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2021 ~2022学年度第一学期高三期中英语试卷 （镇江）
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Then suddenly some ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )one came up from behind me and tried to hand me a piece of paper. I thought it was another one of those people who hand you pages of some sad story and ask you for money. I could feel anger boiling up inside me. I shirked (避开) the person away with the motion of my hand without even looking at him.
This guy mov ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ed over to the next person in traffic and did a similar thing of showing him the paper. The other guy who was not in as bad mood as mine looked at the paper and started giving directions. It was at this moment I realized that the person who came to me was asking for directions. He couldn't speak so he had written it down on a piece of paper. He was not some beggar asking for money, and he was dressed as a salesman carrying one of those bulky encyclopedias (百科全书). After getting the directions he smiled at the person, bowed his head showing his appreciation and jogged away to the other end of the road.
I felt a sudden ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) tender pity for him. By the time the signal turned green this salesman was standing at the other end of the road sigalling people for a lift. I decided to help him out but my house was on a different route than where he was asking for a lift. I moved on but I was still felling bad for treating a hard working person that way.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After going about 10 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )0 meters, I decided to turn back to offer him a helping hand.
When another bike st ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )opped and he sat on the bike, he noticed me in the distance.
After going about 10 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )0 meters I decided to turn back to offer him a helping hand. Nothing could set my mind at rest other than having a chance to make up for treating him that way. Without hesitation, I turned around and made my way to where we first met. When I saw him, the exhausted but patient salesman was still signalling at people for a lift and meanwhile showing them the piece of paper. I pressed my feet down sharply on the pedals in a desperate attempt to offer my help as soon as possible.www-2-1-cnjy-com
When another bike s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )topped and he sat on the bike, he noticed me in the distance. I thought he would probably pretend not to have seen me. To my surprise, he smiled and waved at me as he was swallowed up by the crowd. I was almost rooted to the spot with regretful tears rolling down my cheeks. Though this incident didn’t change my life, I learned a precious lesson: try to treat others with tolerance and kindness even though sometimes life throws you a curveball.
2021 ~2022学年度第一学期高三期中英语试卷 （扬州）
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。
Teddy was a bea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r of habit. Every morning he woke up at the same time, stretched, scratched,
and yawned(打哈欠). E ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )very morning the bees in his yard delivered three jars of honey so that Teddy ate the same breakfast he'd eaten since he was a hairy baby: toast with honey and tea with extra honey.
Next came his daily ro ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )utine: practicing the rolling skill and running errands(做杂事). At night
he'd read, and then have one last cup of honey tea before bed.
Life was sweet. Until one morning...
One morning some ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )thing abnormal had happened. There was no honey. The bees had gone on
strike!
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Just then he heard s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )omeone say, “Hey, you! In the fur coat!" It was a very small bee with a
very loud voice. “We need to talk!" said the bee.
“Talk Hmmph!" c ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )omplained Teddy. “I let you all live in my yard. All I ask for is a few jars of
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“A few jars " said ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the bee. “Buddy, we deliver three jars of honey to you every day, every month, every year! Do the maths, Einstein."
"The hive(蜂巢) is in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) ruins!" the bee continued. "It's all we can do to keep the walls from
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The bee showed ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Teddy the garden. "Look!" the bee said. “Weeds everywhere. We have to fly
miles away to find ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )enough flowers to make our honey. So we voted to strike."
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“Maybe I've been too ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) selfish." Teddy said to himself, “I've never thought about what the bees need.【出处：21教育名师】
How can I make this right "
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Soon Teddy had an idea of what to do.Spring came and Teddy was expecting the bees.
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Soon Teddy had a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n idea of what to do. He set out to learn about his neighbor by studying in the books how bees lived and how they harvested honey. Those things had never come to his mind before. He bought building materials to restore the walls and roof of the broken hive. After clearing out the weeds in the yard and buying many flower seeds from the market, he planted them carefully and watered them every day. “It's really rude to expect them to do it all themselves.” he reflected.
Spring came an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d Teddy was expecting the bees. “What will they think ” he held his breath as he waited. Then he heard the familiar loud voice of the very small bee. “Drop the signs of strike, girls. It’s time to get back to work!” The bee family happily settled down in the newly repaired hive and flew busily among the beautiful flowers. Teddy was still a bear of habit, eating his honey every day, but he didn’t take it for granted any more. He knew life was sweet and now it was even sweeter for everyone.
读后续写解题指导：
一、 Summary of the given story：
Every morning Ted ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dy woke up to find jars of fresh honey in his yard. He made honey toast for breakfast and drank honey tea before bed. Life with honey was sweet for Teddy. But one day, the jars in his yard were empty. The bees in his yard had gone on strike. They were tired of doing all the work without being respected and cared about by Teddy. What could Teddy do to make the bees happy and bring sweetness back to his days 2-1-c-n-j-y
二、 Theme of the story：
The story is all abou ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t being able to live with each other, and respect each other, and give and take. Because the best part about being in a community is being able to live together and let everybody's life be sweet at the same time.
三、续写线索分析：
故事以Teddy的生活离不开蜜蜂 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )和蜂蜜，可Teddy却从不关心蜜蜂的生活开始。在蜜蜂们忍无可忍罢工后，Teddy终于开始反思自己的错误，努力改善蜜蜂的生存环境，用行动留住它的蜜蜂邻居。
四、第一段续写思路：
第一段的首句“Soon Teddy ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) had an idea of what to do.”, 提示我们本段的续写思路是Teddy用实际行动改变现状，所以应该回归原文故事内容分析蜜蜂罢工的原因：1. Teddy从不关心它的邻居蜜蜂的生活，自以为是地享用着蜜蜂们辛勤采回的蜂蜜 所以可以写Teddy开始对蜜蜂关心和了解（关心和了解的方式不限，合情合理即可得分）。2. 破旧的蜂房、要倒塌的墙、漏风雨的屋顶；长满杂草且没有鲜花的院子。 所以可以写Teddy准备或购买好修房材料和鲜花种子，开始帮蜜蜂们修蜂房；清理院子杂草；种花等。
Paragraph1参考要点：
1 开始关心蜜蜂（注意此要点为加分要点，如果学生直接明确地提及，要适当加分，但如果学生没有明确提及此要点也不扣分）；【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
2 修蜂房（必写要点）；
3 除草和种花（必写要点）。
五、第二段续写思路：
第二段的首句“Spring came and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Teddy was expecting the bees.”决定了在第二段应该写春天到了，Teddy种下的花都开了，蜂房也已修好了，Teddy以真诚的态度和实际行动为蜜蜂们打造出宜居的环境，他等待蜜蜂回归，并且蜜蜂们回来定居了。21*cnjy*com
Paragraph2 参考要点：
1 Teddy was expecting ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the bees.时的心情描述比如期待的，激动的，忐忑的- - - - - - 。-学生写出此情此景中合情合理的心理活动都可得分（注意此要点为加分要点，如果学生写了，要适当加分，但如果学生没有写也不扣分）；
2 环境变好（必写要点）；
③ 蜜蜂们回来（必写要点）。
六、注意事项：
注意事项1：关于要点
学生如果在第一段写出了要 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )点②③，第二段写出了要点②③，就认定是续写的要点完整，全文即使有一些语言语法错误，只要语言基本正确，不太影响理解，给分不得低于18分。
注意事项2：关于主题
根据原文故事及续写两段所给首句，只需要写出完 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )整的故事情节要点即可。在文章中学生有意提及主题当然更好，可以适当加分。如果两段的续写情节完整，只是没有点明主题，不扣分。
注意事项3：关于文中对话
虽然原文故事因为情节生动的需要有大量对话描写，但学生的续写部分不可出现大量对话。如出现大量对话适当扣分，少量对话可以接受。
One possible version:
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Spring came an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d Teddy was expecting the bees. “What will they think ” he held his breath as he waited nervously. Then he heard the familiar loud voice of the very small bee. “Drop the signs of strike, girls. It’s time to get back to work!” The bee family happily settled down in the newly repaired hive and flew busily among the beautiful flowers. Teddy was still a bear of habit, eating his honey every day, but he didn’t take it for granted any more. He knew life was sweet and now it was even sweeter for everyone.
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第五档（21~25分）
创作了非常丰富合理的内容，覆盖全部续写要点，很有逻辑性，与原文情节融洽度很高。
使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全不影响理解。
有效地使用了语句间的衔接手段，全文结构很清晰，意义很连贯。
第四档（16~20分）
创作了比较丰富合理的内容，覆盖大部分续写要点，比较有逻辑性，与原文情节融洽度高。
使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构。可能有些错误，但不影响理解。
比较有效地使用了语句间的衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第三档（11~15分）
创作了基本合理的内容，能覆盖一半的续写要点，有一定的逻辑性，与原文情节相关。
使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解。
基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。
第二档（6~10分）
内容或逻辑上有一些重大问题，覆盖不到一半续写要点，逻辑性欠缺，与原文情节有一定程度脱节。
所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。
未能有效地使用语句间的衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。
第一档（1~5分）
内容或逻辑上有较多重大问题，基本没有覆盖续写要点，或有部分内容抄自原文，或与原文情节基本脱节。
所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。
几乎没有使用语句间的衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。
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未作答，所写内容太少以至于无法让人看懂和无法评判，或所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。
2021 ~2022学年度第一学期高三期中英语试卷 （盐城）
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Once upon a time wh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )en I was in school my best friend called me late night on Saturday to invite me to her birthday the next day. I was very happy and excited to go there but I needed to take permission from my parents. I went to their room and slowly asked them. They said, “OK, you can go but you should be back before 10.”
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on the road at night.
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2021 ~2022学年度第一学期高三期中英语试卷 （徐州）
第二节（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。【版权所有：21教育】
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We were soon ready and set out.
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Seeing the house totally in a mess, we fell to work immediately.
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We were soon rea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dy and set out. Papa carried a basket of wood on one arm and coal on the other, while mamma with a bundle of warm things and the teapot. Nan and I carried a bucket of hot porridge between us. Beth brought some meal, May the “lassy pot”. What a miserable place it was. Six children are huddled into one bed to keep warm. “Ah, my god! it is the good angels that come to us!” cried the poor woman, with tears of joy.
Seeing the hous ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e totally in a mess, we fell to work immediately. Papa made a splendid fire in the old fireplace and fixed the broken window. Mamma set the shivering children round the fire, and wrapped the poor woman in warm things and then dressed the poor little new-born baby as tenderly as if it had been her own. We spread the table, and fed the starving little ones. Beth gave the mother porridge, comforting her with assurance of better days for all. It was a very happy breakfast of the New Year’s day, though we didn’t get any of it.
建议内容（仅作参考）：
要求学生审准题，原文提到的很多信息很重要，而且可以呼应，例如：
(受助者)they were starvin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g this bitter cold day; …lies a poor woman with a little new-born baby. Six children are huddled into one bed to keep from freezing;
(我们) with the b ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )reakfast untouched before us. give them your breakfast, as a New Year’s gift；hot porridge, creamy milk, and good bread and butter； giving the thing she loved best；carry it to the poor；Not far away from here；
第一段：
(1)第一段开头We were soon ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) ready and set out.因此，第一段的第一点应该描写“我们”带着New Year’s gift(吃的，过冬的物品等)走向对方家的情景。可以写动作，路上的scene，但是场景的描写不宜多而且应该切题；
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(3) 第一段的第三点可以出现描写“受助者感激”的语句；
第二段：
(1)第二段开头Seeing the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )house totally in a mess, we fell to work immediately.因此，接下来应该描写我们帮助对方的场景，主要是动作描写，“我们各自都做了什么？”如：糊窗户、生火、做饭、嘘寒送暖（慰问）、陪伴对方家的孩子等等；（考查学生综合运用语言的能力）
(2)最好点题，例如：It was a ve ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ry happy breakfast of the New Year’s day；Maybe there were no better New Year gifts than the breakfast for them.（如果有点题语句，档内分数适当靠上一点）这一点不作为评分的必要条件，只要学生表达合理恰当就行。
2021 ~2022学年度第一学期高三期中英语试卷 （无锡）
第二节 (满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。
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2021 ~2022学年度第一学期高三期中英语试卷 （苏州四市五区）
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2. Larrane挡在前面，用拳头或者手中的jar砸向cougar
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2021 ~2022学年度第一学期高三期中英语试卷 （连云港）
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2021 ~2022学年度第一学期高三期中英语试卷 （基地学校联考）
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3.词数少于60从总分中减去2分；
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① 自我介绍（关键词 exchange student);
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量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
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（1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
（2)内容的丰富性，描写的生动性；
（3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
（4)上下文的连贯性；
（5)主题的升华。
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67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
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情节构思的一个重要原则：合情合理，简 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )洁明了。通过文本研读我们发现，有人来敲门了，孩子喊着一定是圣诞老人，因为孩子对圣诞礼物充满期待，所以在她的心里来敲门的一定是圣诞老人。门铃响起应该是有人来了，当然肯定不是圣诞老人，那么是谁呢？有同学将情节创设为是我返还伞给她的那位女士来敲门，而且我开门以后还和她交谈，她送了我礼物甚至给我提供了工作，这样的情节设置不尽合理，因为和第二段的开头衔接不是十分紧密：Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes（突然之间贴在一个包裹上的一张便条吸引了我的注意力），可见拿到的包裹应该是不知道何人所送，否则为何会有suddenly这样的描写？正因为不知情，所以便条吸引了我的注意，并且通过便条我了解了事情的真相，所以第二部分要通过便条内容揭示事实真相。那么第一部分中来敲门的人我们可以设计为是一个快递员，这样情节就比较合理，也比较容易展开。情节设置一定要遵循合情合理这样一个原则，同时要注意情节设置简洁明了，推动发展，产生合理结果就可以了。过于繁复的情节，无疑增加了写作的难度，并且让文章看上去很啰嗦，故事拖沓冗长，反而起不到好的作用和效果。
上述例文的情节设置有学生存在如下的问题
【1】有学生缺乏语言常识，不知道Santa Claus是何人，将其当成了“我”的一个朋友，这样的理解导致后续情节的创设都是偏离方向的。
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【4】有学生对包裹中的礼物进行了详细的描写，并且使用了较多篇幅，礼物的描写是与故事情节无关的细节，对于推动故事发展无益，因此不宜展开。
【5】有学生写到该女士通过便条， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )告知我给我提供了工作面试的机会，然后还写到我去参加了面试并且得到了工作机会，本文的故事就发生在我家和家门口，突然发生了我去面试并通过的面试的情节也是不合理的。
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Suddenly, a note ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )attached to one package caught my eyes. I picked up the note, which read “Thanks for returning of the umbrella. Merry Christmas！” It was sent by the lady, the owner of the umbrella. Holding the note tightly, I couldn’t control my tears, a stream of warmth coming over me. On that cold Christmas, I forgot I had only fifteen dollars left in my pocket. Looking at Peggy unwrapping the gifts one by one in happiness, I felt my life was full of hope again.
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第一段的要点如下：
1.我觉得妈妈肯定会用布遮住那个二手自行车，以制造神秘感，让我亲自掀开那个布。
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第二段的要点如下：
1.这时候，妈妈把自行车搬出来了，摆在我面前，说这是为我准备的惊喜。
2.因为剧情的反转，我之前准备的各种表情，全部用上了派场。
3.事后，我决定保守秘密，即我之前已经偷偷闯入她的房间，已经偷窥到了礼物。
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