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感谢信/祝贺信
1．假设你是育才中学高三学生李华，2022年春节将至，请给你的外教Miss Green写一封电子邮件，感谢老师的帮助并送上祝福。
词数80左右，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Green,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是高三学生李华，准备代表全体同学在毕业典礼上发言。请写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 高中三年的收获 (如学习，生活等);
2. 感谢和决心。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua. It's my great honor to stand here to deliver my speech.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假定你是李华，你所在的国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致谢奋战在抗击新冠肺炎一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信投稿：
1. 表达谢意; 2. 个人感受; 3. 表达信心。
注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：流行病epidemic 疫情epidemic situation 新型冠状病毒COVID-19
Dear Medical workers,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，在外教Chris指导下获得了学校英语演讲比赛的一等奖。请给Chris 写一封邮件，向他表达你的感谢。邮件内容包括：
1.告知Chris你的比赛结果；
2.回顾比赛过程中Chris对你的帮助；
3.表达你对Chris的感谢。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，在即将毕业之际，请你代表全班同学给外教Frank写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回忆美好瞬间；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设你是高三学生李华，毕业在即，请给你高二时的外教Eric写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
1. 感谢他给你的帮助；
2. 分享你的职业规划。
注意：
1. 词数80左右
2. 可适当增加细节。
Dear Eric,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
7．假定你是李华，上周六你的英国好友Eric教你如何创建个人网站，你从中学到很多知识。 请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 简述Eric给予你的帮助；
3. 希望向Eric学习更多相关知识。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Eric,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，听说你们班曾经任教的外教Sara准备在中国举办婚礼。现在你代表全班同学给Sara发一封邮件。邮件包括以下内容：
1．向她表示祝福；
2．感谢她给予的帮助；
3．已邮寄具有中国特色的小礼物。
注意：
1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3．开头结尾已写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Sara,
I am Li Hua, one of your former students.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，春节里你的美国朋友Michael 发邮件祝你新年快乐，并询问你的新年计划，请你给他回邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢他的祝福；
2. 你的新年计划；
3. 询问他的新年计划。
注意：
1. 词数 80 词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你是李华，上周日你不慎在操场丢失一个书包，里面有学生证、钱包等物品。你校外教Mr. Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.描述事情经过；
3.再次表达感谢。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．One possible version:
Dear Miss Green,
As the 2022 Spring Festival is approaching, I'm sending this e-mail to express my sincere gratitude and best wishes to you.
Thinking back on the past three years, I can well remember the great help you gave me in my high school life. What I am most grateful for is that you spent a lot of time helping me prepare for my English contest, searching information online and rehearsing again and again. This enhanced my confidence in English learning. In a word, you always support me whenever I need your help.
I do hope everything goes well with you. Thank you for your selfless support and assistance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文是应用文。要求考生在2022年春节前夕给外教Miss Green写一封电子邮件，感谢老师的帮助并送上祝福。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
即将来临：approaching→drawing near
感激：gratitude→thankfulness
帮助：help→favor
提高：enhance→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you for your selfless support and assistance.
拓展句：Thank you for the support and assistance that you gave me selflessly.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As the 2022 Spring Festival is approaching, I'm sending this e-mail to express my sincere gratitude and best wishes to you.（由as引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】Thinking back on the past three years, I can well remember the great help you gave me in my high school life.（由省略连词that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型3】What I am most grateful for is that you spent a lot of time helping me prepare for my English contest, searching information online and rehearsing again and again.（由what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
【高分句型4】In a word, you always support me whenever I need your help.（由whenever引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型5】I do hope everything goes well with you.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
2．Good morning, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s my great honor to stand here to deliver my speech.
It has been three years since I started my high school. At this moment, I cannot bear to part but I am also eager for my new life in university. During the three years, not only have I made some true friends who shared sorrows and joys with me, but also I have gained various knowledge.
Before leaving, I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to my teachers. It was they who patiently answered our endless questions. Besides, I owe many thanks to my dear classmates. Without their help and encouragement, I couldn’t have overcome so many difficulties.
Now we have been determined to lead a more meaningful life in university and I will live up.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿代表全体同学在毕业典礼上发言。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
忍受：stand →bear
渴望：long for →be eager for
获得：get →gain
各种各样的：various= a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Now we have been determined to lead a more meaningful life in university and I will live up.
拓展句：Now we have been determined to lead a more meaningful life in university, where I will live up.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] During the three years, not only have I made some true friends who shared sorrows and joys with me, but also I have gained various knowledge.这句话运用了who引导的定语从句和部分倒装结构。
[高分句型2] It was they who patiently answered our endless questions.这句话运用了强调句。
3．One possible version:
Dear Medical workers,
I am Li Hua, a high middle school student. I m writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against COVID-19.
In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on(阐明; 解释) the virus with expertise(专业知识) to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!
I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写封感谢信，致谢奋战在抗击新冠肺炎一线的医护人员。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感谢：thanks→appreciation/gratitude
阐明、解释：explain →shed new light on
可能：possibility→potential
挽救：save= rescue
尽管，虽然：in spite of=despite=regardless of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution.
拓展句：The contribution you make is so great that I can't fully convey our thankfulness too much.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. (运用了 强调句型）
[高分句型2] It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. (运用了主语从句)
4．One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you my excitement of winning first prize in the English speech contest and express my appreciation for your help.
When I had no clue what to write, it was you who came to me and inspired me with your broad knowledge. Besides, you carefully polished my script and helped me correct grammar mistakes, which is of vital importance for conveying my ideas accurately. What’s more, It was so nice of you to practice my oral English with me when you were available.
I can’t wait to express my gratitude to you personally when we meet next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，在外教Chris指导下获得了学校英语演讲比赛的一等奖。请给Chris 写一封邮件，向他表达你的感谢。邮件内容包括：告知Chris你的比赛结果；回顾比赛过程中Chris对你的帮助；表达你对Chris的感谢。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达感激：express my appreciation→ show gratitude→feel grateful
另外，此外：besides→ in addition→ what’s more→ furthermore
英语口语：oral English→ spoken English
重要的：vital→important
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：When I had no clue what to write, it was you who came to me and inspired me with your broad knowledge.
拓展句：When I had no clue what I should write, it was you who came to me and inspired me with your broad knowledge.
【点睛】
[高分句型1 ] When I had no clue what to write, it was you who came to me and inspired me with your broad knowledge.（句中含when引导的时间状语和强调句型。）
[高分句型2 ] Besides, you carefully polished my script and helped me correct grammar mistakes, which is of vital importance for conveying my ideas accurately.（句中which引导非限制性定语从句。）
5．Dear Mike,
On the occasion of graduation, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send our sincere gratitude for your kind help with our English learning on behalf of the whole class. I still remember what you have devoted to improving our oral English and English writing. Besides, you also frankly shared your learning experience with us. Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express our thankfulness to you. I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表全班同学给外教Frank写一封电子邮件，对他表示感谢，回忆美好瞬间并表达祝愿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
真诚的：sincere→genuine
感激：gratitude→appreciation
贡献：devote→contribute
表达：express→convey
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest.
拓展句：Additionally, had you not helped me, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I still remember what you have devoted to improving our oral English and English writing. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever! (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
6．Dear Eric,
Upon graduation, I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help with my English study last year.
Your constant encouragement and helpful advice build up my confidence and boost my grade. Besides, your enthusiasm in teaching also inspires my career goal. I have made up my mind to teach Chinese in foreign countries, as it enables me to promote Chinese culture to people from other cultural backgrounds, offering a great chance for job satisfaction and fulfillment.
Thanks a million again and may you continue to inspire greatness in your students!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给高二时的外教Eric写一封感谢信。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 感谢他给你的帮助；
2. 分享你的职业规划。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
graduation; heartfelt gratitude; encouragement; helpful; build up; boost; enthusiasm; inspire; make up one’s mind to do sth.; enable sb. to do sth.; promote; continue to
第三步：连词成句
1. Upon graduation, I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help with my English study last year.
2. Your constant encouragement and helpful advice build up my confidence and boost my grade.
3. Besides, your enthusiasm in teaching also inspires my career goal.
4. I have made up my mind to teach Chinese in foreign countries, as it enables me to promote Chinese culture to people from other cultural backgrounds, offering a great chance for job satisfaction and fulfillment.
5. Thanks a million again and may you continue to inspire greatness in your students!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：Besides
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句)（供参考）
4.表因果关系：As
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Besides, your enthusiasm in teaching also inspires my career goal. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] I have made up my mind to teach Chinese in foreign countries, as it enables me to promote Chinese culture to people from other cultural backgrounds, offering a great chance for job satisfaction and fulfillment. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
7．
Dear Eric,
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for helping me create a personal website last Saturday.
After learning about my difficulty in creating a personal website, you offered guidance to me. First of all, you taught me the steps of creating a personal website in detail. Then you told me what I should pay attention to. Whenever I had a problem, you explained it to me carefully and patiently. Finally, with your help, I succeeded in creating my own website.
Many thanks again for your help. I hope that I’ll learn more relevant knowledge from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Eric写封邮件，就他教你如何创建个人网站一事表示感谢。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时、现在进行时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 简述Eric给予你的帮助；
3. 希望向Eric学习更多相关知识。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
express one’s gratitude to sb.; help sb. do sth.; offer sth. to sb.; in detail; pay attention to sth.; succeed in doing sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for helping me create a personal website last Saturday.
2. After learning about my difficulty in creating a personal website, you offered guidance to me.
3. First of all, you taught me the steps of creating a personal website in detail.
4. Then you told me what I should pay attention to.
5. Finally, with your help, I succeeded in creating my own website.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：First of all, Then, Finally
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Then you told me what I should pay attention to. 用了what引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Whenever I had a problem, you explained it to me carefully and patiently. 用了Whenever引导的时间状语从句。
8．Dear Sara,
Hearing that you are going to hold your wedding in China, I’m writing to express our best wishes and sincere gratitude to you on behalf of the whole class.
Thanks to your generous help as well as your great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in our English, which will be of great importance to our further study. We’ve sent you a Chinese knot, a souvenir that we’ve specially prepared for you. Hopefully you’ll like it.
Wish you a pleasant wedding and always young and happy!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表全班同学给曾经任教过的外教Sara发一封邮件，对她表达教授知识的感谢和她婚礼的祝福。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在完成时。
结构：总分分法
要点：
1．向她表示祝福；
2．感谢她给予的帮助；
3．已邮寄具有中国特色的小礼物。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
Be going to；wedding；on behalf of；thank to；as well as；become interested in；be of great importance to；a Chinese knot；prepare for
第三步：连词成句
1. Hearing that you are going to hold your wedding in China, I’m writing to express our best wishes and sincere gratitude to you on behalf of the whole class.
2. Thanks to your generous help as well as your great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in our English, which will be of great importance to our further study.
3. We’ve sent you a Chinese knot, a souvenir that we’ve specially prepared for you.
4. Hopefully you’ll like it.
5. Wish you a pleasant wedding and always young and happy!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：as well as；and；Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Hearing that you are going to hold your wedding in China, I’m writing to express our best wishes and sincere gratitude to you on behalf of the whole class.（使用了现在分词作原因状语和动词不定式作目的状语，that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Thanks to your generous help as well as your great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in our English, which will be of great importance to our further study.（使用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] We’ve sent you a Chinese knot, a souvenir that we’ve specially prepared for you.（使用了由that引导的定语从句）
9．One possible version:
Dear Michael,
Thank you for your best wishes and wish you a happy Chinese New Year, too.
Actually I have so many plans in the coming year. My top priority is to make maximum efforts to have an outstanding performance in my college entrance examination. And I am also determined to build up my body by eating less junk food and taking regular exercise. I intend to continue learning French, too. Hopefully I can follow the plan and have a fruitful year.
How about you I can’t wait to know your new year plan. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Michael回封邮件，感谢他的新年祝福，并说明自己的新年计划，同时询问Michael的新年计划。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：并列式
不分主次、并列平行地叙述事件，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 感谢他的祝福；
2. 你的新年计划；
3. 询问他的新年计划。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
my top priority; make maximum efforts; be determined to do sth.; build up; intend to
第三步：连词成句
1.My top priority is to make maximum efforts to have an outstanding performance in my college entrance examination.
2.And I am also determined to build up my body by eating less junk food and taking regular exercise.
3.I intend to continue learning French, too.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】
[高分句型1] My top priority is to make maximum efforts to have an outstanding performance in my college entrance examination.（不定式作目的状语）
[高分句型2] And I am also determined to build up my body by eating less junk food and taking regular exercise.（动名词作介词宾语）
10．Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. I’m writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，上周日你不慎在操场丢失一个书包，里面有学生证、钱包等物品。你校外教Mr. Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.描述事情经过；3.再次表达感谢。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：thank sb. for (为某事感谢某人)；playground(操场)；carelessness(粗心)；owing to(由于)；be important to(对……重要)；just as (正当)；be at a loss (不知所措)；inform(告知)；Lost and Found(失物招领处)；excitement(激动)；beyond description(难以形容)；cordial thanks(由衷的感谢)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me.运用非限制性定语从句；Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag.运用强调句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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