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2022年全国名校高三一模英语短文改错精选
Passage 1
Dear Mr. Jackson,
I'm really sorry about my use the mobile phone in your lecture last week.
I know any word mightn’t sound a made-up excuse. But I don't use the mobile phone for no reason. I was trying to apply for some American universities last week. That day, I got an offer and they needed my further informations immediately. However I had no other choice but try sending them a text message in class. I promise it will never happen again. But I do need my phone back to get in the touch with others. Will you be kind enough to give one back to me
Hope you can accept my apologies or understand my situation.
Passage 2
Yesterday I showed to my friend Peter around Beijing city. We started off at 8:00 a.m. First we went to the Forbidden City, which was one of the most popular tourist spot in Beijing. Then we visited the History Museum. We observed a lot of valuable things in them and we learned a lot about Chinese history. After a quick meal, we wentto Beihai Park. Upon arrival, we were all struck by its beautiful scenes. We spent a whole afternoon appreciated the wonder. It was until 18:00 p. m. that we went back.We did have a wonderful time. Peter was very pleased with my arrangement that he invited me to a new-built western restaurant to have a big meal.
Passage 3
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.
Passage 4
Bob is very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. He got up early as usually in the morning, but when he was ready to leave he find his bicycle's front tyre (轮胎) flat. He wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and he didn't have any money with him. He had to look for a place along the street to get his bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops was open in the early morning. So he had to walk to school, carrying his bicycle all the way. That was how he was late for school. He told Mr. White not to worry with his lessons, for he would make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.
Passage 5
When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words.
Passage 6
I was often laughed by my classmates before I turned 14 because I was always very nervous when talking to someone. Helpless or sad, I felt that I could do nothing. You cannot imagine what great difficulty I have in my life. And later, something happened, what changed my life completely. It was an English speech contest and my mother encouraged me to take part in it. I tried her best to remember the whole speech “Believe in yourself” and practised them over 100 times. Believe it or not, I finally won the first prize. Heard the cheers from the teachers and students, I stood here, with my eyes full of excited tear.
Passage 7
I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist. I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply to the position.
First of all, allow me to introduce myself．I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination. I want to find out a part-time job in the summer. I'm 18 year old and have a good command of English, especially in term of speaking and listening. In fact, I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school. Beside, I'm quite easy-going and very popular among my classmates. I’m sure I’ll do a good job if I’m accepted.
I sincerely hope you can give us a chance. I am looking forward to your reply.
Passage 8
I’m glad to recommend to you my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was born in July 15, 2004 in Beijing. He graduates from Xisi Primary School in 2016. When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered into Beijing University to study physics. After four years of hardly work there, he went to the United States for farther study. Because of his excellent work, he got a doctor’s degree in physics this year. He is now in good health but would like to make contribution to our country. I would be most grateful if you would favorably consider my recommendation.
Looking forward to receive your early reply.
Passage 9
My brother, who is the Harvard graduate, works in a multinational company. The company failed several times in its attempts to break into the Chinese market in the past 2 years. As a new manager in charge the sales department he is trying every possible mean to promote their products. Because of he’s taken some effective measures, their profits are expected to raise by 50％. I real take pride in him. What’s more, he has promised to giving me five hundreds yuan when the summer holiday comes. If so, I will be able to go on a vacation. How a wonderful piece of news!
Passage 10
How are you I’ve been to China for three years. My friends in England sometimes write to me，asked how long I will stay here, and when I’m thinking of returning back home. The answer to their question are simple. I do not know when I would go back to England. At the moment, I have no reason to return to England. I am like living in China. I did enjoy meeting people and travel around the country. My work is interesting，and there are so many things I don’t know the country, that I hope to discover in the future.
Passage 11
I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit for Beijing, the capital of our country, come true during the National Day this year. On October 1st, I went to Tian’anmen Square with my parents, there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly, I sang a national anthem, feel extremely excited. Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that “One who fail to reach the Great Wall is a hero.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.
Passage 12
Last Sunday, it was my father’s funny day. After supper, my father went to see the film. But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later. I asked him what was the matter. He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different. So they looked at the tickets carefully. After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake. Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.
Passage 13
It was extreme cold last Monday morning. While I was walking in my way to school, I noticed two street cleaner sweeping the street. Seeing them are working so hard on such a cold morning, I was moved and made up my mind do something for them. After arriving at school, I discussed with some classmates that we could do. The next day, we got up early and preparing porridge at home. When we handed the cleaners the hot porridge and expressed us appreciation for their hard work, they looked a little surprising at first. And then they took the porridge and thanked us happily. Since it was very cold, we all felt warm at that moment.
Passage 14
Have you ever had a headache during a test Have you ever been too worried about something that you have a headache or even can’t sleep If so, then you know that stress is.
Not all stress is bad for you. Some kinds of stress can help you get things do better, like when you are running towards the finishing line or when you are being asked to give a speech. Stress sometimes can help push you to make full preparation for a test. However, too much stress can result in anger, depression and other related problems, which we need to take serious.
There are many things in our life what might cause stress --- having too much homework, taking a difficult test, and having economic problems.
It’s impossible to live in a life completely free of stress, so you should learn to deal with stress. The best way reduce stress is to have a balance life.
Passage 15
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your letter. How are you getting along with these days Don’t worry about me. I have adjusted me to the new surrounding in the US, that seemed unbearable at first. Besides, I have made much friends here, with whom I can share my joys or sorrows. Difficultly as English sounds, I had got accustomed to the accent of the locals. I have been studying so hard I will surely be admitted into a ideal university.
Looking forward to your reply.
Passage 16
Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents You and your parents will be very happily if you can be friends. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their lives when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.
Passage 17
Dear Alice,
I was delighted to receive your letter. Thank you on the English dictionary you bought it for me. I received it this morning. There is no doubt which it is of great help to me. I’m deep grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practicing my spoken English. I’ve made up my mind to speak English both in and out of class. Next month I’ll take trip to Australia, which is organizing by my school. I hope I can practice my spoken English there as many as possible. By the way, I am sending you a set of stamps with this letter, but I’ll send you more if I got any. I do hope you will have a good holiday.
Passage 18
As a Grade 2 student, I’m crazy about NBA, that makes me become a major player of our school team. Beside, I like playing flute very much. Relax myself in the peaceful music can provide me with the same joy as that I get during an excited match.
My school life in China is quite different with what you have in the UK. The school starts from 7:20 am but ends at 4:50 pm. After 40 minutes’ dinner time, most students will have 3 more self-teaching class while only a few students will choose to go home. It’s until 9:05 pm that our whole school day really end.
Passage 19
Great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each other from a long distance. In the past people write letters to exchange informations at first and late they could talk with each other in the fixed telephone. Now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicate and instead of writing on the paper, they e-mail to each other on the computer. As result, people find it quicker and easier to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they become poor in writing, and the relationship between each other becomes not so closely as before.
Passage 20
There is an old saying that “A friend in need is a friend indeed”, tells us that a true friend is one who help you when you are in trouble.
Tom, Tim and I used to go to school together and played together after class. As a result, I regarded both of them as my friend. One afternoon, I had my leg hurt while playing the football with them. Tom sent I to the hospital and accompanied me all the time when Tim went home without saying anything about my injure. Worse still, he said it had nothing with him, that made me very disappointed.
From this experience, I have a good understanding of the meaning of the proverb. A friend should be reliable.
答案：
Passage 1
1. use-using 2. mightn’t-might 3. don’t –didn’t 4. apply for- to 5. information 6. However-Therefore/Thus 7. to try sending 8. in the touch with 9. one-it 10. or-and
Passage2
Yesterday I showed to my friend Peter around Beijing city. We started off at 8:00
a.m. First we went to the Forbidden City, which was one of the most popular tourist
is
spot in Beijing. Then we visited the History Museum. We observed a lot of valuable
spots
things in them and we learned a lot about Chinese history. After a quick meal, we went
it
to Beihai Park. Upon arrival, we were all struck by its beautiful scenes. We spent a
both the
whole afternoon appreciated the wonder. It was ∧ until 18:00 p. m. that we went back.
appreciating not
We did have a wonderful time. Peter was very pleased with my arrangement that he
so
invited me to a new-built western restaurant to have a big meal.
newly-built
Passage 3
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend,
had of
Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on
Unfortunately
highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a
as miles
service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked
until there
over as∧ car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents'
a We
and made our own way to home.
Passage 4
Bob is very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. He got up early as
lessons
usually in the morning, but when he was ready to leave he find his bicycle's front tyre (轮胎)
usual found
flat. He wanted to take∧bus or taxi to school, and he didn't have any money with him. He had to
a but
look for a place along the street to get his bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any
(
＼
) repaired
bicycle repair shops was open in the early morning. So he had to walk to school, carrying his
bicycle all the way. That was how he was late for school. He told Mr. White not to worry with
why about
his lessons, for he would make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.
them
Passage 5
When I first learned to write in English, I into many difficulties. The
main problem was that I always thought in Chinese tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her . Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy to myself on paper as I was learning to express in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher. She liked it much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was good one. I was encouraged by their words.
Passage 6
I was often laughed at /\ by my classmates before I turned 14 because I was always very nervous when talking to someone. Helpless or sad, I felt that I could do nothing
and
You cannot imagine what great difficulty I have in my life. And later, something happened,
had But
what changed my life completely. It was an English speech contest
which
and my mother encouraged me to take part in it. I tried her best to remember the
my
whole speech “Believe in yourself” and practised them over 100 times. Believe it or not,
it
I finally won the first prize. Heard the cheers from the teachers and students, I
Hearing
stood here, with my eyes full of excited tear.
there tears
Passage 7
1. receptionist 前加a 2. interesting- interested 3. to- for 4. had- have 5. 去掉 out
6. year- years 7.term- terms 8. hold- held 9. Beside- Besides 10. us- me
Passage 8
I’m glad to recommend to you my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was born in July 15, 1974
on
in Beijing. He graduates from Xisi Primary School in 1986. When he was in the middle school, he
graduated
did good in maths, physics and chemistry and ∧fond of art. After graduating from No.4 High
well was
School, he entered into Beijing University to study physics. After four years of hardly work here,
hard
he went to the United States for farther study. Because of his excellent work, he got a doctor’s
further
degree in physics this year. He is now in good health but would like to make contribution to our
and contributions
country. I would be most grateful if you would favorably consider my recommendation.
Looking forward to receive your early reply.
receiving
Passage 9
1. the—a 2. failed之前加has 3. in charge之后加of 4.mean—means 5. 去掉Because of中的of 6. raise—rise 7. real-- really 8. giving—give 9. thousands—thousand 10. How--What
Passage 10
How are you
I’ve been t China for three years. My friends in England sometimes write to me，aske how long I will stay here，and when I’m thinking of returning
back home.The answer to their question ar simple.I do not know when I woul go back to England.At the moment，I have no reason to return to England.I am like living in China.I di enjoy meeting people and around the country.My work is interesting，and there are so many things I don’t know the country，tha I hope to discover in the future.
Passage 11
I like travelling and my dream of paying a visit for Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day this year. On October 1st, I went to Tian’anmen Square with my parents, there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly, I sang a national anthem to music, feel extremely excited. Then we went to some other famous attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that “One who fail to reach the Great Wall is ^ a hero.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.
Passage 12
1.the→a 2.in→to 3.what→that 4.while→when 5.her→him 6.Surprising→Surprised 7.ticket→tickets 8. carefully前面加more 9.make→made 10.去掉 out
Passage 13
1．上周一早上极其冷。cold为形容词,故应用副词修饰形容词，故extreme改为extremely。
2．on one’s way to在某人去…的路上。故 in改为on。
3．名词前有量词two,故 cleaner改为cleaners。
4．看到他们正在努力的工作。此处考查感官动词的复合结构：感官动词+名词+doing。故去掉are。
5．make up one’s mind to do sth．下定决心做某事。故mind后加to。
6．我和同学们讨论该做什么，此处应为what引导宾语从句，且what在从句中作宾语。故that改为what。
7．此处为and连接的两个并列的一般过去时。故preparing改为prepared。
8．我们递给清洁工热水饺，向他们表达我们的感激。故 their改为our。
9．刚开始的时候他们看起来有点惊讶。故surprising改为surprised。
10．尽管很冷，但那一刻我们都感觉很温暖。故since改为although、though。
Passage 14
1．句意：你会如此担忧某件事以致于头疼吗？so…that如此…．以致于…，故 to改为so。
2．句意：那么你知道压力是什么吗？根据语境可知that改为what。
3．句意：某些压力可以帮助你把事情做得更好。get sth．done做某件事。故do改为done。
4．句意：当你被要求给同学们发表演讲时，此处不需要用进行时，故去掉being。
5．make full preparations for为…做好充分准备，故preparation改为preparations。
6．句意：太多的压力会导致生气，抑郁或其他相关问题，这需要你认真对待。take…seriously认真对待。故 serious改为seriously。
7．我们生活中的很多事情可以导致压力。此处为定语从句，故 what改为that。
8．有太多的作业，考试难，经济问题这三者是选择关系，故and改为or。
9．减少压力最好的办法是有一个均衡的生活方式，way后跟to do作定语，故way后加to。
10．balanced平衡的，故 balance改为balanced。
Passage 15
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your letter. How are you getting along with these days Don’t worry
about me. I have adjusted me to the new surrounding in the US, that seemed unbearable at
myself surroundings which
first. Besides, I have made a great much friends here, with whom I can share my joys or
many and
sorrows. Difficultly as English sounds, I had got accustomed to the accent of the locals. I
Difficult have
have been studying so hard∧ I will surely be admitted into a ideal university.
that an
Looking forward to your reply.
Passage 16
第一句：about → with / to ; as →even
第二句：going → getting
第三句：happily → happy
第四句：way → ways
第五句：walk 前加a ; and → or
第六句：are → were
第七句： our →their
第八句： honesty → honest
Passage 17
Dear Alice,
I was delighted to receive your letter. Thank you on the English dictionary you bought it for me.
for
I received it this morning. There is no doubt which it is of great help to me. I’m deep grateful for
that deeply
your advice that I should pay more attentions to practicing my spoken English. I’ve made up my
attention
mind to speak English both in and out of class. Next month I’ll take ∧trip to Australia, which is
a
organizing by my school. I hope I can practice my spoken English there as many as possible. By the
organized much
way, I am sending you a set of stamps with this letter, but I’ll send you more if I got any. I do hope
and get
you will have a good holiday.
Passage 18
As a grade 2 student, I’m crazy about NBA, that makes me become a major player of
which
our school team. Beside, I like playing THE flute very much. Relax myself in the peaceful music can
besides relaxing
provide me with the same joy as that I get during an excited match.
exciting
My school life in China is quite different with what you have in the UK. The school starts from 7:20
from
class while only a few students will choose to go home. It’s until 9:05pm that our whole school classes not
day really end.
ends
Passage 19
Great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each
other from a long distance. In the past people write letters to exchange informations
wrote information
at first and late they could talk with each other in the fixed telephone. Now more and
later on
more people use our own mobile phones to communicate and instead of writing on
their
the paper, they e-mail to each other on the computer. As ∧ result ,people find it
a
quicker and easier to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that
but
they become poor in writing ,and the relationship between each other becomes not
poorer
so closely as before.
Close
Passage 20
There is an old saying that “A friend in need is a friend indeed”, tells (改成telling)us that a true friend is one who help(改成helps) you when you are in trouble.
Tom, Tim and I used to go to school together and played(改成play) together after class. As a result, I regarded both of them as my friend(改成friends). One afternoon, I had my leg hurt while playing the(去掉) soccer with them. Tom sent I(改成me) to the hospital and accompanied me all the time when(改成while) Tim went home without saying anything about my injure(改成injury). Worse still, he said it had nothing with him, that (改成which)made me very disappointed.
From this experience, I have a good(改成better) understanding of the meaning of the proverb. A friend should be reliable.

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