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English Writing
一、遣词篇
二、造句篇
三、谋篇布局
四、文体格式
五、考点评卷剖析
英语写作指导
Revision：Translation
1.就是因为下大雨我们才没去野炊的。
2.他从来没去过北京。
3.我很惊讶她不仅英语说的正确, 还说得流利。
英语写作中的谋篇布局
1.写作六步法
2.如何开头结尾
一、写作六步法
1.审题
2.抓要点
3.扩展成句
4.连句成文
5.查错改错
6.誉写
英语写作六步法：
一、审题
1.审文体：要求写记叙文，、说明文议论文还是应用文（书信、通知等）
2.审要求：内容要点，词汇和字数等
3.审人称：第一人称，第二人称还是第三人称
Practice:
　在英语课堂上，你喜欢老师授课时只用英语还是英语、汉语兼用。请你围绕
“ How do you prefer your English classes
to be taught In English only , or in both English and Chinese ” 这个问题，参考所给要点，
选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文．
授课形式一：只用英语 授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用
优点：有助于提高 听说能力等… 缺憾：不易听懂等… 结论：… 优点：易于理解等…
缺憾：英语氛围不等…
结论：…
注意：1.词数100---120, 短文开头已给出(不计词数).
2.参考词汇: atmosphere 氛围
I prefer my English classes to be taught in …
某学生
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese.
Now in our English classes, with how to be taught we have two choices: In English only, or in both English and Chinese, and it’s all has it’s advantages and disadvantages.
If in English only, can make our listening and speaking more good, and what worse, we will hard to understand our class.
But if in both English and Chinese, also understand will be more easily, the English atmosphere is less than in English only.
In my opinion, we study English to understand it is the most important. After we study and understand it good, listening or speaking will be easy. So I think my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese will be more better.
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英文写作六步法：
二、抓要点
确定主要行为，列出提纲
What happened
时下，各类电视节目广泛使用短信参与方式，对此人们评价不一。请你对此现象向21st Century 投稿，谈谈个人看法：
态度一 态度二 你的观点
给观众提供了更多的参与机会 控制不当，节目品位无法保证
？
给媒体带来更多收益 短信费用过高，观众易生反感 迎合年轻人对新事物的追求 沉溺于此，浪费精力 要求:1．词数：120词左右。
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Practice:
提供机会
带来收益
迎合追求
保证品位
产生反感
浪费精力
你的观点　
offer /provide chances
bring in profits / benefit from
meet/appeal to the needs of
ensure the taste
feel bad / bored / annoyed
waste time and energy
In my opinion we should take a critical attitude towards
列出要点
英文写作六步法
三、扩展成句
形成基本语义单位
Who did what
1 offer chances
Audiences are offered more chances to
participate in the live programs.
2 bring in profits / benefit from
They bring in profits to the mass media.
3 appeal to the needs of
They appeal to the needs of the young people.
4 ensure the taste
We cannot ensure the taste of the programs if short messages are out of control.
5 feel bad / bored / annoyed
They cost a lot and make the audiences feel bored.
6 waste time and energy
It will be a waste of time and energy if the young are addicted to them.
7 take a critical attitude
In my opinion we should take a critical attitude towards short messages.
英文写作六步法：
四、连句成文
正确使用过渡词，使行文流畅。并注意段与段的衔接。
表示列举和顺序用 firstly, secondly, last, then, finally, next, such as，after that
b. 表示意义增补和引申用also, besides, above all, what’s more / what’s worse
c. 表示结果用 so, therefore, as a result, so…that
d. 表示意义转折用 instead, however, but
e. 表示解释说明用 in other words, that is to say
1.过好行文逻辑关
f. 表示概括和总结用 then, in all, as we know
g. 表示时间顺序用 now, at first, when, after
h. 表示并列关系用 or, and, also, too,
i. 表示条件关系用 as (so) long as, if, unless
j. 表示举例用 for example, for instance, such as
k. 表示让步关系用 though, even if , however, as
2.用活语言，准确生动
使用常用高级语法:非谓语动词，with复合结构，虚拟语气，强调句，倒装句，感叹句，定语从句，状语从句等．
The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.
a. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (so
that/so…that…/such…that…)
c. My brother was riding a bike. I sat on the seat behind him. (with sb. doing)
My brother was riding a bike with me sitting on the seat behind him.
Not only is he a famous singer but also he has written some interesting books.
b. He is a famous singer. He has also written some interesting books. (not only…but also)
Not having received his letter he decided to write to her again.
d. He hadn’t received a letter . He decided to write to her again. (not having done)
e. We are glad to see such great changes in our school life. ( how )
How glad we are to see such great changes in our
school life.
英文写作六步法
五、查错改错
注意时态、标点和拼写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
请你当老师
Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.
Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them.
Bicycles are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to go to school or go to work by bike. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bikes. But I think that running cars makes air dirty. It is harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, I prefer to go to school by bike.
规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写
英文写作六步法
六、誊写
修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面不工整要扣分!
自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：
不良现象和行为 （至少3点） 1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上
2. 迷恋网吧，上网打游戏
3. ……
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 合理安排时间
参加兴趣小组
……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数
主题
体裁
人称
结构
时态
字数
已知信息
未知信息
以一般现在时为主
Step 1：审题
Problems
be crazy about (7B4) play computer games (7A1)
watch too much TV (8A1) spend too much time on their
hobbies (9A3) refuse to do homework (9A3) spend --- on (7A2)
Opinions
not good for our health and study (7A2) focus on (9A3)
Pay more attention to (9A1)
Suggestions
plan time carefully (9A3) achieve a balance between study and
bobbies (9A3) take part in different after school activities (7A2)
join interest groups (8A2) do some sports (7A4)
do some housework(7B5)
Step 2：抓要点、列提纲
List some keywords about problems.
Phrases: ____________________________________
____________________________________
2. List some keywords about opinions.
Phrases: ____________________________________
____________________________________
3. List some keywords about suggestions.
Phrases: ____________________________________
____________________________________
not good for study and health,…
Spend ---on, hobbies, be crazy about,- - -
Step 2：抓要点、列提纲
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
problems
opinions
suggestions
花太多时间在兴趣爱好上
迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏
------
------
合理安排时间
参加兴趣小组
------
Step 2：抓要点、列提纲
------
Make sentences with the keywords about problems.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________
2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________
3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________
Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and can’t finish their homework on time.
I don’t think it’s good for our study and health.
Step 3：连词成句
There are many things we can do. we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.
However, how can we make better use of our spare time
For example
Besides these,
And also
注意添加主题句，连接词！
Step 4：连句成文
范文展示
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Today’s topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”.
Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students don’t know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they can’t finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, What’s worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We don’t think it’s good for their study and health.
However, how can we make better use of our spare time There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.
Let’s make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!
课时总结
英语写作中用好“四心”
1.精心审题，沉着写稿
2.耐心修改，提炼句子
3.细心检查, 消灭错误
4.虚心抄写，一丝不苟。
Homework
据报道，中学生的身体素质有所下降，这一情况已经引起了全社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视。请你根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
要点：⑴锻炼身体的好处：to be strong, healthy ,energetic...
⑵锻炼身体的方式： playing ball games, running, swimming...
⑶对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议（至少写两点）
要求：⑴内容必须包括以上全部要点，课适当发挥；
⑵开头已给出，不计入总词数；
⑶语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，字迹工整；
⑷文中不得出现真实校名及姓名
Health is very important to us teenagers.
Thank you !

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