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专题22
书面表达
I、20年高考真题
（20·全国甲卷·书面表达）
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1.
词数100左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear
Chris,
Word
came
that
our
school
is
going
to
hold
a
class
meeting
whose
topic
is
related
to
Chinese
traditional
customs.
Because
this
activity
will
be
presented
on
the
English
website,
I
sincerely
want
you
to
offer
me
some
advice.
As
far
as
we
know,
there
is
a
huge
cultural
difference
between
China
and
the
western
countries.
In
order
to
get
more
clicks,
you’d
better
tell
me
which
Chinese
culture
you
westerners
prefer.
What’s
more,
if
I
want
to
decorate
my
website
with
some
Chinese
elements,
what
should
I
do?
Knowing
you
are
interested
in
China,
I
do
believe
you
can
help
me
solve
these
puzzles.
If
possible,
you
can
reply
to
me
as
soon
as
possible.
I
will
take
your
advice
into
consideration.
I
really
appreciate
your
help.
Yours,
Li
Hua
（20·全国乙卷·书面表达）
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be
smart
online
learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.
分析优势与不足；
2.
提出学习建议。
注意：
1.
词数100左右;
2.
题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】one
possible
version:
Be
smart
online
learners
Network
learning
has
increasingly
become
an
important
means
for
people
to
acquire
knowledge
and
solve
problems.But
being
smart
online
learners
has
its
advantages
and
disadvantages.
First
of
all,
as
smart
online
learners,
we
can
make
full
use
of
the
most
extensive
educational
resources
to
broaden
the
horizon.
Besides,
We
can
take
the
initiative
in
our
study
by
ourselves
without
time
and
space
limit.
Of
course,
these
disadvantages
are
as
follows.Faced
with
all
kinds
of
information
on
the
internet,
We
can't
tell
the
difference
between
the
true
and
the
false,
which
may
be
harmful
to
our
study
and
life.
On
the
other
hand,
online
learning
itself
has
some
imperfections,
making
it
difficult
for
us
not
to
be
affected.
In
conclusion
,
we
should
have
a
good
understanding
of
its
advantages
and
disadvantages
and
find
a
proper
way
to
make
our
study
more
efficient.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以
Be
smart
online
learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
1.
词汇积累
充分利用：make
full
use
of→
make
the
most
of
扩宽,丰富：broaden→
enrich
各种各样：
all
kinds
of→
varieties
of
不完美：imperfection→
defect
2.
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In
conclusion
,
we
should
have
a
good
understanding
of
its
advantages
and
disadvantages
and
find
a
proper
way
to
make
our
study
more
efficient.
拓展句：In
conclusion
,
we
should
have
a
good
understanding
of
its
advantages
and
disadvantages
，
finding
a
proper
way
to
make
our
study
more
efficient.
[高分句型1]
Faced
with
all
kinds
of
information
on
the
internet
,We
can't
tell
the
difference
between
the
true
and
the
false,
which
may
be
harmful
to
our
study
and
life.（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]On
the
other
hand
,online
learning
itself
has
some
imperfections,
making
it
difficult
for
us
not
to
be
affected.（现在分词作状语）
II、20年高考模拟试题
（20·成都三诊·书面表达）
假如你校英语角正在征集与课外活动有关的短文。请根据以下要点介绍令你印象最深刻的一次课外活动。
1.
时间、地点；2.
活动过程；3.
你的感受。
注意：1.
词数100左右；2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
An
Impressive
After-school
Activity
【答案】Last
Saturday,
our
class
held
a
meaningful
activity
showing
our
sincere
concern
for
the
elderly
in
the
nursing
home.
The
moment
we
went
there,
all
of
us
got
started
immediately.
Some
of
us
cleaned
the
rooms
and
windows
carefully,
some
chatted
with
the
elderly
delightedly,
and
some
even
sang
beautiful
songs.
This
wonderful
and
happy
moment
lasted
for
more
than
four
hours.
At
last,
we
left
with
full
enjoyment
and
pride,
promising
more
regular
visits.
Caring
for
others
is
a
traditional
virtue
of
our
nation.
If
everyone
loves
others
unconditionally,
we
can
surely
make
our
country
a
better
place
to
live.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生介绍令一次令人印象最深刻的课外活动。
1.词汇积累
真诚的：sincere→heartfelt
立即：immediately→right
away
开心地：delightedly→happily
快乐：enjoyment→joy
2.句式拓展
运用非谓语动词
原句：Some
of
us
cleaned
the
rooms
and
windows
carefully,
some
chatted
with
the
elderly
delightfully,
and
some
even
sang
beautiful
songs.
拓展句：Some
of
us
cleaned
the
rooms
and
windows
carefully,
some
chatting
with
the
elderly
delightfully,
and
some
even
sang
beautiful
songs.
[高分句型1]
At
last,we
left
with
full
enjoyment
and
pride,
promising
more
regular
visits.
(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
Caring
for
others
is
a
traditional
virtue
of
our
nation.
(运用了动名词作主语)
（20·天津十二区县联考2·书面表达）
你是晨光中学的李津，你校要举办一个英语特色活动，作为负责人，你给你曾经的外教
Jonathan写一封E-mail,请求他给你一些建议。
1.你举办这个活动的设想(时间、地点、目的、一个活动形式如：英语戏剧表演或英语图书
分享会等)。
2,对外教提两个有关活动设想的具体的问题。词数不少于100。开头已给出，不计入词数。
Dear
Jonathan,
How
time
flies!
We
haven't
seen
each
other
for
almost
one
year
since
you
went
back
home.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One
possible
answer
Dear
Jonathan,
How
time
flies!
We
haven't
seen
each
other
for
almost
one
year
since
you
went
back
home.
I
am
writing
to
ask
for
your
advice
on
organizing
an
activity
featuring
English,
hoping
you
can
help
me
organize
a
successful
event
I,
as
the
student
in
charge,
have
made
a
plan
that
this
activity
will
be
held
next
month
in
our
school
library
in
the
form
of
a
drama
competition.
The
aim
of
the
competition
is
to
arouse
students'
interest
in
learning
English
and
literature.
The
students
will
take
part
in
this
competition
representing
their
classes.
One
class
one
team.
What's
more,
the
drama
they
choose
can
be
either
English
dramas
or
Chinese
dramas,
but
all
should
be
performed
in
English.
I
do
believe
this
competition
can
not
only
enhance
students'
English
level
but
also
improve
students'
all-tound
ability.
Mr.
Jonathan,
do
you
think
my
plan
is
practical?
Can
you
recommend
any
dramas
that
are
suitable
for
the
high
school
students
in
China
to
perform?
I
would
appreciate
it
a
lot
if
you
could
give
me
some
suggestions.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给曾经的外教
Jonathan写一封信，请求关于英语特色活动的建议。
1.词汇积累（4个以上，含4个）
代表：on
behalf
of→represent
提高：improve→enhance
建议：advise→recommend
感激be
grateful→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变倒装句
原句：I
do
believe
this
competition
can
not
only
enhance
students'
English
level
but
also
improve
students'
all-tound
ability.
拓展句：Not
only
can
this
competition
enhance
students'
English
level
but
also
improve
students'
all-tound
ability.
[高分句型1].
I
do
believe
this
competition
can
not
only
enhance
students'
English
level
but
also
improve
students'
all-tound
ability.(强调句)
[高分句型2].I
would
appreciate
it
a
lot
if
you
could
give
me
some
suggestions.(if引导的状语从句)
（20·天津市5月压轴模拟·书面表达）
假设你是晨光中学李津。为了响应“光盘行动”号召，反对舌尖上的浪费，
本学期你校英语俱乐部开展了主题为“Clear
Your
Plate”的英语演讲比赛，请你以此为题准备一篇英文演讲稿参赛。内容包括：
1.
同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重；
2.
呼吁同学们节约粮食；
3.
建议。
注意：
1.
词数不少于100;
2.
开头已给出,
但不计入词数;
3.
可以适当增加细节,
以使行文连贯。
Hello,
everyone!
Let
me
tell
you
something
about
“Clear
Your
Plate”.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【解析】
写作本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Clear
Your
Plate”为题写一篇英文演讲稿来响应“光盘行动”号召，反对舌尖上的浪费。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.
同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重；
2.
呼吁同学们节约粮食；
3.
建议。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
call
on；join
a
campaign；eat
up；contribute
our
efforts
to；eat
up；have
a
chance
to；have
any
effect；make
sure;keep
in
mind；no
matter
what；make
a
difference
第三步：连词成句
1.And
everyone
is
called
on
to
join
a
campaign,
called
“Clear
Your
Plate”,
which
requires
people
to
eat
up
all
our
food.
2.And
there
are
lots
of
things
we
can
do
to
contribute
our
efforts
to
it.
3.Besides,
once
we
have
a
chance
to
have
meals
with
other
people,
who
don’t
realize
the
importance,
we
can
explain
the
purpose
of
the
campaign
and
convince
them
not
to
waste
food.
4.Some
may
question
whether
the
campaign
have
any
effect,
but,
I
think,
one
thing
we
should
keep
in
mind
is
that
no
matter
what
a
small
effort
we
make,
it
do
make
a
difference.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides,
and
2.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
Although
+clause(从句),
In
spite
of+n/doing,
On
the
one
hand…,On
the
other
hand…
Some…,while
others…,as
for,
so…that…（供参考）
3.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
（20·宝坻区三模·书面表达）
假定你是李津。你校外籍交换生Henry
给你发了一份邮件，想让你为他推荐一种字典，用来学习汉语，请你用英语给他回复。内容包括：
1.
字典名称；
2
推荐理由；
3.
表达祝愿。
注意:
1.
词数100左右;
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear
Henry,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Jin
【答案】Dear
Henry,
Pleased
to
know
your
passion
for
learning
Chinese,
I’m
writing
to
recommend
Xinhua
Dictionary
to
you.
As
a
native
speaker,
I
believe
it
is
a
helpful
tool,
especially
for
the
beginners.
Firstly,
it’s
one
of
the
most
widely
used
dictionaries
in
China,
not
only
for
its
wide
range
of
vocabulary
but
also
for
its
precise
explanation
of
each
word.
Besides,
its
reasonable
price
is
undoubtedly
an
appealing
factor.
I
hope
my
suggestion
helpful
and
wish
you
great
progress
in
learning
Chinese.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍交换生Henry回一份邮件，为他推荐一种字典，用来学习汉语。
1.词汇积累
高兴的：pleased
→glad
建议：suggestion
→
advice
此外：besides
→moreover
学习：learn
→
study
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Pleased
to
know
your
passion
for
learning
Chinese,
I’m
writing
to
recommend
Xinhua
Dictionary
to
you.
拓展句：I
am
very
glad
to
know
that
you
are
enthusiastic
about
learning
Chinese,
so
I
am
writing
to
recommend
Xinhua
Dictionary
to
you.
[高分句型1]
Pleased
to
know
your
passion
for
learning
Chinese,
I’m
writing
to
recommend
Xinhua
Dictionary
to
you.
(运用了省略结构)
[高分句型2]
Firstly,
it’s
one
of
the
most
widely
used
dictionaries
in
China,
not
only
for
its
wide
range
of
vocabulary
but
also
for
its
precise
explanation
of
each
word.
(运用了短语not
only
…
but
also
…连接句子)
（20·和平区三模·书面表达）
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你的美国笔友Tom给你发电了邮件希望了解你的
高三生活。请你给Tom
回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：
(1)高三生活(从学习、娱乐、社会活动中任选二点)；
(2)高三一年中自己最大的感受：
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Tom,
Your
e-mail
reached
me
yesterday,
and
I
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear
Tom
Your
e-mail
reached
me
yesterday,
and
I
felt
greatly
honored
to
share
my
senior
life
with
you
here.
More
details
are
as
follows.
To
begin
with,
as
a
senior
student,
life
is
busy
and
fulfilling
due
to
the
ultimate
goal---College
Entrance
Examination.
Apart
from
study,
I
would
play
football
with
my
friends
after
school
or
at
the
weekend
to
get
myself
relaxed,
which
in
turn
refreshes
my
mind
and
gives
me
much
energy
to
fulfill
better
results.
What
impresses
me
most
is
the
friendship
formed
in
the
period.
I
think
friends
in
high
school
are
my
best
friends
forever,
because
they
know
me
a
lot
and
witness
all
of
my
emotions.
As
for
my
future,
I’m
eager
to
be
admitted
into
a
well-known
university.
Thus,
I
work
so
hard
for
it,
so
I
must
learn
more
as
I
can
to
fulfill
myself.
Looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you
soon.
Yours,
Li
Jin
【解析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tom回一封电子邮件，介绍自己的高三生活。
1.词汇积累
荣幸：privilege→honor
最终的：culminating/final→ultimate
目标：target/aim→goal
使恢复：regain/renew→refresh
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As
for
my
future,
I’m
eager
to
be
admitted
into
a
well-known
university.
拓展句：As
for
my
future,
I’m
eager
to
be
admitted
into
a
well-known
university,
where
I
will
further
explore
my
potential
and
achieve
my
dreams
in
the
long
run.
[高分句型1]
Aside
of
study,
I
would
play
football
with
my
friends
after
school
or
at
the
weekend
to
get
myself
relaxed,
which
in
turn
refreshes
my
mind
and
gives
me
much
energy
to
fulfill
better
results.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
What
impresses
me
most
is
the
friendship
formed
in
the
period.（运用了what引导的主语从句）
（20·河东区二模·书面表达）
假设你是李津，最近你收到英国笔友Peter的来信，想就“How
to
live
with
pressure”的话题和你交流，询问你能否就解决学习和生活中一些问题谈谈自己的体验和感想。请根据此话题及以下提示写一封回信。
①过去遇到问题时的表现(如心理压力、情绪紧张、心情低落等)。
②介绍你解决压力问题的做法。
③表达你的希望。
注意：1.词数不少于100，开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.必须包含提示内容。
3.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear
Peter,
Glad
to
hear
from
you,
I'd
like
to
write
about
how
to
live
with
pressure.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best
wishes.
Yours,
Li
Jin.
【答案】One
possible
version:
Dear
Peter,
Glad
to
hear
from
you.
I'd
like
to
write
about
how
to
live
with
pressure.
Firstly,
I'd
take
my
problem
as
an
example.
I
used
to
feel
pressured
to
do
well
in
exams.The
pressure
made
me
out
of
breath.
To
my
disappointment,
the
more
worried
I
was
about
my
studies,
the
less
efficient
I
became.
So
I
realize
I
just
take
pressure
too
seriously.
Secondly,
let
me
tell
you
how
to
deal
with
it.
I
try
taking
things
easy
by
taking
part
in
various
activates
out
of
class,
enjoying
music
and
chatting
with
my
friends
about
fun
things.
To
my
delight,
this
works.
Pressure
cannot
be
avoided.
What
counts
is
how
to
deal
with
it
properly.
So
I
do
hope
you
can
face
problems
and
pressure
bravely
and
your
life
will
be
full
of
sunshine.
Best
wishes.
Yours,
Li
Jin
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李津，最近你收到英国笔友Peter的来信，想就“How
to
live
with
pressure”的话题和你交流，询问你能否就解决学习和生活中一些问题谈谈自己的体验和感想。要求考生根据此话题及提示写一封回信。
1.词汇积累
有压力：feel
pressured→get
stressed
担忧：be
worried
about→be
concerned
about
处理：deal
with→cope
with
参加：take
part
in→participate
in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I
used
to
feel
pressured
to
do
well
in
exams.
The
pressure
made
me
out
of
breath.
拓展句：I
used
to
feel
pressured
to
do
well
in
exams,
which
made
me
out
of
breath.
[高分句型1]
To
my
disappointment,
the
more
worried
I
was
about
my
studies,
the
less
efficient
I
became.
(运用了“the+比较级……，the+比较级……”结构)
[高分句型2]
So
I
do
hope
you
can
face
problems
and
pressure
bravely
and
your
life
will
be
full
of
sunshine.
(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
（20·河西区三模·书面表达）
假定你是晨光中学的学生李律，你正在某国外中学作交换生，该校的“外国文化”栏目近期将介绍中国传统文化，校报编辑Jenny给你写信，咨询你的意见。请你给Jenny写封回信，内容要点如下：
1.你认为最能代表中国文化的是什么?请说明理由；
2.我们应该如何更好地推广中国文化?
(至少两点)
3.词数不少于100.
【答案】Dear
Jenny,
I
am
pleased
to
receive
your
letter.
I'm
so
happy
that
the
"Foreign
Cultures"
section
in
our
newspaper
will
recommend
Chinese
traditional
culture.
There
is
no
doubt
that
Confucius
is
the
most
representative
symbol
of
Chinese
culture.
As
a
philosopher,
Confucius
not
only
represents
the
traditional
Chinese
culture,
but
has
been
influencing
us
Chinese
people
since
ancient
times.
Nowadays
we
can
find
lots
of
Confucius
institutes
around
the
world,
which
provides
precious
opportunities
for
the
foreigners
to
learn
about
Chinese
culture.
To
promote
Chinese
culture,
we
are
supposed
to
provide
various
cultural
exchange
activities.
What's
more,
establishing
Confucius
institutes
all
over
the
world
is
also
a
good
idea.
Meanwhile,
attracting
more
foreign
visitors
to
China
to
experience
Chinese
culture
will
have
a
far-reaching
impact.
I'll
be
glad
if
I
could
help
you,
Best
wishes.
Yours,
Li
Jin
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给所在某国外中学的校报编辑Jenny写封回信，介绍你对中国文化和推广方式的看法。
1.
词汇积累
栏目：column→section
古代：old
times→ancient
times
建立：build→establish
影响：influence→impact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile,
attracting
more
foreign
visitors
to
China
to
experience
Chinese
culture
will
have
a
far-reaching
impact.
拓展句：Meanwhile,
it
will
have
a
far-reaching
impact
if
more
foreign
visitors
are
attracted
to
China
to
experience
Chinese
culture.
[高分句型1]
Nowadays
we
can
find
lots
of
Confucius
institutes
around
the
world,
which
provides
precious
opportunities
for
the
foreigners
to
learn
about
Chinese
culture.
(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
As
a
philosopher,
Confucius
not
only
represents
the
traditional
Chinese
culture,
but
has
been
influencing
us
Chinese
people
since
ancient
times.
(运用了not
only…
but
(also)…连接的并列句)
（20·北京市3月综合能力测试·书面表达）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim给你写信探讨“读书”的话题。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你的阅读经历；
2.你的阅读收获；
3.你对阅读的看法。
注意：1.词数100左右：
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Jim，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li
Hua
【答案】Possible
Version
1：
Dear
Jim,
I’m
so
glad
to
know
that
you
also
love
reading
and
I
am
more
than
happy
to
share
my
experience
and
thoughts
on
reading
with
you.
When
I
was
a
kid,
I
read
picture
books
with
interesting
illustrations.
I
would
unconsciously
burst
out
laughing
or
frown
with
concern
about
the
character
in
the
book.
Later
in
life,
I
was
absorbed
in
the
world
of
words,
where
I
found
myself
seeing
the
world
through
the
eyes
of
different
roles
in
the
stories
and
I
discovered
the
mystery
of
so
many
things,
from
the
smallest
atoms
to
the
vast
universe.
While
reading,
I
even
got
a
new
insight
into
myself.
Even
though
I
encountered
difficulties
sometimes,
nothing
swayed
my
enthusiasm
about
reading.
Frankly,
I
have
really
harvested
a
lot
from
reading.
Reading
does
not
only
provide
me
with
encyclopedic
knowledge
ranging
from
basic
principles
to
far
away
outer
space
mystery,
but
also
convince
me
that
being
alone
is
not
lonely.
With
books
in
hand,
I’ve
really
got
a
colorful
world
belonging
to
myself.
Through
that
world,
I
get
courage
in
times
of
challenge,
and
I
feel
love
and
warmth
in
the
midst
of
adversity.
Further,
I
have
found
my
role
model
and
a
goal
I
decide
to
pursue
in
my
future
life.
Reading
is
a
best
friend.
You
need
to
treat
it
patiently
with
your
sincere
love.
In
return,
reading
will
bring
you
a
whole
new
world
to
get
along
with,
which
makes
you
a
complete
person.
This
is
my
experience
and
understanding
of
reading.
What
about
yours?
So
looking
forward
to
your
sharing.
Yours,
Li
Hua
Possible
Version
2：
Dear
Jim,
How
is
everything
going?
Having
heard
that
you
are
interested
in
reading,
I’m
writing
to
share
my
reading
experience
and
feelings
with
you.
I
used
to
be
impatient
with
reading.
I
often
skipped
some
parts
of
a
story,
which
I
thought
weren’t
attractive
to
me
at
first.
As
a
result,
I
got
very
little
believing
reading
wasn’t
so
beneficial.
To
solve
this
problem,
I
urged
myself
to
read
carefully
and
try
to
follow
the
plot.
Then
I
astonishingly
found
that
I
could
read
the
whole
book
smoothly
and
even
learned
a
moral
lesson
from
it.
This
is
big
progress
as
well
as
great
relief
to
me.
From
this
experience
I
have
learned
that
every
word
“counts”.
Besides,
I
get
an
opportunity
to
approach
literature
and
appreciate
the
beauty
of
words.
It
was
this
experience
that
helped
change
my
reading
attitude
and
improved
my
reading
skill.
So
we
need
to
pay
attention
to
every
paragraph
and
read
with
full
patience,
which
allows
us
to
get
the
complete
meaning
and
be
truly
involved
and
educated.
Reading
deserves
our
patience
and
deep
thinking.
This
is
my
point
of
view
about
reading.
What
do
you
think
of
it?
I
am
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Jim回信探讨“读书”的话题。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和现在完成时,少量一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1.你的阅读经历；
2.你的阅读收获；
3.你对阅读的看法。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
more
than；share…with…；burst
out；be
absorbed
in；get
a
new
insight
into；provide…with…；far
away；range
from；in
hand；belong
to；in
return；get
along
with；look
forward
to
第三步：连词成句
1.
I’m
so
glad
to
know
that
you
also
love
reading
and
I
am
more
than
happy
to
share
my
experience
and
thoughts
on
reading
with
you.
2.
When
I
was
a
kid,
I
read
picture
books
with
interesting
illustrations.
3.
I
would
unconsciously
burst
out
laughing
or
frown
with
concern
about
the
character
in
the
book.
4.
Later
in
life,
I
was
absorbed
in
the
world
of
words,
where
I
found
myself
seeing
the
world
through
the
eyes
of
different
roles
in
the
stories
and
I
discovered
the
mystery
of
so
many
things,
from
the
smallest
atoms
to
the
vast
universe.
5.
While
reading,
I
even
got
a
new
insight
into
myself.
6.
Even
though
I
encountered
difficulties
sometimes,
nothing
swayed
my
enthusiasm
about
reading.
7.
Frankly,
I
have
really
harvested
a
lot
from
reading.
8.
Reading
does
not
only
provide
me
with
encyclopedic
knowledge
ranging
from
basic
principles
to
far
away
outer
space
mystery,
but
also
convince
me
that
being
alone
is
not
lonely.
8.
With
books
in
hand,
I’ve
really
got
a
colorful
world
belonging
to
myself.
9.
Through
that
world,
I
get
courage
in
times
of
challenge,
and
I
feel
love
and
warmth
in
the
midst
of
adversity.
10.
Further,
I
have
found
my
role
model
and
a
goal
I
decide
to
pursue
in
my
future
life.??
11.
Reading
is
a
best
friend.
You
need
to
treat
it
patiently
with
your
sincere
love.
12.
In
return,
reading
will
bring
you
a
whole
new
world
to
get
along
with,
which
makes
you
a
complete
person.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second…
And
then,
Finally,
In
the
end,
At
last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：Further,
not
only…but
(also)
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
Although+clause(从句),
In
spite
of+n/doing,On
the
one
hand…,On
the
other
hand…
Some…,while
others…,as
for,
so…that…(供参考)
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
[高分句型1]
When
I
was
a
kid,
I
read
picture
books
with
interesting
illustrations.(when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]
Later
in
life,
I
was
absorbed
in
the
world
of
words,
where
I
found
myself
seeing
the
world
through
the
eyes
of
different
roles
in
the
stories
and
I
discovered
the
mystery
of
so
many
things,
from
the
smallest
atoms
to
the
vast
universe.?(where引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]
Frankly,
I
have
really
harvested
a
lot
from
reading.
Reading
does
not
only
provide
me
with
encyclopedic
knowledge
ranging
from
basic
principles
to
far
away
outer
space
mystery,
but
also
convince
me
that
being
alone
is
not
lonely.?(not
only…but
also…连接并列句)
（20·北大附中三模·书面表达）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。
为迎接北京2022年冬奥会，你们学校下个月将要举办“迎冬奥
做贡献”主题活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.具体安排；
3.发出邀请。
注意：1.
词数100左右；
2.
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】Dear
Jim,
Having
known
that
you
are
into
the
Winter
Olympics
to
be
held
in
Beijing,
I
am
writing
to
invite
you
to
participate
in
the
relevant
activity
in
our
school.
In
order
to
promote
the
Olympic
spirit
and
get
deeper
insights
into
the
winter
sports,
an
activity
themed
on
“Make
a
Contribution
to
the
Winter
Olympics”
will
be
held
next
month,
when
a
series
of
lectures
will
be
open
to
everyone,
such
as
lectures
on
how
to
communicate
with
people
from
different
countries
and
ways
to
improve
air
quality.
Additionally,
there
will
be
many
competitions
varying
from
skiing
to
skating
so
that
you
can
choose
whichever
you
are
interested
in.
Hopefully,
you
can
come
and
enjoy
the
activity.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们学校下个月将要举办“迎冬奥
做贡献”主题活动。
1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be
interested
in→be
into/be
crazy
about
参加：join
in/take
part
in→participant
in
深入了解：make
a
better
understanding
of→get
deeper
insights
into
范围从……到……：range
from…to…=
vary
from…to…
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hopefully,
you
can
come
and
enjoy
the
activity.
拓展句：I
sincerely
hope
that
you
can
come
and
enjoy
the
activity.
[高分句型1]
Having
known
that
you
are
into
the
Winter
Olympics
to
be
held
in
Beijing,
I
am
writing
to
invite
you
to
participate
in
the
relevant
activity
in
our
school.
(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
Additionally,
there
will
be
many
competitions
varying
from
skiing
to
skating
so
that
you
can
choose
whichever
you
are
interested
in.
(运用了so
that引导的状语从句)
（20·朝阳区二模·书面表达）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将举办主题为
“创意点亮校园”学生手工作品展。请给你校的交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参观展览。内容包括：
1.
介绍展览信息
(例如：时间、地点、内容等)；
2.
询问对方意向。
注意：1.
词数100左右；
2.
邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：手工作品handicraft
Dear
Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】Possible
versions
1.
Dear
Jim，
How
are
you
doing?
I’m
writing
to
invite
you
to
visit
a
handicrafts
exhibition
in
our
school,
whose
theme
is
“Creativity
Lights
Up
the
Campus”.
The
exhibition
aims
to
enrich
our
school
life
and
promote
our
creativity
and
hands-on
ability.
It
is
scheduled
to
be
held
in
the
lecture
hall
from
May
15
to
June
1.
Dozens
of
handicrafts
with
unique
designs
and
various
themes
will
be
on
display,
such
as
clay
sculptures,
paper
cuttings
and
so
on.
They
are
all
created
by
students.
Many
works
are
made
from
unwanted
materials
in
our
daily
life,
which
shows
how
students
turn
waste
into
treasure.
I’m
sure
you
will
be
amazed
at
the
students’
creativity
and
imagination.
Would
you
like
to
come?
I’m
looking
forward
to
meeting
you
at
the
exhibition.
Yours,
Li
Hua
Possible
versions
2.
Dear
Jim,
How
is
everything
going?
Our
school
is
going
to
organize
a
handicrafts
exhibition
themed
“Creativity
Lights
Up
the
Campus”
this
weekend.
Knowing
you
have
a
great
interest
in
handicrafts,
I
believe
this
is
an
opportunity
to
appreciate
the
creative
works.
About
100
handicrafts
made
by
students
will
be
on
display
in
the
school
lecture
hall,
each
of
which
is
full
of
fantastic
ideas.
You
can
find
a
wide
variety
of
works
that
are
suitable
for
decoration.
In
addition,
the
exhibits
will
consist
of
handicrafts
of
traditional
styles
methods,
which
will
offer
you
a
great
chance
to
explore
the
Chinese
traditional
culture.
I’m
sure
the
exhibition
is
worth
a
visit.
It
will
be
a
great
pleasure
if
you
come
to
the
exhibition.
I
will
be
happy
to
keep
you
company
and
offer
necessary
explanations.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参观学生手工作品的展览。
Possible
versions
1
1.词汇积累
旨在：aim
at→
aim
to
do
提升：improve→
promote
计划：be
planned
to→
be
scheduled
to
许多：lots
of→
dozens
of
惊讶的：shocked→
amazed
2
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The
exhibition
aims
to
enrich
our
school
life
and
promote
our
creativity
and
hands-on
ability.
It
is
scheduled
to
be
held
in
the
lecture
hall
from
May
15
to
June
1.
拓展句：The
exhibition,
which
is
scheduled
to
be
held
in
the
lecture
hall
from
May
15
to
June
1,
aims
to
enrich
our
school
life
and
promote
our
creativity
and
hands-on
ability.
[高分句型1]
?I’m
writing
to
invite
you
to
visit
a
handicrafts
exhibition
in
our
school,
whose
theme
is
“Creativity
Lights
Up
the
Campus”.（运用了由“whose+名词”引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Many
works
are
made
from
unwanted
materials
in
our
daily
life,
which
shows
how
students
turn
waste
into
treasure.?（运用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]
I’m
sure
you
will
be
amazed
at
the
students’
creativity
and
imagination.（运用了省略that的宾语从句，作am
sure的宾语）
（20·丰台区二模·书面表达）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和学校英国交换生Chris一起报名参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演，但是你因故不能参加。请你给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.
表达歉意；
2.
不能参加的原因；
3.
解决办法建议。
注意：1.
词数100字左右；
2.
文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Chris，
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】Dear
Chris,
I
feel
terribly
sorry
that
I
can't
make
my
way
to
our
show
on
the
Festival
of
Traditional
Culture.
Unfortunately,
I
hurt
myself
accidentally
when
I
was
playing
basketball
last
night.
As
a
result,
I'm
suffering
a
badly
fractured
arm,
which
means
it's
impossible
for
me
to
practice
Taijiquan
for
at
least
a
month
and
my
show
will
be
blown
up.
Knowing
that
you
have
been
waiting
for
this
moment
so
long,
I
strongly
recommend
Jim
replace
me.
As
an
enthusiast,
he's
an
excellent
Taiji
player.
Besides,
Jim
is
very
cooperative
and
easygoing,
who's
the
most
suitable
person
I
can
think
of.
I
do
understand
you
need
me
badly
but
I
still
hope
you
could
forgive
me.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生Chris写封道歉信，向他道歉并解释不能参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演的原因。
1.词汇积累
演出：show→performance
建议：recommend→suggest
原谅：forgive→pardon
意外地：accidentally
=
by
accident
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：As
an
enthusiast,
he's
an
excellent
Taiji
player.
Besides,
Jim
is
very
cooperative
and
easygoing,
who's
the
most
suitable
person
I
can
think
of.
拓展句：As
an
enthusiast,
he's
not
only
an
excellent
Taiji
player,
but
also
very
cooperative
and
easygoing,
who's
the
most
suitable
person
I
can
think
of.
[高分句型1]
As
a
result,
I'm
suffering
a
badly
fractured
arm,
which
means
it's
impossible
for
me
to
practice
Taijiquan
for
at
least
a
month
and
my
show
will
be
blown
up.
(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Knowing
that
you
have
been
waiting
for
this
moment
so
long,
I
strongly
recommend
Jim
replace
me.
(运用了现在分词短语作状语，recommend后省略that引导的宾语从句用了虚拟语气)
（20·海淀区二模·书面表达）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期你校将在海淀公园举行“阳光长跑”活动，请你给国际部好友Jim写封电子邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1.
活动信息；
2.
注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】Dear
Jim,
How
have
you
been?
Our
school
will
organize
an
activity
called"Sunshine
Long-distance
Run".
I
wonder
if
you
would
like
to
come.
The
activity
will
be
held
at
Haidian
Park
on
May
16th.
Students
from
all
grades
are
welcome
to
join
in.
Participants
need
to
gather
at
the
West
Gate
by
8
am,
and
the
running
will
start
there
at
8:20.
The
running
will
finish
at
the
East
Gate
and
the
total
distance
will
be
around
5
km.
If
you
decide
to
come,
please
remember
to
wear
running
shoes.
You
may
leave
your
personal
items
at
the
storage
desk,
where
members
from
the
Students'
Union
will
keep
an
eye
on
them.
I
really
hope
you
can
join
us.
Let
me
know
if
you
are
interested.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生国际部好友Jim写封电子邮件，邀请他参加你校将在海淀公园举行的“阳光长跑”活动。
1.词汇积累
参加：join
in=take
part
in
会合：gather→assemble
开始：begin→start
结束：finish→end
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The
running
will
finish
at
the
East
Gate
and
the
total
distance
will
be
around
5
km.
拓展句：The
running
will
finish
at
the
East
Gate,
the
total
distance
of
which
will
be
around
5
km.
[高分句型1]
Our
school
will
organize
an
activity
called"Sunshine
Long-distance
Run".
(运用了过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2]
You
may
leave
your
personal
items
at
the
storage
desk,
where
members
from
the
Students'
Union
will
keep
an
eye
on
them.
(运用了where引导的定语从句)

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