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书面表达专项突破（二）
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(一)
Dear Tom,
Haven't seen you for ages.Glad to hear from you.
You asked me what I would do in my summer holiday. Here are my plans. At the beginning of the
holiday, wanting to be relaxed, I will have a good rest. Then I will go to some interesting places because I want to do what I like freely. After that I shall pay a visit to my grandparents because I miss them very much. Of course I will read some good books to improve myself. I am sure that I will enjoy myself during the holiday.
I am looking forward to my summer holiday. I hope you can have a wonderful holiday.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
（二）
Dear Sue,
How is your life recently I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.
I am writing to you because you saved my life. I was hit by a taxi on my way to school. Thanks to your help, I was saved. You sent me to the hospital right away and called my family. Without your help, I couldn't be standing here now. It's so kind of you to help me.
Thank you again for what you have done. I hope to have the chance to express my thanks. I hope I can
meet you sometime and express my thanks in person.
All the best!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
（三）
Dear Chairman,
I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of joining the Chinese and western cultural exchange club.
My name is Li Hua and I'm 15. One of my reasons for applying is that I like English and I am interested in western culture. The other reason is that I hope to make some friends in the municating with people is my strength. Besides, I also want to know more about the difference between Chinese and western culture.
I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
实战演练
(一)
假如你是某学生杂志社的编辑Diana，收到了读者Steve的一封来信，信中倾诉了他目前的烦恼。请根据提示内容，给Steve写一封回信。
提示：
与人交流 课上参与小组讨论，表达自已的想法;课间和同学交谈
表达善意 主动问候同学;对同学友好；帮助同学
参加活动 积极参加班级活动(例如：运动会、歌咏比赛等)
参考词汇：小组讨论group work 表达express
要求：1.词数：80-10词；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Diana,
I just came to a new school. And I can't get on well with my new classmates...What should I do
Dear Steve,
Best wishes,
Diana
Dear Steve,
Your letter came to me this morning.
I have been thinking about the question you wrote in the letter. In my opinion, first you should be active in group work in class to express your ideas and talk with your classmates at break. If you want to get on well with your classmates, don’t forget to say hello when you meet them. It is also very important for you to be friendly and helpful when they are in trouble. Besides, you need to take part in all kinds of
after-class activities, such as sports meetings, foot-ball games and singing competitions. I am sure you will soon make many friends.
So, do you think they are useful I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.
Best wishes.
Diana
（二）
假定你是李华，现在给在上海的Smith先生写一封感谢信，感谢他曾经花很多时间辅导你英语口语。多亏了他的辅导，你在全市英语口语竞赛中获得冠军。Smith先生准备要到你校访问，你非常高兴。词数100左右。
Dear Mr.Smith,
How is your stay in Shanghai
I am writing to you because I want to tell you a piece of good news that I won the first place in the Spoken English Competition of our city. Thanks to your help. I can get the prize. You spent so much time in helping me with my spoken English that I can make great progress during the competition. It’s very kind of you to help me.
I hope to have the chance to express my thanks. I am glad to hear that you will visit our school soon. I am really looking forward to seeing you again!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（三）
初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束，你的老师陪伴你度过了三年的校园生话。回顾其中的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请你用英文给你的某一位老师写信，和(她)说说感激的心里话。
要点提示：
教师表现 1.工作努力，认真；2.教学耐心，待人友好。
留存记忆 1.严格要求也关爱学生；2.师生相处和睦；
3.给予学习上和生活上的帮助；4.学生学业取得了进步
要求：1.内容包括所有提示要点，意思完整，语言规范；2.可适当发挥，增加细节，使语句连贯通畅；3.文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校；4. 100词左右，信的首尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear my teacher,
Leaving you and the lovely junior school life,I have so many words from my heart to say.
Thank you again for what you've done for us! All the best to you!
Yours,
XXX
Dear my teacher,
Leaving you and the lovely junior school life,I have so many words from my heart to say.
You have always been working hard since you became my English teacher. I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. You are strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All of my classmates agree that we get on well with each other for these years. There is still one thing I cannot forget. It is you that encouraged me to keep trying when I failed in the exam. Because of your help. I as well as my classmates have made great progress and become more interested in English. You have given us so much.
Thank you again for what you've done for us! All the best to you!
Yours,
XXX
（四）
难忘的初中生活即将结束，同学们在老师的帮助下取得了很大进步。此时此刻，你一定有许多心里话要对老师说。请给你的老师写一封100词左右的感谢信，表达你的心情。信的开头和结尾已给出。（信中不准出现真实校名和姓名）
Dear Teacher,
How time flies!
Yours,
Robert
Dear Teacher,
How time flies! I have to say goodbye to you now. Thank you my dear teacher.
You are one of the best teachers in our school. You teach us so well. You often help me with my studies. When I'm in trouble, you always give me good advice. It's with your help that I have made much progress in my studies.
I am so lucky to be your student. I will never forget you. No matter where I am going, we will be together forever. Best wishes!
Yours,
Robert
（五）
学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在寒假期间到本市儿童医院和第五敬老院组织志愿者活动。你决定去其中一个地方做志愿者。现请你用化名“李华”写一封申请信。
注意
信中要包括以下要点：(1)去哪个地方做志愿者；(2)说明原因：(3)能做什么事；(4)对志愿者工作的感受和体会。
请选用下面表格中的提示词语，并结合自己的实际适当增加细节；
词数不少于60;
文中不能出现真实姓名及校名。
The volunteer work you want to do
Places Children's Hospital/No.5 Old People's Home
Reasons love kids, like helping, learn, reading, playing...
Activities clean, wash, sing, dance, tell stories...
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua from Class Five, Grade Three. I know that you want new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.
I hope you’ll let me join your volunteer group. I’m looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes.
Your,
Li Hua
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua from Class Five, Grade Three. I know that you want new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them. I love reading books. I have a good command of history. Can I go to
Children’s Hospital to be a volunteer in this winter vacation Being good at playing with children, I can
do my best to help the kids. I can make them happy by telling funny stories. In my opinion, volunteer work is great because it can help many people. We should think about other people though we don’t know them. The volunteer activity is of great significance.
I hope you'll let me join your volunteer group. I'm looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
（六）
假定你是李华，你从报纸上看到一家公司要招聘兼职英语秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封申请信，包括以下要点：
1.年龄；
2.兴趣和特长。
要求1.不少于80词；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
In reply to your advertisement in the newspaper, I write the letter.
I learned from the newspaper that your company needed a part-time English secretary. I would like to apply for the position. I am 15 years old. I have a good command of English, especially good at listening to and speaking English. I often use the computer and I can type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. I think the job can not only help me improve my English, but also help me know more about the society.
Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（七）
为落实市教育局关于加强英语听的工作要求，你校开办了English Club，俱乐部正在招募会员。
假如你是李林，请结合海报内容和所给提示，写一封英文信，申请加入该俱乐部。
要求：1.信须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.信中不要实的人名和校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。3.词数：不少于100词，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
English Club
Are you good at English listening and speaking
Now your chance!
Activities:Watch English movies;Learn English songs
Hold English talent shows
Time:Every Tuesday,Thursday 6:30~8:00 p.m.
Come on and join us!
Please write to Miss Gao!
提示：
1.Why do you want to join the English Club
2.Which activity do you like best in the club
3.What else do you want to do in the club
Dear Miss Gao,
I'm Li Lin. I'm glad to see the poster in our school.
I’m looking forward to your answer soon.
Yours,
Li Lin
Dear Miss Gao,
I'm Li Lin. I'm glad to see the poster in our school. I write to express my interest in the English Club.
One of my reasons for applying is that I like English very much. But I am not good at English listening and speaking I hope to have more chances to practice English. The other reason is that there are many activities in the English Club, among which watching English movies is my favorite. It can not only make me relaxed, but also improve my listening ability. Although there are many activities here, I still want more. Could you please give me an opportunity to talk to foreigners
I’m looking forward to your answer soon.
Yours,
Li Lin
（八）
假如你是杨佩，你的外教Mr.Smith想组织几名学生去一个学校进行一次助学和联谊活动，请你参考下列信息，以书信形式向Mr. Smith提出申请，说明你打算如何开展这次活动并陈述理由。
Abilities: Plans:
communicate with... play basketball and ping-pong sing songs speak good English get on with... organize activities help...study English
要求：1.参考提示语，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，语意连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现你本人的姓名、所在学校名称和地址；4. 词数：100词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in a school. I hope I can join in it. I think I have the abilities to help them. First, I'll get on well with the kids there. I can do it because I always communicate well with others. And I have a few hobbies, such as playing basketball, ping-pong and singing songs, so I'm going to help organize after-class activities. Also, my English is good. I can help the kids with their pronunciation. I'll read English aloud with them and teach them English songs. It's really fun.
I'll be thankful if you give me the chance!
Yours,
Yang Pei

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