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应用文写作之申请信和告知信
申请信
【写作示例】
假定你是李华,
暑假在伦敦学习,
得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,
内容包括:
1.
写信目的;
2.
个人优势;
3.
能做的事情。
注意:
1.
词数80左右;
2.
可以适当增加细节,
以使行文连贯。
【考场审题】
Step
1:
精准审题　谋篇布局
人称
I(Li
Hua),
Sir/Madam
时态
一般现在时,
一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:
问候并说明写信的原因及目的主体段落:
分两点阐述为什么申请做志愿者:
个人优势;
能做的事情结尾:
衷心的祝愿
Step
2:
头脑风暴　字字珠玉
(1)美词:
apply
for
position,
be
qualified
for,
as
follows,
specific
introduction,
furthermore,
share.
.
.
with.
.
.
(2)佳句:
①Hearing
the
Chinese
painting
exhibition
is
to
be
held,
I’m
writing
this
letter
to
apply
for
a
volunteer
position.
②The
reasons
why
I’m
qualified
for
the
job
are
as
follows.
③Furthermore,
I
can
speak
fluent
Chinese
and
English
at
the
same
time,
making
it
no
problem
for
me
to
help
visitors
from
all
over
the
world.
④If
I’m
chosen
to
be
a
volunteer,
I
would
be
able
to
help
the
visitors
understand
the
paintings
and
share
the
history
behind
those
Chinese
paintings
with
them.
Step
3:
斟酌词句　妙笔生花
要点1:
我有一些胜任这份工作的原因。
一般表达:
I
have
some
reasons
to
be
qualified
for
the
job.
?
句式升级(定语从句)
我胜任这份工作的原因如下。
The
reasons
why
I’m
qualified
for
the
job
are
as
follows.
?
要点2:
如果你们给我这份工作,
我将尽最大努力去帮助参观者。
一般表达:
If
you
give
me
this
job,
I
will
do
my
best
to
help
the
visitors.
?
句式升级(被动语态,
虚拟语气)
如果我能当选成为一名志愿者,
我有能力去帮助参观者理解绘画作品,
并与他们分享那些中国画背后的历史。
If
I’m
chosen
to
be
a
volunteer,
I
would
be
able
to
help
the
visitors
understand
the
paintings
and
share
the
history
behind
those
Chinese
paintings
with
them.
?
Step
4:
衔接过渡　斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear
Sir/
Madam,
I’m
Li
Hua,
a
Chinese
student
having
education
in
London
now.
Hearing
the
Chinese
painting
exhibition
is
to
be
held,
I’m
writing
this
letter
to
apply
for
a
volunteer
position.
The
reasons
why
I’m
qualified
for
the
job
are
as
follows.
Firstly,
I
have
had
an
interest
in
Chinese
painting
ever
since
I
was
a
child.
Therefore,
I
am
familiar
with
this
art
form
and
can
give
very
specific
introduction
to
the
visitors.
Furthermore,
I
can
speak
fluent
Chinese
and
English
at
the
same
time,
making
it
no
problem
for
me
to
help
visitors
from
all
over
the
world.
If
I’m
chosen
to
be
a
volunteer,
I
would
be
able
to
help
the
visitors
understand
the
paintings
and
share
the
history
behind
those
Chinese
paintings
with
them.
Hope
to
hear
from
you
soon!
Yours,
Li
Hua
告知信
【写作示例】
　　假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,
你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,
介绍相关情况,
内容包括:
　　(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);
　　(2)对活动的感受;
　　(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可适当加入细节,
使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,
不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼
the
coming-of-age
ceremony
新冠肺炎COVID-19
Dear
Chris,
　　I’m
so
glad
to
hear
from
you.
?
?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Jin
【考场审题】
Step
1:
精准审题　谋篇布局
人称
I(Li
Jin)
,
You(Chris)
时态
一般现在时,
一般过去时
段落布局
开头点题:
写信目的是介绍成人礼主体段落:
成人礼活动内容及感受结尾:
期待Chris回信
Step
2:
头脑风暴　字字珠玉
(1)美词:
be
scheduled
on,
review,
accompany,
are
determined
to
do
(2)佳句:
①We
are
all
deeply
moved
by
the
ceremony,
from
which
we
realize
that
the
sense
of
responsibility
always
accompanies
the
process
of
our
growth.
②
Such
is
my
understanding
about
growing
up.
Step
3:
斟酌词句　妙笔生花
要点1:
这次的成人礼仪式深深地打动了我们,
并且我们从中意识到了责任感始终伴随着我们的成长过程。
一般表达:
We
are
all
deeply
moved
by
the
ceremony
and
we
realize
that
the
sense
of
responsibility
always
accompanies
the
process
of
our
growth
from
it.
句式升级(定语从句)
We
are
all
deeply
moved
by
the
ceremony,
from
which
we
realize
that
the
sense
of
responsibility
always
accompanies
the
process
of
our
growth.
?
要点2:
我明白了成长的意义。
一般表达:
I
have
understood
the
meaning
of
growing
up.
句式升级(倒装句)
这就是我对成长的理解。
Such
is
my
understanding
about
growing
up.
?
Step
4:
衔接过渡　斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear
Chris,
　　I’m
so
glad
to
hear
from
you.
In
your
last
letter,
you
showed
great
interest
in
the
coming-of-age
ceremony
held
in
our
school.
The
following
is
a
brief
introduction
to
the
ceremony.
　　The
ceremony
was
scheduled
on
June
8,
during
which
we
reviewed
the
past
events
and
watched
some
videos
about
the
heroic
deeds
of
our
schoolmates
in
the
battle
against
COVID-19.
We
are
all
deeply
moved
by
the
ceremony,
from
which
we
realize
that
the
sense
of
responsibility
always
accompanies
the
process
of
our
growth.
We
are
determined
to
follow
the
examples
of
our
excellent
schoolmates
and
make
ourselves
useful
to
the
whole
society.
Such
is
my
understanding
about
growing
up.
What
about
yours?
　　Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours,
Li
Jin
【检测训练】
1．假如你叫李华，
今年暑假一家外企要招聘兼职英语翻译，你想申请这个职位。请你根据以下要点写一封英文申请信。要点如下：
1.
英语水平；
2.
工作经历；
3.
与人交往的能力；
注意：1.
词数100左右；
2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：申请apply
for
申请书application
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
2．假定你是李华，请你给北京奥组委写一封英文申请信，申请成为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者。
内容要点如下：
1.说明个人优势；
2.希望申请成功。
注意：
1.词数
100
左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假如你是李华，南昌二中的一名学生，得知可向国际儿童基金会（Foundation）申请一个经费为2000元的扶贫项目（poverty-relief
program），帮助贫困地区的儿童。你感兴趣，准备申请。请根据以下要点写一篇文章。
1）个人的基本情况和申请理由；
2）你对申请项目的具体设想和项目经费的使用计划；
3）你的愿望。联系方式：2016hope@ief.org
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．开头语和结尾语已为你写好。
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Hua
4．假定你是李华，由于新冠病毒（COVII-19/nove1
coronavirus）爆发，你校决定推迟开学，请你给回国度假
的留学生Jack写封邮件，告知此事。内容包括：
1.告知推迟开学；
2.介绍疫情；
3.开学日期另行通知。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．假定你是李华，是校京剧社(Peking
Opera
Club)的社长，请你给外国留学生George写一封邮件，告知他上周的入社面试他未通过,内容包括：1.告知消息；2.说明原因；3.给予鼓励。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营时的住家Johns夫妇写信告诉你他们下周将来宁波游玩，请按下列要点给他们写一封回信。
1）表示欢迎；
2）告知他们下周的大致安排；
3）希望告知航班信息以便接机。
注意：
1）词数：80
左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入字数)；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear
Mr.
and
Mrs.
Johns,
I'm
glad
to
know
that
you
are
coming
to
Ningbo
next
week.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________49
应用文写作之申请信和告知信
申请信
【写作示例】
假定你是李华,
暑假在伦敦学习,
得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,
内容包括:
1.
写信目的;
2.
个人优势;
3.
能做的事情。
注意:
1.
词数80左右;
2.
可以适当增加细节,
以使行文连贯。
【考场审题】
Step
1:
精准审题　谋篇布局
人称
I(Li
Hua),
Sir/Madam
时态
一般现在时,
一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:
问候并说明写信的原因及目的主体段落:
分两点阐述为什么申请做志愿者:
个人优势;
能做的事情结尾:
衷心的祝愿
Step
2:
头脑风暴　字字珠玉
(1)美词:
apply
for
position,
be
qualified
for,
as
follows,
specific
introduction,
furthermore,
share.
.
.
with.
.
.
(2)佳句:
①Hearing
the
Chinese
painting
exhibition
is
to
be
held,
I’m
writing
this
letter
to
apply
for
a
volunteer
position.
②The
reasons
why
I’m
qualified
for
the
job
are
as
follows.
③Furthermore,
I
can
speak
fluent
Chinese
and
English
at
the
same
time,
making
it
no
problem
for
me
to
help
visitors
from
all
over
the
world.
④If
I’m
chosen
to
be
a
volunteer,
I
would
be
able
to
help
the
visitors
understand
the
paintings
and
share
the
history
behind
those
Chinese
paintings
with
them.
Step
3:
斟酌词句　妙笔生花
要点1:
我有一些胜任这份工作的原因。
一般表达:
I
have
some
reasons
to
be
qualified
for
the
job.
?
句式升级(定语从句)
我胜任这份工作的原因如下。
The
reasons
why
I’m
qualified
for
the
job
are
as
follows.
?
要点2:
如果你们给我这份工作,
我将尽最大努力去帮助参观者。
一般表达:
If
you
give
me
this
job,
I
will
do
my
best
to
help
the
visitors.
?
句式升级(被动语态,
虚拟语气)
如果我能当选成为一名志愿者,
我有能力去帮助参观者理解绘画作品,
并与他们分享那些中国画背后的历史。
If
I’m
chosen
to
be
a
volunteer,
I
would
be
able
to
help
the
visitors
understand
the
paintings
and
share
the
history
behind
those
Chinese
paintings
with
them.
?
Step
4:
衔接过渡　斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear
Sir/
Madam,
I’m
Li
Hua,
a
Chinese
student
having
education
in
London
now.
Hearing
the
Chinese
painting
exhibition
is
to
be
held,
I’m
writing
this
letter
to
apply
for
a
volunteer
position.
The
reasons
why
I’m
qualified
for
the
job
are
as
follows.
Firstly,
I
have
had
an
interest
in
Chinese
painting
ever
since
I
was
a
child.
Therefore,
I
am
familiar
with
this
art
form
and
can
give
very
specific
introduction
to
the
visitors.
Furthermore,
I
can
speak
fluent
Chinese
and
English
at
the
same
time,
making
it
no
problem
for
me
to
help
visitors
from
all
over
the
world.
If
I’m
chosen
to
be
a
volunteer,
I
would
be
able
to
help
the
visitors
understand
the
paintings
and
share
the
history
behind
those
Chinese
paintings
with
them.
Hope
to
hear
from
you
soon!
Yours,
Li
Hua
告知信
【写作示例】
　　假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,
你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,
介绍相关情况,
内容包括:
　　(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);
　　(2)对活动的感受;
　　(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可适当加入细节,
使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,
不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼
the
coming-of-age
ceremony
新冠肺炎COVID-19
Dear
Chris,
　　I’m
so
glad
to
hear
from
you.
?
?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Jin
【考场审题】
Step
1:
精准审题　谋篇布局
人称
I(Li
Jin)
,
You(Chris)
时态
一般现在时,
一般过去时
段落布局
开头点题:
写信目的是介绍成人礼主体段落:
成人礼活动内容及感受结尾:
期待Chris回信
Step
2:
头脑风暴　字字珠玉
(1)美词:
be
scheduled
on,
review,
accompany,
are
determined
to
do
(2)佳句:
①We
are
all
deeply
moved
by
the
ceremony,
from
which
we
realize
that
the
sense
of
responsibility
always
accompanies
the
process
of
our
growth.
②
Such
is
my
understanding
about
growing
up.
Step
3:
斟酌词句　妙笔生花
要点1:
这次的成人礼仪式深深地打动了我们,
并且我们从中意识到了责任感始终伴随着我们的成长过程。
一般表达:
We
are
all
deeply
moved
by
the
ceremony
and
we
realize
that
the
sense
of
responsibility
always
accompanies
the
process
of
our
growth
from
it.
句式升级(定语从句)
We
are
all
deeply
moved
by
the
ceremony,
from
which
we
realize
that
the
sense
of
responsibility
always
accompanies
the
process
of
our
growth.
?
要点2:
我明白了成长的意义。
一般表达:
I
have
understood
the
meaning
of
growing
up.
句式升级(倒装句)
这就是我对成长的理解。
Such
is
my
understanding
about
growing
up.
?
Step
4:
衔接过渡　斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear
Chris,
　　I’m
so
glad
to
hear
from
you.
In
your
last
letter,
you
showed
great
interest
in
the
coming-of-age
ceremony
held
in
our
school.
The
following
is
a
brief
introduction
to
the
ceremony.
　　The
ceremony
was
scheduled
on
June
8,
during
which
we
reviewed
the
past
events
and
watched
some
videos
about
the
heroic
deeds
of
our
schoolmates
in
the
battle
against
COVID-19.
We
are
all
deeply
moved
by
the
ceremony,
from
which
we
realize
that
the
sense
of
responsibility
always
accompanies
the
process
of
our
growth.
We
are
determined
to
follow
the
examples
of
our
excellent
schoolmates
and
make
ourselves
useful
to
the
whole
society.
Such
is
my
understanding
about
growing
up.
What
about
yours?
　　Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours,
Li
Jin
【检测训练】
1．假如你叫李华，
今年暑假一家外企要招聘兼职英语翻译，你想申请这个职位。请你根据以下要点写一封英文申请信。要点如下：
1.
英语水平；
2.
工作经历；
3.
与人交往的能力；
注意：1.
词数100左右；
2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：申请apply
for
申请书application
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【参考范文】
Dear
Sir
or
madam,
I
know
that
your
company
is
looking
for
a
part-time
English
translator
in
the
summer
vacation.
I’d
like
to
apply
for
the
job.
First,
having
learned
English
for
seven
years
or
so,
I
am
able
to
express
myself
freely.
Second,
my
previous
working
experience
as
a
translator
makes
me
convinced
that
I
can
well
manage
the
job
this
time.
What’s
more,
as
an
outgoing
person,
I
am
always
ready
to
make
friends
with
many
kinds
of
people
from
all
walks
of
life.
I
am
eager
for
the
job
to
be
offered
by
your
company
and
I
am
sure
that
I
will
satisfy
all
your
requirements.
Thanks
for
your
reading
my
application
and
I’m
looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
Yours
Li
Hua
【写作步骤】
首先，本文要求写一封申请信，因此时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称应以第一人称为主；其次，要点主要包括介绍自己的英语水平、谈谈工作经历以及本人的交际能力，写作时应注意适当地拓展，尽量使用一些高级词汇和句式；最后，要注意语句的连贯。
【写作亮点】
本文较好地完成了写作任务，段落清晰、要点全面、语言规范。此外文章亮点纷呈、可读性强，如：1.
文中使用了一些高级词汇express，convinced，apply
for，all
walks
of
life；satisfy
all
your
requirements，look
forward
to，application等；2.
文中使用了动词-ing形式作状语having
learned
English
for
seven
years
or
so，动词不定式短语作定语to
be
offered
by
your
company等；3.
文中使用了高级句式I
am
sure
that等；4.
文中恰到好处地使用了过渡词，使得文章语句迹贯，如first，second，what’s
more等。
2．假定你是李华，请你给北京奥组委写一封英文申请信，申请成为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者。
内容要点如下：
1.说明个人优势；
2.希望申请成功。
注意：
1.词数
100
左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear
Sir/
Madam,
I’m
Li
Hua,
a
high
school
student.
Thank
you
for
taking
your
time
to
read
my
letter.Interested
in
the
2022
Beijing
winter
Olympic
Games,
I’m
writing
to
apply
to
be
a
volunteer
in
the
games.
I
feel
I
have
the
necessary
qualifications
for
the
voluntary
job.
Above
all,
I’m
a
fluent
English
speaker.
Besides,
keen
on
sports,
I’m
quite
familiar
with
different
events.
Equally
importantly,
I
previously
served
as
a
volunteer
several
times.
As
a
warm-hearted
and
unselfish
teenager,
I
do
believe
I
can
do
the
job
well
if
I’m
granted
a
chance.
Any
favorable
consideration
of
my
application
or
a
personal
interview
would
be
appreciated.
I’m
looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Hua
【写作步骤】
1.词汇积累
首先：above
all→first
of
all
此外：besides→in
addition
喜爱：be
keen
on→be
fond
of
熟悉：be
familiar
with→be
acquainted
with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Interested
in
the
2022
Beijing
winter
Olympic
Games,
I’m
writing
to
apply
to
be
a
volunteer
in
the
games.
拓展句：I
am
interested
in
the
2022
Beijing
winter
Olympic
Games,
so
I’m
writing
to
apply
to
be
a
volunteer
in
the
games.
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]
I
feel
I
have
the
necessary
qualifications
for
the
voluntary
job.
(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
As
a
warm-hearted
and
unselfish
teenager,
I
do
believe
I
can
do
the
job
well
if
I’m
granted
a
chance.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3．假如你是李华，南昌二中的一名学生，得知可向国际儿童基金会（Foundation）申请一个经费为2000元的扶贫项目（poverty-relief
program），帮助贫困地区的儿童。你感兴趣，准备申请。请根据以下要点写一篇文章。
1）个人的基本情况和申请理由；
2）你对申请项目的具体设想和项目经费的使用计划；
3）你的愿望。联系方式：2016hope@ief.org
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．开头语和结尾语已为你写好。
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Hua
【参考范文】
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
My
name
is
Li
Hua,
a
student
currently
studying
at
Nanchang
No.2
Middle
School.
I
am
writing
to
apply
for
the
2000
yuan's
worth
of
fund
aimed
at
helping
those
students
who
are
financially
disadvantaged.
Being
raised
in
families
that
don’t
have
to
worry
about
putting
food
on
the
table
need
not
mean
ignoring
our
less
fortunate
peers.
On
this
account,
we
would
appreciate
it
if
you
could
sponsor
our
poverty-relief
endeavor.
The
following
is
how
we
would
go
about
using
the
money.????We
would??spend
1500
yuan
purchasing
some
stationery
for
the
needy
students
in
a
poverty-stricken
area.
The
remainder
of
the
fund
would
be
used
to
invite
a
motivational
speaker
who
was
to
talk
about
how
to
lift
oneself
out
of
poverty
by
making
right
academic
and
professional
decisions.
Our
efforts
might
make
a
difference
in
the
lives
of
some
young
people,
but
who
knows
what
butterfly
effects
these
young
minds
may
have
on
tomorrow's
world?
We
would
be
grateful
if
you
could
reply
at
your
earliest
convenience.
You
could
contact
me
at?2016hope@icf.org.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Hua
【写作分析】该文体属于书信作文。首先明确的是一封申请信，所以在措辞时应该保持尊敬，谦和地语气，切记语气生硬，这时在商务交流时需切记的一点。其次囊括文本所要求的三个方面，但不代表不可以发挥自己的想法，总归来看文章还是有自己的发挥之处：经费的具体设想和使用方法，本方面需要考生能够结合实际情况给出具体的可行操作方案，考查学生的思辨能力和跨文化交际能力。在过渡时，用词能够衔接自然。最后要注明自己的联系方式已确保收到回信。
【写作亮点】
a
student
currently
studying
at
Nanchang
No.2
Middle
School使用了同位语从句，students
who
are
financially
disadvantaged.使用了定语从句等，这些都丰富了整篇的句式多样化；apply
for，On
this
account，make
a
difference等使用了固定搭配短语。We
would
spend
1500
yuan
purchasing
some
stationery
for
the
needy
students
in
a
poverty-stricken
area.这里明确点出了基金的具体用途，避免了空话现象。
4．假定你是李华，由于新冠病毒（COVII-19/nove1
coronavirus）爆发，你校决定推迟开学，请你给回国度假
的留学生Jack写封邮件，告知此事。内容包括：
1.告知推迟开学；
2.介绍疫情；
3.开学日期另行通知。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear
Jack,
I
am
so
sorry
to
inform
you
that
we'll
have
to
postpone
the
start
of
school
this
term
due
to
the
outbreak
of
COVID-19
during
this
winter
vacation.
You
must
have
known
that
COVID-19
is
spreading
all
over
the
world,
and
that
the
situation
is
very
bad.
Many
people
have
been
infected
and
died.
It
is
generally
accepted
that
the
best
way
to
avoid
being
infected
is
not
to
gather
and
stay
at
home.
So
in
order
to
defeat
this
infectious
disease,
we've
decided
to
delay
the
start
of
school.
The
school
will
not
begin
until
the
outbreak
is
over.
The
specific
time
will
be
announced
later.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【写作步骤】
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.告知推迟开学；
2.介绍疫情；
3.开学日期另行通知。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
inform
sb.
of
sth./
postpone/
outbreak/
due
to/
spread/
infect/
avoid
doing
sth./
gather/
decide
to
do
sth./
delay
to
do
sth.
第三步：连词成句
1.
I
am
so
sorry
to
inform
you
that
due
to
the
outbreak
of
COVID-19
during
this
winter
vacation
the
start
of
this
term
has
to
be
postponed.
2.
You
must
have
known
that
COVID-19
is
spreading
all
over
the
world,
and
that
the
situation
is
very
bad.
3.
Unfortunately,
many
people
have
been
infected
and
died.
4.
It
is
generally
acknowledged
that
the
best
way
to
avoid
being
infected
is
not
gathering
but
staying
at
home.
5.
So
in
order
to
defeat
this
infectious
disease,
we've
decided
to
delay
the
start
of
school.
6.
The
school
will
not
begin
until
the
outbreak
is
over.
7.
The
specific
time
will
be
announced
online
later.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/
if/
though/
although…
定语从句连词：which/
that/
when/
where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【写作亮点】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I
am
so
sorry
to
inform
you
that
we'll
have
to
postpone
the
start
of
school
this
term
due
to
the
outbreak
of
COVID-19
during
this
winter
vacation.中that引导宾语从句；It
is
generally
accepted
that
the
best
way
to
avoid
being
infected
is
not
to
gather
and
stay
at
home.
中that引导主语从句。
5．假定你是李华，是校京剧社(Peking
Opera
Club)的社长，请你给外国留学生George写一封邮件，告知他上周的入社面试他未通过,内容包括：1.告知消息；2.说明原因；3.给予鼓励。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear
George,
I'm
Li
Hua,
chairman
of
the
Peking
Opera
Club.
I
want
to
thank
you
for
your
interest
in
joining
the
Peking
Opera
Club
and
for
all
the
time
you
put
into
the
interview
process.
Unfortunately,
I'm
sorry
to
tell
you
that
we
will
not
offer
the
membership
to
you.
While
your
enthusiasm
for
Peking
Opera
is
very
impressive,
we
have
chosen
a
candidate
who
has
more
hands-on
experience.
Besides,
your
Mandarin
failed
to
meet
the
criteria
for
stage
performance.
However,
we
will
keep
your
resume
on
file
and
keep
you
in
mind
if
there
should
be
any
other
chances.
Best
wishes!
Yours,
Li
Hua
【写作步骤】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量现在完成时和一般过去时等。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.
告知消息；
2.
说明原因；
3.
给予鼓励。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
chairman
of
the
Peking
Opera
Club;
thank
you
for
your
interest
in
joining
the
Peking
Opera
Club;
sorry
to
tell;
not
offer
the
membership;
choose
a
candidate
who
has
more
hands-on
experience;
fail
to
meet
the
criteria
for
stage
performance;
keep
your
resume
on
file;
keep
you
in
mind;
any
other
chances
第三步：连词成句
1.
I'm
Li
Hua,
chairman
of
the
Peking
Opera
Club.
2.
I
want
to
thank
you
for
your
interest
in
joining
the
Peking
Opera
Club
and
for
all
the
time
you
put
into
the
interview
process.
3.
Unfortunately,
I'm
sorry
to
tell
you
that
we
will
not
offer
the
membership
to
you.
4.
While
your
enthusiasm
for
Peking
Opera
is
very
impressive,
we
have
chosen
a
candidate
who
has
more
hands-on
experience.
5.
Besides,
your
Mandarin
failed
to
meet
the
criteria
for
stage
performance.
6.
However,
we
will
keep
your
resume
on
file
and
keep
you
in
mind
if
there
should
be
any
other
chances.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides
2.表转折对比关系：However,
While,
Unfortunately
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]
I
want
to
thank
you
for
your
interest
in
joining
the
Peking
Opera
Club
and
for
all
the
time
you
put
into
the
interview
process.(动名词作介词宾语以及省略引导词的定语从句)
[高分句型2]
While
your
enthusiasm
for
Peking
Opera
is
very
impressive,
we
have
chosen
a
candidate
who
has
more
hands-on
experience.(while引导的让步状语从句和who引导的限制性定语从句)
6．假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营时的住家Johns夫妇写信告诉你他们下周将来宁波游玩，请按下列要点给他们写一封回信。
1）表示欢迎；
2）告知他们下周的大致安排；
3）希望告知航班信息以便接机。
注意：
1）词数：80
左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入字数)；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear
Mr.
and
Mrs.
Johns,
I'm
glad
to
know
that
you
are
coming
to
Ningbo
next
week.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear
Mr.
and
Mrs.
Johns,
I'm
glad
to
know
that
you
are
coming
to
Hangzhou
next
week.
It's
a
great
opportunity
for
me
to
repay
your
help
and
hospitality
when
I
was
in
America.
For
your
stay
in
Hangzhou,
I'll
arrange
for
you
to
visit
some
of
the
most
famous
places
of
interest
here,
like
West
Lake,
Lei
Feng
Tower.
Meanwhile,
I'll
also
take
you
to
taste
some
of
the
delicious
local
food.
I
bet
you'll
have
a
most
enjoyable
week.
Would
you
please
tell
me
some
information
about
your
flight
so
that
I
can
pick
you
up
at
the
airport?
Looking
forward
to
seeing
you
again.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【写作步骤】
第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营时的住家Johns夫妇写信告诉你他们下周将来宁波游玩，请按下列要点给他们写一封回信。1）表示欢迎；2）告知他们下周的大致安排；3）希望告知航班信息以便接机。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：opportunity
(机会)；repay(报答)；hospitality(款待)；arrange
for(安排)；Meanwhile(同时)；the
delicious
local
food(美味的当地食物)；bet(敢说)；enjoyable(快乐的)；information(信息)；pick
sb
up(接某人)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【写作亮点】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm
glad
to
know
that
you
are
coming
to
Hangzhou
next
week.运用宾语从句；Would
you
please
tell
me
some
information
about
your
flight
so
that
I
can
pick
you
up
at
the
airport?运用目的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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