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第1篇　儿子借钱
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第2篇　购物
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第3篇
“我”不是凶手
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第4篇　与妈妈和解
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第5篇　项链
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第1篇　儿子借钱
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A
man
came
home
fr
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work
late
again,
tired
and?irritated?,
to
find
his
5-year
old
son
waiting
for
him
at
the
door.
"Daddy,
may
I
ask
you
a
question?"
"Yeah,
sure,
what
is
it?"
replied
the
man.
"Daddy,
how
much
money
do
you
make
an
hour?"
"That's
none
o
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)f
your
business.
What
makes
you
ask
such
a
thing?"
the
man
said
angrily.
"I
just
want
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)to
know.
Please
tell
me,
how
much
do
you
make
an
hour?"
pleaded
the
little
boy.
"If
you
must
know,
I
make
$20.00
an
hour."
"Oh,"
the
little
boy
replied,
head
bowed.
Looking
up,
he
said,
"Daddy,
may
I
borrow
$10.00
please?"21
cnjy
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The
father
was?furiou
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)s?.
"If
the
only
reason
you
wanted
to
know
how
much
money
I
make
is
just
so
you
can
borrow
some
to
buy
a
silly
toy
or
some
other
nonsense,
then
you
march
yourself
straight
to
your
room
and
go
to
bed.
Think
about
why
you're
being
so
selfish.
I
work
long,
hard
hours
everyday
and
don't
have
time
for
such
childish
games."
The
little
boy
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quietly
went
to
his
room
and
shut
the
door.
The
man
sat
down
and
started
to
get
even
madder
about
the
little
boy's
questioning.
How
dare
he
ask
such
questions
only
to
get
some
money.
After
an
hour
or
so,
the
man
had
calmed
down,
and
started
to
think
he
may
have
been
a
little
hard
on
his
son.
Maybe
there
was
something
he
really
needed
to
buy
with
that
$10.00
and
he
really
didn't
ask
for
money
very
often.
The
man
went
to
the
door
of
the
little
boy's
room
and
opened
the
door.
"Are
you
asleep
son?"
he
asked.
"No
daddy,
I'm
awake,"
replied
the
boy.
"I've
been
thinking,
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)may
be
I
was
too
hard
on
you
earlier,"
said
the
man.
"It's
been
a
long
day
and
I
took
my?aggravation
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"http:?/??/?www.?/?story?/?love?/?_blank?)?out
on
you.
Here's
that
$10.00
you
asked
for."
The
little
boy
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)sat
straight
up,?beaming.
"Oh,
thank
you
daddy"
he
yelled.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。
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1:
Then,
the
little
boy
reaching
under
his
pillow…
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Paragraph
2:
After
hearing
w
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)hat
the
boy
said,
the
man
felt
so
sorry
for
what
he
had
said
to
his
son.
_______________________________________________________________________________
文本主要内容为：一位父亲工作
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)很晚回到家，他5岁的儿子问他工作一个小时多少钱并向他借10美元。父亲对此很生气并朝儿子发了火。事后，父亲仔细思考后觉得儿子可能有所困难才开的口，所以最后还是借了钱。【出处：21教育名师】
[写作思路]
（1）明确故事人物关系（characters）。故事中主要人物为父亲the
man和他5岁的儿子the
little
boy。【版权所有：21教育】
（2）理清故事主要事件(event
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)s)。父亲工作很晚回到家；儿子问父亲工作一个小时多少钱并向他借10美元；父亲为此生了气并叫儿子回自己房间反思；父亲考虑后觉得儿子事出有因便最后借了这10美元给儿子。
（3）根据已知人物、事件及续写
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)段落首句预测故事发展（development）。故事总体的发展应该是儿子用他借的10美元和自己已有的零用钱买了父亲一个小时的时间，此件事情让父亲反思自己以前花太少的时间陪儿子了。续写第一段：根据第二段开头提示的句子，小男孩接下来的行为让父亲感到惭愧。所以可能是小男孩拿着借的钱给父亲买了份礼物，也可能是小男孩拿着向父亲借的钱和自己已有的钱买了父亲一个小时的时间。续写第二段：父亲为自己说过的话感到抱歉，可以写父亲之后用实际行动来弥补儿子，也可以写父亲开始反思以前太把重心放在工作上，而忽略了应多花点时间陪陪儿子。
（4）结合下划线词罗列写作要
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)点（points）。结合下划线词和文本内容，展开尽可能丰富的想象，罗列出尽可能多的故事发展情节。例如，第一段可以通过问以下问题来获取写作要点：”What
would
the
boy
do
after
he
got
father’s
$10.00?
Would
he
just
buy
a
silly
toy
or
some
other
nonsense
for
himself
just
like
what
his
father
said?
Would
he
do
something
special
to
his
father?”等。第二段可以问以下问题来获取写作要点：”How
would
the
father
feel
after
hearing
what
the
boy
said?
What
would
the
father
do?
What
changes
would
the
father
make?
”等。
[参考范文]
Then,
the
little
boy
reaching
under
his
pillow,
he
pulled
out
some
more?crumpled
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"欢迎登陆21世纪教育网"
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The
man,
seeing
that
the
boy
already
had
money,
started
to
get
angry
again.
He
grumbled
why
the
boy
wanted
more
money
even
if
he
already
had
some.
The
little
boy
slowly
counted
out
his
money,
then
looked
up
at
the
man.
"Because
I
didn't
have
enough,
but
now
I
do,"
the
little
boy
replied,
"Daddy,
I
have
$20.00
now.
Can
I
buy
an
hour
of
your
time?"
After
hearing
what
the
boy
said,
the
man
felt
so
sorry
for
what
he
had
said
to
his
son.
Tears
filled
his
eyes
and
he
gave
a
deep
hug
to
the
son.
In
the
past
few
years,
he
was
always
engaged
in
work
and
never
spent
a
single
weekend
with
his
son.
This
$20.00
is
just
a
short?reminder
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"欢迎登陆21世纪教育网"
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"http:?/??/?www.?/?story?/?love?/?_blank?)?to
all
of
us
working
so
hard
for
our
living.
Don’t
let
time
slip
through
our
fingers
without
having
spent
some
quality
time
with
those
who
really
matter
to
us.（除给定词外，169
words）
[范文解析]
范文围绕文章的内容进行了合情合理的
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)拓展。根据第二段开头提示，小男孩一定做了让父亲很感动的举动。因此小男孩借到钱以后，加上自己已有的零用钱向父亲买了他一个小时的时间。父亲听到儿子的话后，十分感动和抱歉，对自己以前的行为有较大的感触，并进行了反思。最后两句从全文的角度进行概括，突出故事的主题。
第2篇　购物
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Missus
Sommers
one
da
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)y
found
herself
the
unexpected
owner
of
fifteen
dollars.
It
seemed
to
her
a
very
large
amount
of
money.
For
a
day
or
two
she
walked
around
in
a
dreamy
state
as
she
thought
about
her
choices.
Her
daughter
Janie
was
wearing
worn
shoes
and
needed
new
ones.
She
would
buy
cloth
for
new
shirts
for
the
boys.
Her
daughter
Mag
should
have
another
dress.
And
still
there
would
be
enough
left
for
new
stockings
for
her
children.
The
idea
about
how
to
spend
the
dollars
made
her
restless
with
excitement.
On
the
day
she
pl
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)anned
to
go
shopping
with
the
money,
she
ate
a
light
meal-
no!
Between
getting
the
children
fed
and
the
house
cleaned,
and
preparing
herself
to
go
shopping,
she
forgot
to
eat
at
all!
When
she
arri
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ved
at
the
large
department
store,
she
spotted
a
pile
of
silk
stockings
at
the
entrance.
A
sign
nearby
announced
that
they
had
been
reduced
in
price
a
young
girl
behind
the
counter
asked
her
if
she
wished
to
examine
the
silky
leg
coverings.
She
smiled
as
if
she
had
been
asked
to
inspect
diamond
jewelry,
and
started
to
feel
the
soft,
expensive
items.
Missus
Sommers
picked
up
a
black
pair
and
looked
at
them
closely.
Two
red
marks
suddenly
showed
on
her
pale
face.
She
looked
up
at
the
shop
girl
and
said
proudly,
“Well,
I
will
buy
this
pair.”
Missus
Sommers
ch
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)anged
her
cotton
stockings
for
the
new
silk
ones
in
the
ladies’
rest
area.
She
had
let
herself
be
controlled
by
some
machine-like
force
that
directed
her
actions
and
freed
her
of
responsibility.
How
good
was
the
touch
of
the
silk
on
her
skin!
Then
she
put
her
shoes
back
on
and
put
her
old
stockings
into
her
bag.
Next,
she
went
to
the
shoe
department,
where
she
tried
on
a
pair
of
new
boots.
Her
foot
and
ankle
looked
lovely.
She
could
not
believe
that
they
were
a
part
of
herself.21世纪教育网版权所有
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
After
buying
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
a
pair
of
new
boots,
she
walked
into
the
clothing
department.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph
2：21cnjy.com
She
was
about
to
leav
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)e
the
store
when
a
kid
running
around
reminded
her
of
something.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
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1:
After
buying
a
pair
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
of
new
boots,
she
walked
into
the
clothing
department.
Coming
to
a
dressing
mirror,
looking
at
herself
in
the
mirror,
“Won’t
I
look
more
beautiful
if
my
shoe
matches
a
perfect
dress
on
my
body?”
thought
Missus
Sommers.
She
waving
to
the
salesgirl
of
the
department
and
asked
her
whether
she
could
try
on
the
fashionable
dress
styles.
Her
request
was
approved,
Missus
Sommers
kept
trying
on.
One
dress
after
another
tried
on,
she
put
them
into
her
shopping
cart
fondly.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
Paragraph
2:
She
was
about
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
to
leave
the
store
when
a
kid
running
around
reminded
her
of
something.
“Oh,
My
God!
I
forgot
all
about
my
kids!”
yelled
Missus
Sommers,
starting
to
blame
herself.
“Excuse
me,
salesgirl,
would
you
be
so
kind
as
to
let
me
put
back
all
I
had
chosen,
for
I
had
intended
to
buy
my
daughter
Janie
a
new
pair
of
shoes,
boy’s
new
shirts
and
all
of
them
new
stockings?
I
must
have
lost
my
head!”
A
sense
of
responsibility
of
caring
about
her
kids
drove
her
to
think
of
the
right
idea
where
the
money
should
go.
【解析】
文章主要讲的是Somme
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)rs太太意外得到了15美元，非常高兴，想着给女儿和儿子们买鞋子和衬衫，结果在百货公司试穿衣服时逐渐忘了自己要给孩子们买东西，最后让售货小姐退还了购物车里所有的衣服的故事。在给的第一段开头中，“After
buying
a
pair
of
new
boots,
she
walked
into
the
clothing
department.”“the
clothing
department”是关键词，表示“服装部”，说明Sommers后来去了服装部，第一段应当围绕她在服装部发生的事情展开；在给的第二段开头中“She
was
about
to
leave
the
store
when
a
kid
running
around
reminded
her
of
something.”此句中的kid为关键词，因为后文都围绕这个词在说。21教育名师原创作品
【高分句型一】
After
her
req
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)uest
was
approved,
Missus
Sommers
kept
trying
on.
在她的请求被批准后，Sommers太太继续尝试。运用时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Although
she
r
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)eally
liked
these
clothes,
a
sense
of
responsibility
of
caring
about
her
kids
drove
her
to
think
of
the
right
idea
where
the
money
should
go.
虽然她真的很喜欢这些衣服，但是一种照顾孩子的责任感驱使她去想钱应该花在哪里。运用让步状语从句。
第3篇
“我”不是凶手
4.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A
farmer
grew
s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ome
vegetables
in
his
garden.
One
day
his
wife
was
ill
and
he
had
no
money.
He
had
to
sell
some
cabbages
and
carrots
in
the
market.
The
next
morning
he
took
two
baskets
of
vegetables
to
town.
But
it
was
snowing
hard
that
afternoon
and
there
were
few
people
in
the
street.
When
his
vegetables
were
sold
out,
it
was
dark.
He
bought
some
medicine
and
hurried
to
his
village.
On
his
way
home
he
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)saw
a
person
lying
on
the
snow.
He
placed
his
baskets
on
the
ground
and
was
going
to
help
the
person
to
get
up.
At
that
time
he
found
it
was
a
dead
man
and
there
was
much
blood
on
his
body.
He
was
so
afraid
that
he
ran
away
quickly,
without
taking
the
baskets
with
him.
The
next
aft
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ernoon
the
farmer
was
sent
to
the
police
station.
Having
shown
the
baskets,
an
officer
asked,
“Are
these
yours?”
“Yes,
sir,”
the
farmer
answered
timidly.
“Have
you
killed
the
man?”
“No,
no,
sir,”
the
farmer
said
in
a
hurry.
"When
did
you
see
the
dead
man?"
“About
seven
last
evening.”
"Did
you
see
who
killed
the
man?"
"No,
sir."
The
officer
brought
out
a
knife
and
asked,
"Have
you
seen
it
before?”
"No,
sir."
The
officer
became
angry
and
told
the
policeman
to
beat
him
up
and
sent
him
into
prison,
He
wanted
to
trap
the
farmer
into
the
confession（供认）,
but
the
farmer
didn't
admit
he
was
the
murderer.
注意：1.
所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。.
Paragraph
1:
The
officer
was
s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)o
angry
that
he
asked
the
policeman
to
beat
him
up
again.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph
2:
The
farmer
was
lucky.
A
few
days
later,21·世纪
教育网
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.【参考范文】
Paragraph
1:
The
officer
was
so
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)angry
that
he
asked
the
policeman
to
beat
him
up
again.
The
farmer
was
very
afraid,
and
he
thought
he
would
be
sentenced
to
death
by
killing
people,
although
he
was
innocent.
He
must
tell
people
the
truth,
but
no
one
could
hear
his
voice.
He
hoped
that
someone
could
come
and
save
him.
Paragraph
2:
The
farmer
was
lu
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)cky.
A
few
days
later,
a
young
man
came
to
the
police
station
with
a
lot
of
journalists,
saying
that
he
saw
the
murderer.
It
was
the
police
officer
who
killed
the
man
on
the
snow!
He
saw
the
police
officer
killing
the
man
with
a
knife
late
in
the
evening.
He
was
so
frightened
and
ran
away.
But
the
young
man
thought
the
farmer
was
innocent.
So
he
took
the
great
courage
to
expose
the
real
criminal.
After
the
investigation,
the
young
man
was
right.
The
police
officer
was
sent
into
prison
and
the
policeman
who
beat
up
the
farmer
was
fired,
and
the
brave
young
man
was
regarded
as
the
hero
by
the
villagers.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)过阅读所给文章可知，农夫在超市买完菜回家的路上看到了倒在地方的人，他本想将他扶起，但发现他死了之后很害怕就跑了，并将自己的篮子忘在了那里。第二天警察找他问话，他不承认自己是凶手。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：警官非常生
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)气，他让警察再打他一顿……，所以应该写农夫的心理活动，即他内心的恐惧以及想法等。第二段开头是：农夫很幸运。几天后……，本段应该写事情的转机。目击证人说出了谁是真凶，坏人得到了应有的惩罚，农夫也洗清了冤屈，证人收到大家尊敬。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【范文点评】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)子。如：so
…
that;
asked
sb.
to
do;
beat
sb.
up;
be
sentenced
to;
take
the
great
courage
to
do;
be
regarded
as等高级词汇；强调句It
was
the
police
officer
who
killed
the
man
on
the
snow，定语从句the
policeman
who
beat
up
the
farmer
was
fired等高级句式。
第4篇　与妈妈和解
Jenny?was
the
onl
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)y
child
in
her
home.
She
had
a?quarrel?with
her
mother?that
afternoon?and
she
ran
out
of
the
house
angrily.
She
couldn’t
help
weeping
sorrowfully
when
she
thought
of?the
scolding
from
her
mother.
Having
wandered
aimlessly?in
the
street?for
hours,
she
felt
a
little
hungry
and
wished
for
something
to
eat,
but
it
was
not
even
possible
for
her,
since
she
had
nothing
with
her.
She
stood
beside
a
stand
for
a
while,
watching
the
middle-aged
seller
busy
doing
his
business.
However,with
no
money
in
hand,
she
sighed
and
had
to
leave.【来源：21cnj
y.co
m】
The
seller
behind
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)the
stand
noticed
the
young
girl
and
asked,
“Hey,
girl,you
want
to
have
the
noodles?”
“Oh,
yes...
but
I
don’t
have
money
on
me…”
she
replied.
“That’s
nothing.
I’ll
treat
you
today,”
said
the
man,
“come
in.”
The
seller
brought
her
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
a
bowl
of
noodles,
whose
smell
was
so
attractive.As
she
was
eating,
Jenny
cried
silently.
“What
is
it?”
asked
the
man
kindly.
“Nothing,
actually
I
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
was
just
touched
by
your
kindness!”
said
Jenny
as
she
wiped
her
tears,
“Even
a
stranger
on
the
street
will
give
me
a
bowl
of
noodles,while
my
mother,
drove
me
out
of
the
house.
She
showed
no
care
for
me.
She
is
so
merciless
compared
to
a
stranger!!”
Hearing
the
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)words,
the
seller?smiled?“Girl,
do
you
really
think
so?
I
only
gave
you
a
bowl
of
noodles
and
you
thanked
me
a
lot.
But
it
is
your
mother
who
has
raised
you
since
you
were
a
baby.
Can
you
number
the
times
she
cooked
for
you?
Have
you
expressed
your?gratitude?to
her?”
Jenny
sat
there,
s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)peechless
and
numb
with
shock;
she
remembered
mother’s
familiar
face?and
weathered
hands.
“Why
did
I
not
think
of
that?
A
bowl
of
noodles
from
a
stranger
made
me
feel
indebted,
but
I
have
never
thanked
my
mum
for
what
she
has
done
for
me.”
On
the
way
home,
Jen
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ny
made
up
her
mind
to
make
an?apology?to
her
mother
for
her?rudeness?as
soon
as
she
arrived
home.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1
Approaching
the
door
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)way,
Jenny
took
a
deep
breath.
Paragraph
2
A
gentle
touch
on
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)her
hair
called
her
mind
back.
参考范文:
Paragraph
1
Approaching
the
doorw
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ay,
Jenny
took
a
deep
breath.
When
she
knocked
at
the
door,
she
found
the
door
was
locked
and
her
mother
was
not
in.
Tired
and
sad,
she
sat
down
in
front
of
the
house.“Where
could
my
mother
be?”she
wondered,“Was
she
still
angry
with
me?”Again,
the
scene
of
the
quarrel
appeared
in
her
mind.
She
remembered
her
rudeness
to
her
mother.Realizing
that
all
the
scolding
from
her
mother
was
due
to
the
fact
that
her
mother
really
cared
a
lot
about
her,
she
felt
rather
ashamed,and
tears
began
to
roll
down
her
cheeks.21教育网
Paragraph
2
A
gentle
touch
on
he
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)r
hair
called
her
mind
back.
She
raised
her
head
and
saw
the
familiar
face
of
her
mother.“Here
you
come!
I’ve
been
looking
for
you,”
she
said,
tired
and
relieved.
Jenny
couldn’t
help
throwing
herself
into
her
mother’s
arms.
“Mum,
I’m
so
and
thank
you
for
all
you
have
done
for
me.”
She
expressed
her
sincere
apology
and
great
gratitude.
Hearing
this,her
mother
smiled
patting
her
back
gently.21·cn·jy·com
第5篇　项链
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jenny
was
a
bright-eyed,
pretty
five-year-old
girl.21
cnjy
com
?
One
day
when
she
and
her
mother
were
checking
out
at
the
grocery
store(杂货店),
Jenny
saw
a
plastic
pearl
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com"
\o
"欢迎登陆21世纪教育网"
\t
"http:?/??/?www.?/?story?/?love?/?_blank?)?necklace
which
was
priced
at
$2.50.
How
she
wanted
that
necklace,
and
when
she
asked
her
mother
if
she
would
buy
it
for
her,
her
mother
said,
"Well,
it
is
a
pretty
necklace,
but
it
costs
an
awful
lot
of
money.
I'll
tell
you
what.
I'll
buy
you
the
necklace,
and
when
we
get
home
we
can
make
up
a
list
of
chores
that
you
can
do
to
pay
for
the
necklace.
And
don't
forget
that
for
your
birthday
Grandma
just
might
give
you
a
whole
dollar
bill,
too.
Okay?"
Jenny
agreed
happily,
and
her
mother
bought
the
pearl
necklace
for
her.
?
Jenny
worked
on
her
chores
very
hard
every
day,
and
sure
enough,
her
grandma
gave
her
a
brand-new
dollar
bill
for
her
birthday.
Soon
Jenny
had
paid
off
the?pearls
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com"
\o
"欢迎登陆21世纪教育网"
\t
"http:?/??/?www.?/?story?/?love?/?_blank?).
How
Jenny
loved
those
pearls!
She
wore
them
everywhere
to
kindergarten,
bed
and
even
when
she
went
out
with
her
mother
to
run?errands
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com"
\o
"欢迎登陆21世纪教育网"
\t
"http:?/??/?www.?/?story?/?love?/?_blank?).
?
The
only
time
s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)he
didn't
wear
them
was
in
the
shower,
because
her
mother
had
told
her
that
they
would
turn
her
neck
green!
?
Jenny
had
a
ver
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)y
loving
daddy.
When
Jenny
went
to
bed,
he
would
get
up
from
his
favorite
chair
every
night
and
read
Jenny
her
favorite
story.
?
One
night
when
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)he
finished
the
story,
he
asked
Jenny,
"Hey,
sweetie,
do
you
love
me?"
?
"Oh
yes,
Daddy,
you
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)know
I
love
you,"
the
little
girl
said
with
a
warm
smile.
?
"Well,
then,
give
me
your
pearls."
?
"Oh!
Daddy,
not
my
pearls!"
Jenny
refused.
"But
you
can
have?Rosy
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com"
\o
"欢迎登陆21世纪教育网"
\t
"http:?/??/?www.?/?story?/?love?/?_blank?),
my
favorite
doll.
Remember
her?
You
gave
her
to
me
last
year
for
my
birthday.
And
you
can
have
her
tea
party?outfit
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com"
\o
"欢迎登陆21世纪教育网"
\t
"http:?/??/?www.?/?story?/?love?/?_blank?),
too.
Okay?"www.21-cn-jy.com
?
"Oh
no,
darlin
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)g,
that's
okay."Her
father
brushed
her
cheek
with
a
kiss.
"Good
night,
little
one."2-1-c-n-j-y
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。
Paragraph
1:
A
week
later,
Jen
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ny’s
father
once
again
asked
Jenny
the
same
question
after
her
story...
_______________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Another
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)week
later,
when
her
father
came
in
to
read
her
a
story
as
usual...
_______________________________________________________________________________
[核心内容]
文本主要内容为：J
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)enny和她妈妈经过一家杂货店的时候看见一串塑料珍珠项链，她非常喜欢，于是就要求妈妈买给她并且答应了帮妈妈做家务的方式来赚取项链钱的要求。Jenny很快就赚到了足够的钱。Jenny的爸爸非常爱她，有一天晚上，爸爸问她愿不愿意将项链送给他，但是Jenny拒绝了。2·1·c·n·j·y
[写作思路]
（1）明确故事人物关系（charac
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ters）。故事中主要人物为小女孩Jenny，Jenny的妈妈(mother)，Jenny的外婆(Grandma)和Jenny的爸爸(father,daddy)。www-2-1-cnjy-com
（2）理清故事主要事件(events)
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)。Jenny和妈妈路过一家杂货店；Jenny看重一条塑料珍珠项链；Jenny答应妈妈买项链而提出的要求；Jenny每天做家务很快赚到了足够的钱；Jenny爸爸向她要这串项链，但是Jenny拒绝了。
（3）根据已知人物、事件及
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)续写段落首句预测故事发展（development）。故事总体的发展应该是Jenny通过再三考虑几番抉择，最后还是把珍珠项链给了爸爸，没想到正因为如此却意外收获了一份更加珍贵的礼物。续写第一段：一周后，Jenny的爸爸再次问了Jenny相同的问题，可能是Jenny同意了将心爱的珍珠项链送给爸爸，也可能是Jenny还是不愿意将项链送给爸爸。但是根据续写第二段开头的提示，可能Jenny拒绝了爸爸这种可能性更符合逻辑一点。续写第二段：有续写第一段的内容作为铺垫，此段的发展可能是Jenny仍然不同意将项链给爸爸，也可能是她将项链送给了爸爸，若是这种可能，则还可以在此基础上描写一些爸爸的反应，如礼尚往来，给了Jenny其他的礼物作为回报等。
（4）结合下划线词罗列写作要点（p
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)oints）。结合下划线词和文本内容，展开尽可能丰富的想象，罗列出尽可能多的故事发展情节。例如，第一段可以通过问以下问题来获取写作要点“What
did
Jenny
response
to
father’s
question?
Did
she
give
the
pearls
to
father
or
just
refuse
again?
What
did
the
father
do
after
Jenny’s
answer?等”第二段可以问以下问题来获取写作要点：“What
did
the
father
do
this
time?
Did
he
still
ask
the
same
question?
Did
Jenny
give
the
pearls
to
her
father
at
last?
If
so,
what
did
her
father
do
and
how
did
he
feel?等”。
[参考范文]
A
week
later,
Jenny’s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)father
once
again
asked
Jenny
the
same
question
after
her
story,
"Do
you
love
me?"
Jenny
gave
a
definite
answer
to
this
question
without
hesitation.
But
when
the
conversation
came
to
whether
she
could
give
her
pearls
to
her
father,
she
refused
a
second
time.
??
Another
week
later,
when
her
father
came
in
to
read
her
a
story
as
usual,
Jenny
was
sitting
on
her
bed
and
her
lip
was
trembling."
Here,
Daddy,"
she
said,
and
held
out
her
hand.
Inside
of
her
hand
was
her
beloved
plastic
pearl
necklace.
She
let
it
slip
into
her
father's
hand.
At
this
time,
her
father
pulled
out
of
his
pocket
a
bluevelvet
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com"
\o
"欢迎登陆21世纪教育网"
\t
"http:?/??/?www.?/?story?/?love?/?_blank?)?box,
and
some
real,
genuine,
beautiful
pearls
were
just
inside.
He
had
had
them
all
along.
He
was
waiting
for
Jenny
to
give
up
the
cheap
stuff
so
he
could
give
her
the
real
thing.
Sometimes,
life
is
just
like
this:
give
up
one
thing
and
get
another
chance
to
receive
a
better
thing.（除给定词外，164
words）
[范文解析]
范文围绕文章的内容进行了
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)合情合理的拓展。续写两个段落开头给出句子中写了两次爸爸晚上给Jenny讲故事，提示可能性最大的情景发展应该是有两次类似的针对愿不愿意给珍珠项链的交谈。因此，第一段写了爸爸再次问Jenny愿不愿意给项链，然而这次Jenny仍然不愿意给。第二段，如果再次写Jenny不愿意给的话文章主题就很难得到升华，因此这段中，我们将主动权转交到Jenny身上，Jenny主动将项链给了爸爸，并且父亲相应的给了她一条真的珍珠项链。最后一句话是根据这个小故事而得出的关于人生的一个小道理，从而在文章结尾处点出文章主题。
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