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(共15张PPT)
After twenty years
Continuation writing
After learning, you are expected to be able to:
Acquire and state the plots, characters and style of the story.
Add an ending under the principle of agreements.
Appreciate the true meaning of friendship.
Learning objectives
Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles ””
“Oh,yes...but I don’t have money on me,” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I'll treat you today,” said the man.
“Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.
“What is it ” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!”said Jenny. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!”
Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you Have you expressed your gratitude to her ”
Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered Mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”
On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
Paragraph 1
Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.______________________________
Paragraph 2
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._______________________________
Task : a continuation(续写) of the story (150 words)
Read what happened ____in__ the story
Write what happened ______ the story
Paragraph 1
Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
after
Lead in
After this semester, will you choose physics or history
Will you choose the same subject with your deskmate
Three years later, you may be in different universities. Will you still be friends
If he/she fails to go to university, will you still be friends
What do you focus on when reading a story
1st Reading: reading settings
Tip: A story usually has its settings at the beginning.
Settings
Who
Where
When
2nd Reading: reading plots
What happened to the man and Jimmy
beginning
then
now



3rd Reading: reading characters
How was their relationship
best friends
lost contact
meet
They dined together and made an apointment.
The man went West while Jimmy stayed.
The man was waiting for Jimmy to come.
What: plot
How: feeling
3rd Reading: reading characters
The man
Jimmy
money chaser
went West for fortune

evidence
Quick summary
Principle of agreements
Core value:
Theme
Agreement of plots
Agreement of language & style
Agreement of characters
Pre-writing
What questions do you want to ask
Will Jimmy come
What will they say and do when they meet
What was the man doing in the past 20 years
What has Jimmy been doing in the past 20 years
Writing (10 min)
Finish the story with the help of the mind-map.
What: plot
How: feelings
What will the man and Jimmy do
Are they still friends
Reflection
What is real friendship
A true friendship is different from other kinds of friends or acquaintances because they possess certain qualities and take actions that stand them out consistently and make them real. The definition of a true friendship is someone who has your back, no matter what. They watch out for you and ensure you are not in danger.
There are a thousand Hamelets in a thousand people’s eyes. There may be a thousand endings for a thousand students, as long as it makes sense and is in agreement with the original text.
Conclusion
reading settings--plots--characters
content
who
when
where
what
why

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