高考英语书信写作分类训练:建议信(word版含答案解析)

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建议信
1.假定你是李明。你的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 提出建议;
2. 表达祝愿。注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
2.假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学,他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.建议他上哪所大学及做哪些准备工作。注意:词数80左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.假定你是李华,你班交换生Jim将要参加留学生汉语演讲比赛,来信向你咨询。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐一个演讲话题;2.说明推荐的理由;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter 被选为2022年北京冬奥会志愿者,他向你写信请教如何学好汉语,请你给他回信,要点如下:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 提出建议;
3. 表达祝福。
注意:1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.假定你是李华,你的表妹Alice去市区的一所高中学校上学。由于离家很远,她很不适应离开父母后的生活,于是向你写信求助。请你给她回封信,信的内容包括:
1.给与安慰;
2.分析现状;
3.提出建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I am so sorry to hear from you that you have some trouble in your new life.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you happy every day!
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假设你是李华,是学生会的主席。为了呼吁高三学生在重压之下养成健康的生活方式,请你以学生会的名义,为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一份倡议书,内容包括:
1. 倡议的原因;
2. 倡议的目的;
3. 倡议的具体内容。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ Union
7.假如你是学生李华,你的英国笔友Smith写信说,他想来中国当一年的英语教师,现征求你的建议。请给他回信,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 推荐他来你的家乡;
3. 说明理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith,
Delighted to know that you are determined to teach English in China for a year,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8.为接待外国姐妹学校访问团,你将作为学校的中华文化小使者,向来访师生作题为“中国味,中国情”(Chinese taste, Chinese feeling)的英文介绍,请写一篇英文发言稿,介绍一种中国传统食物,内容包括:
1. 食物的名称;
2. 相关的传统:如食用的场合,食物的寓意等;
3. 建议尝试。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.假定你是李华,你的朋友尼克近来沉迷于游戏《王者荣耀》(King of Glory)不能自拔,你在得知此事后非常担忧。请你给他写一封信予以劝说,要点如下:
1. 你对他的担心;
2. 游戏的危害;
3. 摆脱游戏的办法。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Nick,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
10.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom打算到北京大学学习。他对中国历史很感兴趣,但又觉得汉语言文学专业就业前景更好,向你求助,请给他回一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 你的推荐;
3. 期待见面。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
参考答案
1.Dear David,
I'm delighted to learn that you've started learning Chinese! Knowing that would like to have a better command of Chinese, I'm writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
With proper guidance and enough practice, you're bound to learn Chinese well. To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture. Besides, you'd better make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible. With frequent communication in real life, you'll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident.
Hopefully my tips above can be of some help. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向考生咨询学好中文的方法。要求考生写一封回信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→happy
此外:besides → what’s more
希望:wish→hope
真实的:real→authentic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Knowing that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I'm writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
拓展句:After I know that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I'm writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I'm delighted to learn that you've started learning Chinese!(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijng in your last letter.
First, I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in profound Chinese history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like The Story of the Stone and some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于建议信,要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封信,建议他上北京的哪所大学及做哪些准备工作,并表示欢迎。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
肯定的:sure→certain
建议:suggest→advise
有用的:helpful→useful
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijng in your last letter.
拓展句:I’m so glad to hear that you plan to get future education in Beijng in your last letter.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in profound Chinese history and rich culture.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes.(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
3.Dear Jim,
I’m glad to know that you’ll take part in the speech contest.I’d like to give you some practical suggestions.
I recommend that you talk about the courses on Chinese traditional culture you’ve attended.The major reason is that they introduce the real treasure in human history. Besides, since you’ve taken the courses systematically, you’re sure to have a deep understanding of them.To do it well, I think you should choose impressive examples to gain the recognition of the judges.Moreover, you have to practice your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently.Speaking skills are also needed, for they can help strengthen the effectiveness of your speech.
I really hope my advice will be helpful.Wish you a great success!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给你班交换生Jim写一封邮件,对他参加留学生汉语演讲比赛提供帮助。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad →happy
参加:take part in →participate in
建议:suggestion →advice
此外:Besides →Moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’d like to give you some practical suggestions.
拓展句:I’d like to give you some practical suggestions that will be of great help to you.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I recommend that you talk about the courses on Chinese traditional culture you’ve attended. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The major reason is that they introduce the real treasure in human history. (运用了that引导的表语从句)
4.Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’m glad to receive your letter, saying you are recruited as a volunteer in 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. Congratulations! Knowing that you have difficulties in the preparation due to the language, I’d like to give you some suggestions as requested in your letter.
My advice are as follows: first, speak a little Chinese every day. The absolute best way to learn any new language is just to speak it. Second, attend a Chinese class or discussion group. After all, language learning settings are of great importance.
Hopefully, my advice is of some help to you. If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to write to me. Wish you good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给被选为 2022 年北京冬奥会志愿者的你的美国朋友 Peter回信,告诉他如何学好汉语。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的:happy →glad
困难:trouble →difficulty
因为:because of →due to
建议:advice = suggestion
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Second, attend a Chinese class or discussion group. After all, language learning settings are of great importance.
拓展句:Second, attend Chinese classes or discussion group because language learning settings are of great importance.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knowing that you have difficulties in the preparation due to the language, I’d like to give you some suggestions as requested in your letter.这句话运用了现在分词作状语和宾语从句。
[高分句型2] If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to write to me.这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
5.One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I am so sorry to hear from you that you have some trouble in your new life.
It is natural for us to miss our parents the first time we leave home. However, we cannot live with our parents forever because of further education, employment or something else. I believe you must realize that present separation will not only help your study but also improve your personal ability. You can make new friends in your school and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. I also suggest you enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it.
Wish you happy every day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给表妹Alice写一封信,针对她遇到的问题给与安慰并提出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
正常的:normal→natural
永远,总是:always→forever
参加:participate in→take part in
各种各样的:various→different kinds of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:You will get much pleasure from it.
拓展句:I believe that you will get much pleasure from it.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I believe you must realize that present separation will not only help your study but also improve your personal ability. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] You can make new friends in your school and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
6.Possible version:
Dear fellow students,
With College Entrance Examination approaching, many of us are under much pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle, ranging from studying deep into the night to taking little physical exercise, which is extremely harmful to our health.
To equip ourselves for the challenges of this senior year in our high school, it is high time that we take actions to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.
We are supposed to reasonably distribute our time of study and rest, as a result of which we are able to maintain an energetic state when faced with difficulties and pressure. Additionally, it is recommended that physical exercise, an excellent way of relieving pressure, be scheduled regularly. Keeping healthy is also key to our success. Let's take actions now!
Students’ Union
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以学生会的名义,为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一份倡议书,呼吁高三学生在重压之下养成健康的生活方式。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
会议:approach→draw near
说:pressure→stress
另外:additionally→moreover
采取行动做某事:take actions to do sth.→take steps to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Keeping healthy is also key to our success.
拓展句:It is vital to our success that we should keep healthy.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] With College Entrance Examination approaching, many of us are under much pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle, ranging from studying deep into the night to taking little physical exercise, which is extremely harmful to our health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,现在分词作宾语补足语和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] We are supposed to reasonably distribute our time of study and rest, as a result of which we are able to maintain an energetic state when faced with difficulties and pressure. (运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句和过去分词作状语)
7.Dear Smith,
Delighted to know that you are determined to teach English in a scenic place in China for a year, I highly recommend my hometown—Guangzhou and extend my warmest welcome to you.
Guangzhou is the ideal destination for both tourism and education. The scenery is splendid with the Pearl River and Baiyun Mountain. In addition, you can always enjoy a variety of tasty food. What’s the most attractive is that, as one of the open cities, its people are eager to learn English to embrace the world, making it an inviting city undoubtedly worth working in.
What do you think of my suggestion Hope to meet you here. (89 words)
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Smith写一封信,欢迎他来你的家乡当英语老师并说明理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
理想的,完美的:perfect→ideal
壮丽的,壮观的:grand→splendid
各种各样的:various→a variety of
美味的:delicious→tasty
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I highly recommend my hometown—Guangzhou and extend my warmest welcome to you.
拓展句:I highly recommend that you can teach English in my hometown—Guangzhou and extend my warmest welcome to you.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Guangzhou is the ideal destination for both tourism and education. (运用了“both…and…”句型)
[高分句型2] What’s the most attractive is that, as one of the open cities, its people are eager to learn English to embrace the world, making it an inviting city undoubtedly worth working in. (运用了what引导的从句作主语,that引导的从句作表语)
8.Dear teachers and fellow students,
Good morning, everyone! As a messenger of traditional Chinese culture, I feel greatly honored to speak here. What I’d like to introduce to you is the Chinese dumpling, which is also called Jiaozi in our native language.
Chinese dumplings or Jiaozi, mainly with meat and vegetable fillings, is a kind of traditional Chinese food, which dates back to approximately 1500 years ago. China has been perfecting the art of dumpling making since the Ming Dynasty.
As the Spring Festival marks the start of a new year, people choose to eat Jiaozi to express their wishes for good fortune. Therefore, it is part of the Chinese culture. Traditionally, family members get together to make dumplings in their homes on New Year's Eve. Making dumplings is really team work to create harmonious family atmosphere. Ways of cooking Chinese dumplings vary from place to place, but as a symbol of family reunion and wealth, dumplings are generally enjoyed after the dumpling-making process on New Year’s Eve, when all the family members sit together and chat happily with each other.
I suggest you all try such a kind of delicious and special traditional Chinese food, and I promise to treat you to a big meal of Jiaozi when you come to visit me!
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文写作,要求考生写一篇发言稿,向来访师生介绍一种中国传统食物,内容包括食物名称、食用场合和食物寓意等,并建议大家都来尝试。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
大约:about→approximately
使……完善:improve→perfect(v.)
运气:luck→fortune
与……不同:be different(adj.) from→vary(v.) from
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Traditionally, family members get together to make dumplings in their homes on New Year's Eve. Making dumplings is really team work to create harmonious family atmosphere.
拓展句:Traditionally, family members get together to make dumplings in their homes on New Year's Eve, which is really team work to create harmonious family atmosphere.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] What I’d like to introduce to you is the Chinese dumpling, which is also called Jiaozi in our native language.(主语从句和非限制性定语从句的综合运用)
[高分句型2] I suggest you all try such a kind of delicious and special traditional Chinese food, and I promise to treat you to a big meal of Jiaozi when you come to visit me! (suggest后接宾语从句,此处省略that和should)
9.Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you are addicted to King of Glory. Spending too much time on games is not only harmful to your health but also makes you isolated from the real world.
I think you can try other things to distract your attention. For example, you can play basketball or other sports with your friends, which can improve your fitness and strengthen your friendship. It’s also a good choice to communicate with your parents and friends, sharing your happiness and sorrow. Besides, you can read some books to broaden your horizon in your spare time.
Longing for good news from you!
Yours sincerely
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外国朋友尼克写封信,陈述沉迷游戏的坏处,然后提出一些建议,帮他远离游戏。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
健康:health→fitness
加强:deepen→strengthen
扩大:widen→broaden
对……有害:be bad for=be harmful to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:You can read some books to broaden your horizon in your spare time.
拓展句:You can read some books to broaden your horizon in your spare time, whose content interests you so much that games are out of your mind.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] you can play basketball or other sports with your friends, which can improve your fitness and strengthen your friendship. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Spending too much time on games is not only harmful to your health but also make you isolated from the real world. (运用了动名词短语作主语,not only…but also…引导的并列句)
10.Dear Tom,
Knowing that you have been admitted into Peking University and seek further study here, I am writing to extend my congratulations.
As for the major, I recommend that you devote yourself to the major in Chinese language and literature. Two factors account for this choice. In the first place, as far as I know, you have been learning Chinese idioms on the radio for the past two years, which greatly enriches your Chinese vocabulary and gives you a better understanding of Chinese culture and customs. In addition, you always hold a dream that one day, you would promote Chinese culture by teaching China-related lessons back in America. Armed with a great command of Chinese language, you can live up to your dream.
I can’t wait to meet you in Beijing this summer.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国朋友Tom回复一封电子邮件,就他的专业选择提出你的建议和理由。并表示期待早日重逢。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达:express→extend
此外:additionally→in addition
更加了解:know more about→have a better understanding of
首先:first of all→in the first place
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I can’t wait to meet you in Beijing this summer.
拓展句:I can’t wait to meet you in Beijing this summer, where your path to success in mastering Chinese language begins.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knowing that you have been admitted into Peking University and seek further study here, I am writing to extend my congratulations. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] you always hold a dream that one day, you would promote Chinese culture by teaching China-related lessons back in America. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)

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