Unit7 What's the highest mountain in the world? SectionB Writing课件(共36张PPT)

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Unit7 What's the highest mountain in the world? SectionB Writing课件(共36张PPT)

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(共36张PPT)
课前准备
请准备好:课本 笔记本 双色笔
要求:上课期间,请同学们集中注意力 紧跟老师的思路,认真思考,
积极回答问题,并及时记笔记。
Writing
Unit7 What's the highest mountain in the world
Section B Writing
Fill the blanks with correct words in the box
teach wild tell important save goverment
research habit many
An education program in Chengdu _____ children about pandas and other endangered _______ animals. They send people to school ______ children about the _______ of saving these animals. And the Chinese _______ is trying to help______ the pandas. Scientists are doing ________ to better understand the ________ ot pandas. We all hope that in the future there will be a lot _____ pandas.
teaches
wild
to tell
goverment
imortance
save
research
habits
more
Braintorm: What animals are in danger
Warming up
Let’s learn to make proposals(倡议书) !
Do you know whales
Pre-writing
Another endangered animal!!
3a. Read the following words and phrases about whales. Put them in the correct place in the chart.
A. Humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil
B. Eat small fish and other sea life
C. Jump high out of the water
D. Rules on whale protection
E. Huge
F. Water pollution
Pre-writing
G. Live in the sea
H. Some kinds have teeth
I. Learn more about whales
J. Stop putting rubbish into the sea
K. Sing songs
L. Whale parts sold to make things like candles and soap
Pre-writing
What do they look like
Where do they live
What do they eat
What can they do bb
Why do some of them have to be protected
How can we protect them
E.Huge; H.Some kinds have teeth
G.Live in the sea
B.Eat small fish and other sea life
C.Jump high out of the water;
K.Sing songs
D.Rules on whale protection;
I.Learn more about whales;
J.Stop putting rubbish into the sea
A.Humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil;
F.Water pollution;
L.Whale parts sold to make things like candles and soap
Pre-writing:
How can we write the passage
Save the ______
Introductions
Problems
Ways
I P W
Try to have a good structure .The outline of talking about whales.(结构合理)
Pre-writing: Have a structure(结构)
Huge; Some kinds have teeth
Live in the sea
Eat small fish and other sea life
Jump high out of the water;
Sing songs
1. Whales are huge animals.
Some of them have teeth.
2. Whales live in the sea.
3. Whales eat small fish and other sea life.
4. Whales can jump high out of the water and sing songs.
How much do you know about Whales _________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Useful expressions
Whales are ... They live in ...
They eat... They can ...
One interesting fact is ...
Another interesting fact is ...
Tips: 1. topic sentences 2.Use some conjunctions (连接词)
3. Use different sentence structures
Introductions
Para1
Whales are huge animals and some of them have teeth. They live in the sea and eat small fish and other sea life. One interesting fact is whales can jump high out of the water. Another interesting fact is whales can sing songs.
one possible version
Humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil;
Whale parts sold to make things like candles and soap ;
Water pollution
5.Humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil.
5.People sell whale parts to make things like candles and soap .
5.Whales are in danger because of water pollution .
Para2
Topic setence:_____________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Tips: 1. topic sentences 2.Use some conjunctions (连接词)
3. Use different sentence structures
Useful expressions
Some kinds of whales are in danger because ...
Problems
Para 2
However, some kinds of whales are in danger. Humans catch them for meat, fat and oil, and sell whale parts to make candles and soap. Whales are also in danger because of water pollution.
one possible version
Rules on whale protection;
Learn more about whales;
Stop putting rubbish into the sea
6.We should make rules on whale protection.
people should learn more about whales.
People should stop putting rubbish into the sea .
Tips: 1. topic sentences 2.Use some conjunctions (连接词)
3. Use different sentence structures
Para3
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
topic sentence:___________________________________________
(具备号召性)
Useful expressions
We should protect whales from ...
I think people should/shouldn’t...
Ways
Para 3
We should protect whales by making rules on whale protection and by not putting rubbish into the sea. I think people should learn more about whales.
one possible version
Whales are___________________________
______.
They live_____________________.
They eat_____________________________.
They can____________________.
One interesting fact is __________________.
Some kinds of whales are in danger because
________________________________and
__________________________________________.
huge and some kinds of them have
teeth
in the sea
small fish and other sea life
jump out of the water
whale parts are sold to make things like candles and soap
human catch whales for meat,fat and oil
whales can sing songs
Pre-writing: Build a sentence
We should__________ to protect the whales.
I think we should_______________________.
The water pollution_____________________.
We shouldn't___________________________
is more and more serious
make rules
learn more about whales
put rubbish into the sea
Try to make logical(逻辑的) sentences.
Pre-writing: Build a sentence
Whales are huge and some kinds of them have teeth. They live in the sea. They eat small fish and other sea life. They can jump out of the water.One interesting fact is that whales can sing songs . Some kinds of whales are in danger because human catch whales for meat, fat and oil and whale parts are sold to make things like candles and soap. We should make rules to protect the whales. The water pollutin is more and more serious. We shouldn't put rubbish into the sea.
Pre-writing: Better a passage
Instruction
Ways
Problems
What's more
As far as I know,
In fact
Second
First
Animals
Linking words
(连接词)
Pre-writing Better a passage
Read and put the linking words in the right place.
(把连接词填入正确的位置)
______________,whales are huge and some kinds of them have teeth. They live in the sea. They eat small fish and other sea life. They can jump out of the water.One interesting fact is that whales can sing songs . ________,some kinds of whales are in danger . _____,human catch whales for meat, fat and oil. ________,whale parts are sold to make things like candles and soap. We should make rules to protect the whales.___________,the water pollution is more and more serious. We shouldn't put rubbish into the sea.
linking words
As far as I know
First
In fact
Second
What's more
Instruction
e
Ways
s
s
a
p
Problems
g
a
What's more
As far as I know,
In fact
Second
First
Animals
Whales are huge and some kinds of them have teeth. They live in the sea. They eat small fish and other sea life. They can jump out of the water.One interesting fact is that whales can sing songs . Some kinds of whales are in danger because human catch whales for meat, fat and oil and whale parts are sold to make things like candles and soap. We should make rules to protect the whales. The water pollutin is more and more serious. We shouldn't put rubbish into the sea.
As far as I know,whales are huge and some kinds of them have teeth. They live in the sea. They eat small fish and other sea life. They can jump out of the water.One interesting fact is that whales can sing songs . In fact,some kinds of whales are in danger . First, human catch whales for meat, fat and oil. Second,whale parts are sold to make things like candles and soap. We should make rules to protect the whales. What's more,the water pollutin is more and more serious. We shouldn't put rubbish into the sea.
compare
Try to use some linking words.
用好连接词。
Write a slogan(口号) in the end!
Make it more powerful(有力量)!
Pre-writing Write a proposal(倡议书)
Protecting animals means protecting
yourselves!
我市动物园正在征集“保护动物”的倡议书,你选取其中一种动物制作一张倡议书。
包括以下要点:
1.动物的相关介绍。
2.动物目前的现状。
3.有哪些保护的途径?
I P W
Write and design
While-writing:Groupwork
Save the ______
Introductions
Problems
Ways
Task1:Discussion
What animals do you want to write
Write key words and phrases in the mind-map.
Linking words:
as far as I know, in fact, even though,first,second,what's more...
Tips:
Clear structure
(清晰的结构)
Logical sentence
(逻辑的句子)
Linking words
(连接词)
While-writing:Groupwork
我市动物园正在征集“保护动物”的倡议书,你选取其中一种动物制作一张倡议书。
包括以下要点:
1.动物的相关介绍。
2.动物目前的现状。
3.有哪些保护的途径?
I P W
Task2:Write and design
Animals
the biggest animal on land(陆地上)
What do elephants look like
They are ______. / They have______
Where do they live
They live in/on_________________.
Writing
Elephants
Basic information
How to talk about the elephants?
What they look like
where they live
what they eat
what they can do
reasons for protection
ways of protection
Pre-writing:The outline of talking about elephants.
elephants
Out line
Para 1
Para 3
Para 2
facts
What do they look like
Where do they live
What do they eat
What can they do
Why should they to be protected
They are _______ . / They have_________.
First,we should____________________________.
Second, we can___________________________.
Third, the government should_________________.
They live______________________ .
On the one hand, people _____________________.
On the other hand,people kill them for ___________.
They eat__________________ .
They can_____________________ .
They also can___________________.
One intersting fact is _____________.
Elephants are in danger.
How can we protect elephants
Let's Save the Elephants
Elephants are the biggest animals on land. They live in the forest and eat grass and leaves. Elephants are smart. They can play soccer or music. They can also draw very well. One interesting fact is elephants never forget. They can walk for a long time and never get lost. They can also remember places with food and water. This helps them to live.
However, elephants are in great danger. People cut down many trees so elephants are losing their homes. People also kill elephants for their ivory. Today there are only about 3,000 elephants (over 100,000 before).
We must save the trees and not buy things made of ivory. Elephants are dying. Let’s take action!
A sample
1
2
3
Let’s save the animals before it’s too late
and make the world a better place.
Summary
请根据下列提示写一篇题为“Saving the Animals”的英语短文,100词左右
提示:
1.人类活动:乱砍滥伐树木和猎杀动物。
2.导致的后果:动物生存环境越来越差,动物也 越来越少,有的甚至濒临灭绝。
3.请你提出至少两条合理化的建议。
提示词:稀有的rare Saving the Animals
Homework Write a proposal(倡议书)
Homework:
Improve your writing, make it a real proposal and put it up in Zhumadian Animal Zoo.
Thank you
Saving the Animals
As time goes by, there are fewer and fewer forests. The reason is that people cut too many trees down and hunt too many animals. As a result, the animals are becoming fewer and fewer, too. Some animals are even dying out. So we should do something to stop these activities of human beings which are destroying(破坏) the earth.
In my opinion, we should protect the forests and save the animals. First, the government should make laws to forbid(禁止) people to cut down freely or to hunt the animals. Anybody who breaks the law should be punished. Second, we should make people realize the importance of protecting the animals.
To save the animals means to save the earth and save ourselves.Let's take actions now!
Thanks for your listening!
Bye, Class!
Where there is a will, there is a way.
有志者,事竟成!

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