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2022年中考英语作文终极预测汇编之“双减政策”(10篇)
一.书面表达(共10小题)
1.(2022 襄州区模拟)今年,响应党中央和政府号召,"双减"政策正式施行,同学们的课外辅导和家庭作业减少了,作为学生,我们应该如何做才能像谷爱凌一样既适应国家的方针政策又能使我们的学习更好、生活更愉快呢?请大家针对这个话题谈谈自己的看法或建议,文章的开头已给出。
要点提示:"double reduction"policy "双减"政策;make full use of time;make a good plan;finish homework effectively (有效地);take up some healthy and meaningful hobbies。
要求:
1.语言表达准确,语篇连贯;
2.内容包括所有要点,可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.词数:不少于90;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
It's really wonderful news that "double reduction" policy has been carried out.However,as students,in order to deal with the challenge of new policy and make our life better,what should we do?Here are some suggestions.
___________________________________
2.(2022 广西模拟)"双减"政策施行以来,同学们的学习和生活发生了很大的变化。请你结合自己的亲身经历,从以下两个方面谈一谈。
1. "双减"政策施行前后,你和你的同学们在学习、课余生活等方面发生的变化;
2.你对"双减"政策的看法、感受。
参考词汇:"double reduction" policy"双减"政策;training courses 培训课
要求:1.短文必须包含所有要点,还可以适当发挥;
2.词数不少于 80。开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。
Since the "double reduction" policy was carried out,our study and life have changed a lot.Next let me talk about it.______
3.(2022 宜城市一模)今年是双减过后中考第一年,也是新中考元年。在过去的几个月里,相信你和九年级其他莘莘学子们一样一直紧张、忙碌,又充实和充满希望地努力学习,备战中考。假如你是Li Ming,你的香港的笔友 Sam 向你询问你在过去的几个月里你是怎么平衡锻炼、备考和娱乐的。请写一篇90词左右的短文,回复他的来信。信的开头和结尾已经给出,但是词数不计入总数。
1.要点提升:
(1)简述一下你目前的生活和心理状态。
(2)结合实际详细介绍一下你过去几个月是如何锻炼,备考和娱乐的。
(3)简要谈谈你现在正在做什么及对中考的期望。
2.注意事项:
(1)90词左右。(开头已给出,不计入总数)
(2)行文应连贯流畅。
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
Dear Sam,
I'm very glad to hear from you.And I'm very thankful to your concern(关心).______
Yours,
Li Ming
4.(2022 南岗区校级二模)假如你是李丽,你的美国外教 Susan 来信询问"双减政策" ("double reduction" policy)下你的变化,请你根据以下信息给她写一封回信,并说说中学生参加课后实践活动(after﹣class activity) 的好处。
写作要点:
表达与她分享变化时激动的心情。
你的变化:
(1)与父母的关系;
(2)身体情况;
(3)有时间参加课后实践活动;
并说说中学生参加课后实践活动的好处。
写作要求:
不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
至少 80 词。
Dear Susan,
I'm glad to hear from you.__________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Li
5.(2022 西昌市模拟)去年7月,国家颁布"双减"政策,作为中学生,你对这项政策有何看法?我们应该如何学习,不断提升自己?我想这是我们每个中学生都应该认真思考的问题。请根据下表提示,以"The Double Reduction Policy"为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你和同学的看法。应包括以下内容:
要求:80词左右。
参考词汇:
Double reduction policy"双减"政策self﹣discipline 自律Training institutions培训机构
注意:不能逐字翻译。
双减内容 减少作业;减少课外培训班
王平的观点 好消息:压力减轻了;有更多的时间去做自己喜欢的事情了(比如:踢足球。打篮球等);可以参加课外活动;多帮助父母做家务
李明的观点 自律更重要:应该更严要求自己;课堂更该认真听讲;课后认真复习;如果总是放松自己。可能会落后;
你的观点 ……
Last year,China introduced the "Double Reduction" policy.As a student,how do you feel about this new policy?How can we study effectively to improve ourselves?That's a question we should think about carefully.
6.(2022 陵城区一模)"双减"之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。请你根据下图提示,以" How to make our spare time more meaningful "为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述如何让课余生活更有意义。除了提示中的内容,请你至少再补充一条。
要求:
1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3.80﹣100 词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How to make our spare time more meaningful
Nowadays,we students have much more spare time than ever before,but how to make our spare time more meaningful?Here is my opinion.
_______
In a word,let's make full use of our spare time and make it more meaningful.
7.(2022 荆州模拟)实行"双减"政策后,同学们周末都不能上补习班了。对于如何过周末,家长们和孩子们有着各自的想法。请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文,并将其发表到你校的英文论坛上。
要求:80词左右,可以适当发挥。文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
父母的观点 孩子们的观点 你的观点
做很多作业,做家务… 休息,运动,活动… 参加社会活动…
Parents and kids have different opinions about how to spend weekends.
8.(2022 顺德区模拟)"双减"背景下,国家对作业布置提出了新的要求。假如你是李明,你所在学校的英文报刊开展题目为"My Ideas on Homework"的主题征文活动。请你给该专栏投稿,内容包括:
a.你最喜欢的家庭作业,简单陈述原因;
b.你最开心的一次家庭作业经历(包括内容、收获等);
c.给现有的家庭作业布置提出两点改进建议。
作文要求:
(1)不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,字数80个左右,作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数也不必抄写在答题卡上。
My Ideas on Homework
As a student,it is quite important for us to finish our homework to review what we have learned.__________________
9.(2022 重庆模拟)"双减"政策后,学校布置的作业形式更多样化了,也更贴近学生生活实际了,但另一方面,家长也频频反应更需要家长参与孩子的作业了。在作业帮App的评论区总结得出以下3种看法:
Should parents help out after the "Double Reduction" policy?
看 法 理 由
应该 让老师节约时间来专注教学;了解孩子的学习情况……
不应该 检查作业是老师的事,老师检查作业好了解学生掌握情况……
看情况 家长检查听写类简单作业,老师检查难作业……
请你根据以上总结写一篇题为 "Should Parents Help Out After the "Double Reduction" Policy?"的短文向《21世纪英文报》投稿,并发表你自己对此的看法。
要求:
120词左右,开头已给出,不计入总浏数;
文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Should Parents Help Out After the "Double Reduction" Policy?
Recently,many hot talks have still been seen on Homework App.
10.(2021秋 随县期末)"双减"即有效减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。自从国家正式出台相关文件后,受到了社会的广泛关注。请根据下面的提示写一篇英语作文谈一谈不同角色、不同岗位的人们对"双减"的不同看法。
学生:不再有繁重的学习任务,也没有了很大的学习压力,有了更多的时间做自己喜欢的事;
家长:孩子比以前开朗、开心多了,但是学习成绩很让人担心,不知道能不能考上好高中、好大学;
老师:这一决策可以帮助学生培养更多的爱好,锻炼学生的能力,同时也能开阔学生的眼界,帮助学生发现更多的学习方法从而提高学习效率;
你自己的观点。
要求:
(1)语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)词数80左右;
(4)可以适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It's really wonderful news that the policy of "double﹣lightening the burden"has been carried out.It's good for children's mind and body.______
2022年中考英语作文终极预测汇编之“双减政策”(10篇)
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共10小题)
1.(2022 襄州区模拟)今年,响应党中央和政府号召,"双减"政策正式施行,同学们的课外辅导和家庭作业减少了,作为学生,我们应该如何做才能像谷爱凌一样既适应国家的方针政策又能使我们的学习更好、生活更愉快呢?请大家针对这个话题谈谈自己的看法或建议,文章的开头已给出。
要点提示:"double reduction"policy "双减"政策;make full use of time;make a good plan;finish homework effectively (有效地);take up some healthy and meaningful hobbies。
要求:
1.语言表达准确,语篇连贯;
2.内容包括所有要点,可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.词数:不少于90;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
It's really wonderful news that "double reduction" policy has been carried out.However,as students,in order to deal with the challenge of new policy and make our life better,what should we do?Here are some suggestions.
___________________________________
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
We are supposed to concentrate on our lessons and solve all the problems just in time.我们应该集中精力上课,及时解决所有的问题。
be supposed to do sth应该做某事。
【高分句型二】
In this way,we can feel more focused so that we will be able to finish our homework more effectively.这样,我们可以感到更专注,这样我们就能更有效地完成我们的作业。
so that引导目的状语从句。
【解答】It's really wonderful news that "double reduction" policy has been carried out.However,as students,in order to deal with the challenge of new policy and make our life better,what should we do?Here are some suggestions.(点题)
To start with,we'd better make full use of the time at school.We are supposed to concentrate on our lessons and solve all the problems just in time.【高分句型一】What's more,making a good plan at the start of the day can help us better manage our time.In this way,we can feel more focused so that we will be able to finish our homework more effectively.【高分句型一】In addition,we should take up some healthy and meaningful hobbies,which will have good effects on your study and health.Lastly,it's a good idea to offer to help around the house or in the community.Because doing chores and volunteer work can also help improve our responsibilities as well as our confidence.(看法和建议)
If we can do these,I believe,with the policy successfully carried out,we will enjoy a happier life and grow into a better person like Eileen Gu.(总结全文)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
2.(2022 广西模拟)"双减"政策施行以来,同学们的学习和生活发生了很大的变化。请你结合自己的亲身经历,从以下两个方面谈一谈。
1. "双减"政策施行前后,你和你的同学们在学习、课余生活等方面发生的变化;
2.你对"双减"政策的看法、感受。
参考词汇:"double reduction" policy"双减"政策;training courses 培训课
要求:1.短文必须包含所有要点,还可以适当发挥;
2.词数不少于 80。开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。
Since the "double reduction" policy was carried out,our study and life have changed a lot.Next let me talk about it.______
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I often play basketball and football with my friends.我经常和朋友们一起打篮球和踢足球。
play with和……玩。
【高分句型二】
I think "double reduction" policy is very good,which reduces the burden on our students and makes our schoo life more wonderful.我认为"双减"政策非常好,它减轻了我们学生的负担,使我们的学校生活更加精彩。
which引导的定语从句。
【解答】Since the "double reduction" policy was carried out,our study and life have changed a lot.Next let me talk about it.I used to have a lot of homework every day.So I had to stay up late at night.I didn't have time for other sports.Now everything is better.I have little homework every day,so I can finish it at school.In addition,I don't have to get up so early,so I can get enough sleep every night.In my spare time,I can do what I like.I ofter play basketball and football with my friends.【高分句型一】Now I'm very happy.(变化)I think "double reduction" policy is very good,which reduces the burden on our students and makes our school life more wonderful.【高分句型二】(感受)
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕提示内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词。
3.(2022 宜城市一模)今年是双减过后中考第一年,也是新中考元年。在过去的几个月里,相信你和九年级其他莘莘学子们一样一直紧张、忙碌,又充实和充满希望地努力学习,备战中考。假如你是Li Ming,你的香港的笔友 Sam 向你询问你在过去的几个月里你是怎么平衡锻炼、备考和娱乐的。请写一篇90词左右的短文,回复他的来信。信的开头和结尾已经给出,但是词数不计入总数。
1.要点提升:
(1)简述一下你目前的生活和心理状态。
(2)结合实际详细介绍一下你过去几个月是如何锻炼,备考和娱乐的。
(3)简要谈谈你现在正在做什么及对中考的期望。
2.注意事项:
(1)90词左右。(开头已给出,不计入总数)
(2)行文应连贯流畅。
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
Dear Sam,
I'm very glad to hear from you.And I'm very thankful to your concern(关心).______
Yours,
Li Ming
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I really hope that I can enter the ideal high school through my own efforts.我真的希望我能通过自己的努力进入理想的高中。I really hope that +宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
Last but not least,I wish us all the best of luck in the high school entrance examination.最后但并非最不重要的是,我祝我们所有人在高中入学考试中好运。Last but not least最后但并非最不重要的是。
【解答】Dear Sam,
I'm very glad to hear fom you.And I'm very thankful to your concern.Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming.I feel a little nervous every now and then,but most of the time I have an optimistic atitude to the examination. (目前的生活和心理状态)Moreover,I have been spending most of my time reviewing for exams these months.Sometimes I do sports outoors.But I seldom have time to go out for fun,because I spend six hours a day studying for the examination.(如何锻炼,备考和娱乐的) I really hope that I can enter the ideal high school through my own efforts.【高分句型一】(期望)
Last but not least,I wish us all the best of luck in the high school entrance examination.【高分句型二】
Yours,
Li Ming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
4.(2022 南岗区校级二模)假如你是李丽,你的美国外教 Susan 来信询问"双减政策" ("double reduction" policy)下你的变化,请你根据以下信息给她写一封回信,并说说中学生参加课后实践活动(after﹣class activity) 的好处。
写作要点:
表达与她分享变化时激动的心情。
你的变化:
(1)与父母的关系;
(2)身体情况;
(3)有时间参加课后实践活动;
并说说中学生参加课后实践活动的好处。
写作要求:
不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
至少 80 词。
Dear Susan,
I'm glad to hear from you.__________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Li
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】:
In the past,I usually had lessons and did my homework in the daytime.过去,我通常在白天上课和做作业。
in the past表示在过去,时态使用一般过去时。
【高分句型二】:
But now I can watch news on TV,read books and newspapers.但现在我可以看电新闻,阅读书籍和报纸。
句子中on TV表示在电视上。
【解答】Dear Susan,
I'm glad to hear from you.You learn about the "double reduction" policy in China and want to know about the changes of my life.I'm very excited to share some things about it with you.(心情)A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of Double﹣reduction policy.In the past,I usually had lessons and did my homework in the daytime.【高分句型一】In the past,because I had a lot of homework,I went to bed at 11:30.But now I have less homework,so I have more time to do what I like.I have more time to exercise,so now I'm very healthy.(身体)Now I have more time to communicate with my parents and friends.This will help improve my relationship with my parents.(与父母、朋友关系)But now,I can visit museums,take computer lessons and draw pictures.In the evening,I usually did homework in the past.But now I can watch news on TV,read books and newspapers.(课外活动)【高分句型二】I'm very happy now.(感想)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Li
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。写作时要结合表格内容对情况进行陈述,之后给出自己的看法和建议。
5.(2022 西昌市模拟)去年7月,国家颁布"双减"政策,作为中学生,你对这项政策有何看法?我们应该如何学习,不断提升自己?我想这是我们每个中学生都应该认真思考的问题。请根据下表提示,以"The Double Reduction Policy"为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你和同学的看法。应包括以下内容:
要求:80词左右。
参考词汇:
Double reduction policy"双减"政策self﹣discipline 自律Training institutions培训机构
注意:不能逐字翻译。
双减内容 减少作业;减少课外培训班
王平的观点 好消息:压力减轻了;有更多的时间去做自己喜欢的事情了(比如:踢足球。打篮球等);可以参加课外活动;多帮助父母做家务
李明的观点 自律更重要:应该更严要求自己;课堂更该认真听讲;课后认真复习;如果总是放松自己。可能会落后;
你的观点 ……
Last year,China introduced the "Double Reduction" policy.As a student,how do you feel about this new policy?How can we study effectively to improve ourselves?That's a question we should think about carefully.
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
They can have more time to do what they like,such as playing football,basketball and so on.他们可以有更多的时间做自己喜欢的事情,比如踢足球、打篮球等等。
such as 比如。
【高分句型二】
They should be stricter with themselves.他们应该更严格地要求自己。
be strict with 严格要求。
【解答】Last year,China introduced the "Double Reduction" policy.As a student,how do you feel about this new policy?How can we study effectively to improve ourselves?That's a question we should think about carefully.The content of "Double Reduction"is to reduce homework and Training institutions. (双减内容)Wang Ping thinks this is good news.The pressure on the students has eased.They can have more time to do what they like,such as playing football,basketball and so on. 【高分句型一】They can also participate in extracurricular activities.They can help their parents do more housework.(王平的观点) Li Ming believes that students' self﹣discipline is more important.They should be stricter with themselves.【高分句型二】They should listen more carefully in class.They should review more carefully after class.If you always relax yourself.Some students may be more backward. (李明的观点)I think this puts forward higher requirements for teachers.Teachers should prepare their lessons carefully.Classroom efficiency is more important.(你的观点)
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕表格内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。写作时要结合表格内容对情况进行陈述,之后给出自己的看法和建议,看法和建议需要自主发挥。在写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
6.(2022 陵城区一模)"双减"之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。请你根据下图提示,以" How to make our spare time more meaningful "为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述如何让课余生活更有意义。除了提示中的内容,请你至少再补充一条。
要求:
1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3.80﹣100 词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How to make our spare time more meaningful
Nowadays,we students have much more spare time than ever before,but how to make our spare time more meaningful?Here is my opinion.
_______
In a word,let's make full use of our spare time and make it more meaningful.
【考点】图表作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
First ,it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them.
首先,帮助父母做一些家务来表达我们对他们的爱是很好的。本句的句型结构是It's +adj. +to do sth.做某事怎么样。
【高分句型二】
So we must spend at least one hour playing sports every day.
所以我们必须每天至少花一个小时做运动。本句使用的句型是Sb.spend some time doing sth.某人花多长时间做某事。
【解答】
How to make our spare time more meaningful
Nowadays,we students have much more spare time than ever before,but how to make our spare time more meaningful?Here is my opinion.
First ,it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them.【高分句型一】(帮助父母做家务,表达对他们的爱)Second,we can know more about the world by reading books.(通过读书来了解世界)Third,it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.(亲近大自然,放松自己)Last but not least,it's important for us to keep healthy.So we must spend at least one hour playing sports every day.【高分句型二】(锻炼身体,保持健康)
In a word,let's make full use of our spare time and make it more meaningful.
【点评】首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;同时注意语句要通顺,词汇书写无误,不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
7.(2022 荆州模拟)实行"双减"政策后,同学们周末都不能上补习班了。对于如何过周末,家长们和孩子们有着各自的想法。请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文,并将其发表到你校的英文论坛上。
要求:80词左右,可以适当发挥。文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
父母的观点 孩子们的观点 你的观点
做很多作业,做家务… 休息,运动,活动… 参加社会活动…
Parents and kids have different opinions about how to spend weekends.
【考点】图表作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】:
Reading books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge.读更多的书不仅很有趣,还可以让我学到更多的知识。句中使用了短语"not only…but also…不但…而且…"、"make sb do sth 让某人做某事"。
【高分句型二】:
I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society.我打算多参加社会活动,以便于更了解社会。句中"so that I can know more about the society"为目的状语从句。句中短语有"take part in 参加"、"know about 了解"。
【解答】Parents and kids have different opinions about how to spend weekends.The parents think their kids should do much homework.They should have extra classes.What's more,they should do the housework at home.However,the kids don't agree.They want to have a rest and relax themselves when the weekends comes.They would like to do some sports and take some activities.(父母和孩子的观点)
In my opinion,it is important for us to relax.We don't need to work as hard as usual.We can do something we like.However,we should also do some reading.Reading books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge.【高分句型一】I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them do some housework.I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society.【高分句型二】(我的观点)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
8.(2022 顺德区模拟)"双减"背景下,国家对作业布置提出了新的要求。假如你是李明,你所在学校的英文报刊开展题目为"My Ideas on Homework"的主题征文活动。请你给该专栏投稿,内容包括:
a.你最喜欢的家庭作业,简单陈述原因;
b.你最开心的一次家庭作业经历(包括内容、收获等);
c.给现有的家庭作业布置提出两点改进建议。
作文要求:
(1)不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,字数80个左右,作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数也不必抄写在答题卡上。
My Ideas on Homework
As a student,it is quite important for us to finish our homework to review what we have learned.__________________
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Because it can not only consolidate the knowledge learned,but also exercise my practical ability.因为它不仅能巩固所学的知识,还能锻炼我的实践能力。not only ...but also ...不仅...而且...。
【高分句型二】
At the same time,I hope to have more hands﹣on homework and more freedom in time.同时,我希望有更多的动手作业和更多的自由时间。At the same time同时。
【解答】
My Ideas on Homework
As a student,it is quite important for us to finish our homework to review what we have learned.My favorite homework is hands﹣on homework.Because it can not only consolidate the knowledge learned,but also exercise my practical ability. (最喜欢的家庭作业及原因)Once in a Chinese class,we learned how to make noodles. 【高分句型一】When we got home,the teacher asked us to make noodles again.Although I couldn't make noodles this time,I experienced the fun of hands﹣on operation.(最开心的一次家庭作业经历)At the same time,I hope to have more hands﹣on homework and more freedom in time.【高分句型二】(建议)
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。
9.(2022 重庆模拟)"双减"政策后,学校布置的作业形式更多样化了,也更贴近学生生活实际了,但另一方面,家长也频频反应更需要家长参与孩子的作业了。在作业帮App的评论区总结得出以下3种看法:
Should parents help out after the "Double Reduction" policy?
看 法 理 由
应该 让老师节约时间来专注教学;了解孩子的学习情况……
不应该 检查作业是老师的事,老师检查作业好了解学生掌握情况……
看情况 家长检查听写类简单作业,老师检查难作业……
请你根据以上总结写一篇题为 "Should Parents Help Out After the "Double Reduction" Policy?"的短文向《21世纪英文报》投稿,并发表你自己对此的看法。
要求:
120词左右,开头已给出,不计入总浏数;
文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Should Parents Help Out After the "Double Reduction" Policy?
Recently,many hot talks have still been seen on Homework App.
【考点】图表作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
They think it's the teacher's work to check the students' homework.他们认为检查学生的作业是老师的工作。
it's the teacher's work to do sth做某事是老师的工作。
【高分句型二】
The teachers check homework themselves in order to understand what students have mastered so that they can adjust the next step of teaching.教师亲自检查作业,是为了了解学生掌握了什么,从而调整下一步的教学。
in order to do sth为了做某事。
so that引导目的状语从句。
【解答】
Should Parents Help Out After the "Double Reduction" Policy?
Recently,many hot talks have still been seen on Homework App.(点题)
Some people think parents should be involved in their children's homework.With the help of parents,the teachers can save time to focus on teaching.In addition,parents can know more about their children's learning through this way.In this way,teaching efficiency can be improved.(应该)However,some people don't think so.They think it's the teacher's work to check the students' homework.【高分句型一】The teachers check homework themselves in order to understand what students have mastered so that they can adjust the next step of teaching.【高分句型二】For example,if students have problems in writing,teachers can spend more time on writing.(不应该)Others say it should depend on the situation.They think parents should check easy dictation homework and teachers should check hard work.(看情况)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
10.(2021秋 随县期末)"双减"即有效减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。自从国家正式出台相关文件后,受到了社会的广泛关注。请根据下面的提示写一篇英语作文谈一谈不同角色、不同岗位的人们对"双减"的不同看法。
学生:不再有繁重的学习任务,也没有了很大的学习压力,有了更多的时间做自己喜欢的事;
家长:孩子比以前开朗、开心多了,但是学习成绩很让人担心,不知道能不能考上好高中、好大学;
老师:这一决策可以帮助学生培养更多的爱好,锻炼学生的能力,同时也能开阔学生的眼界,帮助学生发现更多的学习方法从而提高学习效率;
你自己的观点。
要求:
(1)语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)词数80左右;
(4)可以适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It's really wonderful news that the policy of "double﹣lightening the burden"has been carried out.It's good for children's mind and body.______
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Teachers believe that this decision can help students cultivate more hobbies and exercise their abilities.
老师们相信这个决定可以帮助学生培养更多的兴趣爱好,锻炼他们的能力。
believe+ that 宾语从句,表示相信……。
【高分句型二】
As a student,I agree with this policy.作为一名学生,我同意这项政策。
agree with... ,同意……。
【解答】It's really wonderful news that the policy of "double﹣lightening the burden"has been carried out.It's good for children's mind and body.(亮明观点)Students believe that no more heavy learning tasks,no more learning pressure,and more time to do what you like.(学生观点)Parents think their children are much more cheerful and happy than before,but school record is very worrying.They don't know whether they can enter a good high school or a good university.(父母观点)Teachers believe that this decision can help students cultivate more hobbies and exercise their abilities. 【高分句型一】At the same time,it can broaden students' horizons and help students find more learning methods,so as to improve learning efficiency.(老师观点)As a student,I agree with this policy.【高分句型二】This reduces our study pressure.But this requires us to learn more actively.(我的观点)
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。
考点卡片
1.提纲作文
【概念】
提纲作文是近几年中考英语书面表达的热点题型.命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查,使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强.
1.提纲作文的特点
提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块,以条目的形式列出,请考生据此进行写作.这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定.因此,提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到,一个也不能遗漏.
2.思维空间灵活、开放
为了提高文章档次,考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥.因此,该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性,能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力.
3.提纲作文的写作步骤一般分为:审题,明确文体形式;构思,根据提纲全面构思文章内容,根据内容构思词语和句型结构;写作完稿,根据构思的词语和句型结构,按照合理的顺序和语言要求,连句成文.注意句子间的正确联系,注意词语的丰富和句型的多样.
【写作举例】
假定你们学校英语报社征集以"我最感激的人﹣﹣妈妈"为主题的英语作文,请你根据要求写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的妈妈.
要点:1、简单介绍妈妈.
2、感激妈妈的理由.
3、如何感激.
注意:1、词数100左右.
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3、开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数.
Everyone has a person he wants to say thank﹣you to in his
deep heart.I owe my great gratitude to my mother. .
案例分析
第一步:审题
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你们学校英语报社征集以"我最感激的人﹣﹣妈妈"为主题的英语作文,请你根据要求写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的妈妈, 写作时注意以下几点:一、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:1、简单介绍妈妈. 2、感激妈妈的理由. 3、如何感激. 二、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.三、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.四.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
第二步:构思
文章应该按照"总述﹣﹣分述"的结构分为四段段.
第一段:点题,说明要感激的人.
第二段:简单介绍妈妈.
第三段:感激妈妈的理由.
第四段:如何感激.
第三步:完稿
根据要点,按照逻辑顺序重新组织材料,力求拼写正确,行文连贯,连接自然,语言规范,词语丰富,句型多样,语法结构准确无误,表达简明扼要,慎用长难句.
高分范文
Everyone has a person he wants to say thank﹣you to in his deep heart.I am very grateful to my mother.
My mother is a primary school teacher who graduated from a normal university.(高分句型一)She is a devoted mother as well as a kind and patient teacher.(简单介绍妈妈)She takes good care of me every day,especially this year when I am in Junior Three.She often cooks delicious food for me and helps me clean up my room.
What's more,she even accompanies me deep into the night every time I am doing my homework.(高分句型二)Most important of all,whenever I get upset or lose heart,she will encourage me until I have been cheered up.She always says, "Heaven will always leave a door open.As long as you work hard,you will definitely succeed."(感激妈妈的理由)
Now I try my best to study and spend almost all my time on my lessons in order to get into a good high school next year.This is the best way for me to thank my mother.(如何感激)
2.图表作文
【概念】
图表类写作题一向是中考书面表达中的难点.它不像看图叙事和提示作文那样直观明了,文体多以说明文和议论文为主.考查时要求同学们根据所给的图表、数据等进行分析、研究,阅读其中的文字和说明,弄清各种信息之间的关系,提炼要点,然后组织语言进行写作,必要时还要加入作者自己的观点.
和看图叙事不同的是,写图表作文时对图表和数据内容不必全部描述,只需重点引用能支持观点的一些数据.分析图表时切不可凭空想象,要善于抓住总的规律和趋势.时态方面除特定的时间用过去时外,常用一般现在时.
【结构】
图表作文的结构通常是三段式:
第一段分析图表中的数据变化反映出的问题或趋势,简要概述图表所揭示的信息.
第二段分析原因.
第三段提出解决问题的办法或建议.
【考查形式】
1.调查图
如2006年河南试验区中考卷关于"学生吸烟情况"的调查图,2005年包头市关于学生
视力下降原因的调查;
2. 表格
如2006年盐城中考卷根据表格设计宣传单饼提出给驾驶员和行人的2条建议;2005年大连中考卷关于班级去年今年情况对比的表格等;2005年哈尔滨中考关于压岁钱的使用情况表.
3. 柱图
如2006年青海中考卷关于"学生上网目的"的调查.
【写作方法指导】
一、写作图表作文时应该注意的几个方面:
1. 要对图表作简要的主题介绍.
2. 切忌不加详细分析、罗列数字.要进行横向、纵向的比较,寻找规律性的信息,通过计算找出部分与整体、部分与部分之间的关系,如增减的绝对数字、百分比、分数或倍数等.
3. 分析原因,寻找规律,把握主题.
4 根据分析所得信息得出结论.
二、写作过程
仔细审题永远是写作中最重要的部分.认真分析图表的含义,弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息间的关系,整理要点.
图表作文的结构通常是三段式:
第一段分析图表中的数据变化反映出的问题或趋势,简要概述图表所揭示的信息.
第二段是解释原因的段落,一般要用到一些过渡句.
第三段提出解决问题的办法或建议.
写作时注意直截了当、尽快入题,适当加入自己的议论,力争做到观点明确,不要拐弯抹角,拖泥带水,使人读后一头雾水.
三、注意事项
文章应包括图表所示内容,但不是全部写到;叙述调查结果时要避免重复使用百分比;最重要的是要有表明自己观点的句子.书写要规范,包括大小写、标点符号等.写作之后还要注意认真检查,改正错误.
【写作举例】
英语课上老师让同学们讨论网上购物的利与弊,根据你们组的讨论结果,请你做代表发言.
要求:1.语言流畅、规范;
2.包含提示内容,并适当发挥;
3.词数80左右.
利(advantages) 弊(disadvantages)
方便;24小时营业;不用排队 看不见物品;不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣
案例分析
这是一篇提示性作文,要求答题者根据提示写出网上购物的利与弊.同时要联想出与advantages 有关的词语:convenience, open 24 hours a day, do not queue;以及与disadvantages有关的词语:can't see the products, can't enjoy walking around the shops with your friends等等.
作为一篇短文,除了写出提示词所给的信息外,还要根据题意,在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥.
范文
Shopping online is a new way of shopping. It has many advantages. It is much more convenient. You can shop whenever you like as the on﹣line shops are open 24 hours a day, and you do not have to queue. Second, it is often cheaper to buy goods over the Internet and easier to find what you are looking for. There are some disadvantages, too. You cannot see the products or check their quality. Besides, you cannot enjoy walking around the shops, and talking with your friends
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