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高考专题训练——开放类作文
1．The people around you might make or break your life．So choose them cautiously and wisely on your life journey．
注意：
1．无需写标题；
2．除诗歌外，文体不限；
3．内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
4．文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称；
5．字数不少于120词，如引用提示语则不计入总词数．
2．假设你是李华，你得知你的英国笔友Jack最近经常熬夜学习。请你用英语给他发一封邮件，劝他改掉这个不良习惯。
注意：
1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack，
I learned that you often stay up very late studying these days.__________
Yours，
Li Hua
3．根据题目所提出的具体要求，在答题卡写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于60。
假如你是李华，你们学校下周将举办"校园读书节"系列活动，你想邀请英国交换生Jim一起参加活动。请根据下面提供的信息，给Jim写封E﹣mail，介绍活动情况，并询问他是否参加。
短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Activities：
exchange books
attend lectures on Chinese literature
take part in Chinese poetry reading competition
Dear Jim，
___________
Yours，Li Hua
4．Directions：Write an English composition in 60﹣80 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
越来越多的城市居民养宠物，宠物给人带来了欢乐，但是经常会有扰民或者伤人的事件发生。有人提议禁止城市居民养宠物。请你谈谈你的看法。
5．假如你是高一学生李华，听说巴黎圣母院（Notre Dame in Paris）发生火灾。请你给《21世纪英文报》写一封邮件，强调保护文化遗产的重要性，呼吁人们采取具体措施保护文化遗产。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Dear editor，
I'm a Senior 1 student.I'm sorry to hear that the fire broke out at Notre Dame in Paris.____________
Yours sincerely，Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，请以"the sport I like best"为题，写一篇作文。
The sport I like best
When talking about the sport，I will feel very excited，because I like sport so much.I love ___________
7．为了提高各学科学习效率，你校英语报开设了学习方法专栏。请你就自己感兴趣的学科投稿。
内容包括：推荐的方法和推荐的理由。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
8．以"The hero in my heart"为题写一篇作文，不少于100字。
9．你校正在举行主题为"Hi﹣tech in My Life"的英语作文比赛，请你结合自身经历写一篇短文参赛，谈谈新科技带来的变化。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
10．你校在开展"如何高效地学习（How to Learn Efficiently）"交流活动，你所在的英语俱乐部要求成员用英语介绍两条自己在这方面的学习经验。请按此要求写一篇英语短文。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How to Learn Efficiently
Here's what I've experienced with efficient learning._______________________
11．Directions：Write an English composition in approximately 200 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
今年"内卷"一词突然成了爆款流行语。网上对于它的定义是由于资源有限，竞争者必须通过低水平的重复来脱颖而出。当代社会内卷现象的确存在，甚至这种现象也蔓延到了校园。请基于你对内卷的认识，写一篇200字左右的文章。内容需包括：
1.分析社会中内卷现象形成的原因。
2.面对学业上的内卷我们出路何在？
12．在读完 Charlotte's web后，请同学们选择其中的一个角色谈谈你自己的看法。 （不超120词）
13．在校报"成长的烦恼"栏目刊登了一封读者来信。假如你是这个栏目的编辑 Matt，请你根据来信内容，写一封回信，给这个读者一些帮助。
Dear Matt，
I have a to﹣do list for my daily activities， but I find it's hard to finish all of the tasks. One of the reasons is that I procrastinate. What's worse， every time I can't finish the tasks， I would feel angry with myself and always lose my temper. I just can't control myself. Could you give me some advice？
Lucy
要求：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 建议不少于三条。
Dear Lucy，
_________.
Matt
14．Directions： Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是李华。你们班级将要召开一次由全体家长和学生共同参加的家长会，为此正在征求本次家长会的主题和主要的活动。请你发邮件给班长，提出你设计的活动主题和主要活动安排，并简要说说主题和活动的意义。
15．假定你是李华，春节将至，你校将组织部分留学生举行联欢活动。请给你的英国朋友Tom写封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：
1.活动时间和地点；
2.活动内容。
注意：词数80左右。
16．假设你是校报英语专栏的记者。今天下午你校全体师生参加了一场关于是否应该重建圆明园的问题讨论会。请你用英语为校报写一篇英文报道，反映讨论结果。
注意：1.字数100左右；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
17．假定你息李华，在2020上半年时，你选择了美国教师Lucy的视频辅导课。最近，你参加了学校组须的英语演讲比赛，取得了优异成绩。请向Lucy写信汇报成绩，并表示感谢。注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
18．假设你是学生李华，升入高中后，由于学业较重，你经常熬夜，第二天早晨上课时经常犯困，为此你很苦恼。请你给某中学生英语杂志的编辑写一封信，寻求帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor，
_______________
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
19．假定你是李华，你校外教 Mr.Smith将就"How to stay safe on line"进行一场英文讲座。请你以校英语俱乐部的名义，用英语写一则通知，邀请同学们踊跃参加。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
Notice
____________.
20．优美的英文书写让人赏心悦目，闲着也是闲着，展示一下你的书法水平吧！要求用衡水体写满，短文体裁内容不限。
21．假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Alvin来信询问你班主题班会的相关情况。请你回封邮件，向他简要介绍一次给你印象最深刻的主题班会，内容包括班会的主题、流程及感想等。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
22．Directions： Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假定你是明启中学的学生李华。学校将举行一次演讲比赛，主题为我心目中的英雄。"灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄？" 做出惊天动地之举的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……请你结合具体事例写一份演讲稿，阐述你心目中真正的英雄。
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。
23．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter最近发邮件说他想了解你居住的地方近年来发生的变化，请用英语回复。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
________.
Yours，
Li Hua
24．请根据下面的写作内容和要求写一篇作文。
The Internet
互联网拥有将全世界的人互联成一个共享群体的能力。网络最大优势之一在于可以快速、方便地获取海量信息。通过电子商务，网络给我们的生活带来了难以置信的便利。最重要的是网络帮助我们建立并维持社交联系。
尽管互联网有诸多益处，网络也有很多不利方面，如：网上太多的虚假信息可能会误导我们，沉迷网络可能会使我们脱离真实世界等。因此，我们必须合理、负责任地使用互联网。
写作要求：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Internet
________
25．假设你是李华，最近购入一只使用满意的智能手环（smart bracelet）。请根据下列提示写一封邮件，跟你的英国朋友Jack 分享你的使用体会和购买建议：1.智能手环的功能和好处；2.建议Jack购买。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称：
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
It's been a month since my last mail.How have you been doing recently？﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
Best regards!
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
26．Directions： Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
请给三年前刚结束了中考的你自己写一封信，回顾即将过去的三年高中生活和学习，你觉得现在的你能够给三年前的你一些什么建议，并说明理由。
27．Directions：Write an English composition in about 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
请结合事例描述一位对你的成长有重要影响的师长。
28．为积极应对人口老龄化，我国已全面放开三胎。假定你是李华，你的父母计划生第三胎，请给你校外籍教师Barton写信，谈谈你的看法。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：the aging population 人口老龄化；three﹣child policy 三胎政策；give birth to 生孩子；sibling兄弟姐妹；the burden of…的负担
29．请结合第四单元第三课的内容，表达观点并陈述理由。词数不少于50。
Does the Internet harm or help friendships？What's your opinion and why do you think so？
30．Directions： Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你们学校的校报正在以"我心中的理想教室"为题征文。请你以高三学生的身份投稿，描述自己心中理想的教室，并说明理由。
参考答案与试题解析
1．The people around you might make or break your life．So choose them cautiously and wisely on your life journey．
注意：
1．无需写标题；
2．除诗歌外，文体不限；
3．内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
4．文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称；
5．字数不少于120词，如引用提示语则不计入总词数．
【分析】The people around you might make or break your life．So choose them cautiously and wisely on your life journey．
你身边的人会创造你的生活，也可能会毁坏你的生活．所以你在人生的旅途上要正确选择．
写作主题可以为：正确交友
写作要点为：1，发表观点；2，联系个人事例说明自己的观点；3，建议．
【解答】As an old saying goes，a man is known by the company he keeps．So it is of great importance to associate with those who may have a positive effect on you．
　　My experience in junior middle school convincingly demonstrates the point．It was at the beginning of the autumn term that I made Henry's acquaintance and became a friend of his．One day，he said to me mysteriously that he would introduce me a new world．That was the first time I had been exposed to the computer game．From that day on I was frequently dragged into the Internet bar by him，leading to my addiction to it．I still remember the occasion when I was caught skipping class to play computer games and was required to go to my head teacher's office．There he had a deep conversation with me，without which I wouldn't have determined to break up with Henry and returned to the normal route．
　　A friend can influence your behavior in a positive or negative way．On no account can you afford to make a casual choice．Therefore，see to it that you choose your friends cautiously and wisely．
【点评】考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．
2．假设你是李华，你得知你的英国笔友Jack最近经常熬夜学习。请你用英语给他发一封邮件，劝他改掉这个不良习惯。
注意：
1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack，
I learned that you often stay up very late studying these days.__________
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Staying up late at night is harmful to your health.
译文：熬夜对你的健康有害。
分析：这句话使用了动名词作主语。
高分句型二：After all，it's most important to keep healthy，isn't it？
译文：毕竟，保持健康是最重要的，不是吗
分析：这句话使用了it作为形式主语，和反义问句。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I learned that you often stay up very late studying these days.I'm writing to persuade you to give up the bad habit.（写信目的）
Staying up late at night is harmful to your health.【高分句型一】It may cause headaches and even make you ill.What's more，you may find it difficult to concentrate on your studies at school.As a result，you' ll soon fall behind with your school work.（熬夜的坏处）
Therefore，you should make a good daily work plan.Finish your daily work on time and don't leave it until night.After all，it's most important to keep healthy，isn't it？【高分句型二】（建议）
I hope you'll consider my suggestions.（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
3．根据题目所提出的具体要求，在答题卡写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于60。
假如你是李华，你们学校下周将举办"校园读书节"系列活动，你想邀请英国交换生Jim一起参加活动。请根据下面提供的信息，给Jim写封E﹣mail，介绍活动情况，并询问他是否参加。
短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Activities：
exchange books
attend lectures on Chinese literature
take part in Chinese poetry reading competition
Dear Jim，
___________
Yours，Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Those who are interested in literature may attend the lectures on famous Chinese works，where they can have a discussion to share different opinions.
分析：句子里使用了关系词who引导的定语从句are interested in literature may attend the lectures on famous Chinese works；where引导的非限制性定语从句they can have a discussion to share different opinions。
翻译：对文学感兴趣的人可以参加关于中国名著的讲座，在那里他们可以进行讨论，分享不同的观点。
高分句型二
Besides，students are encouraged to take part in the Chinese poetry reading competition，which will attract you most，I guess.
分析：句子里使用了关系词which引导的非限制性定语从句will attract you most；插入语I guess。
翻译：此外，我们鼓励学生参加中国诗歌阅读比赛，我想这将是最吸引你们的。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I am Li Hua.Our school will hold a series of "Campus Reading Festival" activities next week.I'm writing to invite you to participate in the activities.（提出邀请）
During the festival，students are welcomed to take books from home and exchange them with others to get what they want.Those who are interested in literature may attend the lectures on famous Chinese works，where they can have a discussion to share different opinions.【高分句型一】Besides，students are encouraged to take part in the Chinese poetry reading competition，which will attract you most，I guess.【高分句型二】（介绍活动内容）
I'd like to know if you can join us.Looking forward to your reply.（期盼回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
4．Directions：Write an English composition in 60﹣80 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
越来越多的城市居民养宠物，宠物给人带来了欢乐，但是经常会有扰民或者伤人的事件发生。有人提议禁止城市居民养宠物。请你谈谈你的看法。
【分析】高分句型一：While pets bring happiness to people，their negative effects should not be ignored，such as urinating in public，annoying noises at night，biting passers﹣by and scratching vehicles.
译文：虽然宠物给人们带来了快乐，但它们的负面影响也不容忽视，比如在公共场所小便、夜间发出恼人的噪音、咬路人和抓车。
分析：这句话使用while引导让步状语从句。
高分句型二：In my opinion，in order to avoid unnecessary trouble，it is better to ban the keeping of pets，but if you do，you must issue a pet management policy and legal provisions，which is also for the benefit of all citizens.
译文：在我看来，为了避免不必要的麻烦，最好是禁止饲养宠物，但如果你这样做，你必须发布宠物管理政策和法律规定，这也是为了所有公民的利益。
分析：这句话使用了it作为形式主语，不定式内容to ban the keeping of pets是真正的主语，if引导条件状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Pets can bring us a lot of happiness.Nowadays more and more people keep pets.Many dog owners regularly take their dogs out for a walk to refresh themselves. （宠物给人带来了欢乐）While pets bring happiness to people，their negative effects should not be ignored，such as urinating in public，annoying noises at night，biting passers﹣by and scratching vehicles. 【高分句型一】（有人提议禁止城市居民养宠物）
In my opinion，in order to avoid unnecessary trouble，it is better to ban the keeping of pets，but if you do，you must issue a pet management policy and legal provisions，which is also for the benefit of all citizens.【高分句型二】（自己的观点）
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
5．假如你是高一学生李华，听说巴黎圣母院（Notre Dame in Paris）发生火灾。请你给《21世纪英文报》写一封邮件，强调保护文化遗产的重要性，呼吁人们采取具体措施保护文化遗产。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Dear editor，
I'm a Senior 1 student.I'm sorry to hear that the fire broke out at Notre Dame in Paris.____________
Yours sincerely，Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm sorry to hear that the fire broke out at Notre Dame in Paris.
翻译：听说巴黎圣母院发生火灾，我很难过。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Their safety is a red line that can never be crossed，which is a global and serious issue.
翻译：他们的安全是一条永远无法逾越的红线，这是一个全球性的严重问题。
分析：本句使用了that引导的定语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear editor，
I'm a Senior 1 student.I'm sorry to hear that the fire broke out at Notre Dame in Paris.【高分句型一】It shocked the whole world and rang the warning bell for us，so I am writing to give some advice on relics protection.（点明主题）
As we all know，cultural relics，usually rare and valuable，are symbols of human civilization.Their safety is a red line that can never be crossed，which is a global and serious issue.【高分句型二】So it is of importance to protect them.（强调保护文化遗产的重要性） Firstly，it's necessary that the government should take some measures，for example，making some policies to regulate people's behavior，and not excessively developing the tourism there.As individuals，we should strengthen the awareness of protection and improve our behavior while visiting.With our joint efforts，more and more people will become concerned about them.
I really hope you can take these suggestions into consideration.Wish our cultural relics a better future.（呼吁人们采取具体措施保护文化遗产）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。
6．假定你是李华，请以"the sport I like best"为题，写一篇作文。
The sport I like best
When talking about the sport，I will feel very excited，because I like sport so much.I love ___________
【分析】高分句型一：Not only can playing basketball build up my body，but it can also make me feel that I'm like wind flying in the playground for my goal.
译文：打篮球不仅可以锻炼我的身体，还可以让我感觉自己像风一样在操场上为我的目标而飞翔。
分析：这句话使用not only置于句首，后面用部分倒装。
高分句型二：What's more，I can make many good friends when playing basketball.
译文：更重要的是，我可以在打篮球的时候交到很多好朋友。
分析：这句话使用when引导省略的时间状语从句。
【解答】
The sport I like best
When talking about the sport，I will feel very excited，because I like sport so much.I love playing basketball.（喜欢的运动）
I grew crazy about playing basketball the first time I got it.Not only can playing basketball build up my body，but it can also make me feel that I'm like wind flying in the playground for my goal.【高分句型一】What's more，I can make many good friends when playing basketball.【高分句型二】I am proud to win glory and honour for my team and my school.（喜欢的原因）
Playing basketball will become the best memory of my school life.（总结）
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
7．为了提高各学科学习效率，你校英语报开设了学习方法专栏。请你就自己感兴趣的学科投稿。
内容包括：推荐的方法和推荐的理由。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【分析】高分句型一：To begin with，drawing a timeline is the most easy and effective way，which helps link all the events together，establish a connection between the facts and form a complete picture of the relative history in mind.
译文：首先，绘制时间线是最简单有效的方法，它有助于将所有事件联系在一起，建立事实之间的联系，并在脑海中形成有关历史的完整画面。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Another way that can be very effective for history learning is watching fantastic docufilms，which are both educational and entertaining.
译文：另一种对历史学习非常有效的方法是观看精彩的纪录片，这既有教育意义又有娱乐性。
分析：这句话使用that引导定语从句修饰another way，which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】My favorite subject is history.Learning history requires a huge effort，but there are ways to speed up our progress.（推荐的方法）
To begin with，drawing a timeline is the most easy and effective way，which helps link all the events together，establish a connection between the facts and form a complete picture of the relative history in mind.【高分句型一】Another way that can be very effective for history learning is watching fantastic docufilms，which are both educational and entertaining.【高分句型二】（推荐的理由）
History is a very important subject，so we have to study it hard and smart.（总结）
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
8．以"The hero in my heart"为题写一篇作文，不少于100字。
【分析】高分句型一：As we all know，most people have heroes in their hearts.
译文：众所周知，大多数人心中都有英雄。
分析：这句话使用了as引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people.
译文：他如此努力工作以至于救了成千上万的中国人。
分析：这句话使用了so+形容词+that引导结果状语从句。
【解答】The Hero in My Heart
As we all know，most people have heroes in their hearts.【高分句型一】For me，Dr.Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart.He was a great doctor from Canada.（心目中的英雄）
Dr.Bethune was good at performing operations.And taking photos was his hobby.In 1938，he came to China.He opened hospitals and invented medical tools.He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people.【高分句型二】He didn't stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.（事迹）
I am deeply moved by his stories.So I will work hard and do my best to help others.（总结）
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
9．你校正在举行主题为"Hi﹣tech in My Life"的英语作文比赛，请你结合自身经历写一篇短文参赛，谈谈新科技带来的变化。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
【分析】高分句型一：Last summer，I went on a visit to the Shanghai Natural History Museum，where I experienced its immersive multi﹣media display for the first time.
翻译：去年夏天，我去了上海自然历史博物馆，在那里我第一次体验了身临其境的多媒体展示。
分析：这句话使用了where引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：I really got a kick out of walking into history，experiencing the rise and fall of human civilization in person.
翻译：我真的因为走进历史里而愉快，体会到了人类文明的起落。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词experiencing the rise and fall of human civilization in person作状语。
【解答】Nowadays，hi﹣tech has been impacting on our daily life greatly.
Take visiting museums for example.They are not merely places of looking and learning any longer.Thanks to modern technology，they allow visitors to participate and interact with exhibits，instead.Last summer，I went on a visit to the Shanghai Natural History Museum，where I experienced its immersive multi﹣media display for the first time.【高分句型一】I really got a kick out of walking into history，experiencing the rise and fall of human civilization in person.【高分句型二】Apparently，it is the advance of technology that is making static exhibits more interesting and attractive.（科技对我们的带来的具体影响）
【点评】要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
10．你校在开展"如何高效地学习（How to Learn Efficiently）"交流活动，你所在的英语俱乐部要求成员用英语介绍两条自己在这方面的学习经验。请按此要求写一篇英语短文。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How to Learn Efficiently
Here's what I've experienced with efficient learning._______________________
【分析】高分句型一：I always try to find a place where I won't have trouble concentrating on the material，and I work on the subjects I have the most trouble with when I have the most energy.翻译：我总是试图找到一个能让我毫不费力地集中精力在材料上的地方，我会在我精力最旺盛的时候，研究我最困难的主题。分析：运用了where引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Among the many factors that contribute to efficient learning，I think learning with a positive attitude is the most important.翻译：在有助于有效学习的诸多因素中，我认为以积极的态度学习是最重要的。分析：宾语从句中运用了动名词作主语。
【解答】A proper place and proper time are important.I always try to find a place where I won't have trouble concentrating on the material，and I work on the subjects I have the most trouble with when I have the most energy.高分句型一（要点一）Among the many factors that contribute to efficient learning，I think learning with a positive attitude is the most important.高分句型二I always tell myself I can do it whenever I encounter difficulties，instead of giving up.（要点二）
【点评】写作时，在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。
11．Directions：Write an English composition in approximately 200 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
今年"内卷"一词突然成了爆款流行语。网上对于它的定义是由于资源有限，竞争者必须通过低水平的重复来脱颖而出。当代社会内卷现象的确存在，甚至这种现象也蔓延到了校园。请基于你对内卷的认识，写一篇200字左右的文章。内容需包括：
1.分析社会中内卷现象形成的原因。
2.面对学业上的内卷我们出路何在？
【分析】高分句型一：All of these contribute to unfair competition，which is bad for our society.
译文：所有这些都导致了不正当竞争，这对我们的社会是有害的。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Only by doing so can we cut down on the influence of involution on us.
译文：只有这样，我们才能减少内卷对我们的影响。
分析：这句话使用only+介词短语置于句首，后面用部分倒装。
【解答】This year，the word "involution" suddenly became a popular word.The definition of it on the Internet is that due to the limited resources，and competitors must stand out through low﹣level repetition.The phenomenon of involution of contemporary society exists，and even this phenomenon has spread to the campus.（现状）
The reason for involution is that some parents feel intense pressure to provide their children with the very best.Besides，children must keep up in the educational race.What's more，office workers have to work for number of hours to keep the job.All of these contribute to unfair competition，which is bad for our society. 【高分句型一】（分析社会中内卷现象形成的原因）
As students，we all feel the pressure of involution.What we should do is that we need to realize our strengths and weaknesses and make a realistic goal.Additionally，we need not compare ourselves with others but try our best to improve our knowledge and skills.Last but not least，we can communicate more with our teachers and classmates，which will form a relaxing atmosphere in our life.（面对学业上的内卷我们出路何在）
Only by doing so can we cut down on the influence of involution on us.【高分句型二】（总结）
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
12．在读完 Charlotte's web后，请同学们选择其中的一个角色谈谈你自己的看法。 （不超120词）
【分析】高分句型一：To comply with her promise，she spells the words "some pig" with her miracle net to attract people's attention so that the farmer will let him go.
译文：为了履行自己的诺言，她用自己的奇迹网拼出了"某只猪"几个字，以吸引人们的注意，让农民放他走。
分析：这句话使用so that引导结果状语从句。
高分句型二：Charlotte is remembered by people all over the world because of her kindness and we consider her as someone who is worth being friends with.
译文：夏洛特因为她的善良而被全世界的人记住，我们认为她是一个值得成为朋友的人。
分析：这句话使用who引导定语从句。
【解答】The book Charlotte's Web was written by E.B.White.The warm story tells the sincere friendship between a pig named Weber and a spider named Charlotte.As a pig，Weber's future destiny is actually a bacon ham.His friend Charlotte wants to change his fate and promises that she will do everything to find ways to save his life.To comply with her promise，she spells the words "some pig" with her miracle net to attract people's attention so that the farmer will let him go. 【高分句型一】But the people are always forgetful，Weber is ignored by most people gradually.Charlotte don't give up and her next net words make Weber win the special price in the mart contest.She reversed the fate of Weber completely while it is a pity that her own life come to the end. （故事梗概）
The friendship between Weber and Charlotte is what a lot of people want.Charlotte is remembered by people all over the world because of her kindness and we consider her as someone who is worth being friends with. 【高分句型二】（对Charlotte的看法）
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
13．在校报"成长的烦恼"栏目刊登了一封读者来信。假如你是这个栏目的编辑 Matt，请你根据来信内容，写一封回信，给这个读者一些帮助。
Dear Matt，
I have a to﹣do list for my daily activities， but I find it's hard to finish all of the tasks. One of the reasons is that I procrastinate. What's worse， every time I can't finish the tasks， I would feel angry with myself and always lose my temper. I just can't control myself. Could you give me some advice？
Lucy
要求：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 建议不少于三条。
Dear Lucy，
_________.
Matt
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing you have trouble finishing your tasks and you are easy to lose your temper when you can't finish your tasks， I'm writing to share with you some suggestions.
译文：我知道你很难完成任务，当你不能完成任务的时候你很容易发脾气，我写信给你是想和你分享一些建议。
分析：这句话使用现在分词作状语。
高分句型二：Once you lose your temper， try your best to calm yourself down.
译文：一旦你发脾气，尽量让自己冷静下来。
分析：这句话使用once引导条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Lucy，
Knowing you have trouble finishing your tasks and you are easy to lose your temper when you can't finish your tasks， I'm writing to share with you some suggestions. 【高分句型一】（系诶西目的）
First， to finish your tasks on time， do your tasks as soon as possible. Once you start， you will find it easy to continue. Besides， you can set a controlled time for each task. What's more， you can give yourself a small reward for completing a task. Once you lose your temper， try your best to calm yourself down. 【高分句型二】And you can turn to your teachers or friends， who may offer you some sensible suggestions.（提出建议）
Hope the above suggestions can help you. （希望）
Matt
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
14．Directions： Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是李华。你们班级将要召开一次由全体家长和学生共同参加的家长会，为此正在征求本次家长会的主题和主要的活动。请你发邮件给班长，提出你设计的活动主题和主要活动安排，并简要说说主题和活动的意义。
【分析】高分句型一：For one thing， the college entrance examination is coming and we will be apart， which may have a bad effect on our mind.
译文：一方面，高考快到了，我们要分开了，这可能会对我们的思想产生不良影响。
分析：这句话使用which引导定语从句。
高分句型二：Teachers hope that we can still study hard in the future and come back to high school often.
译文：老师们希望我们以后能继续努力学习，经常回到高中。
分析：这句话使用that引导宾语从句。
【解答】Dear monitor，
It's almost the end of our high school years. I would like to call for a class meeting with the topic "For our dreams". All the students and out teachers will take part in it. For one thing， the college entrance examination is coming and we will be apart， which may have a bad effect on our mind.【高分句型一】（活动主题和主要活动安排）
We will hold a warm discussion about our future life. Each of us speak at the meeting actively. Besides， we also will show our sincere thanks to our teachers. They have been devoting themselves to helping us in study and life. Teachers hope that we can still study hard in the future and come back to high school often.【高分句型二】 After the discussion， we will all decide to study hard as usual and hope that we all can do well in the college entrance examination.（主题和活动的意义）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】开放类作文的特点：
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
15．假定你是李华，春节将至，你校将组织部分留学生举行联欢活动。请给你的英国朋友Tom写封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：
1.活动时间和地点；
2.活动内容。
注意：词数80左右。
【分析】高分句型一
Having been told that you are very interested in our traditional festivals，with the Spring Festival approaching，I would like to invite you to join in the celebration for some international students in our school.
分析：句子里，现在分词的完成被动式Having been told that you are very interested in our traditional festivals作原因状语；with的复合结构the Spring Festival approaching作时间状语。
翻译：听说你对我们的传统节日很感兴趣，春节快到了，我想邀请你参加我们学校为一些国际学生举行的庆祝活动。
高分句型二
.Before watching performances，we can write Spring Festival couplets and make dumplings under the guidance of some teachers，which will surely enable you to know better about our culture.
分析：句子里，代指主句we can write Spring Festival couplets and make dumplings under the guidance of some teachers，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句will surely enable you to know better about our culture。
翻译：.在观看演出之前，我们可以在老师的指导下写春联、包饺子，这一定会让你更好地了解我们的文化。
【解答】Dear Tom，
Having been told that you are very interested in our traditional festivals，with the Spring Festival approaching，I would like to invite you to join in the celebration for some international students in our school.【高分句型一】（提出邀请）
A variety of activities will be included at the celebration.Before watching performances，we can write Spring Festival couplets and make dumplings under the guidance of some teachers，which will surely enable you to know better about our culture.【高分句型二】（活动内容）By the way，the celebration will take place in the school lecture hall from 7：00 p.m.to 10：00 p.m.on December 30，2020，according to the Chinese lunar calendar.（活动时间和地点）
We are looking forward to your reply.（期待回复）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。
16．假设你是校报英语专栏的记者。今天下午你校全体师生参加了一场关于是否应该重建圆明园的问题讨论会。请你用英语为校报写一篇英文报道，反映讨论结果。
注意：1.字数100左右；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
【分析】高分句型一
This afternoon all the teachers and students in our school had a discussion about whether Yuanmingyuan Park should be reconstructed and opinions are divided on the question.
分析：句子里，whether引导宾语从句Yuanmingyuan Park should be reconstructed.
翻译：今天下午，我校全体师生就圆明园是否重建进行了讨论，意见不一。
高分句型二
They hold the belief that what it is like now can serve as the best material to educate people.
分析：句子里，说明名词the belief的内容，that引导同位语从句what it is like now can serve as the best material to educate people.
翻译：他们相信它现在的样子可以成为教育人们的最佳材料。
【解答】This afternoon all the teachers and students in our school had a discussion about whether Yuanmingyuan Park should be reconstructed and opinions are divided on the question.【高分句型一】（点明讨论主题）
60% of the students are against the idea of reconstructing Yuanmingyuan Park.They hold the belief that what it is like now can serve as the best material to educate people.【高分句型二】Rebuilding it would not only cost a large amount of money，but also probably lead to people forgetting its history.（反对的观点以及理由）
On the other hand，40% think that Yuanmingyuan Park should be reconstructed because it will become more attractive after being rebuilt.Consequently，people can learn more about Chinese culture by visiting the new Yuanmingyuan Park.What's more，they worry many relics will break down and even disappear for lack of protection.（支持的观点以及理由）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
17．假定你息李华，在2020上半年时，你选择了美国教师Lucy的视频辅导课。最近，你参加了学校组须的英语演讲比赛，取得了优异成绩。请向Lucy写信汇报成绩，并表示感谢。注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【分析】高分句型一：I am Li Hua，one of the students who chose your video lessons.译文：我是李华，选择你们视频课的学生之一。
分析：这句话使用who引导定语从句修饰one of the students。
高分句型二：I don't know what my English would be like without your patient help.
译文：如果没有你耐心的帮助，我不知道我的英语会是什么样子。
分析：这句话使用what引导宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Lucy，
I am Li Hua，one of the students who chose your video lessons. 【高分句型一】Here I am writing to express my sincere gratitude from the bottom of my heart.（写信目的）
During the first half of this year，you taught many practical learning skills in your video lessons，I made great progress in English，especially the pronunciation.I don't know what my English would be like without your patient help.【高分句型二】Last week，I took Part in the English speech competition which was held by our school.And to my great joy，I won the first.What's more，the judges spoke highly of my speech，saying that my pronunciation sounded like a native.How proud I am!（汇报成绩）
Again I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you and wish you all the best.（表示感谢）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
18．假设你是学生李华，升入高中后，由于学业较重，你经常熬夜，第二天早晨上课时经常犯困，为此你很苦恼。请你给某中学生英语杂志的编辑写一封信，寻求帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor，
_______________
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I used to follow a set schedule for bedtime and wake﹣up time， but everything has changed since I entered my senior high school.
译文：我过去总是按照固定的作息时间和起床时间，但自从我进入高中以来，一切都变了。
分析：这句话使用since引导时间状语从句。
高分句型二：As a result， I feel so sleepy the following morning that I can't concentrate in class sometimes.
译文：结果，第二天早上我觉得很困，有时上课时不能集中注意力。
分析：这句话使用so+形容词+that引导结果状语从句。
【解答】Dear Editor，
I'm Li Hua， a senior high school student. I'm writing to ask you for help.（写信目的）
I used to follow a set schedule for bedtime and wake﹣up time， but everything has changed since I entered my senior high school. 【高分句型一】I have to stay up very late in order to finish my school assignments. As a result， I feel so sleepy the following morning that I can't concentrate in class sometimes. 【高分句型二】I have been bothered by this problem for a long time.（问题） Sincerely I hope you could give me some advice.（请求给予帮助）
Looking forward to your reply.（盼望）
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
19．假定你是李华，你校外教 Mr.Smith将就"How to stay safe on line"进行一场英文讲座。请你以校英语俱乐部的名义，用英语写一则通知，邀请同学们踊跃参加。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
Notice
____________.
【分析】高分句型一
As we all know，our life is becoming more and more dependent on the Internet and along with the trend some problems occur concerning online safety.
分析：句子里，As引导非限制性定语从句we all know，代指主句our life is becoming more and more dependent on the Internet and along with the trend some problems occur concerning online safety.
翻译：众所周知，我们的生活越来越依赖于互联网，随着这一趋势，一些有关网络安全的问题也随之出现。
高分句型二
To help students to deal with such issues better，a lecture called "How to stay safe online" is going to be delivered by Mr.Smith next Friday afternoon in the Great Hall.
分析：句子里，动词不定式To help students to deal with such issues better作目的状语；修饰名词a lecture，过去分词called "How to stay safe online"作定语。
翻译：为了帮助学生更好地处理这些问题，史密斯先生将于下周五下午在大礼堂举办一场名为"如何保持在线安全"的讲座。
【解答】Notice
As we all know，our life is becoming more and more dependent on the Internet and along with the trend some problems occur concerning online safety.【高分句型一】（举行讲座的背景）To help students to deal with such issues better，a lecture called "How to stay safe online" is going to be delivered by Mr.Smith next Friday afternoon in the Great Hall.【高分句型二】（讲座的目的，题目，时间，地点以及演讲人）The lecture will start at 2 pm and will last for 45 minutes.If you have any questions about online safety，you can ask Mr.Smith when he finishes his speech.（讲座安排）
Anyone interested in this topic is welcome to attend the lecture.（欢迎参加）
The English Club
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
20．优美的英文书写让人赏心悦目，闲着也是闲着，展示一下你的书法水平吧！要求用衡水体写满，短文体裁内容不限。
【分析】高分句型一：Aiming to raise students' environmental awareness，recently，our school held a handicraft competition of making artworks out of used materials，which was a great success.
翻译：最近，为了提高学生们的环保意识，我们学校举办了一次用废旧物品进行艺术创作的手工大赛，这取得了巨大的成功。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词Aiming to raise students' environmental awareness做状语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：The competition makes me convinced that it's our duty to recycle and reuse used materials to contribute more to the sustainable development of the world.
翻译：这次比赛让我坚信我们有责任循环回收利用废旧材料，为世界的可持续发展作出贡献。
分析：这句话是用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】A Handicraft Competition
Aiming to raise students' environmental awareness，recently，our school held a handicraft competition of making artworks out of used materials，which was a great success.【高分句型一】（比赛目的）
Representatives from each class first presented their works created in advance.The fantastic vases，the lovely paper cuttings and a variety of handicrafts left a deep impression on us.Then we entered the live creating stage.Our creative artworks received warm applause from the audience from time to time.At the end of the competition，excellent works were selected to be displayed in the school library.（比赛过程）
The competition makes me convinced that it's our duty to recycle and reuse used materials to contribute more to the sustainable development of the world.【高分句型二】（感想）
【点评】需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
21．假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Alvin来信询问你班主题班会的相关情况。请你回封邮件，向他简要介绍一次给你印象最深刻的主题班会，内容包括班会的主题、流程及感想等。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【分析】高分句型一
As you might know， such a meeting， usually covering some hot topics， like personal development and social interaction， is specially designed to enhance our critical thinking.
分析：句子里，As引导非限制性定语从句you might know；现在分词covering some hot topics， like personal development and social interaction作定语。
翻译：如你所知，这样一个会议，通常涉及一些热点话题，如个人发展和社会交往，是专门设计来加强我们的批判性思维。
高分句型二
At the beginning， I presented some money﹣obsessed people who are endeavoring to make as much as possible， for the simple reason that money can buy them everything.
分析：句子里，代指先行词some money﹣obsessed people，关系词who引导定语从句are endeavoring to make as much as possible；that引导同位语从句money can buy them everything.
翻译：一开始，我介绍了一些痴迷于金钱的人，他们正努力尽可能多地赚钱，原因很简单，金钱可以买到一切。
【解答】Dear Alvin，
Glad to know you're interested in the themed class meeting. As you might know， such a meeting， usually covering some hot topics， like personal development and social interaction， is specially designed to enhance our critical thinking.【高分句型一】（点明书信主题）
Last Monday night， I also chaired one themed "Can money really talk？" At the beginning， I presented some money﹣obsessed people who are endeavoring to make as much as possible， for the simple reason that money can buy them everything.【高分句型二】 Then， I organized my classmates to voice their opinion. After a heated discussion， we finally concluded that money is important but definitely it can't talk. Wealthy as you may be， you can't exchange it for youth or health when they are fading away. Through such activities， we surely benefit a lot.（介绍自己印象最深刻的主题班会的主题、流程及感想）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
22．Directions： Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假定你是明启中学的学生李华。学校将举行一次演讲比赛，主题为我心目中的英雄。"灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄？" 做出惊天动地之举的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……请你结合具体事例写一份演讲稿，阐述你心目中真正的英雄。
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。
【分析】高分句型一
He is not a man who makes the earth shaking action but is an ordinary person.
分析：句子里，代指先行词a man，关系词who引导定语从句makes the earth shaking action but is an ordinary person.
翻译：他不是一个做出惊天动地举动的人，而是一个普通人。
高分句型二
It is my father who is the hero in my heart.
分析：句子里，强调句式It is…who强调主语 my father.
翻译：我心中的英雄是我的父亲。
【解答】The hero in my heart
Good afternoon everyone， I am very glad to stand here to talk about the hero in my heart. He is not a man who makes the earth shaking action but is an ordinary person. 【高分句型一】（点明演讲主题）
It is my father who is the hero in my heart. 【高分句型二】And he is very special in my heart. He is very brave， hard﹣working and responsible. I am afraid of mouse ， so my father will stand out to help me drive it out. It is funny to watch him fighting with mouse. He is not only caring for me， but also looking after of my grandparents. He is glad to do this and never complain. As for his job， he works very hard. Sometimes workers working with my father will praise him in front of me. My dad is the hero in my mind. I want to be a person like him when I grow up.（阐述自己心目中真正的英雄）
Thanks for your listening.（结束语）
【点评】书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
23．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter最近发邮件说他想了解你居住的地方近年来发生的变化，请用英语回复。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
________.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
With high﹣speed railways running in all directions and more subway lines under construction， the public transportation is swiftly developing， offering us easier ways to travel around.
分析：句子里，With的复合结构high﹣speed railways running in all directions and more subway lines under construction作伴随状语；现在分词offering us easier ways to travel around作结果状语。
翻译：随着高速铁路的四通八达和越来越多的地铁在建，公共交通迅速发展，为我们提供了更方便的出行方式。
高分句型二
Effective steps have been taken to beautify our environment， which brings us a clearer blue sky and fresher air.
分析：句子里，代指主句Effective steps have been taken to beautify our environment， 关系词which引导非限制性定语从句brings us a clearer blue sky and fresher air.
翻译：我们采取了有效措施来美化我们的环境，使我们的天空更蓝，空气更清新。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to introduce to you the great changes in my hometown you desire to know. （点明书信主题）
My hometown Zhengzhou， capital of Henan province， has changed greatly in recent years. With high﹣speed railways running in all directions and more subway lines under construction， the public transportation is swiftly developing， offering us easier ways to travel around.【高分句型一】 Effective steps have been taken to beautify our environment， which brings us a clearer blue sky and fresher air. 【高分句型二】You'll see broad streets lined with tall trees and beautiful flowers， and people of different ages bathed in the sunshine in the newly﹣built parks. Our life here is more attractive， peaceful and comfortable.（介绍居住的地方近年来发生的变化）
Welcome to my hometown， a fast﹣developing city!（表示欢迎）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
24．请根据下面的写作内容和要求写一篇作文。
The Internet
互联网拥有将全世界的人互联成一个共享群体的能力。网络最大优势之一在于可以快速、方便地获取海量信息。通过电子商务，网络给我们的生活带来了难以置信的便利。最重要的是网络帮助我们建立并维持社交联系。
尽管互联网有诸多益处，网络也有很多不利方面，如：网上太多的虚假信息可能会误导我们，沉迷网络可能会使我们脱离真实世界等。因此，我们必须合理、负责任地使用互联网。
写作要求：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Internet
________
【分析】高分句型一
While the Internet is of great benefit to us，it also has its limits.
分析：句子里，While引导让步状语从句the Internet is of great benefit to us.
翻译：虽然互联网对我们有很大的好处，但它也有其局限性。
高分句型二
Besides，we may get disconnected from the real world if addicted to it.
分析：句子里，if addicted to it是省略句，省略了主语we和be动词。
翻译：此外，如果沉迷于网络，我们可能会与现实世界脱节。
【解答】The Internet
The Internet has the power to connect people across the world to a single shared community.One of its greatest advantages lies in the quick and easy access to a huge amount of information.With the help of electronic commerce，the Internet has made our lives unbelievably convenient.Above all else，it helps us establish and maintain social ties.（网络的优势）
While the Internet is of great benefit to us，it also has its limits.【高分句型一】For example，too much false information may mislead us.Besides，we may get disconnected from the real world if addicted to it.【高分句型二】Therefore，we must use the Internet properly and responsibly.（网络的不利方面）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
25．假设你是李华，最近购入一只使用满意的智能手环（smart bracelet）。请根据下列提示写一封邮件，跟你的英国朋友Jack 分享你的使用体会和购买建议：1.智能手环的功能和好处；2.建议Jack购买。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称：
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
It's been a month since my last mail.How have you been doing recently？﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
Best regards!
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
As I mentioned last time，I've been using a smart bracelet for a while and I can't wait to tell you how much I love it.
分析：句子里，As引导非限制性定语从句I mentioned last time，代指主句I've been using a smart bracelet for a while；固定短语can't wait to表示"迫不及待地"。
翻译：正如我上次提到的，我已经使用智能手环一段时间了，我迫不及待地想告诉你我有多喜欢它。
高分句型二
Given all the benefits it has brought me，I strongly suggest you get one too.
分析：句子里，Given引导条件状语all the benefits it has brought me。
翻译：考虑到它给我带来的所有好处，我强烈建议你也买一个。
【解答】Dear Jack，
It's been a month since my last mail.How have you been doing recently？As I mentioned last time，I've been using a smart bracelet for a while and I can't wait to tell you how much I love it.【高分句型一】（点明书信主题）
First of all，it can not only count steps but also monitor my heart rate，blood pressure and even my sleep quality.Besides，it can be used as a phone with functions such as call reminder，alarm clock and message reminder.With its help，my life has become healthier and easier.（智能手环的功能和好处）
Given all the benefits it has brought me，I strongly suggest you get one too.【高分句型二】（建议Jack购买）
Best regards!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。
26．Directions： Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
请给三年前刚结束了中考的你自己写一封信，回顾即将过去的三年高中生活和学习，你觉得现在的你能够给三年前的你一些什么建议，并说明理由。
【分析】高分句型一：To begin with， it's important to find a proper learning method which is suitable for you because an effective study method can make you get twice as much done with half the effort.
译文：首先，找到一种适合你的学习方法是很重要的，因为一种有效的学习方法可以让你事半功倍。
分析：这句话使用it作为形式主语，不定式内容是真正的主语。
高分句型二：In addition， more attention should be paid to reading， which will broaden your horizons and benefit your future life.
译文：另外，要多注意阅读，这会开阔你的视野，有益于你未来的生活。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Frank，
Three years later， you will become me， a Senior 3 student. I'm very glad to know you will be senior middle school student next term. Congratulations! The life of high school is like a short but precious journey full of happiness and sorrow. Here I would like to share some of my suggestions with you.（写信目的）
To begin with， it's important to find a proper learning method which is suitable for you because an effective study method can make you get twice as much done with half the effort.【高分句型一】 In addition， more attention should be paid to reading， which will broaden your horizons and benefit your future life. 【高分句型二】Last but not least， learn to be optimistic about life， for you'll encounter many difficulties or setbacks.（给三年前的你一些什么建议）
I hope you can enjoy your life and make great progress in study.（希望）
Yours，
Frank
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
27．Directions：Write an English composition in about 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
请结合事例描述一位对你的成长有重要影响的师长。
【分析】高分句型一
In our life，we are sure to meet some people who will influence us greatly.
分析：句子里，代指先行词some people，关系词who引导定语从句will influence us greatly.
翻译：在我们的生活中，一定会遇到一些对我们影响很大的人。
高分句型二
It was his encouragement and trust that changed me completely and made me who I am now.
分析：句子里，强调句式It was ......that强调主语his encouragement and trust.
翻译：是他的鼓励和信任彻底改变了我，使我成为了现在的我。
【解答】In our life，we are sure to meet some people who will influence us greatly.【高分句型一】For me，that person is my Chinese teacher，Mr.Wang.（点明主题）
At 14，I was not a well﹣behaved freshman at my senior high.Falling asleep in class and keeping homework untouched were what I did.Nothing changed until Mr.Wang came to teach us in the second term.Mr.Wang was an enthusiastic and experienced Chinese teacher.He caught my attention the first time he taught us.I admired him and desired to be a person like him.Somehow，he saw it and he offered his hand to pull me out of my old sins.It was his encouragement and trust that changed me completely and made me who I am now.【高分句型二】（结合事例描述老师对自己的成长有重要影响的）
Mr.Wang is just like a lamp in the dark which directs the way for a wanderer.I will never forget him.（总结老师对自己的影响）
【点评】书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
28．为积极应对人口老龄化，我国已全面放开三胎。假定你是李华，你的父母计划生第三胎，请给你校外籍教师Barton写信，谈谈你的看法。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：the aging population 人口老龄化；three﹣child policy 三胎政策；give birth to 生孩子；sibling兄弟姐妹；the burden of…的负担
【分析】高分句型一
Knowing that you are very concerned about the change of our country's fertility policy，I am writing to introduce my view in this regard.
分析：句子里，现在分词Knowing that you are very concerned about the change of our country's fertility policy作原因状语。
翻译：我知道你非常关心我国生育政策的变化，所以写信来谈谈我的看法。
高分句型二
Not only will my sibling accompany my growth，but also they will share the burden of taking care of my parents in the future.
分析：句子里，否定词Not only位于句首，句子will my sibling accompany my growth用部分倒装。
翻译：不仅我的兄弟姐妹会陪伴我成长，而且他们将来也会分担照顾父母的重担。
【解答】Dear Barton，
Knowing that you are very concerned about the change of our country's fertility policy，I am writing to introduce my view in this regard.【高分句型一】（点明书信主题）
In order to actively deal with the aging of population，China has fully released three﹣child policy.My parents have planned to give birth to a third child，and I approve of their decision.Not only will my sibling accompany my growth，but also they will share the burden of taking care of my parents in the future. 【高分句型二】Though my parents must be tired to care for another child，my sister and I can do them a favor.（介绍自己的观点）
I wonder your opinion about it.Looking forward to your reply.（期盼回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
29．请结合第四单元第三课的内容，表达观点并陈述理由。词数不少于50。
Does the Internet harm or help friendships？What's your opinion and why do you think so？
【分析】高分句型一：Sharing photos and videos with friends online or responding to messages with emojis has so much fun.
译文：在网上与朋友分享照片和视频，或者用表情符号回复信息，都非常有趣。
分析：这句话使用动名词作主语。
高分句型二：When you need help，your friends can immediately provide suggestions.
译文：当你需要帮助时，你的朋友可以立即提供建议。
分析：这句话使用when引导时间状语从句。
【解答】In my opinion，the Internet helps friendships.（自己的观点）Firstly，the Internet makes communication much more convenient.Secondly，the Internet makes communication more interesting.Sharing photos and videos with friends online or responding to messages with emojis has so much fun.【高分句型一】Thirdly，online communication brings friends closer to each other.Nowadays，your friends are just a click away.When you need help，your friends can immediately provide suggestions.【高分句型二】（理由）
So I believe the Internet can help develop friendships.（总结）
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
30．Directions： Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你们学校的校报正在以"我心中的理想教室"为题征文。请你以高三学生的身份投稿，描述自己心中理想的教室，并说明理由。
【分析】高分句型一：My ideal classroom should be a place which can provide me a quiet environment of learning.
译文：我理想的教室应该是一个能为我提供安静学习环境的地方。
分析：这句话使用which引导定语从句。
高分句型二：Besides， it should be a modern classroom， where there will be a satellite TV on the front wall of our classroom.
译文：此外，它应该是一个现代化的教室，在我们教室的前墙上会有一个卫星电视。
分析：这句话使用where引导非限制性定语从。
【解答】My ideal classroom should be a place which can provide me a quiet environment of learning. 【高分句型一】What's more， in my classroom， all of my classmates can get along well with each other. We can study and talk freely.Besides， it should be a modern classroom， where there will be a satellite TV on the front wall of our classroom. 【高分句型一】Each of us will have a computer on the desk. We can study on the Internet. We will not use pens or pencils. We will write on our computers. It won't be hot in summer and won't be cold in winter. （理描述想的教室）
l like our future classroom.I hope that the arrival of this day as soon as possible.（感受）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。

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