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Writing
Dragon Boat Festival
Learning objectives
avoiding common mistakes in writing;
covering the topic with varied (多样的) sentences;
using proper transition (连接词) words & phrases to make the composition more coherent.
At the end of this lesson, you will be able to improve your writing by
Read the topic of the composition carefully (审题)
假定你是李华，端午将至，你想邀请你校外教Mark周六观看龙舟比赛，但Mark不在办公室，请你给他写张留言条。内容包括：
1.你到Mark办公室的目的：
2.介绍端午节（纪念屈原，吃粽子）及赛龙舟；
3.确定出发时间和见面地点。
参考词汇：龙舟比赛 dragon boat race
审体裁 应用文（留言条）
审人称 第一人称
审时态 一般将来/过去/现在时
What makes a good writing？
Good structure--- beginning, body, ending
Focus on the topic and no mistakes
Wonderful sentences and phrases
Coherent ---with transition(连接的) words and phrases
Beautiful handwriting
Focus on the topic and no mistakes
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Today, I went to you office but you weren’t there. I wanted to tell you somethings about the Dragon Boat Festival.
In China, There are many festival, such as the Dragon Boat festival, the Mid-Autumn festival. As the dragon boat festival is coming. Our school plan to make some interesting activities for it. For instance, we will make and eat zongzi in memory of the famous poet- QuYuan. Furthermore, we will watch the dragon boat race together. If you want to join this activity, you can arrived at the school gate at Saturday morning and I am willing to go with you.
Finally, I hope you can join in this interesting festival
and have a good time.
festivals
plans
something
arrive
your
on
join in
Task 1: Correct the errors
Spelling errors
Grammatical errors
Tense （时态）
Pronoun （人称）
Subject-verb agreement（主谓一致）
Singular or plural form of nouns （名词单复数）
Fix collocation（固定搭配）
...
Tips: Pay attention to avoid the common mistakes
Accuracy
(准确性)
Some wonderful sentences and phrases
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Task 2: Compare the sentences and learn some useful expressions
你到Mark办公室的目的: 端午将至，你想邀请你校外教Mark周六观看龙舟比赛，但Mark不在办公室.
Today, I went to your office but you weren’t there. I wanted to tell you something about our school activity.
Tips: always focus on the topic
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表达日期/日期将近
1... is coming/approaching
2. ...is around the corner
3. ...will come soon
4....is on ...（date）
5..... falls on..（date）
表达邀请 (invite sb to do sth)
1. I want to invite you to take part in/join in ..
2. I am writing to invite you to ..
3. I am writing to ask if you can…
介绍端午节（纪念屈原，吃粽子）及赛龙舟；
Compare the sentences and learn some useful expressions
It is one of Chinese traditional festivals ,we eat the zongzi and celebrate it in memory of a famous poet --- Quyuan and watch the dragon boat race.
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介绍节日
1. ... is one of the traditional/most significant festivals in China.
2. .... is celebrated in memory of...
3. ... is celebrated in many/multifold ways, such as
eating .., watching..., appreciating...
纪念人物
1.People celebrate it in memory of/to honor/ to remember.., who was a ...
This festival is to commemorate（纪念）the patriotic (爱国的) poet Qu Yuan,a great lover of his motherland. The most important activity of this festival is Dragon Boat Race. Besides, the festival has also been celebrated by making and eating zongzi.
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确定出发时间和见面地点
If you have free time in the day, you can try to watch the race with us. We will meet at the school gate at 8.00 am on Saturday.
Compare the sentences and learn some useful expressions
收尾
Compare the sentences and learn some useful expressions
seeing
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确定出发时间/地点
1. We will/ Let's meet at … (Time) in/at (Place)
2. We will set off from... (Place)
3. You can meet me at the front of … at (Time)
收尾
1. I am looking forward to receiving your reply/your early reply
2. I will be more than happy/delighted to receive your reply.
Transition(连接的)
words and phrases
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Quyuan was one of the emperor’s most loyal ervants. ______ the emperor’s advisors were very jealous of Qu Yuan.They said terrible things to make him look bad.__________,he jumped into the Milo River and drowned himself. _________ pay respect, ______ people threw bamboo leaves filled with rice into the river and beat on drums. This was to keep the fish from destroying his body. _________, the villagers made rice dumplings and held boat races on the same day every year.
As a result
What's more
In order to
However
firstly
Task 3: Fill in the blanks with transition words
Pairs work: rewrite the composition
1.No mistakes (3’)
2.Use some wonderful sentences and phrases (4’)
3.Use transition words (3’)
4. Beautiful handwriting (2’)
表达日期/日期将近
1... is coming/approaching
2. ...is around the corner
3. ...will come soon
4....is on ...（date）
5..... falls on..（date）
表达邀请 (invite sb to do sth)
1. I want to invite you to take part in/join ..
2. I am writing to invite you to ..
3. I am writing to ask if you can…
纪念人物
1.People celebrate it in memory of/to honor/ to remember.., who was a ...
介绍节日
1. ... is one of the traditional/most significant festivals in China
2. ....is celebrated in memory of...
3. ... is celebrated in many/multifold ways, such as
eating .., watching..., appreciating...
确定出发时间/地点
1. We will/ Let's meet at … (Time) in/at (Place)
2. We will set off from... (Place)
3. You can meet me at the front of … at (Time)
首尾呼应
1. I am looking forward to receiving your reply/your early reply
2. I will be more than happy/delighted to receive your reply.
1.Correct the errors of your answer sheet
2.Check the answer sheet of your parter
3.Work in pairs and rewrite the composition
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Beginning
Body paragraphs
Ending
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Decoration
Homework
【2016 铜仁】Michael是你的美国朋友。他想了解关于中国的传统节日。请根据提示， 以 “The Mid-autumn Festival” 为题用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。要点：
1. 中秋节是最重要的中国传统节日之一；
2. 在这天家人团聚、吃团圆饭；
3. 夜晚赏月，品尝月饼；
4. 中秋月饼寄托了人们对所爱家人的祝愿；
5. ……
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1.The Dragon Boat Festival is a day for us to show our respect to __________.
2.People row the _________ and beat_________.
3.The boat looks like a _____so we call it dragon boat.
Quyuan
Dragon boat
Chinese drum
dragon
Task: complete the sentences with given words
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1.People eat rice dumplings on Dragon
Boat Festival.
2.The rice dumpling is also called_______.
3.People use______,______and
____________to make zongzi.
4.Some people like to eat sweet
zongzi, some like to eat salty
one.
Zong zi
red bean
[ glu:t n s]
dates
glutinous rice
Task: complete the sentences with given words
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1.People hang up some__________ and __________around the door on Dragon Boat Festival.
2.People make and wear________,
they are also called sachets(香囊). [s ' ez]
3.People believe the_______can bring the good luck and make the evil spirits
go away.
['k l m s]
[pa t iz]
wormwood
calamus
Perfume pouches
Five-color silk thread
Task: complete the sentences with given words
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1.Some people drink__________on this day.People believe this wine can make
the evil spirit go away.
2.The kids love to fly ______ on this day ,too.
[r ' lg ]
realgar wine
kites
Task: complete the sentences with given words
这几页为学案补充内容，作为课后练习和作文素材，上课不展示
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