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读后续写情节构思之亲情类和助人类（教师版）
材料主题 基本续写走向
1 亲情类 为亲人付出甚至做出牺牲
2 助人类 给他人提供无私帮助
（一）亲情类
In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch(胸针) in a shop window that set his heart racing. But the price－five dollars－was too high for Reuben Earle. Fivedollars would buy almost a week's food for his family.
Reuben couldn't ask his father for the money. Everything his fathermade through fishing went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful,she was the center of the home, the glue that held it together. Thehousework was never-ending, and she struggled to support their five childrenbut she was happy as her family and their well-being wereall she cared about.
Nevertheless, he opened the shop's weathered (风化的)door and went inside, Standing proud and straight in his flour－sack(面粉袋改做的) shirt and washed－out trousers, he told the shopkeeper what he wanted, adding, "But Idon't have the money right now. Can you please hold it for some time
"I'll try," the shopkeeper smiled. "Peoplearound here don't usually have that kind of money to spend on things. It shouldkeep for a while."
Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out.
He would raise the money and not tell anybody, for hethought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the soundof hammering from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he couldraise money by selling the used nail bags(装钉子的麻袋). People built their own buildings in Bay Roberts, using nailsbought in bags from a local factory. Sometimes the used nail bags were thrownaway at the construction site, and Reuben knew he could sellthem back to the factory for five cents a piece.
That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty sodatin.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph l: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.
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Paragraph 2: Finally, the time came!
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Activity 1: Read the passage and underline at least 5 key words you think important and useful.
Brooch; five dollars; nail bags; five cents; housework; soda tin; raise the money...
Activity 2: Read and find out the elements.
Reading Task 阅读任务
who 人物 Reuben; Dora; the shopkeeper;
rwhen 时间 In 1945
where 地点 Construction sites; the shop; home;
what 事件 Reuben raised five dollars.
why 原因 He wanted to buy a brooch for his mom.
how 方式 He collected nail bags and sold them back to the factory.
theme 主题 亲情类
ending 结局 Reuben 攒够了钱买了胸针给妈妈，妈妈很感动。
Activity 3: Predict the possible plots.
Paragraph l: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.
(
续写情节
1
：
He searched almost every construction site nearby for nail bags and sold them back to the factory for five cents a piece.
)
(
续写情节
2
：
Though tired every day, Reuben was happy to see more and more in his soda tin.
)
Paragraph 2: Finally, the time came!
(
续写情节
3
：
He raised five dollars and rushed to the shop.
)
(
续写情节
4
：
He gave the brooch to his mother and Dora was moved.
)
补充：翻译小练习(possible sentences)
1. 鲁本又冷又饿，在街上徘徊，小心翼翼地寻找指甲袋。
Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully.
2. 尽管他感到筋疲力尽，但他仍然坚持这个计划。
Exhausted and tired as he felt, he still stuck to the plan.
3. 商店橱窗里的胸针提醒他，他所做的是值得的。
It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile.
4. 经过长时间的努力，他终于成功了。
After a long time of hard work, he made it eventually.
5. 他拿出汽水罐，把硬币倒出来，开始数。
He took out the soda tin, poured the coins out and began to count.
6. 五美元！他的努力得到了回报！
Five dollars! His hard work paid off!
7. 鲁本拿着汽水罐，冲到商店去买胸针。
Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch.
8. 当他拿到漂亮的胸针时，他冲进前门，把它放在朵拉和阿普斯的手里。
The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora&apos’s hand.
9. 多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。
Never had Dora received such a gift.
10. 她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
（二）助人类
Christmas Day was coming. I was just a kid then, and my big sister told me there was no Santa Claus. I fled to my Grandma because she would be straight with me. I knew Grandma always told me the truth. Grandma was home, and I told her everything. She was ready for me. “No Santa Claus !” She shouted. “Ridiculous! Don’t believe it.” That rumor has been going around for years, and it makes me mad, plain mad.
“Now, put on your coat, and let’s go.”
“Go where, Grandma ” I asked. “Where” turned out to be Kerby’s General Store, the one store in town that had a little bit of just about everything. As we walked through its doors, Grandma handed me ten dollars. “Take this money,” she said, “and buy something for someone who needs it. I’ll wait for you in the car.” Then she turned and walked out of Kerby’s.
I was only eight years old. I’d often gone shopping with my mother, but never had I shopped for anything all by myself. The store seemed big and crowded, full of people competing to finish their Christmas shopping. For a few moments I just stood there, confused, holding that ten-dollar bill, wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker, who was a kid with bad breath and messy hair. He sat right behind me in Mrs Pollock’s grade-two class. Bobby Decker didn’t have a coat. I knew that because he never went out for recess(放假) during the winter. His mother always wrote a note, telling the teacher that he had a cough, but we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn’t have a cough, and he didn’t have a coat. I would buy Bobby Decker a coat! I settled on a red one, which looked really warm, and he would like that.
“Is this a Christmas present for someone ” the lady behind the counter asked kindly, as I laid my ten dollars down. “Yes.”
The nice lady smiled at me, put the coat in a bag and wished me a Merry Christmas.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
_________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it
_________________________________________________________________________________
Activity 1: Read the passage and underline at least 5 key words you think important and useful.
the coat; present; in the car; the truth; Santa Claus; Grandma; a kid; during the winter...
Activity 2: Read and find out the elements.
Reading Task 阅读任务
who 人物 I; Grandma; Bobby;
rwhen 时间 Before Christmas
where 地点 the store; home;
what 事件 I bought a coat for Bobby.
why 原因 Grandma asked me to buy sth. for sb. in need.
how 方式 Grandma drove me to the store.
theme 主题 助人类
ending 结局 祖母和我一起把礼物悄悄送给Bobby.
Activity 3: Predict the possible plots.
Paragraph l: That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
(
续写情节
1
：
Grandma asked me who I had bought the coat for and I told her about Bobby Decker and then she drove me to his house.
)
(
续写情节
2
：
I secretly put the present at Bobby Decker’s front door, rang the bell and quickly got in the car in the distance.
)
Paragraph 2: Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it
(
续写情节
3
：
Bobby unwrapped the package and was excited to find a coat in it.
)
(
续写情节
4
：
I realized the truth that everyone can be Santa Claus as long as he is willing to help others.
)
补充：翻译小练习
1.她在信上写了“致鲍比，来自圣诞老人”的信，之后她开车送我去了博比·德克尔的家，并解释说我是圣诞老人的正式助手之一。
She wrote “To Bobby, From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker’s house, explaining I was officially one of Santa’s helpers.
2.奶奶把车停在博比家的街上，我深吸了一口气，冲向他的前门。
Grandma parked down the street form Bobby’s house, and I took a deep breath, and dashed for his front door.
3.见没有其他人注意到我们，我放下圣诞礼物，敲了敲他的门铃，然后我和奶奶躲在车里。
Seeing no other people notice us, I put the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car.
4.鲍比·德克尔出去了。
Out went Bobby Decker.
5.看到包里的外套，他看起来很惊讶，然后叫妈妈出去。
Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out.
6.听到他们对圣诞老人说“谢谢”后，我为自己所做的一切感到非常自豪。
After hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Claus, I felt very proud of what I had done.
7.那时我决定永远做圣诞老人的助手。
At that time I decided to be Santa’s helper forever.
8.就在那天晚上，我意识到一个事实：心中没有圣诞节的人，永远不会在树下找到圣诞节。
It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.
参考范文（一）：
Paragraph 1: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan. Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully. To save more money, he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning. Exhausted and tired as he felt, he still stuck to the plan. It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile. After a long time of hard work, he made it eventually.
Paragraph 2: Finally the time came! He took out the soda tin, poured the coins out and began to count. Five dollars! His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora&apos’s hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in
参考范文（二）：
Paragraph 1:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper. She wrote “To Bobby, From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker’s house, explaining I was officially one of Santa’s helpers.Grandma parked down the street form Bobby’s house, and I took a deep breath, and dashed for his front door. Seeing no other people notice us, I put the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car.

Paragraph 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it opened. Out went Bobby Decker. Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out. After hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Claus, I felt very proud of what I had done. At that time I decided to be Santa’s helper forever. It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.
读后续写情节构思之亲情类和助人类（学生版）
材料主题 基本续写走向
1 亲情类 为亲人付出甚至做出牺牲
2 助人类 给他人提供无私帮助
（一）亲情类
In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch(胸针) in a shop window that set his heart racing. But the price－five dollars－was too high for Reuben Earle. Fivedollars would buy almost a week's food for his family.
Reuben couldn't ask his father for the money. Everything his fathermade through fishing went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful,she was the center of the home, the glue that held it together. Thehousework was never-ending, and she struggled to support their five childrenbut she was happy as her family and their well-being wereall she cared about.
Nevertheless, he opened the shop's weathered (风化的)door and went inside, Standing proud and straight in his flour－sack(面粉袋改做的) shirt and washed－out trousers, he told the shopkeeper what he wanted, adding, "But Idon't have the money right now. Can you please hold it for some time
"I'll try," the shopkeeper smiled. "Peoplearound here don't usually have that kind of money to spend on things. It shouldkeep for a while."
Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out.
He would raise the money and not tell anybody, for hethought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the soundof hammering from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he couldraise money by selling the used nail bags(装钉子的麻袋). People built their own buildings in Bay Roberts, using nailsbought in bags from a local factory. Sometimes the used nail bags were thrownaway at the construction site, and Reuben knew he could sellthem back to the factory for five cents a piece.
That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty sodatin.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph l: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Finally, the time came!
___________________________________________________________________________
Activity 1: Read the passage and underline at least 5 key words you think important and useful.
___________________________________________________________________________
Activity 2: Read and find out the elements.
Reading Task 阅读任务
who 人物
rwhen 时间
where 地点
what 事件
why 原因
how 方式
theme 主题
ending 结局
Activity 3: Predict the possible plots.
Paragraph l: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.
(
续写情节
1
：
_________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
)
(
续写情节
2
：
_________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
)
Paragraph 2: Finally, the time came!
(
续写情节
3
：
_________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
)
(
续写情节
4
：
_________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
)
补充：翻译小练习(possible sentences)
1. 鲁本又冷又饿，在街上徘徊，小心翼翼地寻找指甲袋。
___________________________________________________________________________
2. 尽管他感到筋疲力尽，但他仍然坚持这个计划。
___________________________________________________________________________
3. 商店橱窗里的胸针提醒他，他所做的是值得的。
___________________________________________________________________________
4. 经过长时间的努力，他终于成功了。
___________________________________________________________________________
5. 他拿出汽水罐，把硬币倒出来，开始数。
___________________________________________________________________________
6. 五美元！他的努力得到了回报！
___________________________________________________________________________
7. 鲁本拿着汽水罐，冲到商店去买胸针。
___________________________________________________________________________
8. 当他拿到漂亮的胸针时，他冲进前门，把它放在朵拉和阿普斯的手里。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
9. 多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。
___________________________________________________________________________
10. 她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
___________________________________________________________________________
续写答题卡：
Paragraph l: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Finally, the time came!
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（二）助人类
Christmas Day was coming. I was just a kid then, and my big sister told me there was no Santa Claus. I fled to my Grandma because she would be straight with me. I knew Grandma always told me the truth. Grandma was home, and I told her everything. She was ready for me. “No Santa Claus !” She shouted. “Ridiculous! Don’t believe it.” That rumor has been going around for years, and it makes me mad, plain mad.
“Now, put on your coat, and let’s go.”
“Go where, Grandma ” I asked. “Where” turned out to be Kerby’s General Store, the one store in town that had a little bit of just about everything. As we walked through its doors, Grandma handed me ten dollars. “Take this money,” she said, “and buy something for someone who needs it. I’ll wait for you in the car.” Then she turned and walked out of Kerby’s.
I was only eight years old. I’d often gone shopping with my mother, but never had I shopped for anything all by myself. The store seemed big and crowded, full of people competing to finish their Christmas shopping. For a few moments I just stood there, confused, holding that ten-dollar bill, wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker, who was a kid with bad breath and messy hair. He sat right behind me in Mrs Pollock’s grade-two class. Bobby Decker didn’t have a coat. I knew that because he never went out for recess(放假) during the winter. His mother always wrote a note, telling the teacher that he had a cough, but we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn’t have a cough, and he didn’t have a coat. I would buy Bobby Decker a coat! I settled on a red one, which looked really warm, and he would like that.
“Is this a Christmas present for someone ” the lady behind the counter asked kindly, as I laid my ten dollars down. “Yes.”
The nice lady smiled at me, put the coat in a bag and wished me a Merry Christmas.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
_________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it
_________________________________________________________________________________
Activity 1: Read the passage and underline at least 5 key words you think important and useful.
___________________________________________________________________________
Activity 2: Read and find out the elements.
Reading Task 阅读任务
who 人物
rwhen 时间
where 地点
what 事件
why 原因
how 方式
theme 主题
ending 结局
Activity 3: Predict the possible plots.
Paragraph l: That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
(
续写情节
1
：
_________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
)
(
续写情节
2
：
_________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
)
Paragraph 2: Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it
(
续写情节
3
：
_________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
)
(
续写情节
4
：
_________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
)
补充：翻译小练习
1.她在信上写了“致鲍比，来自圣诞老人”的信，之后她开车送我去了博比·德克尔的家，并解释说我是圣诞老人的正式助手之一。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
2.奶奶把车停在博比家的街上，我深吸了一口气，冲向他的前门。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
3.见没有其他人注意到我们，我放下圣诞礼物，敲了敲他的门铃，然后我和奶奶躲在车里。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
4.鲍比·德克尔出去了。
___________________________________________________________________________
5.看到包里的外套，他看起来很惊讶，然后叫妈妈出去。
___________________________________________________________________________
6.听到他们对圣诞老人说“谢谢”后，我为自己所做的一切感到非常自豪。
___________________________________________________________________________
7.那时我决定永远做圣诞老人的助手。
___________________________________________________________________________
8.就在那天晚上，我意识到一个事实：心中没有圣诞节的人，永远不会在树下找到圣诞节。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
续写答题卡：
Paragraph 1:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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