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人教版英语 九年级 写作 感恩父母 导学案
English Writing: Express our thanks to parents 表达对父母的感恩、感谢
一、导入 Do you have a good memory
Enjoy a video and answer the question. 欣赏视频并回答问题
What did our parents teach us to do in this video 视频中，父母教会了我们做什么？
二、What did our parents teach us to do in this video
taught us to eat with spoons and chopsticks 教会我们用勺子、筷子吃东西
taught us to wear clothes and tie the shoelace教会我们穿衣、系鞋带
taught us to wash the faces and comb our hair教会我们洗脸、梳头
told us the truth of the life 告诉我们做人的道理
连词成句（最简单的句子）
Our parents taught us to eat with spoons and chopsticks.
They taught us to wear clothes and tie the shoelace.
They taught us to wash the faces and comb our hair.
They told us the truth of the life.
三、What can we do for our parents
help them with housework 帮他们做家务
respect them and communicate with them 尊重他们、与他们交流
study hard and get good grades 刻苦学习、取得好的成绩
连词成句（最简单的句子）
We could help them with housework.
We should respect them and communicate with them.
We should study hard and get good grades.
四、Useful words, phrases, and sentences to express opinions:（有用的、词、短语和句子）
As for me, I think/ I don't think...至于我，我认为/我不认为
In my opinion/ According to me, ... 在我看来
It is believed that...人们认为
As far as I know, ...据我所知
I agree/ disagree that...我同意/不同意
We could + V.原
We should + V.原
in short （总之、简言之）,
in a word（总之、简言之）,
all in all（总而言之）,
in general = generally speaking（总之、一般而言）
first/firstly, second/secondly, third/thirdly, and, also, too, what's more, moreover(此外), but, however, though/ although…
五、连词成句，美化文章
六、How to write a passage to express thanks to our parents 如何写一篇感恩父母的文章
Step 1: Judge the topic
审：体裁、人称、时态、字数要求等
Subject: I/ we
Tense: Simple Past Tense & Simple Present Tense(一般过去时、一般现在时)
Step 2: List the key points
列：要点、重点短语、句型
Step 3: Connect the key points
连：连接并拓展、美化（连词、谚语、高级词汇、经典句式）
Step 4: Check your passage
查：检查（人称、时态、句型结构、动词名词形式、拼写、标点、大小写等）
Step 5: Copy your passage
誊：誊写（书写工整、卷面整洁、布局合理）
七、Writing Practice 写作练习
父母一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天是父亲节，使我们向父亲表达感激的好机会。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：1. 给我生命，一直照顾我；2.努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；3. 拥有爱心，教会我…4. 今天，我要为您…
要求: 110词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真是的地名、人名等
What did/does you father do for you What can you do for your father
gave me life Father’s Day
take good care of me all the time say “I love you ”
work hard buy a gift for
live a better life study harder and get better grades
have the chance to study in a better school
teach me to be kind and helpful
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in my life.
八、III. Writing-checking（批改作文）
今天是母亲节。假定你是李华，请谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。
要点如下：1表述你与母亲间的情感；2列举一两例母亲为你默默付出的事情；3为母亲制作一张卡片；4帮助母亲做点事；5陪母亲散步等。
要求：1 词数80左右； 2请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
九、中考作文评分标准
第五档（21-25）：表达清楚、行文连贯、基本无误。
第四档（16-20）：表达基本清楚、行文基本连贯、语言有少量错误。
第三档（11-15）：语言虽然有较多错误，尚能达意。
第二档（6-10）：能写明基本要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档（0-5）：白卷或文不对题，或错误百出，文不对题。
十、总结： 审 列 连 查 誊
4 / 4人教版英语 九年级 写作 感恩父母 说课稿
说课时间： 年 月 日
说课题目： English Writing: Express our thanks to parents
一、说教材（地位与作用）
书面表达重点考查学生的综合运用能力，要求学生不仅具有扎实的基础知识，还具备灵活运用语言的能力。近年来，各地中考书面表达都出现过，如何调节与父母之间的关系和矛盾、感谢父母、在节假日为父母做一些事情等话题作文。由此可见，感恩、感谢父母这个话题近几年是个热门话题，因此有必要指导学生如何写类似的话题作文，以提高学生的表达能力和语言的综合运用能力。
二、说教学目标
1．知识与技能
1、学生对此类话题作文有个清楚的了解，对相关短语、语句有一定的积累；
2、学生清楚写作的基本步骤：审、列、连、查、誊；
2.过程与方法
Task- based learning teaching
3.情感态度与价值观
知道父母的不容易，感谢父母的默默付出，珍惜所有的一切。
三、说教学重难点
教学重点：学生对此类作文有大致的了解，并积累相关的一些词句。
教学难点： 学生了解写作的步骤，并能灵活运用语言表达自己的观点。
四、说教法
Task- based learning teaching
五、说教学过程
1.新课引入： 1、视频导入，一个关于感恩父母的视频，要求学生尽可能的列出视频中父母为我们做的事情。
2.讲授新课：2、将列出的短语用简单的句子表达出来；学生回想我们能为父母做的事情，同样列出短语，最后生成简单的句子。3、得到两个小片段之后，再在其基础上，加入一些连词或者必要的信息，使得语篇有血有肉，更加具有逻辑性，更能表达作者意图和情感。4、根据刚才的语篇，讨论写作的步骤，列出步骤。5、写作练习，课堂上完成一篇相关的写作，并在班上分享。6、批改作文、了解评分要求，强调书写。7、小结；8、思考家庭作业。
3.课堂小结： 写作步骤：审、列、连、查、誊
4.板书设计： 审
列
连
查
誊
5.布置作业： 在即将告别母校的时刻，三年来，老师和同学们给了你很多帮助，在毕业之际，请用英语写一篇短文,表达你对母校、老师和同学的感恩之情。
人教版英语 九年级 写作 感恩父母 教学设计
课题 English Writing: Express our thanks to parents 授课时间 年 月 日
授课班级 年级 班 授课类型（新课/复习课） 复习
教学目标 知识与技能： 1、学生对此类话题作文有个清楚的了解，对相关短语、语句有一定的积累； 2、学生清楚写作的基本步骤：审、列、连、查、誊；
过程与方法：Task- based learning teaching
情感态度与价值观：知道父母的不容易，感谢父母的默默付出，珍惜所有的一切。
教学重点 学生对此类作文有大致的了解，并积累相关的一些词句。
教学难点 学生了解写作的步骤，并能灵活运用语言表达自己的观点。
辅助教具 多媒体、PPT
教学设计 教师活动 学生活动
1、视频导入，一个关于感恩父母的视频，要求学生尽可能的列出视频中父母为我们做的事情。2、将列出的短语用简单的句子表达出来；学生回想我们能为父母做的事情，同样列出短语，最后生成简单的句子。3、得到两个小片段之后，再在其基础上，加入一些连词或者必要的信息，使得语篇有血有肉，更加具有逻辑性，更能表达作者意图和情感。4、根据刚才的语篇，讨论写作的步骤，列出步骤。5、写作练习，课堂上完成一篇相关的写作，并在班上分享。6、批改作文、了解评分要求，强调书写。7、小结；8、思考家庭作业。
板书设计
教学反思(共31张PPT)
English Writing:
Express our thanks to parents
人教版 九年级上
English Writing:
Express our thanks to parents
By Lulu
Do you have a good memory
Enjoy a video and answer the question.
What did our parents teach us to do in this video
taught us to eat with spoons and chopsticks
taught us to wear clothes and tie the shoelace
taught us to wash the faces and comb our hair
told us the truth in life
What did our parents teach us to do in this video
taught us to eat with spoons and chopsticks
taught us to wear clothes and tie the shoelace
taught us to wash the faces and comb our hair
told us the truth in life
What did our parents teach us to do
Our parents
.
.
.
.
They
They
They
help them with housework
respect them and communicate with them
study hard and get good grades
What can we do for our parents
help them with housework
respect them and communicate with them
study hard and get good grades
What can we do for our parents
We could/can
.
.
.
We should
We should
Our parents taught us to eat with spoons and chopsticks. They taught us to wear clothes and tie the shoelace. They taught us to wash the faces and comb our hair. They told us the truth in life.
We could help them with housework. We should respect them and communicate with them. We should study hard and get good grades.
As for me, I think/ I don't think...
In my opinion/ According to me, ...
It is believed that...
As far as I know, ...
I agree/ disagree that...
Useful words, phrases, and sentences to express opinions:
but, however, though…
first/firstly, second/secondly, third/thirdly, and, also, too, what's more, moreover…
in short （总之、简言之）,
in a word（总之、简言之）,
all in all（总而言之）,
in general = generally speaking（总之、一般而言）
Our parents taught us to eat with spoons and chopsticks. They taught us to wear clothes and tie the shoelace. They taught us to wash the faces and comb our hair. They told us the truth in life.
We could help them with housework. We should respect them and communicate with them. We should study hard and get good grades.
Our parents are the best people in the world.
And they
Also, they
What’s more, they
told us the truth in life.
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do.
First, we
Second, we
should respect
Third, we
should study hard
Most importantly, we’d better take good care of ourselves and try not to make them worry about us.
Our parents are the best people in the world.
Our parents taught us to eat with spoons and chopsticks. And they taught us to wear clothes and tie the shoelace. Also, they taught us to wash the faces and comb our hair. What’s more, they told us the truth of the life.
(opening)
(body)
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we could help them with housework. Second, we should respect them and communicate with them. Third, we should study hard and get good grades.
I. How to write a passage to express thanks to our parents
(ending)
In a word, we’d better take good care of ourselves and try not to make them worry about us.
Subject: I/ we(us,our,ourselves)
Tense: Simple Past Tense & Simple Present Tense
(一般过去时、一般现在时)
Step 1: Judge the topic
Step 2: List the key points
审：
体裁、人称、时态、字数要求等
列：
要点、重点短语、句型
Our parents taught us to eat with spoons and chopsticks. They taught us to wear clothes and tie the shoelace. They taught us to wash the faces and comb our hair. They told us the truth of the life.
We could help them with housework. We should respect them and communicate with them. We should study hard and get good grades.
Our parents are the best people in the world.
Our parents taught us to eat with spoons and chopsticks. And they taught us to wear clothes and tie the shoelace. Also, they taught us to wash the faces and comb our hair. What’s more, they told us the truth of the life.
(opening)
(body)
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we could help them with housework. Second, we should respect them and communicate with them. Third, we should study hard and get good grades.
(ending)
In a word, we’d better take good care of ourselves and try not to make them worry about us.
Step 3: Connect the key points
连：连接并拓展、美化
（连词、谚语、高级词汇、经典句式）
Step 4: Check the passage
Step 5: Copy the passage
查：检查（人称、时态、句型结构、动词名词形式、拼写、标点、大小写等）
誊：誊写（书写工整、卷面整洁、布局合理）
II. Writing Practice
父母一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天是父亲节，是我们向父亲表达感激的好机会。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：1. 给我生命，一直照顾我；2.努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；3. 拥有爱心，教会我…4. 今天，我要为您…
要求: 110词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真是的地名、人名等
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in my life. .
What did/does you father do for you
gave me life
work hard
have the chance to study in a better school
take good care of me all the time
teach me to be kind and helpful
let me live a better life
II. Writing Practice
父母一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天是父亲节，是我们向父亲表达感激的好机会。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：1. 给我生命，一直照顾我；2.努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；3. 拥有爱心，教会我…4. 今天，我要为您…
要求: 110词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真是的地名、人名等
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in my life. .
Father’s Day
study harder and get better grades
What can you do for your father
say “I love you ”
buy a gift for
Show Time
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in my life.
You gave me life. And you take good care of me all the time. When I have problems with my study, you are always patient to help me and encourage me. In order to let me live a better life and have the chance to study in a better school, you work hard from morning to the evening every day. What’s more, You are also a man who has a heart full of love. You are ready to help people in need. And it is you who teach me to be kind and helpful.
Today is Father’s Day. I want to say “I love you” to you. And I will buy a gift for you. I hope you will love it. Of course, I will study harder and get better grades.
I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.
今天是母亲节。假定你是李华，请谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。
要点如下：1 表述你与母亲间的情感；2 列举一两例母亲为你默默付出的事情；3 为母亲制作一张卡片；4 帮助母亲做点事；5 陪母亲散步等。
要求：1 词数80左右； 2 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
III. Writing-checking（批改作文）
mothers
she
she is the happiest person
she is the saddest person
asks
relax
memory
help me
because
to
feel
with her
felt well
when
中考作文评分标准
第五档（21-25）：表达清楚、行文连贯、基本无误。
第四档（16-20）：表达基本清楚、行文基本连贯、语言有少量错误。
第三档（11-15）：语言虽然有较多错误，尚能达意。
第二档（6-10）：能写明基本要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档（0-5）：白卷或文不对题，或错误百出，文不对题。
mothers
she
she is the happiest person
she is the saddest person
asks
relax
memory
help me
because
17
20
to
feel
with her
felt well
when
16
19
IV. Summary
How to write a passage to express thanks
列
连
查
誊
审
The standard of checking writing.
Homework
三年来，老师和同学们给了你很多帮助，在即将告别母校的时刻，请用英语写一篇短文,表达你对母校、老师和同学的感恩之情。

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