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作文专题九：“英语日记”模板
一、正文框架：
★第一段：总写：简要写出要记录的事情。
★第二段：细写经过或原因：按事情发展顺序进行描述/条理性罗列观点。
★第三段：感想和收获：发表对所发生事情的感想。
二、参考模板:　
Day of the week, Date Weather
【事情】Today is . I did some meaningful things .
【事情经过】In the morning, I .（事情一）Then, I （事情二）After that, I .（事情三）By the time , we had a good time. Finally_________________, I’ll never forget the memorable day（总结）
【意义和感想】Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because . And from this activity, I have learned that _________________.
三、常用句式：
1. 词汇:
(1) 月份：January一月 February二月 March三 April四月 May五月 June六月 July七月 August八月 September九月 October十月 November十一月 December十二月
(2) 天气情况: 1. sunny, 2. cool, 3. cold, 4. rainy, 5. windy, 6. cloudy, 7. snowy, 8.foggy,
(3) 描述心情: 1. joyful, 2. excited, 3. delighted, 4. pleased, 5. satisfied, 7. comfortable, 8. bright, 9. terrible,
10. frightened, 11. happy，12. sad，13. honored
(4). 其他词汇： 1. enjoy doing sth.，2. turn out to be，3. first of all/to begin with，4. besides/What’s more，5. unforgettable days，6. finally/last but not least，7. think highly of /praise sth.，8. by doing sth.，9. such as, 10. doing sth. and doing sth., 11. say goodbye to，12. everlasting friendship，13. moved to tears，14. present...with...，15. have a photo taken，16. this precious moment，
2. 写作套路
①第一段：总写：简要写出要记录的事情。
It was the first day of our winter holiday.
One of my father’s friends invited me to have a picnic today.
On the weekend, my brother and I decided to help my mother with the housework.
Today, I realized that time was very cruel thing, This afternoon，we held a class meeting to say goodbye to---, who is going to study abroad.
Last week，we took the foreign students in our school to experience --，which turned out to be extremely rewarding.
(7) I was so pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.
(8) Today, our school had an opening ceremony in the school auditorium.
②第二段：细写经过或原因：按事情发展顺序进行描述/条理性罗列观点。
(1) It seemed to be an easy task for us, but later we had a hard time finishing it.
(2) I spent the whole day sweeping the floor and washing the clothes.
(3 ) Those red buildings and those green trees formed a beautiful picture.
(4) The night view was so beautiful that we all didn't want to go home
(5)The moment we arrived at ---，we were warmly greeted by a friendly expert standing at the entrance.
(6)We first went to the library with a large collection of books，where we saw students reading attentively.
(7) I had an unforgettable experience in Guangzhou today
We had such a good time that we didn't realize it was very late (9). From this experience, I learned that….
They were very grateful to me for my help. (12). They showed much gratitude to me for my help.
They appreciate my help quickly. (14). Seeing them go on the bus, I felt very happy.
With candles lit, we sang happy birthday out loud and clapped.
(16) led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20, which could take them there directly.
第三段：感想和收获：发表对所发生事情的感想。
I will be more diligent in this semester. (2). We will treasure it at the bottom of our hearts.
What a nice day! (4). I was so moved by his speech. (5). I did enjoy that game.
From my point of view，it’s indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.
We’ll surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.
Through the meaningful activity，we all agree that science plays an important role in our life and we will study hard to take advantage of it to make our world a better place.
I felt .. than ever before .....I am convinced that... . (10). I am determined to . .
四、写作案例：
（一）、【记录“感动时刻”】假定你是李华，某英文报社“Your diaries — a touching moment”专栏正在征稿，你有意参加。请你写一篇日记记录你最受感动的一件事并向其投稿，要点包括：1. 事件经过；2. 你的感受。
范文一
Sunday, Jan. 5 Sunny
【总写】Today was a day that I will never forget, because I experienced something so warm and touching.
【经过】After my friend’s birthday party, I went to the bus station. When the bus came, I got on and didn’t notice I was not on the right bus. When the bus stopped, I got off and realized I was in an unfamiliar place. As it was getting dark, I felt scared. Suddenly, I saw car lights and heard someone saying gently, “Can I help you ” It was a female driver. After learning about my trouble, she offered me a ride for free. With her help, I got home safely.
【感受】I was so thankful for her help! I decided I would try my best to help others in need in my life as well.
范文二
Sunday, Jan. 5 Sunny
【总写】Today was a day that I will never forget, because I experienced something so warm and touching.
【经过】Stepping out after my friend’s birthday party, I was soon on my way to the bus station. However, I got on the wrong bus by mistake. When the bus stopped, I realized I was in a place that was not familiar. As it was getting dark, the anxiety in my heart grew. Suddenly, I saw car lights getting nearer and a gentle voice came out of the dark, “Can I help you ” It was a female driver. After learning about my concerns, she offered me a lift for free. Thanks to her, I returned home safe and sound eventually.
【感受】How grateful I was! I decided I would spare no effort to help others in need and pass this kindness on to other people.
（二）【记录“特殊日子”】假定你是李华，作文课上，你班外教Mr Smith要求你们以“A special day in my life”为主题写一篇日记，要点包括：1. 事件经过；2. 你的感受。
Monday, Jan. 13 Windy
【总写】There are some days that are quite special in everyone’s life. I had a very special day on which I learned a lot.
【经过】I will remember a dangerous accident happening on a hot summer day forever, when my family went to a swimming pool. When I was wandering along the pool, I was hit by a boy accidentally and fell into the pool. I was so afraid that I shouted for help at once and struggled to reach the bank. But the sudden fall made me drink a lot of water. Just then, my father rushed to me and said, “Calm down, and try to keep your balance.” Hearing these words, I made myself cool down and finally made it.
【感受和收获】This unforgettable experience is still fresh in my mind today. It tells me that staying calm is very important when facing a dangerous situation.
（三）【记录“活动意义”】假设你是学生会会长李华，学生会成功地举办一个中国书法展。学校的老师与同学们对此赞赏不已，认为这次书法展非常有意义。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇日记：
内容包括：1.十分高兴； 2. 成功的原因； 3. 自己的收获。
Sunday, November 28, 2021 Sunny
【背景】The Chinese Calligraphy Show turned out to be a great success. As the organizer of it, I am glad to see both teachers and students enjoyed it very much.
【高兴】When we were praised, I did feel great happiness because I knew that our efforts paid off. 【原因】During its preparation, everyone, including our members and the teachers who guided us, contributed a lot to the show. It was the hardwork of all that made the show successful. By cooperating with them, my organizational ability was absolutely improved harvested a lot from it.
【收获】I think it is an unforgettable experience for me.
【总结学习方法】假如你是李华，在全校英语口语大赛中获得了一等奖，请你以日记的形式总结学好英
语的方法，内容包括： 1. 方法介绍， 2. 你的收获
范文一
Sunday, November 28, 2021 Sunny
【高兴】I felt honored that I got the first prize of the Spoken English Competition.
【过程】I know it was because all of my efforts paid off. 【读英语】Every morning, I read English loudly so as to practice my pronunciation and fluency. It was really helpful. 【写日记】Besides, keeping dairies every day helped me accumulate various expressions. 【拓展单词】More importantly, reading English newspaper guided me to so many native usages, which also greatly increased my vocabulary.
【收获】All roads lead to Rome and I believe that efforts will pay off.
范文二
Sunday, November 28, 2021 Sunny
【背景】Today, my English teacher invited me to share my English learning methods with my classmates as I successfully got the first prize of the Spoken English Competition.
【感谢】First of all, I was grateful for my teacher who gave me the chance the share my learning methods, because it meant that my efforts paid off. 【做法】When I shared my learning methods with my classmates, such as reading English loudly and keeping diaries, they said that they benefited a lot form it and thanked me sincerely.
【感想】I am happy that I can help them in English learning and hope their English will be improved.
（五）【记录“欢度春节”】假如你是May，在刚刚过去的春节里，你应邀前往中国与笔友一起欢度中国年。请你用英语写一封日记记录这一段难得的异国经历和感受。 内容：1.参加的活动； 2.你的感受。
Saturday，February 13th，2021 Sunny
【背景】I was so pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival. That was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience for me.
【活动一】The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together. 【活动二】Besides，we tried some traditional foods，watched Dragon and Lion Dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a temple fair. 【活动三】Afterwards，we paid a visit to Mount Hengshan，a famous tourist attraction and a religious spot.
【感受】Greatly impressed by Chinese unique culture and attractive scenery，I have known further about China. From my point of view，it’s indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.
（六）【记录“志愿者活动”】假定你是学校志愿者团队的学生李华，为维护城市自然环境，本周六你班到中山公园参加了环保志愿者活动，请用日记的形式，记叙此事。
内容包括：1.活动内容：捡垃圾，分发传单…… 2.你对本次活动的感想。
Saturday. May2nd 2014 Fine
【背景】Today, we took part in a meaningful activity by the Voluntary Service Club of our school to protect the natural environment of the city.
【过程】In the morning, we went to Zhongshan park by bus, talking and laughing all the way as soon as we get to work. Some picked up rubbish and threw it into the dustbins, while some distributed the leaflets to raise people's awareness of the damage littering can cause. The residents who live in the community all agreed that what we have done is very meaningful and of vital importance to the environment there. 【收获】Personally, we have learned much from the voluntary activity,
【感想】Activities not only enable us to contribute to society, but also make us aware of the importance of protecting the natural environment
（七）【记录“演讲比赛”】假定你是李华，昨天你参加了你校举办的以"我最喜欢的一本书"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语日记，要点如下：1.比赛的情况；2.你的表现和感受。
Friday 2nd May 2014 Fine
【参加比赛】Yesterday afternoon, I attended the English speech contest held by my school. The topic of it is "The book I like best".
【比赛情况】When I knew that the first five candidates performed very well, l felt a little worried. At the thought of the words "I can do it", I became calm a lot. Soon it was my turn, I told them my favorite book was "The book I like best is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller. Because From the book, I realize that it would be an excellent rule to live happily each day as if we should tomorrow. My teachers and classmates cheered for me. I gained much confidence and went on to do my best. Finally I won first prize.
【感受】Be happy every day and try my best to do everything. I'll keep it in my mind and make it come true.
（八）【记录“拾金不昧故事”】下午放学后，我在回家路上捡到一个包，内有若干现金、名片及一块手表等物品。我担心失主着急，马上把包送到派出所。在警察的帮助下，我找到了失主（她）是来自英国的Miss Green。我打电话通知失主（所发生的事情）。当失主取回包时，她万分感谢我。
Sept. 14th, Friday cool
【经过】On my way home after school, I found a bag, in which there was some cash, business cards, a watch and some other things. Considering that the owner of the bag must be very anxious, I went to the nearby police station immediately to ask for help. Having checked the business cards carefully, the policeman on duty found the bag belonged to Miss Green from Britain. And then we called her at once. When she came to claim the bag, she expressed great thanks to us.
【感想】Doing a good deed makes me happy and I decided I would spare no effort to help others in need.
（九）【记录“主题班会”】假如你是李华，今天班级召开了英语主题班会。请根据提示内容写一篇英语日记，记录班会的情况，写作要点：
1. 班会主题：如何温课备考 2. 班会内容：有益的建议。3. 我的观点。
Wednesday, May 12th Cloudy
【总写】Today, our class held an English class meeting. 【主题】The topic was about how to make good use of the time after class to warm up for exams.
【内容】Contents of class meeting include the fallowing aspects. Firstly, study time is limited--only 40 days away from the entrance examination. Secondly, students’ time allocation is unreasonable. Thirdly, in view of how to make good use of the time after class, the students give a lot of useful suggestions.
【我的观点】I think we should arrange our time reasonably while we review carefully. Only when we relax properly and have a good spirit can we get twice the result with half the effort.
（十）【记录“周游”】假如你是北京市红光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，记述你周末到昭化古城游览的经历，并表达自己的想法和感受。
1. 游览时间：5月12日。
2、游览过程：上午参观年画博物馆，制作年画，购买年画，参观石家大院，欣赏相声。下午坐船游览白龙河，并沿途拍照。品尝各种小吃，并和当地人进行交流，发现当地人很善良友好。 3. 我的感受。
参考词汇：年画yearly painting；石家大院ShijiaYard；小吃snacks；相声 cross talk
Saturday, May 12th Sunny
【总写】I went to the famous ancient town Zhaohua today.
【过程】In the morning, I visited the Yearly Painting Museum and watched how to make yearly paintings. I thought they were so interesting that I bought some for my parents. Then the guide showed us around the Shijia Yard and we enjoyed the cross talk there. In the afternoon, we took a boat tour along the Bailong River and took many beautiful photos. After that, we tried different kinds of local snacks and communicated with the local people. They were really nice and friendly!
【感受】I think ancient town Zhaohua is a wonderful old town which is worth visiting. I believe more and more people will go there and enjoy the beautiful scenes and interesting Chinese cultures.
（十一）【记录“班级故事”】在成长过程中，我们经常会面临来自老师的提醒、责备或批评。有的同学不理解，有的甚至会做出过激的反应。5月13日，是星期四，在你们班发生了一件事，这件事让你印象深刻。请你用英语写一篇发生在班上的事情的日记。
Thursday, May 13th, 2021 Fine
【故事】I still remember the day when I had an English class. Li Ming read a novel instead of listening to the teacher in the English class. Our English teacher reminded him several times to listen to her carefully, but he still did so, the teacher had to take away his book. To my surprise, Li Ming stood up suddenly and rushed out of the classroom without any words. Our teacher stopped him, and took him back to the classroom. After class, our teacher had a talk with him, he realized his mistake. Finally, he picked up his courage and said sorry to our English teacher.
【感想】In my opinion, it is important to stay calm when our teachers point out our mistakes, because it’s good for our development.
（十二）【记录“毕业感言”】 时光飞逝，转眼之间你就要毕业了。高中三年，你在学习、生活等方面取得了很大的进步，这些成绩的背后有老师的教诲、家长的鼓励，同学的帮助，还有……。现在想来你一定很感谢他们。请选择一个人，写一篇英文日记，
May 7, 2021 Friday Sunny
【总写】Today, I would like to say “thank you” to my English teacher.
【原因】He's a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us after school. He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He's kind but strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know. He often tells us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help.
【收获】I think he is the best in my mind. I will remember him forever.

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