资源简介

模板：
一、环境描写（恶劣）
二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）
三、转机描写——描写声音传来或看见了什么
四、情绪描写（希望+努力）
五、脱险描写
六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）
七、主旨描写
一、环境描写（恶劣）
自然环境描写——描写波涛汹涌
1. The coastline was hidden behind the roaring waves (汹涌澎湃的浪涛)with almost no one to be seen.
2. As I floated on, a huge wave (一个巨浪) whistled (呼啸而来)and approached us.
3. The big wind roared through our ears (在耳边咆哮), and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther.
4. All my senses told me that a big wave was about to come.(即将来临)
5. A powerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wave was coming towards us. (靠近我们)
6. The fierce waves showed no sign of dying down(没有消退的迹象).
7. The sea was rough(汹涌的；风浪大的) that day and it was difficult to handle(控制) the bodyboard.
鲨鱼等：
A gray triangle fin sticking up through the water, heading right for her.
It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her.
The shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of razor-sharp teeth.
陆地上：
As splashing raindrops hit the windshield frantically and the skies were overhung with a blanket of grey, I could barely make out the figure in the truck.
雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中，我几乎看不清卡车里的人影。
The water kept rising, as if it would engulf me alive.
水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。
Unfortunately, the water poured in and crept upon my waist.
在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）
wade: 跋涉，蹚（水或淤泥等）Joe leaped out and waded into the flood.
struggle: 艰难地行进；吃力地进行I struggled up the hill with the heavy bags.
struggle to one’s feet 挣扎着站起来
plod:艰难地行走；吃力地
Our horses plodded down the muddy track. 我们的马沿着泥泞小路蹒跚而行。
We plodded on through the rain. 我们冒雨艰难地跋涉。
stagger/ totter/ stumble 蹒跚；踉跄
With jaws clenched, I resolved to keep edging closer, inch by inch.
Mustering up my courage, I pushed the door open with all my might, seized Joe’s arm tightly, and we waddled （蹒跚而行）to the truck by holding each other up.
I stretched out my arms to embrace him, and he patted me on the back slightly to show comfort.
其它：
They were getting drenched by icy water.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。
The heavy rain was violently beating against the window.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。
The rain drummed on the roof of the building.雨不停地击打着房预。
A storm is gathering.一场暴风雨正在酝酿之中。
The furious storm is grumbling outside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。
The storm raged for several hours.猛烈的风暴持续了几个小时。
The wind blows/whistles/howls/picks up/whips through sth/sweeps across sth.
风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……
The icy wind started howling, stinging my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
A flash of lightning lit up the whole sky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。
The sharp claps of thunder pierced the quiet night.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。
The blinding lightning flashed in the sky.天空中眩目的闪电闪亮。
The bolt of lightning stabs the earth. 一道闪电划过天空。
As it thundered into sight, the roar of the wave was deafening.
当它雷鸣般进入视线时，海浪的轰鸣声震耳欲聋。
巨浪拍打海岸| huge waves lash/break on the shore
猛烈拍打| the waves pound/crash/smash against the pier
细浪拍击船舷| small waves slap against the side of the boat
波浪涌向海滩| waves roll/surge onto the beach
轰鸣| the sea roars/rumbles/thunders
波涛汹涌| the sea swells/churns
天空和海洋融为一体| the sky and the ocean melt into each other
二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）
——描写疲倦/寒冷
1. Drown in the sea, I lost my balance (失去了平衡) but seized the bodyboard tightly.
2. Time passing us, tiredness engulfed (包围了) us with my feet stiff/numb (僵硬/麻木)and shivering.
3. Exhausted as we were (尽管很累), we didn’t stop. Gritting out teeth, we kept swimming.
4. After what seemed a century, I felt extremely fatigued (非常累) while swimming hard to keep myself afloat(漂浮着的).
5. Casting a look at Tom, I could tell he was also apparently worn-out(明显地精 疲力尽了).
6. Fingers numbed by the chilly water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing.
7. She clasped the baby to her bosom in the biting/cutting/piercing/sharp wind.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。
8. The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife/needles.
寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。
9. Her teeth were chattering with cold.她冷得牙齿直打颤。
10. He was huddled into his coat, his face blue with cold.他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。
11. Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.
——描写害怕
1. I took a deep breath and swallowed hard (害怕地咽了口吐沫).
2. Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless (无力的) as if we were broken tiny boats at the mercy of strong wave.(simile)
3. Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind, which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright (难以控制地发抖).
4. Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body.(在身体涌动)
5. As time ticked by, fear crept upon my heart(爬上我心头) and I could hardly tell how long I could plough on (前行).
6. The thought of hopelessness sent shivers down my spine(让我后脊背发凉).
7. I was flooded with a sense of horror(被恐惧感淹没).
8. Seeing this, I felt my fear growing/increasing(剧增) inside.
9. I felt a wave of anxiety(一阵焦虑) swept over my body (袭来).
10. A chill feeling crept up her spine.
其它恐慌：
Tears of frustration and horror gushing from my eyes, I felt I had sunk into hopelessness.
A sense of terror sweeping through my body, I shouted in panic, “Help! Help!”
Seized by a strong sense of fright, I struggled to shove（猛推）the door again.
The hairs on the back of my neck prickled with dread and I was drenched in sweat. （汗毛倒竖；湿透）
Swallowed by a wave of despair, I crossed my fingers, closed my eyes and prayed in a shivering voice.
Trembling like a leaf, the car was ready to be flooded away at any time, which refrained me from moving a single inch.
——描写挣扎努力
1. Tom looked thoughtful (若有所思)
2. “We need to think out a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head(绞尽脑汁)
3. ...,We swam tooth and nail(全力以赴地).
4. We spared no effort to(不遗余力地) to swim towards the shore.
5. We exchanged a determined look(互换了坚定的神情) , then ploughed on (继续前行) at an incredible speed(难以置信的速度).
6. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake.
三、转机描写——描写声音传来或看见了什么
1. A distant sound reached our ears.(传入耳朵)
2. A soft, reedy(似笛声的) sound floated across the sea.(漂浮在海上)
3. The sound of the boat echoed in our ears.(在我们耳内回响)
4. At that moment, a shrill whistle(汽笛声) ripped the air (划破天空).
5. When we were at a loss of what to do, there were rasping (刺耳的) shouts(喊叫声) rising from the distance (从远处升起).
6. A ship's horn sounded (喇叭声响起).
7. In sheer desperation(在绝望中), I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance.
8. After a long time, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help.
9. Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out.
10. Just then, my mind raced – why not call 911 and Joe
四、情绪描写（希望+努力）
——描写如释重负
1. Ensuring their safety, I felt a surge of triumph.(感到一阵胜利的喜悦)
2. Hearing the comforting news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
3. It thrilled us (听到...很高兴) to hear the good news.
4. On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinning merrily at each other.
5. Smiling in relief (如释重负地微笑), I felt a rush of pride(感到一阵自豪).
6. Overjoyed(狂喜) to see a boat coming to our rescue, Tom and I breathed a sigh of relief(如释重负地松了口气)
7. Stiff from keeping in one position for…hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies.
8. As if clutching at straws, I dialed the number again and again.
9. His words reignited the flame of hope in my heart
五、脱险描写
The boat finally reached us and took all of us back to the shore.
Yelling at the top of his lung, Joe tried to soothe me and convince me that it was the best way to escape the danger.
With all his might, he stabbed it in the mouth with his surfboard, scaring the monster away.
六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）
When we pictured what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness etched / was written on my face.
Sighing in relief, I couldn’t stop thinking about the whole event. I knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for any longer.
七、主旨描写
1. It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.
2. For the first time since…,one’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
3. Only then did I realize that it was Joe who had been caring for me through thick and thin.
4. Sobbing in relief, I was overwhelmed by waves of guilt and remorse. I murmured sorry, reflecting that I should have taken his warning seriously.
5. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.
Passage 1风雨中助人
We had to wait.
场景一：
The icy wind started howling, stinging my face.
The sea was rough(汹涌的；风浪大的) that day and it was difficult to handle(控制) the bodyboard.
Fingers numbed by the chilly water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing.
场景二：
“We need to think out a way!” I cast a encouraging eye at Moises and muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head(绞尽脑汁)
We exchanged a determined look(互换了坚定的神情) , then ploughed on (继续前行) at an incredible speed(难以置信的速度).
场景三：
Suddenly, I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance.
/ out of nowhere, some boats with lifeguards on them came into view.
/ Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Moris yelled at the top of his lung.
场景四：
In split seconds, the boats finally reached us and took all of us back to the shore. The two kids were sent to the hospital without delay.
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That night, word came from the hospital that the two people were in good condition.
场景五：感叹+虚拟
When we pictured what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness etched / was written on my face. We cannot imagine what would have happened but for the timely appearance of the boats.
/ Sighing in relief, I couldn’t stop thinking about the whole event. I knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for any longer.
The desperation still lingered in my heart that with salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.
场景六：主旨点题
The next morning, all the people I met smiled to me and could not stop praising me. It seemed like a good opportunity to show myself off, but I didn’t mean to. In fact, I was ashamed I had thought about it. It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.
/
Obviously I had done a big deal which is surely a good opportunity to show off. Rather than feel like a hero, I believe anyone who could swim would have done the same thing.
其它版本一：
We had to wait. We eagerly hoping for the arrival of the saving boat. The wild wind blew and the freezing sea water clapped our bodies continuously. 30 minutes seemed much longer as we just helplessly floated on the boundless sea. After a long time, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help. The boat finally reached us and took all of us back to the shore. The two children were immediately sent to the nearest hospital.
That night, word came from the hospital that the two people were in good condition. Picturing what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness etched on my face. The next morning, all the people I met smiled to me and could not stop praising me. It seemed like a good opportunity to show myself off, but I didn’t mean to. In fact, I was ashamed I had thought about it. It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.
版本二：
We had to wait. Patting their faces to wake them up, we continuously told them to be strong. After what seemed a century, I felt extremely exhausted while swimming hard to keep myself afloat. Casting a look at Tom, I could tell he was also apparently worn-out. Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of horror surging through my whole body. Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on. But I still shouted in my head: focus. In sheer desperation(在绝望中), I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance. Thank you, Lord. Quite soon, I felt strong arms pull me out of the sea onto the board, and the two kids were sent to the hospital without delay.
That night, word came from the hospital that the two kids were in good condition. Sighing in relief, I couldn’t stop thinking about the whole event. I knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for any longer. Obviously I had done a big deal which is surely a good opportunity to show off. I had expected to experience some sort of sense of wellbeing or greatness, but none of that came. Rather than feel like a hero, I believe anyone who could swim would have done the same thing.
Passage 2 落水被救
“If mum finds out that I'm going to the beach, I'll be in big trouble.” I said to myself softly in a low voice.
I went downstairs slowly and tried to walk casually into the kitchen. As I was walking towards the back door, mum asked without looking up from her “dish-washing”, “Where are you going ” I answered back without hesitation,“ I am going to the garden to play.” After I got out of the kitchen, I breathed a sign of relief. My plan had worked out fine so far. I climbed the fence and jumped onto the muddy field next to my house and started running towards the bus stop at top speed.
After half an hour I was at the beach scanning the crowd for my friends, Jimmy and Bobby. Two young men were racing in the canoes (独木舟). After a while, I saw them near a coconut tree. I ran towards them and got into my swimming trunk (游泳裤). For about an hour, we played volleyball happily.
Suddenly, Bobby hit the ball too hard and the ball fell into the sea. Just as Bobby was going to pick up the ball, the tide came in and carried the ball further and further away from the shore. I wanted to show off my swimming skills so I declared to help get the ball for them.
I dived into the water and started swimming at a steady pace. After swimming for about ten minutes, I became tired but when I saw that the ball was only a few feet away from me, I put in an extra burst of speed. However, just as I was going to get the ball, a very strong current swept the ball further away from me. At that moment, a string of weed (海草)tangled (缠绕) up with my feet and I could not swim properly. I struggled to keep afloat but it was no use. “ If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened,”I thought silently.
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Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled underwater.
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When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed.
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参考范文：
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Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled underwater.
场景一：
Time passing us, tiredness engulfed (包围了) me with my feet stiff/numb (僵硬/麻木)and shivering.
/ Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless (无力的) as if I was broken tiny boats at the mercy of the terrible weed.(simile)
A chill feeling crept up her spine.
/ Tears of frustration and horror gushing from my eyes, I felt I had sunk into hopelessness.
场景二：
“I need to think out a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语).
I told myself I should never give up.
Then I pulled the weed again with great efforts but in vain again.
场景三：
In sheer desperation(在绝望中), I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them.
As if clutching at straws, I shouted at the top of lung.
The men saw me and raced towards me. By the time they reached me, I had been already unconscious.
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When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed.
场景四 ：朋友
It was not until a doctor came into the room that I realized that I was in a hospital. Jimmy and Bobby told me the two young men brought me to the shore and sent me to the hospital.
场景五：关于我
Sighing in relief, I couldn’t stop thinking about the whole event. I knew I would have died if they had not turn up for any longer.
场景六：父母
After a few minutes, my parents with half angry and half worried faces walked in. My parents scolded me for running out of the house secretly but were also glad that I was not seriously injured.
场景七：点题：
I will never forget that terrifying experience. Neither will I ever want to show off again.
版本二：
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Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got putted underwater. I told myself I should never give up. Then I pulled the weed again with great efforts. The weed finally broke. I swam back to the surface to take a deep breath. I saw two young men in canoes, racing each other. I was exhausted and shouted for help. The two men saw me and raced towards me. By the time they reached me, I had been already unconscious.
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When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed. It was not until a doctor came into the room that I realized that I was in a hospital. Jimmy and Bobby told me the two young men brought me to the shore and sent me to the hospital. After a few minutes, my parents with half angry and half worried faces walked in. My parents scolded me for running out of the house secretly but were also glad that I was not seriously injured. I will never forget that terrifying experience. Neither will I ever want to show off again.
Passage 3 水中逃生
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The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue.
场景一：
It rose to their knee, as if it would engulf them alive.
Drenched by icy water, Jason and Andrew had to squirrelled forward inch by inch.
场景二：
Every once in a while, one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level.
Salt stinging(刺痛) their eyes, their teeth were chattering with cold.
An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape.
场景三：
Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
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Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward.
场景一：
Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water.
场景二：
Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walk upright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out. For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
参考范文：
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn’t dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while, one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walk upright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out. For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
Passage 4水中遇险
One possible version
With the water still pouring, Sara began to feel cold. And fear slowly creeps upon her. She looked around, nervous and hopeless, trying to find someplace where she could shelter. Finally, she saw a spot which was higher. In order to keep warm, she held James tightly, with Rosie sitting beside her. There was no one around and it seemed that the whole village had become a large lake. Sara could do nothing but wait for help.
Suddenly, Rosie began to bark, and some noise came from far away. Sara stood up quickly and looked through the direction of the noise. There was light and a boat was coming. Feeling wild with joy, Sara shouted towards them. It turned out to be Tony and others from the village. They told Sara that they were also trapped until soldiers came to help. Sara looked at Tony with relief. She said with a smile, “I’m sorry your birthday present is now under the water. But I guess this will be the most unforgettable birthday for you.”
Passage 5 水中救娃
One possible version
“Something must have gone wrong with him,” I thought to myself. Sure enough, with a closer look, I found the boy waving his hands desperately. I quickly dived into the water, swimming towards the boy at full speed. By the time I reached him, he had sunk to the bottom of the pool, his head hanging down, which filled my heart with fright and concern. I picked the boy up and headed to the poolside, keeping his head above the water.
Having the boy on the floor, I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck. I could tell he had no heartbeat and wasn’t breathing. Every second counted! Without hesitation, I did first aid, giving him mouth-to-mouth breathing and doing CPR as trained. Other guards watching anxiously, I carried on, sweating. Suddenly, a stream of water burst out of his mouth and the boy coughed intensely. Seeing the boy regain consciousness, those around broke into cheers. Exhausted, I sighed with relief. I thought had I accepted that easy position, I would have been nothing but a bystander. I’m happy I didn’t take the easy way out.
Passage 6 水中救妻
It was a rainy November morning .Overcome with anger I knew if I didn't leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As rain came down in sheets, Joe offered to take me to work. I struggled into my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him.
He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes still on the table. "Don't you have enough to do I can take care of myself. "I stormed out, not even kissing him good-bye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut(捷径)。
Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when a heart attack that past spring forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills mounted we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework.
The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhausted after a day of full work, all I wanted was a hot home cooked meal and a good night's sleep. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal(燕爱) for several nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue: He told me he had found out how to save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret.
Ten minutes later, ignoring Joe' s warning I turned off the main route(道路)。I thought it hadn't rained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner water rushed across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldn't risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed. The car began to shake. I got frightened to death when I heard three long honks(喇叭声)。
注意:
1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2）应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. ……
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I screamed that I couldn't make it. ……
分析：
首先一定要弄清这篇文章的要素：when, where, who
Who: I: the writer Joe: my husband
When: On a rainy November morning (rain came down in sheets)
Where: On the way to work (in the shortcut)
然后搞懂what:
What is the story mainly about
On a rainy November morning, I quarreled with my husband Joe for his bad performance in household. Too angry to remember Joe’s warning, I took the shortcut but had my car stuck because of a sudden heavy rain. Faced with this dilemma, I found that there appeared a truck with lights and honks on, so……
续写一般都是：how
思路：最后一句肯定是获救了，并且要和开头照应，确定主题是：丈夫最爱我，虽然不会做家务，所以他是最好的丈夫。（主题不一定多深奥，大部分都是比较浅显的，因此不要想多了）
根据I screamed that I couldn’t make it.可以推测上面是失败的脱险尝试。
根据Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.就有两种文章行文思路：Who is the truck’s driver
司机是陌生人：这种思路下，司机不能作为主人公，一笔带过，辅助说明我的恐慌。
司机就是Joe: 这种思路下，比较好展开，Joe直接救我了，没有多余的笔墨。
下面会提供两种思路下的文章：
素材：本文必然涉及到以下素材：
下水文1：（司机是陌生人的写法）
Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.
1.(司机的描写)The truck’s driver even popped his head out of the window, a look of worry and anger spreading across his face.
2.(我的反应)Just then, my mind raced – why not call 911 and Joe
3. As if clutching the last wish-saving straw, I dialed the number again and again.
4.（丈夫Joe的反应）To my surprise, Joe told me he was just behind the truck in a 911 car and would reach me soon.
5. “Don’t panic. Try to back your car,” exclaimed Joe, his voice kind of trembling yet determined.
6.（结局）However, misfortunes never come alone--the engine didn’t work!
I screamed that I couldn’t make it.
1.(我的绝望) Fingers numbed by the chilly water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing.
2.（转机）Minutes creeping by, suddenly the 911 car came into sight alongside me.
3.（我的激动）My terror soon gave way to excitement and the nearly-extinguished sparks of hope rekindled.
4.（如何获救）They threw a rope at my car, pulling it towards the safe place.
5.Luckily, it didn’t take long before my car was out of danger.
6.（获救后的动作和想法）The rain pouring and the wind roaring, I dashed to Joe and hugged him tightly.
7.（照应主旨）Only then did I realize that it was Joe who had been caring for me through thick and thin.
下水文2：
Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. Peeking through the mounting rain, I struggled to make out the vague figure over there. It was Joe that shouted and waved violently. “Joe, I’m here!” I wound down the window, tears of horror mixed with rain streaming down my face. My car began to shake increasingly wildly. Picturing the road cracked and the car was flooded away, I felt more frightened and sensed death was waiting for me. “Jump out of the car and ran to me!” Joe yelled and got off the truck, waiting for my action.
I screamed that I couldn’t make it. Yelling at the top of his lung, Joe tried to soothe me and convince me that it was the best way to escape the danger. I opened the door and reached out my foot, trying to find a proper land point. After confirming the safety, I inched forward in the muddy water and eventually rushed frantically towards my husband. Joe also ran in my direction, gathered me into his arms and kept patting my back. Sobbing in relief, I was overwhelmed by waves of guilt and remorse. I murmured sorry, reflecting that I should have taken his warning seriously.
下水文3：
Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. Hardly had I realized that someone would rescue me when my once violently bumped heart sank. I could see the driver get off the truck and stumbled towards me with the heavy rain pouring down. Meanwhile, the roaring water seemed to engulf me the next second, so the fright that had been submerged in my heart suddenly resurfaced. “Open the door!” I was shocked to hear the shout of Joe and realized who the warm-hearted stranger was. His words reignited the flame of hope in my heart，but I was still dread of the flood outside.
I screamed that I couldn’t make it. “Believe in me, you can do it!” His determined voice spread across the heavy rain and echoed in my head. Driven by his encouragement, I struggled to push the door with my full strength and submerged by the rapid current. When I was about to be carried away by the water, Joe grabbed my hand and dragged me to the safe place. We were both soaked to the skin. Looking into his deep blue eyes, I burst into tears, tears of remorse. Actually, it was the man right in front of me who understood how to take good care of me.
下水文4：
Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. Little by little, the lights seemed to dim. Off got a man. Upon recognizing the man was Joe, I couldn’t help restraining my excitement. “Honey, don’t be frightened! I'm throwing a thick rope, with which you can get out of the dilemma." He shouted affectionately. I did as he instructed, opening the door, slipping in the water and walking straight toward him, unafraid of surging water. Everything was going well until a powerful-looking wave approached me. I lost my balance but seized the rope tightly. Time passing, tiredness engulfed me with my feet stiff and shivering.
I screamed that I couldn’t make it. My lips quivered, big tears rolling down cheeks. Confronted with this situation, Joe constantly comforted me to calm down. Actually, the torrent was indeed temporary, so I gritted out my teeth and kept moving forward slowly and cautiously. The instant I grabbed hold of his hand, I struggle to throw myself at him. Joe patted me and sighed in great relief. I apologized to him for my fault, then we grinned merrily at each other. Poorly as Joe performed in doing housework, my safety was always his priority. There are lees to every wine, but rescuing me tooth and nail in the shortcut makes him my perfect husband.
原题参考范文：
Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. It was Joe! I couldn’t help bursting into tears. Joe shouted to me not to be frightened. Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him. I opened the door, grabbed it and inched out. However, a sudden fall left me in the rushing water. I struggled to my feet, only to find a branch blocking the way right in front of me.
I screamed that I couldn’t make it. Joe, however, remained calm! He urged me to take one step at a time and assured me I could make it. I moved forward slowly and cautiously before I fell into his arms. Sobbing against his chest, I apologized that I shouldn’t have taken the shortcut. Joe patted me saying his primary concern was my safety. Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework.
Passage 7 水中自救
Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot.
Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror.
1. 确定主题：水中遇险自救。
2. 时空变化：时空变化不大，霎时之间发生的险情。
3. 续写难点：具体的细节描写与心理活动。
下水续写
Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot.
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1. What was that She wondered. A sea fish
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2. Before she could get on the surfboard, it bumped her in the foot once again.
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3. She suddenly had the feeling that an enormous fish, bigger than her, was circling around her.
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4. A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thought of the joke Uncle Mark played on her.
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5. And then Betty saw it: a gray triangle fin sticking up through the water, heading right for her.
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6. It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her.
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7. For a split second, her heart practically skipped a beat.
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Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror.
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1. Hearing the terrible scream for help, Uncle Mark instantly realized that something bad was happening.
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2. Without thinking, he swam as quickly as he could towards Betty and yelled, “Get out! ...”
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3. But Betty seemed stuck, too scared to move.
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4.At the very moment, the shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of razor-sharp teeth.
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5. With all his might, Uncle Mark stabbed it in the mouth with his surfboard, scaring the monster away.
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6. And then he grabbed hold of Betty’s arm and dragged her to the beach.
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7. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.
Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot. What was that She wondered. A sea fish Before she could get on the surfboard, it bumped her in the foot once again. She suddenly had the feeling that an enormous fish, bigger than her, was circling around her. A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thought of the joke Uncle Mark played on her. And then Betty saw it: a gray triangle fin sticking up through the water, heading right for her. It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her. For a split second, her heart practically skipped a beat.
Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror. Hearing the terrible scream for help, Uncle Mark instantly realized that something bad was happening. Without thinking, he swam as quickly as he could towards Betty and yelled, “Get out! ...” But Betty seemed stuck, too scared to move. At the very moment, the shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of razor-sharp teeth. With all his might, Uncle Mark stabbed it in the mouth with his surfboard, scaring the monster away. And then he grabbed hold of Betty’s arm and dragged her to the beach. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.
Passage 8暴雨中救人脱困
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At that moment, they had to take action and get out. They shouted at the top of their voice, but no one could hear them. They began to worry and were convinced they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off one of her clothes and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull her car out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others.
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When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her. She asked Kathy what had happened. Kathy explained, “I made a terrible mistake. But for others’ help, I couldn’t have been home for the night.” When asked what she would do when someone had difficulty, Kathy answered immediately that she would do anything to help others because today’s experience turned out to be a great lesson for her.
Passage 9 漂筏遇险
I never pictured my family on a whitewater rafting(漂筏) vacation in Colorado. We had tried rafting several times before with instructors and guides. All of us liked it! I come from a family of excellent athletes, and I sometimes have to work hard at holding my own. I didn't even mind when my sister, Marta, who is fourteen, kept correcting my technique. Because she's three years older, Marta believes it's her mission in life to make sure I do everything perfectly. “Nina, hold your paddle(桨) this way. Nina, plant your feet firmly,” she corrects. Honestly, sometimes she's full of herself, although I guess she means well.
That morning, Dad had us gather our equipment, as we had learned. He then took us through his checklist. Only Dad could read his checklist because his handwriting was so hard to read. “Paddles-check, helmets-check, life jackets-check, buckets-check,” until everything was accounted for. Then we boarded our rubber raft for our trip and headed down the beautiful Colorado River.
Mom had mapped out our route. It felt great to paddle together with everyone else. Dad and I sat in the rear (尾部) of the raft. Mom and Marta sat in the front. From time to time, waves beat against the sides of the raft, spraying water in our faces. All of a sudden, our raft came to a complete stop. “What's wrong ” I asked, hoping I didn't sound nearly as anxious as I felt. “Yikes!” exclaimed Mom. “We're stuck on some rocks!” “Maybe a river guide will come by and help.” suggested Marta. However, there wasn't a soul in sight. She tried shouting, “HELLO, OUT THERE!” All we heard back was an echo.
“Don't worry. I know what we can do,” said Dad. “It is the front of the raft that is stuck, so let's all sit in the rear. Our weight will probably get the raft off the rocks.” Cautiously, Mom and Marta moved to the rear. Nothing happened.
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Paragraph1: My heart sank.
1. Nervous and anxious, I began to complain about what had happened.
2. “Come on - where's your sense of adventure（冒险） ” Dad and Mom stroked my head and kept me calm.
3. However, my sister, Marta, who was sitting across, gave me a long hard stare with an air of accusation（责备）and then turned to address（对人说）me in an aggressive voice,
4. “Nina, Act your age! It's no use complaining. High on the agenda is to find a way out.”
5. With these acid（刻薄的）remarks, she advised that all of us move to the front of the rubber raft.
6. We moved to the front cautiously as she instructed us, but still with no success.
7. After that, we made all vain attempts to get the raft off the rocks, feeling in a state of absolute（绝对的）terror / desperately hopeless.
Paragraph2: Suddenly I hit on an idea.
1. Pointing to the river, I started shouting with excitement.
2. "Dad, Dad... the river is actually shallow. Why don't we push it off the rocks "
3. Father, absorbed in his plan, looked at the water with doubt and jumped down, nodding to me with admiration.
4. Off the boat we jumped into the cold water, which we accommodated to soon, and pushed it with great efforts.
5. After what seemed ages, we got out of trouble and continued the great trip with lots of laughs.
6. What is worth mentioning is that Marta changed her attitude toward me after the experience.

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