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2021年全国新高考I卷
As the twins looked around themin disappointment, their father appeared. “Dad， sorry, it was such a mess," Jeff murmured, lowering his head in shame. “No time to make mum a breakfast now," Jenna cried with regret and guilt overwhelming her like endless tides.Patting them gently on their shoulders, father said in a warm voice,“Darling,its love that counts. Let's do this again together. ” To their relief, with the guidance of father, they successfully made the breakfast.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.“Surprise!Happy mother's day, mummy!" They said, throwing their arms into the air. Shocked and proud, their mother said in a sweet whisper, “Thanks,my kids. ” Then, mother bit into the French toast, saying that it was the most delicious one she had ever tasted. At that time,Father entered the room and said in a loud voice that he also wanted a bite. All of them laughed with happiness, the laughter echoing in theroom.(亲情类话题结尾的自然结尾)/
/Radiant laughter burst out from the room constantly, and the whole family was enveloped in overwhelming happiness亲情类话题结尾的自然结尾)/
A golden shaft of sunlight, filtering in through the window and, together with love between family members,warmed up two young souls.(亲情类话题结尾的环境衬托式结尾)/
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. He whispered to them with a smile,"Wow,you two really surprised me,can l join in you " The twins nodded with a relief. Father fetched the medicine box and applied some medicine to Jenna’s hand. "We planned to cook Mum a meal, but we messed up," Jenna said. "It's ok. We can do it again before your mum wake up." Dad began to help them clean the stove and boil the porridge. Jeff put in another slice of bread and this time everything was perfect.
Said with a + smile
Said with/in + anger/ delight/awe
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.“Happy Mother‘s Day,mum,” the twins said. “Thank you so much for what you did for us.” “Thank you,my dear!” So delighted was she that she hugged the twins tightly, tears of joy welling up in her eyes. “lf it weren’t Dad‘s help,we couldn’t finish it,” Jenna added.At this time,father came upstairs. Their father threw arms around them and hugged them tightly. They felt blissful(极其快乐) as if they were in possession of everything. Indeed, love should be made known to loved ones.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. His jaw dropped open at the sight of the great mess. After the twins explained that they were trying to make a surprise for their mom,he smiled, put some ointment on Jeff‘s hand and helped clean up the stove. “Dad, can you help us with the breakfast ”Jenna asked. “Sure! Now l am officially a member of the Mothers-Day surprise team!” Under their fathers instruction, Jess stood by the pot and stirred the porridge from time to time while Jenna carefully fried the French toast. "Eyes on your task!” the father reminded.Before long, the breakfast was ready.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Before she asked,Jenna and Jeff said in chorus, “Happy Mother‘s Day!” Blushed, Jenna said,“Mom, we would like to say thank you. Thank you for bringing us to the world,which makes everything possible.Thank you for being a loving and supportive mom.You are always there for us when we are cast down, and you are happier than anyone else when we achieve something, however small the accomplishment is. ” With tears welling up,the mother threw her arms around them. Never has she been more pleased and proud.(188)
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. His appearance immediately nailed them where they were, dumbfounded.Then much beyond their expectation and to their great relief, he didn't fly into a rage. Instead, he went over, saying he understood the situation and instructed them to deal with the mess. Pot cleaned,the two brothers repeated the same process, but this time under the expert and patient guidance of their understanding father. Soon the delicious and inviting French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Their father then slipped back into the bedroom. 88 words
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When seeing her nose sniffing hard, they could hardly contain their excitement. A glance at the plates and bowls on the tray and Mum realized all that happened.Tears welling up in her eyes, she excitedly awoke her husband still"snoring", who pretended to open his drowsy eyes, muttering he was still in a sweet dream. Gathering around the well-designed breakfast,the whole family was immersed in happiness and gratitude.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their downcast (情绪低落的)eyes, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for their mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned up, and the father made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, and added a card they had made.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They hugged their mother tightly and yelled,“Happy Mother‘s Day,dear Mummy!” The mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook Father who was pretending to snore. He acted astonished when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best one she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite, too. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they winked at 眨眼 each other secretly.
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