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2021年浙江卷:万圣节南瓜趣事
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试题再现
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试题分析
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写作思路
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范文赏析
目录
CONTENTS
2021
试题再现
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost (最上面), I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________________
Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. _______________________________________________________
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
2021
试题分析
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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根据短文内容填空,理清故事脉络。
A Halloween tradition
Determine the winner
My idea
pumpkin ______
In a pumpkin field, we compete to seek out the ______ ___.
This year, it was hard to tell who was the _______.
We forgot to ______ our pumpkins before ______ ______ their insides.
To prove my point, I decided to ______ my head inside the pumpkin.
It was only when I tried to ________ my head that I realized getting out was going to be less _______________than getting in.
carving
biggest
one
winner
weigh
taking
out
force
remove
straightforward
Forcing my head inside the pumpkin
I _________ to put my whole head into it.
My nose briefly _________ entry.
I _____ over and pressed my head against the opening.
I got _______ above my eyes.
I was able to _________ up with the huge pumpkin _______ on my shoulders.
根据短文内容填空，理解具体细节的描述。
When I pulled hard, my nose ____ ____ the way.
To remove my head out of the pumpkin
I got into ______ as I pressed firmly against the table.
I _________ my head around to find the right ______.
bent
jammed
prevented
managed
straighten
resting
got
in
panic
moved
angle
Climax
Ending
Resolution
Opening
Build-up
I tried to remove my head out of the pumpkin but failed.
Pumpkin carving at Halloween is a family tradition, and we compete to seek out the biggest one on a farm every year.
To prove I was the winner, I forced my head into my pumpkin.
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. How did I finally get out
That video was posted the day before Halloween. What was people’s response to the video How did I feel about the video
阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！
Characters:
I, dad, mom, Jason …
Setting:
Halloween, home, pumpkin competition
Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
原文分析
介绍万圣节的传统：带最大的南瓜回家。
由compete with， the biggest判断
人物情感：excited
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately, we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
原文分析
讲述了比赛的过程。
通过这些细节词可以得知我当时的情感是competitive
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
原文分析
讲述了我为了证明我的南瓜大把头伸进南瓜里面的过程。
捕捉细节词，可以得知我的情感是excited
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
原文分析
故事的转折
捕捉细节词，可以得知我的情感是panicked。
2021
写作思路
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Paragraph 1 ：
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. _______________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2 ：
That video was posted the day before Halloween.
_______________________________________________________________________
原文分析
根据下面的推断，本段应该是我的头被拔出来的过程。
表明上一段落我的头被卡在南瓜中的的过程被拍下了视频。侧面反映上一段我的头应该是从南瓜里弄出来了。
最后一句的主旨升华。
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 1 ：
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
I can not breath.
My mother came to help me .
She undo my rubber band to make more room for breath.
Eventually I was rescued.
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 2 ：
That video was posted the day before Halloween.
The post gain too much shares and likes.
I was embarrassed.
He learn a lesson.
look before you leap
B
D
C
A
at first/finally
manage to force my head into the pumpkin
when I tried to remove my head
can't get out
this year
forgot to weigh
be determined to prove
every October
carry pumpkins back home
E


Read for Complication action
How did I manage to force my head into the pumpkin
Language Appreciation
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bent over &
pressed my head against the opening
got jammed above my eyes
my nose briefly prevented entry
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put my head into it &
straighten up with...resting
my excitement was short-lived
when I tried to remove my head, my nose got in the way.
Pumpkin(南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage---I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry, Finally, I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork(软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy, “I'm going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can't get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
Read for mood
a joyful & harmonious family
Para 1
It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
Para 2
The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.
1. What was my feeling at that time
2. What was the reaction of my family
3. How did I finally get my head out of the pumpkin
* Mom was filming the whole time
1. Was the video popular and what's the reaction of the public
2. How did my family and I take the matter
3. ENDING
Writing
划线词分析
Noun: Pumpkin; dad; Jason;mom; head; nose
Verb: manage; support; rest; pull
Writing
Para 1
It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
Para 2
The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.
pumkpin; dad; mom; Jason; head; nose
manage; support; rest; pull
pumpkin; mom; dad
1. I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
2. I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
3. I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.
4. This made me feel sick and shivery.
5. A flood of fear welled up in me./ Fear flooded over me.
6. Jenny was worried sick. Her throat was dry and her face was burning up.
para 1 ---feelings语料库
panic & fear & anxious
1. Towards the end of the day my lungs panted as they struggled for oxygen.
2. When I returned from my shift I gasped for breath and my head was dizzy with pain.
3. But I lay suffocating slowly. My face was purple and my lips turned blue. I couldn't think. I drifted for a few moments and then everything went blank. A rush of air revived me.
4. Again the Nautilus attacked the ice sheet like a huge battering ram, only this time from beneath. There was a shattering, crunching sound, as it broke through, shooting forwards and upwards and then crushing the ice beneath it as it landed. Oxygen flowed into everyone's lungs. We were saved.
para 1 ---语料库
“20000 leagues under the sea”《海底两万里》
句子润色
1. 我还记得我是怎么获救的。
I still remembered how I got rescued.
Be/get rescued
句子润色
2. 我在南瓜里面焦急的快不能呼吸了。
I can’t breath in the pumpkin with anxiousness.
The air inside the hollow vegetable was full of my anxious breath.
The hollow vegetable
句式升级
句子润色
3. 当看到发生了什么，焦急又害怕，妈妈放下手机，向我走来。
When my mother see what happened, she laied down her phone, and walked towards me, anxiously and fearfully.
Upon seeing what had happened, overwhelmed with anxiety and fear, mom laid down her phone and approached towards me in a flash.
Upon seeing what had happened
laid down her phone
动词的替换
句子润色
4. “不要用尽你的氧气！“她喊道，把我的头进一步推进南瓜里，这样她就可以伸进去解开我头上的橡皮筋。
“Don’t use up all your oxygen!” she shouted, and push my head farther into the pumpkin so that she could reach in and undo my rubber band.
“Don’t use up all your oxygen!” she cried, pushing my head farther into the pumpkin so that she could reach in and undo my rubber band.
Push one’s head farther into
undo my rubber band
非谓语动词结构替换
句子润色
5. 只有当妈妈给我留出足够的空间时，我才成功地走出困境，尽管我的下巴和鼻子都很痛。
When mom spared enough space for me, I manage to get out of it successfully, though my chin and nose were full of pain.
Only when mom spared enough space for me did I manage to get out of it successfully, though my chin and nose were full of pain.
my chin and nose were full of pain
manage to get out of
倒装句替换
句子润色
6. “我成功了！”我松了一口气。我14岁的弟弟杰森站在我面前，我才意识到他一直在拍视频。
“I made it!” I let out a cry of relief. My 14-year-old brother, Jason, standing in front of me, then I realized he’d been filming the whole time.
“I made it!” I let out a cry of relief. My 14-year-old brother, Jason, standing in front of me, it was only then that I realized he’d been filming the whole time.
I made it
let out a cry of relief
强调句升级
句子润色
7. 令人惊讶的是，这段视频获得了数十万次的浏览量。
Surprisingly, the video gained hundreds of thousands of views.
Surprisingly, it became a hit that the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views.
To one’s surprise
surprisely
hundreds of thousands of views
started racking up
句子润色
8. 一开始，当我被认出是视频中的那个人时，我几乎无法控制自己的尴尬。
At the very beginning, I could hardly contain my embarrassment when I was recognized as the one in the video.
At the very beginning, hardly could I contain my embarrassment when I was recognized as the one in the video.
At the very beginning
contain my embarrassment
倒装句的升级
Hardly…when; no sooner …than
句子润色
9. 然而，随着时间的流逝，我的生活又回到了正轨。
However, with time trickling by, my life was back on track.
with time trickling by
Be back on track
句子润色
10. 尽管万圣节南瓜雕刻是一个家庭传统，但是第二年则是一个更加庄重的节日。
Though pumpkin carving at Halloween was a family tradition, the following year was a more sedate affair.
A family tradition as pumpkin carving at Halloween was, the following year was a more sedate affair.
pumpkin carving at Halloween
more sedate affair
状语从句的倒装
句子润色
11. 每当我想起头被南瓜卡住的那一天，我都忍不住大笑起来。
Whenever I thought about the day when I got my head stuck in a pumpkin, I couldn’t help but laugh out loud.
Whenever I thought about the day on which I got my head stuck in a pumpkin, I couldn’t help but laugh out loud.
couldn’t help but laugh out loud
非限制性定语从句替换
句子润色
12. 我想说我吸取了教训-三思而后行！
I would say I learned my lesson —look before you leap!
look before you leap
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范文赏析
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ________________________ (南瓜舒服地呆在我的肩膀上，不想离开。非谓语动词作状语). Fortunately, I’ve always liked the smell of pumpkins. Dad was called and he got me to push my head farther into the pumpkin so Jason could reach in and undo the rubber band round my ponytail. I managed to pull my head out and emerged with messy hair and my nose plugged with pulp. ______________________________________ (那时我才知道妈妈全程都录了像。强调句).
That video was posted the day before Halloween. By the end of that day it had had over 1,000 views, and by Halloween morning we had got phone calls from TV shows — the video started getting hundreds of thousands of supporters. ______________________________ (当我走在街上，我会被素不相识的人认出来。时间状语从句、定语从句). The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. Passersby and trick-or-treaters would knock and ask to take selfies with it. ___________________________________________ (虽然尴尬，但是我对自己带给他人的快乐和乐趣感到满足。非谓语动词短语作状语、定语从句).
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。
阅读以下参考范文，学习范文的精彩表达和亮点表述。
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. The pumpkin rested comfortably on my shoulders, not wanting to leave. Fortunately, I’ve always liked the smell of pumpkins. Dad was called and he got me to push my head farther into the pumpkin so Jason could reach in and undo the rubber band round my ponytail. I managed to pull my head out and emerged with messy hair and my nose plugged with pulp. It was only then that I realised Mom had been filming the whole time.
That video was posted the day before Halloween. By the end of that day it had had over 1,000 views, and by Halloween morning we had got phone calls from TV shows — the video started getting hundreds of thousands of supporters. When I walked in the street, I was recognised by people I’d never met. The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. Passersby and trick-or-treaters would knock and ask to take selfies with it. Though embarrassed, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I had brought to others.
2021年1月浙江卷读后续写——精彩语言
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. The pumpkin rested comfortably on my shoulders, not wanting to leave. Fortunately, I’ve always liked the smell of pumpkins. Dad was called and he got me to push my head farther into the pumpkin so Jason could reach in and undo the rubber band round my ponytail. I managed to pull my head out and emerged with messy hair and my nose plugged with pulp. It was only then that I realised Mom had been filming the whole time.
生动的语言
非谓语动词作状语
结果状语从句
with结构
强调句
2021年1月浙江卷读后续写——精彩语言
That video was posted the day before Halloween. By the end of that day it had had over 1,000 views, and by Halloween morning we had got phone calls from TV shows — the video started getting hundreds of thousands of supporters. When I walked in the street, I was recognised by people I’d never met. The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. Passersby and trick-or-treaters would knock and ask to take selfies with it. Though embarrassed, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I had brought to others.
固定搭配
时间状语从句
定语从句
非谓语动词短语
固定表达
定语从句
检测一下你对范文的精彩语言掌握了吗？
舒服地呆在……上
伸入
松开橡皮筋
设法把我的头拔出来
自拍
rest comfortably on
reach in
undo the rubber band
manage to pull my head out
take selfies
☆语块
Dad was called and he got me to push my head farther into the pumpkin so Jason could reach in and undo the rubber band round my ponytail. (Para. 1)
【译文】爸爸被叫了过来，他让我把头伸向南瓜深处，这样杰森就可以把手伸进去，解开我马尾辫上的橡皮筋。
【分析】本句中and连接并列句，so引导结果状语从句。Dad was called、he got me to push … 和 Jason could reach in and undo … 三个句子结构紧凑，一气呵成。
I managed to pull my head out and emerged with messy hair and my nose plugged with pulp. (Para. 1)
本句将“我”把头拔出来后的窘样进行了细致的刻画：with messy hair（头发凌乱）和my nose plugged with pulp（鼻子被南瓜瓤堵住）。该描写巧妙地将“我”的糗事与万圣节的主题“恶作剧”结合在一起，从而为下文文章主题的升华做好了铺垫。
☆亮点
☆句式
阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！
I was overwhelmed by a feeling of extreme regret.
I couldn’t help thinking about why I came up with such a stupid idea.
Jason suggested calling the fire department.
Upon hearing it, Dad rushed …
Only when Mom made enough space for me did I manage to …
My mom was engaged in filming my embarrassing and awkward situation …
Surprisingly, it became a hit gaining hundreds of thousands of views.
It created huge interest and received likes and comments …
Constant streams of curious people even came by to take photos with my prized pumpkin.
During Halloween, a festival of trick or treat, I tricked myself instead.
Undoubtedly, it was the most unforgettable Halloween though I still have no idea whose pumpkin was bigger yet.
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