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人工智能
人工智能无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它给我们的生活带来了很大的影响。
【预测题目】
（一）
在首尔举行的“人机围棋大战”中，人工智能围棋程序AlphaGo以4比1战胜了韩国职业棋手李世石。上周三第一中学信息小组的同学们就“人工智能（artificial intelligence）将给未来生活带来怎样的影响”这个话题开展了讨论。请你根据以下信息，写一篇英语短文，描述一下讨论结果，并谈谈你的观点。
40%的同学认为
1. 有更多的人失去工作；
2. 未来的电脑会成为世界的主宰。
60%的同学认为
1. 虽然电脑越来越聪明，甚至能做一些人类不能完成的工作，但还是受人脑 (human brain) 控制；
2. 借助于人工智能，人们可以生活得更轻松，更快乐。
你的观点
…… (至少两点)
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 语气通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Not long ago, the computer programme AlphaGo won South Korean professional player Lee Sedol.
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【参考范文】
Not long ago, the computer programme AlphaGo won South Korean professional player Lee Sedol. Last Wednesday the classmates of the information team in No.1 Middle School had a heated discussion on what effect artificial intelligence would have on the future life. 40 percent of the students thought that more people would lose jobs.They believed that the future computers would take charge of the world.
However, 60 percent of the students disagreed. They thought although computers became more clever,even did some jobs that human beings couldn’t finish, they remained to be controlled by human brain. Besides,people would live a better and happier life with the help of the computers.
In my opinion, the computer will be more important in the future life.Because they will be designed and made by human, they still will serve the people.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍上周三第一中学信息小组的同学们就“人工智能（artificial intelligence）将给未来生活带来怎样的影响”这个话题开展了讨论。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时和一般将来时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： 40 percent of the students thought that...;They believed that...; they remained to...; the computer will be...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了上周三第一中学信息小组的同学们就“人工智能（artificial intelligence）将给未来生活带来怎样的影响”这个话题开展了讨论；接下来介绍两种不同的观点：一方认为未来的电脑会成为世界的主宰，另一方认为虽然电脑越来越聪明，甚至能做一些人类不能完成的工作，但还是受人脑 (human brain) 控制；最后表达自己的观点。此处未来电脑仍然重要，但是为人们服务。文中take charge of, remain to do,live a ...life, with the help with, in one’s opinion等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
（二）
请以 Artificial Intelligence 为题，写一篇短文，内容如下：
1. 人工智能被称为世界三大尖端技术之一；
2. 人工智能自1956年以来，已经取得很大进步，现在被广泛应用于各种领域；
3. 我对人工智能很感兴趣，我的梦想是在大学里学习研究人工智能，现在则必须先学好数学和计算机；
4. 有些人认为人工智能是危险的，未来可能会反抗人类；
5. 我认为……
注意事项：
1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 第5点须用2-3句展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数在90个左右，短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4. 参考词汇： 人工智能Artificial Intelligence (缩写AI)； 领域 field
尖端技术Advanced technology； 反抗 resist
Artificial Intelligence
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【参考范文】
Artificial Intelligence
Artificial Intelligence is called one of the three advanced technologies in the world. Since 1965, AI has made great progress. Now it is widely used in different kinds of fields. I am quite interested in AI. My dream is to study AI in the college. At present, I have to learn Maths and Computer well first. Some people think AI is very dangerous and may resist humans in the future. But I think AI is very useful in our lives. AI is cleverer and faster than humans’ brains. It can help us with many problems.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，以 Artificial Intelligence 为题，写一篇短文，介绍人工智能。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Artificial Intelligence is called……，Now it is widely used in……，I have to learn…….，But I think…….，It can help us with……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了人工智能的重要性以及发展过程，接下来介绍我对人工智能的认识和了解，最后我认为人工智能非常有用。此处make great progress, different kinds of, at present, in the future, help sb with sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
（一）
随着人工智能的快速发展，很多传统行业被取代。一些传统技艺在消失，同时导致很多人失业。上周你们班开了一次班会讨论是否要保护传统技艺。大家纷纷阐述了自己的观点。请你为学校公众号写一篇活动总结。文章需要包含以下内容：
时间 上周一早上
地点 班级教室
内容 是否保护传统技艺
各方观点 一些人认为不需要保护传统技艺 一些人认为需要保护传统技艺
原因 1.新事物取代旧事物是必然 2.……(至少补充一点) 1.传统技艺是文化的象征 2.……(至少补充一点)
你的观点 ……
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.文章不少于80词；
3.语气通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
With the development of Al, some traditional industries are gone.We had a discussion about_______________
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【参考范文】
With the development of AI, some traditional industries are gone. We had a discussion about whether we should protect the traditional skills in our classroom last Monday. Different people have different opinions.
Some classmates think we needn’t protect the traditional skills. It is certain that new skills will replace the old ones. Modern techniques make our life more convenient. While others think we should protect the traditional skills. They are symbols of the historic culture. They have long histories and many people are making a living by them now.
In my view, we should protect the typical traditional skills. Meanwhile, we should try our best to develop the science and technology as well.
【解析】
1.题干解读：这是一篇活动总结，随着人工智能的快速发展，很多传统行业被取代。一些传统技艺在消失，同时导致很多人失业。上周你们班开了一次班会讨论是否要保护传统技艺。大家纷纷阐述了自己的观点。内容需要根据表格的内容加以完善。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态综合运用一般现在时和一般过去时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，表达出自己的观点态度。语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：protect the traditional skills；different people ； different opinions.；make our life more convenient ；make a living by
句型：We had a discussion about whether we should protect the traditional skills in our classroom last Monday.；Different people have different opinions.； In my view, we should protect the typical traditional skills.
（二）
人工智能的迅速崛起无疑是新世纪以来最为重要的科技事件,而我们的生活也将因为人工智能的成熟应用迎来巨大改变，变得更为智慧与便利。
某英文网站正在开展以“人工智能与人类生活”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你与人工智能。主要内容包括：在生活中你使用哪些人工智能产品，你对人工智能的看法，以及你将如何跟上人工智能发展的时代。
提示词语: AI（人工智能）, a smart phone, helpful, convenient, study hard
提示问题：● What kind of AI do you use in your life
● What do you think of AI
● How will you keep up with the development of AI
We have come to the time when AI really affects our life. ________________________________________
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We have come to the time when AI really affects our life. I use my smart phone and ipad a lot. Usually I search information and practice English listening and speaking with their help. I think AI is really helpful and convenient. It helps us with our study and daily life. I will study hard and pay more attention to the development of AI. I’m sure AI will help us solve many problems.
【解析】
某英文网站正在开展以“人工智能与人类生活”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你与人工智能。主要内容包括：在生活中你使用哪些人工智能产品，你对人工智能的看法，以及你将如何跟上人工智能发展的时代。话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
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人工智能随着技术的发展，对人类的影响越来越多，你怎么看待？写篇不少于100字的文章.
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【参考范文】
Nowadays, artificial intelligence, which is becoming more and more familiar with us with the development of science and technology, is infiltrating into our daily life gradually, and it brings great convenience and progress to our society. Although we don't have a great knowledge about the specific content of artificial intelligence, we enjoy the convenience and benefit that artificial intelligence brings to us. We can say that artificial intelligence is changing the way of our living, learning, working and so on.
Artificial intelligence can be scripted as a new science and technology, which is used to simulate human intelligence. Namely, computers simulate the way of human's thinking and intelligent behavior, such as Learning,
Reasoning, Thinking, Planning, and so on. We can't deny the fact that artificial intelligence is of great application nowadays. For example, a lot of intelligent computer or household appliances come into our life, intelligent robots help us to finish some difficult work that we can't do by ourselves, and intelligent control has improved our working greatly. We can say that artificial intelligence exists everywhere.
As one of the three most cutting-edge technologies in twenty-first Century, artificial intelligence has a very bright prospect. However, The biggest obstacle of it is that it is a subject, which is related to computer science.
After all, people thought it was unique, there are feelings, there are a variety of character, this will be very difficult to achieve in the machine.In fact, to do the same as the human thinking machine, the only one of the artificial intelligence, is by no means all. Through the study of artificial intelligence, can resolve all kinds of scientific problems, and promote the development of other science, the artificial intelligence is the best!
I believe that the science of artificial intelligence is waiting for humanity to explore it step by step the real connotation.
计算机科学的未来趋势是人工智能的一种，它是人类思维的研究和仿真，最终能够使人喜欢思考，为人类服务，帮助人们解决问题。
毕竟，人们认为它是独特的，有感情，有各种各样的字符，这将是非常难以实现的机器，事实上，做同样的人的思维机器，唯一的人工智能，是没有任何手段。通过对人工智能的研究，可以解决各种科学问题，促进其他科学的发展，人工智能是最好的！
我相信人工智能的科学正在等待人类去探索它一步一步的真正内涵。
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人工智能成为当今的热门科技，谈谈你对人工智能的认识？写篇不少于80字的文章.
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Today, with the fast development of science and technology, the artificial intelligence has gone much further than people can imagine, such as the robot. Now the first robot is admitted to be a citizen, which scares so many people. Many scientists had predicted that someday robots would replace human being not only in physical work, but also in minds. How terrible it would be. It is said that scientists saw two robots discussing by creating a new language, then they decided to turn down the machine and made them stop working. They knew clearly the danger may happen in the future. Most people have thought about self-consciousness that robot may have some day, but scientists still have a lot of passion in searching the robots. They want to complete everything. But no one can make sure what they can bring for human being.
今天，随着科技的快速发展，人工智能比人们想象中走得更远，比如机器人。现在有了第一个成为公民的机器人，这让许多人感到恐慌。许多科学家预测，总有一天机器人将取代人类，不仅在体力劳动方面，还在思想上。这是多么可怕啊。据说科学家们看到了两个机器人通过创建新的语言在讨论，然后他们决定关掉机器，让它们停止工作。他们显然知道将来可能发生的危险。大多数人认为机器人将来可能会有自我意识，但科学家们仍然富含激情去探索机器人，完善所有的事情。但是没有人能确保他们可以为人类带来什么。
In my opinion, the computer will be more important in the future life.
Today, with the fast development of science and technology, the artificial intelligence has gone much further than people can imagine.
How terrible it would be.
But no one can make sure what they can bring for human being.
I believe that the science of artificial intelligence is waiting for humanity to explore it step by step the real connotation.
Computers are working faster than human brain.
If people don’t know how to control computers, they may be replaced by computers and lose their jobs.
Speed is amazing, the future we will start to work side-by-side with artificial intelligence.
But I think AI is very useful in our lives.
AI is cleverer and faster than humans’ brains. It can help us with many problems.
Nowadays, artificial intelligence, which is becoming more and more familiar with us with the development of science and technology, is infiltrating into our daily life gradually.
I believe that the science of artificial intelligence is waiting for humanity to explore it step by step the real connotation.
Future trends in computer science is one of the artificial intelligence.
It is the research and artificial simulation of human thought
They want to complete everything.
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（一）
如今人工智能影响着我们生活的方方面面，那么以人工智能影响生活为题的英语作文到底要怎么写呢
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Future trends in computer science is one of the artificial intelligence，It is the research and artificial simulation of human thought and eventually be able to make a human like to think the same machine.For human services and to help people solve problems.
After all, people thought it was unique, there are feelings, there are a variety of character, this will be very difficult to achieve in the machine.In fact, to do the same as the human thinking machine, the only one of the artificial intelligence, is by no means all. Through the study of artificial intelligence, can resolve all kinds of scientific problems, and promote the development of other science, the artificial intelligence is the best!
I believe that the science of artificial intelligence is waiting for humanity to explore it step by step the real connotation.
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人工智能能否代替电脑，谈谈你的看法，写篇文章。
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Can Computer replace Human Brain
　　Computers are working faster than human brain. But is it possible that some day the computer will replace human brain and control the human being
　　It is quite puters are designed and developed by human brain. They are used to speed up the calculation. Computers are working according to the orders designed by human being. The running of computer is a group of integrated circuit run by a set of programmes. Without programmes, the computers will not know what to do. It is true people are relying more and more on computers. If people don’t know how to control computers, they may be replaced by computers and lose their jobs.
电脑可以代替人脑
　　计算机是人类大脑的工作速度比。但有没有可能有一天计算机会取代人类的大脑和控制人类
　　这是很不可能的。计算机是人类大脑的设计和开发。它们被用来加快计算。计算机正在根据人类设计的订单。在计算机运行的一个小组，由集成电路一组程序运行。没有纲领，计算机将不知道该怎么办。 这是真正的人民都是靠越来越多的计算机上。如果人们不知道如何控制电脑，他们可能会被取代电脑而失去了工作。
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人工智能飞速发展，对生活产生什么样的影响，谈谈你的看法？
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The progress of artificial intelligence. Speed is amazing, the future we will start to work side-by-side with artificial intelligence.
　　AlphaGo fire, five one hundred million people watching "man-machine war", in the end it depends on the technical advantage of big data and deep learning in a 4-1 winners posture tell people, to artificial
　　intelligence is no longer just the scene in the movie, but in the real world there is another round of industrial revolution, however, this changes make many people feel scared, at that time all kinds of artificial intelligence threats to the human voice, according to the British science association entrusted network research firm YouGov, according to a survey of about 36% of people think that the rise of artificial intelligence technology will pose a threat to human long-term survival. People in all
　　kinds of artificial intelligence can bring big Bob "unemployment" is deeply concerned about the discourse, but also in such a tough AlphaGo will be malicious use worrying on such issues.
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人工智能已经深入生活，影响了生活，谈谈你的看法？
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Artificial intelligence approach, someone worries about
　　unemployment, some people in the future, someone in exploring business opportunities, also some people on the go. Before discussing these, maybe we should consider the outcome of human beings.
　　One might think about this topic too exaggeration,
　　The first recall what has happened in the history of mankind incredible things.
　　Incredible things, the need to please a few through to decide. We please 1 was born in the 0 people born in the year of the (han dynasty) through 1600 A.D. (Ming dynasty), although spans 1600 years, but the man may be on the lives of people around you won't feel too exaggerated, just changed a few dynasty, still facing the loess back and busy day. But if please 1 1600 British people through to 1850 in the UK, see the huge steel monsters on the water ran, this person may directly be frighten urine, this is never imagined that 250 years ago.
　　If again please 1 1850 through to 1980, I heard that a bomb can flatten a city, this person may be directly scared silly, 130 years ago the Nobel wasn't invented dynamite.
　　Then please 1 in 1980 people now This person will be cry 热点 手机
手机无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。
【预测题目】
（一）
随着社会的发展，人们的生活似乎离不开手机，但是手机占据人们的生活带来一个重要 的问题，人与人之间交流少了，亲情、友情应该如何维系？请谈谈你的建议。
要点所示
1. 在现代社会中，手机的发明改变着社会，手机起着重要的作。
2. 手机让人们的联系更加容易，让地球变小了。
3. 但过去人们常常交谈，而现在却是交流少了，玩手机的多了。
4. 有些学生用手机玩游戏，浪费许多时间，严重影响学习。
5. 你的建议。（至少两条）
可用词汇：
手机：cell phone 智能手机：smart phone
要求：
词数：80词左右。
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
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One possible version
With the development of IT information industry ,there has been a.dramatic rise in cell phone,which are now essential to millions of people. But everything has two sides.
On one hand,cell phones contribute a lot to daily life. firstly,cell phones enable people to easily and quickly communicate with one another whenever and wherever you are. Secondly, it is the multifunction of cell phones
that help us survive those boring moments.
On the other hand, the disadvantages can never be denied. The most disadvantages is the unknown effects on health in case of over-use. Furthermore, if people become too reliant on the use of cell phones, our face to face skills may decline.
From my perspective, any new invention has its drawbacks,but such negative aspects cannot always diminish its popularity. I strongly suggest that we use cell phones moderately and appropriately to make them more beneficial.
【解析】
试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙述清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
（二）
根据下面几点提示，写一篇不少于80字的文章。
1.手机发明于1973年
2.手机用于和别人交流（communicate with sb）
3.青少年们能不能使用手机，
4.使用手机的利与弊
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【参考范文】
The mobile phone was invented in 1973. Nowadays more and more people use mobile phones. It is very convenient for us to communicate with others. This is the advantage of the phone. On the other hand, the ringing sound affects others, meanwhile it does great harm to our health. So we should use mobile phones in proper way.
But should the middle school students take their mobile phones to school I think the answer is “no”. Because the mobile phones usually disturb the teachers and other students who like study. It may make the students being lazy, they may do bad in their study.
【解析】
这篇短文要求我们根据提示写出手机的优势和劣势，还要写出自己的观点关于中学生是不是应该往学校带手机。我们在写作时要注意：1. 注意时态，要用一般现在时。2. 要把提示内容全部写进去，避免生搬硬套。3. 要注意句式不要单一。
【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求写出了手机的优势和劣势以及作者的观点，观点准确，内容完整。2.本文句式不单一，有it做形式主语的句子：It is very convenient for us to communicate with others. 有定于从句：Because the mobile phones usually disturb the teachers and other students who like study.
（一）
现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。
提示：1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？
2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？
3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？
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【参考范文】
The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone. I usually use it to send text messages, play games, watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact, the smartphone makes my life colorful. However, every coin has two sides. Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.
So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
（二）
随着手机功能日增多,越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动,成为“手机控”一族。假定你某校学生,请根据以下提示写一篇短文,向某英文报投稿。谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。
“手机控”的表现 沉迷于手机娱乐活动(聊天、看电影等), 与朋友和家人的交流减少,离开手机会有焦虑症等异常情绪表现……
“手机控”的危害 对健康不利,影响学习……
你的建议 ……
参考词汇：a phone freak手机控 anxious (adj)焦虑 be addicted to…沉迷于
注意：1.内容须包括所提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.90个单词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
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【参考范文】
Today, many people especially young people are phone freaks. They are addicted to playing with mobile phones. They often use phones to chat with others, watch movies, play games, listen to music or take photos and so on. In fact, they will be anxious without phones.
However, it is harm to their study. Because they spend too much time playing with phones. They can’t have a good rest. It’s bad for their health. They don’t have time to do their homework, either. At last, they can’t get good grades.
In my opinion, we must use it in a right way. If we take it to school, we mustn’t use it during the class. And remember that study is our first work.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给的材料，文中一一描述“手机控”的表现，“手机控”的危害，及个人的建议。
2.例文点评：本文采用的是第三人称，采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，意思准确，句子通顺。
3.高分亮点：
短语：chat with sb 与某人聊天；spend+时间+doing sth 花费时间做某事；be bad for sth 对……有坏处。
句子：Because they spend too much time playing with phones句中because引导的是原因状语从句；If we take it to school, we mustn’t use it during the class句中if引导的是条件状语从句。
（三）
21世纪,许多发明改变了我们的生活,智能手机( smart phone)的出现以及对我们生活产生了巨大的影响,作为一名中学生,谈谈你对智能手机使用的看法。请你根据下面提示,写一篇短文。内容包括：
智能手机使用的现状
智能手机对生活的的影响;(包活优点和缺点）
呼吁大家合理使用智能手机
要求：
不得照抄原文:不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。
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【参考范文】
As we all know, smart phones are becoming more and more popular and they are playing an important role in our daily life. There is no doubt that we have benefited a lot from smart phones．We can read news，watch films，take photos，chat with friends，keep in touch with our relatives，or play games to get relaxed．
But every coin has two sides．Smart phones also have bad effects on people．They are very common for young people to lower down their heads to check on smart phones．They don't have face to face communication with others，which is not good．What's worse，more and more students are so addicted to playing games using their smart phones that their grades have gone down．
As for me， I think we should make good use of smart phones， which is just a tool， not the main part of our life．
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据内容提示写一篇短文，谈谈自己对智能手机恒用的看法。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
（四）
日常生活中随处可见人们用手机，许多初中生、高中生都在使用手机，手机的优点主要是方便通信，甚至上网，还体现在突发事件疾病、交通事故的求助上；手机的缺点主要是影响学习和干扰他人，因此建议尽量少用，特别是在学校里。
Advantages and Disadvantages of mobile Phones
手机的利弊
1．手机使用的普遍性；2．手机的优点；3．手机的危害及我的建议。
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【参考范文】
Advantages and Disadvantages of mobile Phones
Wherever you are, you can see many people equipped with mobile phones. It seems that the world becomes smaller nowadays. You could be found wherever you are so long as you take the mobile phone with you. Some people consider the mobile phone necessary and useful to them, while others may dislike it.
People who like the mobile phone are much more concerned about its advantages. It is convenient, for you can connect others easily and quickly. You don’ t have to wait for an important call at home all day long. The youth of today send messages, surf on the net, listen to music and even take photos by using the mobile phone. People find it advanced for its attractive functions. In some countries, it even stands for a person’ s status.
However, some people don’ t like it. Imagine that you go to spend your holiday with your family after days of busy and tiresome work. When you lay on the beach comfortably, your phone rings. Then you have to go back to your office only to find an unimportant customer waiting for you. At that moment, you may even want to throw your phone away, for you just want to relax and get rid of your work.
【解析】
试题分析：题中给出了写作的要点信息，在作文中要尽力体现出这些要点。注意文章结构的严谨和逻辑性。文中可使用一些承接性的句子和短语来加强文章的流畅性。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，文章思路清晰，自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。
They are so useful and interesting that many students are addicted to them.
If students are forced to stop using them, they may become rebellious and secretly use them more.
3. Although smart phones may have a bad influence on students, I don't think parents should stop their children from using them.
4. It is very convenient for us to communicate with others.
5. 1.In the end it’s not the years in your life that count It’s the life in your years
6.In love folly is always sweet
7.I was so much older then，I'm younger than that now
8.Every careless and inattentive person has his past being careful and attentive for someone
9.When you don't have enough money to fix your own mistakes you've make your own magic
10.Apologizing does not always mean you are wrong & the other person is right It just means you value your relationship more than your ego
11.Coffee is lonely without cups just as I am lonely without you
12.Whatever is worth doing is worth doing well
13.To live in a world without you is more painful than any punishment Do you know that no one can replace you in my heart
14.Love is not a maybe thing You know when you love someone
15.The invader saw the shadow of the lampshade fade away
16.The heart of woman is a glass holding water It is full but seems to have nothing inside
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（一）
手机在生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色，许多中学生沉迷于手机无法自拔，比如你的好友Miller.请根据以下提示点写一篇短文：
1.去年，Miller对手机游戏非常入迷，而且花大量时间用手机聊天看电影；
2. Miller与家人和朋友交流甚少，离开手机会很焦虑；
3.昨天还因为走路看手机被自行车撞了，膝盖受伤；
4.你的建议……
参考词汇：mobile games手机游戏anxious焦虑be crazy about对……入迷要求：
1字数80-100个2开头已经给出不计入总词数3要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥
Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was
【参考范文】
Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.
In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；再紧扣要点，动笔写作，可适当发挥。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
（二）
现如今，手机成为了人们生活中不可或缺的一部分。中学生在学校使用手机已经非常普遍。手机给学生的生活带来方便的同时，也给他们带来了很多问题。他们把大量的时间花在玩手机上，不仅影响了学习，而且视力急剧下降。有一位家长建议学校禁止学生使用智能手机，你是否同意其违议，请列出至少三条理由。要求包括以下内容要点：
1.学生使用手机现象。
2.你是否支持学校禁止使用智能机，列出理由。
3.呼吁大家合理使用智能机。
要求：80词左右。
参考词汇：smart phone智能手机；be addicted to上瘾；rebellious逆反的
Should students be allowed to use smart phones
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【参考范文】
Should students be allowed to use smart phones
Now smart phones are so common among middle school students. They are so useful and interesting that many students are addicted to them.
Although smart phones may have a bad influence on students, I don't think parents should stop their children from using them. If students are forced to stop using them, they may become rebellious and secretly use them more.
Instead, parents can find some wiser ways to help their children use smart phones properly. For example, students can use smart phones to share learning experience with their classmates.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以建议学校禁止学生使用智能手机，你是否同意其违议，请列出至少三条理由。要求包括以下内容要点：1.学生使用手机现象。2.你是否支持学校禁止使用智能机，列出理由。3.呼吁大家合理使用智能机。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：文章在陈述客观事实时用一般现在时。人称主要为第一和第三人称。本文紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：so useful and interesting；have a bad influence；stop …from doing sth.；share learning experience with等。
句型：1. They are so useful and interesting that many students are addicted to them.2. If students are forced to stop using them, they may become rebellious and secretly use them more.3. Although smart phones may have a bad influence on students, I don't think parents should stop their children from using them.
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容符合题目要求，并且内容充实、完整，表达清楚、明了。作者从三个方面讲述了自己的看法，这几个方面都非常符合实际，所提建议很合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态、第一人称为主，语法规范、准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型。
（三）
随着科技的发展，手机的功能越来越多，使我们的生活越来越方便，但也带来不少的问题。请以“The Mobile Phone”为题，谈谈你对手机的看法。字数80以上。
内容包括：1、我们在手机上可以做什么？
2、不当使用手机会带来什么问题？
3、你的建议。
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【参考范文】
The mobile phone
The mobile phone is becoming an important part our lives. It makes our lives more interesting. We can use mobile phone to make a call. Besides making a call, we can also use it to find information, watch movie, take photos. chat with other people face to face and so on.
However, the mobile phone is not perfect. Using mobile phones also cause some problems. Many students spend much time playing games on the phone. It is bad for their study.
It is very useful, but I think we shouldn’t carry phones during school hours. we should learn to use mobile phones at the right time .
【解析】
这是一篇要求谈谈你对手机的看法的文章。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
（四）
“世界上最遥远的距离莫过于我们坐在一起，你却在玩手机”，这是网上流传很广的一句话，当这句话成为现实时，多少会有一些悲凉。近日，青岛市民张先生去爷爷家吃晚饭，饭桌上老人多次想和孙子孙女说说话，但孩子们却个个抱着手机玩，气得老人扔下一句“你们就和手机过吧”，摔盘子离席而去。这与其说是一种不经意的习惯，不如说是对亲情的冷漠,。如今越来越多的人成为了手机控，请你仔细观察以下图片，描述一下图中展现的现象，并且表达自己的观点，如何解决这样的问题。
注意：100词左右。可能用到的生词 a Phone Freak（手机控） mini blog(微博) WeChat(微信) Qzone（QQ空间）
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【参考范文】
From the cartoon given above, we can see young people all play with mobile phones.The grand parents have no chance to talk to them,which makes grandparents very angry.
Nowadays，we can see people surfing the mini blog,talking on WeChat with mobile phones everywhere.Especially young people,we call these people “Phone Freak”.We are busy playing with mobile phones,but have no time to talk with our parents.This makes our family emotion become cold.
Mobile phones bring us convinience,however,we shouldn’t treat them as the entertainment tools.We should stay with our parents and grandparents as soon as we are free.Besides,mobile phones are bad for our health.The radiation comes from the mobile phones is quite harmful.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇图画作文，我们需要将图画内容表述出来并阐述自己对这一现象的看法。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如:busy doing sth；treat…as；as soon as等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.热点 微信
微信无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。
【预测题目】
（一）
微信在我们的生活中越来越普及，不管是年轻人还是老年人都喜欢使用微信，请你谈论一下微信给我们生活带来了什么样的改变，它有什么样的优缺点？
Wechat in our life
要点：1、微信已成为我们生活中的一部分。无论是年轻人还是老年人都在使用微信。
2、微信有什么好处呢？例如：快速发送信息；可以立刻和朋友分享音乐、照片、视频等；可以直接发送语音信息；可以当成地图使用；可以快速付款等等。
3、但是无论年轻人还是老年人，使用微信太久，对眼睛有害；微信占据了人们大量地时间，人们很少进行户外运动或者和家人一起运动游玩，对身体无益。
4、正确使用微信，让它使我们的生活更美好。
参考词汇：voice message(语音信息) take up（占据）
要求：包含要点，适当加入自己的观点。
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【参考范文】
Wechat gradually comes into our life and Whether the young or the old, we use WeChat.Wechat is a mobile phone software of chatting , which can through the Internet send voice messages, video, images and text,We can make new friends from the wechat. We can communicate with our friends, which can help us get short messages, pictures and so on .We can use it as a map and help us pay the bill.Every coin has two sides, Wechat has brought us both convenience and troubles. We may often lose ourselves in the wechat, and controlled by wechat in some degree, So we seldom have time to exercise with our family.It is bad for our eyes if we use it for a long time.There are countless people walk or drive with head down, then leaded to a disaster. We should use it correctly in order to make our life better.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈论一下微信给我们生活带来了什么样的改变，它有什么样的优缺点？结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：WeChat.Wechat is……，We can……，Wechat has……，It is bad for……，There are……，We should……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，接下来介绍微信的优点和缺点，最后指出我们应正确使用微信，让它使我们的生活更美好。此处make friends, communicate with, help sb do sth, and so on, in some degree, be bad for, lead to, in order to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
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根据要求完成下列短文写作。词数：60—80词左右
科技的进步让我们的生活发生了巨大变化，人与人之间的交流方式也日新月异。现在有很多同学的日常生活离不开微信（Wechat），请结合自己的感受谈谈微信的好处和害处。
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【参考范文】
In recent years, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Many people express themselves, exchange ideas and deliver information by Wechat. There are a number of reasons for Wechat to be known. To begin with, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. Next, Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. Furthermore, convenience also accounts for its popularity. It is available everywhere and at any time.
【解析】
这篇作文主要写科技的进步让我们的生活发生了巨大变化，人与人之间的交流方式也日新月异。现在有很多同学的日常生活离不开微信（Wechat），请结合自己的感受谈谈微信的好处和害处。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
（一）
微信已经成为我们生活的沟通交流的平台之一。相信很多同学也在微信上加了很多朋友，你和这些朋友交流的情况怎么样？请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
1. 你有多少个微信朋友呢？平时有经常交流的又有多少？都是谁？
2. 你在微信上和朋友通常都聊些什么？
3. 你认为什么才是真正的朋友？
作文要求：
1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。
It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.
【参考范文】
It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends. As for me, I have nearly 200 WeChat friends. The number of persons I often talk with is less than 20. Most of them are my classmates and families.
I like to look through my friends’ WeChat Moments to know more about them. Sometimes I give comments or likes to their posts. We even set up a certain chatting group to talk about things happening around us and share some interesting things in life. Besides, we also talk about studies.
As a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. I think true friends may not talk with you on WeChat most. However, when you need them, they will be there.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，写作时要按议论文的格式写。在写作时开头介绍用微信和朋友交流很容易；第二段介绍我们在微信上和朋友交流的内容；第三段介绍真正的朋友是什么样的。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人称来介绍用微信和朋友交流；时态采用一般现在时，介绍朋友用微信交流的内容，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用连词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：less than，like to，look through，set up，in need，talk with。
句型：句型It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.定语从句As a saying goes, 宾语从句true friends may not talk with you on WeChat most。
（二）
请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。
（1）上周晚饭后玲玲和妈妈一起出去散步，在社区的门口看见一个钱包；
（2）玲玲把钱包捡起，发现钱包里有身份证和一些钱；
（3）玲玲和妈妈把钱包交给保安，保安把这个消息发到小区的微信群中；
（4）失主看到消息后，过来取回钱包并对玲玲和妈妈表示感谢；
（5）你觉得……
参考词汇：社区 community 身份证 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group
失主 owner
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The Story of Lingling
Last week____________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
The Story of Lingling
Last Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the community. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the community. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good deed.We should learn from her.
【解析】
本文是一篇给材料作文。根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（三）
最近，你们班级新建了一个“英语学习”的微信群。请你根据下面的内容提示，为校园广播站写一篇广播稿，介绍这个微信群，并欢迎同学们积极参与。
注意：1. 词数不少于100字；
2. 请勿提及学校和个人真实信息；
3. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
4. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：give a like 点赞； sharing friends 分享朋友圈；forward 转发
Dear fellow students,
Good news for you! A WeChat group called “Learning English”_____________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you.
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear fellow students,
Good news for you! A WeChat group called “Learning English” will be opened in our school. It aims to help us students to communicate better and improve our English level.
We can do a lot of things in this group. First of all, we can share efficient learning experience here to promote our English study. Secondly, if you have any questions or problems, you are welcome to post it here. And possibly, you will find proper solutions to them with the help of our schoolmates. In addition, attracted by interesting topics, we are free to take part in the weekly discussion.
How to join it Please open your WeChat and follow the public “Learn English”. And every one of us is encouraged to join it.
I am sure the group will be of great help to our English study.
That’s all. Thank you!
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇材料作文，根据图表提示的信息向同学介绍新建的“英语学习”微信群。作文要从以下几个方面去完成，建立这个群的目的，在群内可以参与哪些活动，入群的方法，可适当加入细节，以使内容充实。注意把提示的要点写全面，注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。
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最近，老师经常把同学们的作业完成情况、考试成绩等反馈在家长微信群，同学们就此事展开了讨论。请你根据下面表格中的提示选择一个观点，写一篇短文，向校英语报投稿，阐述你的观点。
赞成 反对
◎同学间可互相了解； ◎家长及时知道学习情况； ◎可及时改变学习方法。 ◎不尊重学生； ◎不利于师生关系； ◎受家长更多的惩罚。
要求：（1）短文要求包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
短文要求简洁，正确流畅；
（3）词数：80—100，短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：微信群WeChat group；尊重respect
短文首句：My classmates have had a heated discussion about that the teachers always share their homework and marks in WeChat group.
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【参考范文】
My classmates have had a heated discussion about that the teachers always share their homework and marks in WeChat group. I think it’s necessary. First of all, we can know more about our classmates by comparing with each other. Besides, our parents may know how we study at school. If we don’t behave well, they can communicate with us in time. Last but not least, if we can’t get good grades, I think we’d better make an effort to change the way we study. It’s helpful. All in all, it’s convenient for our teachers to do so, and it’s an effective way for our parents to know more about us.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应注意要承接开头，然后提出自己的观点。作者持赞成的观点。短文包括提示的三个内容：第一部分同学间可互相了解；第二部分家长及时知道学习情况；第三部分可及时改变学习方法。
2. 例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称讨论内容；时态采用一般现在时，观点明确，条例清晰。
3. 高分亮点；短语：in WeChat group；First of all；know…about..；each other；besides；all in all；communicate with；get good grades。句型：It’s+adj.+for sb to do sth.
It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.
I will share wish you about my unhappy experience between my friends and me.
If we don’t behave well, they can communicate with us in time.
All in all, it’s convenient for our teachers to do so, and it’s an effective way for our parents to know more about us.
First of all, we can know more about our classmates by comparing with each other.
I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school.
Besides, you can also play sports with your classmates.
I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat.
You say you miss your parents very much.
I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.
I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school.
You say you miss your parents very much.
I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.
I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat.
Sometimes parents are worried about their children’s friendship and studies.
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（一）
李文的父母都去外地打工了，把李文送去了寄宿学校。但是到了寄宿学校之后，李文面临着很多挑战。假如你是王明，请根据下列提示，给李文写一封信，提出合理的建议，帮他迅速适应新的生活。
挑战 建议
没有朋友，感觉孤单 积极参加社团，会交到新朋友
作业比以前多 抓紧时间写作业，不会的向老师、同学求助
想念父母 周末用微信和父母聊天，和同学一起做运动
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【参考范文】
Dear Li Wen，
I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school. Since you always feel lonely without friends，you'd better join a club to make more friends. You are good at playing basketball，so it's a good choice to join the basketball club. Maybe you used to have a little homework，but now you have more time to do homework at school. And if you have any problems, you can ask your teachers and classmates for help. You say you miss your parents very much. I strongly believe it. Why not chat with your parents on WeChat on weekends Besides, you can also play sports with your classmates.
I hope you can get used to the new life in your boarding school.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【解析】
题干解读：本文属于材料作文，要求学生以王明的身份给李文写一封信，注意要用信件的格式。信的内容包括到寄宿学校后，李文会面临的三个挑战以及相应的建议。
例文点评：例文主要以第二人称进行描述，符合信件的形式，显得真实关切；时态采用一般现在时为主。例文严格按照信件格式，开头结尾也有适当的问候语等；内容方面把材料要求的几点挑战与建议都写清楚了，行文层次分明、逻辑严密、内容丰富。
高分亮点：短语：meet challenges in；had better do；be good at；used to do；ask sb. for help；get used to。
句型：that引导的宾语从句；since引导的原因状语从句；it’s + n. + to do sth.；if引导的条件状语从句；why not do sth。
（二）
再过几天，中国最重要的节日——春节就要到了，请以“My small targets of this Spring Festival” 为题，根据表中所给中文提示写一篇 100 词左右介绍你这个春节小目标。
春节前 1.帮助父母做事，包括大扫除、贴春联、做馒头、包饺子； 2.准备好新衣服和小礼物； 3.在除夕夜，与家人吃一顿丰盛的晚餐后，观看春节联欢晚会，等待新年的到来；
春节后 1.通过微信，与亲戚、朋友互发祝福话语、红包； 2. ……（新的一年学习目标） 3.……（新的一年生活目标）
要求：要点全面，补充得当，行文流畅；开头已经给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
词汇：贴春联 put up couplets； 亲戚 relatives； 祝福话语 blessings； 微信 Wechat。
My small targets of this Spring Festival
The new Spring Festival is coming in a few days. Now I am setting some small targets of the coming new year.
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【参考范文】
My small targets of this Spring Festival
The new Spring Festival is coming in a few days. Now I am setting some small targets of the coming new year. Before the Spring Festival, I plan to do three things. The first, I will help my parents do things, including cleaning, pasting Spring Festival couplets, making steamed bread and making dumplings. The second, I will prepare new clothes and small gifts. The third, on New Year's Eve, after having a big dinner with my family, I am going to watch the Spring Festival Gala and wait for the arrival of the New Year. On the day of Spring Festival, I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat. After the Spring Festival,I will study hard to achieve good results. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.
【解析】
这是一篇材料作文。以“My small targets of this Spring Festival”为题，根据表中所给中文提示写一篇 100 词左右介绍你这个春节小目标。本文主要书写新年打算，可知主要时态是一般将来时。认真阅读表格内容，审清主题，根据表格提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系，字数要在100词以上。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我今年春节的小目标
几天后就要过春节了。现在我正在为即将到来的新年设定一些小目标。春节前，我计划做三件事。首先，我会帮助我的父母做一些事情，包括打扫，贴春联，做馒头，做饺子。第二，我会准备新衣服和小礼物。第三，在除夕夜，我和家人吃了一顿大餐后，要去看春节联欢晚会，等待新年的到来。春节那天，我会通过微信给亲朋好友发祝福词和红包。春节过后，我会努力学习，取得好成绩。我要自己去上学，不要让父母来接我。
【点睛】
这篇文章包含了表格中所有的内容，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范，时态运用正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
（三）
我们经常使用微信（WeChat）与同学和朋友交流，这里面可能涉及到个人隐私，假如你的父母想看你的聊天记录，你会同意吗？ 学校英语报正在就此话题进行讨论，请你整理以下讨论结果，并发表自己的看法。
理由
同学观点 1.每个人都有自己的隐私，微信是我们与朋友一起分享心事，倾述烦恼的理想(ideal)场所，不希望父母看到。 2.父母会过度担心我们的交友，学习等。
你的观点 … …
注意：
1.词数：80左右
2.包含以上各点，意思连贯、符合逻辑。
Talking on mobile WeChat has become more and more popular now. But will you share everything on your WeChat with your parents _______________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Talking on mobile WeChat has become more and more popular now. But will you share everything on your WeChat with your parents
With WeChat, we can communicate with friends by sending text messages, voice messages, we can share our photos or videos, share our location, we can even chat with lots of friends at the same time. More important, it is free for the users. Some think that everyone has their own privacy. WeChat is the ideal place for us to share our thoughts with friends, and we don't want our parents to see it. Sometimes parents are worried about their children’s friendship and studies.
In my opinion, we may share our ideas with our parents. They can help us solve problems.
【解析】
这里是一篇关于微信的，可不可以让家长来看，在短文中写出同学们的观点和自己的问题。不要遗漏要点，所写的句子要符合英语语法，要使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，短语用了一些短语和句式，用了that引导的宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。
【点睛】
1.仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，使文章行文连贯。
2.列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。
此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。
3.检查核实，确保无误。
（四）
假如你是Li Na，在一个名为“Growing Pains（成长的烦恼）”的微信群里，看到以下内容。请根据问题及写作要求，回复微信。讲述发生在你和朋友之间的一件不愉快的经历。针对这些烦恼，你又有什么建议的？
要求：60词左右，开头己给出：
Hello! I am Frank. I got a fight with my best friend last week. I felt very upset. Do you have the same experience Can you give us some advice If we talk to others, we' ll surely feel better.
Hello! I am Li Na. _________________________________________________
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Hello! I am Li Na. I will share wish you about my unhappy experience between my friends and me. Never can I forgot the time when I prepared for my final exam. During those days, I had endless homework so that I couldn’t finish it. In order to deal with the problem, I decided to copy my friend’s homework. But to my surprise, she refused me and gave me no reason. I felt very angry with her. After that, I felt very sorry for that and tried my best to improve our relationship.
In my view, it is best not to run away from the problems. If you are brave enough, you are halfway to being successful. You had better talk with your friends or ask your parents for help. When you share problems with your friends, you should find a chance to communicate with them.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文，主要围绕“Growing Pains（成长的烦恼）”展开讨论，直接分享自己的亲身经历，描述自己的成长的烦恼，以及自己在烦恼过程中所采取的方法，然后把这个方法或者建议和好朋友一起分享，让朋友也能从中得到一些建议。
2. 例文点评：文章采取两段式，直接开篇直入主题，讲述自己与朋友之间发生的不愉快，第二段给出自己的建议，供朋友参考。文章结构完整，语句衔接较自然，语言表达准确。
3. 高分亮点：短语：prepare for；deal with；feel sorry for；try one’s best to do sth；in one’s view；run away from。热点 网购
网购无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。
【预测题目】
（一）
你喜欢网上购物吗？你对“网购”这一现象有何看法？请写一篇短文，从购物的时效性、安全性、商品的品种、质量、价格等方面说说“网购”相对于传统购物方式的优势与劣势。
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【参考范文】
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.
However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是网上购物的优缺点。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
考点：命题作文的写作
点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。
（二）
“双11”电商销售旺季即将到来，伴随现如今已然成为时尚的“网购”热潮，越来起多的学生也进入到网购的群体当中，校学生会就网购这一热点问题作了问卷调查，观点如下:
优点
足不出户；节约时间，避免拥挤，劳累
价格通常更便宜
可供选择的范围广，品种多
缺点
只看到图片，看不到商品本身
容易购买大量不大需要的东西，造成浪费
注意：
词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称及其他相关信息
参考词汇：
网购 shopping online 避免做某事 avoid doing sth. 商品 goods
With the development of the Internet, many students are used to shopping online.
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【参考范文】
With the development of the Internet, many students are used to shopping online. shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.
However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】
这篇短文使用了大量的复合句为文章增色不少.如: People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.人们不必浪费了很多的精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个选择他们喜欢的商品。Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.有时候，真正的货物可能与他们在计算机上看到的不一样。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
（一）
假如你们班将在本周举行一次关于网络购物利弊的辩论赛。请你根据以下提示信息写一篇90词左右的短文谈谈你对网购的看法。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
好处 网购能帮助我们节省时间，我们只要把我们的信息发送给卖方（seller）, 不久他们就会把东西送到我们的家，网购能帮助使我们的生活更加轻松。
害处 有些卖家会通过欺骗我们来获取钱财，另外长时间上网购物对眼睛有害.
建议 小心、安全地使用网络来购物
Now it is popular for young people to do shopping on the Internet. It can help ___________________
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【参考范文】
Now it is popular for young people to do shopping on the Internet. It can help make our life easier. If we want to buy something from the Internet, we can send our information to the seller and then the seller will send the things to us soon. It can help us save much time.
However, the Internet is not perfect because it may sometimes do harm to us. Some sellers may get money by cheating us. And it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time doing shopping on the Internet. The Internet can change our lives for the better, but we had better use it carefully and safely.
【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如do shopping，on the Internet，help make our life easier，want to do，send to help us save much time，do harm to，be bad for，spend much time doing shopping，the sea of clouds，a nice place to visit等。而If we want to buy something from the Internet, we can send our information to the seller and then the seller will send the things to us soon. / And it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time doing shopping on the Internet.等复杂条件状语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
（二）
假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根据以下信息, 给Angel写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好处。
写作要点：
1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。
2介绍活动的情况：
（l）上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。
（2）本周五的下午3点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。
（3）同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。
3说一说网上购书有什么好处。
写作要求：
1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4至少80词。
Dear Angel,
How are you doing
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Best wishes!
Yours,
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Dear Angel,
How are you doing I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。
Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .
Best wishes!
Yours,
Cathy
【解析】
本文属于材料作文，向外教介绍俱乐部中读书交流会的活动，并且告诉外教同学们现在喜欢网购图书并阐述网购图书的好处。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引导非限制性定语从句。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（三）
现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已成为流行趋势，二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。
1.方便，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。
2.有很大的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。价格较便宜。
3.买货容易退货难；实物和图片有差距。
4.网络支付不安全。
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【参考范文】
Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.
It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.
Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet.
We should be careful when we shop on the internet.
【解析】
写作分析：本文需要写一篇小议论文，主题是网上购物，需要讨论到网上购物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章结构清晰，可以先总起陈述，然后用一段来描述优点，再用一段描述劣势和不足，最后一段收尾，这样的作文就会条理清晰，结构合理。具体来说，每个观点在陈述的时候要注意表达准确。
写作亮点：
首段总起介绍，挑明这篇作文的主题Internet Shopping。第二段开始描述优势，这里用到了“无论什么时候你喜欢/想要”（whenever you like）结构，在表达“...是开放的”也很准确，用了“be open”。比较级的应用也相对准确，例如cheaper。连词的使用也是亮点，besides意为“除此之外”。在谈到劣势的时候引用了俗语“Every coin has two sides.”，是个亮点。“What’s more”也被合理使用到了，意为“此外”，避免与besides重复，体现了文章语言的多样性。总体来说要点均被提及，语言准确富有活力。
（四）
随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。
注意：1. 所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
3. 词数：80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词汇：
网购:shopping on line, 避免做某事:avoid doing sth,
商品:goods, 导致:cause
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. ______________________
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With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping on line.
【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如With the development of the Internet，be used to doing，on line，in our daily life，join the group，avoid doing，be interested in，Every coin has two sides，on one hand，on the Internet，on the other hand，all in all等。而With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line./ Shopping on line has many advantages. / On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.等多种非谓语动词结构和综合句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.
On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.
Shopping on line has many advantages.
Every coin has two sides.
That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping on line.
we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room
As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore.
And it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time doing shopping on the Internet.
the Internet is not perfect because it may sometimes do harm to us.
People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.
Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life.
The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered.
The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered.
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The topic of
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（主题）
is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it.
Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view
for the reason of
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（支持
A
的理由一）
What is more,
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理由二
). Moreover,
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理由三
).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(
支持
B
的理由一
). Secondly (besides),
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（理由二）
. Thirdly (finally),
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理由三
).
From my point of view, I think
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（我的观点）
. The reason is that
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原因
). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is s
urely a wise choice .
)
（一）
2014年双十一（11月11日）天猫交易额突破571亿，远超去年同期水平。12月12日，由于阿里巴巴股价上涨，马云超过李嘉诚成为亚洲首富。由此引发人们开始搜索自己的支付宝账单，追忆自己的网购历史, 再次掀起了关于“网购”的话题。
网购有利也有弊，请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇关于“网购”的文章。
优点
（至少两项）
节约时间；
…
缺点
（至少两项）
只看到图片，看不到商品本身
…
你的观点
…
注意
词数80词左右，书写工整，卷面整齐
表格信息补充完整，注意文章结构，适当运用连词
文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词汇： 网购shopping online； 商品 goods；
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.________________________
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【参考范文】
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out of the room. It seems easy and quick. But there's always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online. Onceyou put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.
（二）
现如今双十一，双十二成为人们网上购物的狂欢节，你喜欢网购么，请结合自己的经历，谈谈你对网购的看法和态度。(shopping on line)
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【参考范文】
The View of Shopping on Line
Nowadays, with the rapid development and increasing popularity of the information technology, shopping on line has been a fashion, especially among the youngsters.
In my opinion, online shopping is a double-edged sword.
On the one hand, shopping on line has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable.
For example, shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.
On the other hand, it also has disadvantages. Firstly, online shopping goods will be different from the photos, sometimes mixed with poor quality goods. Secondly, sometimes the arrival of the goods will be slow.
All in all, more and more people will be accustomed to it. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect.
（三）
近年来，科技的进步正在逐步影响着人们的日常生活。2017年5月，来'自一带一 路”沿线的20国青年评选出了中国的“新四大发明”:高铁、支付宝、共享单车和网购。 假如你是李华，你的朋友Lisa是英国的一名初中生，她对我们的“新四大发明”很感 兴趣。请你给她写一封电子邮件，具体内容如下：1.介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况并谈谈你的看法和评价 2.邀请她下个月参加你校科技节，将展出学生制作的各类材质的小模型。
注意:1.词数80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数 2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。
参考词汇:共享单车:shared bikes
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”____________________________
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Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about them.They are high-speed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online shopping.We travel by high-speed railways.They are very quick.We use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared bicycles.We use our mobile phone to unlock the shared bicycle.It is convenient and cheap.There is no pollution and oil cost.We can also keep healthy when we ride it.There will be the Science Festival in our school.It will show all kinds of models that students make.I hope you will come to visit them.
Yours
Li Hua
（四）
现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购（Internet Shopping）已成为流行趋势，而网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的热点，请以“Internet Shopping”为题，参考下面的信息，并结合自己的观点写一篇英语短文，可适当发挥。词数90左右，短文已给出部分不计入总数。
Advantages
Disadvantages
1. 方便(convenient)，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。
2. 有很大的商品信息
3. 可以买到当地没有的商品。
4. 价格便宜。
1. 买货容易，退货难。
2. 实物（material object）和图片有差距。
3. 网络支付不安全。
注意：1. 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计总词数；
3. 文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名；
Internet Shopping
Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.
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【参考范文】
One possible version:
Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shop are open 24 hours a day. It is often to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.
But “Every coin has two sides. ” So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. So we should be careful when we shop on the internet.热点 校园欺凌
校园欺凌无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了负面影响。
【预测题目】
（一）
近日，“校园欺凌”（bullying in school）已经成为社会热点话题，阅读完上面的帖子后你有何感想？请你根据下面的写作要求，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1.“校园欺凌”对我们有什么危害？
2.碰到此类事件，我们应该怎样做？ 请提出两点建议。
3.人人有责保持校园安全，并呼吁同学们抵制“校园欺凌”。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，不必抄写在答题卡上。
Good afternoon, everyone .
Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school._____________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you
【参考范文】
Good afternoon, everyone .
Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school. In my opinion, bullying can make us feel unsafe and unhappy. It makes us hard to learn at school and get on well with others. No one has the right to hurt us. If someone bullies us or we see bullying happening, we shouldn’t be afraid to stop it .First, we should trust ourselves and tell them it’s not right to do like that. Second, we can ask teachers and parents for help.
It’s everyone’s duty to make schools safe. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying.
That’s all. Thank you.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你对“校园欺凌”的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Today I am going to……，It makes us hard to……，If someone bullies us……，It’s everyone’s duty to……，I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我演讲稿的目的是谈论“校园欺凌”，接下来介绍“校园欺凌”的危害以及如何面对这个问题，最后呼吁同学们抵制“校园欺凌”。此处talk about, in one’s opinion, make sb do sth, get on well with sb, be afraid to do sth, ask sb for help, be friendly to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
（二）
请结合下面两幅图片所示内容，以＂How do you behave at school ＂为题写一篇短文。
要点：
1）请简要描述两幅图片；
2）如果你受到欺负时，你该如何应对(至少 2 点）；
3) 针对这些校园欺凌现象，谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少 2 点）。
注意：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和学校名称；
3）100 词左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数。
（1） （2）
参考词汇：beat, kick, respect, harmonious(和谐的), stop bullying (欺凌)
How do you behave at school
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One,__________________________________
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【参考范文】
How do you behave at school
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One, we can see a group of students holding sticks. They are beating and kicking other students. In Picture Two, an elder and stronger student is asking for money from others. This is called school bullying.
If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. In this way, I can keep myself safe. Safety is always the first. Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me. I won’t keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.
As a student, I think we should respect each other. If we have different ideas, we’d better discuss instead of fighting. Besides, we should help those classmates who are in trouble. Let’s stop bullying and build a harmonious school.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，请结合下面两幅图片所示内容，以＂How do you behave at school ＂为题写一篇短文。要点：1）请简要描述两幅图片；2）如果你受到欺负时，你该如何应对(至少 2 点）；3) 针对这些校园欺凌现象，谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少 2 点）。2.例文点评：例文采用第一人称，时态采用一般将来时为主；本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语： a group of students；asking for；protect myself；keep myself safe；so tha；instead of fighting；instead of fighting。
句型：宾语从句If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. I think we should respect each other.目的状语此句Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me.原因状语从句I won’t keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.
（一）
近年来，我国校园欺凌事件屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不 敢去学校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。 请以 “My opinions about school bullying” 为题， 写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1. What do you think of school bullying
2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied
要求：
1. 所给提示信息应全部包括，可适当发挥，以 使行文连贯；
2. 80词以上。
参考词汇：心理问题mental health problems .
My opinions about school bullying
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【参考范文】
My opinions about school bullying
School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying
If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.
【解析】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈你对校园欺凌的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主语以及“比较级and比较级”。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（二）
请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How can we protect ourselves at School ”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
提示：
1. 谨慎交友。
2. 不参与打架斗殴。
3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。
参考词汇：1. self-protection（自我保护） 2. bully (n./v.欺凌）
3. personal safety（人身安全） 4. have violent behaviors (打架斗殴）
How can we protect ourselves at School
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【参考范文】
How can we protect ourselves at School
School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.
We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can’t have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future ,do you think so
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School ”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
在学校我们如何保护自己？
几乎每个学校都有欺负学校的行为。在我的学校里，我们有时会被欺负，一些学生会受到伤害，所以在学校欺负别人或被欺负对我们来说真的很不好。
当我们遇到校园欺凌的麻烦时，我们应该阻止任何校园欺凌。例如，在发生欺凌行为之前，我们应该保持冷静。与他人交朋友时，我们应该总是友好和乐于助人。以下是我关于制止学校欺负的一些想法。首先，我们将学习如何自我保护，因为我们的人身安全是最重要的。第二，我们要时刻与他人和睦相处，不能有任何暴力行为。最后，遵守校规也是避免学校欺负的一种方式。
我希望将来学校里不会发生欺负学生的事，你这么认为吗？
【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
（三）
你觉得你的校园生活安全吗？请你以“How to keep safe in School”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。
内容包括：
1. 描述一件发生在你身上或你看到的发生在校园里的意外事件（经过与结果）
2. 提出解决这种校园意外事件的建议（至少两条）
3. 希望每个学生要注意校园安全
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【参考范文】
Do you know our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough. For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay in the hospital for two weeks. So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep one eye on the students after class and stop them from running. At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.
【解析】
试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般过去式叙述一件发生在学校的意外事件。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】
本文观点分明，论证了学校安全的必要性。本文用到了征求建议的语气I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways.这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。提出了学生和老师在学校应怎么注意安全。
（四）
假如你是李华,校园英文报的编辑,近日收到读者John的来信，谈论到他被一些同学欺负的经历，请根据以下提示，用英文给John写一封回信。
写作要点: 1. 安慰他不要害怕和差愧；
2. 学校也正在采取相关措施:1月16日(周四) 晚上8点在学校会议室有一个关于如何应对校园欺凌的讲座。
3. 你的建议: (至少两点)
写作要求: 1. 80词左右，第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
2.必须包含以上写作要点，可适当发挥。
3.文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名。
4.语句通畅，语法正确，书写工整。
参考词汇:欺凌 n. bullying 欺凌者 n. bullies 措施n. measures
Dear John,
I am sorry to learn what has happened to you.____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Dear John,
I am sorry to learn what has happened to you. I think you should be brave to face it and don’t be afraid or shamed because it is not your fault.
Our school is taking action to solve school bullying. What’s more, a lecture on how to deal with bullying will be held in the school conference room on Thursday, Jan.16th, at 8 p.m.
In my opinion, you should tell your experience to your teachers and parents, they are adults and they will help you. Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes. Tell bullies nobody should be bullied and bullying itself is wrong. I am sure everything will be better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求根据针对John的问题和提示的内容给John回信。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态选用一般现在时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：happen to；take action；In my opinion；Meanwhile等。
句型：Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes. 使用了定语从句和宾语从句。
I am sure everything will be better. 使用了宾语从句。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes.
I am sure everything will be better.
There is something unpleasant happening at school.
Let’s play a role in building a harmonious school
I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways.
I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.
obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own
If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. I think we should respect each other.
I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me.
I won’t keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.
It’s everyone’s duty to make schools safe .
I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying.
As a student, I think we should respect each other.
If we have different ideas, we’d better discuss instead of fighting.
Besides, we should help those classmates who are in trouble.
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（一）
请结合下面两幅图片所示内容, 以“How to behave(表现）at school ”为题写ー篇短文。
要求：
1.简要描述两幅图片, 并针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少2点）；
2.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.80个词左右, 已给出的部分不计人总词数。
参考词汇：beat, kick, laugh at, respect(尊重), harmonious(和谐的)
How to Behave at School
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One,__________________________________
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【参考范文】
How to Behave at School
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture Two, two girls are beating their classmate. In Picture One, a group of students are laughing at a poor boy because he failed in the exam.
How rude they are! We should say no to such things. As a student, I think we should respect each other and be friendly to others. If we have different ideas, we’d better discuss instead of fighting. Besides, we should help our classmates when they are in trouble. Let’s play a role in building a harmonious school
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，简要描述两幅图片, 并针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和现在进行时，人称为第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There is……，two girls are beating ……，I think we should……，Let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了两幅画的内容，接下来介绍针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做，最后我们在营建和谐校园应起作用。此处a group of, laugh at, each other, be friendly to, be in trouble, play a role in doing sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
（二）
请结合下面两幅图片所示内容,写ー篇短文。
要求：
1.用约30词概括上文主要内容:
2.用约120词发表你的观点，内容包括:
(1)校园欺凌的危害(至少两点) :
(2) 你对改变这一现象的建议(至少两点)。
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【参考范文】
School bullying, thanks to the film Better Days, is now coming under the spotlight. Despite some successful attempts to tackle it, it still takes joint efforts to prevent it happening. (30 words)
School bullying can definitely threaten individuals’ growth and undermine social harmony. For one thing, it causes severe psychological trauma to the victims, subjecting them to long-term depression. Worse still, what a vicious cycle if victims follow in the bully’s footsteps! For another, school bullying can make the bully go further to believe in violence and commit crimes.
Undoubtedly, only when nipped in the bud can school bullying stop snowballing. First, laws should be in place and give explicit guidelines on what will be done if it occurs. Second, it is urged that schools should maintain clear channels of communication for both victims and bullies so that they do not bottle up their feelings. It is never too late to face school bullying by taking preventive steps. (126 words)
（三）
学校欺凌现象在各个国家都很常见。这种行为无论是对受害者还是加害者都造成了严重的心理影响，有些甚至导致悲剧性的结果。
话题：
1、你认为学校欺凌现象的原因是什么？
2、你有没有好的方法来阻止类似现象的发生？
3、你曾经有过类似的经历吗？（无论是加害者、受害者、旁观者或阻止者）说说你的故事。
注意：以上话题选择一个回答即可。注意紧扣话题本身。
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【参考范文】
Bullying, as far as I know, is prevalent in secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide. I believe there are some factors that contribute to the prevalence of school’s bullying.
Naturally, ‘schooling’ should be the most obvious and uninsurable reason that comes into our mind at the beginning, because our children spend most of their time in school and it’s the school’s responsibility to protect them and eradicate any forms of bullying. Second, ‘parenting’ is another important factor that can’t be neglected. As we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. Our offspring will imitate everything from wording to the way their parents treat others. Therefore, one can’t expect a couple of dominating and violent parents will have a gentle and courteous child. And last, media influence has gradually become an influential force that projects negative impact to children’s mind. Some juvenile delinquents who had committed serious crime by bullying their schoolmates confessed that the violence on TV had greatly changed their mind as well as behaviour.
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近年来,校园欺凌事件频发,备受社会关注。紧扣校园欺凌，自由发挥。
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【参考范文】
There is a news that makes me shocked. It is said that there happened a violent event in campus which cause 4 students injured and 2 dead. Some reasons arouse in this event. First schools should try to avoid things like this if the students are injured or dead the schools have responsibility to them; second families especially parents should educate their children well give them a good guide and take care of them; third the society should control violent events. If the above three try their best and pay enough attention to them things like this should be avoided.
【参考译文】
　　有一个消息让我震惊。这是说，发生在校园，造成4名学生受伤，2人死亡的暴力事件。一些原因引起这个事件。首先，学校应该尽量避免这样的事情，如果学生受伤或死亡，学校有责任的人;其次，家庭，特别是家长要教育好自己的孩子，给他们一个很好的引导和照顾他们;第三，社会应该控制暴力事件。如果上述三个尽最大努力，并给予足够的重视，这样的事情应该避免。热点 共享单车
共享单车无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。
【预测题目】
（一）
假定你是红星中学初三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车＂mobike＂很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）；
2. 这种单车的优势；
3. 你对这种单车的看法。
注意：1. 词数不少于80；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：智能手机 smartphone, 二维码 the QR code
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【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike — mobike mentioned in your latest letter.
It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.
Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）
共享单车在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸 多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的＂照妖镜＂，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21 世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。
社会现状 自从出现，饱受赞誉。[Z。X。X。
诸多优势 随处可见，出行方便 有益健康，减少污染 费用不高，负担得起
存在问题 未及时归还 占道挡路
你的观点 我认为……
参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles
注意事项：1. 短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
2. 表格中＂你的观点＂一栏用2—3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。
3. 词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. _________________________________
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【参考范文】
Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.
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作为共享经济的新形态，共享单车（mobikes）极大方便了人民，请你结合图示写篇关于共享单车的短文．
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【参考范文】
With the development of technology, Mobikes have come into people’s lives and become increasingly popular. It is very convenient for you to use. You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time. It has some advantages. You also can exercise by riding Mobikes. Also, there will be less pollution if people use Mobikes.
When you ride a Mobike, you should follow some rules. For example, you’d better wear a helmet to keep safe. And you should follow the traffic rules. When you are riding a Mobike, you shouldn’t make a call because it can be dangerous. If you have an accident when you ride a Mobike, you must call 120 immediately and do first aid if necessary.
【解析详解】
这篇作文要求我们对共享单车的流行进行介绍，题目中利用图表的形式，展示了文章的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括三个方面的内容：首先介绍人们选择共享单车的原因，列举了两个；接下来介绍的是骑共享单车时应遵循的一些规则，包括三个具体内容；最后介绍一下如果发生了事故应该怎么处理。学生们可以更加这一图表的提示，列出文章的写作提纲，并充实细节内容，组织语言，用正确的英语表达出来。这篇短文应使用一般现在时或现在完成时，第二人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先合理安排文章内容，注意分清层次和结构，主次要分明，应有具体的细节内容，不能写得太笼统；其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可使用简单句结构，穿插并列句或复合句的结构，提升作文档次。同时注意文章的连贯，语句之间使用恰当的连接成分。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者介绍了共享单车的情况。短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整、充实，结构清晰，层次清楚，包括了题目中所有的要点。短文主要从三个方面进行介绍：首先介绍了共享单车流行的原因；接下来介绍了骑共享单车时应遵循的规则；最后介绍的是如果发生了事故应该怎么办。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，调整了文章节奏，提升了作文水平。文章中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如With the development of technology, Mobikes have come into people’s lives and become increasingly popular.、Also, there will be less pollution if people use Mobikes.、When you are riding a Mobike, you shouldn’t make a call because it can be dangerous. 、If you have an accident when you ride a Mobike, you must call 120 immediately and do first aid if necessary.等。
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你喜欢骑自行车吗 你听说过共享单车（shared bikes）吗 （ 共享单车,即有需要的人通过扫描单车二维码，就可以租骑的一种共享自行车。）现在电台的"Today"栏目就共享单车这一话题,向我们征集稿件。请根据以下提示，以Shared bikes为题,写一篇短文。要点提示:
在青岛,有许多共享单车,且越来越受欢迎。原因:
1. 骑单车花钱少,出行方便;
2. 有更少的污染;
3. 有益于健康。
问题:
1. 到处停放,难以保持城市整洁;
2. 弄坏单车,甚至偷走或带回家。
要求:
1. 内容必须包括所有要点,并谈谈你的看法;
2. 词数80-100。
Shared bikes
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【参考范文】
Shared bikes
Do you like riding bikes Have you ever heard of shared bikes In Qingdao, there are so many shared bikes,and they are becoming more and more popular with people.
Now more and more people enjoy riding bikes instead of cars to make short journeys in cities. Because riding bikes is very convenient and costs less money. It can not only keep the city's environment clean, but also can be good for our health. But in our life , it causes some problems as well, for example, some people put them everywhere and make the city in a mess. Some people break them, and even steal them away.
I think if the government takes action to deal with these problems, our city will become more and more beautiful.
【解析详解】
1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，表达如今共享单车受欢迎的原因以及存在的问题。在写作时，注意时态的准确运用以及不要遗漏要点。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
3.高分亮点：
单词短语：be popular with，比较级and比较级，instead of，be good for，in a mess，not only...but also..., as well, for example。
高分句型：I think if the government takes action to deal with these problems, our city will become more and more beautiful中I think后引导宾语从句，在宾语从句中，if引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，即“主将从现”原则。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如be popular with，比较级and比较级，instead of，be good for，in a mess，not only...but also..., as well, for example等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（三）
共享单车为人们的出行带来了越来越多的便利，可是人们在享用的时候却带来了一系列的问题。比如有人把单车带回了老家，有人使用自己的二维码骗取使用者的钱财，有人随意停放共享单车，有人甚至将共享单车扔到沟里，河里……请你写一封倡议书，倡议人们热爱公共资源，保护公共资源，合理使用公共资源，如此，我们的生活才会因为公共设施的改善而变得更加美好。请从以下三个方面去谈：
1.共享单车方便了人们的出行，减少污染，有利于环境的改善。
2.列举人们对共享单车的破坏行为。
3.合理使用共享单车，热爱公共资源，做一个文明的深圳人。
要求：1.词数至少80词，要包含上述三个方面的内容，不必字字翻译。
2.所给词汇仅作参考，不必都用。
3.文章开头已经给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：QR Code（二维码）, public resources（公共资源）, cheat people of their money（骗钱）, environmentally friendly（环保的），low-carbon life（低碳生活）, civilization（明）, progress（进步）
Dear all
Recently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. They are making our travelling in the city much more convenient. ___________________________________________________________
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Dear all
Recently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. They are making our travelling in the city much more convenient. People can use it anytime and anywhere. Sometimes people work so late that they don’t have a car, so they can go home by share bikes. There are also people who are usually busy with work and don’t have enough time to exercise. They will share bikes to go to work instead of driving, which can not only reduce the damage and environmental pollution but also be beneficial to physical and mental health.
However, people have brought a series of problems when enjoying bicycle sharing. For example, someone brought the bike back to his hometown, someone used his own QR code to cheat the user's money, someone parked the bike at will, some people even threw the bike into a ditch, a river and so on.
I think people should love public resources and protect them, not destroy them. Only in this way our lives will be better because of the improvement of public facilities.
【解析详解】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇议论文，主要是针对共享单车给人们带来的便利以及人们对共享单车的一些破坏行为的表述，以及提出的一些自己的看法，对带来的便利和人们对其的破坏阐述的比较详细，也是本文的重点可以通过三个方面进行阐述。
2. 例文点评：文章主要采取三段式，第一段主要说明共享单车给人们的生活带来的便利好处，第二段主要写了人们对共享单车所做的一些破坏行为，第三段主要写了一些倡议，提倡人们热爱公共资源。文章结构比较紧密，语言通顺，结构严谨。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：be busy with；instead of；be beneficial to；a series of；for example；not only… but also。
句型：so … that引导的结果状语从句；who引导的定语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；I think＋宾语从句。
（四）
共享单车(bike-sharing)被誉为中国现代新四大发明之一。如今厦门的大街小巷也随处可见共享单车的身影。请你根据表格内容，简要介绍共享单车的发展及使用方法，并表达一下你自己对共享单车的看法。
Development First used in Holland,1965
introduced in China in 2007
been popular since 2016
Instruction scan the QR code(二维码)
unlock the smart lock
pay the bill
Opinion healthy,...
blocking(堵塞) the way,...
要求：
1.必须包含所提示信息，字数100词左右；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名及提示信息之外的地名。
提示词：shared bikes 共享的自行车
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【参考范文】
With the development of the economy, shared bikes are seen everywhere. It was first used in Holland in 1965. It was introduced in China in 2007 and it has been popular since 2016.How can we use the shared bikes Firstly, we need to scan the QR code if we want to use them.Secondly, when we get to our destination, we should unlock the smart lock. Finally, we need to pay the bill.
Different people have different opinions about shared bikes. Some people believe that riding shared bikes is healthy. It can build up our body. However, others argues that it blocks the way. In my opinion, it is good to ride shared bikes, because it is good for our health. What’s more, we can enjoy beautiful scenery. Nevertheless, we should use them properly.
【解析详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据表格中所给出的内容，简要介绍共享单车的发展及使用方法，并表达一下你自己对共享单车的看法。文章时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要是第一、第三人称。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
1. It’s our duty to save water
2. As we know, water is very important to man,
3. We can’t live without water.
4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.
5. But some people don’t care about it.
6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.
7. It’s our duty to protect our environment。
8. It is very important to take care of our environment　
9. We should not throw litter onto the ground
10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees
11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
14. Trees are very helpful and important for us.
15. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.
16. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
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In recent days, we have to face I problem____________A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ____________
（说明
A
的现状）
. Second, ____________
（举例进一步说明现状）
.
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. Fo
r one thing, ____________
（解决方法一）
. For another ____________
（解决方法二）
. Finally, ____________
（解决方法三）
.
Personally, I believe that____________
（我的解决方法）
.
Consequently, I
’
m confident that a bright future is waiting us because ____________
（带来的好处）
.
)
（一）
Title：Are shared bikes good for our city life
你认为共享单车进入我们城市生活里，是利是弊？请表明你的态度，并详细写出理由。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2. 短文包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；　
3. 词数80左右。
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【参考范文】
Are shared bikes good for our city life
The shared bikes like mobike can bring great convenience to people. You needn’t lock them by simply using your smart phone. They can take you where the subway and bus don’t go. And they can be left anywhere in public for the next user. However, bad things happen. Some people damage the QR code on the bike, or use their own lock, which causes trouble to other users.
In my opinion, it’s difficult to turn these people’ ideas in a short time.
Therefore, bike-sharing companies like mobike need to do something. For example, those who damage the bike should pay for their actions. Also, because people use their real name to register as a user, it’s a good way to connect to one’s personal credit.
In the end, what I want to say is to take good care of public services.
【名师点评】
这是一篇话题作文。要表明你的态度，并详细写出理由。（1）选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。（2）写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。（3）表达限定的内容有困难时，就要想到All roads lead to Rome.（条条大路通罗马.）这句话，用变通的方法。单句写出后，根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，重新排列组合已写成的句子。写作中适当使用连词注，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】
这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
（二）
在广州，越来越多学生骑共享单车（the shared bikes）上学。如今共享单车到处都有。它给我们的出行带来了很多便利，但也带来了一些问题。请你根据以下提示给学校英文报社写一篇英文报道，谈谈你对共享单车的看法。
优势 ●使用方便，用手机即可解锁； ●便宜，半小时只需0.5元；
不良现象 ●随处乱停； ●有人偷车/破坏车；
你的观点 ？（至少一个理由）
注意：1.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
注：1.随处乱停 park…disorderly 2.解锁 unlock
In Guangzhou, more and more students begin to ride shared bikes to school. We can see those bikes everywhere.
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【参考范文】
In Guangzhou, more and more students begin to ride the shared bikes to school. We can see those bikes everywhere. Surely, they bring us a lot of convenience while a lot of problems take place at the same time as well.
Students like them because of the following reasons. First, it’s very convenient to use the shared bikes. They can unlock the shared bikes by simply using their phones. Second, it’s cheap to rent the shared bikes. It only costs 0.5 yuan for half an hour.
However, there are some problems as well. Some people park the bikes disorderly. Some people break the bikes on purpose or even steal the bikes.
In my opinion, people should learn how to use the shared bikes properly so that it can make our life easier and our city better.
【解析详解】
本文属于材料作文，要表达共享单车的便利和问题以及你对共享单车的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如surely, convenience, while, take place, as well, first, second, cost, however, on purpose以及in my opinion。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（三）
请根据以下信息，介绍你的一位朋友李明。要求如下：
1、七年级十班的一名学生，他总是遵守校规。
2、他通常骑共享单车去学校，7：00离开家，到达学校后吃早餐。
3、他每天花半小时锻炼，看！他现在正在和同学们打篮球，他篮球打得好
4、他想加入学校篮球俱乐部，但他妈妈不同意。
你认为李时该怎么办？请你给李明提一两点建议。
提示词：follow v. 遵守 a shared bike n. 共享单车 agree v. 同意
I have a good friend, Li Ming ____________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
My good friend
I have a good friend whose name is Li Ming. He is in Class 10, Grade 7. He always obeys the school rules. He usually rides a shared bicycle to school, and leaves home at 7:00. He has breakfast after arriving at school. He likes sports and plays basketball very well. He spends half an hour exercising every day. Look! He is playing basketball with his classmates now. He wanted to join the school basketball club, but his mother disagreed. I suggest him that he should explain the advantages of joining the basketball club to his mother, then his mother might agree to his request. Li Ming is my best friend, I like him.
【解析详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in Class 10, Grade 7，ride a shared bicycle，leave home，have breakfast，arrive at，like sports，play with，spend time doing，agree to等。而并列句He usually rides a shared bicycle to school, and leaves home at 7:00./ He wanted to join the school basketball club, but his mother disagreed.和宾语从句I suggest him that he should explain the advantages of joining the basketball club to his mother, then his mother might agree to his request.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
（四）
共享单车（ bicycle sharing）目前很受到大家欢迎。去年共享单车进入三门峡，请你就这话题写一篇英语短文。内容包指
1．共享单车蓬勃发展，成为社会热潮，去年进驻我们城市
2．这种单车的优势（方便、环保、锻炼身体等）；
注意：1．词数不少于70
2．条理清晰，书写工整。
提示词：方便的 convenient
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【参考范文】
With the development of technology, bike sharing is becoming more and more popular in big cities in China. Sharing bicycles entered our city last year.
Sharing bicycles has many advantages. On the one hand, bike sharing eases city traffic and reduces air pollution. On the other hand, it is helpful for people to keep healthy by riding a shared bike. What’s more, bicycle sharing makes it very convenient of people traveling. You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time when you want to go out for a cycling, and the price of one trip is very low. It can save time for people.
【解析详解】
这是一篇属于介绍型的书面表达，时态以一般现在时为主。
亮点词汇和短语：With the development of technology随着科技的发展；more and more popular越来越受欢迎；advantages优点；keep healthy保持健康；What’s more更多的是；On the one hand 一方面；On the other hand另一方面；go out出去；save time节约时间。
句型：
With the development of technology, bike sharing is becoming more and more popular in big cities in China. 随着科技的发展，共享单车在中国的大城市越来越普及。动词短语做主语谓语动词用单数，并且使用比较级的特殊句型“比较级＋and＋比较级，越来越．．．”。
On the other hand, it is helpful for people to keep healthy by riding a shared bike．另一方面，骑一辆共享自行车有助于人们保持健康。it is+adj.+for sb to do sth某人做某事是…。
You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time when you want to go out for a cycling, 当你想出去骑自行车的时候，你可以随时随地找到一辆自行车。时间状语从句。热点 校规
校规无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。
【预测题目】
（一）
随着“创建全国文明城市”活动的开展，《中学生报》开展了校规校纪大讨论。现该报正在向各校学生征文。请你以“Rules of My School”为题，写一篇征文，谈谈你对校规的了解和认识。要点如下：
1．你所知道的校规(列举3条)；
2．你对这些校规的认识；
3．请你对改善校规提建议。
本篇习作是一篇议论文写作，主要写对校规的了解和认识。同学们至少要列出3条校规，写出自己赞成的校规及原因以及不赞成的校规及原因。
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【参考范文】
Rules of My School
There are lots of rules in my school. For example, we must clean our classroom every morning. I think it’s very necessary for us to keep it clean. And it’s good for our health. Besides, we have to wear school uniforms every day. I think the uniforms are ugly. In my opinion, we should be allowed to choose our own clothes because they can make us feel more comfortable. What’s more, we can’t talk loudly in the classroom. I agree that we should try to keep quiet in the classroom for it’s good for our study.
【解析】
这是一篇给出写作要点和题目的提纲类作文。内容为你以"Rules of My School"为题，写一篇征文，谈谈你对校规的了解和认识。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。写作要点包括：1. 列举学校的校规；2. 对这些校规的认识；3. 对不满意的校规的意见。可以先总写我们学校有许多校规校纪，然后分别列举三条校规，每条校规都要交代清楚“是什么”，“为什么”，“怎么样”，对于不完善的校规，还要提出改进建议。常用到的重点句型和短语：there be句型，It is+ adj. +for sb. to do sth.，have to do sth.，in one's opinoin，should be allowed to do sth.，be bad for；have to；try to do。
（二）
俗话说,无规矩不成方圆,各个学校都会有自己的校规来规范同学们的行为。校规在学生学习和生活中扮演着很重要的角色。它们可以规范我们的行为，可以让我们成为文明合格的中学生。然而，也有部分学生认为很多校规管的太宽，让正常的学习生活受到太多的约束。
作为中学生，你一定有自己不同的见解和认识。请按以下要求写一篇短文，谈谈你对校规的认识和看法。
要求：1. 词数不少于80词,提示词仅供参考；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【参考范文】
Hello, everyone.I’d like to introduce my class rules made in our school. First, we should come to school on time. Also, we ought to do our homework carefully and hand it in on time. And we’re required to wear the school uniforms at school and so on.
I remember one day I didn’t wear my school uniform because it was quite dirty. When I got to school, my teacher asked me to his office and gave me a lesson. I was asked to wear it every day except on weekends, or I would be punished.
As for me, it’s our duty to follow the school rules. But not all the rules are perfect. I think we should be allowed to wear our own clothes. So I hope the school rules should be made according to the surveys on the students to make sure they are reasonable.
【解析】
本文是一篇材料作文，谈谈你对校规的认识和看法。写作时人称为第一人称。由于是写规章制度，因此会用到一些情态动词，一定要掌握情态动词的用法。根据参考词汇，可以列出写作提纲，我们要用简单准确的句子把它们表达出来。写作中要注意运用一般现在时与一般过去时这两种时态。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
（一）
国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多规章制度来规范中学生的行为，使学生们都能健康成长。请你写一篇英语小短文向大家介绍一两条校规、校纪。
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【参考范文】
There are many rules in our school, At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I think young people should look smart and so I’d like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，材料中给出的写作要点是写出校规。这个要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
（二）
国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多规章制度来规范中学生的行为，使学生们都能健康成长。请你列举五条校规、校纪
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【参考范文】
We don't pick flowers。
We don't destroy our tables and chairs.
We should keep the classrooms clean and tidy every day.
We should respect each other.
We shouldn't play dangerous games.
【解析】
试题分析：本题答案不唯一，只要语法基本正确，句子语意通顺即可。学习中应注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
（三）
"不以规矩，无以成方圆"．国有国法，校有校规．请以My school rules 为题，写一篇60词左右的文章．文中不能出现自己的真实名字、学校、班级等。
提示：1．学校有哪些校规；（不少于5条）
2．对校规的感受。
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【参考范文】
My school rules
We have a lot of school rules at our school. And we aren’t allowed to break the rules. I think some of the rules are necessary. For example, students must listen carefully in class and finish homework carefully. And we aren’t allowed to make noise in library. We have to be friendly to classmates. It’s helpful to get along with classmates.
At our school, we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I think young people should look smart and so I’d like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms.
【解析】
本文属于话题作文，介绍你们学校的校规以及你的感受。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be allowed to do, break the rules, necessary, for example, make noise, have to, be friendly to, get along with以及that引导的表语从句。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（四）
人们常说：“没有规矩，不成方圆”，合理的校规对于学生的健康成长至关重要。请你根据以下所给内容要点，以“Our school rules”为题写一篇英文短文，谈谈你们的校规。
内容要点：1.你们学校有哪些校规；
2.谈谈你对这些校规的看法；
3.请说说你的好建议；
4.……
要求：1.文中必须包括所给提示中1－3项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息；
3.不少于80词。
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【参考范文】
Our School Rules
There are many rules in our school.From Monday to Friday，we have to get to school before 7：00 in the morning. We must wear school uniforms，and I think it is good for us because uniforms can make us look smart. We must listen to our teachers carefully in class and finish our homework after school. We are not allowed to use mobile phones in class. I think the rules are very strict but useful，and we should follow them. However，we have so much homework that we have little free time to do what we love to do.
In my opinion，we should have more free time to take part in all kinds of activities and improve our abilities.
We don't pick flowers。
We don't destroy our tables and chairs.
We should keep the classrooms clean and tidy every day.
We should respect each other.
We shouldn't play dangerous games.
There are many rules in our school.
I think the rules are very strict but useful
In my opinion，we should have more free time to take part in all kinds of activities and improve our abilities.
It’s helpful to get along with classmates.
As for me, it’s our duty to follow the school rules.
What’s more, we can’t talk loudly in the classroom.
I agree that we should try to keep quiet in the classroom for it’s good for our study.
I think it is good for us because uniforms can make us look smart.
However，we have so much homework that we have little free time to do what we love to do.
That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
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（一）
假如你是Sally，进入初中将近一年的你，在学校的生活得还好吧？请你根据下面的提示内容，向你的朋友Jane介绍你的初中生活吧。大约80词左右。( 15分)
提示内容：1. 你的特长和能力； 2. 你的学校距离，上学的方式和时间；
3. 喜欢和不喜欢的课程及原因； 5. 介绍至少两条校规及对校规的看法。
要求：语句通顺，语意连贯，语法正确，字迹工整。
My School Life
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【参考范文】
Dear Jane,
How are you these days Well, I want to tell you something about me and my school life. I have a good time at
school. I am good at drawing and join the drawing club. My house is not far away from school. I usually ride a bike to go to school. It takes me about ten minutes. My favorite subject is English. I think it is interesting. But I don’t like math, because it is difficult for me and boring. There are many rules in our school. We have to wear school uniforms on school days. I think it is not good, because the uniforms are not beautiful and we don’t like them. And we can’t run in the hallway. It can keep us from danger.
Can you tell me your school life
Yours,
Sunny
【解析】
试题分析：本文是叙述自己在学校的学习情况，所以句子的主语一般用第一人称，因为叙述的是平常里的情况，所以应该用一般现在时，不要遗漏，要点，要注意上下文之间的衔接，要使用高级词汇，缩写的句子应当符合英语语法。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：have a good time玩儿的开心；be good at擅长；It takes sb some time to do sth花费某人多长时间;it is +形容词+for sb对某人来说是怎样的。用了because，that引导的从句，增加了文章的亮点。
（二）
同学们，中考过后，你们即将告别亲爱的母校。回首三年的母校生活，学校里的很多规则 有助于你的健康成长。你能谈一谈你们学校的校规吗？你对这些校规有何看法？你对母校有 哪些合理化建议？请你以My school rules为题写一篇短文。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2. 书写工整、规范；
3. 根据所给内容，请做适当发挥；
4. 词数80左右。文章的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My school rules
We have many rules in our school. ______________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
My school rules
We have many rules in our school. I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.
Here are some good rules. We can’t be late for school. We must listen carefully to teachers in class. Mobile phones are not allowed to bring into the school. These rules are good for our study and I like them.
I think there are also a few unnecessary rules. For example, students are not allowed to wear long hair. I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.
【解析】
本文谈一谈对母校校规的看法，提出一些合理性的建议。所以句子的主语应该用第一人称，句子的时态用一般现在时，所写的句子应该用一些高级词汇及句式，不要写汉语式的英语。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：be good for有益；be allowed to do sth被允许做某事；I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.I think there are also a few unnecessary rules.I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.用了that引导的宾语从句，是亮点句。
（三）
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jason发电子邮件向你询问你们学校的校规，请你根据以下提示给他回复一封邮件介绍你们学校的校规。
提示：
（1）不能迟到早退。
（2）禁止在课堂上吃东西。
（3）禁止从楼上往下扔垃圾。
（4）玩耍时不能使用危险的器械。
（5）不抽烟、不喝酒。
要求：
（1）内容须包括所有提示内容。
（2）语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯。
（3）词数80词左右，电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jason，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jason,
I’m glad to get your email. In the email, you asked me about my school rules. Here I will tell you about them.
Firstly, we can’t be late for class or leave school before it is over. Secondly, we mustn’t eat anything in class. Thirdly, we mustn’t throw rubbish out of the windows of tall buildings. Fourthly, we mustn’t use dangerous tools when we play with our classmates. Lastly, we mustn’t smoke or drink.
That’s all. What about yours
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时开头介绍写信的目的；第二段介绍我校的校规；第三段询问对方的校规。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，介绍我校的校规，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：ask sb about sth；be late for；in class；throw…out of；play with；what about。
句型：时间状语从句before it is over和when we play with our classmates。
（四）
假如你是 Li Hua， 给你的英国笔友 Tom写一封信，讲讲你们学校的校规以及你的感受。
1. 不少于60词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
2. 不要出现真实的校名、班名和姓名
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【参考范文】
Dear Tom，
I am writing to tell you something about our school rules. School rules are very important. There are many rules in our school. For example, we should wear our school uniforms at school and we should go to school on time. We are required to keep the classroom clean and tidy. We can't eat, drink or sleep in class. We must do our homework, too. I think these rules are good for our study and school life. Some students don't like wearing school uniforms all the time because it's boring. But it's ok with me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这篇书面表达要求学生写一封信给Tom，介绍自己学校的校规，并简述自己感受。
这篇书面表达没有给出具体的材料，考生需根据要求，结合自己学校的校规来写作。例如常见的 Be quiet on class.上课安静。Don't throw rubbish casually.不要随处乱扔垃圾。No smoking or drinking.不要吸烟喝酒。Don't fight or say rude words.不打架不骂人。Don't bully girls.不要欺负女生。Ask for leave on emergency.有事请假。Be friendly to classmates.友好待人。No cheat in exam.考试不能作弊。Don't wear strangely.不要穿奇装异服，等等。考生可以根据自己熟悉的点来写，此外还要描述自己对这些校规的感受。
【点睛】
在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。热点 广场舞
广场舞无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活增添了很多乐趣。
【预测题目】
（一）
假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提示如下：
（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞。
（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。
（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。
（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。
（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……
参考词汇：跳广场舞 do square dancing （对某人）有意见 have a complaint (against sb.)
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3） 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【参考范文】
Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’s more, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.
In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言的发言稿。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：she is...，some neighbors have a complaint against ...，They think that...以及But they should ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用连词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意完整地表达提纲中所列内容。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了发言稿的主题，要介绍自己的祖母，接下来介绍祖母现在和过去的比较，以及邻居们对广场舞的态度，最后阐述自己对人们跳广场舞的观点。此处be in love with, have a complaint against, a good way to do sth, keep healthy等这些词组的运用以及 状语从句so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.的运用也让文章增色不少。
（二）
近年来广场舞越来越流行。在公园、小区甚至一些空地旁常能看到跳舞的人们。上周, Helping Hands Club进行了一项问卷调查。请你根据调查结果写一篇英语短文，并谈一谈对此事的看法。
赞 成：● 是健康的生活方式, 跳舞能锻炼身体
● 可以结交有共同爱好的朋友
● 人人都有权利(right)在广场和空地等公共场所开展活动
反 对：● 音乐声音太大，影响附近居民的正常生活
● 媒体报道噪音扰民引起打架伤人
你的看法：● ……
要求：1. 所写内容必须包含以上信息，可适当发挥。
2. 自拟你对广场舞现象的看法，不少于两点。
3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4. 语句通顺，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.
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【参考范文】
One possible version:
Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.
Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way totake exercise. What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people’s study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.
In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. Dancers should turn down the loudspeakers and should not dance till too late at night. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于广场舞的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意将提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等。注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
【亮点说明】
这篇范文中出现一些不错的句式和短语，如Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years.近些年来，广场舞越来越多的受到人们的欢迎；make a survey做了一个调查；强调句式， It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样；In my opinion, 我的看法是；以及由if引导的条件状语从句等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。
（一）
目前广场舞的话题非常热。有些人认为：广场舞能丰富人们的生活，促进身心健康；有些人认为：广场舞的音乐声给周边市民带来了麻烦，影响了晚间休息。请选择一个观点结合你的经历简略谈谈你的看法。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Suggested phrases:
enrich people’s life;
bring trouble
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【参考范文】
Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China. Not only is it a good way of keeping fit, but also it is a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to meet and make friends.
Most dancers say that this activity makes them look younger and feel more confident. At the same time, square dancing enrich their life.
However, they make so much noise that people around feel uncomfortable. What is worse, sometimes they even fight for a certain place to dance.
In my opinion, we should encourage more old women to take part in this outdoor activity. Meanwhile, they aren’t supposed to dance too late or to too loud music in order not to bring trouble.
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文，主题是关于广场舞，我们需要介绍不同人对广场舞的观点，并结合自己的经历谈谈你的看法。短文的主要内容分为三个部分：首先介绍广场舞以及它现在的流行程度；其次介绍支持广场舞的观点及原因以及反对广场舞的观点及原因；最后来发表自己的观点。写作时，首先要注意文章内容的完整，需要将上面的这些内容都用英语表达出来；其次要注意文章结构的完整，最好分段来写，观点要明确，不能含糊。同时在文章中还需要注意恰当的表达，准确运用英语词汇和语法，使用一些高级词汇和句型，增强文章的表现力。句子之间注意连接，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，文章分成了四段叙述，每一段的主题都很明确，叙述也很合理，层次清晰；其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯，文中多使用简单句，表达意思清楚、明了。句子之间注意了连接，如however, not only…but also, at the same time, menawhile等。文中较好的句型有Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China . 、Not only is it a good way of keeping fit , but also it is a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to meet and make friends、At the same time , square dancing enrich their life .、However , they make so much noise that people around feel uncomfortable、Meanwhile , they aren’t supposed to dance too late or to too loud music in order not to bring trouble.等。
（二）
如今，中国掀起了广场舞（square dancing）热潮。对于这种现象，人们褒贬不一。请你根据提示写一篇短文，谈谈广场舞的利与弊，并提出解决措施。
利 一种健康、省钱的活动
弊 噪音污染，影响他人的工作、学习和生活
解决措施 降低音量；政府提供更多跳舞的空间......
要求：
1. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：不少于 100。
参考词汇：suffer from 遭受 volume 音量
Nowadays square dancing is becoming more and more popular.
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【参考范文】
Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have different ideas about square dancing.
To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, they think it a green form of exercising to keep fit. Also, it is money-saving. However, some others think square dancing is bad for their lives. The loud music and noise make a difference to their life, study and work .They feel uncomfortably and suffer from it.
In my opinion, I think square dancing is good for people’s health, as long as the dancers show care about others’ needs and turn down the volume. And then, our government should offer right places for square dancers to dance square dancing
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达是以“广场舞”这一社会现象为话题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述 “广场舞”对我们生活的正反两方面的影响。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后要表达出自己的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中get popular with，be crowded with, to be honest，also，however, make a difference, in my opinion, care about等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密、逻辑清晰；文中还多处使用了宾语从句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。
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当今中国，什么活动最火？毫无疑问是广场舞(square dancing)。对于这一社会现象，人们各抒己见。请根据下列提示写一篇80词短文，谈谈它的优缺点，并提出你自己的解决办法。
优点 强身健体；丰富人们的业余生活；提供认识新朋友的机会
缺点 噪音污染；影响他人的学习，睡觉和工作
解决办法 降低音量；政府提供更多的跳舞场所
These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China. It’s unusual to see many public places are crowded with people dancing to the music, especially in the morning and evenings.
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【参考范文】
These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China. It’s unusual to see many public places are crowded with people dancing to the music, especially in the morning and evenings.
It’s true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy. It can also enrich our spare time. What’s more, it’s such a good way to communicate with each other and make new friends. However, the loud noise causes noise pollution and disturbs the people who live around the square. They can not work, study, or sleep well. So we sometimes see news about arguments of them.
In my opinion, the dancers should turn down their music while dancing. In addition, our government should provide more public places for them. Then people can have fun without disturbing others.
【解析】
试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是叙述广场舞来反映主题，所以要用一般现在时。但本文必须用第三人称。再有就是应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
写作亮点：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如It’s true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy.复合结构等。还运用了However, So等连词，并注意了句子的衔接，如：In my opinion, In addition,等等。
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近年来，广场舞风靡全国，广场上、公园中、小区里到处可见老年人舞动的身影。今天请同学们以"Square dancing"为题，写一篇英语短文，谈论广场舞带给大家的好处和烦恼。
Advantages Disadvantages
Good for health; make friends; … Noisy; …
要求:
1.包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.语言通顺、行文连贯、内容充实；
3.80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Square dancing
In China, you can see many old people dance to music in the squares or the parks. It is a new way of life.
I hope the dancers can choose a right place and turn down the music Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time.
【参考范文】
Square dancing
In China, you can see many old people dance to music in the squares or the parks. It is a new way of life. But every coin has two sides.
Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way to take exercise. What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people's study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.
In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. I hope the dancers can choose a right place and turn down the music. Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于广场舞的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，要把题目所给的提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容，主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，要注意主谓一致。
2. 例文点评：文章主要分三段描述。第一段总的指出广场舞风靡全国，第二段分别指出广场舞的优点和缺点，第三段提出自己的看法和意见。整个文章结构完整，内容描述的比较全面，语言的表述符合语法的结构，语言表达通顺，意思明确。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：public place；take exercise；What’s more；have a bad effect on；because of。
句型：who引导的定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；though引导的让步状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。
It is a new way of life. But every coin has two sides.
In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem.
Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time.
If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.
What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby.
It’s true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy.
These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China.
To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, they think it a green form of exercising to keep fit.
In my opinion, the dancers should turn down their music while dancing.
It is a new way of life.
Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China.
It is a common phenomenon that people,including the elderly people as well as some young people.
it is universally acknowledged that it makes a tremendous difference to people’s life.
when we go out at night, we may find them dance everywhere.
Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities.
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“广场舞”square dancing作为一种集体娱乐健身的活动方式越来越受到中国大妈的追捧，但其所产生的噪音，或因抢占地盘所引发的矛盾也越来越多，请谈一谈你对“广场舞”的看法并提出适当建议。
advantage
keep fit
make new friends
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disadvantage
make much noise
fight for a dancing place
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My opinion
注意：(1)短文必须涵盖以上所有要点，可适当发挥
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
（3）词数：80~100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Square Dancing
Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China.________________
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Square Dancing
Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China. Not only is it a good way of keeping fit, but also it’s a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to make and meet friends. No wonder that most dancers say that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident. However, when people in large number dance to loud music, they create the noise that neighborhoods find it painful to bear. What’s worse, some dancers even fight for a certain place to dance and lead to blooding.
In my opinion, we shouldn’t dance too late or dance to too loud music to disturb others’ life. Let’s dance politely and happily.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：这篇短文使用了连接词Not only …but also、However，以及What’s worse，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
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随着人们生活水平的提高，“广场舞大妈”们掀起了一场广场舞热潮，甚至把广场舞跳出了国门。请以广场舞为主题，完成一篇文章，内容包括：
1. 描述当前广场舞的现状
2. 分析这种现象产生的原因
3. 陈述利弊以及表明个人态度
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【参考范文】
It is a common phenomenon that people, including the elderly people as well as some young people, will gather in the dancing square late in the evening due to the fact that people’s physical and mental life develop rapidly.
When it comes to square dance, it is universally acknowledged that it makes a tremendous difference to people’s life. For instance, not only dancing women promote people’s relationship but also it makes contributions to people’s health. However, dancing has some disadvantages of its own despite its advantages. When dancing, the dancing women play loud music unconsciously, which gives rise to dissatisfaction.
Personally speaking, I am definitely in favor of such behaviors. By the way, I do hope the dancing women can try their best to regulate the volume of music. Only in this case can we create a harmonious community together.
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随着人们生活水平的提高，“广场舞”成为一种风潮，甚至把广场舞跳出了国门。请以广场舞为主题，完成一篇文章。
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The popularity of square dance
In china, the woman who is more than 40 year-old is called da ma, it has to be admitted that da ma is a powerful group, they own certain money at hand, we always hear about the news about them buying house everywhere or flying to the foreign country to buy the brands. the large group now has invaded the square at night, when the night comes, several groups of da ma go to the square, playing the music and dance until 9 o’clock. about few years ago, only few women would do this, but now, as the economy develops, people live a better life, so they begin to find entertainment. da ma have made the square dance popular, when we go out at night, we may find them dance everywhere.
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你是李华,你很烦恼。最近,每天早晚,你们小区广场上都有很多人在跳广场舞,持续时间长且噪音大, 给你和小区里其他人带来了很多的不便……请你给小区委员会领导写封信, 反映现象及其导致的不便(要求涉及生活、学习和工作等方面)并提出合理建议。
注意：1、词数 120左右;
2、短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇：广场舞 square dance 组织者 organizers
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【参考范文】
Dear Sir,
Recently, every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, the long-time dancing and the noise pollution really bring about unbearable inconveniences.
We can’t rest or sleep well. As a result, the students are not only late for school but also sleepy in class, and the workers are easily tired out while working.
Here are some suggestions to solve the problem. They are supposed either to shorten the dancing time and reduce the music noise or to make another choice of dancing places. Only in this way can they have fun and let
Would you please communicate with the organizers about what I said
Best wishes,
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua热点 游戏
游戏无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它给我们的生活带来了极大的影响。
【预测题目】
（一）
以下是你刚刚买的一款游戏“Travel in Space，在市场上很受欢迎，请将它介绍给你的朋友，不少于80词，可以适当发挥．（文章用第一人称）
设计者
由David Lee 所设计
价格
花了我150元
游戏介绍
1. 在游戏中，可以穿不同的服装，游览不同的国家
2. 可以得到每个建筑物的足够的信息
3. 所去过的地方将被标上亮红色
4. 最后，可以用知识来打开宝藏盒子
游戏的目标
环游世界去了解每个地方，游戏很有趣，可以从中学到很多
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【参考范文】
A new game
I have just bought a new kind of game．It is designed by David Lee．/The designer of the game is David Lee．It cost me 150 yuan．
When you play the game, you can visit/travel around different countries in different clothes．
You can get enough information about each building．
The places you have visited are marked in bright red．Finally, you can use knowledge to open the treasure box．
The goal of the game is to travel around the world to learn about each place．The game is very interesting and you can learn a lot from it．I'm sure you will enjoy it．
【解析】
试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
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根据下面的内容，以Li Hua的名义给市长写一封信。
假如你是永州市一中的一名学生，你发现许多中学生玩电子游戏。有的不做作业，有的不去上学。他们花了很多的钱在电子游戏上，有的开始偷钱。电子游戏对学生的学习和健康不利，特别是视力不好。希望大家不要玩电子游戏，政府应当适当制止中学生玩电子游戏。让学生们远离电子游戏。
要求：1.不要逐条翻译提示内容,字数在80词以上。
2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。
3.不得使用真实的人名或学校名称。
提示用词：government (政府)
Dear Mayor,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mayor,
I’m a middle school student in Junior Grade Three in No. One Middle School .I find some students like playing computer games so much that they don’t finish their homework and even don’t go to school. Some of them have spent a lot of money on computer games. So they begin to steal. Parents and teachers are terribly worried about them. Playing computer games is not good to our studies and health. It’s especially bad for out eyes. I hope our government can do something to stop middle school students from playing computer games. Let’s be away from it.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。所给材料很详细，在写作时注意用上适当的连词使文章更有逻辑。
【亮点说明】
这篇短文写出了全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，基本无语法错误。如: I find some students like playing computer games so much that they don’t finish their homework and even don’t go to school. I hope our government can do something to stop middle school students from playing computer games.等。
（一）
假如你是Sam，你的朋友Larry来信邀请你到他家玩电脑游戏，而你不愿意去。请根据下列要点写一封回信。
1.我没有时间到你家去玩电脑游戏，因为我今天要准备数学考试。
2.现在我们读八年级，应该少玩电脑游戏，努力学习，锻炼身体。
3.劝告Larry最好不再玩电脑游戏，邀请他和你一起学习并陈述理由（一条或两条即可）
要求：1.用上所给要点，并适当发挥，使短文条理清楚、语句连贯；
2.词数70左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Larry,
Thanks for your inviting me to play computers at your home. I’m afraid I can’t.
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Dear Larry,
Thanks for your inviting me to play computers at your home. I’m afraid I can’t.
I don’t have time to play computer games at your home, because I have to study for a math test. It’s so important! What’s more, we are in Grade eight now. I don’t think we should play computer games too much. On the contrary, we should study harder and exercise more.
I really hope that you will not play it any longer. My dear friend, come to study with me. As middle school students, we should spend more time on our study. Let’s make a great progress together!
Best wishes!
Sam
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，你的朋友Larry回信，告诉她你不愿意去她家玩电脑游戏。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I don’t have time to……，It’s……，I don’t think……，I really hope that……，Let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头告诉她我不去她家，接下来解释原因并且建议她少玩电脑游戏，最后希望她和我一起学习，共同进步。此处invite sb to do sth, what’s more, on the contrary, spend time on sth, make a great progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
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要点如下：
(1)假如你是李明十五岁， 你喜欢周末和朋友们一起做作业，一起闲逛和一起玩游戏。
(2)你的父母担心你的学习。他们认为青少年不应当被允许一起做作业，你们在一起会交谈代替做作业。青少年也不应当花许多时间在游戏上，游戏会妨碍你的学习。
(3)但你不同意这些观点。 同学们一起学习可以相互帮助。 玩游戏可以使你感到放松，这对学习有好处。你和同学们相处融洽，这使你很开心。
(4)你认为你应当被允许对一些事做出决定。例如，你应该被允许选择自己的朋友，你应当被允许听摇滚乐......请用第一人称写作文，内容可适当发挥。
I’m Li Ming. I am 15 years old now. I like ____________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
I’m Li Ming. I am 15 years old now. I like doing homework with my friends on weekends. Besides, I like going around and playing computer games with them. My parents are worried about my study. They think teenagers shouldn’t be allowed to do homework together because we may talk about other things with each other instead of doing homework. Teenagers should not spend too much time on games because games get in the way of study. However, I don’t agree with them. We can help each other when learning together. Playing games can make me feel relaxed, which is good for our study. I can get on well with my classmates and I feel happy. I think I should be allowed to make decisions on my own. For example, I should be allowed to choose my friends. I should be allowed to listen to rock music.
【解析】
这篇作文要点明确，首先是介绍一下自己在周末的活动，包括一起做作业、一起玩游戏、一起闲逛等，然后表达父母对此的态度，陈述父母不同意的原因，最后表达自己的观点，对于父母看法不同意的理由，自己想要父母做出的改变等。人称是以第一人称为主，事态基本上是一般现在时，需要注意部分短语的表达即可，写作难度不大，在最后部分需要写到“被允许…”，要注意正确使用被动语态。用到的短语表达有：on weekends 在周末，playing computer games 玩电脑游戏，are worried about my study 担心我的学习，instead of 而不是，spend too much time on games 花费太多的时间在游戏上，get in the way of study 妨碍学习，agree with 同意，get on well with 和…相处得好，make decisions on my own 自己做决定，listen to rock music. 听摇滚乐。总体来说写作的时候要注意正确运用语态，行文流畅，完成了要求的写作任务。
（三）
现在学生在网吧上网（get online）成风，你们班在下周班会上将谈论有关问题。请你根据表格中提示的内容用英语写一篇60词左右的讲话稿，要点必须齐全。
益处 1. 学会使用现代设备——电脑； 2. 学会更多知识(knowledge)； 3. 玩游戏，使人更加聪明。
坏处 过于沉迷游戏，对学习有害。 网上交友，通信频繁，学习成绩下降。
建议 在学校学习时不上网。 寒暑假可以上网。
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Students nowadays are used to getting online on net bar. The advantages are: Students can learn how to operate an up-to-date computer. They can learn a lot of knowledge by surfing the Internet. Also playing computer games make people cleverer. There are also disadvantages. It will be bad for their learning if they waste too much time on computer games. When they make e-friends and communicate too frequently, their results will be affected. We suggested that students should not be allowed to get online at school, but they can get online during the summer and winter holidays.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文属于议论文，介绍学生在网吧上网的好处以及坏处，并针对这一情况给出建议。
2.例文点评：这是一篇非常优秀的文章，时态运用准确，句式结构运用灵活，要点齐全，上下文衔接完美，符合英美国家的语言习惯。
3.高分亮点：
单词短语：be used to, 疑问词+to do, a lot of, 介词by+doing, make sb adj, there be, be bad for, also等。
高分句式：When they make e-friends and communicate too frequently, their results will be affected中when引导的时间状语从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，即“主将从现”原则；We suggest that students should not be allowed to get online at school中that引导宾语从句。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如be used to, 疑问词+to do, a lot of, 介词by+doing, make sb adj, there be, be bad for, 主将从现和宾语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如also；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（四）
七岁的女孩Mary来自美国,在日常生活中，她喜欢听音乐，喜欢去动物园。她家里有一台电脑，她通常在周六玩电脑游戏。她的妈妈每天都会在网上搜索信息,，有时还进行网上购物。她的爸爸喜欢在网上看足球比赛，还经常在电脑上玩游戏。请根据所给提示写一篇短文介绍她及其家人。
要求：
1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确。
2. 至少60词。
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【参考范文】
Mary is seven years old. She is from America. She likes listening to music and going to the zoo. There is a computer in her home. Mary usually plays computer games on Saturday. Her mother goes on the Internet every day. She usually searches for information and sometimes she goes shopping on it. Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it.
【解析】
试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】
范文中用了一些常见短语：be from来自某处； like doing喜欢做某事； listen to 听；search for 寻找；go shopping购物。She likes listening to music and going to the zoo这个句子中and连接两个并列的动词，形式保持一致。Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it这个句子中and连接两个句子，时态保持一致。
Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it.
When they make e-friends and communicate too frequently, their results will be affected.
Teenagers should not spend too much time on games because games get in the way of study.
I find some students like playing computer games so much that they don’t finish their homework and even don’t go to school.
I hope our government can do something to stop middle school students from playing computer games.
Thanks for your inviting me to play computers at your home. I’m afraid I can’t.
I don’t have time to play computer games at your home.
I really hope that you will not play it any longer.
My dear friend, come to study with me.
As middle school students, we should spend more time on our study.
Let’s make a great progress together!
I don’t think we should play computer games too much.
On the contrary, we should study harder and exercise more.
Everyone knows playing come spend too much time on computer games, we’ll have no time to do sports.
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（一）
假如你是Sam，你的朋友Larry来信邀请你到他家玩电脑游戏，而你不愿意去。请根据下列要点写一封回信：
1. 我没有时间到你家去玩电脑游戏，因为我今天要准备数学考试。
2. 现在我们读八年级，应该少玩电脑游戏，努力学习，锻炼身体。
3. 劝告Larry最好不再玩电脑游戏，邀请他和你一起学习并陈述理由（一条或两条即可）
要求：1. 短文应包括要求的所有信息。
2. 短文应结构完整、语句通顺、句式多样。
3. 不能出现个人和学校的真实信息。
4. 词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Larry,
Thanks for you inviting me to play computers at your home. I’m afraid I can’t.
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【参考范文】
Dear Larry,
Thanks for you inviting me to play computers at your home. I’m afraid I can’t.
I don’t have time to play computer games at your home, because I have to study for a math test. It’s so important! What’s more, we are in Grade 8 now. I don’t think we should play computer games too much. On the contrary, we should study harder and exercise more.
I really hope that you will not play it any longer. My dear friend, come to study with me. As middle school students, we should spend more time on our study. Let’s make a great progress together!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Sam
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，假如你是Sam，你的朋友Larry来信邀请你到他家玩电脑游戏，而你不愿意去。请根据下列要点写一封回信。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头告诉她我不去她家，接下来解释原因并且建议她少玩电脑游戏，最后希望她和我一起学习，共同进步。此处What’s more, we are in Grade 8 now. I don’t think we should play computer games too much. On the contrary, we should study harder and exercise more.也让文章增色不少。
（二）
读了以上同学的调查报告，你有何感想？你是否也曾沉迷于电脑游戏？请以“远离电脑游戏”为题写一篇短文。
内容包括：1．中学生玩电脑游戏的负面影响（包括对学习、经济和身体的影响等）。
2．中学生的主要任务是把时间和精力放在学习上，学好各门功课。
3．建议中学生远离电脑游戏，专心学习。
写作要求：1．条理清晰，意思连贯，词句通顺。
2．不能照抄原文，不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
3．词数80个左右。
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【参考范文】
How to stay away from playing computer games
These days computer is very popular among young students besides me. When I feel tired or lonely, I often spend a lot of time playing computer games. Today I read the survey about my classmates. I was surprised to find how the computer games could influence us. I knew why there were so many young people disliked studying hard and how some students became thieves.
Everyone knows playing come spend too much time on computer games, we’ll have no time to do sports. Playing games too mputer can help us feel relaxed. But if we lose ourselves in it, we may have an unhealthy life. For example, if wuch does harm to our eyes. That’s why so many students wear glasses.
As a student, it’s our duty to study. We must try our best to do well in our lessons. To keep healthy, stay away from playing computer games. As long as we work together, we will have a happy school life
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍中学生玩电脑游戏的负面影响（包括对学习、经济和身体的影响等）;中学生的主要任务是把时间和精力放在学习上，学好各门功课;建议中学生远离电脑游戏，专心学习.根据内容可能会用到一般现在时,注意逻辑性和句式的变化。
【亮点说明】
这篇短文不仅介绍人物时注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如spend a lot of time playing computer games，I was surprised to find how the computer games could influence us. But if we lose ourselves in it, we may have an unhealthy life.，When I feel tired or lonely, To keep healthy等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
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游戏，尤其是电脑游戏，给学生带来很不好的影响，你怎么看，谈谈你的看法？
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【参考范文】
Now more and more students always spend plenty of their time playing computer games. some of them can even play from morning to night. how terrible it is!
Playing too much computer games has bad impacts in many ways. For one thing, if students often play computer games, they can't do well in their study, because they always think about the things in computer games instead of the knowledge in books. For another, sitting before the computer for a long time will cause back pains and headaches. and the radiation from the computers can also do harm to our eyes and our minds. What's more, many students are so deeply attracted by some interesting computer games that they communicate less with their families and friends, which will lead to mental problems. Last but not least, some students prefer the fighting games. It is likely that they'll be violent in the real life. That is to say, those who usually play violent games may do crimes more easily. Therefore, the teachers and parents should work together to stop the kids from playing computer games all around the clock.
现在越来越多的学生总是花很多时间来玩电脑游戏.有些甚至可以从早玩到晚玩.这是多么可怕啊!
玩太多的电脑游戏在有多方面都造成了不良影响.一方面,如果学生经常玩电脑游戏,他们就无法好好学习,因为他们总是想着电脑游戏里面的东西而不是书本的知识.另一方面,长期坐在电脑前会导致背痛,头痛.而且电脑辐射也可能会伤害到我们的眼睛和大脑.更重要的是,许多学生都深深被一些有趣的电脑游戏吸引了,以至于他们与他们家人和朋友的交流变少,这将导致心理问题.最后但并非最不重要的,有些学生喜欢玩暴力游戏.他们很有可能会在现实生活中变得暴力.也就是说,那些经常玩暴力游戏的人会更容易犯罪.因此,教师和家长应该一起合作来阻止孩子们整天整夜的玩电脑游戏.
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李小虎沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢 请用下面所给的提示词写一篇短文。
提示词： give up concentrate on be (become)interested in
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【参考范文】
Li Xiao hu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. as a good/close friend of his, I must do something to help him.
First, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.,so he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games,and then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.热点 二胎政策
二胎政策无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的影响。
【预测题目】
（一）
最近，社会上在热议已由全国人大立法通过的新的国家计划生育政策，即俗称的 “二孩政策”（second-child policy）。假设学校本周“英语角”将以此为话题展开讨论，请你用英语写一篇短文作为讨论稿，阐述你的观点。
要求：1. 词数80—100左右。 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)
2. 表明你的观点（赞同或反对），至少说明两点理由。
3. 语句连贯，语法正确，书写工整。
Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child.___________
【参考范文】
Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child. Some students object to the new policy. They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents. And they will not get what they want so easily as before. The little sister or brother may also affect present quiet life, even the study.
Some students say they welcome the new policy. They think it will give more happiness to the family. There will be more people to communicate with and more brothers or sisters to look after the old of the family.
I agree on the second opinion. And I can’t wait for a new baby in my family. I believe he or she can bring many surprises to us.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。
写作亮点：章结构完整，表达清晰，用了很多比较复杂的词汇和句子。例如：They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents;They think it will give more happiness to the family.使文章结构更清晰明了。
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假如你是学生王俊, 在家是独生子女, 国家开放二胎政策后, 你的父母想再生一个孩子, 征求你的意见, 恰好你的美国笔友Peter来信询问我国的二胎政策, 你给他回一封信, 内容要点如下:1.简单解释国家二胎政策；2.得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；3.征求Peter的看法。
注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.__________________
Yours,
Wang Jun
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.
The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have two children. Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me a great deal. Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with. I have to share everything with him or her. Most importantly, what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child As you have a younger sister, did you have similar problems What’s your opinion about this
I am looking forward to your early reply.
【解析】
1、题干解读：题干要求给你的美国笔友回一封关于我国的二胎政策的信，信的内容要包括所给的要点以及peter的看法。
2、例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细的介绍了我国的二胎正常和Peter的看法；结构清晰；逻辑性强。
3、高分亮点：
短语：plan to do；give birth to；share with；make a decision to do sth；most importantly。
句型：The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have two children；what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如plan to do；give birth to；share with；make a decision to do sth；most importantly等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
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国家现在放开了二胎政策，很多人认为有一个兄弟姐妹很好，你认为呢？根据提示写一篇短文。
1.父母要花费更多时间和金钱，两个孩子会生气打闹；
2.有玩伴，不孤独，学会照顾别人，学会分享等；
3.……
注意：1.词数：80词左右；
2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3.文中不出现真实姓名、校名和地名； 4.短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I am the only child in my family. I get everything I want. If I have a sister or brother,___________________
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I am the only child in my family. I get everything I want. If I have a sister or brother, my parents don’t spend much time with me and they spend more money in daily life. Two children may make noise at home. But children can learn to share something with others. They can look after each other. And they can’t feel lonely. I think two-child policy is good.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
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国家开放二胎政策后，学校进行了一项调查关于我们是否愿意有一个弟弟或妹妹，同学们各有主张，假如你是李华，请你据此给报社写一篇文章，要点如下表：　　　　
主张 理由
78%的学生愿意 不再感到孤独，学会分享。
17%的学生不愿意 担心他们并不是的家庭唯一，增加家庭的负担
5%的学生无所谓 是否有弟、妹毫无差异
你的观点 自列举1-2点
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a survey carried out in our school about whether we are willing to have a younger sibling（兄弟姐妹） in our families._________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a survey carried out in our school about whether we are willing to have a younger sibling（兄弟姐妹） in our families.
According to the survey, 78% of the students would like to have a brother or sister whom they can play with, as a result, they will no longer feel lonely. Besides, they will learn to share with others. However, 17% of them are against it. They worry that they aren’t the only of the family any longer. What’s worse, having a younger sibling will surely increase the burden(负担) of the family. Lastly, 5% of the students think it makes no differences to them whether they will have a younger sibling or not.
In my opinion, having a sibling does have many advantages. So I hope to have a younger brother or a sister. I want to grow up with him or her happily and support our parents with them together to make our parents enjoy their life when they become old.
Yours,
Lihua
【解析】
题干分析：阅读题干，这是一篇要求写看法关于国家开放二胎政策后，我们是否愿意有一个弟弟或妹妹的看法的作文。题干已经给出了第一段，表明了写作的目的“调查一项关于我们是否愿意在家里有一个弟弟妹妹的意愿。”。在写作时，要表述清楚他人的观点及理由，同时也要阐明自己的观点及理由。这是一份调查说明，时态应该是一般现在式。
例文点评：例文采取的是三段式写作手法，第一段是题干给出的，表明写作目的；第二段详细的介绍了关于二胎政策学生们看法；第三段开始阐述自己的观点。例文运用大量短语与句型，观点表述清楚，结构清晰。
【高分亮点】
短语：According to根据；would like to sth想要做某事；as a result结果；share sth with sb与某人分享某事物；What’s worse更糟糕的是；In my opinion照我的想法；hope to do sth希望做某事；grow up长大。
句型：（1）According to the survey, 78% of the students would like to have a brother or sister whom they can play with根据这项调查，78%的学生希望有一个可以一起玩的弟弟或妹妹。Whom引导的定语从句；（2）Lastly, 5% of the students think it makes no differences to them whether they will have a younger sibling or not.最后，5%的学生认为是否有弟弟妹妹对他们来说没有区别。Whether引导的宾语从句。
（三）
上周的一堂英语课上，老师就“二孩政策（ two-child policy ）”展开了全班调查。请你以“ Do you want to have a brother or a sister ” 为题目用英语写一篇短文，先汇总班上同学的观点，再陈述自己的想法。
观点 理由
不想有弟妹，愿意当独生子女（21%） 不愿意与别人分享父母的爱，父母会很辛苦，......
想要弟妹，不愿意当独生子女（62%） 渴望有伴，有更多的亲人，有人分享......
不介意，都可以（17%） ……
你的观点 ……
要求：文中不能出现真实的人名和学校名称，100字左右，开头已给出，不计入字数。
Do you want to have a brother or a sister
Do you want to have a brother or a sister Last week,____________________________________________
【参考范文】
Do you want to have a brother or a sister
Do you want to have a brother or a sister Last week, we had a discussion about two-child policy. Some students think they don’t want to have a brother or a sister. Because they don’t want to share parents’ love with others. Also, parents can be tired because of two children.
However, others think they want to have a brother or a sister. Because they are eager for a person to play with. They can share their happiness and sorrow.
17% of students think they can’t mind having a brother or a sister. It should be decided by their parents.
I think it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with. I can share everything with him or her.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇以“Do you want to have a brother or a sister ”为话题的调查报告，介绍同学们对“二孩政策（ two-child policy ）”不同的观点，并阐述理由。动笔前应根据主题组织材料，确定写作内容，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态、关键单词等问题。结合材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时态表达。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。还要注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的观点和想法。
【写作亮点】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。本文恰当使用了had a discussion about，share parents’ love with，because of，play with, however，also, be good to等词（组）。采用了丰富的句型，比如：原因状语从句、I think宾语从句、被动语态等多种句式交替运用，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
（四）
国家为了优化人口结构，在2015年颁布了全面开放二孩的政策。上周你班就“你需要一个弟弟或妹妹吗？”开了一个班会，同学们各抒己见。请你根据下表提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，投给校报。
要求：1．包含表中所有信息，并适当发挥；
2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写整洁；
3．词数不少于100。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
赞成 1. 欢乐多了; 减少了孤独感 2. 学会照顾人了；有利于培养合作精神。
反对 1. 占据时间; 没有时间进行自己的爱好2. 父母关爱少了；有时相处不好会导致矛盾。
你的观点 ……(至少两点)
Last week our class held a class meeting about“Would you like a younger brother or sister ’’.Every student expressed his opinion.
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【参考范文】
Last week our class held a class meeting about “Would you like a younger brother or sister ’’ .Every student expressed his opinion.
Some students welcome a younger brother or sister. With a little child around, we may have great fun seeing their pretty faces or meeting many funny situations, which will make our lives full of joy. It can also make us feel less lonely. Besides it is important for us teenagers to learn to take care of a little child. It can help us work closely with each other.
However, some other students don’t think so. They think it will take us much time to look after her or him. As a result, we won’t have enough time for our hobbies. What’ s more, parents may spare more time and love to the younger. Sometimes, if we can’t get along well with the younger, we may quarrel with them.
In my opinion, I ‘d like to have a younger brother or sister. It’s wonderful to grow up with a brother or sister together. We may share our happiness and sadness with each other. Moreover, when our parents get older, they can live a better life with two children to support them.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。就国家2015年颁布的全面开放二孩的政策，上周你班就“你需要一个弟弟或妹妹吗？”开了一个班会，同学们各抒己见。根据表格中提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，投给校报。本文时态主要用一般现在时辅以一般过去时，人称主要用第一、三人称。在写作时注意文章所给出的提示要点，“赞成的、反对的”给出的要点比较具体，学生需要用正确的英语准确的表达出来；最后在表达自己的观点时，要发挥想象力，使文章更加的丰富、充实。注意上下文的意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系；句与句、段与段之间的过渡要平稳、自然流畅；要灵活运用自己熟悉的高级词句，以提高文章的档次；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child.
In my opinion, I’d like to have a younger brother or sister.
It’s wonderful to grow up with a brother or sister together.
Moreover, when our parents get older, they can live a better life with two children to support them.
It can help us work closely with each other.
Sometimes, if we can’t get along well with the younger, we may quarrel with them.
Besides it is important for us teenagers to learn to take care of a little child.
I think it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with.
it makes no differences to them whether they will have a younger sibling or not.
I want to grow up with him or her happily.
The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy.
They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents.
They think it will give more happiness to the family.
They can look after each other. And they can’t feel lonely.
I think two-child policy is good.
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（一）
随着国家二胎政策的实行，二胎问题成为了时下热议的社会话题。有些同学赞成生二胎，因为作为独生子女在成长过程中，一个人感觉比较孤单。而另一些人则有不同的看法，认为有了二胎，父母需要赚更多的钱，会很辛苦。那么，你的观点是什么呢？请就此话题，写一篇短文，阐述自己的观点，你是赞成还是不赞成父母生二胎呢？至少写出两点原因。
要求：
1. 词数80-120。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名，学校名。
参考词汇：two-child policy 二胎政策
My view on two-child policy
【参考范文】
My view on two-child policy
First of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child. For some families, maybe the parents are only child and they also can have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginably heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples. Usually, a young couple looking after an old couple is a little difficult; if the pressure increases twice, how can they stand it. But if their parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better.
Secondly, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population. As the widely spread of one-child policy, some people have changed their conception about giving birth. If they firmly believe one-child policy, there will be more and more the dink. After several decades, our country will famous for lack of population.
In conclusion, one-child policy has out of date. And two-child policy is needed and necessary. It can solve the problem of nowadays and the future.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们对现在国家实行的二胎政策提出自己的看法，短文的题目就是My view on Two-child Policy。这是一篇话题类的作文，题目中只给出了二胎这一话题，具体的写作内容需要学生自己发挥想象力去完成，这对于学生们来说是一个难点，短文写什么，从哪个方面写，如何组织语言，这就要考查学生的英语功底了。另外写作的时候，还要注意写作的层次，内容要有条理，不能杂乱无章。首先点明自己的观点，再讲述自己的理由。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称来叙述，要注意正确使用动词的形式，注意主谓一致的问题。同时写作的时候，可以使用一些短语和句型，使上下文意连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目的要求对于国家实行的二胎政策提出了自己的观点。整篇短文的内容完整，结构清晰。作者主要从两个方面阐述了自己的理由，第一个理由中使用的句型有Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy.、if the pressure increasing twice, how can they stand it. But if their parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents。第二个理由Secondly, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population、If they firmly believe one-child policy, there will be more and more the dink等。
（二）
假如你是初中生李华，在家是独生子女，国家开放二孩政策后，你的父母想再生一个孩子，征求你的意见。恰好你的美国笔友Peter来信询问我国的二孩政策。请你给他回一封信，内容要点如下：
1. 简单解释国家的二孩政策；
2. 得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；
3. 征求Peter的看法。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入字数。
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.__________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.
The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family is allowed to have two children. Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me. Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have to share everything with him or her. Most importantly, what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child
Do you have similar problems What’s your opinion about this
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的外国笔友Peter写信，内容是关于我们国家的二胎政策。通过审题可知，短文中应主要包括以下内容：首先给Peter介绍我们国家的二胎政策；然后说明自己的父母想要二胎以及自己的想法；最后向Peter征求意见。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，串联成文。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，并注意句式的完整，不要残缺成分。根据题目要求列出写作要点，然后罗列出需要用到的单词和句型，用简单句的句式先表达出来。然后为提升文章档次，改变几个较高级的词汇和复杂句式，如复合句、非谓语动词等。同时需要注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使全文意思连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整充实，作者根据题目中的提纲，解释了我们国家的二胎政策以及自己的父母打算要二胎之后自己的想法。文章结构清晰，叙述清楚、明了，语言得体。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称为主，时态主要是一般现在时。谓语动词形式准确，用法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中以简单句为主，也使用了一些较高级的句型，如The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family is allowed to have two children.，这是一个长句，使用了句型plan to do sth.，change …into…，以及现在分词作状语、被动语态等。再如Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me. 中使用了非限制性定语从句；Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have to share everything with him or her.使用了让步状语从句等。这些句型的使用提升了文章的档次和水平。
（三）
国家现在放开了二胎政策，很多人认为有一个兄弟姐妹很好，你认为呢？根据提示写一篇短文。
1．父母要花费更多时间和金钱，两个孩子会生气打闹；
2．有玩伴，不孤独，学会照顾别人，学会分享等；
3．……
注意：70词左右；短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
I am the only child in my family. I can get everything I want. If I have a sister or brother, my parents won’t spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life. Two children may make noise at home. But children can learn to share something with others. They can look after each other. And they won’t feel lonely. Anyway, I think two-child policy is good.
【解析】
本文属于话题作文，表达针对国家开放二胎政策不同的人不同的观点，并阐述自己的观点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯、符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如spend with、make noise、share...with...、look after、anyway以及“If I have a sister or brother, my parents won’t spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life”中if引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，即“主将从现”原则，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯、用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如spend with、make noise、share...with...、look after以及“If I have a sister or brother, my parents won’t spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life”等；然后紧扣要点、动笔写作。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词等，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，例如if和anyway。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（四）
国家开放二胎政策后，很多家庭都可能有新的成员加入，那我们的生活会怎样呢？你会为家里做些什么？假设你现在是家里唯一的孩子，请以“If I Have a New Brother or Sister”为题，阐述你的想法和理由。
If you have a new brother or sister How will you feel Reasons
What do you want to say to your parents
What will you do for your family/younger brother (sister) ...
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注意：（1）开头部分已写好，只需接着写即可；（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；（3）所写内容必须包括表格中的各项内容，并至少写两条理由；（4）词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
If I have a new brother or sister
I think my life will be different if I have a new brother or sister.___________________________________
【参考范文】
If I have a new brother or sister
I think my life will be different if I have a new brother or sister. I’ll be very happy. Because I’ll have a younger brother/sister to play with and talk with. I want to say thanks to my parents. I will do something for my family. At weekends, I’ll help my mum do some housework, such as cleaning the room and sweeping the floor. I’ll learn to look after myself. Because my parents are too busy to look after both of us. After my younger brother or sister is born, I’ll help my mother look after him/her. When I am free, I’ll take him/her for a walk and play with him/her. And I’ll help him/her with his/her study when he/she is old enough to go to school.
In a word, I’m getting ready for the coming of my younger brother/sister.
【解析】
这是一篇要求介绍自己如果有个弟弟或妹妹会是什么样的作文。现在在开放二胎政策以后，第一个孩子如何和自己的弟弟妹妹相处是一个明显的问题，第一个孩子应该理解父母，并且帮助父母照顾弟弟妹妹。
【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍自己如果有个弟弟或妹妹会是什么样的作文。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般将来时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。在帮助父母方面可以做家务，也可以带弟弟妹妹出去玩，I’ll help my mum do some housework, such as cleaning the room and sweeping the floor.此句用的结构式help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事，以及such as结构。

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