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高考英语读后续写核心秘诀（浙江专用）
目录
Catalog
读后续写考情分析
读后续写解题步骤
3. 读后续写真题解析
4. 读后续写课程总结
考情分析
考查内容：1.对原文理解和创作合理的结尾能力
2 .语法和词汇准确性
3. 关键词覆盖情况
考查方式：提供一篇350词的语言材料,
要求考生基于该文章，所给段落开头，关键词写出一篇150词左右的短文。
考情分析
2017年6月 2017年11月 2019年11月
体裁 记叙文 记叙文
记叙文
标示词
动3个
名7个 动2个
名6个
形2个
名6个
形4个
话题 朋友一起骑车游玩，野外遇到狼
和父母一块去旅游
男孩和父母
解题步骤
口诀：DDDDC
Determine
Divide
Design
Draft
Check
解题步骤
D
阅读定位核心信息，梳理内容的核心发展脉络。.
C
核查5个关键词，词数，语法，词汇，标点。
D
对原文给的
10个词分类。
D
按照给出的10 个词设计出内容连贯的情节走势
D
观察句型，力求协同。
Determine
Divide
Design
Draft
Check
解题步骤
D
阅读定位核心信息，梳理内容的核心发展脉络。.
Determine
D
D
D
C
2017年6月
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行)along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
when
who
where
how
2017年6月
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行)along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
when
who
where
how
2017年6月
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!”he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
how
2017年6月
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!”he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
how
2017年6月
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).
what
how
2017年6月
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).
how
what
2017年6月
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
how
2017年6月
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
how
2017年6月
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
who
how
2017年6月
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
who
how
2017年6月
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
解题步骤
D
对原文给的
10个词分类。
D
Divide
D
D
C
2017年6月
Divide
Mac
Friends
bicycle
home
Wolf
Cars
Paul
Climb
Jumped
pedaled
名词
动词
解题步骤
D
按照给出的10 个词设计出内容连贯的情节走势
D
观察句型，力求协同。
Determine
Divide
Design
Draft
Check
2017年6月
根据文章的第一段提示句,本段应该描述Paul 和Becky是如何帮助Mac脱险的.
而根据第二段的提示句,本段则应该是Mac 的朋友到来之后发生的事。
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Paragraph 2
2017年6月
Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac rushed down from his bicycle and waved at the people inside the car for help. Paul and Becky inside the car got out immediately to help him climb into the car, in spite of the danger that the fierce wolf was running near. They quickly pushed Mac into their car and closed all the doors as hard as possible, legs trembling and breathless. Seeing this, the wolf still howled outside the car for some time and then left unwillingly.

2017年6月

Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived. Mac’s friends were shocked to hear the story and very grateful to the young couple. Mac invited all of them back to his home for dinner and he introduced his wife and daughters to his two new friends who saved his life. During the dinner they recalled the adventure and talked about the ways to deal with such dangerous situations.
解题步骤
C
核查5个关键词，词数，语法，词汇，标点。
D
D
D
D
Check
档次 描述


第五档
(21—25) — 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。
— 内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
— 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。
— 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。


第四档
(16—20) — 与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。
— 内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
— 所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。
— 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。


第三档
(11—15) — 与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。
— 写出了若干有关内容，应用了4个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
— 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义的表达。
— 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。


第二档
(6—10) — 与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。
— 写出了一些有关内容，应用了3个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
— 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。
— 较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。


第一档
(1—5) — 与所给短文和开头语的衔接较差。
— 产出内容太少，很少使用短文中标出的关键词语。
— 语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达。
— 缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。
0 白卷、内容太少无法判断或所写内容与所提供内容无关。
2017年11月
A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother—loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
2017年11月
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey, where are the kids ” “What ! Oh, Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
2017年11月
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
2017年11月
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisingly beautiful—the warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.
2017年11月
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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.
2019年11月
“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions（情绪） get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
2019年11月
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay ” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
2019年11月
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.
It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
2019浙江杭州质检模拟
A man came home from work late, tired and irritated(不耐烦的), to find his 5-year-old son waiting for him at the door.
“Daddy, may I ask you a question ”
“Yeah sure, what is it ” replied the man.
“Daddy, how much do you make an hour ”
“That’s none of your business. Why do you ask such a thing ” the man said angrily.
“I just want to know. Please tell me. How much do you make an hour ” pleaded the little boy.
“If you must know, I make $20 an hour.”
2019浙江杭州质检模拟
“Oh,” the little boy replied, with his head down. Looking up, he said, “Daddy, may I please borrow $10 ”
The father was angry, “If the only reason you asked that is that you can borrow some money to buy a silly toy or some other nonsense, then you march yourself straight to your room and go to bed. Think about why you are being so selfish. I work hard every day for such childish behavior.” The little boy quietly went to his room and shut the door.
2019浙江杭州质检模拟
The man sat down and started to get even angrier about the little boy’s questions. “How dare he ask such questions only to get some money ”he thought to himself. After about an hour or so, the man calmed down, and started to think:Maybe there was something he really needed to buy with that $10 and he really didn’t ask for money very often. The man went to the door of the little boy’s room and opened the door. “Are you asleep, son ” he asked.
2019浙江杭州质检模拟
“No, daddy, I’m awake,” replied the boy.
“I’ve been thinking, maybe I was too hard on you earlier,” said the man. “It has been a long day and I took out my anger on you. Here’s the $10 you asked for.”
The little boy sat straight up, smiling. “Oh. Thank you, daddy!” he yelled. Then, reaching under his pillow he pulled out some crumpled(皱巴巴的) bills.
2019浙江杭州质检模拟
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The man, seeing that the boy already had money started to get angry again.“How can you be so selfish Why do you want more money since you already have these bills ” the father could hardly hold his anger back and inquired with two eyebrows knitted into one. With held-back tears in his eyes, the little boy slowly and carefully counted out his money, and then looked up at his father, replying, “Because I didn’t have enough before, but now I do.” with big blue eyes shining with tears.
2019浙江杭州质检模拟
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Not knowing what his son meant, the father just stood there, waiting for his boy’s explanation.Wiping away his tears and an innocent smile appearing on his face, the boy requested in a relieved voice, “Daddy, I have $20 now. Can I buy an hour from you Please come home early tomorrow. I want to have dinner with you.” Hearing the boy’s small but sincere request, the father couldn’t hold back his tears. Realizing he was too busy with his business to spare some time with his beloved ones, he gathered his son into his arms and apologized again and again, “Sorry..., and I promise I’ll be back early tomorrow.”
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