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(共27张PPT)
Writing
活动通知/活动报道
目
录
活动通知
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活动报道
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拓展迁移
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书面通知
(一)
假设你是某学校的学生会主席李华,为丰富同学们的课外生活,缓解学习压力,亲近大自然,你校将于本周六组织大家爬山。请你代表学生会写一份书面通知,主要内容如下:
1.活动时间:本周六上午8点至下午6点;
2.集合地点:校门口;
3.要求:穿旅游鞋,带水;想去的同学需在本周三之前在学生会报名。
注意:词数100左右。
文体训练
One possible version:
NOTICE
In order to enrich the students’ after-class activities,release the heavy pressure from study and make the students get close to nature,our school will organise an activity to climb mountains.
We will start at 8:00 a.m.on Saturday morning at the school gate and return at 6:00 p.m.Please wear hiking shoes which are suitable for mountain climbing.At the same time,don’t forget to bring drinking water.Those who are willing to participate in it should sign up at the Students’ Union before this Wednesday.
We sincerely hope that you will not miss the chance.Wish you great fun!
Students’ Union
(二)
(2021·江苏南京、盐城第二次模拟考试)
3月12日是一年一度的植树节,学校拟组织全体学生参加“我给家乡添绿色”的植树活动。请以学生会的名义用英语拟一则通知。内容包括:
1.活动安排;
2.注意事项。
注意:词数 100 左右。
One possible version:
NOTICE
March 11th,2021
Tree-planting Activity
Tree-planting Day is drawing near.In order to celebrate Tree-planting Day and protect environment,our school appeals to all the teachers and students to take part in the tree-planting activity.
Please gather in group of class at the school gate tomorrow morning,
then walk to the hill east of our school with the guidance of each head teacher.You’d better wear sports shoes and take iron spades and water buckets with you.Pay attention to safety during the planting.Please don’t be late or absent.Thank you.
Students’ Union
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活动报道
2022 年 东北三省第一次 联合模拟一模作文
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Outline Comparation
In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English and enrich our life on campus, our school held an English speech contest last week.(目的)
As scheduled,the activity , with the theme of Read for the Future,started at 2 pm on Tuesday and lasted for 2hours at the assembly hall. （时间，地点，主题）After the hosts introduced the topic and judges,15 competitors delivered their speeches in turn, which were well received by the audience. They were graded on the language, outline,as well as performance, and were awarded accordingly.（过程） The activity benefited us a lot . Not only did it improve our English ability, but it also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves. （意义）What a wonderful time we had!（感受）
2022 年 东北三省第一次 联合模拟一模作文
要举办
请你学生会的名义拟一则通知
安排及注意事项
希望/期盼
改编
Notice
In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English and enrich our life oncampus, our school club will hold an English speech contest next week.(目的)
I sincerely hope you won’t miss the precious chance to improve your English ability and show yourselves. Wish you great fun.（希望/期待）
(Report)
In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English and enrich our school life, our school held an English speech contes last week.(目的)
The activity benefited us a lot . Not only did it improve our English ability, but it also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves. （意义）What a wonderful time we had!（感受）
As scheduled,the activity ,with the theme of themed Read for the Future,started at 2 pm on Tuesday and lasted for 2hours at the assembly hall. （时间，地点，主题）After the hosts introduced the topic and judges,15 competitors delivered their speeches in turn, which were well received by the audience. They were graded on the language, outline,as well as performance, and were awarded accordingly.（过程）
As scheduled, the activity ,with the theme of Read for the Future,will start at 2 pm on Tuesday and last for 2hours at the assembly hall. （时间，地点，主题） The competitors will deliver their speeches on the given topic , which will be graded on the language, outline,as well as performance, and awarded accordingly.Anyone who is interested in it is welcome to sign up for it at the Students’ Union office before Monday. （安排）
长春二模改错：
书面表达：
(原因) With the final examination approaching, we senior 3 students suffer from great mental pressure. Therefore,our school will hold an event, the theme of which is about mental health.
(安排) As scheduled, the event will be held in the lecture hall next Sunday afternoon. There will be various activities. First of all, a lecture on how to deal with pressure will be given by a psychology professor. Besides, a debate on whether pressure is good or not will be expected among the students. At last,we will enjoy a play performed by the students of the psychology club showing how to strike a balance between pressure and motivation.
（期盼/意义） I firmly believe mental health is of great importance to everyone, especially to us senior 3 students.
书面表达：
In order to relieve students’ heavy studying burden.....
1.目的
2.原因
3.原因+目的
2022 年 哈三中一模作文
目的
过程
意义/感受
建议 ：过程部分可适当增加内容 开头：As sheduled, ...
以目的引出话题
比较充实，建议背会
,which were tough and demanding.
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拓展迁移
Announcement
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please Recently, an activity\contest\lecture\speech named__活动名称___ will be held in 地点（学校）. Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, it will be in 地点 +时间 . Besides,the purpose of it is to 活动的目的 ; therefore, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the activity\contest\lecture\speech , having a heated discussion afterwards .
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
Thanks for your careful listening ! ( ( The Students’ Union)
迁移提升(一) 口头通知
迁移提升(二) 发言稿
迁移提升
迁移提升（二）邀请信(CC2.)
迁移提升（三）邀请信
1. 【题点】写作目的是写一篇邀请信（含招募通知），内容学校招募滑雪社团成员。学生要运用所学词汇和语法知识，结合对相关信息的了解及思考，写出滑雪运动的好处，写清报名者需说明个人情况，并告知报名方式。【解题思路】写作构思仔细审题，明确写作步骤。一审题材：邀请信（含招募通知）。二审时态：主要为一般现在时、一般将来时、现在进行时等。三审人称：第二人称。四审要点，列提纲：2. 点明通知目的3. 写出滑雪运动的好处和意义4. 写清报名者需说明个人情况5. 告知报名方式
迁移提升（三）邀请信 (CC2)
Dear Chris， Although the Beijing Winter Olympics have come to an end, our enthusiasm for winter sports is still high. So I’d like to invite you to join the ski club in our school. First of all, skiing contributes to keeping a sense of balance. Moreover, it provides us with an opportunity to get close to nature. Skiers are able to breathe fresh air, which is beneficial to promoting physical health and relieving learning stress. The registration form can be downloaded at the school website. After that, you should fill in your personal information and reasons for joining the club. Then you can email it at 123456@ before this Friday. We are looking forward to your participation. Students’ Union
交代原因
目的和意义
报名方式值得借鉴
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迁移应用 (QQ1)
迁移提升应用（QQ1）
The Spring Sports Meet
To raise our awareness of physical health and enrich our school life, our school held the annual spring sports meet last week.
As scheduled, the event was held on the playground last Thursday and Friday.The students from every class signed up for the sports meet. They took an active part in different kinds of events such as running,the high jump,and tried their best to succeed in their selected sports. Some of them even brok the records of our school.
The sports meet was highly appreciated, because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise, but also made us more willing to cooperate.
THANKS!

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