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(共40张PPT)
★Type 1　惊险类
专题二　读后续写
惊险类的读后续写尤其要注意环境和动作的描写：
1．The night settled in.夜幕降临。
2．The storm is at its height.暴风刮的正猛。
3．Warm sunshine poured over the little bush.
温暖的阳光洒在小树上。
4．It seems to be clearing up.天气看起来要放晴。
5．There is a nip in the air.天气冷飕飕的。
6．The day was bright, with a fresh breeze blowing.
天气晴朗，吹来阵阵清风。
7．It’s overcast for rain.天阴暗起来，要下雨了。
8．Every now and then fleecy clouds floated across the sky.
天空中不时飘过飞絮般的云。
9．The lotus flowers are now in full boom.The rose gives out a sweet smell!
现在荷花盛开。玫瑰吐露芬芳！
(2021·全国新高考卷Ⅰ)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.__________________________________________ ______________________________________________________
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【文章段落分析】
本文是一篇记叙文。文章段落可分成两部分：
第1段：母亲节来临之前，双胞胎计划给母亲一个惊喜，做一顿早餐给母亲。
第2－3段：由一开始的顺顺利利，到后来的各种问题，烤焦了一片吐司，锅里的粥溢出来了，被烫到了手，双胞胎把厨房弄得一团糟。
【关键词】
任何一个完整的句子都少不了名词和动词，形容词好或副词可以表达感在和整篇文章的情感基调，所以可以将关键词进行分类：
名词：the surprise，French toast and chicken porridge, the second stove burner，the frying pan，a mess，a cry of pain, smell of burning
动词：broke two eggs，added
形容词或副词：pleased and proud，Thankfully，panicked, calm
【写作分析】
1．考生在写作时，可以把自己置身在文中，作为旁观者，或者把自己换成文章作者去体验和行动——想象双胞胎为了给妈妈做早餐，父亲做了什么，妈妈看到后的反应如何。
2．厘清上下文逻辑后，把文中的关键词代入续写部分，在心中描绘出一个故事发展的梗概。
3．利用好续写部分的首句。通常，首句有两种作用：承上启下＋整段中心句。
4．最后，保证词数、语法和标点正确。因为在读后续写的评分原则里，词数不足也会扣分，标点和拼写等也会对分数有影响。
【原创范文赏析】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. [父亲的反应]Spotting the mess, Dad frowned. [孩子的反应]Before he could question the kids, Jenna threw herself at him, tears pudding in her eyes， “Dad, we failed to prepare the gift for Mom！” [父亲帮忙]Half surprised, half concerned, a sense of responsibility of caring about the kids drove the father to wipe away her tears， “Let’s do it together.”
All of a sudden, the twins’ faces lit up with their head nodding firmly. [解决问题]The next moment witnessed their efforts to make the breakfast and they eventually made it. “Take these to Mom’s room.” Dad directed. [衔接下文]Expectantly， the pair stepped out of the kitchen. (99 words)
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. [孩子的祝福]The moment Mom opened her eyes, the twins yelled, “Happy Mother’s Day！” [妈妈注意到了早餐]In the meanwhile, a plate of French toast placed on the table beside the bed caught Mom’s attention. “Mom, have a try.” Jeff suggested. [妈妈的反应]Mom tried to conceal her emotion, but the glittering tears failed her. Gathering them into her arms, she choked, “Thank you, my darling！” [爸爸的再现]Just at that moment, the father came in with two bowls of porridge, “Now we can share the breakfast together！” [整个氛围融洽]The twins were overjoyed, delight spreading through the house. (88 words)
【官方范文】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their depressed faces， he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed. Meanwhile, the twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made and walked out of the kitchen. (82 words)
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They hugged her and yelled “Happy Mother’s Day, darling Mummy！” Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook father who was pretending to sleep. He feigned astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they winked at each other secretly. (76 words)
Test 1
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm?house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草)．I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Don’t be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colours of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.______ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Seeing this, I was surprised.Meanwhile, my horse got frightened, jumped up, and ran around wildly.I held the rope tightly in case I might fall off.My dad was chasing after me, keeping me in sight.Some time later, my horse stopped, panting, and I woke up from panic.Looking around, I saw my father right behind me.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
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【答案】
We had no idea where we were and it got dark.We couldn’t get back along the original track.We immediately thought of the police.My father telephoned the police station, but it couldn’t get through.It was so far away that there was no signal.Just then, Uncle Paul came riding with a group of people.He laughed with joy when he saw us safe.He said he had installed a satellite positioning system under my horse’s belly.Through it, he knew that we had got lost and where we were.
Test 2
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Twenty years ago, Chase Poust was only 7. On Sunday morning just before the Memorial Day, he, his dad Steven, and his 4-year-old sister, Abigail, were out for a family boating trip on Florida’s St. Johns River, which was trackless and almost nobody knew about it. And there’s no rescue center nearby. Chase and Abigail were swimming at the back of the anchored boat while Steven was on deck fishing.
It was a perfect outing—it was so peaceful and quiet and the colours of the deep blue sky, the light green river water and the mild late May sunshine mixed to create a magic scene. Everything was sound until a strong current emerged and loosened Abigail’s grasp and she let go of the boat. Instantly realizing his sister would be swept away, Chase let go of the boat as well to try and reach her. At the same time, Chase screamed at his father desperately.
Without thinking twice, Steven jumped into the water and swam towards the two kids with all his efforts. But after realizing he couldn’t keep up with both kids, he was faced with a heartbroken decision. He told them he loved them very much because he wasn’t sure what’s going to happen. Steven tried his best to stick with both of his children. He wore himself out. But his little daughter was washed away from him. Directing Chase to swim to shore for help Steven stayed behind, keeping as close as he could to Abigail as the life-vest that was keeping her above the waves floated further and further from his reach.
It was a tough go for the 7-year-old, but rather than attempting to swim all out, Chase wisely paced himself. Stopping to float or dog paddle when he was tired, he’d rest and then set off again. The current was going the opposite way of going to the boat and the shore, so it was very hard to swim that way for Chase.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An hour later, Chase swam to the shore, anyhow.
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【答案】
An hour later, Chase swam to the shore, anyhow. Exhausted and tired, he managed to find a man who was willing to help him. The man took him to the nearest rescue center where Chase told the story clearly. The rescue workers took action and headed for the location without hesitation. At the same time, Chase was taken well care of, left in the rescue center.
Luckily, Steven and Abigail were found and rescued.
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【答案】
Luckily, Steven and Abigail were found and rescued. Steven could hardly believe that they were still alive. When he saw them coming from afar, he was excited to burst into tears. Steven and Abigail were also taken to the center, where they hugged each other, crying. Steven said, “I am grateful to the men and proud of my son. Young as Chase is, he is a brave man.”This frightening experience left a deep impression on them, which made them realize that they should cherish the moment which they spent.
Test 3
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tawny Nelson is a single mother of four sweet little girls aged 9,5,2, and one year old.It’s not easy to take care of the girls all on her own.Recently, she shared a story with Frank Somerville, a news anchor for KTVU News in California.He was so moved by her story that he shared it on his Facebook page.
Tawny’s story opened with her visiting the grocery store.It was a rainy and miserable day and by the time she got all the girls loaded in the truck and ready to head home，it was dark and pouring down.When she tried to start her truck, it wouldn’t start.With no one to call, Tawny turned to ask strangers for help to charge her truck.Hours passed and so did at least twenty people.They all ignored her.Tired and hungry, her daughters began to act out.Tawny was filled with tears when someone knocked on her passenger window.
Somerville writes, “I swear I got chills when I read what happened next.” And you will do the same when you read Tawny’s story：
I am the single mother of four absolutely beautiful little girls.They are 9,5,2, and one year old.And things have been particularly rough since my ex left.Our truck had a flat tire and I had to inflate it constantly.The driver side window motor died.And I needed a new belt.The truck was a mess.And we didn’t drive anywhere unless we had to.Well, the other day we desperately needed to go to the store.So we loaded up and drove to the Winn Dixie about 9 blocks away.When we got out of the store it was far after dark.And it was raining heavily.I loaded my kids and groceries into the truck.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My battery was dead._________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My battery was dead.My phone broke down.I had no family to chat with and I had to do everything on my own.I turned to more than twenty people for help but they all turned me down.My 5-year-old girl was very hungry and began to cry.My two-year-old daughter wanted to go home and my oldest girl tried to help.I felt that I was the worst mother ever.
I was crying when a gentleman stopped and offered to help me. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I was crying when a gentleman stopped and offered to help me.He handed me a plate of chicken and biscuits and bottles of water.He said，“Feed your girls.I have a truck on the way and my wife will be here to take you home.” What he said was right.His wife arrived followed by our truck.We and the truck were taken home.The next morning the gentleman returned to my house with a man who replaced my battery and fixed my window.Seeing the scene I burst into tears.(共28张PPT)
★Type 2　励志类
专题二　读后续写
励志类的读后续写更侧重于人物塑造相关的词汇：
1．He has delicate looks.他眉清目秀。
2．She has a double chin.她有双下巴。
3．He has two wrinkled hands.他的双手满是皱纹。
4．She wears shoulder?length hair.她留着齐肩发。
5．Looking at his weather?worn face, I was shocked.
望着他饱经风霜的脸，我很震惊。
6．He is a man of public spirit.他是一个热心公益的人。
7．She likes to wag her tongue.她喋喋不休。
8．He’s good-time Charlie, feeling no worries and anxieties.他是个乐天派，无忧无虑。
9．He is a man who knows the time of day.他消息灵通。
10．He is mature，dynamic and honest.
他思想成熟、精明能干、为人诚实。
Test 1
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Some people are just bound to be failures.That’s the way some adults look at troublesome kids.Maybe you’ve heard the saying.“A bird with a broken wing will never fly as high.” I am sure that T．J.Ware was made to feel this way almost every day at school.
At high school, Ware was the most celebrated troublemaker in his town.Teachers would feel uneasy when they saw his name posted on the lists for the next term.Ware was moving on, but certainly not moving up.I met Ware for the first time at a leadership training, a program designed to have students become more involved in their communities.When I showed up to lead their first training, the community leaders gave me this overview of the attending students, “We have a total range of students, from the student body president to T．J.Ware, the boy with the longest arrest record in the history of town.”
At the beginning of the training, Ware was standing outside of the circle of students, against the back wall, with that “go ahead, impress me” look on his face.But slowly, the interactive games drew him in.The ice really melted when the groups started building a list of positive and negative things that had occurred at school that year.Ware had some definite thoughts on those situations.The other students in his group welcomed his comments, which made a lot of sense.
The next day, Ware was very active in all the activities.By the end of the training, he had joined the Homeless Project team.The other students in the team were impressed with his passionate concern and ideas.They elected him chairman of the team.Most teachers strongly opposed to his being elected chairman, warning the principal that Ware would probably steal half the food.But the principal reminded them that the purpose of the program was to uncover any positive passion that a student had and strengthen its practice until true change could take place.The teachers left the meeting shaking their heads, convinced that failure was approaching.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Two weeks later, Ware led a group of 70 students to_________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Two weeks later, Ware led a group of 70 students to collect more than 2,000 cans of food in just two hours for the homeless people, which set a new school record.The local newspaper covered the event with a full-page article the next day, in which Ware’s picture was up for doing something greater.After that, Ware led a second project, collecting 300 blankets and 1,000 pairs of shoes for the shelter, and then, a third one.More importantly, all the teachers surprisingly found that true changes were taking place on Ware at school.
Many years later, Ware graduated from college, and then he opened his own company，______________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Many years later, Ware graduated from college, and then he opened his own company， where most workers were local people from his community.He still tries his best to do what he can for the society.Ware is flying quite nicely these days.From Ware’s story, we firmly believe that no one is bound to be a failure, and a bird with a broken wing only needs mending, and once it has healed, it can fly higher than the rest.
Test 2
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When a tornado(龙卷风) touched down in a small town nearby，many families were left completely ruined.One Sunday，a particular picture especially touched me.A young woman stood in front of an entirely ruined home.A young boy，seven or eight years old，stood at her side，eyes downcast.Clutching(紧握) at her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera，eyes wide with confusion and fear.
The article that went with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member.With growing interest，I noticed that their sizes closely matched ours.This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less fortunate than themselves.I taped the picture of the young family to our refrigerator，explaining their difficulty to my seven-year-old twins，Brad and Brett，and to three-year-old Meghan.
“These poor people now have nothing，”I said.“We’ll share what we have with them.”
I brought three large boxes and placed them on the living room floor，encouraging the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favourite things.Meghan watched seriously，as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned food and goods that they no longer needed.
Meghan walked up with Lucy，her much-loved doll，hugged tightly to her chest.She stopped in front of the box，gave her doll a final kiss，then laid her gently on top of the other toys.
“Oh，honey，”I said，“you don’t have to give Lucy.You love her so much.”
Meghan nodded seriously，“Lucy makes me happy，Mommy.Maybe she’ll make that other little girl happy, too.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The boys had watched，open-mouthed，when their sister _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The boys had watched，open-mouthed，when their sister placed her favorite doll in the box.Without a word，the boys rose and went to their rooms and came back carrying their favorite toys to the living room.Astonished，I realized that the boys had also recognized what little Meghan’s action meant.I think all of them want to make these poor people who have nothing happy like them.Swallowing back tears，I pulled all three of them into my arms.
I looked my children for a long moment.__________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I looked my children for a long moment.I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes，too.I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had found on sale last week.I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did.What Meghan did taught me a lesson that the true spirit of donating is to give with your heart.
Test 3
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was time to go home.“Remember to work on your class speeches for homework，” Miss Walker called, as everyone started talking and packing their school bags.Jenny felt sick.She hated having to read aloud in class.She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her.Once, when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary, Lee was even looking at his watch, a silver and blue one which seemed just magical.
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school.He seemed so clever, and he had a certain sort of shining confidence.He was just one of those people who were good at everything.Jenny sighed.As she turned the corner, she saw Lee’s watch lying right in the middle of the path.
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him, but she didn’t want to run after him.Jenny bent down quickly, picked up the watch and ran home.On arriving home, Jenny put it on almost without thinking.She was surprised it fitted so well.She walked to the mirror and started practicing her speech.Words just flooded out of her.“I’m going to talk about swimming.I have been lucky.I’ve won lots of competitions.But when I’m in a race, I’m not really thinking about winning.I’m just loving the feeling of being in the water… ”
Jenny laughed with excitement.She walked across the room. She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence.Turning back to the mirror, Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass.The flashes of silver seemed almost magical.So maybe Lee’s watch really did have something magic.
The next day, as the lesson began, Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first.Nobody moved.Jenny slowly raised her arm.Before Miss Walker could say anything, there was a shout from behind.“She’s stolen my watch！” Lee said angrily，“It went missing at school yesterday.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Jenny didn’t answer.How could she explain about the watch and its magic No one could understand.No one could believe it.“But I saw you wearing it yesterday，” Miss Walker gently reminded him.For a moment, Lee remained silent and then he apologized.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech.Everybody was puzzled and asked why.Jenny again was speechless.
At that moment, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first.______________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
At that moment, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front.She couldn’t think properly.All round her, a sea of faces was watching.She felt so frightened and the watch didn’t seem magical at all.Suddenly she saw Miss Walker’s encouraging eyes.Jenny took a deep breath.“I’m going to talk about swimming…” Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny’s wonderful speech.Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.(共36张PPT)
★Type 3　情感类
专题二　读后续写
情感类的读后续写侧重于情绪变化等的相关词汇：
表达愉悦心情： jump for fun(高兴地跳了起来), in good mood(心情很好), pleased beyond description(喜不胜言), light up(露出喜色), laugh one’s head off(狂笑) 等。
表达愤怒心情： burn with anger(怒火中烧), be in a rage(大发雷霆), tremble with anger(气的发抖), stamp one’ s feet in anger(气得跺脚), hold back one’s anger(忍住怒火)等。
Test 1
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(浙江省五校2022届高三上学期第一次联考英语试题)Katie was exceptionally small. We were in the fifth grade, but she was as short as a third grader. Although her body was small, Katie was big at heart. She had a sharp mind, too. Sometimes she got her share of teasing, but Katie knew how to handle it. All the kids who knew Katie liked her a lot.
Katie loved helping others in the class, so whenever someone was stuck on the computer he always called her for help and advice. Katie loved jokes and she always had a joke that would cheer someone up whenever he was down. She was truly the most kind and generous friend anyone could ask for.
But the other day she was in big trouble. She was such a sweet kid; a third-grade teacher always dreamed of having a classroom filled with students like Katie. She was never ever a discipline problem. I just couldn’t imagine why she had made her parents so angry.
It seemed that Katie had been running up sizable charges in the lunchroom. Her parents explained that Katie brought a great homemade lunch each day, and there was no reason for her to buy school lunch. They assumed a sit-down with Katie would solve the problem, but failed. So they asked me to help them get to the bottom of this situation.
So the next day, I asked Katie to my office. “Why are you charging lunches, Katie What happens to your homemade lunch？” I asked. “I lose it，” she responded. I leaned back in my chair and said, “I don’t believe you, Katie.” She didn’t care. “Is someone stealing your lunch, Katie？” I took a new track. “No. I just lose it，” she said. Well, there was nothing else I could do.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The problem was still unsolved the next week until I noticed a boy in the school canteen._________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The problem was still unsolved the next week until I noticed a boy in the school canteen. He was silent sitting alone at a lunch table. He had messy hair and a thin face, always wearing his oversized coat and looking sad and shy. I thought I would go and sit with him for a while. As I walked towards him, I noticed the lunch bag on the table. The name card on the bag said “Katie” Now I understood what had happened. Later that day, I found Katie and talked to her about it.
Katie asked me not to tell her parents.___________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Katie asked me not to tell her parents. But I drove to her house that evening after I was sure that she was in bed. I had never seen parents so proud of their child Katie didn’t care that she was misunderstood by her parents and teacher. But she cared about a little boy who was hungry and scared. What a sweet girl she was! Later Katie still bought lunch every day at school. And every morning, as she headed out of the door, her mom handed her a delicious homemade lunch.
Test 2
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2021·金华十校高三调研)There was once a beautiful town and a couple of lovers would often stay together on the top of the mountain enjoying the sunrise and by the sea appreciating the sunset.Everyone who knew them could not help envying them for their happy love.
But one day，the man was severely injured and lying in bed in hospital for several days without any consciousness.The woman guarded him by the bed in daytime，calling his name nonstop while at night，she would go to the church and pray to God until her tears ran out.
A week passed by and the man was still sleeping.One day，God was finally moved by her love and persistence and would like to do her a special favour.
God said，“I can help your lover recover quickly on the condition that you should promise to be a butterfly for three years.Do you agree with the deal？” She said excitedly and firmly，“Yes，I do! I won’t regret doing that.”
The next day，the woman became a beautiful butterfly，flying hurriedly to the hospital.It turned out that the man came to his consciousness and woke up，talking with a doctor.She could not hear what they were talking about because she could not fly into the house.What she could do was watch her beloved through the windows helplessly.
Another spring came and the butterfly was in a hurry to fly back to see the man，only to realize that there was a pretty lady standing by him.At that moment，she was so shocked that she almost fell down from the sky.She could hardly believe her eyes.
People were talking about that the man was seriously ill during Christmas and that the pretty and cute female doctor took good care of him and that finally they fell in sweet love.
The butterfly felt heart-stricken.In the following days，she often saw the man take the woman to the top of the mountain to enjoy the sunrise and to the seaside to enjoy the sunset together.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her，but now they belonged to another woman.She could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on._______________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her, but now they belonged to another woman.She could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.On the last day of the third year when the deal between God and the butterfly was almost over, the man held a wedding with his girlfriend.The church was crowded with people.The butterfly flew into the church quietly and rested on the shoulder of God, listening to the man’s promise to the bride and seeing him put a ring on her finger and kiss her sweetly.The butterfly was sad in tears.

God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly，“Do you regret for what you have done？”________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly，“Do you regret for what you have done？”The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face, “No.” God felt a bit relieved and said, “Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life…” Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever.On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily together with them.
Test 3
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had to go grocery shopping this morning for the first time in a couple of weeks.My husband had been in Greece for a few weeks and my daughters were not at home either so I had stocked up on vegetables，salad ingredients and fruits along with the meat that I had in the freezer.
I am curious.When you are in line waiting to check out，do you check out what others have in their carts？I hate to admit it，but I do.I try not to judge，but again，I suppose I do to some extent－when I see a family in which the parents and the kids are very overweight and they are buying pop(汽水) and high-calorie snack foods.
My biggest issue with groceries is that all of the processed foods are easier to get and cheaper than fresh produce and probably stretch further.It amazes me to see families buying 12 packs or 24 packs of different kinds of pop.Most of the people that I am seeing are buying regular pop，not diet.But when I was young，we bought pop on special occasions.
For birthday parties or a camping trip，we could only have one can per day.We bought Shasta back then.I am not even sure whether it is still sold or not.We could all pick a few different flavors that we wanted for the trip.
But nowadays，pop is everywhere you go.I am glad to say that the hospital that I work for threw away all of their pop vending machines(自动贩卖机)．They didn’t think health care workers，patients or patients’ families needed them.I was happy for the change，but other people might not think so.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I heard a piece of news on the radio.____________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I heard a piece of news on the radio. It is reported that 40% of American women are obese, who often eat at restaurants and fast food places.They are unwilling to cook at home because they are lazy.But in order to stay healthy, we should buy vegetables, fruit and meat and make the majority of our meals at home.We can find recipes on the Internet that are good for us.We can cook various foods that we love to eat.When your family see a feast on the table, they will feel good.
I love fresh fruit and I love fish._________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I love fresh fruit and I love fish.In fact, I always go grocery shopping, buy many fresh fruits and cook various fishes that I like.I pick a few different flavors for my parents and my friends, which makes them happy.To achieve a healthy, balanced diet, it is important to eat at least three meals a day and not to skip breakfast. So I always get up early to prepare a good breakfast and try to make each meal composed to a variety of foods.
Test 4
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I always prided myself on being a wise shopper and having a good nose for bargains.So when I came across a sporting goods store with a sign “Going Out of Business Sale”， I marched into the crowded store.Up and down the aisles (通道), I wandered, humming to myself and enjoying the energy and excitement of a sale.
All of a sudden, there, at the back of the store sat a canoe (轻舟) exactly like my husband’s dream Supremo Numero-Uno，whose picture had been stuck on the bathroom mirror for years.My heart beat wildly.I pushed my way through the crowds, and nearly fell into the canoe looking for the price tag.There it was, with the manufacturer’s suggested price at $6,750 plus tax crossed out and a handwritten TO CLEAR $750 AS IS.Must be a mistake.$6,000 off Salesman.I had to talk to a salesman.I spotted a young fellow with a “Hi.I’m Mathew”．“Mathew.Tell me about this El Supremo canoe.What’s wrong with it Why is it only $750？”
“Oh.There’s nothing wrong with it.It’s brand new.We’re closing the store.It’s on clearance like everything else.I’ll go check.” A few minutes later he came back and said, “I’m sorry ma’am.Someone made a mistake on the sale tag.It should be $4,750 for the whole package.”
I felt tears well up in my eyes.“Oh well，” I said sadly.“Of course, it was too good to be true.This is exactly like my husband’s dreamboat.I guess I started to dream myself when I saw that price tag.He’s going to be 62 years old on Friday.He had to retire early for his health.It’s been hard on just the pension but the stubborn old fool has been saving $10 every week for years to buy one just like this.I promise I won’t buy anything, but it’s just an old man’s silly dream, you know.Always said he wanted to fish in a canoe after he retired，” my voice lowered and I turned and walked away.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me.“Do you have $750 plus $25 for delivery, ma’am？”_______ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me.“Do you have $750 plus $25 for delivery, ma’am？” “Yes.Yes.That’s about all I have.” “Well then, you just have your husband sitting at the front gate on Friday morning around 10 o’clock so he can be there when my dad and I come to unload his new canoe.We’ll even put a bow on it for his birthday.” I started to cry.My old hand shook as I wrote out my cheque.
“Ma’am.There’s something you should know.This store was my grandpa’s and the canoe had been ordered by him.”_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
“Ma’am.There’s something you should know.This store was my grandpa’s and the canoe had been ordered by him. He always promised to retire one day.He said he wanted to spend time relaxing and out fishing in a canoe，” he swallowed hard.“My grandpa died, sudden-like, just last week.He was only 68 years old.I think he’d be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe.You just have to make sure he uses it a lot, okay Promise？”“I promise，” I said as I dashed off to look for my dear sweet husband.(共35张PPT)
★Type 4　哲理类
专题二　读后续写
哲理类的读后续写以故事向人们传递其寓意，多侧 重描写人物及情境的相关词汇：
体现人物： lead a happy life(过着幸福的生活), develop one’s interest(培养兴趣), make an effort to do sth.(努力做某事), lose heart(失去信心), take up the challenge(接受挑战), work out(解决；锻炼)等；
描述情境： be set in… (以……为背景), make a breakthrough(取得突破), have a great negative effect on (对……有很大的负面影响), warm sunshine(温暖的阳光), look into(调查)等。
Test 1
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A long time ago，there was a huge apple tree.A little boy loved to come and play around it everyday.He climbed to the top，ate the apples，took a nap under the shadow.He loved the tree and the tree loved to play with him.
Time went by… The little boy had grown up and he no longer played around the tree every day.
One day，the boy came back to the tree，looking quite sad.“Come and play with me，” the tree asked the boy.“I am no longer a kid.I don’t play around trees anymore，”the boy replied.“I want toys.I need money to buy them.” “Sorry，but I don’t have money… but you can pick all my apples and sell them.So you will have money.” The boy was so excited.He grabbed all the apples on the tree and left happily.The boy never came back after he picked the apples.The tree was sad.
One day，the boy returned and the tree was so excited.“Come and play with me！” the tree said.“I don’t have time to play.I have to work for my family.We need a house for shelter.Can you help me？” “Sorry，but I don’t have a house.But you can chop off my branches to build your house.” So the boy cut all the branches off the tree and left happily.The tree was glad to see him happy but the boy never came back since then.The tree was lonely and sad again.
One hot summer day，the boy returned and the tree was delighted.“Come and play with me！” the tree said.“I am sad and getting tired.I want to go sailing to relax myself.Can you give me a boat？” “Use my trunk to build your boat.You can sail far away and be happy.” So the boy cut the tree trunk to make a boat.He went sailing and never showed up for a long time.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally，the boy returned after he left for so many years.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Finally, the boy returned after he left for so many years. “Sorry, my boy.But I don’t have anything for you anymore.No more apples, no more branches and no more trunk.The only thing left is my dying roots，” the tree said with tears.“I don’t need much now, just a place to rest.I’m tired after all these years，” the boy replied.“Good! Old tree root is, just a place to e, sit down with me and rest.” The boy sat down and the tree smiled with tears…
This is a story of everyone.The tree is actually our parents.___ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
This is a story of everyone.The tree is actually our parents.When we were young, we loved to play with Mom and Dad, when we grow up, we leave them and only come when we need something or when we’re sad.No matter what happens, parents are always there and ready to give everything they have to make us happy.You may think that the boy is cruel to the tree but that’s how all of us treating our parents.
Test 2
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A merchant sent his son to learn the secret of happiness from the wisest of men.The young man wandered through the desert for forty days until he reached a beautiful castle at the top of a mountain.There lived the wise man that the young man was looking for.
However，instead of finding a holy man，our hero entered a room and saw a lot of activities: merchants coming and going，people chatting in the corners，a band playing sweet music，and there was a table with different kinds of delicious food on it.The wise man talked to everybody，and the young man had to wait for two hours until it was time for his audience.
The wise man listened attentively to the reason for the boy’s visit，but told him that at that moment he did not have the time to explain to him the secret of happiness.He offered his suggestion that the young man take a walk around his castle and come back in two hours’ time.
“However，I want to ask you a favour，” he added，handing the boy a teaspoon，in which he poured two drops of oil.“While you walk，carry this spoon and don’t let the oil spill(溢出)．”
The young man began to walk around the castle，always keeping his eyes fixed on the spoon.At the end of two hours he returned to the presence of the wise man.
“So，” asked the wise man，“did you see the beautiful curtains hanging from the windows of my dining room Did you see the garden that the master of gardeners took ten years to create？Did you notice the beautiful furniture in my library？”
Embarrassed，the young man admitted that he had seen nothing.His only concern was not to spill the drops of oil the wise man had given him.
“So, go back and see the wonders of my world，” said the wise man.“You can’t trust a man if you don’t know his house.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Now more at ease, the young man took the spoon and walked around the castle again.___________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Now more at ease, the young man took the spoon and walked around the castle again. This time he paid attention to all the works of art that hung from the ceiling and walls.The young man saw the gardens, the mountains all around the palace, the delicacy of the flowers, the taste with which each work of art was placed in its cupboard.Returning to the wise man, he reported in detail all that he had seen.
“But where are the two drops of oil I gave you？” asked the wise man.______________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
“But where are the two drops of oil I gave you？” asked the wise man.Looking down at the spoon, the young man realized that he had spilled the oil.“Well, that is the only advice I have to give you，” said the wise man.“The secret of happiness lies in looking at all the wonders of the world and never forgetting the two drops of oil in the spoon.”
Test 3
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time, two brothers who lived on neighboring farms fell into conflict.It was the first serious disagreement in forty years of farming side by side, sharing machinery, and trading labour and goods as needed without a hitch.Then the long cooperation fell apart.It began with a small misunderstanding and then grew into a major difference, and finally it exploded into an exchange of bitter words followed by weeks of silence.
One morning, there was a knock on John’s door.He opened it to find a man with a carpenter’s toolbox.“I’m looking for a few days’ work，”he said.“Perhaps you have a few jobs here and there.Could I help you？”“Yes，”said John.“I do have a job for you.Look across the small creek at that farm.That’s my neighbor.In fact, it’s my younger brother.Last week there was a meadow between us and he took his bulldozer(推土机) there and now there is a creek between us.Well, he may have done this to annoy me but I’ll do better.See that pile of wood by the barn(谷仓)
I want you to build a fence—an 8-feet-high fence—so I won’t need to see his place anymore.”The carpenter said，“I think I understand the situation.Show me the nails and hole digger and I’ll be able to do a job that please you.”The older brother had to go to the town for supplies, so he helped the carpenter get everything ready and then he left.
The carpenter worked hard all that day measuring, sawing and nailing the bridge.At sunset when John returned, the carpenter had just finished his job.John’s eyes opened wide, his jaw dropped.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There was no fence at all.It was a bridge! ________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
There was no fence at all.It was a bridge！ A bridge stretched from one side of the creek to the other! John was about to complain about everything when he found the neighbor, his younger brother, was coming across the bridge, his hands outstretched.“You are quite a fellow to build this bridge after all I have said and done，”said John’s brother.The two brothers met in the middle, taking each other’s hand and hugging each other.
They turned to see the carpenter lift the toolbox onto his shoulder.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】They turned to see the carpenter lift the toolbox onto his shoulder.“No, wait! Stay a few more days.We have more jobs for you，”said the older brother.“I’d love to stay on，”the carpenter said，“but I have many more bridges to build.”Observing the carpenter leaving, the two brothers waved grateful good-bye to him.What a thought-provoking story! Every day we have the choice of building a fence or a bridge.One leads to separation and anger while the other leads to openness and friendship.
Test 4
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was a thick forest on the sides of a mountain.Many kinds of animals lived in the forest.A deer was eating grass and leaves with her two young ones.The young ones wandered happily here and there.The deer followed her fawns (幼鹿) into a cave.The deer was frightened because it was a tiger’s cave.There were bones of dead animals all over the cave.Fortunately, the tiger was not inside the cave at the time.
The deer was trying to lead her young ones out of the cave when she heard a loud roar.She saw the tiger at a distance coming towards the cave.It was dangerous to go out of the cave now.She thought of a plan.The deer raised her voice and shouted, “My dear young children, do not weep.I shall capture(捕捉) a tiger for you to eat.You can have a good dinner.”
The tiger heard these words and became frightened.He thought, “Whose is that strange voice from the cave A dangerous animal is staying inside to capture me.I shall run away to escape death.” The tiger began to run away from there as fast as possible.
A jackal (胡狼) saw the running tiger.“Why are you running in great fear？” the jackal asked.The tiger said, “My friend, a powerful and fierce animal is in my cave.The young ones are crying for a tiger to eat.The mother is promising to capture a tiger for them.So I am running away.”
The cunning jackal was now sure the tiger was a coward(懦夫)．He said, “Don’t be afraid.No animal is fiercer or stronger than a tiger.Let’s go together to find out.”
But the tiger said, “I do not want to take a chance.You may run away.I will be left alone to die.So I will not come with you.”
The jackal said, “Trust me.Let’s knot (打结)our tails together.Then I will not be able to leave you.” The tiger agreed unwillingly to this proposal.So the jackal tied their tails in a knot.Now they walked towards the cave together.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together.____ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together. She again raised her voice.She shouted towards her children standing inside the cave, “My dear children, I requested my friend, the clever jackal, to capture a tiger for us.Now look! The jackal has captured a tiger for us.He has tied the tiger’s tail to his tail.This is to prevent the tiger from escaping.You will soon have the tiger for dinner.”

The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him._______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him.So the tiger decided to escape from the terrible animal standing inside his cave.He started running.He forgot about the jackal.He dragged the jackal over rocks and thorns.In the mad escape the jackal was caught between two rocks.The tiger pulled with all his might.His tail got cut.The jackal was killed in this incident.The tail-less tiger ran away to another part of the forest.The deer and her young ones left the tiger’s cave.They joined their herd safely.Presence of mind and intelligence can save one from dangerous situations.(共8张PPT)
专题二　读后续写
★题型剖析
读后续写是新高考首次使用的题型。续写，顾名思义，就是在前文的基础上续写后文，使之与前文构成一个完整的故事。读后续写是读和写的统一，是对阅读能力、概括能力、思维转化能力、语言领悟能力和语言组织能力的全面考查。
读后续写
题型特点
1.总体特征——
2.主要类别——
3.具体要求——
读后续写的阅读材料一般为350词左右的记叙文。考生要在此文的后面接着续写约150词左右的文字与前文构成一个完整的故事。一般来说，记叙文浅显易懂，但故事情节多曲折动人，故事线索的逻辑能延伸。要求考生续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。
续写一般分为两类：半开放性续写和完全开放性续写。半开放性续写要求考生务必根据文章的逻辑推理续写。完全开放性续写则要求考生依据文章的思路自由发挥。
写作的具体要求：一是要注意词数限制在150词左右，且分两段，这两段中每段的词数多少没有限定。二是要注意续写时使用的时态要与原阅读材料中的时态一致。三是要注意两段开头所给句子的引领性和导向性。
读后续写
写作步骤
第一步：仔细审题——
第二步：细读全文——
第六步：复查定稿——
速读阅读材料，了解文章大意及重要情节，明确写作任务。
第三步：精心谋篇——
第四步：初写成文——
第五步：润色升级——
阅读材料一般为记叙文，阅读时要迅速抓住故事的几个关键要素：时间、地点、人物、事件。前三个要素考生易于获取，至于事件，考生必须理清事件的起因及发展过程。具体地讲，在阅读材料时要用笔在原文中标记能描述事件发展过程或者表明作者态度、观点和关键词 主要是名词、动词、形容词和副词 ，以便高效快捷地梳理故事线索。
先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字，再构思这两段要写的段落大意，根据确定好的段落大意，然后进行续写，这两段加起来要能写出10到15个左右的句子，以满足续写词数的要求。
按照第三步谋篇时确定好的写作要点进行初次写作。写作时要注意所用的人称和时态与原材料一致。另外，还要注意尽可能地减少表达上的语法错误。如果遇到语言上的表述困难，可多参考原阅读材料中的有关语句。
初写成文后，要对文章进行升级提升，用亮点词汇代替一般词汇，用高级句式代替一般句式。
完成续写后，考生要根据以下几点修改润色：
1.续写部分与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
2.内容的丰富性和高级句式的使用情况；
3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
4.续写部分与原阅读材料在内容上的连贯性与一致性。
读后续写的高分攻略
获得高分的写作技巧
Tip 1：故事要围绕着主要人物展开。
Tip 2：详细刻画角色及其情感。
Tip 3：使用恰当的衔接词使故事更有连贯性。
Tip 4：使用恰当的修饰词使描写更加生动。
Tip 5：做到首尾呼应使故事更加有条理。
Tip 6：确保第二段和第一段的衔接有逻辑。
★高分攻略
读后续写的高分攻略
评分标准
读后续写的高分攻略
评分标准
续写中常出现的问题
一、书写潦草，卷面涂改。
二、上下文的连贯性差。
三、错词错句多，好词好句少。
四、没有丰富和生动的细节推动情节的发展。
五、与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度差。
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