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The Prime Minister hinted at an extraordinary U-turn amid growing public support for a 20 per cent levy.He said: 'I don't really want to put new taxes on anything but we do have to recognize that we face something of an obesity crisis'.Mr Cameron sa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )id the costs of diabetes, heart disease and cancer treatment for the overweight costs the NHS huge sums.He added: 'We do need to have a fully-worked-up programme to deal with this problem and address these issues in Britain and we will be making announcements later in the year'.Experts have als ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o warned that obesity - fueled by large amounts of sugar - is escalating at such a rate that it will cause almost 700,000 additional cases of cancer within the next 20 years, experts have warned.They say that being overweight is already 'the new norm' and predict that four in ten adults will be obese by 2035.21·cn·jy·comEstimates also s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )how that by this time obesity-related illnesses, including diabetes and heart disease, will cost the NHS more than 7.5 billion a year.【参考例文】Professor Susan ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Jebb, of Oxford University,urges parents to seek healthier alternative to handing kid’s obesity rather than adopt easy methods. 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Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.21cnjy.comAfrican elephan ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ts are in trouble. Their numbers have fallen violently from as many as ten million a hundred years ago to as few as 400,000 today. Losses are largely from poaching(偷猎) for the illegal ivory trade, and also because of the smaller living space for elephants, as people open up land for farming and development.Killing some eleph ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ants to help save the species is one suggested strategy for preserving them. Here’s the thinking: Invite rich hunters to pay generous fees to shoot specified numbers of elephants, and use that money as sources for various conservation.Some people claim ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) that trophy hunting can provide generous financial support for people to conserve and restore wild elephant numbers, protect wildlife from poaching, and to help give local communities a boost in economy. Doing that, the theory goes, poor villagers won’t need to poach elephants to feed their families.To look into the new ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )business closely, the trophy hunting industry does not provide significant benefits to the communities where it occurs. Across Africa, there are only about 15,000 hunting-related jobs created by the business—a tiny number,especially considering that the six main game-hunting countries alone have a population of nearly 150 million.21世纪教育网版权所有Besides that, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) it is true the total income from trophy hunting is substantial. Take an unnamed area for example, the total income to wild conservancies from trophy hunting, amounted to $165,000. Six years later, this is expected to increase almost tenfold to $1,330,000. Yet after various kinds of processing fees and expenses are reduced, the local communities make an average of only ten cents a hectare (25 cents an acre) from trophy hunting. The return is so small that it justly explains locals’ lack of interest in preserving hunting areas and their continued poaching.SummaryAfrican elephants ar ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e endangered with greatly reduced numbers due to unlawful poaching and shrinking habitat. 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I want more students to know what electronic games are – the benefits and problems.” Instead of teaching students how to play electronic games, the course will cover issues related to electronic games, such as research and development, technology and players’ psychology, according to Chen.This new course ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at Peking University arrives at a time when China’s game industry is booming. According to an article published by Fortune in December, China’s video game market is the world’s largest and is expected to continue to grow.And the boom ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing industry has in turn impacted many Chinese people, especially the young. 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For the two reaso ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ns mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序:First2.表并列补充关系:Besides连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1] First, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Participating ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class. (运用了动名词短语作主语)第六套Guided WritingDirections: ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.学校公众号正在征集同学们的英文作文,请你写一篇文章,描述一次难忘的旅行经历,积极投稿,字数100-120左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】I have experienced m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )any firsts, but the most unforgettable one is that I saw the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain for the first time.Last July, my family a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd I took a tour to Changbai Mountain. We climbed up from the west slope, where the scenery basically remains the most primitive state. After climbing 1440 steps, we finally reached the top of the mountain. Although we were very tired, the temperature on the top of the mountain was very suitable, making us feel extremely comfortable. What's more, we were lucky enough to see the Tianchi, which is like a huge mirror inlaid among the peaks. It's said that 70% of the people who came to Changbai Mountain for the first time can't see the Tianchi because the weather on the top of the mountain is unpredictable, and the first time I came to Changbai Mountain, I saw tianchi, which is really amazing.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是开放性作文,要求写一篇文章,描述一次难忘的旅行经历。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:记叙文时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时为主。结构:第一段引入话题,第二段介绍难忘的经历。要求:要点明确,重点突出。第二步:列提纲(重点词组)take a tour to; on the top of;for the first time;climb up21教育网第三步:连词成句1. I have expe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rienced many firsts, but the most unforgettable one is that I saw the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain for the first time.2.Last July, my family and I took a tour to Changbai Mountain.3.We climbed ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )up from the west slope, where the scenery basically remains the most primitive state.4. After climb ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing 1440 steps, we finally reached the top of the mountain.5. Although we w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ere very tired, the temperature on the top of the mountain was very suitable, making us feel extremely comfortable.6. What's more, we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) were lucky enough to see the Tianchi, which is like a huge mirror inlaid among the peaks.7.It's said that 7 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )0% of the people who came to Changbai Mountain for the first time can't see the Tianchi because the weather on the top of the mountain is unpredictable, and the first time I came to Changbai Mountain, I saw tianchi, which is really amazing.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1.本文使用了表并列补充关系的连词: ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition2.连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1] We clim ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )bed up from the west slope, where the scenery basically remains the most primitive state.(where引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Altho ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ugh we were very tired, the temperature on the top of the mountain was very suitable, making us feel extremely comfortable.(although引导让步状语从句,现在分词making作状语)[高分句型3] What’s more, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) we were lucky enough to see the Tianchi, which is like a huge mirror inlaid among the peaks.(which引导非限制性定语从句)第七套Directions: Write an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.同学们经历了十多年的课堂教学 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ),也体验了两个多月的新型线上教学模式。两种教学模式各有特点。请表明你更偏爱哪种教学模式,并通过比较,阐述你偏爱的理由。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Aff ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ected by the epidemic, we have been studying online for more than two months. 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