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临阵磨枪系列 03 读后续写专题突破
I. (2022湖北八市高三联考卷）
阅读下丽材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Precious Present
Wrinkles of confusion spread across Angela’s forehead as she unwrapped the gift from ber
best企iend, Susan.
“I . .I thought you could use it for something.”Susan ’s stammered explanation did nothing to help
tts understand why a twelve-by-eighteen-inchold blue carpet was being presented as a birthday
gi位
My heart went out to our daughter. Starting out at a new school during her freshmanyear had
been a difticult adjustment. Until sh巳met Susan, Angela had experienced li口le success making
new friends.
The mummr叫 “thar虫s” was barely heard as Angela tried hard not to allow her
disappointment to show. She laid the pi巳ce of carp巳t on the kitchen counte民and the two girls
headed outside to play with the family dogs.
The next morni吨，I carried a garbage bag outside. My heart sank as l lifted the lid of the
garbage can and saw Susan ’S carpet lying there. Hesitating only a moment, I picked it up. After
giving it a light brushing, I brought it into the house and put it away in the hall closet.
“Susan invited us to go over to her hous巳 after school tomorrow and she’d like us to meet her
foster mom（养母）” Several days later Angela aru1ounced as, she arrived home. Although her
voice carri.ed a so-what attitude, I sensed she was pleased by the invitation.
The following day we drove to the destination along the winding country road.
注意： i续写词数应为 150 左右：
2.请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1.
A kind斗。oking woman greeted us as we approach巳d the small
fannhouse ..
Paragraph 2.
On the way home Angela pleaded me to drive
faster. ...
2. (2022湖南衡阳市高三一模试题）
阅读下丽材料， 根据其内容和｜所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一但完整的短文。
When Micah was a child, I used to do many things with her. Later, I got promoted and was
always on constant business holidays. 3 years’ devotion to work result巳d in my absence from her
Life and now she was a teenage girl.
Recently, I eventually managed lo have abundant time to accomp创1y her.
For the last few weeks, Micah had watched mockingbirds make a nest in a tree and lay eggs
there. Sometimes, I came to accompany her without being invit巳d But whenever I made an
a忧empt to break the ice，“I’m good” was about all she said to me. Code for "Leave me alone”．
“Why doesn't she want to do things with me？” I thought as I set tbe table for dinner one
eveni1Jg, hoping for an emotion bridge to reappear between us. Did she feel hurt with my long
absence or feel ignored Lost in thought, I was seeking to mend the relationship.
“Mom！” Micah yelled suddenly.“Come quick！”
Surprised, I rushed out, only to find川ittle baby bird on the ground, weak and helpless. My
eyes went to the branches above.
“The wind must have blown him out of the nest ”l said.
“No it was Mr. Whiskers -our cat. You let him go outside！” Micah said, a bit annoyed.
Looking at the nest without the parents， “I'm sorry.”， I said and put the biid in my palm
cautiously and gently. She di由此respond, but did not refuse my offer to help, either. Deciding to
take care of the little baby till it became independent, I placed it in its nest.“What should we do
next？” I asked. No response again. Instead, Micah ＼＼ 吧nt inside and hopped on her iPad.“Bird
vid巳os？” I ask巳d.“Yes, I’m finding out what to feed it ，＇’ she said serim』sly.
注意：
I. 绥写词数应为150左右；
2. i青按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph I:
She was more focused than
ever.…………... . ... .... ..... .. …＂… …··
Paragraph 2:
Before long, the bird food was delivered and we fed the bird ”Chance” at
once ..
3. (2022福建漳州市高三二模试题）
阅读下丽材料， 根据其内容和｜所给段落开头语纹’写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One Saturday morning when Susan went, as usual, to Thompson ’s hotel, to receive the price
of her mother ’s washing for the guests, which amounted to five dolla邸， she found the hotel keeper
in the yard.
He was obviously in bad manners with some dealers with whom he had been talking. He held
in his hand an open wallet, full of bills. Hardly noticing the child as she made her request, except
to swear （笃l咧l咧） at her for troubling him when he was busy, he handed her a bank note. Glad to
escape so easily, Susan rnshed out of the gate, and when she stopped to see tJ1e money safely in
the folds of her worn scarf, she discovered that he had g.iv巳n h巳r two bills instead of one. She
looked around. Nobody was near to share her discovery, and her first feeling was joy at the
unexpected prize.
“It is mine, all mine，”she thought.“I will buy mother a new coat with it, and she can give her
old one to sister Mary, and then Mary can go to the Sunday school with me next winter. I wonder
if it will buy a pair of shoes for brother Tom, too.”
At that moment she r巳alized that the hotel keeper must have given it to her by mistake, and
therefore she bad no right to have it, as she was ah，，呻S told by her mother the Golden Rule. What
belongs to you is yours, and what doesn't belong to you should not be accepted.
But again the voice of owning it by herself whispered ， “He gave it, and how do you know
that he did not intend to make you a present of it Keep it; he will never know it，巳ven if it should
be a mistake; he had too many such bills in that great wallet, so it doesn ’t matter if missing one.”
While this conflict was going on in her mind between good and evil, she was hurrying homeward
as fast as possible.
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l. 续写词数应为150左右：
2. I育按虫IJ下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Yet, before she came 111 sight of her home, she
stopped.
The hotel keeper looked at
Susan. ...
4. (2022广东省高三毕业班第 一次模拟卷）
阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语绥写两段 一， 佼之构成 篇完整的短文。
On a Sunday afternoon, Kiana French was having fun fishing with her father and younger
sister, not knowing the next minute, they would struggle not to sink in the freezing water. Their
12-foot boat was taking in water little by little, and the wind was picking up. Her father, Gary
French, hurried to operate the engine, while Kiana, 16, was in the middle with Cierrah, her sister,
frightened but still ab.le to keep calm.
Kiana asked Cierrah to take off one of her cowboy boots, with which she got some of the
water out. Hard as she tried, that little effort would not help stop the boat s1川（ing. Moments later,
the unthinkable happened. The boat was full of water and then it flipped over. Kiana and her sister
were dumped in the water. Their father, who had had a st町gery six months ago, managed not to be
thrown into the water but seemed to have great pain in the chest due to the sudden change.
Kiana quickly put on her life jacket and saw Cierrah ’s and her father ’s life jackets floating
away. She reacted quickly to get then】 back and held her sister onto the boat. They were so far out
111 the middle of the lake that they could not see the shore clearly. ＼＼而低’S worse. it was getting
harde1 to stay above the waves. The町father swam over and hugged his队νo girls. Cierrah crying
silently. Kiana heard her beloved sister mum】U飞 “I can ’t feel my feet.”
Kiana knew the only thing to do was to get to shore herself and find help. She looked up at
her father, exchanging a concerned glance, turned round and swam as hard as she could towards
the shore
Fighting against the strong currents and cold wind, sh巳 screamed for help at the top of her
lungs every three minutes or so. A strong wind blew, and she looked back only to see her sister’s
and father ’s beads bobbing（浮动）in the water. She burst into tears, thinking her sister and dad
were dead, because she was t冰ing too long.
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l . 续写词数应为150左右，
2. I育按虫IJ下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 。
With desperate tears, she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on
Once rescued, they were rushed to shore, where a concerned group waited for their
arrival. ........ .
5. (2022河北省高三3月过程纵向评价卷）
阅读下丽材料， 根据其内容和所给段落到：头语绥写两段， 使之构成一 篇完整的短文。
My job is just one of the essential jobs, a sanitation（卫生系统）engineer, not a glamorous one,
but is consid巳red the alternative. Of course, I never regard it as an ashamed task to be in my
position. About tbe second week of the lockdown because of the Covid-19, I was having trouble
finding a sanitizing spray （消毒琐·雾） for my truck. Tbe rnext morning on my way to work at 4 a.
m., 1 stopped at one of the few stores which were open that early, hoping to purchase some.
However, it was only open for the police and medical personnel.‘＇Look at my vest please ，＇’ I
begged to the clerk， “I ’m not just buying it for myself.”“I ’ m more than sorry, sir. But this is just
the re思!latio日， and I really can ’t help.”『eplied the smiling girl. As I turned to head back to my car
with disappointment, J nearly broke down.
Coming out of the store, my stomach began to call for energy suppo口， l stopped at a 7/1 l and
ordered an everything bagel 〈硬面包） with cream cheese to satisfy my poor stomach and my
empty heart. It was toasty wann, and I couldn ’t wait to dig in. But as I left the store with a little
joy coming sweetly from the ba酬，l noticed a scene that an old man was sitting at the bus stop, in
rags. Knowing that it would probably be his only warm meal of the day, I gave him the bagel
without any hesitation. Just when J was ready to n1m around for another same bagel, something
warming my heart came into being. Another customer, a gentle lady， 企om the 7/11 offered me half
f her bagel.“。 We everyone should be taken care of at some ce时ain moment.”she said with a
tender sweet voice as I smiled to thank her sincerely. I was delighted because I realized that in one
way or another, we were all looked after.
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So T decided to go back to the former store to try my luck again for the
spray.……·
Just before gave up, a local policeman was heading into the
stοre. .
6. (2022山东肥城高三二模试题）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语绥写两段，佼之构成一 篇完整的短文。续
写的词数应为150左右。
On March 3, Eric Johnson was asleep when the family ’s six-year-old Australian shepherd,
Bella, woke him up. Bella was acting unpredictably, giving Johnson the sense that “something just
didn't fi巳el right.”Bella sensed dang巳r, and alerted the family to the tornado that soon destroyed
their home.
When Johnson woke up, he turned on the TV and found out that a tornado was headed
toward their town of Cookeville, Tennessee. He quickly grabbed his wife and their three children
and put then】 in the bathtub. Nearly 45 minutes later, around 2:00 am, the tornado hit and
destroyed the house.J ohnson was thrown into the backyard.
Johnson said，“Bella was hiding under our bed when the tornado hit our l10us巳. She was
thrown into our yard and survived and was missing after that. Tt was hard for us knowing she had
survived but we couldn ’t find her. She was the piece of our family that was missing.”The furious
175 mph twister destroyed everything in its path.T he Johnsons would not have survived if not for
Bella.
Johnson suffered a head injury and his wife had broken ribs, but they soon set about
searching for their beloved heroic dog. They left pieces of clothing around the destroyed
neighborhood, hoping that Bella would recognize the scent and find her way back home. ChUI℃h
台1end and dog tracker Saraf】Romeyn also joined 111.
She borrowed cameras from a local animal rescue group and set them up in areas where
people reported seeing her. She also worked with other dog trackers and even sought tips from
residents with the help of the Putnam County Police Department.
When leads dried up, the Johnsons and Romeyn pressed 011.“I was still finding time searching in
parking lots, but it was tough. Because nobody had found a body, in rescue you can ’t give up until
you know you don’t have a positive outcome. And I hadn’t given up，”Romeyn said.
Paragraph I:
ln time, they found a glimmer of hope when Romeyn got a call from friend Karen Ritacco,
who said that Bella was behind her
shop ............
Paragraph 2:
Romeyn was happy to play a part in the rescue, but also credits the community for their
help .................. ..
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7. (2022 海南省普高等学校招生金宾楼题 ）
阅读下而材料， 根据其内容和所给段落歼头i否绥写两段 ， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There is a homeless ( or at least ve1y poor) woman wl10 sometimes is sitting near where I am
Living. begging for money. Unfortunately, the “inner city places” are often being “strongly
requested” by younger men and women who take over the space.
Whenever I see her, I make SUie to give her something, and if I am out of money, at least I
talk to her for a few seconds. When younger people are arow1d, I often make sure to drop a few
coins into her cup while passing her a note without anybody seeing it in the hope that they will
leave her alone.
Today she surprised me. 1 was passing her again, giving her some money, and asked her how
she was. She surprised me by saying that she wanted to thank me. Not for the money. Well, for
that too, but for always taking the time to talk to her.
She mentioned how bard it is for her to have so little money that she has to beg. She often
feels ashamed, but she now has prepared for several days to talk to me, and to thank me for
treating her as a human being. Some people only walked by or sometimes dropped some money.
But they never made eye contact or talked to her. which nmde her feel even more ashamed, almost
non-human. She said she wa looking forward to my walking by because she knew I would look at
her and see a person. On hearing all this, I had tears in my eyes, and still do, when thinking of this.
T stilJ don ’t know why she is on the street. Maybe one day she will open up, but I will not ask
her right away. But 1 will be even more on the lookout for her, making sure to talk to her as often
as possible!
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2. i青按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day she mentioned her w1happy experiences to
me.…
T f巳lt sorry for her and decided to help her
out. ..
8. (2022 浙江杭州高三二模试题）
阅读下丽短文， 根据所给情节进行续写， 使之构成一 个完整的故事。
My family moved in a small house in Brighton, Colorado on my seventh birthday. My first
memory is our neighbor E且 an old man, handing me strawberries from his garden through a hole
，
in the chain-It出监旦旦·“We need to make the hole bigger ”he said jokingly. Later I knew that he
，
lived alone.
Bill spent much time working in the组且也and I was always talking lo him from om yard. l was
a chatterbox. I think what drew me to Bill is that he n巳ver got tired of listening to me. I also think
Bill saw a lot of himself in me - we were both坠旦业and anxious - and that may be why he
always took the time to li坐旦些me.It was a wonderful旦旦旦坐监旦·
There weren’t any kids of my age in the neighborhood, and my parents were very busy, so I
mostly played in the yard with my dog. l had a lot of imaginary friends - a whole鱼旦出，actually,
with a wife, children, a best friend ...n o joke.飞νeird kid.
One day， 应泣且且应旦旦 asked Bill whether he ’d watch me while they were away on business. This
worked for ev巳ryone, so it became. a somewhat monthly occurren巳e. Bill had a spar巳 room in his
house, which became “my” room.
Bill promised to teach me to drive the lawn tractor someday and I was always looking forward to
it. In winter, Bill would attach a snowplow to tbe front oftbe lawn tractor. T豆豆豆豆监!y told bim that
l would invent a better snowplow when l grew up.“Sure you will. You’II get a patent certificate. It
takes a钱必且组 to prove an important thing，”Bill said with a smile.
One snowy morning, an idea suddenly hit me. My parents were watching TV when I spit it out,
“What ifl adopt d Bill as my grandpa。”巳 My parents said I could go over and ask him.
注意：
l所续写短文的i司数应为150左右：
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下tiJ线的关键词语；
3. 绥写部分为两段， 开头语己为你写好，
4. 续写完成后， 请用下主1J线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph I
l knocked on his door, sat down in his living room, and asked， “Can l adopt you as my grandpa？
”
Paragraph 2
The next morning, while learning to driv巳 the lawn tractor with a snowplow, I accidentally plowed
down our chai.n-lin1< fence.
【参考答案＋详细讲解】
I. (2022湖北八市高三联考卷〉
【范文背诵】
Paragraph I.
A kind-looking woman greeted us as we approached the small farmhouse. The house was
shabby but neatly decorated with used furniture. From the chat with the woman we knewS usan
had long been separated from her parents and it was she who adopted littleS usanA. warm light
shone in her eyes when she revealed her love forS usan to me. I came to respect this
generous-hearted woman who had opened her home to a young girl and attempted to make a
difference in her lifeA. s day light began to fade, I pickedA ngela up台omSusan’s home.
Paragraph 2.
On the way home Angela pleaded me to drive faster. When we got home, Angela
immediately looked for the carpet eagerly.S he was running to the garbage can when l put the
ca叩et on the table in front of her. In a split second, she was overjoyedS. he jumped up, screaming
in an excited voice, and wrapped her am1s around me tightly. Then she gave tl1e ca叩et a light
brush. Watching it hang in the yardA, ngela smiled with satisfactionS. he calledS usan, apologized
for her behaviour and expressed her sincere gratitudeS. he said the carpet was the most precious
birthday gift she had ever received in the whole world.
【解析】本文以一 件礼物为线索展开， 讲述了作者 女儿Angela的好朋友Susan送给
她 一块小毛毯，作为生日礼物， 令他们大为不解，Angela并不喜欢，敷衍了 一句“谢谢”， 之
后就将毛毯丢进了垃圾箱， 作者发现后， 替她l除了起来。 后来Susan邀请Angela去她家做
客， 当了解了Susan的家镜后， Angela知道到Susan生活不容易， 对于自己丢掉，Susan礼物
很懊悔， 急忙回家寻找那块毛毯， 这时作者把毛毯拿出来，Angela见到丢掉的毛毯又重新
出现， 特别开心， 为自己的错误行为给Susan道歉并对她表示真挚的感谢。
【详细解读】
l . 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“ 当我们走近那间小农舍时， 一位慈祥的妇女向我们打招呼。 ”可知， 第
一段可描写作者和女儿在Susan家做客的过程， 并描述Susan的皇家境。
②由第二段首句内容“ 在回家的路上，Angela求我开快点。 ”可知， 第二段可描写Angela急
忙回家寻找到1件丢弃的毛毯， 找到l后的喜悦心俏， 给Susan 道歉并表达真挚的感谢。
2. 续写线索：谈话一一回家一一寻找一一发现一一高兴一一感谢
3. 词汇激活
行为类①谈话：chat/tall们②回家：go back home/get home; ·寻找：look for/seek/search
情绪类①高兴：be overjoyed/feel delighted
②感． 谢： showing her appreciation/express her sincere gratitude /be grateful
【名师点睛】
［高分句型I). I came to respect this generous-hearted woman who had opened her home to a
young gi『l and attempted to make a di仔erence in her life. （由关系代词who引导的限制性定谓从
句）
［高分句型2]. Watching it hang in the yard, Angela smiled with satisfaction. （非ll'h吾动词现
在分词作状语）
2. (2022湖南衡阳市高三一棋试题）
【范文背诵】
She was more focused than ever. Soon, Micah smiled broadly， ‘γve got it.”“What do we
need？” I asked again. She said the baby bird n巳eded some special b让d food. Hearing this, I
unmediately phoned to place an order. While waiting for delivery, Micah added that we needed to
name the bird to build a bond.“How about Chance I think it has a good chance of making it with
your help ”， I proposed. She didn
’t say a word but nodded with a bright smile.
Before long, the bird food was delivered and we fed the bird “Chance” at once. To our relief,
the special food was to its taste. The following weeks, we went to feed and check on Chance every
day. One day, Micah shared with me happily her finding that Chanc巳became independent.
Looking at her shining face, I was almost moved to tears. I never imagined that the bird Chance
became the real chance to rebuild the emotion bridge between us. From then, I decided to
accompany her more, just as what we had done to pany is the best love. (175 words)
【解析】本文以妈妈想修复和女儿的关系为线索展开，讲述了作者由于位于事业，顾不
上照顾孩子导致·ff]:女关系冷淡， 通过共同照顾一只小鸟，她们学会了交流， 重建情感桥梁的
故寥。
【详细解读】
I. 段落续写：
①第一段首句内容“她比以前更加I注意力集中’可知， 第一段司描写女儿用心查找资料，
了解如何照顾小鸟的情景 。
’
②由第二段首 句内容“不久 ， 鸟食被送到， 我们迫不及待地抓住机会去眼鸟”可知， 第二
段可描写作者与女儿一起喂鸟的幸福场景。
2. 续写线索：查资和←－－买鸟食一一 一起喂养一一女儿开心一一亟建 ·IIJ女关系的桥梁一一
感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为炎①专注的： be more focused I be attentive；②打电话： call/phone;
＠决定做： decide to do I be detennined to do :
情绪炎①令人安慰的是： to on仇relief I to one ’s comfort：②感动：be moved to tears I burst
into tears;
【名师点睛】
［高分句型I）.且些旦旦国 ， I immediately phoned to place an order. （现在分词作伴随状
语）
［高分句型2]. While waiting for deliverv, Micah added that we needed to name the bird lo
build a bond. （运用了状i＼若从句中的省l恪〉
3. (2022福建漳州市高三二模试题）
【范文背诵】
Yet, before she came in sight of her home, she stopped. As she crossed the little bridge over
the narrow stream, her eyes fell upon a bench where her mother and she occupied and had lengthy
conversations. The Golden Rule her mother shared then popped into her mind. Ultimately, it was
good that defeated evil in this conflict. Turning suddenly aro山叫，she hastened along the road with
breathless speed until she found herself once more at the hotel ’s gate. Glimpsing Susan again at
his side, the hotelkeeper asked impatiently.“What do you want this time？ ”“S町， um... you paid
me two bills, instead of one，＇’Susan murmured, trembling in every limb.
The hotelkeeper look巳d at Susan. His eyebrows rose in absolute astonislunent. A few seconds
later realizing what had happened. He stretch巳d out his nand and tapped Susan on the shoulder
gently, his face splitting into a wide smile， “Keep it! The other bill is for you as the pres巳nt of your
honesty.”“No, sir, thank you，＇’Susan blurted out.“I do not want to be paid for doing right.”
Desperate to tell her mother what she had done, Susan waved goodbye to the hotelkeeper and
returned to her humble home with a lightened heart. Never would she forget this day由rough the
course of her whole life.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开 ， 讲述了Susan去旅馆帮妈妈取回工资， 但是老板多给
了一张钞票。 她在纠结要不要还回去的故事。
【详细解读】
I. 段洛绥写：
①由第 一段首句内容“然而， 在她看到她家之前， 她停下来了。 ”可知， 第一段可描写
Susan经过思考之后 ， 决定将多给的支票送回去。
②由第二段首句内容 “旅馆老J扳着着Susan。 ”可知 ， 第二段可描写作旅馆老板很惊讶
Susan将钱还回来， 并想把多给的支票给她作为对她诚实的肯定。
2. 续写线索： 回家前停了下来－一想起了妈妈的教导－一决定把支票还回去－一老板赞赏
她－一迫不及待回家告诉妈妈
3. 词汇激活
行为类①涌入脑海：pop into one’s mind/crowed into one ’s mind；②加速：hasten/hurry up/rush:
＠伸手： stretch out o日的hand /reach out 01 ’岭 s hand;
情绪类①没耐心地： impatiently/without patience；②’惊讶地： m astonishment/in amazement/in
SU叩nse
【名州点睛】
［高分句型I]. As she crossed the I ittle bridge over the naηow stream, her eyes fell upon a
bench where ber mother and she occupi仅l and had lengthy conversations. （运用了where引导的
定语从句）
［高分句型2). Tuning suddenly around, she hastened along the road with breathless speed
until she found herself once more at the hotel ’s gate. （运用了非i胃语动词做状i击和until引导时
间状话从句）
［高分句型3). Never would she forget this day through the course of her whole Ii代（运用了
部分倒装句）
4. (2022广东省高三毕业班第一次模拟卷）
【范文背诵】
With desperate tears, sbe suddenly spo忧ed a boat with a figure walking on it. She waved and
cried for help with all her strength. It seemed like a cen阳1y later when she heard someone yelling
back to her. As the boat was approaching, Kiana pointed to her father and sister and someone
screamed， “They are in the water! Help！” She was soon picked up and taken towards where her
father and sister were. Fortunately, they didn't drown but her 也ther seemed to be giving out, with
one hand holding tight to the boat. the other holding Cierrah.
Once rescued, they were mshed to shore, where a concemed group waited for their arrival.
They gave cl.othes and blankets to the three poor people, and then the ambulance arrived. Kjaoa,
her sister and her father were cheek巳d on the spot and finally sent to the nearest hospital. Later,
when asked what gave her the strength and perseverance to continue. both in the cold water and in
great fear. Kiana thought it had to do with family.“I just wanted to save my family, and I didn ’t
want anything也ad to happen to them. So I couldn’t spare a second to wo口y or fear.”she said.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开， 讲诉了 一个周日的下午， 16岁的Kiana French和她
的父亲和妹妹乘船在湖心钓鱼， 岂料船居然进水并翻了：考虑到父亲6个月前做过手术 ， 妹
妹还小 ， Kiana决定自己游囚岸边去寻求帮助；在她以为妹妹和父亲都被淹死了而绝望的时
候， 她发现了 一艘来船 ， 对方救了他们一 家三口， 三人被送往医院， 是Kiana对家人的爱，
｛更 ←家人得以生i宅 。
【详细解读】
I . 段落绥写：
①由第一段首句内容“在绝望的泪水中，她突然看到了 一艘船，上面走着一个人影”可知，
第一 段可描写Kiana呼救， 对方发现有落7j(右， 把他ff]逐个就上船。
②由第二段首句内容“获救后， 他们被紧急送到岸边， 一群关心他们的人在那里等着他
们的到来 。 ”可知， 第二段可描写热心入帮助人他们三人， 被叫了救护车， 送他们去医院，
以及幕后 ， Kiana对自己的行为的感悟 。
2. 续写线索：发现来船一一获救上船一一救援家人一一岸边得助一一前往医院一一感俗
3. 词汇激活
行为类①呼喊：cry/yell out；②－幸靠近：approach/come close；③救援： save/rescue:
情绪类①绝望的： desperate/despairing/hopeless②．害怕：fear/scare
【名师点睛】
［高分句型1]. She was soon picked up and taken towards where her father and sister were.
（运用了由连接词where引导的地点状语从句〉
［高分句型2].0nce rescued, they were rnshed to shore, wher巳a concerned group waited for
their arrival. （运用了时间状谓从句中主语和b巳动词的省略， 由关系副词where引导非限
制性定语从句〉
5. (2022河北省高三3月过程纵向评价卷）
【范文背诵】
So I decided to go back to the fom1er store to try my luck again for the spray. The morning
sunlight was bright but tender as T was driving back to the store. Hoping for a miracle, I pulled up
at the store and inched close to it. But it was when T got tbe same reply as before that T was
annoyed again by the strict rule.“Please! There 1 ’钮 t an angel all the time around you”. l
whispered. But all hope was not lost for me.
Just before l gave up, a local policeman was heading into the store. Instantly he came in, the
pol iceman spo忧ed my vest and asked me which company I worked for, then continued to thank
me for being out there. I replied that it was the polic巳 who d巳served thanks. When asked if I
needed his help, J told him my trouble. He went into the store, purchased the spray and brought it
out to me, driving away without taking any money. Again, I believed that we 响1ere all looked after
in one way or another.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开， 讲述了作者是 一名卫生系统的工程师，疫↑肖期间想为
自己的卡车买 一 个消毒喷雾，却因为“只能卖给警察和医护人员 ”的规定，被拒绝。走出商店，
他为自己买了点充饥的硕面包，看见公交站台 一个衣衫槛梭的老人 ， 就毫不犹豫地把面包给
了他。正当他准备重新买一个商包肘， 一位温柔的女士主动把自己的商包分享给他一 半，并
说： “特殊时期， 我们应该互相照顾。 ”
【详细解读】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我决定回之前的商店离去试试运气买消毒喷壶”可知，第 一 段可掐
写作者在商店买l质壶被拒绝。
＠由第二段首句内容“他刚要放弃， 一位警察走进了店里”可知，第二段可描写警察为作
者买消毒i喷菇。
2. 续写线索： 开车前往商店一一再次被拒绝一一与警察对话一一警察买琐壶一－！， 悟
3. 词汇激活：
行为类①停车：puII up/stop/park：②缓俊移动：inch/creep；＠一．．．．．就：instantly/imm时1ately/as
soon as/ the momenν the instant：④看见： spot/see/notice
情绪类①生气的： angry/annoyed/upseνfurious ： ②感 谢： thank sb for I show one ’s
appreciation/show one ’s gratitude/be grateful
【名师点硝】
［高分句型1] Hoping for a miracle, T pulled叩at the sto陀 and inched close to it. （现在分词
作状i吾）
［高分句型2) But it was when T got the same reply as before that I was annoyed again by the
strict rule. （强调句型）
［高分句型3) When asked if l needed his help, l told him my trouble. （状i否从句中的省略〉
6. (2022山东肥城高三二楼试题）
【范文背诵】
In tim巳，they found a glinuner of hope when Romeyn got a call from friend Karen Ritacco,
who said tbat Bella was behind her shop. Romeyn enlisted the help of her husband, their pasto几
and Eric J obnson to get Bella. When the team had Bella trapped in the enclosed space, the poor
dog began to panic, until Johnson called out to her. Romeyn said， “It was heartbreaking. You could
see her stop, and you could s巳e the wheels turning. There was something so familiar.＇’The口
something clicked, and she recognized Johnson. Bella was home.
Rome沪1 was happy to play a part in the rescue, but also credits the community for their help.
“I feel like our whole community had a part in bringing Bella back. l give it all to God. So many
things had to come together to make this happen." Now that Bella is back, the Johnsons are
focusing on moving fonvard and plan to rebuild their prope此y. The tornado may have destroy巳d
all of their possessions, but Johnson is just grateful th创their family is together again.
【解析】本篇书商表达是该t后续写 ， 安求绥写两段内容。
【详细解’该 】
第l $ ：根据提示可知， 本文要求续写两段内容：嗣读下丽材料，根据其内容和所给段
落开头语绥写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文：要求绥写约翰逊夫妇在龙卷风过后是如何在
好心人的帮助下找到爱犬贝校的以及他们对众人帮忙的感谢。 第一段：终于， 当Romeyn接
到朋友Karen Ritacco的电话， 说贝拉在她的店铺后面， 他们看到了 一线希望。 此处接着续
写 ， 贝拉当时被关在屋子里的状态 ， 约翰逊到达时，贝拉的反应 ， 故终认出了是自己的主人。
第二段：Romeyn很高兴能参与救援 ， 但也感谢社区的帮助。 此处接着续写整个社区的帮助
才使得贝拾，被找到。 现在贝捡回来了 ， 约翰 一i逊 家正专注于向前肴， 计划重建他们的家 ， 约
翰逊很高兴他们的家人可以再次团聚。 故事的时态应为一般过去时 。
第2步：根据写作要求， 确定关键词（组）， 如： enlist （支持、 赞助）， panic （惊慌〉，
heartbreaking （令人心疼的）, familiaJ （熟悉的）, possession （财产）, recognize （认出〉，
enclosed （围住的）， destroy （毁坏）, rebuild （重建）， prope即（财产）及grateful （感激的）
等
第3步： 根据提示及关键词〈组〉进行遣词选句， 注意主谓←致和日才态问题。
第4步：连句成文 ， 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡， 书写一定要规范
消｜晰， 保持卷丽的整洁美观。
【名师点睛】
范文语言地道 ， i吾2我连贺 ， 词数适当。作者在范文中佼用了较多高级词汇和句式， 高级
词汇有be trapped in （被困在）, call out to （召唤）， plan to do （计划做）, move forward （前
行）, play a part in （参与）, bring back （带回来）， focus on （集中精力于）以及begin to do
〈开始做〉， 而且还佼用了宾语从句寸he tomado may have des衍。yed all of their possessions,
but Johnson is just grateful that their family is together again.” “， 时间状语从句 When the team
had Bella trapped in the enclosed space， 由e poor dog began to panic, until Johnson called out l.o
her.'
plan to rebuild th巳ir prop巳l句入金文没有i蕃i宏销误， 上下句转换自然流畅。
7. (2022海南省普高等学校招生全宾楼题← ）
【范文背诵】
One day she mentioned her unhappy experiences to me. She used to have a whole family
though it was not rich. Her husband was a taxi driver and she took care of the home, looking after
their two childr巳n, both of whom were at school. She her古elfdid not have a job and only depended
on her husband ’s income to support the臼mily. But unfortunately, her husband died in a car
accident last yea飞so her family got into trouble. She had to beg to survive.
I felt soηy for her and decided to help her out. l first discussed witb my friends about how to
help her. We finally decid巳d to raise money for her in the community, and we also did so onlioe.
People responded enthusiastically to our appeal by donating money. So we quickly raised a big
sum of money. We suggested that the lady use the money for ce口ain business. She followed our
advice and started a台uit business. The daily income was enough to support her family without
begging. I’m so glad to see that. A I though T spent much time and energy helping her, r gained
considerable satisfaction and happiness.
【解析 1木文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个女人因丈夫死于车祸后，家庭陷入了麻烦，
她不得不在作者家附近乞讨，作者常会资助她， 迹和｜她说话；在得知了女人的处境后，作者
和朋友为她筹款，盘古终这个女人开了水果店， 不用再乞讨了。
【详细解i卖】
I. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一天， 她向我提起她的不幸经历。”可知， 第一段可描写这个女人
的家庭状况， 以及她乞讨的原因。
②由第二段首句内容“我为她感到难过， 决定帮助她锻脱困境。”可知， 第二段可捎写作
者出谋划策帮助这个女人筹集资金， 开店使生活好转。
2. 续写线索： 提及不幸经历一一家里原来状况一一发生变故而被迫乞讨一一决定出手帮助
一一指点如何用好捐款一一生活好转
3. 词汇激活
行为类①依靠：depended on/rely on；②陷入困镜：get into trouble/get into hot water：③． 泱
定：decid巳／determine
情绪类①． 同情：feel sorry for. . ./feel sympathy for. ．②热心地： enthusiastically/heartiJy
【名师点精】
［高分句型I). Her husband was a taxi driver and she took care of the home, looking after
their two children, both of whom were at school. （现在分词形式作伴随状语和：I whom引导的非
限定性定语从句）
［高分句型2). We SU阻ested that the lady use the money for certain business. (suggest后接
使用烧拟语气的宾语从句〉
［高分句型3).Although I spent much time and energy helping her, I gained considerable
satisfaction and happiness. ( although引导的让步状话从句〉
8. (2022浙江杭州离三二楼试题）
【范文背诵】
Paragraph I:
1 knocked on his door. sat down in his livine room. and asked.“Can I adoot vou as nw
缸坦虫4：且且stood frozen for a little while before a broad smile came across his face. Then I saw
tears in his eyes. He wrapped me in his anns and buried his face in my coat to hide his tears, his
voice trembling，“Of course sw唱etheart! I’ m so happy to be your grandpa！” Soon after, Bill printed
out an adop“on 旦旦!i旦旦旦 and bung it on the wall of “my” room. Gazing at the snow outside, Bi.II
said to me excitedly “， It ’s time to learn how to drive a lawn tract ”功ι
Paragraph 2:
The next momin!!. while leamin!! to drive the lawn tr百ctor with a 创10\V口low. I accidentallv
olowed down our chain-link fence. I was almost frightened to tears, but Bill just chuckled in his
laid-back way and comforted me “Don ’t worry, Grandson. I have already planned to change a
，
鱼旦旦．”We e、entually replaced it with a nic矶时l wooden fence. My dad and Bill installed it
together. What impres在ed me most was that there was a door on the fence, which definitely
strengthened our旦旦旦坦旦. Underneath, I knew that we were a true鱼旦出now.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开 ， 讲述了作者金皇家搬到了科罗拉多州布莱顿的一所小房
子里 ， 认识了邻居 一位老人，作者和老人成了朋友 ， 最后突发奇想让老人当了自己的祖父的
故事。
【详细解读】
I. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我敲了他的门， 坐在他的客厅里， 问道： ‘我可以收养你做我的爷
爷吗？ ”’可知， 第一段可捎写老人听到作者提议后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容 “第二天早上 ， 我在用扫雪机学习开草坪拖拉机的时候 ， 不小心把
我家的铁链围栏给犁1ii了。 ”可知， 第二段可描写老人之后和作者一家的相处情况。
2. 续写线索： 提出 “收养”老人一一老人同意且非常激动一一老人帮助作者建篱笆一一两家
加强联系
3. 词汇激活
行为类l打算：plan to/ intend to; 2加强：strengthen/ enhance; 3.安装：install/ fix
情绪类I.快乐：happy他lad; 2.意外：accidentally/ unexpectedly
【名师点睛】
［高分句型I] Underneath, I knew that we were a true family now. （运用了that引导宾语从句）
［高分句型2] What impressed me most was that there was a door on the fence, which definitely
strengthened our connection. （运用了what引导主语从句）

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