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2022
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2022年重庆三诊
助人篇
文本分析
01
情节设计
02
扩展情节
03
语料积累
04
目
录
01 文本分析
01
Don Montero was the owner of one of the grandest hotels in Spain. He was a workaholic and ignored everything else in the pursuit of earning more money. He did not have any family or children. He even failed his health for his business. With the passage of time, he got old, and his health worsened. He started to become very ill. At a visit to the doctor, he came to know that he had cancer and that it was also in its last stage. His doctor told him that his disease was incurable, and he didn't have much time left. He became very disappointed and anxious.
人物（关系）：
事件：
人物心理：
概括原文
Don Montero
(hotel owner)
拼命工作却患了癌症晚期
disappointed
&
anxious
02
One day he thought, "I am a rich person, and still, I feel so helpless. How could those poor people survive in this harsh world " He thought of checking how his staff treated the poor in his hotels as he always told his staff members to treat rich and poor equally. He dressed up as a beggar and went to his most expensive central hotel. When he reached the door, the security did not even let him in and insulted(辱骂) him badly. Seeing the attitude of his staff with the poor, he was left heartbroken.
人物（关系）：
地点：
事件：
人物心理：
概括原文
Don，his staff,
security
无助之余，扮作乞丐去自己
的酒店了解员工对待穷人态度，
被拒之门外且恶言相向。
helpless
&
heartbroken
his most expensive central hotel
03
Then he went to his other hotels and was left surprised by seeing the ill attitude of his staff with him. All of them insulted him and treated him without any sympathy. Finally, he decided to visit his hotel that was in a town out of the city. This hotel was surrounded by greenery and remained packed（挤满人的) almost all the time. He approached this hotel, and for the first time, the security guard did not wave him away with disrespect, Instead, he called the manager, and the manager told Don to wait for a little as the hotel was currently packed.
人物（关系）：
地点：
事件：
人物心理：
概括原文
Don，his staff,
security, manager
his other hotels;
his hotel that was in a town
out of the city
在城里的酒店被拒之后，在城外
的酒店受到了礼遇。
surprised
&
incredible
概括原文
Plot mountain
Beginning
Rising action
Conflict
Falling action
Ending
有钱却无儿无女
helpless
扮乞丐去自己
的酒店被歧视
heartbroken
拼命工作却患了癌症晚期
disappointed
& anxious
城外酒店服务人员接待
了他并让其在门外等待
surprised, incredible
Don成功入住酒店了吗？
确定主题，预测结局
助人篇
善良的传递
02 情节设计
构思4个情节
Para.1
Don went outside and waited for almost two hours, but nobody invited him back in.
Para. 2
The manager smiled and answered, because I was helped by the owner of this hotel, Don Montero.
情节构思顺序：4-2-1-3
4. Don曾经对经理的帮助让善良得以传递。
2. Don向经理询问为什么愿意帮助他。
1. 准备离开之即，Don被经理叫回。
3. 经理解释Don是怎么帮助他的。
03 扩展情节
扩展情节
Para.1
Don went outside and waited for almost two hours, but nobody invited him back in.
Para. 2
The manager smiled and answered, because I was helped by the owner of this hotel, Don Montero.
4. Don明白了，是曾经对经理的帮助让善良得以传递。
2. Don向经理询问为什么愿意帮助他。
1. 准备离开之即，Don被经理叫回。
3. 经理解释Don是怎么帮助他的。
Why？
How to feel？
What？
How to feel？
How？
How to feel？
Para.1
Don went outside and waited for almost two hours, but nobody invited
him back in. He thought maybe the manager played with him and intended
to turn him down wisely. “Who would care a beggar ” he sighed helplessly.
However, just as he started to go away, the manager called him in. To Don’s
surprise, the manager not only took him to a table that was full of plenty of
pleasant dishes, but also treated him with the utmost respect and asked him
to enjoy himself. “Why are you willing to help a beggar ” asked Don.
心理描写
语言描写
语言描写
Para.2
The manager smiled and answered, “Because I was helped by the owner of this hotel, Don Montero.” Tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes, he told Don that he once lost all of his money in an accident, and one day, when he visited this hotel as a poor beggar, the hotel owner Don Montero gave him food to eat and offered him a job. Unable to forget this kindness of his boss, he was also returning this act of kindness to those who need help. Those words hit Don like a rock, and a look of delight shot across his face. Kindness will eventually pass.
心理描写
心理描写
04 语料积累
语 法 结 构
01
形容词
Don Montero was the owner of one of the grandest hotels in Spain.
His doctor told him that his disease was incurable.
How could those poor people survive in this harsh world
Then he went to his other hotels and was left surprised by seeing the ill attitude of his staff with him.
语 法 结 构
02
介词短语
With the passage of time, he got old, and his health worsened.
All of them insulted him and treated him without any sympathy.
The security guard did not wave him away with disrespect.
the manager not only took him to a table that was full of plenty of pleasant dishes, but also treated him with the utmost respect and asked him to enjoy himself.
语 法 结 构
03
非谓语
Seeing the attitude of his staff with the poor, he was left heartbroken.
Tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes, he told Don that he once lost all of his money in an accident.
Unable to forget this kindness of his boss, he was also returning this act of kindness to those who need help.
语 法 结 构
04
从句
At a visit to the doctor, he came to know that he had cancer and that it was also in its last stage.
He thought of checking how his staff treated the poor in his hotels as he always told his staff members to treat rich and poor equally.
Finally, he decided to visit his hotel that was in a town out of the city.
语 法 结 构
04
从句
Instead, he called the manager, and the manager told Don to wait for a little as the hotel was currently packed.
…,the manager not only took him to a table that was full of plenty of pleasant dishes
…,he was also returning this act of kindness to those who need help.
细 节 描 写
心理描写
01
He thought maybe the manager played with him and intended to turn him down wisely.
Those words hit Don like a rock, and a look of delight shot across his face.
Tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes, he told Don that he once lost all of his money in an accident, …
细 节 描 写
语言描写
02
“Who would care a beggar ” he sighed helplessly.
“Why are you willing to help a beggar ” asked Don.
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