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走进高考书面表达之读后续写
一、题型解读：
1.读后续写作为英语高考新题型，是一种“给材料作文”，它要求学生在阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据所给出的开头语把这篇未写完的文章补充完整。读后续写要紧扣文章前文所述，去推想之后可能出现的情况，要展开合理、充分的想象，构思适当的情节，写成一篇完整的文章。读后续写有助于培养学生的想象能力、创新思维能力和语言表达能力。
合理（忠于原文精神）
2.读后续写之要求
合情（思想正面、向上）
选材特点
1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；
2）多以记叙文故事类文章为主。
3）将续写内容发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
读后续写得分点总结：
1）内容切题【读】； 2）语言高级【写】； 3）逻辑连贯【写】。
解题步骤：1. 5分钟读300词阅读材料，掐首尾（读首尾段），找人事（找到文章的人物和事件）；
3分钟编转折，加升华（在草稿上根据所给出的开头语写简略取中文续写大纲）；
根据中文大纲， 17分钟用亮眼词加美颜句凑成两段各60-80词的短文。具体如下：
150词
【专项练兵场】
I【2021·全国新高考卷I】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇 完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in dismay, their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
【解析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。
略读原文首段The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.和尾段Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
得知双胞胎Jenna 和Jeff准备在母亲节那天给他们的妈妈一个惊喜：计划做早餐，然后在做早餐的过程中手忙脚乱，弄得厨房一地鸡毛。
根据所给材料确定文章主题:Jenna 和Jeff如何给母亲制作惊喜的早餐的。
续写部分应和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。
根据第一段首句As the twins looked around them in dismay, their father appeared.（当双胞胎沮丧地环顾四周时， 他们的父亲出现了。）可以针对父亲面对双胞胎的表情展开进行构思，所以第二句Seeing the burnt bread and spilled porridge in the kitchen, dad stared at the kids in astonishment.接下来编转折：Jeff 告诉爸爸计划， 爸爸笑了，决定帮助他们。When Jeff stammered out their plan, a smile of understanding flashed across dad’s face. Without a second thought, dad decided to help them. 根据第二段首句The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.（双胞胎把早餐拿到楼上并喊醒了母亲。）可以针对妈妈吃到孩子们送来的早餐的感觉展开进行构思，逆推第一段尾句：And dad asked the kids to carry out their plan. 根据第二段第一句推出第二句：They yelled,”Happy Mother’s Day! A big surprise for you!”第二段最后一句：A feeling of love filled the room. What a beautiful surprise. 发出感慨，使主题升华！
【答案】
As the twins looked around them in dismay, their father appeared.Seeing the burnt bread and spilled porridge in the kitchen, dad stared at the kids in astonishment. When Jeff stammered out their plan, a smile of understanding flashed across dad’s face. Without a second thought, dad decided to help them. The kids cleaned up the messy kitchen while dad was occupied cooking a delicious sandwich and some porridge. Soon, the delicious smell of breakfast filled the kitchen. And dad asked the kids to carry out their plan.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.They yelled,”Happy Mother’s Day! A big surprise for you!”The moment mom saw the breakfast, her eyes widened and twinkled with joy. She tasted the perfect sandwich as well as the porridge, saying that it was the best present that she had ever received. And then she took the little angels in her arms and kissed them. A feeling of love filled the room. What a beautiful surprise.
II. 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A friend of mine whose name was John Smith had a bad memory，which made him famous. He was so forgetful that he sometimes forgot what he was talking about in the middle of a sentence. His wife had to constantly remind him about his meetings，his classes—even his meals！Once he forgot he had eaten breakfast twice，at home and at school. His wife liked to remind her neighbors，“If John didn't have his head tied on，he would forget that too！” Since Smith was a professor at a well-known university，his forgetfulness was often an embarrassment to him. It wasn't that he was not clever，as some critical people tended to say，but just very，very absent minded.
One hot summer day，professor Smith decided to take his children to a seaside town about a three hour train ride away. To make the trip more interesting for his young children，he kept the name of the town a secret. However，by the time they arrived at the station，Smith forgot the name of the town he was planning to visit. Luckily，a friend of his happened to be in the station. He offered to take care of the children while Smith hurried back home to find out where he was going.
The professor's wife was surprised to see him again so soon.
“Oh，my dear，I forgot the name of the town.”
“What You forgot the name Maybe one day you will forget my name！Now I'll write the name of that town on a piece of paper，and you put it in your pocket and please，please don't forget where you put it.”
Satisfied that she had solved the problem，she sent her husband off again. Ten minutes later she was astonished to see him outside the house for the third time.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para. 1“What’s the matter now ” asked his wife
Para. 2Hearing the cry, out rushed their neighbors，trying to find out what had happened.
【答案】
“What is the matter now？” asked his wife.“I just can't remember why I come back and where I am supposed to be going on such a hot summer day，”replied the professor.However，the real reason was that he forgot where he had left his children．Sensing something wrong，Mrs Smith didn't believe his words，because whenever he told a lie，he would blink his eyes usually quickly.“Tell me the truth，” ordered his wife.“As you told me，I didn't forget where I put the name of that town，but I forget the station where I left our children！” whispered the professor，his voice trembling.“What a bad memory！” shouted the wife
Hearing the cry，out rushed their neighbors，trying to find out what had happened.A fight between the couple was about to start when the professor's cell phone began to ring.His friend，whose patience had worn thin，phoned to complain.The professor apologized，got into his car and drove away，leaving behind a bunch of people outside the house．Being afraid that he would make matters worse again，Mrs Smith decided to follow him，who then called a taxi.By the time she caught up with her husband，the children were already back home safe .
III. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Everyone in the seaside town knows that Fliss has a special bond with her dog Molly. They work together, live together, and play together. The Labrador (拉布拉多猎犬) is actually at Fliss’s side all the time. If a person spent this much time with a friend, they would probably have fallen out by now, but the bond between Molly and her owner just gets stronger over time.
Fliss grew up in the city. In 2017, she moved to the seaside where she opened a bath and skincare shop. Upon arrival, she couldn’t believe how much litter was left “senselessly” on the beach. In fact, she was shocked by the “unavoidable” amount of litter she found while taking Molly for walks. Being a person who cares a lot about her surroundings, Fliss decided that she had to do something about it before the tide carried the litter into the sea, threatening marine life.
One day, while collecting litter on the beach, Fliss saw Molly running towards her with an empty water bottle in her mouth. As Molly drew near, she dropped the bottle and set out to find other waste. This gave Fliss an idea: what if she could train Molly to find all those plastic bottles and bags, and make good use of them
The training started and Fliss was surprised at how fast Molly learned. Before long, the clever girl would venture (冒险) to the seaside on her own and come home with her “prize”. She had soon filled Fliss’s house with pieces of rubbish from the local beach. At one point, Fliss’s garage was 60% filled with beach litter waiting to be distributed to local artists for use in their artwork.
When Fliss heard paws on the door the other day, she went to greet her good girl as usual. To her surprise, she saw Molly carrying a small plastic purse in her mouth. Fliss opened the purse and gasped (喘气). Inside was a passport, several credit cards, and a bunch of keys.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右:
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Fliss immediately took the purse to the local police station with Molly.
When the journalist came, they two were on the beach.
【解答】
Fliss immediately took the purse to the local police station with Molly. When they arrived, Fliss tied Molly to a fireplug outside and went in herself. She handed the purse to a police officer and explained everything. Greatly touched, he shook her hand and thanked her for doing her duty, promising that he would do his best to find the owner. Fliss felt reassured and went back with Molly. The next day, a journalist called to make an appointment for an interview.
When the journalist came, they two were on the beach. The journalist was surprised to find that Molly was picking up litter, following her master. Fliss told the journalist it was on the way to collecting litter that Molly had found the purse. Hearing this, Molly stopped, wagging her tail as if she understood the whole situation. Having learned about the whole story, the journalist got to know what they did to protect the local beach. Surprised and impressed, the journalist took some pictures. The next day they were on the front page of the newspaper. A minor action could make wonders! (162 words)
IV、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
On a cold windy day, a poor boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door. Wandering on the street, he was not a successful seller. What’s worse, he found that he only has one dime（一角硬币）left. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadn’t eaten anything. He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house. Hesitantly he knocked at the door, thinking about what to say when it opened. However he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. “What can I do for you ” asked the young woman. The boy paused for a while. “Would you please give me some…. a drink of water ” the boy dared not look directly into her eyes. She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give him energy, so she brought him a glass of milk. His head rising and small hands taking the cup, he drank it up slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you ” “You don’t owe me anything,” She replied with a warm smile on her face. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” Deeply moved, he said sincerely, “Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart.” As Howard Kelly left that house, he not only felt stronger physically, but it also increased his faith in God and the whole human race. As a matter of fact, he was about to give up and quit before that point.
Years later, the young woman became seriously ill. However, the local doctors were unable to give the effective medical treatment. Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to cure her rare disease. Among these famous specialists, Dr . Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation（会诊）. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Immediately, he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room.
Paragraph1
Dressed in his doctor’s gown（长袍）he went in to see her.
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The bill was sent to her room.
【解答】
Dressed in his doctor’s gown, he went in to see her. He saw her lie on the bed and recognized her at once. Her lovely face looked pale. He went back to the consultation room and determined to do his best to save her life. From that day on, he gave special attention to her case. Luckily, after a long struggle the battle was won. Doctor Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on the side.
Paragraph2
The bill was sent to her room. Hesitantly she took it. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off. Finally, she opened the bill, on the other side of which a note caught her attention. She read these words, “Paid in full with a glass of milk.” signed Dr. Howard Kelly. Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently, “Thank you, God!”
V、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
On a freezing morning of December, two police officers were patrolling (巡逻) the streets. Suddenly, the walkie -talkie (对讲 机) on Alan, one of the officers, rang. “The cake shop near the City Museum has reported a burglary. Please rush to the scene immediately, ”said the electronic voice.
The two policemen quickly arrived at the shop, only to find that the scene showed no sign of crimes at all. Curiously, they checked the monitor and found that a thin woman broke open the window and climbed into the store at 5∶20 a.m. Instead of searching around, she walked straight into the storage room, stole cheese, chocolate, butter and other ingredients (原料) for a cake, and then ran away down the road.
Both policemen felt quite confused about her behavior. One of the shop assistants identified the thief as Clara, a single mother who lived nearby. She has an eight -year-old boy to take care of and lives a poor life.
Moments later, the two officers arrived at Clara’s house. Bob, another officer, pulled out a gun and was about to break in. But Alan told him to put the gun away and knocked gently.
The door opened and out came a very thin woman. From the outline of her figure, Alan recognized that she was exactly the thief. The woman, Clara, immediately understood the situation when she saw the two policemen. She buried her face in her hands and sat down on the floor.
At that very moment, a child’s voice broke the silence,“Mom, is anyone coming for my birthday Invite them in, please.”
After hearing the boy’s words, Clara stood up and begged in a low voice,“Officer, I did steal those things, but there’s nothing else I could do. It’s my baby’s birthday, and I’ve got neither job nor money. Please don’t take those things away. I’ve just used them to make him a cake. ”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 。
Looking into the woman ’s teary eyes, Alan understood and walked into the house.
Bob nodded thoughtfully and asked,“What about the things she stole？”
解答：Looking into the woman ’s teary eyes, Alan understood and walked into the house. He took a quick glance at the boy, who was joyfully eating his cake, and sighed,“It is best if we close the case in a different way. ”He gestured Clara to come out with him and closed the door behind her. Still with butterflies in her stomach, Clare extended her hands, ready to be handcuffed (戴上手铐). “This is not necessary, ” Alan said. He explained that if Clara agreed to help out at the cake shop and pay for the cake, there is no need to arrest her. With tears sparkling in her eyes and a gracious smile decorating her face, Clara agreed and bowed deeply to express her thanks.
Bob nodded thoughtfully and asked,“What about the things she stole？”After some discussion, the two officers decided to temporarily pay off the lost ingredients for a cake by themselves. They came back to the cake shop and brought the shop assistants some money . “ Here’s the money for ingredients for a cake from the woman who was so sorry because of her behavior. ”And then, Alan and Bob explained the situation of Clara to him and also described the beautiful cake Clara made. Having heard what the officers said, the shop assistant refused the money. Instead he offered a job to Clara in his shop.
VI. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Mary tried to hold her breath. She moved away slightly, but Amy only moved closer and continued talking.
Mary thought to herself, “Why does she always have to sit next to me ” Amy didn’t seem to notice that Mary was trying to move away, and she leaned in closer. Mary wanted badly to tell Amy that she didn’t smell very good, but how could she without hurting her feelings
When Mary got home from school, she complained to her mother. “There’s a girl named Amy who likes to sit next to me in school, but she smells bad. Nobody else likes to sit next to her, either.”
“Well, try to be nice to her,” said her mother. “Maybe she’s having a hard time at home. You never know what a person’s home life is like.”
For the rest of the week, Mary tried to be a good friend to Amy. There were times when they had fun talking and playing together, especially on the days when Amy bathed. But on the days when she smelled bad, Mary still found it very hard to be her friend.
One morning, while getting her hair combed for school, Mary brought the subject up again with her mother.
“I don’t want to be friends with Amy anymore,” she told her mother.
Her mother’s hands froze in midair. Mary turned to see what the matter was. Her mother looked upset. Mary wondered what she had said made her mother react this way.
“I don’t think you understand Amy’s situation, so let me ask you this…” Her mother’s tone was serious. “Who makes sure that your hair is combed every morning so you’ll look nice when you go to school Who makes sure you’re bathed and cleaned every day And your clothes are washed and neatly ironed ”
“You and Daddy,” answered Mary.
“Do you live in a happy family Do you have a good Dad and Mum ” Then her mother encouraged her to learn more about Amy before she decided whether or not to be friends with Amy.
注意：
续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next day after school, Mary had a talk with Amy.
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Sadness or Amy filled her heart and Mary decided to make friends with Amy
【解答】
The next day after school, Mary had a talk with Amy. She apologized for being unkind these days. “I don’t know what has happened to you,” said Mary, “and I am really sorry for being such an unkind friend.” Hearing that, Amy couldn’t hold back her tears. “Thank you, Mary. That’s OK. To tell you the truth, my mother died of cancer two years ago and my father is always busy with his work.” It was at that time that Mary completely understood the situation Amy was living in. She gave Amy a hug.
Sadness for Amy filled her heart and Mary decided to make Friends with Amy. A school, Mary let Amy sit next to her and helped her with her schoolwork. Whatever she did, she was always careful not to hurt Amy’s feelings. As months passed, Mary discovered that she enjoyed talking and hanging out with Amy. She no longer saw her as the girl who smelled bad, but as a friend with a kind and warm heart. Not only did they establish a deep and lasting friendship, but they also made great progress in their studies.
VII.（2022年全国新高考1） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route (路线) through thick evergreen forest.
I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.
What was wrong He had worked so hard for this event!
I quickly searched the crowd for the school's coach and asked him what had happened. "I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him," he explained uncomfortably. "I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide."
I bit back my frustration (懊恼). I knew the coach meant well-he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer -that's all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the David faced and was school, I was familiar with the challenges the challenges proud of his strong determination.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.

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