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(共21张PPT)
Picture your life after graduation.
Get married to a _____________ person.
beautiful, handsome, tall, sexy, wealthy
considerate, honest, loyal, romantic, practical, diligent, smart…
Don’ judge a book by its cover.
Step1 Read to get the main idea
What's the style of the passage
A. Narration
B. Exposition
C. Argumentation
Who When Where What Why How
How
Why
out of politeness; touched; lucky;
Then what
led a 40-year happy life; A letter made their story special
Who
What
she
he
their love story
invited; dated; married
(a beautiful lady)
(an ordinary man)
Reading
Out of politeness, a _______ lady accepted the invitation of an ________ man to have coffee with him. In the cafe, the man drank coffee with _____, which aroused the lady’s _________. Hearing the reply, the lady was _____ by the domestic man. She felt _____ to meet such a __________ man. Having dated in most of the cafes where she would always ____________to get him some salt, they got married and led a ______ life for 40 years. The husband passed away and left a _____for the wife before his death.
curiosity
moved
pretty
salt
ordinary
letter
Main idea
take the lead
lucky
remarkable
happy
新高考模式下的续写要求：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para1: “: My dearest, please forgive me for my cheating you all the time. Do you still remember our first date in the café _____________________________
Para2: She was shocked by the letter, with the feeling of being cheated. ______________
Writing
embarrassed curiosity bitter
coffee with salt love dated invitation
remarkable happy life letter
Tip1: the most important information
the main character
the main object
Step 2 Excavate the clues(挖掘线索）
The underlined key words:
Para1: My dearest, please forgive me for my cheating you all the time. Do you still remember our first date in the café _____________________________
Para2: She was shocked by the letter, with the feeling of being cheated. _______________________________
Tip2: Z pattern
Step 2 Excavate the clues(挖掘线索）
The given part of the story
The personality or quality of the characters.
domestic tolerant attentive considerate
She focused on the man’s personality and quality.
The man:
The lady:
considerate
attentive
Para1: “My dearest, please forgive me for my cheating you all the time. Do you still remember our first date in the café ____________
Step 2 Excavate the clues(挖掘线索）
The sentences of each paragraph
What’s the cheat ( what’s the truth)
Why did he cheat her ( How id it happen )
Coffee with salt was not his habit.
He made up a story to explain the reason for his habit.
both felt embarrassed (nervous)
beautiful; ordinary (on purpose to attract her )
Some ideas from Class 315
To ease the embarrassment, I tried some thing different.
Why did he cheat her
To attract you, I drank coffee with salt on purpose.
Feeling nervous, I asked for salt instead of sugar mistakenly, and I had to make up a story.
I had never drunk coffee before, so I made the mistake.
logic personality
He hesitate for a while before replying in a word-after-word way.
Further questions
Why didn’t he tell his wife earlier
She felt lucky for…
She would always take the lead to …
led a happy life…
He was afraid she would leave him if she knew the truth. He loved her so much that he drank coffee with salt for the rest of his life.
What’s the taste of coffee with salt
Bitter and salty
Action speaks louder than words!
Para2: She was shocked by the letter, with the feeling of being cheated. ______________
Step 2 Excavate the clues(挖掘线索）
What was she shocked at
Why was she shocked instead of being angry
Coffee with salt was not his habit for homesickness.
He drank bitter coffee for almost 40 years.
Deep down, she felt lucky …; …lead a happy life ;
What else did she feel
Moved by …, grateful for …, love…
Step 3 develop the plot
Para1: “My dearest, please forgive me for my cheating you all the time. Do you still remember our first date in the café ________________
What
How
Why
narrative; the first person ; past tense
Para2
She was shocked by the letter, with the feeling of being cheated._____________
narrative; the third person; past tense
Response
Result
What’s the cheat
How it happened
Why I didn’t tell you earlier
feelings facial expressions words actions
feelings
Read thoroughly to get the main idea
(who when where what why wow )
2 . Excavate the clues
(the underlined words, the given passage and two sentences )
Develop the plot
Begin to write
Steps to complete a story coherently and logically
(“Z”)
The writing style
Elements to be taken into consideration
the person
tense
Summary
Writing
For your reference:
Adverb
Lexical chunks
Conjunction
Non-predicate verbs
Subjunctive mood
Attributive Clause
silently, nervously…
have no choice but to do…
because, however…
Feeling nervous …, I …
If I had…, I would…
…, which sparked your curiosity
"My dearest, please forgive me for my cheating you all the time. Do you still remember our first date in the cafe The atmosphere embarrassed and I was feeling nervous. I meant to ask the waitress to bring me the sugar, which came out to be the salt. But I had to go on with the mistake, which sparked your curiosity. I had no other choice but to make up the story I told you, which made me drink coffee with salt for the rest of my life. You never know how bitter it is! I didn’t dare to tell you the truth because I was afraid of you leaving me for that. Thanks for bringing me the happy life. If I had a second life, I would choose you to be my wife again. "
She was shocked by the letter, with the feeling of being cheated. However, he would never know how strong her desire was to let him know that, she was just too happy to be cheated for her whole life by someone she loved so much. From then on, she would drink a cup of coffee with salt every time she missed him.
To girls:
Don’t judge a person by his appearance, otherwise, you may miss a remarkable man.
To boys:
Try to be a better man.
Keep an attitude to life, devote love to your wife.
To all:
We study, work and live together, sometimes just like
coffee with salt. Although it tastes bitter, we drink it because we love each other.
Bonus from the story

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