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读后续写模板
一：Story mountain
读后续写主题：人与人，人与社会，人与自然
读后续写：5R解读故事即Read for characters/Read for conflict / problems/Read for plot/ Read for emotional changes:（when,what, where.who ）/Read for theme ；4句框架（如下）；3大原则（如下）；2条线（故事线和情感线）；1个主题（即最后升华主题）
二：四句步定框架：
写读后续写不同于写其它作文，有可能需要先倒着写的
Step 1: 先把最后一句写好，即：主题句
Step 2: 再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句：
Step 3: 紧接着两段的提示语句写角色的动作和情感：
三：接下来就是把每段的中间补充完整，记住三大原则：
1.Action—Response原则：角色A的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其它角色的一系列反应的。每段对话1-2句，不一定两个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种response。
2.Conflict—Solution原则：一般而言第二段会有问题的solution，
同时思考：能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点，另一方面也是给第二段铺垫。
3.Negative—Positive原则：写作中一定要体现情感的变化，无论前面是这样的变化，最终都是积极向上和正能量的。
四：细节描写的句子（不一定完全按照下面的思路来写，故事也不一定都会有矛盾或冲突，要灵活多变。）
第一段：故事线：问题或者矛盾冲突出现或者激化。
情感线：心理活动一般比较激动、吃惊、害怕、紧张、焦虑、失望、绝望等。
第1句分析第一句话中的人物、动作和情感词汇来判断下文的发展趋势。
第2-3句根据上文分析和第一句，问题或困难出现，经过努力仍然失败，一步一步陷于僵局。
（场景描写）我看到、听到、闻到、发现什么？然后做了什么？（动作神态描写：身体的各个器官如手、胳膊、腿、眼、脸等肢体语言。如果有几个动作时一定要用非谓语。）
1. I was immersed in沉浸在the fragrant （芳香的）flowers, which were a feast for my eyes（大饱眼福）.
2. The soft breeze（微风）, chirping birds（叽叽喳喳的鸟儿） and swaying （摇曳的）branches kept me spellbound让我入迷 all the way.
3. The beautiful scenery was so impressive that it was beyond my description（无法形容）.
4. At one point（曾经、一度）, we were so curious that we found ourselves fascinated （不知不觉地被迷住）by the spectacular（壮丽的） scenery.
5. She fell into fear（陷于恐慌）, looking around the surroundings环境. Countless trees and strange sounds added fear to her mind.（12月月考）
6. All she could see was the birds’ flying and river’s flowing. （12月月考）
7. When I saw what was in the bag, I was overcome with 感到a mixture of respect and gratefulness.(21年八省)
8. Seeing his smiles, I was overwhelmed with（充满） joy.
9. Everyone laughed and sang, and before long, the airport was in sight(映入眼帘).
10. The sun began to set , and the night was quickly approaching/drew near（来临）.
11. The sun was rising from the east, whose light brightened her tears like a diamond使她的眼泪像钻石一样闪闪发光.
12. Closing my eyes, I lay silently on my bed with comfort, buried in thought陷于沉思.
13. I was buried in /occupied in/absorbed in /devoted to/focused on /immersed in 沉浸于doing sth（在原文中找相关的词） when suddenly the accident （用原文中的词替换）happened.
14. A storm/wave/flood of 一阵applause/panic/fear followed his speech.（全品P64）
仿写A storm/wave/flood /glow of 一阵fear/surprise/warmth/excitement/disappointment arose in my mind.
15. Time passed quickly and three weeks went by before we knew it.（不知不觉地）
16. Suddenly, a complete silence fell over the classroom. 突然教室里一片寂静。（2月月考作文范文）
17. My eyes went wide open. 我的眼睛睁得大大的（2月月考作文范文 ）
18. But dark clouds were building up（聚集）, a storm was coming near. A heavy rain which was accompanied with（伴有） thunder and lightning was pouring down（倾盆而下）.
动作神态和情感交融的经典结构。
1. As soon as the ship starts moving, I begin to feel sick（作呕）.（全品P274）
2. She came up and glared at （怒视）me silently with an angry expressions on her face.（全品P274）
3. He let out a long sigh（叹息）, mainly of relief, partly of sadness.（全品P274）
4. She opened her eyes and looked up at me with curiosity and hopefulness. （全品P274）
5. She raised her head to see off （送行）her son, her eyes filled with tears（独立主格）. （全品P64）
6. Uncle Hal looked blank（看起来很茫然） for a moment. Then his face lit up（面露喜色）（全品P64）
7. She raised her head to see off 送行her son, her eyes filled with tears.（全品P64）
8. She tried to concentrate, but found her mind drifting back to Alex.（全品P64）
9. I enjoyed myself at the party last night because I had never been to a more exciting one before.（全品P63）
10. My muscles were aching and my knees shaking as we dragged ourselves down the mountain towards home. （课本原句） （可用于体育运动、户外活动如远足和探险活动中）
11. Inspired by his advice, I walked towards the classroom, determined lo make a change.（2月月考范文）
12. My boss was sitting in his chair with a hardened face（板着脸）, gazing at me long and hard. （恨恨地盯着我看了很长时间）（2月月考作文范文）
V-ed/V-ing/adj/介词短语/独立主格, 主语+谓语动词+宾语+介词短语/副词，V-ed/V-ing。（在原文中找相关的词填写，特别是动词，形容词和副词及介词短语）
介词短语
1. Without hesitation, I dashed for/dashed into/headed for /rushed into/jumped into/jumped off/onto/ slipped /slid out of/struggled to my feet/dragged my feet/ran after the thief as soon as possible, trying to/hoping to catch him, but in vain/without success.
2. At the sound of competition, she could feel her legs shaking and her heart beating fast.
3. At the sight /thought/sound of the scene/On hearing the sound or news , I could feel my legs shaking slightly and my heart beating fast.
V-ed
1. Driven /overcome by curiosity, the boy looked through the window.
2 .Deeply impressed by his inspiring words, I decided to cooperate with him.（全品P75）
Deeply moved by her performance, the whole audience gasped 喘息with admiration(赞叹).
4. Deeply moved by his story, many young people began to do volunteer work for the disabled.
5. Affected with （被感染上）a serous disease, he was no longer able to speak clearly and he knew there was no hope of recovery.（全品P45）
6. Driven by curiosity=Out of curiosity=My curiosity was too strong to resist, I crawled back up the bank.
V-ing
1. Knowing /(On) hearing that the film stars are her favourite actress, she can’t wait to see the film.
2. Hearing the general manager’s explanation, he had a puzzled expression on his face.（全品P71）
3. Sensing that his master couldn’t be weaker, he determined to find out way out.
4. Judging from his body language/the serious situation/what he said, I dashed into the river desperately/without hesitation, trying to save the drowning boy.
5. I wandered aimlessly （漫无目的地）and leisurely（悠闲地） in the park, feeling very refreshed（神清气爽）.
6. She clutched（抓住） the dress, feeling nervous and terrified.
7. Taking a deep breath, Mary pushed open the door and stepped inside.（全品P78）
8. He lay there for a long time, shivering/trembling with fear（害怕得发抖）.（全品P78）
9.Wang Peng sat in his empty restaurant, feeling very frustrated.（Book3 unit2）
10. When I saw the picture on the wall, many sweet memories came crowding/running/flying/ speeding/dashing/rushing/crashing/pouring in my mind. （涌上心头） (V-ing作方式状语)（全品P82）
11. The audience jumped to their feet, clapping, cheering and waving their hats.（全品P49 有翻译）
12. For more than an hour, Beethoven jumped about in front of the orchestra, waving his arms wildly in the air, and madly turning the pages of his scores.（全品P49 有翻译）
13. He came in, dragging his three children behind him.（全品P43）
14. Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I found every cell in my body woke up and my heartbeat sped up.
With复合结构和独立主格结构
1. Weather/Time/Circumstances/Condition permitting, ------
2. Time ticking/going by（时间流逝，独立主格结构）, they followed the path of the river, brightness coming out.
3. When he came to himself, he found himself sitting in a chair, with his hands tied back.（全品P277）
From then on, I walked to school with my head held high and back straight. 高昂着头，腰部挺直
4. The students seemed to be expecting another boring and dull English lesson, some dropping their eyes and some whispering in the back rows. （2月月考作文范文 ）
5. As the bell rang, I stood on the platform, eyes wandering across（环顾） the classroom. （2月月考范文）
6. Everything taken into consideration/account, the plan he put forward seems to be workable. （全品106）
7. His ankle injured badly, (虽然他的脚踝严重受伤)，he struggled to his feet at once and finished his performance successfully.
8. Wu Dajing burst at full speed across（全速跨过） the finish line, the thunderous cheers erupting （爆发出雷鸣般的欢呼声）in the gymnasium.
9. Gu Ailing jumped into the top position with her third run scoring 94.50, her eyes sparkling with confidence and happiness.(她的眼睛里闪烁着自信和快乐).
10. He thanked again and again, raising his thumbs up /with his thumbs up.（竖起大拇指）
11. Roses given,（独立主格） fragrance in hand. 给予人玫瑰手留余香。
三种特殊的独立结构
①现在分词型:generally speaking一般来说; frankly speaking 坦率地说; judging from据..判断
②不定式型:to be honest诚实地说; to tell you the truth 和你说实话吧; to make the matter worse情况更糟的是
③介词或连词型:considering prep.考虑到，就----而言; given (that) conj. 如果，假设;provided/providing (that) conj.如果,假设
说的表达（两段都可以用的句子）：
He said/replied/answered/sighed叹息/questioned/inquired询问/whispered/responded/explained/spoke/murmured咕哝、低语stated陈述/uttered说 with a curious/shocked/amazed/astonished/ surprised/upset/confused/annoyed/puzzled/disappointed/scared/terrified/dissatisfied/exhausted look/face, burying his face with his hands.
2.Every time I did, I got tongue-tied（舌头被系住了即说不出话来）.
第4句 感到什么？（一般是负面的情绪）为什么？（表情及心境感悟描写。）
She could hardly contain （抑制）herself with delight/excitement/joy/sadness/anger/surprise/shock/amazement/astonishment/satisfaction/upset/confusion/annoyance/puzzlement/disappointment/scare/terror/dissatisfaction/exhaustion/with great panic /with nervousness/regret when she opened the parcel.（全品P45）
To one’s delight/excitement/joy/sadness/happiness/surprise/shock/amazement/astonishment/satisfaction/confusion/annoyance/disappointment/dissatisfaction/regret,-------------（喜怒哀乐的名词）
2. A mixed feeling （复杂的情感）of anger, hunger and sadness broke out at the split time（立刻）.
3. It was long before I came to myself/before I recovered（过了很久我才晃过神来）.
4. I was in a daze（愣住了） for quite a long time before I recovered.
5. I stood there, numb with shock/anger/horror/fear/anxiety/, speechless, not believing my eyes/ears.
6 .This/It/That was a time when I was at a loss/at sea/desperate（不知所措、茫然、绝望）
7. My mind was all confused and my chest was burning.我的心乱极了，我胸口要冒火。
8. My heart skipped a beat （停止跳动）the moment I heard the news.
9. A wave of panic went across my mind the moment I smelt the dangerous gas.
10. At that moment, we were too amazed to hear her response and her father hugged her tightly.
11. I burst into tears because a wide disappointment/fear/horror/ a sense of failure/took hold of me.（Tom 感到很失望) .
12. About an hour later, Jenny felt a sense of exhaustion surging through（涌入） her whole body.
13. Nothing good floated in her mind. 不祥之兆在她脑海里浮现。
14. A flood/wave/storm of fear and regret welled up in her heart. Deadly silence swallowed /took hold of her thoroughly.（死气沉沉的宁静彻底吞噬了她）（12月月考）
15. She wandered aimlessly without knowing what to do next. Thirsty, hunger and cold surrounded her toughly（无情地）（12月月考）
16. She was lost in sadness and fear.（双名词）
17. In fact, I was at a loss what they will do with the problem. 不知所措（全品P41）
18. Suddenly the captain exploded/erupted with rage. 勃然大怒（全品P102）
19. Knowing she was going to announce the exam results, I was overwhelmed with/by（充满）a flood/wave/storm of fear.（一阵恐惧）
片段描写（背诵） 请你描写你的心情:当上课铃声响，老师抱着试卷进入教室，准备公布考试成绩……
When the bell rang, the teacher came into the classroom with the test paper in her arms. Knowing she was going to announce the exam results, I was overwhelmed by a flood of fear. I held my breath , my legs starting to shake（独立主格）, feeling like sitting on pins and needles（非谓语：如坐针毡）. Afraid of（形容词作原因状语） falling behind others, I thought to myself, “How will my parents react to my grades if I failed Will my classmates look down upon （瞧不起）me （心理活动） If only（要是 ）I had spent adequate time and energy on study!”（虚拟语气） On hearing（非谓语：一 ---就） my name called on the list of the passing grades, I breathed a sigh of relief（松了一口气），beaming（发出，射出） with great joy（喜笑颜开）.
倒装句
1. So surprised and touched was I that words almost failed me. (2021年1月八省联考)
2. So nervous was I that my mind went blank.
3. Exhausted as he was, he rose to his feet with effort，running as fast as he could.
4. Frightened and exhausted as she was, she reminded herself constantly that she should live up to Naida’s efforts.（12月月考）
5. So complex was her feeling that she was too scared to move an inch forward.
6. Tough as the process was（虽然过程很艰难）, she persisted on（坚持） it desperately（不顾一切地、拼命地）.
7. So absorbed was the bear cub（幼崽） in playing that it wasn’t aware that someone was approaching.
第5句 然后对方说了什么？（对话描写）做了什么？（动作描写：有几个动作时一定要用非谓语。）感到什么？（表情及心理活动描写）
动作神态和情感交融的经典结构。
V-ed/V-ing/adj/介词短语/独立主格,， 主语+谓语动词+宾语+介词短语/副词，V-ed/V-ing。
1. (On )Hearing what she said, we feel relieved/worried/upset/angry/upset/sad/happy/an urge to cry/laugh/cheer/.
2. “That’s it.”said/nodded/sighed/smiled/waved the teacher with a shocked/amazed//worried/ satisfied/ look/face/expression.
3. “-------”, Jack asked/said with anxiety/horror/satisfaction/anger/worry/smile/happiness/in relief.
4. She cast（投） a welcoming smile in my direction, nodding with approval/appreciation.
5. He said, “I will do all I can to help you ,but you must get prepared to meet all kinds of difficulties.” “you should never give up hope, even in the face of a seemingly hopeless situation(即使看似身处绝境).”
6. Dad recommended buying a new one, while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly, so it’s unwise to give up the tent.”2017年11月浙江卷
7. She said, “I couldn’t have you speaking to your mother in a rude manner.”（全品P63）
对话描写
1. During their meeting, Compean thanked Kuo in a trembling voice, “Thank you very much. Without you, I wouldn’t have survived. I owe my life to you. ” “It’s not a big deal. I just do what I want to do. You know that I like exploring where photos are taken ,” said Kuo with a comforting smile spreading across his face.
动作描写
1. fled away with great panic. 害怕地逃跑了
2. rushed out of the door
3. slipped /sneaked out of the house 溜出了房子
4. paced the room nervously.不安地踱来踱去
5. strolled in the sunshine漫步于阳光下
6. wandered aimlessly around the streets大街上漫无目的地到处游荡
7. He stormed out of the house（气冲冲地夺门而出）, slamming（碰地关上） the door as he went.8. He studied the man’s faces carefully, trying to work out who was lying. （全品P274）
9. He had attempt to rescue the drowning man.（全品P271）
10. She went to her daughter and hugged her tightly. （全品P83）
11. She broke down （失声痛苦）when she heard the news, but quickly recovered（恢复平静）. （P72）
12. She went over and put her arms around him（搂住他） .（全品P73）
13. She pretended to be listening, but actually her mind had already wandered far away. （全品P51）
14. He tried hard to hold herself in and pretended not to have heard the news. （全品P51）
15. She dipped into her purse and took out some coins. （全品P43）
16. At this, he students got stirred up. （被激发）（2月月考作文范文 ）
17. Each lifted his head and cast me a puzzled look. 向我投来疑惑的表情、目光（2月月考作文范文 ）
第6句 有时候情况可能进一步恶化
1.What’s worse/To make things worse/Worse still/Even worse, I got my cellphone lost.
2. I have reached a stage where I have almost no confidence at all/I have almost lost heart/given myself up.
3. I suffered a lot/loss/defeat/injury/punishment from this trouble/accident/disaster/a heart attack(用原文中的词替换).
4. I had a sinking feeling（颓丧；难受） inside as I realized I was going to fail yet again.（作业手册P256）
5. Without doubt these rumours/words/actions/expressions added further fuel to the flames(火上浇油).
6. I tried again, but still in vain/ended up in failure, and I was almost in the depths of despair, wanting to give myself up/crying desperately.
7. Faced with the horror/fear/despair/disappointment/trouble/problem/challenge/danger, I tried to keep calm while my mind was racing/went blank, not knowing what to do next.
8. We had no trouble setting up our tent, but we were disappointed to find that Mom forgot to pack up pillows枕头. Needless to say（不要说）, we all woke up with a sore疼痛的 neck the next morning.
9. All sorts of nightmare （梦魇般的、可怕的）pictures came to my mind/head.（全品P74）
10. I was frozen up （惊呆了）---I couldn’t move. But my mind was suddenly clear as an ice cube.
第7句面对不利条件，然后我又做了什么？可以用表示坚持、决心、毅力等这样的句子。（动作描写：有几个动作时一定要用非谓语。）感到什么？为什么？（表情及心理活动描写，最好多用虚拟语气。）
1. We must carry on till success in spite of the extremely difficult conditions.
2. I reached the gas can, twisted the knob to close it，lifting it to an upright position.
3. Every time she wanted to give herself up, at the thought of the scene where she reached the winner’s platform，she felt refreshed.
虚拟语气
1. I thought to myself, “If I had followed my mother’s advice/the class rules, I would not have been trapped/caught/stuck in trouble.”
2. Without your help, I would have failed the exam last week.
3. If only I had followed my mother’s advice.
4. I shouldn’t have laid a fragile vase at an inappropriate place, especially when there is a boy so absorbed in sports.”
5. We would have won, if Jack had scored that goal./if we’d had just a few more minutes./if Ben had passed the ball to Joe./if I hadn’t taken my eyes off the ball./if we hadn’t taken it easy./ if we hadn’t run out of energy./if we’d had thousands of fans screaming./if we had trained hard.（来自课文）
6. I thought to myself, “If I had followed my mother’s advice/the class rules, I would not have been trapped/caught/stuck in trouble.”
7. If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.(2017年11月浙江卷)
第8句 承上启下句，本句要延续上文还要与第二段第一句吻合。一般向好的方向发展。
1. I asked for my parent’s/teacher’s input/advice. 我征求父母或者老师的意见。
2. I tried almost all the possible means, determining to get it over or hoping to get it over, but in vain/ending up in failure.
3. I was going to give myself up when my mother came to my aid.
4. My mother patted my head, folding her arms around me（拥抱我）.
5. I threw myself to my mother’s arms.
6. But Michael was quiet through the entire explanation, and this put Paula off.
7. I could feel my legs shaking slightly and my heart beating fast. But I tied very hard to appear calm and strong.
8. Tears of regret filling the eyes, he quietly picked up the toy train and put it in the box.
9. Right then and there I opened my eyes, sat up, and decided tomorrow was a new day 三联动and no matter how the day played out, I was going to make it.
10. I shouldn’t have laid a fragile（易碎的） vase at an inappropriate 不合适的place, especially when there is a boy so absorbed in sports.”
11. I was determined to /made up my mind to solve the problem.
12. The sailors were about to give up when the captain encourage them to save the sinking ship.（全品P277）
13. I used all my strength/tremendous effort（九牛二虎之力） to recover it.
And it wasn’t long before they got the hang of 掌握using the machine to make popcorn（爆米花）.
14. Moments later, my head was finally released from this horrible pumpkin cage. （2021年1月浙江卷）
第二段；故事线：通过适当的方法将问题、困难、矛盾、冲突解决。一般是故事情节反转，即与第一段的发展趋势相反。情感线：心理活动一般比较缓和、高兴、满意等。
第1句 分析第一句话中的人物、动作和情感等关键词汇来判断下文的发展趋势。
第2句对方说了什么？（对话描写）做了什么？（动作描写：有几个动作时一定要用非谓语。）感到什么？（表情及心理活动描写）
想出问题的解决办法。动作神态和情感交融的经典结构。
V-ed/V-ing/adj, 主语+谓语动词+宾语+介词短语/副词，V-ed/V-ing。（在原文中找相关的词填写)
He carried the popcorn on his small bike, going from door to door to sell it. 2020年7月山东卷
第3句问题或困难得到解决的过程（动作情感描写）
1. Wang scratched his head（抓耳挠腮）and was lost in thought. Suddenly an idea flashed in his mind---why not set up a fundraising 募集资金的website to pay for Liu Xia’s hospital bill
2. I thought hard, trying to think of a suitable plan to work it out.
3. I was thinking hard when it occurred to/struck/hit me 我突然想到that I could use a suitable plan to work it out .
4. It dawned on me (我逐渐明白)that never should we underestimate（低估）the power of our actions.
5. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved（双形容词作主语补足语）.
第4-5句问题得到解决
对方说了什么？（对话描写）做了什么？（动作描写：有几个动作时一定要用非谓语。）感到什么？（表情及心理活动描写） 想出问题的解决办法。
动作神态和情感交融的经典结构。
V-ed/V-ing/adj/介词短语/独立主格,, 主语+谓语动词+宾语+介词短语/副词，V-ed/V-ing。（在原文中找相关的词填写，特别是动词，形容词和副词及介词短语）
1. The audience jumped to their feet, clapping, cheering and waving their hats.(全品P49)
2. After they finish their performance, applause thundered through the hall（掌声响彻整个大厅）.
3. Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “How grateful I am that you stopped to save me and I owe it to you that I’m still alive.”2017年6月浙江卷
4. Tom succeeded in his efforts to overcome his fatal weakness（致命弱点）.（全品P274）
5. After many trials and errors尝试和错误, he eventually made it.
第6句问题解决的感受（一般是正面的情绪）
1. No more happiness/delight/joy/sadness/anger/surprise/shock/amazement/astonishment/satisfaction/upset/confusion/annoyance/puzzlement/disappointment/scare/fear/terror/dissatisfaction/exhaustion could expressher feeling.
2. When I heard/seen/knew/realized---, I sang a different tune. 当我----，我转变了态度。
3. It’s a feast for eyes/ears/stomach.
4. Hearing this, her mother smiled and breathed a sigh of relief（松了一口气）, patting her back gently.
5. I regained my confidence, and a sense of achievement/ belonging/identity rose in my mind（涌上心头）.
6. I burst into cheers/laughter/burst out cheering/laughing, breathing a sigh of relief.
7.After a while, she breathed a sign of relief. She was firmly convinced that practice makes perfect.
8. To my delight and relief, there was nothing wrong with myself/my brother/----.
9. To my happiness/joy/delight/enjoyment/amusement/----- 可以转换为下面的句式。
10.Whatconvinced/pleased3/delighted/brightened4/amused/entertained4/benefited3/relieved/comforted7/calmed/satisfied4/impressed me most was that----
11. He held her firmly in his arms and she felt love from his father.
12. My muscles were aching and my knees shaking as we dragged ourselves down the mountain towards home.
13. It was a privilege to have spend a day with Tombe’s family.
14.With their joint efforts（共同的努力）, they had a good command of （精通）dance with her partner.
15.Fortunately, everything worked out all right in the end.
16. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” （2018年6月浙江卷）
17. On seeing（一见到） her mother, Karina took a deep breath in relief, which made every inch of her body（每一寸肌肤） relaxed. （12月月考）
18. Warm current of kindness flowing into their hearts, they chatted just like old friends.（21-22年质检）
19. Almost immediately, a warm glow of emotion rose inside me. 一阵暖意在我心中油然而生
20. A sense of satisfaction rose in my mind.
第7句要有正能量或者温暖结局
1. Words failed me （无法用语言表达）when I wanted to express my gratitude感激/sincerity诚意 to the rescue workers./when he offered me a large sum of money.
2. Words failed to convey my endless appreciation for-----.
3. Finally, his face expanded with a satisfied smile when he finished it.
4. Almie’s heart raced / Almie’s heart was beating fiercely/ wildly/violently and she was amazed by the beautiful clay bicycle . She felt more than just the desire to appreciate it but to keep it all the time ,
5. With tears in her eyes, she replied, " The bright/broad smile on her face shone like diamond.
6. By the amused and surprised look on her face, we knew that she was satisfied with the gift that we made for her.
7. In the end, with his wife’s encouragement and his determination, all his efforts finally paid off（得到回报）=were rewarded.（全品P54）
第8句 利用谚语、倒装、名词性从句、强调或感叹句升华主题。
倒装
1. Never did it hit/strike/occur to me that he should have forgotten our appointment completely. 我根本没有想到----（全品P82）
2. Not only have I been rewarded with fascinating（迷人的） scenery, but I have also enjoyed the harmony between human beings and nature.
3. Not only can it cultivate our tastes（陶冶情操）, but it also broaden our horizons.
4. Never will she forget the unforgettable experience /adventure and what she learned from the meaning experience.
5. It was not until a doctor came into the room that I realized that I was in hospital.
6. Only then did I realize the importance of confidence/teamwork/first aid/full preparations.
7. Only then did I realize the meaning of the truth/principle, ”Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever.” “Forgiving and accepting others will reward you with peace of mind (内心的宁静).” “Don’t judge someone by his/her appearance.” “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
8. This unforgettable experience made me realize only by learning to forgive others can we live in harmony with others.
9. So well did they perform that those who were watching burst into cheers.（全品P51）
强调
1. It was then that we realized that she was considerate and had grown up psychologically.
2. There is no doubt that it is teamwork that contributes to the satisfied result rather than a random phenomenon.
3. This unforgettable/extraordinary experience acts as a timely reminder（提醒物） for me whenever I am caught in trouble in the future.
4. It was this unforgettable /memorable （难忘的）experience that made me realize that only by teamwork/by working in a team can we win the competition.
5. It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. （2020年7月山东卷）
6. It turned out that people liked and forwarded it crazily on the Internet, only to make me an Internet celebrity/hit（网红）. （2021年1月浙江卷）
7. It was this unforgettable experience that made Jenny realize that nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. （世上无难事只怕有心人）
8. It was his inspiring speech that changed my life forever.（全品P240）
感叹句
1. What a kind and respectable family! They are a perfect example of what kindness really means. And I’m sure I will pay it forward. (2021年1月八省联考)
2. What a blessing福气 it is to have such an unforgettable experience!
3. What a touching scene it was---the whole family chatting together joyfully. （全品P240）
其他句型和结构
1. We feel responsibility for others and we are ready to build a community with a shared future for mankind.构建人类命运共同体
2. United we stand, divided we fall.团结就胜利，分裂就失败。
Together, individuals /teamwork can make a real difference. = Many hands make light work.众人拾柴火焰高。（来自选修六 unit4）
In the end, with their determination and teamwork, all their efforts finally paid off（得到回报）.
A is to B what C is to B A对B就像C对D一样（重要）
Inspiration is to us what water is to fish. Knowledge is to us what wings are to birds.
4. Determination/Confidence/Courage/Persistence/perseverance is to a man what water is to fish.
5. As the old saying goes, “Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind on it.”（世上无难事只怕有心人）
6. Give others roses and fragrance will remain in your hands. =Roses given,（独立主格） fragrance in hand. 给予人玫瑰手留余香。
7. The good deed the foreign family did will never escape me. I am going to pass it down to create a much friendlier world.(2021年1月八省联考)
8. We all arrived at grandparents’ home safe and sound（安然无恙，主语补足语）. （17年11月浙江）
9. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate again. 2017年6月浙江卷
10. As Mac got injured, the three men had to give up the rest of their journey and returned home.（17浙江）
11. Happiness comes from with your heart, not from your surroundings. （全品P75）
12. Laughter is a uniquely effective tool to engage audiences of all ages and cultures.（ 质检1阅读D篇）
13. It is one of the most rewarding and life-changing things you can do in your spare time.（ 质检1D篇）
名词性从句
主语从句
1. As he talked about his schooldays, it suddenly clicked（恍然大悟） where I had met him before.
2. It suddenly hit/struck/occurred to me that---- 突然明白--
3.It dawned on me that-------我逐渐明白------
2. It crossed 闪过/flashed into /came to my mind yesterday that -----
3. It is clear/obvious/evident/strange/ possible/unbelievable/------that--------
4. It is believed/known /reported /said/suggested----/ that-------
5. It is widely accepted that fresh air and clean drinking water are of great benefit to people’s health.
6. It is not long before I realized the importance of first aid/---/ .（不久就------）
同位语从句
1. I hold the belief that----- 2. There is no chance/possibility that-------
背诵3. There is no doubt that it is human’s activities that have caused the global warming rather than a random but natural phenomenon.（同位语从句，来自课文。）
宾语从句
Don’t take it for granted that money means everything. （全品P237）
He is never satisfied with what he has achieved.（全品P238）
表语从句
The reason why -----is/was---that------
This is what my father has taught me--- to always face difficulties and hope for the best.（全品P238）
状语从句
No matter what happens, the most important thing is to keep cool. （全品P67）
形容词和副词可以起到四两拨千斤的作用
双形容词做状或补足语
1. Exhausted but excited, Karina tired to recognize the prints and follow them.（12月月考）
2. Exhausted and hungry as she was, she struggled to her feet with effort, continuing searching for help.
3. Hungry and cold, Karina trembled with great fear.（12月月考）
4. Finally, she and her dog made it to return home, safe and sound（安然无恙）.（12月月考）
5. She held the belief that she shouldn’t give it up.
6. Desperate and hopeless(无比绝望), Mark knelt down, tears streaming down his face（独立主格结构）.
7. Anxious and ashamed, I said nothing, wondering if he would fire me right away. （2月月考作文范文）
形容词
Sorrowful endless, emotional, flexible, aggressive, allergic过敏的, ridiculous, vital至关重要的是， unbearable, guilty, impressive令人赞叹的attractive greedy, optimistic, enthusiastic, cautious , awkward, fantastic极好的,various, advanced先进的，curious, respectful恭敬的、表敬意的, challenging misleading(有误导性的) missing(失踪的；丢失的)humorous breathless, careless, hopeless, endless, considerate=thoughtful体贴的
interesting/ interested exciting/excited amusing/ amused charming/ charmed disappointing/ disappointed astonishing / astonished encouraging/encouraged
surprising /surprised confusing/confused puzzling/ puzzled boring/ bored
amazing/ amazed worrying/ worried satisfying/ satisfied tiring / tired
exhausting/ exhausted（精疲力竭的） thrilling/thrilled（刺激的） entertaining/ entertained（愉快的） moving/ moved = touching/ touched（触动的） inspiring / inspired shocking/ shocked frightening/ frightened discouraging/ discouraged（感到沮丧的） pleasing/ pleased convincing（有说服力的）/ convinced depressing/depressed（抑郁的）
He wore（面带） a/an interested/excited/amused/disappointed/astonished/confused/surprised/puzzled/bored/amazed/worried /satisfied/tired/exhausted/thrilled/entertained/moved/touched/inspired/shocked/frightened/discouraged//pleased/convinced/depressed/ look or expression （表情）on his face.
可以改为With a/an interested/excited/amused/disappointed/astonished/confused/surprised/puzzled/bored/amazed/worried /satisfied/tired/exhausted/thrilled/entertained/moved/touched/inspired/shocked/frightened/discouraged//pleased/convinced/depressed/ look or expression （表情）on his face.
副词
情感副词angrily, comfortably， horribly, terribly，excitedly worriedly genuinely真实地 faithfully忠实地, loyally忠诚地, frankly 率直地; 坦白地 honestly /诚实地，老实地truly 真正地 unknowingly 不知不觉地，无意中 firmly 坚定地anxiously 焦急地 carelessly 粗心大意地,不小心地 patiently 有耐心地 surprisingly, mentally精神上, psychologically心理上, physically身体上,amazingly,warmly, excitedly 兴奋地,激动地 curiously好奇地 worriedly 焦急地; 焦虑地 cautiously小心谨慎地, casually漫不经心地，deliberately故意地， enjoyable令人愉快的painfully痛苦的 unexpectedly 意料之外地 surprisedly 惊奇地 surprisingly 惊人地happily, delightedly, desperately拼命地，绝望地，不顾一切地
时间频率副词frequently 经常地，频繁地 occasionally偶尔 constantly经常 顺序副词initially 最初 gradually逐渐地地 finally=eventually=ultimately终于（最终）regularly定期地 currently目前，时下 annually, meanwhile与此同时 almost overnight一夜之间
方式/逻辑副词
anyway=anyhow无论如何，不管怎样 someway=somehow 以某种方式，不知怎么地simply简单地directly=instantly=immediately马上/立即（也可以作连词：一-----就----）rapidly迅速地 suddenly 突然间 abruptly突然地, regularly定期地、有规律地 normally正常地, technically 从技术上说speaking从技术上说 strictly speaking严格地说 hopefully，honestly, personally, frankly坦率地说, traditionally 传统上properly,strangely, naturally, interestingly, unbelievably难以置信地, horribly可怕地, smoothly顺利地 ,unexpectedly,出乎意料 undoubtedly,无疑nevertheless (however)然而，不过 respectively各自地，分别地 artificially人为地 tightly紧紧地， economically从经济上说 financially从财经上说 logically 有逻辑地 typically 典型地,similarly类似 formally正式地, normally正常地, peacefully, equally平等地、同样地, apparently显然, properly合适地, voluntarily自愿, actually= virtually实际上, steadily稳定地, environmentally环保,consequently因此，所以,automatically自动地, otherwise否则, furthermore此外，再者，therefore,因此，successfully 成功地，fortunately & luckily 幸运地
程度副词 fundamentally基本地，基础地 gently really, formally, increasingly, repeatedly， hurriedly， energetically，relatively 相对地 considerably (相当地) seriously 认真地；严重地 obviously /apparently显而易见地wholly/completely/absolutely, 完全地;全部地, entirely/thoroughly完全地;彻底地, slightly细小地，稍微,perfectly完美地， hardly=barely=seldom=scarcely properly适当地 extremely特别 ；极端地specially专门地，特别地，,especially=particularly特别地, 尤其，definitely确切地accurately 精确地precisely准确地，精确地, exactly确切地, approximately大约 successfully universally普遍地 simply简单地,v ividly生动地，清晰地，mostly主要地，一般地， potentially潜在地，可能地，spectacularly壮观地，壮丽地，splendid壮丽地/辉煌的, roughly粗略地，comfortably, narrowly勉强地，
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