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应用文写作
1.假如你是李华，你校为了增强学生体质，提升锻炼意识，将邀请歌手兼健身教练刘畊宏（Jay Chou）开展一次关于他非常受欢迎的健身操（fitness routines）《本草纲目》（A Herbalist’s Manual）的网络讲座，请你写封 电子邮件给美国的交换生Betty，内容包括：
1、邀请她参加讲座。2、告知讲座的时间及登录方式。3、讲座内容。
注意：1、写作词数在80词左右；2、可以适当增加细节使行文流畅。
Dear Betty,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.假如你是一所国际学校学生会干事李华。你校将对学生进行一次全员核酸检测。请你用英文草拟一则通知，通知全体学生参加核酸检测。
内容包括：1.检测时间；
2.检测地点；
3.注意事项。
注意：1.词数80词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
词汇：核酸检测nucleic acid testing
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3.假定你是李华,目前食品安全问题引起了人们的广泛关注。一些生产厂家为了降低成本、追求利润,减少了必要的安全措施,致使一些劣质食品流入市场,对人们的健康产生了极大的危害。请你就此事给一家英文报社写封信,谈谈个人看法并呼吁整个社会关注此事。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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4.假定你是学校剪纸俱乐部负责人李华，你校来自冰岛的交流生Biff对该俱乐部很感兴趣，想申请加入。他发了一个邮件向你咨询俱乐部的相关情况，请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 简介俱乐部常规安排；
2. 告知申请方式。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5.课外活动（extracurricular activities）是学校促进学生全面发展的重要组成部分。最近你们就学生参加各种课外活动的情况进行了一次调查。请根据下面要求写一个英语调查报告，在学校英语报上发表。
1. 调查结果；
2. 你的评论。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Survey Report on Extracurricular Activities
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6.假定你是学校英语杂志社记者, 上周你校开展了给贫困地区学生捐赠 “爱心包裹”的活动。请写一篇新闻报道。内容包括：
1. 活动时间与地点；2. 活动过程；3. 活动意义。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Loving Parcels for Students in Need
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答案以及解析
1.答案：
Dear Betty,
I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students' bodies and raising health awareness.【高分句型一】(邀请她参加讲座）
Scheduled at 9:30 a.m., the lecture is mainly about how to exercise and dance to upbeat songs and to show their moves.(告知讲座的时间）The fitness routines are set to A Herbalist's Manual from Jay Chou, a singer and fitness trainer.【高分句型二】Liu will teach how to keep fit and develop a good lifestyle as he did on TikTok.(讲座内容）
Looking forward to your participation!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国的交换生Betty写封电子邮件,邀请他参加歌手兼健身教练刘晰宏(Jay Chou)开展的一次关于他非常受欢迎的健身操( fitness routines)《本草纲目》(A Herbalist's Manual)的网络讲座。
[详解]
1.词汇积累
诚挚地: sincerely→genuinely
健身: fitness→bodybuilding
增强: strengthen →build up
保持健康: keep fit→keep healthy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to beheld next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students' bodies and raising health awareness.
拓展句: I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to beheld next Saturday whose aim is to strengthen students' bodies and raise health awareness.
[点睛]
[高分句型1]I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most- watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students' bodies and raising health awareness. (运用了动词不定式作后置定语)
[高分句型2] Liu will teach how to keep fit and develop a good lifestyle as he did on TikTok. (运用了as 引导的方式状语从句)
2.答案：
Dear students,
In order to ensure no case of covid-19 should appear on the campus, our school has decided to organize another nucleic acid testing for all the students. The testing will be carried out from 1 p.m. to 3 p.m. this Friday in the gymnasium. The students are required to go and line up according to a time schedule to be given to each class later. During the testing, everyone should wear a mask and keep a distance of one meter, waiting quietly in line.
Students Union
3.答案：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to talk about the problem of food safety nowadays. To reduce costs and make more profits, some food companies don’t take necessary safety measures to guarantee the food quality. As a result, more and more low-quality food flows into the market, doing great harm to consumers’ health.
In my opinion, food is essential to human beings. We could not live without safe food. If no notice is taken of food safety, the health of the whole nation will suffer. So I call on the whole society to take action and put an end to the low-quality food. Only in this way can we live a healthier life.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给一家英文报社写封信,谈谈个人看法并呼吁整个社会关注目前食品安全问题。
【详解】
第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:目前食品安全问题引起了人们的广泛关注。一些生产厂家为了降低成本、追求利润,减少了必要的安全措施,致使一些劣质食品流入市场,对人们的健康产生了极大的危害。请你就此事给一家英文报社写封信,谈谈个人看法并呼吁整个社会关注此事。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)talk about; reduce; make more profits; take necessary safety measures to; guarantee; low-quality food; flow into; do great harm to; essential; suffer; take action; put an end to; live a healthier life
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing to talk about the problem of food safety nowadays.
2. To reduce costs and make more profits, some food companies don’t take necessary safety measures to guarantee the food quality.
3. As a result, more and more low-quality food flows into the market, doing great harm to consumers’ health.
4. In my opinion, food is essential to human beings.
5. We could not live without safe food.
6. If no notice is taken of food safety, the health of the whole nation will suffer.
7. So I call on the whole society to take action and put an end to the low-quality food.
8. Only in this way can we live a healthier life.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句) (供参考)
4.表因果关系:So连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] To reduce costs and make more profits, some food companies don’t take necessary safety measures to guarantee the food quality. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] If no notice is taken of food safety, the health of the whole nation will suffer. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
4.答案：Dear Biff,
Knowing that you are keen on the school’s paper-cutting club and want to join it, I’m writing to offer you some detailed information.
The club regularly gathers its members on Thursday from 4:00 pm to 5:00 pm. Mr Zhang, who has acquired awesome skills from his Grandpa, is responsible for the teaching. At the end of each term, there will be an exhibition, where others can buy the club members’ art crafts. If possible, we might arrange a visit to a local paper cutting crafts men each term.
Please email your application at 6735286@ once you have decided.
Yours,
Li Hua
5.答案：
Survey Report on Extracurricular Activities
Recently a survey has been done to find out the extracurricular activities of senior middle school students. In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hunan Province were interviewed. They were asked what activities they liked doing most in their spare time.
The survey shows that more than half of the students like to watch TV or videos, and twenty-six percent of the students are most interested in electronic or computer games. However, the number of the students who enjoy doing sports doubles that of those who prefer reading indoors.
In my opinion, since the addiction to watching TV or videos or playing computer games is likely to do harm to children’s health, parents should be responsible for limiting the children’s time spent on passive leisure activities. In addition, more emphasis should be attached to activities that can encourage children to build up physical health.
6.答案：
Loving Parcels for Students in Need
In order to help the students in the poverty-stricken areas, a “Loving Parcels” donation activity was successfully held in our school hall last week.
All of the teachers and students took an active part in the activity. They donated their clothes, books and schoolbags to the students in need. In addition, they also wrote down the best wishes on cards, which would be collected and delivered to the schools in the poor areas.
Not only did the activity help us express our care for the students and send our sincere wishes to them but it also taught us that we should value what we have.

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