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人教版8年级上册Unit7 书面表达训练
书面表达。(20分)
假如你校在英语节期间将举办一场主题为"My Space Dream“的英语演讲比赛,请根据下列提示写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你为实现航天梦将作何准备。(5分)
提示:
1. What do you think of flying to the moon
2. What are you going to do why
参考词汇:take exercise; get knowledge
要求:
文中必须包含以上内容,可适当发挥;
语句通顺,语法正确,字迹工整;
词数在 40左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone. I’ m glad to stand here to give a speech.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. I'm glad to stand here to give a speech. I think flying to the moon is fun and exciting. First of all, I' m going to take up some sports like running or playing ping pong because exercising is a good way to keep healthy.
I won 't go into China Space Station unless I am in good health. In addition, I plan to study hard and learn more because it's necessary and important to get knowledge about space.
So, I will try my best to read more books. Thanks for your listening!
(A) 书面表达解析
开头：“Good morning, everyone. I'm glad to stand here to give a speech.” 直接表明是在英语演讲比赛的场景下进行演讲，符合演讲稿的开头格式，引出下文。
主体：
对飞向月球的看法：“I think flying to the moon is fun and exciting.” 简洁明了地表达出认为飞向月球既有趣又令人兴奋，满足题目要求。
为实现航天梦的准备及原因：
“First of all, I' m going to take up some sports like running or playing ping pong because exercising is a good way to keep healthy.” 说明打算从事跑步或打乒乓球等运动，原因是锻炼是保持健康的好方法，且强调 “I won't go into China Space Station unless I am in good health.”（除非身体健康，否则我不会进入中国空间站），体现了健康对于实现航天梦的重要性。
“In addition, I plan to study hard and learn more because it's necessary and important to get knowledge about space.” 指出计划努力学习并获取更多知识，原因是了解太空知识是必要且重要的，从学习和知识储备方面阐述准备。
结尾：“So, I will try my best to read more books. Thanks for your listening!” 表明会尽力多读书，并感谢听众，使演讲稿内容完整。
语言特点：使用了 “First of all”“In addition” 等连接词，使文章条理清晰。语言简洁易懂，符合 40 词左右的字数要求，且语法正确，语句通顺。
(B)假设你是李华,你校英语报正在举办“AI in 0ur Life (科技与生活)”主题征文活动。请你以“AI in Our Life”为题写一篇英语短文。(15分)
内容:
1.人工智能在生活中的应用实例(至少两个);
2.人工智能带来的便利与问题;
3.你对合理使用人工智能的建议。
要求:
条理清晰,内容完整,语句通顺,书写工整;
词数在80左右。
AI in Our Life
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(B)One possible version :
Al in Our Life
As we all know, Al changes our lives greatly. With the development of science and technology , we can see all kinds of Al products in our daily life.
For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient while cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with Al technology being widely used, many workers lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on Al too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves.
(B) 书面表达解析
开头：“As we all know, Al changes our lives greatly. With the development of science and technology, we can see all kinds of Al products in our daily life.” 指出人工智能极大地改变了我们的生活，随着科技发展，日常生活中能看到各种人工智能产品，引出下文对人工智能应用的介绍。
主体：
应用实例：“For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient while cleaning robots can help with housework.” 列举了智能手机使工作和学习更高效，清洁机器人能帮助做家务这两个应用实例，满足至少两个实例的要求。
便利与问题：“They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with Al technology being widely used, many workers lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on Al too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves.” 先说明人工智能给社会带来便利和进步，接着用 “However” 转折，指出其带来的问题，如许多工人失业，一些学生过度依赖人工智能而失去自己做事的能力。
合理使用建议（补充）：“We should use AI as a tool to assist us rather than rely on it completely. For instance, students can use AI to search for information but should form their own thinking through reading and analysis. And workers can learn new skills related to AI to adapt to the changing job market.” 提出应将人工智能作为辅助工具而非完全依赖它，比如学生可以用其搜索信息但要通过阅读和分析形成自己的思考，工人可以学习与人工智能相关的新技能以适应变化的就业市场。
结尾（补充）：“In conclusion, only by using AI reasonably can we enjoy its benefits and avoid its drawbacks.” 总结全文，强调只有合理使用人工智能才能享受其好处并避免弊端。
语言特点：使用了 “For example”“However”“Also”“For instance”“In conclusion” 等连接词和过渡语，使文章条理清晰。语言简洁明了，符合 80 词左右的字数要求，且语句通顺语法基本正确。

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