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读后续写技能（二）
句型：
1、主语 + 动词A ,动词B，and 动词C
2、2.With + N. + doing, 主+谓
肢体
语言
心理
说、叫
murmur 低声说
stammer/stutter 口吃、结巴
howl （动物）嗥叫、大声叫喊
scold 训斥、责骂
whisper 小声说
add 补充说、继续说
sob 呜咽着说
总结：关于“说”的动词
1.whisper 低声说；耳语
2.announce 宣布；宣告
3.explain 解释
4.apologize 道歉
5.complain 抱怨
6.roar 吼叫
7.interrupt 打断说
8.respond 回应
9.sigh 叹息
10.scream 尖叫
11.mutter/ murmur 嘀咕
12.shout / yell 喊叫
1. Rose_________(murmur) a thank you and ran home shyly all the way. Rose低声说了一句谢谢，然后一路跑回家.
2. “Time to go.” _______________________ (我小声对女孩说）and wished she could follow me right away.
3. Ben 看着妈妈的眼睛，结结巴巴地道歉，希望她能再给他一次机会。
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murmured
I whispered to the girl
Ben stared at his mon's eyes, stammered out an apology and hoped that she could give him one more chance.
With his eyes staring at his mom's eyes, Ben stammered out an apology and hoped that she could give him one more chance.
But the big man ______________ and shake hysterically and didn't respond.
但是，这个大男人仍在歇斯底里地呜咽发抖，根本不回应。
他嚎叫着跳了起来。
他一声怒号，抓起一个破瓶子的瓶颈向前走去。
continued to sob
He sprang up with a howl.
With a howl of rage, he grabbed the neck of a broken bottle and advanced.
看
gaze at 凝视、注视 （吃惊、爱恋、深思）
stare at 凝视、注视（吃惊、害怕、深思）
glare at 怒目而视
peek at 窥视、偷看
glance at 匆匆一眼、扫视
notice 注意到
She walked slowly down this place and __________ the faces which also seemed to stare at her.
她慢慢地走过这个地方，注视着那些似乎也在注视着她的面孔。
他打开2号公寓的门锁，瞥了拉里一眼, 走进去就不见了。
stared at
He unlocked the door of apartment two, glanced at Larry and disappeared inside .
1. 这小女孩凝视着那个美丽的洋娃娃，一把抓住她妈妈的手，大步走进了商店。
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2. 从帷幕后面窥视了一下观众，她轻拍脸颊对自己小声说冷静下来。
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The little girl gazed at the beautiful doll,clutched her mon's hand immediately and strided into the shop.
She peeked at the audience from behind the curtain and whispered to herself “Calm down”.
Summary
构造动作链：
单一动作jpg.→一连串动作gif.
1.动词A，动词B and 动词C
2.Having done
构造动作面：
多角度描写
1.doing+谓语动词+doing
2.done+谓语动词+doing
3.with +宾语+非谓语动词
How to describe an action vividly
真题练习
Writing
解题思路
原文要素 Key information（关键信息）
1. Who were the main characters in the story
2. When did the happen
3. Where did the story happen
4. What did the writer want to do
5. What happened finally Why
6. What are the main idea of this story
7.找出原文中的细节描写 （场景、动作、心理、修辞、对话）






Step I 精读文章，搞清思路
My dad, Uncle Paul and I
One summer
On the Uncle Paul’s farm house in New Mexico.
He wanted to take a horse ride in the wild.
One summer, at Uncle Paul’s farm house, the writer took a horse ride in the wild. By chance, he came across a little rabbit and got lost because it was getting dark.
He came across a little rabbit and got lost because it was getting dark.
场景描写
动作描写
修辞描写
对话描写
心理描写
1. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.
2. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.
My dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.
I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
“Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back.
Step II 回扣原文，设计剧情
第一段 情节续写 情节点
情节发展
情节1
情节2
情节3
其他情节
Seeing the running rabbit, what was the writer or the horse’s feeling
How did the writer or the horse react to the rabbit
3. What happened surprisingly
4. What was the writer’s feelings at that time
5. How did the writer’s father react to the writer’s situation
6. How did they get lost
7. What was their feelings about being lost
…
第二段 情节续写 情节点
情节发展
情节1
情节2
情节3
其他情节
When they got lost, what was their feeling
What difficulties did they meet
3. What ideas flashed into their mind
4. How did they feel What did they do
5. How did they successfully go back to Uncle Paul’s house
6. How could paragraph two end reasonably
…
Possible version.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to run after it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest我们在森林里完全迷路了. （动作描写）There was nothing left in our sight but the trees.除了树木，我们什么也没看见.（环境描写） “We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. （对话描写---内心独白）After a series of useless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.（动作描写、心理描写）
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. （动作描写） And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. （环境描写）I was almost breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” （对话描写）Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say不用说, we ate a late dinner. （动作描写）
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It was so cute and I just rode after it without hesitation, hoping to catch it and make friends with it. My dad followed me immediately, knowing that I wouldn't give up until I got it. Alarmed, the rabbit ran away in a flash. We tracked it down into a forest, completely off the road. After a while, we realized we got lost in theforest. I clutched the rein tightly and stammered, “Dad, I think we get lost.” Because there was nothing left in our sight but the trees.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Depressed and tired,we stopped at where we were and tried to find a way out. Tears of fear and regret rolling down my cheeks, I cried,"Sorry, Dad, I shouldn't have been losing my head.”"Don't worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home." Dad replied, in a soft tone.Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.

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