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A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
续写词数应为150左右；
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.(共17张PPT)
高考英语复习读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
语篇分析
主题语境：人与自我——生活
What
Why
How
双胞胎Jeff和Jenna在母亲节的清晨想偷偷地给妈妈做爱心早餐，作为惊喜送给妈妈，结果事与愿违，不是面包片糊了，就是粥溢出了锅，甚至Jeff的手也烫伤了，现场一片狼藉，就在两人不知所措的时候，爸爸出现了……
本文选材非常贴近日常生活，通过讲述一对双胞胎在母亲节给母亲偷偷做早餐的故事，启发学生要通过实际行动来表达对母亲的爱。
本文是记叙文。文章按照时间和事件发展的顺序展开。首先在第一段交代了事情发生的原因和背景，紧接着在第二段讲述了做早餐的整个过程，最后在第三段讲述了故事发展的高潮——事与愿违、厨房一团糟。接下来是需要续写的两段，通过给出的首句可以看出，需要续写的是两部分：一、爸爸的出现，事情出现转机；二、早餐顺利做好，孩子们端着早餐去叫妈妈，妈妈会有何种反应？
文本结构
What:
* Jenna and Jeff planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.
* Boiled porridge put out the fire and the stove was a mess.
* Jeff’s hand was hurt when touching the hot burner.
* The bread in the pan turned black.

A Mother’s Day Surprise
When: Mother’s Day
Who: Jeff, Jenna, Father and Mother
Why: Making breakfast as a surprise for Mother
How: Father appeared ...
Where: In the kitchen
语言知识
地道表达
1. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. (para. 1)
① 本句是简单句，plan to do sth.意为“计划去做某事”。
② French toast法式吐司，法国吐司（用面包片蘸蛋奶油炸而成）
句
意
当他们把早餐端到妈妈的床上时，妈妈得有多么高兴和自豪。
2. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. (para. 1)
① 本句是一个主从复合句。
② 句子的主干是How引导的感叹句。
③ when引导时间状语从句。
句
意
他们计划做法式吐司和鸡肉粥。
语言知识
地道表达
3. There was nothing to it. (para. 1)
① 本句是简单句。
② shooting out of the pot和starting to shake分别是动词-ing形式短语作noticed的宾语补足语。
shoot一词形象生动，非常具有画面感。
句
意
不是什么了不起的事。
4. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. (para. 3)
句
意
然后Jeff注意到蒸汽从锅里喷出来，锅盖开始晃动。
语言知识
语块积累
与主题相关：
be filled with excitement 充满兴奋 at last 最后，终于
go down the stairs 下楼 put … into 把……放入……
turn on 打开 heat up 给……加热
go smoothly 进行顺利 fry the bread 煎面包
turn down 调低 shoot out of 从……喷出
put out the fire 把火扑灭 stay calm 保持冷静
turn off 关闭 give a cry of pain 发出痛苦的叫声
catch the smell of burning 闻到糊味
故事脉络
Opening
Build-up
Climax
双胞胎Jenna和Jeff筹划在母亲节那天为妈妈做早餐（法式吐司和鸡肉粥）。
Resolution
Ending
刚开始一切进展顺利，但随后Jeff煎糊了第一片面包，于是Jenna往锅中放入了另一片面包。
Jeff发现溢出的粥把火扑灭了，在清理煤气灶时又不小心烫伤了手，与此同时Jenna发现另一片面包也糊了。
这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲……
当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了……
根据续写第二段提示句可知，早餐最终做好了，因此本段可围绕“爸爸出现”后给予双胞胎的帮助展开故事情节，可以是爸爸给他们指出补救办法，或者爸爸直接帮忙。不管是哪种构思，双胞胎做早餐的困难在本段最好能得到解决。
谋篇布局
续写第一段
Para 1
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
How did their father react to the mess What did he do to help the twins What did the twins do
Q1
How did the breakfast turn out Where did their father go after helping the twins
Q2
根据提示句可知，双胞胎已经端着早餐上楼并叫醒妈妈，因此本段可围绕双胞胎见到妈妈后的故事展开，可以穿插双胞胎和妈妈之间的对话，还可以提到爸爸佯装睡觉，最后可以自然式结尾，给故事画上句号，或者主题式结尾，突出“亲情”、“劳动”、“克服困难、解决问题”等主题。
谋篇布局
续写第二段
Para 2
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
What did the twins say to their mother
Q3
How did their mother feel and react Did she eat the breakfast What was their father doing at that time
Q4
What might happen between the twins and their father What can be a proper ending
Q5
续写第一段应注意父亲的意外出现与出手相助是否会打乱双胞胎的计划，此处应如何设置情节才能让“母亲节惊喜”如期发生呢？可以按常理思考，这是父亲和孩子们之间的一个小秘密。
2. 续写第一段最好不要写具体的做饭过程，避免与材料中关于做饭过程的
描述重复。
3. 续写第二段可以重点描写“惊喜”，与文章标题及首段相呼应。
Tips
拓展练习
假定你是李华，你参加的英语社团即将举办“母亲节的惊喜”分享会。请你就此写一篇小短文和大家分享，内容包括：
1. 准备的惊喜；
2. 遇到的问题；
3. 你的感受。
注意：词数100左右。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their discouraged faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he went back to bed secretly. The twins put a card they had made beside the breakfast.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They hugged her and said “Happy Mother’s Day, dear Mummy!” Mother hugged the twins, too. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast. She shook Father who was pretending to sleep. He pretended astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they looked at each other smilingly.
One possible version:
拓展练习
On Mother’s Day last year, I decided to fry an egg for my mother before she went home at noon. Though fried eggs are usually served in the morning, I didn’t think I had any other better ideas to show my love to her. Frying eggs seems easy, but a bit hard for a green hand. After I poured oil and broke an egg into the frying pan, I forgot to turn down the fire so that a few tiny drops of oil suddenly “flew” out of the pan onto my hand and face. The burns were painful. But when I finally served the egg to my mother, she was moved to tears. I thought it was worth it.
One possible version:

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