3.假设你是李华,你的英语老师MissLi想了解同学们日常做家务的情况。请你根据以下内容提示,用英语写一封信,告诉MissLi你做家务的情况。
提示:
1.你做家务的时间;
2.你做的具体家务(至少四项);
3.你对做家务的感想。
注意:
1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人信息;
4.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Miss Li,
How are you I'd like to tell you something about chores that I do.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Li,
How are you I’d like to tell you something about chores that I do. I usually do chores on weekends and sometimes after school. Every day, I make my bed, water the plants, and take out the trash. On weekends, I help my parents clean the house, wash the dishes, and fold the laundry. I also feed our pet dog.
I think doing chores is important because it helps me learn responsibility. It also makes me feel happy to help my family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封书信;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体介绍做家务的时间;
第二步,具体列举四项家务活动;
第三步,表达对做家务的看法和感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make my bed整理床铺
②take out the trash倒垃圾
③fold the laundry叠衣服
④learn responsibility学会责任
[高分句型]
①I usually do chores on weekends and sometimes after school.(and并列句)
②I think doing chores is important because it helps me learn responsibility.(because引导的原因状语从句)
4.随着社会的变化,越来越多的人认为中学生应当掌握基本的生活技能。假如你是李明,请你根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇演讲稿。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名;
3. 语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:independence独立 responsibility责任
More Skills, Better Life
Good morning, dear all,
I am happy to give a talk today.__________________________________________________
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
More Skills, Better LifeGood morning, dear all,
I am happy to give a talk today. Do you have any life skills As for me, I have some life skills, such as cooking and washing my clothes.
Why should we learn some life skills First of all, it can make us live by ourselves. We can take care of ourselves when our parents are not at home. What’s more, it can help us to share the housework with our parents. In this way, our family will be full of joy. Last but not least, I think that the more life skills we learn, the better our future will be.
So we should learn more life skills and live more happily.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图给出的要点,可适当进行补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述掌握更多基本生活技能的好处;
第三步,书写结语,呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
①life skills生活技能
②take care of照顾
③last but not least最后但同样重要的
[高分句型]
①We can take care of ourselves when our parents are not at home. (时间状语从句)
②Last but not least, I think that the more life skills we learn, the better our future will be. (宾语从句)
5.你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“Family life”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示,选择不少于四个方面,写一篇短文,介绍你的家庭生活。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My family life
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【答案】例文
My family life
I feel that my family is very happy. I love my family because it gives me a lot of warmth.
There are five people in my family: my parents, my grandparents and me. My mom loves to sing, especially every weekend when she fills our home with beautiful tunes. My dad enjoys telling stories and helping us solve problems using his wisdom and experience. My favorite family activity is climbing. It’s healthy for us, and we also have fun doing sports on the mountain.
Sometimes I feel sad or confused. But when I communicate with my family, they always give me good advice. Their support makes me feel strong, even when I’m facing difficulties.
I am very proud of my family, and I hope we will continue to be happy and warm together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,介绍在家中的感受;
第二步,详细介绍自己的家庭成员、最喜欢的家庭活动等;
第三步,介绍自己遇到问题时的解决方法及对家人未来的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
②have fun玩得开心
③communicate with sb.与某人交流
④be proud of为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
①But when I communicate with my family, they always give me good advice.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope we will continue to be happy and warm together.(省略that的宾语从句)
6.假如你是孙丽,想重新装饰你的房间,可是又拿不定主意如何装修,于是你想请你的好朋友肖红帮忙想办法。请根据以下提示,用英语给她写一个电子邮件,说明你的想法。
房间现状 黄色,想粉刷成淡蓝色
相约时间及事项 周日上午购买所需物品:涂料、刷子、纸和胶水
记得带两把剪刀过来,选挂墙上的照片
周日下午做剪纸,粉刷墙壁
写作要求:1.文中须包含所给的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hi Xiao Hong,
It was fun to have an idea to decorate my room again. However, now I have no idea of how to decorate it for sure. Can you help me
Right now, the walls are yellow. I want to paint the walls light blue. What do you think about the colour _______________________________________________________________________
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Let me know what you think.
Yours,
Sun Li
【答案】例文:
Hi Xiao Hong,
It was fun to have an idea to decorate my room again. However, now I have no idea of how to decorate it for sure. Can you help me
Right now, the walls are yellow. I want to paint the walls light blue. What do you think about the colour
Do you have time this Sunday I’d like to invite you to go shopping on the Sunday morning. We can meet at the paint shop and choose necessary things together, such as the paint, two brushes, paper and glue. Then in the afternoon, we will paint the walls and make paper cutting artworks.
By the way, I'd love two pairs of scissors we used for paper cutting last time in your room. Can you bring them After painting, could you help choose some photos to hang on the walls
Let me know what you think.
Yours,
Sun Li
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件,请求朋友帮忙装饰房间。
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中房间现状、相约事项、周日下午计划的介绍要点,适当添加细节,突出请求帮忙的意图与具体安排。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借已给开头引出请求朋友帮忙装饰房间的意图。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从房间现状、周日安排方面,说明装饰计划与需求。
第三步,书写结语。期待朋友回应,结束邮件。
[亮点词汇]
①decorate装饰
②paint shop涂料店
③paper cutting artworks剪纸作品
④hang on the walls挂在墙上
[高分句型]
①I want to paint the walls light blue. What do you think about the colour (直接陈述想法并询问意见,开启互动)
②We can meet at the paint shop and choose necessary things together, such as the paint, two brushes, paper and glue. (such as举例说明购物内容,清晰具体)
③Can you bring them After painting, could you help choose some photos to hang on the walls (连续疑问句,明确请求朋友帮忙的细节)
7.家是心灵的港湾,家和万事兴。家务让屋檐下的温馨触手可及,交流使彼此的心跳同频共振。你校正在开展以“How to Make a Home Warm”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下的图文提示,结合自身经历,用英语撰写一篇征文,谈谈你如何通过具体行动为家庭增添温暖,并分享你的收获。
What to do: Housework Communication … How to do: Do the dishes; clean the room Have heart-to-heart talks …
Why you do that: Be independent Understand each other’s feelings Others: …
要求:
1. 短文必须包括图文中的所有信息,可适当增加细节;
2. 结合1—2个具体事例说明;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
4. 词数不少于80,文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
How to Make a Home Warm
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【答案】例文
How to Make a Home Warm
A warm home is like a safe harbor for the heart. I’ve learned that small actions can fill it with love.
Helping with housework is a good start. Every weekend, I help my mom do the dishes after dinner. Last month, she was tired from work, so I cleaned the whole living room by myself—mopped the floor and put away the toys. When she came back, her eyes lit up. “You’re growing up,” she said with a smile. It made me feel proud to share her burden and become more independent.
Communication is also important. Once, I argued with my dad because he didn’t let me play computer games. Later, we had a heart-to-heart talk. I told him I felt stressed after exams, and he explained he worried about my eyesight. We understood each other better and made a rule: I could play for 30 minutes after finishing my homework.
A warm home isn’t just about having a big house. It’s about doing our part and listening to each other. These little things make us closer, and that’s true warmth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括图文提示中的所有信息,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明温暖的家如同心灵港湾,小行动能让家充满爱,引出主题;
第二步,以分担家务为例 (洗碗、独自打扫客厅),说明做家务可增添家庭温暖,还能让人独立;
第三步,通过与父亲沟通化解矛盾的事例,阐述交流的重要性,能增进理解;
第四步,总结温暖的家不在于房子大小,而在于每个人尽责和相互倾听,点明核心。
[亮点词汇]
①put away 收起,放好
②grow up 长大
[高分句型]
①Once, I argued with my dad because he didn’t let me play computer games. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②When she came back, her eyes lit up. (when引导的时间状语从句)
8.根据教育部要求,现在很多学校已经将劳动教育纳入课程中。为了倡导更多同学们尊重劳动,热爱劳动,学校英语俱乐部以“Let’s enjoy doing housework”为题开展征文活动。请根据下面的信息和要求,谈谈你对做家务的看法,并号召同学们一起参与做家务。
要求:
1. 须包含所有提示内容,并适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,语义连贯,书写正确;
3. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息。
Let’s enjoy doing housework
Dear friends,
It’s my pleasure to say something about doing housework!
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【答案】例文
Let’s enjoy doing housework
Dear friends,
It’s my pleasure to say something about doing housework! I believe doing housework is very important. First, it helps us develop our independence. Second, we can understand the idea of fairness through housework. It helps us understand our parents better. What’s more, sharing chores teaches us responsibility and teamwork.
At home, I usually clean my room. At first, it seems tiring, but when I see the tidy room, I feel proud and happy. Besides cleaning, I’d love to learn cooking because it’s a useful skill that can bring joy to my family. I also walk the dog after dinner. I think it’s also a good way to exercise.
Come on, let’s learn to do housework and enjoy doing it!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:需涵盖图表信息(独立性培养、公平意识、责任感等),结合自身家务经历展开,注意语言简洁连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题,强调家务劳动的重要性;
第二步:具体描述自己参与的家务活动及感受;
第三步:总结呼吁,强化主题。
[亮点词汇]
①independence独立
②fairness公平
③responsibility责任
[高分句型]
①At first, it seems tiring, but when I see the tidy room, I feel proud and happy.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Besides cleaning, I’d love to learn cooking because it’s a useful skill that can bring joy to my family.(that引导定语从句)
9.劳动是人生的必修课,通过劳动我们才能更好地成长。而家务劳动是一种爱的表现,每一个细小的动作都是对家的呵护和热爱。请你以“Doing Housework Makes Me________”为题,写一篇英语短文。
写作要求:
1. 结合实际,用适当的词补全标题;
2. 短文必须包含思维导图中的要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的个人信息;
4. 逻辑清晰,内容完整,书写规范,不少于80词。
Doing Housework Makes Me ________
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Doing Housework Makes Me Independent
Now many students don’t do housework at home. They always say that they are too busy with their study. But in my opinion, we students should do housework. That’s because doing housework can make us independent. Now let me share my opinions with you.
I usually do housework at home. For example, I usually do the dishes after dinner. And I always sweep the floor and take out the rubbish. When I see the tidy rooms, I feel proud of myself. And I can show my love for my family by doing housework, so I think doing housework is meaningful. Meanwhile, I can get a lot from doing housework. It can not only develop my independence but also teach me how to take care of myself.
All in all, I think doing housework makes me independent. It’s also our duty to keep the house clean and tidy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给话题提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,说明许多学生不做家务,并表达自己的观点;
第二步,介绍自己做家务的具体情况,如洗碗、倒垃圾等,并分享感受;
第三步,分析做家务的好处,如培养独立能力、学会照顾自己等;
第四步,总结全文,强调做家务的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
① take out the rubbish 倒垃圾
② in one’s opinion 依某人的观点
③ take care of oneself 照顾自己
④ be proud of 为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
① When I see the tidy rooms, I feel proud of myself. (when引导时间状语从句)
② Doing housework can not only develop my independence but also teach me how to take care of myself.(not only…but also…句式)
③ It’s our duty to keep the house clean and tidy.(it作形式主语)
10.英文有句谚语“No place like home.”家是幸福温暖的港湾。假如你是Sandy,请你以“Home, Sweet Home”为题写一篇短文介绍你的家。
要点指导:1. 你家的居住环境;
2. 你的家庭成员及家庭成员之间是如何相处的;(互助、互爱、互相信任)
3. 为了让你的家更加美好,你打算……(分担家务;经常与家人沟通交流……)
注意:1. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 短文必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Home, Sweet Home
I am Sandy. ________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Home, Sweet Home
I am Sandy. I live in a quiet neighborhood. There are a lot of trees and flowers around my house. I can enjoy fresh air and hear the birds sing.
There are three people in my family. They are my parents and I. We get on very well. We love each other and often help each other. We trust each other, too.
I’m lucky that I have a happy family. In the future, I will help my parents do more housework and I will often communicate with them. I’m sure my home will become better and better.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据所给要点提示,以“Home, Sweet Home”为题写一篇短文介绍自己家。
2.写作指导:本文主要用第一人称写作,时态使用一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时要认真审题,根据提示的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。

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