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英语满分作文五步法
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英语满分作文五步法
话题写作（六）假日活动
教材话题链接
满分作文五步法
小小加油站
佳篇创作
教材话题链接
八年级上册 Unit 8 How do you make a banana milk shake
—Thanksgiving in the United States P61
九年级全一册 Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious!
九年级全一册 Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.
—April Fool’s Day P94
典/例/分/析
假如你是王宁,你的美国笔友Tom对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣,他想请你介绍你最喜欢的一个节日,如中秋节、端午节、春节等。你通常是怎么庆祝的,以及你喜欢这个节日的原因,请用英语回复一封邮件。
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
审—审清题意
文体:　　　　　　
人称:　　　　　　
时态:　
功能:　　　　　　
电子邮件
第一人称
一般现在时
满分作文五步法
Step1
节日介绍
要点:
1.　　　 　　　 　　
2.　　　　　　　　　
3.　　　　　　　　　
适当发挥……
Dear Tom,
How is it going


Yours,
Wang Ning
审—审清题意
点明最喜欢的节日
庆祝方式
喜欢原因
满分作文五步法
Step1
1.引入主题:
I’m glad to hear that you

Chinese traditional festivals.
2.主体内容:
My favorite Chinese festival is 　　　 　　　　　　.
连—连词成句
are interested in
满分作文五步法
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
the Mid-Autumn Festival
Celebration: our family members usually 　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
I always admire the moon and
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　my family.
Reasons: I like eating mooncakes. My family can get together.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
get together and have a nice meal
share mooncakes with
3.总结收尾:
I hope that my e-mail will help you the Chinese festival.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
know more about
满分作文五步法
Step4
组—组句成篇
Dear Tom,
How is it going
I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.
修—修饰美化
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
My favorite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. ①It usually comes in September or October.
①变换句式:
It 　　　　　　　the 15th day of the 8th lunar month, usually in September or early October of the Gregorian calendar.
falls on
②扩句:
This festival is
the harvest and to admire the beautiful moon. On that day
　　　　　 　　usually get together and have a nice big meal.
修—修饰美化
to celebrate
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
②On that day we usually get together to have a big meal. After that I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my family.
our family members from different places
③合并句子:
I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes
　　　　 　　　　which are made from peanuts and fruit and etc.
修—修饰美化
shaped like a full moon
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
③I like eating mooncakes. They are in the shape of a full moon. They carry people’s wishes to the family they love and miss.
Step4
组—组句成篇
In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is the day of pleasure and happiness. I hope that my e-mail will help you know more about the Chinese festival.
Yours,
Wang Ning
美文诵读（画出你认为优美的句子）
Dear Tom,
How is it going
I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.
My favorite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar
month, usually in September or early October of the Gregorian calendar. This festival is to celebrate the harvest and to admire the beautiful moon. On that day our family members from different places usually get together and have a nice big meal. After that I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my family. I love this festival
because I like eating mooncakes shaped like a full moon which are made from peanuts and fruit and etc. The mooncake has the meaning of family reunion and it carries people’s wishes to the family they love and miss.
In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is the day of pleasure and happiness. I hope that my e-mail will help you know more about the Chinese festival.
Yours,
Wang Ning
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
1.节日类
New Year’s Day, the Spring Festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival, the Lantern Festival, National Day, the Dragon Boat Festival, Double Ninth Day, Christmas Day, Thanksgiving Day, Mother’s Day, Father’s Day, Children’s Day, World Sight Day
2.活动类
get together, come back home, stay up late, share something, eat dumplings, wish each other, take part in, chat, sit around the table, hang out, go on holiday, go to visit, have a good rest and relax, go sightseeing, do more outdoor sports, climb the mountains, travel around the world…
3.愿景类
I hope that…, come true, dream of doing, best wishes, good luck, look forward to, I think…, I believe…, I’m sure that…
佳句积累
[开头句]
1.I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.
2.I will take part in many kinds of activities.
3.I am going to admire the moon and talk about Chinese folk stories.
4.We’re going to get together to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival.
5.I’m going to have a good rest and relax myself in the Mid-Autumn Festival.
6.Now some students’ eyesight is declining, so it is important to protect eyesight.
7.It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has about two thousand years of history.
8.The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese.
[发展句]
1.It is held on the 15th day of the 8th month of the lunar calendar.
2.The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan.
3.I like eating mooncakes that are shaped like the moon.
4.The mooncake has the meaning of family reunion and it carries people’s wishes to the family they love and miss.
5.It is a time for family members to get together.
6.We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year.
7.What I’m interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.
8.First of all, I want to introduce the Lantern Festival.
9.We eat yuanxiao, and go to watch lantern shows and the dragon dance to pray for health and happiness for the whole year.
[结尾句]
1.I’m looking forward to hearing from you all.
2.I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals.
3.In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is the day of pleasure and happiness.
4.I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful festival.
5.I hope you will come here and experience this wonderful festival.
6.You will have an unforgettable experience if you come to China before this festival.
7.The Spring Festival can make us feel not only love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family.
8.I will never forget the smile on my mother’s face when we are having dinner together.
9.Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race.
佳/篇/创/作
假定你是林立,刚从英国结束为期五天的旅游回来,感谢好友Rick的款待, 得知他对中国的文化非常感兴趣,特别是即将到来的端午节,请你写一封信介绍中国的端午节。
[内容要点]
1.感谢他的款待;
2.介绍中国的端午节(时间、意义、风俗等);
3.欢迎他来中国;
……
[注意]
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
正稿：



I had a five-day trip to London last week. I would like to express my gratitude for your hospitality and kindness when I was in London.
Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, especially the Dragon Boat Festival, I would
Dear Rick,
How is everything going


love to introduce it to you. The Dragon Boat Festival, one of the most traditional festivals in China, falls on May 5th of the lunar calendar. People celebrate this festival in memory of Qu Yuan, who was a great Chinese poet. People in China will also hold a variety of activities to honor him, such as dragon boat racing, eating zongzi and so on.Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival.


Hope to see you in China soon.You will have an unforgettable experience if you come to China before this festival.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Lin Li
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