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应用文讲评——通知
Learning aims ：
1.be more clear about the functions of a notice and the differences and similarities between an oral notice and a written notice
2.better know about the structure , the content and the language of a
notice
3.polish up your writing skills of both an oral notice and a written notice
I am Li Hua.
I have many friends worldwide.
I am so busy writing letters/e-mails.
Thousands of students pretend to be me.
Who am I today
假如你是李华，你校将组织校内留学生参观中国画展，请写一则通知发布在校园网上。内容包括：
1.展览的时间和地点； 2.展览内容；
3.参观时的注意事项。注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
通知
书面通知
口头通知
Notice
......
......
the Student Union
Boys and girls, attention, please!
......
......
All are welcome!
NOTICE
In order to enrich students’ after-class activities and raise the awareness of handwriting , Professor Wang is to give a calligraphy lecture on how to appreciate and practice calligraphy on Saturday, December 22nd.
The lecture begins at 2 pm in Room 204 of the Library Building. Any calligraphy-lover is welcome to attend the lecture. Please bring your questions in calligraphy learning. Professor Wang will leave you time for questions.
Don’t forget to be on time.
Students’ Union
December 5, 2009
Boys and girls，
May I have your attention, please! I have something important to tell you. To enrich our after-class activities and raise our awareness of handwriting, Professor Wang is planning to give a calligraphy lecture on how to appreciate and practice calligraphy on Saturday, December 22nd.
The lecture begins at 2 pm on the first floor of the Lecture. Any calligraphy-lover is welcome.
You’d better ring your questions in calligraphy learning. Professor Wang will leave you time for questions. Please come on time.
That’s all. Thank you.
口头通知
书面通知
称呼+提醒语
标题
结束语
purpose
what
when
where
who
requirment
落款：发布单位、个人
Analysis of the letter
Notice
中国传统节日
时间+地点
参与人员
活动内容
学校活动
(做讲座、校庆、出席开/闭幕式，英语演讲比赛，音乐周，英语晚会等)
室外活动
(野餐、爬山、球赛等)
聚餐、晚会等
通知各类原由
常见通知要点
活动意义
注意事项、要求
口头通知语料库
1.常见口头通知的称呼
1)Ladies and gentlemen!
2)Boys and girls!
3)Hello, everyone!
4)Good morning everyone!
2.口头通知开头语
1) May I have your attention, please /Attention, please.
2) I have an announcement to make./ I have something to announce.
3) I have something important to tell you.
4) I have good news for you all.
表目的：
表主题：
人员
时间、地点：
in order to /aiming to / with the purpose of doing
with the topic/theme of , whose topic/theme is .....
Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.
语料库
our school will hold a/an XX +地点+时间。
A/An XX will be held +时间+地点。
As scheduled ,a/an +活动名称XX will be held +地点+时间。
按照计划，XX 将于某地举行
A/An +活动名称XX is scheduled to be held +地点+时间。
XX 定于将于某时某地举行
表要求：
表报名：
结尾套语：（口头通知）
It is required that ......
Make sure that .......
All participants are expected /required /supposed to do
That’s all . Thank you.
Those who want to take part in it please sign up for it before May 1st in the Students’ Union
If interested, please sign up on the school website
before this Sunday
语料库
假如你是李华，你校将组织校内留学生参观中国画展，请写一则通知发布在校园网上。内容包括：
1.展览的时间和地点； 2.展览内容；
3.参观时的注意事项。注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
书面通知
例1 ：中国画展
1. 你校将组织校内留学生参观中国画展
Our school is going to organize the exchange students to visit
the Chinese Painting Exhibition.
升华句型
活动目的
丰富课外生活
弘扬中国传统文化
促进文化交流
培养/激发对中国文化的兴趣
enrich after-class lifes
promote traditional Chinese culture
promote cultural communication/ exchange
develop/ cultivate the
interest in Chinese culture
in order to do
be intended to do
be aimed at/ to do
Aimed to promote traditional Chinese culture, our school is
to organize/arrange for the exchange students to pay a visit to the Chinese Painting Exhibition.
2. 展览的时间和地点
As scheduled , the exhibition is to be held in the Museum from 9:00 to 16:00 next Sunday.
be scheduled/expected/ to be held, as scheduled/planned
________
Example：晚会定于下周五下午6:00至8:00在教学楼101室举行。_
As scheduled, the party is to be held in Room 101 of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday.
The party is scheduled to be held in Room 101 of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday.
句子仿写
museum 9:--16:00 下周日
3. 展览的内容
这次的展览主要展示的是宋朝的水墨画。这些画作栩栩如生。
The highlight of the exhibition is the ink wash paintings from Song Dynasty, which are full of life.
这次的展览呈现的是中国画的历史以及来自名家的丰富的作品，
有水墨画，山水画等。
The exhibition presents the history of traditional Chinese paintings as well as various vivid works from Chinese artists, ranging from ink wash paintings to landscape paintings.
The exhibition presents ... as well as.........ranging from..... to .....
The highlight of the exhibition is ......which are .....
要点详解
3. 展览的内容
这次的展览以中国国画的发展历史为中心，展示来自各个朝代的名家名画，
从中，你能对中国文化的发展有更深入的了解。
The exhibition centers on the history of the traditional Chinese paintings and displays various famous paintings from different dynasties, through which you are expected to have a deep insight into the development of Chinese culture.
The exhibition centers/focuses on..... and displays.......... ,through which you are expected to have a deep insight into sth.
要点详解
4. 参观时的注意事项
We are to gather at the school gate at 2:00 pm on Feb. 25 and the school bus will take us there.
Don't be late.
Bring your student cards with you.
Keep in mind that ...
No photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
Other Attentions
P1.为了弘扬中国传统文化，我校将安排交流学生参观中国画展。
P2.按照预定/计划，它将于下周五上午8：30至11：30在学校博物馆举行。
P 2 3.它以中国传统绘画的历史为中心/重点，展示来自不同朝代的各种名画，从中可望对中国文化的发展有深刻的了解
The exhibition centers/focuses on..... and displays.......... ,through which you are expected to have a deep insight into sth.
P3 4.我们要在2月25日下午2：00在校门口集合 gather ，校车将带我们到那里
5.请记住，博物馆内不允许有照片、食品和饮料。Keep in mind that
连句成篇
Notice
Aimed to promote traditional Chinese culture, our school will arrange for the exchange students to pay a visit to the Chinese Painting Exhibition.
. As scheduled/planned , it will take place in the school Museum from 8:30 a.m to 11:30 next Friday ,（ which is a good platform to showcase your talents . ） It centers /focuses on the history of the traditional Chinese paintings and displays various famous painting from different dynasties, from which you are expected to have a deep insight into the development of Chinese culture.
We are to gather at the school gate at 2:00 pm Feb. 25 and the school bus will take us there. Keep in mind that no photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
the Student Union
(120 words)
连句成篇
Notice
Aimed to promote traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to pay a visit to the Chinese Painting Exhibition.
As scheduled , the exhibition is to be held in the Museum from 9:00 to 16:00 next Sunday.It centers on the history of the traditional Chinese paintings and displays various famous painting from different dynasties, from which you are expected to have a deep insight into the development of Chinese culture.
We are to gather at the school gate at 2:00 pm Feb. 25 and the school bus will take us there. Keep in mind that no photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
the Student Union
(120 words)
连句成篇
Notice
To promote traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to visit the Chinese Painting Exhibition in the Wenzhou Museum.
Running from Feb. 20 to March. 20, the exhibition centers on the history of the traditional Chinese paintings and displays various famous paintings of exceptional beauty from different dynasties, from which you are expected to have a deep insight into the development of Chinese culture.
We are to gather at the school gate at 2:00 pm, Feb. 25. Keep in mind that no photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
the Student Union
(96 words)
你校将要组织美国交换生参观中国美术馆(National Art Museum of China).请你根据下面提供的信息，口头通知活动安排。通知的开头已为你写好，字数不少于100词。
集合的时间和地点：周六早上8:30，学校门口
交通方式：校车
活动内容：了解中国画家，欣赏著名画作
Hi! Everyone. Attention, please.
例2 ：参观中国美术馆
你校将要组织美国交换生参观中国美术馆(National Art Museum of China).请你根据下面提供的信息，口头通知活动安排。通知的开头已为你写好，字数不少于50。
集合的时间和地点：周六早上8:30，学校门口
交通方式： 校车
活动内容： 了解中国画家，欣赏著名画作
Hi! Everyone. Attention, please.
审题
1.美国交换生
2.中国美术馆
3.时间和地点
4.交通方式
5.活动内容
Hi! Everyone. Attention, please.
We are arranging for all the American exchange students to visit the National Art Museum of China this Saturday. All participants please gather at the school gate at 8:30 this Saturday morning. The school bus will pick you up and take you there.
As one of the most popular museums in China, the NAMOC has collected and are displaying many famous paintings. I’m sure you will have a good time admiring the exhibits and get a general idea about the Chinese artists. Hope you’ll enjoy the visit.
That’s all. Thank you! (92)
Possible Version
1.美国交换生
2.中国美术馆
3.时间和地点
4.交通方式
5.活动内容
人称
All participants
you
you
you
时态
will pick
will have
合理的细节补充
口头通知的功能句
假如你是学生会主席李华，校学生会将进行“唐诗宋词朗诵大赛（Tang and Song Poetry Recitation Contest）”，以弘扬中国传统文化，特邀请学校国外交换生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知，主要内容包括：
1. 大赛的目的和意义；
2. 大赛的时间：下周五8: 30-11: 30；地点：校礼堂；
3. 欢迎国外交换生报名参加。
例3 ：唐诗宋词朗诵大赛
假如你是学生会主席李华，校学生会将进行“唐诗宋词朗诵大赛（Tang and Song Poetry Recitation Contest）”，以弘扬中国传统文化，特邀请学校国外交换生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知，主要内容包括：
1. 大赛的目的和意义；
2. 大赛的时间：下周五8: 30-11: 30；地点：校礼堂；
3. 欢迎国外交换生报名参加。
例3 ：唐诗宋词朗诵大赛
participants /contestants选手
1. 深化某人对……的理解__deepen one‘s insight into …._2. 对……有更深刻的理解have a deeper understanding of …3. 能更好地体验……have a good taste of…4. 给某人留下深刻的印象leave sb a deep impression on…5. 提供了……的机会serve as a chance to6. 毫无疑问帮你获得对……的初步认识undoubtedly help you gain a glimpse into …
连句成篇
Notice
Aimed to promote traditional Chinese culture, our school will hold a
Tang and Song Poetry Recitation Contest . As scheduled , it will take place at the school hall from 8:30 a.m to 11:30 next Friday , which is a good platform to showcase your talents . As chariman of the students’ Union , i ‘d like to invite all students ,especially the foreign exchange students to attend it .=all exchange students are highly welcome to attend it .
Hopefully , all the participants /contestants are to well prepared in advance .
I am fully convinced that the students are bound to benefit a lot from the contest , which will contribute to their understanding traditional Chinese culture and enrich their school life at the same time.
the Student Union
(120 words)
Notice
Aimed to promote traditional Chinese culture ...,our school will hold a XX next Friday.As scheduled /planned, it will take place =start in the school hall from 8:30 a.m to 11:30 next Friday , which is a good platform to showcase your talents .比赛 /which will be a feast of Chinese traditional culture.(中国文化的).All (exchange) students are highly welcome to attend it .Hopefully , all the participants /contestants are to well prepared in advance .比赛万能句。I am fully convinced that the students are bound to benefit a lot from the contest , which will contribute to their understanding traditional Chinese culture and enrich their school life at the same time.
(2021.11七彩阳光高三英语)
假设你校英语夏令营活动将于下周举行闭营晚会，现面向
全体学生征选英语节目。请你代表校学生会用英语写一则书面
通知，内容包括：
1.晚会时间、地点；
2.节目形式
3.报名方式。
注意：
1.词数80词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
要点1:交代夏令营闭幕式时间，地点
1. 夏令营的闭幕式定于下周五晚上在礼堂举行。
要点2:交代 通知目的
向全体学生征选英语节目
要点3 .节目形式
需要各种形式的英语表演， 歌曲舞蹈戏剧，语言节目都可
要点4.报名方式
感兴趣的同学请在本周日之前去学校网站上报名
要点5要求
The closing ceremony
例3：闭营晚会
背景： 夏令营的闭幕式定于下周五晚上在礼堂举行。
The closing ceremony of the summer camp
is scheduled to be held at the school hall next Friday
night .
As scheduled, The closing ceremony of the summer camp is to be held at the school hall next Friday
night .
Various forms of English perormance are wanted ,including/ranging from singing English songs to English talk shows or whatever ,
The ceremony features various forms of English performances , including / ranging from singing English songs to English talk shows or whatever .
要点 .节目形式
需要各种形式的英语表演， 歌曲舞蹈戏剧，语言节目都可
which will get you a deeper insight into x
这是个很好的平台，在那里你可以展示你的才华。
It is a good platform where you can showcase
your talents.
If interested, please sign up on the school website
before this Sunday.
要点4.报名方式
时间+地点
感兴趣的同学请在本周日之前去学校网站上报名
All the candidates are required to go through a careful
selection process next Monday , please remember to get
your performance ready in advance .
要求
所有的节目都要经过选拔，请精心准备。
The closing ceremony of the summer camp is scheduled to be held at the school hall next Friday . Various forms of English performances are wanted , ranging from singing English songs to English talk shows or whatever . It is a good platform where you can showcase your talents . If interested , please sign up on the school website before this Sunday .Please remember to get your performance ready in advance .
(金华十校)
假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将组织一场元旦晚会(New Year
party),请你用英语写则书面通知，告知你校的国际交换生参加，内容包
括：
1.时间、地点；
2.晚会节目安排；
3.欢迎参加。
folk music ,cross talk traditional Chinese operas ,
例4：New Year party
To celebrate /embrace the approaching New Year ,
our school is to hold a New Year Party.
背景+事件
为了庆祝元旦的到来,我们学校将举办一个新年party
随着新年的到来， 一个新年party 将在我们学校的音乐厅2022.1.1举行。
With the approach of New Year ,
a New Year Party is scheduled to be held in the school music
hall on jan.1st ,2022.
A wide range of performances are offered ,ranging from
folk music ,cross talk to traditional Chinese operas ,
晚会节目安排
提供了各种各样的表演，从民间音乐，相声到中国戏曲，
The party features various forms of chinese performances ,
ranging from folk music ,cross talk to traditional
Chinese operas ,
which will help you have a better understanding of Chinese culture .
意义
whihc will get you have a deeper insight into Chinese culture .
对中国文化有更深刻的洞察力。
All exchange students are highly welcome to attend .
You are sure to have great time.
欢迎参加+吸引力
All exchange students are highly welcome to attend .
You can’t afford to miss it !你不能错过它
All exchange students are highly welcome to attend .
Never deprive yourself of the chance to have fun.永远
不要剥夺自己享受乐趣的机会
Notice
To celebrate the approaching New Year,our school is to hold a New Year Party in the Students'Center.
The party is scheduled to be held by our school on January 1st,2021 in the school music hall.A wide variety of performances featuring traditional Chinese culture will be put on stage,including folk music民间,traditional Chinese operas,cross talk,相声and Chinese martial arts武术,which will get you a deeper insight into the rich Chinese culture.All exchange students are highly welcome to attend.You can't afford to miss it! You are sure to have a great time fullof fun and learning.
maggie 下水作文
Notice
With the New Year approaching,a New Year party is scheduled to be
held by our school on January 1st,2021 in the school music hall.
A wide variety of performances featuring traditional Chinese culture will
be put on stage,including folk music民间,traditional Chinese operas,cross talk,相声and Chinese martial arts武术Besides,an English drama based on
British playwright Shakespeare's masterpiece Hamlet will be performed.
All exchange students are highly welcome to attend.You can't afford to
miss it!
假如你是校学生会主席李华，为庆祝建校80周年，学校近期将举行“创意绘画比赛”。请写一则书面通知，刊登到你校校报的英语专栏上。请在通知中说明：
1. 作品主题：校园中最爱的一角； 2. 参赛方式（提交至学生会办公室或网上提交）和截止时间；
3. 获奖作品的展出和奖品设置。
例5：创意绘画比赛
连句成篇
Notice
Aimed to celebrate the 80th anniversary of our school, a fantastic event “creative painting contest “ is around the corner/approaching, which gives a full
display of painting talents of students .
It is expected that every sudent with interest should be involved in the event themed on “ my favorite corner of the campus “ .If interested , please
submit/hand in your work to the office of Studnets’ Union or uploaded to the school website before the deadline May 1st ,2022 .All-the award -winning collections will be exhibited on the school website and winners of
the first prize will be awarded certificates together wiht bonus . So catch the golden opportunity of being the winner . Your contribution is bound to make the contest a great success.
Everyone is welcome! It is your show time!
the Student Union
(120 words)
连句成篇
Notice
Aimed to improve the students’ spoken English and enrich after-class lifes ,
a English-speaking contest will be held in the shool hall at 7:00 p.m on 30th January ,2019 .The details conerning it are as follows .
The contest, which is among the students of Senior Grade 1 , is organized by the
Students’ Union . Those who are interested in it please sign up in the Studnets’ Union Office before 20th January . Five teachers will be invited to work as judges .
The first 10 winners will be given awards .
Everyone is welcome to be present at the contest .
你校要举办首届英语节（EnglishFestival），假如你是学生会主席李华,请你用英语给全校师生发布一个书面通知。内容主要包括：
1.举办时间：3月6日—3月10日；
2. 内容：如英文歌曲比赛、英文戏剧表演、西方文化讲座等；
3. 举办英语节的意义。
例6：EnglishFestival
In order to fuel your desire to be better English learners and spark your way of thinking,our school will hold the first English Festival, which is to be held from March 6th to 10th. This week-long festival promises to be a feast for ears and eyes as well as minds. Students and teachers alike are welcome to participate in English singing competitions, drama performances, or attend lectures on Western culture.
By immersing everyone in the charm of English, the festival is bound to get all of you to have fun with English.
范文1
In order to enrich our school life and broaden students’ horizions , the first english festival is due to be held in our school , from march 6th to march 10th .
the festival will be composed of a seires of meaningful and spledid activities , including englsih song contest,performances of english drama as well as lectures about western culture ,during which students will show off their talents and have a good taste of english culture .
hopefully , the festival will not only arouse students’ enthusiasm in english but alao provide them with an good platform to promote their personal abilities . Eyeryone interested is warmly welcome.
范文2
in an attempt to lift students’ enthusiam forenglish , our school is going to launch the first english festival from 3.6 to 3.10 ,incluing an englsih contest and english drama performance to cultivate a lively atmosphere . a lecure about western culture which will broaden our horizens is also on the schedule . Those who take a fancy to english are sure to satisfy their curiosity and interset . The english festival is also of great benefit , it can not noly contribute to students’ english but also provide an opportunity to realx . Hope everyone to take an active part in.
范文3
Notice
①To develop our interest in English learning, our school will hold the activity “English Evening” in Room 205 on the evening of February 26th, 2022, from 7 p.m. to 9 p.m. ②All the members of the club are required to attend it. ③Available will be activities like listening to English songs, appreciating English poems as well as telling English stories.
④All the participants are supposed to communicate with others in English. Please make full preparations for it and come on time.
English Club
February 20th, 2022
【亮点借鉴】
范文4
1. 结构：这篇范文符合书面写作特点，目的明确，思路清晰，正文为两段，内容完整；
2. 词汇：用词准确，表达清晰，运用的高级词汇和表达有from…to…, require, attend, available, appreciate, as well as, be supposed to, make full preparations for, on time等；
3. 句式：句式多样，使用准确，具体如下：
①句采用了动词不定式to do作目的状语，表达了该活动的目的和参加的必要性；
②句采用了被动语态，强调all the members，突出活动的对象；
③句采用了倒装的句式，更加突出活动的内容丰富性；like作为介词，后加了三个使用动名词短语来列举活动的项目，并用as well as来连接，上下文联系紧密，增强了表达效果；
④句采用了be supposed to来增强表达效果，比should更贴切。

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