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Continuation Writing
（读后续写）
Continuation Writing
（读后续写）
How to write it
what to write
What is continuation writing
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真题再现
（2016 浙江)
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! ”she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
Continuation Writing
（读后续写）
How to write it
what to write
What is continuation writing
What is continuation writing
Step Ⅰ: What is continuation writing
Step Ⅰ: What is continuation writing
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Continuation Writing
（读后续写）
How to write it
what to write
What is continuation writing
Step II: What to write in the continuation writing
1.Read it for main idea and writing purpose
（归纳文本大意，推断写作意图）
Step II: What to write in the continuation writing
1.Read it for main idea and writing purpose
（归纳文本大意，推断写作意图）
续写部分要在文本大意和写作意图上与所给短文保持一致。
（1）如何归纳文本大意：
提取记叙文六要素：when, where, who,why, how, what
弄清楚：什么人/物 ；什么时间/地点；做了什么事，最终结果如何。
（2）如何推断写作意图：
本文的中心话题是什么？
作者向读者传达了有关话题的什么情和理？或让读者有何种感受？
●Beginning
续写原文
主 题
Para. 1
Para. 2
记叙文结构图如下，故事情节发展围绕主题发展，包含开端，
发展，高潮，尾声和结束部分。
依据原文的main idea 和作者的writing purpose，先预测Ending 。
根据Para. 1和Para. 2所给句，预测Para. 1结尾部分，即
最后按照时间顺序，以主要人物动作和心理线索设定续写情节
Ending
已给出
已给出
续写情节
续写情节
原文情节
2.Outline the possible plots or events in each paragraph
（构思续写情节，搭建结构支架）
3.Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns
（运用句型模板，落笔成文）
形容词
“with”的复合结构
非谓语动词
情感描写的表达
点击输入大标题
3.Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns
（运用句型模板，落笔成文）
主要角色
描写
两弯似蹙非蹙罥烟眉，一双似喜非喜含情目。态生两靥之愁，娇袭一身之病。
粉面含春威不露，丹唇未启笑先闻。
点击输入大标题
3.Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns
（运用句型模板，落笔成文）
主要角色
描写
语言
动作
外貌
心理
活动
Continuation Writing
（读后续写）
How to write it
what to write
What is continuation writing
真题再现
（2016 浙江)
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! ”she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
Step III: How to write it
1.Read it for main idea and writing purpose
（归纳文本大意，推断写作意图）
Main idea:
Writing purpose:
After quarreling with her husband Tom, Jane
was lost in the forest for three days but
finally survived .
To show readers how Jane survived
in the forest
Jane lay down
What did Jane do
Jane lay down
desperate, exhausted,afraid
memories with her husband crowded in her mind
courageous/regretful
made a fire and found berries to eat
hopeful
fell fast asleep
a little settled
How did Jane feel
2.Outline the possible plots or events in each paragraph(Para.1)
（构思续写情节，搭建结构支架）
Step 2 Outline the possible plots or events in each paragraph( Para. 2)
What did Jane do
How did Jane feel
walked along the stream
hopeful
arrived at the open area, prayed, waited
patient
heard Tom's voice
surprized and joyful
met again
(Tom's reaction :hugged Jane tightly)
excited and relieved
2.Outline the possible plots or events in each paragraph(Para.2)
（构思续写情节，搭建结构支架）
3.Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns
（运用句型模板，落笔成文）
习作升华
优秀作文
范文呈现
Ⅰ
Ⅱ
Ⅲ
Now let's do the continuation writing of this passage!
Writing time!
Tip: Language database for describing feelings
positive feelings
His/Her eyes danced with joy and sweetness.
Her face beamed and her bright smile lit up the surroundings.
A broad smile spread over her face.
Her eyes twinkled with excitement.
Tears of excitement/joy welled up in his/her eyes.
Ⅰ习作升华
I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.
（恐惧）
I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.（害怕）
As the result of it, she was suddenly thrown into
a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. (绝望）
with tears streaming down her face/cheeks
She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.（悲伤）
She was choked by fear./ Fear slowly crept upon her. （害怕）
Tip: Language database for describing feelings
negative feelings
Ⅰ习作升华
Ⅱ优秀作文
Ⅲ 范文呈现
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperately and extremely exhuasted, Jane lay down near a stone, with tears streaming down her face. Suddenly, the memories with her husband crowded in, which made her take the courage to cope with the terrible situation. Feeling a bit settled and hopeful, she managed to make a fire at once.After that, She hurried to find some berries to eat when there was still dim light. Soon Jane couldn't resist the nap and fell fast asleep.
One possible version for Para. 1
Ⅲ范文呈现
One possible version for Para. 2
It was daybreak and Jane woke up. After eating some berries and drinking water, she walked along the stream, hoping to find her husband soon. To her great joy, she finally arrived at an open area. Praying that the helicoper would come back again, Jane sat down waiting patiently.After what semmed a long time, she could hear a voice somewhere at a distance. With joy welling up inside her, She struggled to her feet and shouted,“I'm here！” Seeing Jane, Tom was also wild with joy and rushed to hug his wife tightly.
Homework:
1.Please correct your composition again.
2.Remember these useful sentences for your continuation writing.
●1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
2. His eyes twinkled with pleasure.
3. I was wild with joy.
4. His wife’s disease took away his appetite.
5. She wore a shining smile on her face.
6. Her smile lit up the whole room.
7.Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.
Thank You!

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