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江苏省徐州市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编
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一、材料作文
1．（2020·江苏徐州）2020 年 6 月 16 日，我市某中学发生了一件感人的事情。请以 What a moving story!为题，写一篇英语短文，简要叙述事情经过并谈谈感想。要点如下：
经过 1．两工人为学校装空调，怕影响学生学习，夜晚工作；雨天路滑， 不小心碰掉一块瓷砖；留下纸条和 50 元钱，愿赔偿。 2．学校表示不用赔偿；学生也为两人点赞并送去了西瓜。
感想 ……（内容自拟）
注意：（1）词数 90 左右。短文需包含表格中的要点，但不要逐字翻译。
（2）短文已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。
（3）短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：空调：air-conditioner 瓷砖：ceramic tile
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2．（2022·江苏徐州）你校在课后服务活动中，根据学生的需求开设了丰富多彩的课程（见下表）。你选修了其中的一门，收获颇丰。你校英文报正在组织题为“Me and my after-class course”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你选修的课程；
2. 你学习该课程的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
①运动（Sports） ②阅读（Reading） ③手工（DIY） ④绘画（Painting） ⑤声乐（Singing） ⑥……（自拟）
注意：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息；
3. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Me and my after-class courseIn my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2021·江苏徐州）去年暑假，我市一名小学生给钟南山院士写了一封信，表达了对钟爷爷的感激之情、敬重之意和美好祝福。不久，钟南山院士给他回了一封既暖心又励志的信。请你写一篇90词左右的英语短文，叙述这件事，并谈谈自己的感想。
注意：
1.短文需包括所给提示内容，但不要逐字翻译。
2.短文已给出的部分不计入总词数。
3.短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：抗击疫情anti-epidemic
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参考答案：
1．例文：
What a moving story!
A moving story happened in a school of our city on 16 June, 2020.
In order not to disturb the students who were studying at school, two workers decided to put in air-conditioners at night. It was rainy and wet. When they were carrying one air-conditioner, they broke one ceramic tile. Feeling sorry for what they had done, they left a note and 50 yuan to pay for the tile. The school, however, didn’t accept the money. The students gave the two workers thumbs up and sent a water-melon to show their gratitude.
I think both the workers and the school have done something right. If we do something wrong, we should be honest and face it bravely. Meanwhile, forgiving others is always appreciated. Just as the saying goes, “one good turn deserves another”.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述事情的经过并发表自己的看法。
2.例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，讲述事情主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述事情的经过叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in order not to; decide to; at night; feel sorry for; pay for; give…thumbs up。
句型：what引导的感叹句；when引导的时间状语从句；and表示并列的句子；if引导的条件状语从句；what引导的宾语从句；who引导的定语从句。
2．例文
Me and my after-class course
In my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose the course of DIY. DIY literally means making things by hand.
My first assignment was to use the colored bubble mud commonly used by primary school students now, paste a colored blessing on the small board, and then make a frame with colored wool. Because I think everyone has a different understanding of happiness. I made a word Fu into color. It’s quite a test of a person’s patience to do some simple handicrafts, such as cross stitch, folding thousand paper crane...
Through this study, I learned that we can make handmade in many ways. Waste beverage bottles, wool, ice cream sticks and so on can become raw materials for handmade. We can create our own satisfactory works through our own imagination.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Me and my after-class course”为主题，结合所给要点提示写一篇作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时先从表格里选择一个课外课程，之后再根据三个要点展开叙述。文章要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
3．例文
Zhong Nanshan is a famous doctor. He led the experts in their battle with Covid-19 and saved many lives. He received the Medal of the Republic. Last summer vacation, a primary school student in our city wrote a letter to academician Zhong Nanshan, expressing his gratitude, respect and good wishes to Grandpa Zhong. Soon, academician Zhong Nanshan replied in his busy schedule. We can see his concern for young people. We wish him healthier and healthier.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。去年暑假，我市一名小学生给钟南山院士写了一封信，表达了对钟爷爷的感激之情、敬重之意和美好祝福。钟南山院士给他回了一封既暖心又励志的信。要求就这件事情写一篇短文，谈谈自己的感想。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

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