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新高考英语读后续写典例分析
新高考英语
The Third Prize
目录
01
表达积累
02
原文分析
03
续写扩展
04
续写赏析
01
表达积累
表达积累
1.眉头紧锁
2.极其的消极
3.极其贫穷的
4.好像是被施了魔咒似的
5.摇下车窗
one’s knitted brows
a sea of negativity
poverty-stricken
as if exerted a curse
wind(--wound--wound) the window down
表达积累
6.笑容满面
7.嘴唇弯曲成微笑状
8.留下雷鸣般的咆哮
9.我激情之火又重新燃烧起来.
10.用一种充满爱的方式盯着对方
grin from ear to ear
lips curved into a faint smile
leaving thunderous roars
My fire of passion was refueled.
stare at each other in a love-filled way
表达积累
11.他给了我一个坚定的眼神
12.湛蓝的天空
13.令我心迷神往
14.我非常清楚记得...
15.他高兴得跳了起来。
He gave me a determined look
a deep blue sky
keep me spellbound
I can well remember that...
He jumped for fun.
表达积累
16.众口难调。
17.心满意足的微笑
18.他皱了皱眉。
19.我努力忍住眼泪。
20.她怒火中烧。
It is difficult to please everybody.
a smile of contentment
A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.
I tried to fight back tears.
She was burning with anger.
02
原文分析
The Third Prize
Ali and his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood. Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks.
原文分析
房东仅仅的盯着他们。
家庭的生活窘困。
One day, Ali took Zahra’s shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed, but he lost them on the way home. It wasn’t until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes. He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Ali’s running shoes. Zahra’s school hours were in the morning, so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali. He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon. Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.
原文分析
Ali鞋子弄丢了，和妹妹共同解决问题。
句式积累：not until 的强调句型。
Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city. When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part. He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.
原文分析
故事的转折：Ali有机会得到一双新的鞋子，他承诺，得到它。
The day of race arrived. Ali had a strong start, but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache. Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her. Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided (碰撞) with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.
原文分析
分词短语做主语的句型积累。
故事的高潮：Ali快到终点时被撞摔倒了。
Paragraph 1 ：
Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.
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Paragraph 2 ：
Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly.
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原文分析
根据下一段的结果， 本段应该是讲述Ali如何得到第三名赢得那双鞋子的。
Ali很高兴， 说明他得到了那双鞋子。后面应该是带鞋子给妹妹之后，妹妹高兴的样子。
03
续写扩展
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 1 ：
Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.
The runner collided (碰撞) with Ali run the third…
Ali felt wronged(受委屈）…
The other boy was punished …
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 2 ：
Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly.
His sister waited for him and expected the shoes …
They delighted when saw the shoes…
Ali felt relief…
句子润色
他拒绝就此放弃，他跳起来，尽可能快地跑。
He refuse to give up at this point, so he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.
Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.
give up at this point
jump to one’s feet
非谓语的巧妙使用
句子润色
他冲过终点线，得了四等奖。
He dashed across the finish line and won the fourth prize.
dash across the finish line
Dashing across the finish line, he won the fourth prize.
非谓语的巧妙使用
句子润色
想到他会让她妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起来。
Thinking he would let her sister down, Ali couldn’t help sobbing.
let her sister down
Ali couldn’t help sobbing when he thought of letting her sister down.
sob
非谓语的巧妙使用
句子润色
就在这时，他突然听到广播里宣布他获得了三等奖，因为与阿里相撞的赛跑者因违反规定被取消资格。
Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize because the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule.
Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule.
announcement from the broadcast
be disqualified
句子润色
在颁奖典礼上把鞋放在胸前，阿里感到欣喜若狂，如释重负因为他最终为妹妹赢得了这双鞋。
Ali held the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony, and he felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.
feel overjoyed and relieved
Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony, Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.
非谓语的巧妙使用
句子润色
他迫不及待地想见到他的妹妹并分享这个令人激动的消息。
could not wait to
He could not wait to see his sister and share the thrilling news.
the thrilling news
句子润色
到达时，阿里发现萨拉在外面等着。
On his arrival
On his arrival, Ali found Zahra was waiting outside.
句子润色
她真的很紧张她哥哥是否给她带来了她想要的东西。
She was really nervous whether her brother had brought her what she was expecting.
what she was expecting
句子润色
“萨拉，看看我给你带来了什么。”他用颤抖的双手从包里拿出奖品。
with his trembling hands
“Zahra, see what I have got for you.” he took the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands.
句子润色
萨拉一看到鞋子，脸上就喜形于色。
The moment Zahra saw the shoes, her face lit up.
her face lit up
The instant/moment/minute/second …
Immediately/instantly/directly…
At the sight/sound/thought of…
Hardly…when/before; no sooner…than
句子润色
她激动得向阿里扑了过去。 “谢谢你！”当兄妹紧紧拥抱在一起时，他们的眼睛里涌出喜悦的泪水。
She was so thrilled that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank you! Ali.” Tears of joy welled up their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.
threw herself at Ali
So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank you! Ali.” Tears of joy welled up their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.
hugged tightly together
Tears of joy welled up their eyes
句式替换：
so 提到句首后面要半倒装（be/助/情放到主语前面）。
04
续写赏析
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续写赏析
Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead. Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could. He dashed across the finish line and won the fourth prize. Thinking he would let her sister down, Ali couldn’t help sobbing. Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule. Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony, Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.
学习非谓语动词短语的使用。
续写赏析
Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly. He could not wait to see his sister and share the thrilling news. On his arrival, Ali found Zahra was waiting outside. She was really nervous whether her brother had brought her what she was expecting. “Zahra, see what I have got for you.” he took the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands. The instant Zahra saw the shoes, her face lit up. So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank you! Ali.” Tears of joy welled up their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.
熟悉和使用倒装句
作业
1. 积累细节描写的词汇和短语。
2. 摘抄默写本节课所有高级句型。
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