专题10.读后续写(新高考专用)(解析版)-2023届全国各地名校最新高考英语试题精选速递(第一期)

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1.【辽宁六校2022~2023学年上高三初考】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had never been more anxious in my life. I had just spent the last three endless hours trying to get to the airport so that I could travel home. Now, as I watched the bus driver set my luggage on the airport sidewalk, I realized that my anxiety had only just begun.
This was my first visit alone to the international terminal (航站楼) of the airport, and nothing was familiar. I couldn’t make sense of any of the signs. Where was the check-in counter Where should I take my luggage I had no idea where to go, feeling as if I were deaf and blind and stupid. I began to panic. What time was it Where was my plane I had to find help because I couldn’t be late.
I tried to ask a passing businessman for help, but my words all came out wrong. He just frowned (皱眉) and walked away. What had happened I had been in this country for a whole semester, and I couldn’t even remember how to ask for directions. This was awful! Another bus arrived at the terminal, and the passengers came out carrying all sorts of luggage. Here was my chance! I could follow them to the right place, and I would not have to say a word.
I carried my heavy suitcase behind me and followed the group. We finally reached the elevators. Oh, no! They all fit in it, but there was not enough room for me. I watched in despair as the elevator doors closed. I was abandoned again! I had no idea what to do next. I got on the elevator when it returned and stared at all the buttons. Which one could it be I pressed button 3, because I thought I saw those passengers pressed 3, though it was no more than a quick glance. The elevator slowly climbed up to the third floor and came to a stop. There were no check-in counters! I looked around shyly, only to find an elderly man standing at the corner. He was an airport employee.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Tears formed in my eyes as I saw the empty hall and realized that I would miss my plane.
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When I turned to thank him for all his help, he was gone.
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【答案】参考范文:
Paragraph 1:
Tears formed in my eyes as I saw the empty hall and realized that I would miss my plane. Just then the elderly airport employee walked towards me from the corner. He saw that I was lost and asked if he could help in any way. He gave me his handkerchief to dry my tears. He smiled kindly. He patted my shoulder to ease my anxiety before leading me down a long hallway. We walked up some stairs, turned a corner, and at last, there was the check-in counter! He led me past all the lines of people and pushed my luggage to the inspection counter.
Paragraph 2:
When I turned to thank him for all his help, he was gone. I never got an opportunity to know that kind man’s name, but I would always remember his unexpected kindness. He helped me when I needed it most. Without his timely help, I would have certainly missed my plane. I can only hope that one day I will be able to do the same for another traveler who is suffering a terrible journey.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者要赶飞机,一生中从未如此焦虑过,这是作者第一次独自来到机场的国际航站楼,一切都不熟悉,为了能够找到办理登机手续的柜台,作者跟着一群人上了三楼,停了下来,没有登记柜台!作者害羞地环顾四周,却发现一个老人站在角落里,他是机场的工作人员。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当我看到空空如也的大厅,意识到我将赶不上飞机时,我眼中涌出了泪水。”可知,第一段可描写那位老人如何帮助作者。
②由第二段首句内容“当我转身感谢他的帮助时,他已经走了。”可知,第二段可描写作者在那位老人走后的心理活动。
2.续写线索:接近作者——安慰作者——带到柜台——感激——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①问:ask/inquire
②缓解:ease/relieve
③带领:lead/guide
情绪类
①友善地:kindly/genially
②忧虑:anxiety/worry
【点睛】[高分句型1]He saw that I was lost and asked if he could help in any way.(由that引导的宾语从句和if引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I can only hope that one day I will be able to do the same for another traveler who is suffering a terrible journey.(由that引导的宾语从句和关系代词who引导的定语从句)
2.【湖南省岳阳县第一中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次月考】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语编写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make our needs meet.
One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.
On impulse(冲动) I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name, I found it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.
"Yes, “she said in surprise, with extreme excitement." It was my umbrella which had been stolen a year ago.”
So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead, Her happiness at retrieving(找回)this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.
The following months were hard. I can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but this coldness and darkness.
The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.
Thinking of this, I couldn’t control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so could greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.
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Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.
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Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.
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【答案】Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I heard man talking heartily to her and went to the door, He was a delivery man, and his arms were full of parcels. “This is a mistake, " I said, but he read the name on the parcels and they were for me. When he had gone, I didn't know what to do. Later, Peggy and I sat on the floor looking at each other. What a surprise! I looked for the name of the sender.
Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes. I picked up the note, which read "Thanks for returning of the umbrella. Merry Christmas! ""It was sent by the lady. Holding the note tightly, I was on the verge of tears, with a stream of warmth spreading through my body. On that cold Christmas, I forgot I had no money for the rent and only fifteen dollars in my pocket. We just sat in our small apartment unwrapping the gifts one by one in happiness. A sweet peace flooded me like a blessing which made me hopeful again.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个30多岁的单身母亲,在去面试路上的电车里捡到一把伞,并根据伞上信息,找到伞的而主人,将伞物归原主并且拒绝了酬谢。接下来,这位母亲在穷困潦倒的生活中迎来了圣诞节,却苦于没有钱付房租以及买食物、送礼物给女儿的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“突然,门铃响了,佩吉急忙去开门,说一定是圣诞老人。”可知,第一段可先描写门打开后,这位母亲看到的确有送包裹之人后的疑惑以及她和女儿确定包裹是给她们时的惊喜。
②由第二段首句内容“突然,贴在一个包裹上的一张纸条吸引了我的目光”可知,第二段可描写这位母亲发现这个包裹的寄送人是其之前所归还伞的主人,以及这个人的此番举动为这对母女在寒冷的圣诞节带来的温暖和希望。
2.续写线索:收到包裹——感到困惑和惊喜——发现纸条——感到温暖和希望
3.词汇激活
动作类
①收到礼物:heard man talking heartily to her/went to the door
②读便条:pick up the note/read
情绪类
①.热情:heartily/ kindly
②.幸福:satisfaction/ contentment/ happiness/ fulfilment/ happiness
【点睛】
[高分句型]. Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa
Claus.(由连接词that引导的宾语从句作非谓语动词calling的宾语)
[高分句型2]. A sweet peace flooded me like a blessing which made me hopeful again.
(由关系代词which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]. Later, Peggy and I sat on the floor looking at each other.
(非谓语之现在分词熟练运用)
3【河北省唐山市2022-2023学年上学期高三年级摸底演练考】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Now that Emily was 12 she could walk to school without her parents. And even better, she could go with her best friend, Heidi, who lived on the same street as her.
The only problem was that Emily had to walk the long way round, which took them a good 15 minutes longer. She just could not take the shortcut through the park.
But Heidi never complained. They had been hanging out at each other’s houses for as long as they could remember. The best times were when they had sleepovers and could sit up late talking about anything and everything and everyone.
So if anyone understood why Emily could not walk through the park, it was Heidi.
Emily was a sweet girl except that she was frightened at dogs! So she had to avoid certain places where they might be. She was always conscious of where she went and got quite good at finding ways to avoid encountering any of them. She planned ahead good and proper before she headed outdoors or to a friend’s home. She could even spot one a mile away!
But the strange thing was, she didn’t dislike dogs. In fact she was quite fond of the idea of them. She was feeling that her fear was preventing her from living life to the full. She was starting to become tired of constantly avoiding her big fear. She wanted so badly to be able to pet a dog like “normal” people did. She tried to overcome her fear, but it usually ended in tears and a feeling of disappointment.
As her best friend, Heidi couldn’t stand by. She believed that power of friendship could help Emily overcome the fear.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day Heidi got a dog.
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After several restless nights, Emily went to Heidi’s house and rang the bell.
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【答案】One possible version:
One day Heidi got a dog. When Heidi broke the news, Emily knew she would never be able to come to Heidi’s house again! And the next day she walked to school on her own. That evening, she went back home alone, thinking if she would avoid Heidi forever. And then she thought about how they had played together since they were just three years old. Heidi had been very supportive to her and she realised she couldn’t lose her best friend.
After several restless nights, Emily went to Heidi’s house and rang the bell. The first thing she heard was a little dog’s cry. She shuddered. Even though she could tell from the sound that it was only a tiny little thing that made it, it didn’t help. She felt a familiar foreboding. Soon she was facing her fear! Heidi’s dad opened the door. Heidi’s dog was about ten inches long. Now he tried to come near enough to greet her. She cautiously pet the little wriggling bag of fluff for at least ten seconds. It wasn’t long. But it was a start.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索,讲述了主人公Emily非常怕狗,竭尽所能避开与狗的接触,好友Heidi为了帮助她克服怕狗的恐惧,收养了一只小狗,希望通过友谊的力量帮助Emily,最终Emily迈出了克服怕狗的恐惧的第一步。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“一天Heidi得到了一只狗。”可知,第一段可描写Heidi家有了狗,Emily不敢再去Heidi家,她只能独自上下学,以及Emily的心理变化。
②由第二段首句内容“过了几个不安的夜晚,Emily来到Heidi家,按响了门铃。”可知,第二段可描写Emily鼓起勇气来到Heidi家的行为变化以及最终克服恐惧抚摸了小狗,迈出了第一步。
2.续写线索:独自上下学——心理变化——不愿意失去朋友——去Heidi家——见到小狗——迈出了第一步
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.回家:go back home/return home
②.支持:be supportive/be in support of
情绪类
①.烦恼的:restless/uneasy/annoyed
②. 颤抖:shudder/tremble
【点睛】【高分句型1】And then she thought about how they had played together since they were just three years old.(运用了how引导宾语从句,since引导状语从句)
【高分句型2】Even though she could tell from the sound that it was only a tiny little thing that made it, it didn’t help.(运用even though引导的状语从句,that引导宾语从句和that引导的定语从句)
4.【广东省2023届高三九月联考】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
l knew this dreaded day would come sooner or later. It came too fast and there I was, in the waiting room of the dental clinic, miserable with butterflies in my stomach.
My parents told me to sit up,stop wringing(拧) my hands,and take deep breaths to keep calm. It worked. l was calm for maybe two seconds when I heard my name being called. l pretended to be deaf but my mother touched me to get up. l forced myself to step forward and immediately stumbled(绊) over a toy and the boy who was playing with it. My clumsiness got me the attention of everyone in the room. Being stared at by so many pairs of eyes was too much and I hurried to the consultation room as fast as I could,leaving the boy crying for his broken toy.
l had refused my parents’ offer to accompany me. I meant to show them that I was brave enough to face the treatment on my own. I regretted it right now. Thankfully, I forgot my anxiety as I looked around the dentist's room. Tools of different sizes were arranged neatly in a plate on the tiny table which was connected to a chair with buttons and a light hanging right over it. I avoided looking at my dentist in the eye as I took my seat on the chair shakily.
l tried to calm myself down, imaging how brave I would be. After a while, I was taken by great surprise when all of a sudden the chair moved and I was lying down facing the bright yellow light. When I caught sight of the dental drill on the plate,panic related to a bad childhood experience involving the drill kicked into me.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I cried out and almost jumped out of the seat.
My parents were waiting at the door anxiously when I ran out excitedly.
读后续写范文
I cried out and almost jumped out of the seat. Watching my frightened look, the dentist asked me what was the matter in a soothing voice behind her mask. I felt embarrassed and ashamed for my rude behavior and explained the bad experience in the past to the dentist. After hearing my story, the dentist smiled and encouraged me to forget the past and face the challenge bravely. I felt eased with the dentist's comfort and care. Everything was going smoothly and I was grateful to the dentist.
My parents were waiting at the door anxiously when ran out excitedly. I knew they would find it hard to believe what just happened. I was about to describe the process of treatment when I saw the boy whose toy I just broke. I went up to the boy and his parents and apologized for my misbehavior. All the people sang high praise for my honesty. After that, I followed my parents to the exit to tell them the most proud experience I ever had.
5【湖北省“宜荆荆恩”2023届高三起点考试】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Catherine was the coolest kid in her class. Whenever she went, she was in the spotlight, with a bunch of kids following her and doing everything she did.
Her deskmate, Landy, however, was not in the cool kids’ group. Being the tallest kid in her class, she was teased by her classmates, who were always chanting “Landy, Landy, long as spaghetti (意大利面)”. Every time Landy heard those silly chants, she could feel her face burst into flames. God knew how she wished the ground to crack and swallow her!
Catherine didn’t really like it when the kids chanted “Landy, Landy, long as spaghetti”. But she never told them to stop either, and nor did she ever talk to her. She liked being popular.
One weekend, Catherine went over to her grandfather for Thanksgiving. Her grandfather lives on a farm at the opposite end of town, where he keeps chickens. While helping to feed the chickens, Catherine noticed a peculiar one. Curling in the corner, it looked smaller than the others and was almost half-bare!
“What’s the matter with it ” She asked her grandfather, with a puzzled frown on her face. Her grandfather told her how chickens could act. “They have a pecking (啄) order,” he explained, wrinkles of concern spreading around his forehead. “If one chicken is different, the others will push it away and keep pecking it. Sometimes they peck it so much that it dies.”
“Oh, what a poor little thing!” Catherine let out a sigh as she scooped the frightened chicken up in her arms, whose heart was beating fast in the bony little body. Suddenly, she thought of Landy, the girl being “pecked” by her classmates. “I’m going to take it home and take good care of it,” she said with a determined look.
Back in school, Catherine told the cool kids about the chicken. “It’s looking healthy,” she said proudly. “It’s fatter and its feathers are growing. Even the cat likes it. She carries it around the garden, and...” Everyone was entertained by Catherine’s story of her lovely chicken, laughter lingering around the classroom.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then Catherine spotted Landy sitting by herself in a corner.
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But Catherine walked directly toward Landy, regardless of what they said.
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【答案】Possible version:
Then Catherine spotted Landy sitting by herself in a corner. She kept her head down with her eyes fixed on the floor as usual. It hit Catherine that the pecking order worked in school, too. Landy was just like the poor little chicken, being teased and ignored by her classmates, merely due to her special height. “It’s time for me to make an apology to Landy.” Catherine thought to herself. No sooner had she made up her mind than she announced it to the cool kids surrounding her. Astonished at what she said, all the kids burst out screaming, “Talking to the long spaghetti Are you crazy ”
But Catherine walked directly toward Landy, regardless of what they said. “Hi, Landy. I’m sorry about the spaghetti thing.” Catherine murmured an apology, her face reddening. “I know it hurts you. Can you forgive us ” She figured Landy might just walk away. But she lifted her misty eyes and nodded yes. Catherine wiped away her tears, giving her a warm hug. Moved by the scene, the other kids also came to offer their sincere apologies to Landy. From that day on, no one made up silly chants about Landy, and Catherine also gained an important life lesson that everyone should be treated equally no matter how special he or she was.
【解析】
【导语】本文以班里同学关系为线索展开,讲述了班里最酷的孩子Catherine受到同学众星捧月般的欢迎,而她的同桌Landy却受到冷落,因为她个头最高,同学们给她起了侮辱性的外号“意大利面条”。Catherine在农场发现一只被其它的鸡欺负的可怜的小鸡,深感同情,从而联想到Landy,意识到大家不应该欺负她,Catherine回到学校后,号召大家团结Landy的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“然后Catherine发现Landy独自坐在角落里。”可知,第一段可描写Catherine发现Landy被冷落的样子而产生的联想,Catherine准备道歉,引起其他同学的惊讶。
②由第二段首句内容“可是Catherine不顾他们说什么,径直朝Landy走去。”可知,第二段可描写Catherine主动找Landy道歉,Landy和其他同学深受感动。
2.续写线索:意识到——思想——惊讶——道歉——拥抱——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.意识到:be aware of/realize/it hit sb that
②.道歉:murmur an apology/say sorry to/make an apology
情绪类
①.惊讶的:astonished/surprised
②.感动的:moved/touched
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Landy was just like the poor little chicken, being teased and ignored by her classmates, merely due to her special height. (非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]. From that day on, no one made up silly chants about Landy, and Catherine also gained an important life lesson that everyone should be treated equally no matter how special he or she was. (由that引导的同位语从句以及no matter how引导的让步状语从句)
6.【山东省济南市2022-2023学年高三九月考】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tim Robinson, a former junior officer of the British Army, was on holiday in Bridport, Dorset, a town in England. While enjoying a walk down the beach, Tim slipped on a piece of seaweed lying in the sand and fell, breaking his leg.
Unfortunately, Tim did not bring his cell phone with him when he left for his walk. No one was in site, but as Tim lay helpless he remembered his military training and tried to think about what was around to help him. After struggling around on the beach, the pain became too much to handle. He stopped and thought about what to do.
With no phone and no one around, and with his leg hurting greatly, Tim had a decision to make. He could either continue this way in pain and hope that someone happened to see him, or he could try something else. It didn’t matter that his leg had made him partially immobile, Tim still had the ability to crawl (爬行), and so he did.
The choice was easy, but the crawl was tough. Tim told the Daily Mail, “After I crawled to about a mile-and-a-quarter away from the car park, I started flashing my torch in SOS and spinning it over my head to create a Buzz-Saw signal which is a way of attracting helicopters in the armed forces.”
No one seemed to be around. At least, no one could read Tim’s signals for help. Once again, he had to either stay where he was and wait for help or get moving. In his mind he had no choice. There was no response to begin with, so he crawled for five minutes and covered about 50 meters before making the same signal three times. Most people couldn’t imagine crawling for any distance with a broken leg, but Tim wasn’t about to give up.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Tim finally got a response from the distance.
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Tim’s condition was worse than Mrs. Robinson thought.
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【答案】
One possible version
Tim finally got a response from the distance. He was excited to see a torch flashing back. It was his wife shining the torch in response to his signal. Thankfully his wife knew something must have been wrong and went looking for her husband. She kept moving toward her husband, shining her light. All the while, Mrs. Robinson called for help. As they got closer to each other she waited anxiously for help to arrive. She had no idea how hurt her husband actually was.
Tim’s condition was worse than Mrs. Robinson thought. Tim’s broken leg hurt increasingly worse and was at risk of infection. He needed medical care immediately. Luckily, the ambulance finally showed up. After checking his leg, the medical workers couldn’t believe what he had put himself through. This man had crawled such a long distance after suffering such a wound. If it hadn’t been for his training in the army, he might not have made it.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了退伍军官Tim Robinson 独自在海边散步,不小心踩到水草滑倒在地,摔伤了腿。不幸的是,他既没有带手机,也无人可以求救。他利用之前的部队知识进行自救,经过多次不懈的尝试只能选择爬行,并利用手电筒发出求救信号。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“蒂姆终于得到了来自远方的回应。”可知,第一段可描写是谁给Tim做出回应,是如何回应的,又是如何找到Tim的。
②由第二段首句内容“蒂姆的情况比罗宾逊太太想象的还要糟糕。”可知,第二段可描写Tim的伤情,得到的救助和医护人员感慨Tim的坚强意志。
2.续写线索:妻子回应——妻子找到Tim——Tim的伤情——救护车到来——感慨Tim的坚强意志
3.词汇激活
行为类
①照亮手电筒:shine the torch/light up the flashlight
②接近:get close to/come near to
③出现:show up/turn up
情绪类
①激动:be excited/be thrilled
②焦急:anxiously/fretfully
【点睛】[高分句型1] After checking his leg, the medical workers couldn’t believe what he had put himself through. (由what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If it hadn’t been for his training in the army, he might not have made it. (由if引导的条件状语从句和虚拟语气)
7.【江苏南京六校联合体2023届高三联合调研试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Every girl dreamed when she was young and Cindy was no exception. Her favorite ballet was Swan and Lake and she had read dozens of books from the library or in the bookstore on how to become a ballerina. She anxiously hoped that one day her dream would come true. She had taken ballet lessons and all her teachers confirmed that she was a good student and full of potential, which made her look forward to the future.
One day she saw an advertisement that a famous ballerina troupe (剧团) would be performing in her hometown. Her thoughts ran wild, “I must meet up with the leader of the troupe and show him my skills,” she murmured to herself. She dressed herself in her ballerina costume and managed to avoid the guards and hid in the dressing room to wait, with her heart pounding. It was uncertain whether she could see the leader.
Luckily, the leader entered and she timidly knocked at the door.
She bravely approached him and handed him a bunch of red roses. And in her excitement, she pricked (刺) her finger on the thorns but she did not make a big thing about the pain. The leader observed her action, nodding his head slightly, as she told him her dream. “All right, you dance and I will give you my judgment.”
But half way through the dance he stopped her and said with an impish (恶作剧的) smile Cindy didn’t notice, “I’m sorry you’re not good enough!” On hearing this, Cindy was too ashamed to ask the leader the reason and ran crying away, as fast as her legs could carry her without a brief stay. Shaking his head in disappointment, the leader said to himself, “Persistence matters more than talent.”
Three years passing, she was still chasing her dream. Then one day she heard that the same ballet troupe was performing in her town again. Bitter memories of the leader’s harsh words came flooding back to her. This time she was determined to find out why the leader had told her she was not good enough when all her teachers thought otherwise.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The leader glanced at Cindy in peace, “I remember how you had pricked yourself but you carried on bravely.”
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At the thought, she ran after the leader immediately.
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【答案】One possible version:
The leader glanced at Cindy in peace, “I remember how you had pricked yourself but you carried on bravely.” “So what ” Cindy asked anxiously. The leader continued, “I just wondered if you could treat ballet like that. However, you let me down. Actually, if you did not give up so easily, you still deserve my further judgment!” With these words the leader went away, leaving Cindy frozen there chewing over his words. Cindy felt a breath of fire burning in her body, “Did he just test my loyalty to ballet on purpose ”
At the thought, she ran after the leader immediately. “God helps those who help themselves. I am still crazy about ballet and young enough...” she talked to herself. Then she found the leader in the rehearsal hall. It seemed as if the leader was waiting for her. Cindy gathered courage and came up, begging for another opportunity. This time, her graceful dancing won the leader’s applause, which was beyond her expectation. “It was your devotion and persistence that makes your talent more brilliant and impressive.” the leader smiled, looking sincerely into Cindy’s eyes.
【解析】
【导语】本文是记叙文。文章讲述了辛迪梦想成为芭蕾舞演员,她为之付出了很多努力,老师认为她充满潜力。一天,她得知一个著名的芭蕾舞团将在她的家乡演出,她决定去见团长,向他展示自己的技巧。当她的舞蹈展示到一半时,团长阻止了她,认为她的舞蹈不够好,辛迪哭着跑开了,团长很失望,他认为辛迪对舞蹈不够坚持。三年过去了,辛迪仍然在追逐她的梦想,当她得知那个芭蕾舞团又来演出时,她决心去问问团长为什么认为她的舞蹈不够好。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“团长平静地瞥了一眼辛迪,“我记得你是多么刺痛,但你还是勇敢地继续。”可知,第一段可描写团长解释当时否定辛迪的原因以及辛迪的心理变化。
②由第二段首句内容“一想到这一点,她立刻追上了领导。”可知,第二段可描写辛迪为了弥补上次的错误,做出了什么努力,及团长的态度。
2.续写线索:团长阐述否定辛迪的原因——辛迪的反思——辛迪的再次努力——团长给予机会——辛迪展示舞蹈——团长的认可
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.继续(说):continue/go on
②.放弃:give up/abandon
③.恳求:beg/entreat
情绪类
①.焦急地:anxiously/worriedly
②.真诚地:sincerely/genuinely
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Actually, if you did not give up so easily, you still deserve my further judgment! (由if引导的条件状语从句)
[高分句型2]. This time, her graceful dancing won the leader’s applause, which was beyond her expectation.(由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
8.【湖北省孝感市部分校2022-2023学年高三上学期联考英语试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使其构成一篇完整的短文。
Thick snow covered around my car. Everything around me was blanketed in white. The light was fading as the sun set over the rocky peaks.
I was driving up a mountain and it was supposed to be a four-hour trip from Red River, to Durango. I inched along on a winding, unfamiliar road in a snowstorm. I was on my way to meet my friend Jane, who was visiting her family in Durango. She’d invited me to join them for the weekend. The fastest way to Durango from Red River would be this mountain road. I was so excited about the weekend that I left without checking the weather.
Thirty minutes into my drive, the snow had started. It was gentle snow at first. I thought about turning around. Because it hardly looked threatening, I continued. Now I regretted that decision. But it was too late. The road was too narrow and icy for me to turn around. The snow was getting worse. The only way out was forward, higher and higher into the mountains. The last bit of sunlight disappeared, and I couldn’t see anything beyond the few feet lighted by my headlights.
My cell phone had lost service as soon as I’d entered the mountain pass and was powered off. I couldn’t call for help. I had some bottled water in the car and the clothes in my luggage. Maybe I could find a place to pull over and wear more clothes until morning. Would that be enough to keep me warm all night How long would it take for someone to find me “Everything will be fine,” I whispered.
Then I noticed a pair of lights seemed to glow dimly (隐隐发光) through the snowstorm. I opened my eyes wide and then drove ahead. There they were. Tail-lights! There was a car in front of me! At least someone was here with me. “Focus on the lights, not your fear,” I told myself.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I could see the car’s tire tracks in my headlights.
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After leaving the narrow mountain road, I got closer and the car I followed stopped.
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【答案】
I could see the car’s tire tracks in my headlights. All I had to do was follow the tracks the rest of the way down the mountain. I drove slowly, keeping my wheels within the tracks every inch of the way. Soon I could see the lights of a town twinkling in the distance. The snow started to cover the tracks I was following. But both of us had made it.
After leaving the narrow mountain road, I got closer and the car I followed stopped. As I got closer, I saw it was a SUV. I pulled up beside it and rolled down my window. The driver of the car did the same. “Many thanks. I was really scared on my way. Fortunately, I followed you. It was your car’s light and tracks that gave me hope and encouragement.” The driver looked at me and smiled. “My pleasure. To tell you the truth I was also fearful at the heavy snow, but when I noticed there was a car behind me I felt much better.” In fact we hadn’t been alone on that mountain road at night.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者有一天要去找朋友简,遇上了暴风雪,作者在一条不熟悉的弯弯曲曲的路上缓缓前行,雪越下越大,还结冰了,作者唯一的出路就是往前走,天太黑了,作者什么也看不见,突然在暴风雪中似乎有两盏灯在朦胧地发光,作者告诉自己把注意力放在灯光上,而不是在自己的恐惧上。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我可以通过前灯看到汽车的轮胎印。”可知,第一段可描写作者跟着前方的车开到了城镇里。
②由第二段首句内容“离开狭窄的山路后,我走近了,我尾随的那辆车停了下来。”可知,第二段可描写作者和前方司机的对话。
2.续写线索:决定跟随前方车辆——开到城镇——双方都停车——交谈——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①跟随:follow/go after
②成功:make it/be successful
③停下来:pull up/come to a halt
情绪类
①感谢:many thanks/be grateful
②害怕:be scared/be frightened
【点睛】[高分句型1] The snow started to cover the tracks I was following. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was your car’s light and tracks that gave me hope and encouragement. (运用了强调句)
9.【2023届山东省齐鲁名校高三第一次学业质量联合检测】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Running a marathon is an impressive achievement. Running it again is doubly pleting two marathons on walking sticks while partially paralyzed (瘫痪) is a test to the human spirit. Hannah Gavios decided to participate in the New York City Marathon in 2018 after learning about Amanda Sullivan, who had previously completed marathons after an auto accident left her disabled.
In 2016, Gavios took a vacation in Vietnam. On her way back to her hotel one night, she feared she had gotten lost and asked for directions. But the person led her to a dark, wooded area and attacked her. While running away, she fell off a cliff, falling down 150 feet. She lay paralyzed at the bottom of the cliff for hours, until she was ultimately rescued in the morning. The fall left her with a serious injury that has affected muscles in her lower body. But it hasn’t stopped her from living her life to the fullest.
The road to recovery was difficult at first. Gavios was in the hospital in Thailand for 18 days and after that spent two months in Manhattan before being discharged. At first, she couldn’t even sit up. When she tried to stand up for the first time since being attacked, she felt lightheaded and fell.
Through physical therapy (治疗), Gavios felt herself getting much stronger. Eventually, though, she was doing the exercises without any assistance. Seeing the progress that she was making kept her going. Gavios began challenging herself through activities outside of physical therapy. She went on difficult hiking in the mountains. “It was something that I just started becoming more creative with and always putting myself to the test, pushing boundaries outside of what was normal,” Gavios said. But even while she was pushing her body to constantly do more, she still had a feeling that running, an activity she loved and that once came so easily to her, would no longer be possible.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then Gavios learned about Amanda, who completed marathons on walking sticks with the help of an organization.
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After her first marathon, Gavios started to think about how to help people with paralysis.
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【答案】 Then Gavios learned about Amanda, who completed marathons on walking sticks with the help of an organization. If someone with a similar condition could finish a marathon, Gavios thought to herself, then she could, too. Gavios started training for her first marathon on behalf of the organization, which aims to find cures for people with disabilities. She was connected to a coach through the organization, and the two would talk on the phone about the progress she had made. She started tracking her miles, training about twice a week in the months leading up to the first marathon.
After her first marathon, Gavios started to think about how to help people with paralysis. She hoped to run again to raise money and fund research into the treatment in helping people with paralysis. And a short time later, through her great efforts, she completed her second marathon on walking sticks. She is so grateful to be able to take steps for those who can’t. And she also hopes one day to run the marathon without walking sticks. Achieving that milestone another time is a powerful reminder of everything she has overcome.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Hannah Gavios在越南度假时,一天晚上,她在回酒店的路上问路时,被一个人带到了黑暗的树林里,并且袭击了她。在逃跑的时候,她从150英尺高的悬崖上掉了下去,这导致她受伤严重,下身肌肉严重受损,出院后,她甚至坐不起来,但是她意志坚定,不断挑战自己,坚持锻炼。在知道Amanda Sullivan虽然瘫痪但是仍参加马拉松比赛后,Hannah Gavios受到鼓舞,决定参加马拉松比赛的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“后来, Gavios了解到Amanda在一个组织的帮助下拄着拐杖完成了马拉松。”可知,第一段可描写Gavios受到Amanda的影响,决定参加马拉松比赛,并且坚持锻炼。
②由第二段首句内容“在第一次参加马拉松比赛后,Gavios开始思考如何帮助瘫痪患者。”可知,第二段可描写Gavios通过跑马拉松比赛来筹集资金,帮助那些瘫痪患者。
2.续写线索:受到Amanda影响——决定参加马拉松——训练——参加第一次马拉松——想帮助瘫痪的人——跑第二次马拉松——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①完成:finish/complete
②与……有联系:was connected to/was related to
③克服:overcome/get over
情绪类
①感激的:grateful /thankful
【点睛】[高分句型1] Gavios started training for her first marathon on behalf of the organization, which aims to find cures for people with disabilities.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] She is so grateful to be able to take steps for those who can’t.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
10.【南京市2023届高三年级学情调研】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My teenage son, Jordan, always complained about having to be home earlier than all his friends. He would tell me that he was already seventeen, but still had a curfew (宵禁). He believed he was practically an adult. I pointed out that he was not an adult as he was still in high school.
“You don’t trust me!” he yelled. Before I continued, he rolled his eyes, slammed the door and walked away. I sighed. How could I make Jordan see that I only wanted to keep him safe
I decided to go for a walk, hoping the December air would clear my head. I opened the front door and nearly stepped on her: a small black cat, just like a meatball. “Hi, Meatball,” I said, bringing her into my arms. I walked back in, touching her neck gently. Meatball seemed happy enough to come in the house, but after an hour or two, she sat by the door, meowing to go back outside.
“Why won’t she just stay in with us all the time ” Nathan, my youngest son asked.
I explained to him that she was happy here but she liked being able to come and go as she pleased.
“That must be nice,” Jordan muttered from the other room, complaining why the cat, not him, could come and go. He even asked me to give Meatball a curfew.
Meatball became a regular.
One night, temperatures were unusually low. Meatball stood at the door, meowing to go outside.
I shook my head at her, afraid that she might freeze to death. She stared at me and meowed again. I patted her head, “I know you’re not happy, but it’s for your own good.”
“Mom’s not being mean to you,” Nathan told the cat. “She’s just trying to keep you from turning into a frozen meatball.” We both laughed at his joke.
The next morning, I couldn’t find Meatball. I asked the kids if anyone had seen her.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Jordan nodded, “I let her out last night.”
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As I drove to the animal hospital, Jordan sat in the back, holding Meatball inside his coat.
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【答案】 Jordan nodded “I let her out last night.” My mouth dropped open. “She was outside all night ” I was so furious, “It was freezing and she could die!” Jordan choked back his words, stunned. I grabbed my coat and rushed outside. Jordan followed, fear welling up in his eyes. Several minutes later, the poor thing was found, shaking and curling into a tiny ball. I picked her up, unsure whether she was alive or dead. Jordan was scared, “We need a vet! Now!”
As I drove to the animal hospital, Jordan sat in the back, holding Meatball inside his coat. I could hear him talking to the cat, apologizing repeatedly. Luckily, the vet saved Meatball. Seeing her eyes open, Jordan stroked her head, all tears. Then, surprisingly, he turned to me. He apologized for what he had done. “I know you just want to keep me safe,” he murmured. I felt a lump in my throat. He rubbed Meatball’s back, “Looks like we are both going to observe the curfew. It’s for our own good.”
【解析】
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者的儿子抱怨作者不让他晚上外出,但是在通过猫被夜里放出而差点被冻死的事情后,他儿子终于明白作者不让他出去是为了他的安全着想。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①.由第一段首句内容:乔丹点点头,“我昨晚放她出来的。”可知,第一段可描写猫被放出去后他们去寻找的过程以及猫被找到后的状态。
②.由第二段首句内容:“当我开车去动物医院的时候,乔丹坐在后面,把肉球放在外套里。”可知,第二段可描写他们将猫送去救治的过程以及乔丹的懊悔。
2.续写线索:去找猫——发现猫——发现猫状态不对——送去救治——猫得救——乔丹懊悔
3.词汇激活(一个词汇要写出相近的表达)
行为类
①.抓住:grab/grasp
②.轻抚:stroke/ pet
③.拯救:save/ rescue
情绪类
①.非常愤怒: so furious / so angry
②.恐惧的:scared/ terrified
【点睛】[高分句型1] As I drove to the animal hospital, Jordan sat in the back, holding Meatball inside his coat.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]. Seeing her eyes open, Jordan stroked her head, all tears.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
11.【浙江省2023届A9协作体暑假返校联考高三英语试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,
I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make our needs meet.
One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.
On impulse I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name. I found it immediately and called it,waiting patiently,and then a lady answered.
"Yes," she said in surprise, with extreme excitement. "It was my umbrella which had been stolen a year ago."
So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella.with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead. Her happiness at retrieving (找回) this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.
The following months were hard. I can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but this coldness and darkness.
The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.
Thinking of this,I couldn't control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so I could greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen overwhelmed by misery.
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1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答,
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy ran fleetly to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.
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Abruptly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.
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读后续写范文:
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and ran fleetly to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I heard a man's hearty voice coming and went to the door. He was a delivery man with his arms full of parcels. "This is a mistake”, I said, but he read the name on the parcels and they were for me. When he had gone, I didn't know what to do. Subsequently, Peggy and I sat on the floor, looking at each other unbelievably. What a surprise! I searched for the name of the sender.
Abruptly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes. I picked up the note, which read "Thanks for your returning the umbrella. Merry Christmas!” It was the lady who sent us these parcels. Holding the note tightly, I was on the verge of tears, with a stream of warmth spreading across my body. On the chilly Christmas, I forgot I had no money for the rent and only fifteen dollars in my pocket. We just sat in our small apartment unwrapping the gifts one by one in happiness. A sweet peace flooded into me like a blessing, which made me hopeful again.
12.【浙江省七彩阳光新高考研究联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期9月返校联考】
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Radzi was the first out of the plane. He collected his luggage and quickly made his way to the arrival, hardly able to contain his excitement at meeting his family after six years abroad. He looked around expectantly, hoping to hear his voice being called out but he heard no sweet voices. He turned around and saw his parents, their dear faces shining with pride and pleasure but of his teenage twin sisters—none. There was no sign of them.
“They must be hiding somewhere—they love to play hide and seek.”. His father smiled but said nothing. His mother kept on hugging him not allowing him to say anything. His father murmured, “Let's get home. They're waiting for us at home.” Radzi smiled, relieved to know they were at home. He kept on talking about how he toured Europe as Wani asked him to in her letter and he was rather puzzled whenever his parents exchanged glances.
Reaching home, he spied a lone figure at the door. “Why one There should be two.” The twins were inseparable but it could be that six years had made all the difference. As that lone figure rushed towards him, he thought it was Wani but she said she was Wati. So it must be. He really could not differentiate between the two of them and they had fun deceiving him all the time. And they really had a lot of laughter over his mistaking one for the other.
“Where's Wani ”
“In your bedroom.”
“Wani, Bang's home.”
He walked into his room and read the words ‘Welcome Home, Dr. Radzi!’ He trusted his twin sisters to be so dramatic! He was studying medicine as a doctor and he had been focusing on his final examinations which needed much concentration. Wati invited him to go downstream to their favorite hideout. “Bang, I wish to be alone with you without Wani. Wani can wait her turn.”
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
In a quiet sad and serious tone, she related what had happened to Wani.
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Paragraph 2:
He took the letter and walked to the graveyard.
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【答案】One possible version
In a quiet sad and serious tone, she related what had happened to Wani. A year ago, Wani fell seriously ill and was diagnosed with cancer. Everyone wanted to tell Radzi but Wani begged them not to as he was sitting for his finals and she did not want him to lose all concentration and be so upset. Everyone had to promise and even after his finals, she wrote him to tour Europe before coming home. She sent him photos of her with Wati, smiling, cheerful, and healthy. Radzi was stunned and asked in agony, “How could she Why did you let her do it Why Why ” Wati kept silent. All she could do was to hug her brother, comforting him as he sobbed his heart out. When the tears dried up, Wati held out a letter. Radzi recognized the handwriting.
He took the letter and walked to the graveyard. Wati went with him, then left him to read the letter and to be alone in spirit with his beloved sister. “Bang, please don’t grieve. Remember me as the healthy, cheerful, fun-loving sister. Treasure our past moments and keep me always in your heart. Wati is with you. In her, you see me. I want to be a doctor like you. I can’t but you are one now. Be the best doctor I know. I am proud of you. ” As he read her letter, a strange peace fell on him. It was as though she was beside him, comforting him and holding his hand. He looked around, saw Wati and she smiled. In Wati, he saw Wani. He walked up to Wati, took her hand. Together, the brother and sister walked home in the silence of the quiet evening.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Radzi时隔六年回国,在机场的时候特别期待见到亲人,看到了父母但是没有瞧见两个双胞胎妹妹的踪影,回家后也只看到Wati,没有见到另一个妹妹Wani的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“她以一种平静、悲伤和严肃的语气讲述了发生在Wani身上的事情。”和第二段首句关键词“ 墓地”可知,Wani去世了,所以第一段可描述在Radzi出国期间,妹妹Wani生病了但隐瞒了哥哥的故事。
②由第二段首句内容“他接过信,走向墓地。”可知,第二段可描写Wani写的信的具体内容以及哥哥读完信后的感受。
2.续写线索:Wati讲述事情真相——Wani身患重病——祈求隐瞒——得知真相痛哭——读信——情绪缓解
3.词汇激活
行为类
①讲述:relate/narrate/tell
②拥抱:hug/embrace/give sb a hug
③想要做:want to do/desire to do/be eager to do
情绪类
①震惊的:stunned/shocked
②沮丧的:upset/depressed
③高兴地:cheerful /delightful
【点睛】[高分句型1]Everyone wanted to tell Radzi but Wani begged them not to as he was sitting for his finals and she did not want him to lose all concentration and be so upset. (as引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]It was as though she was beside him, comforting him and holding his hand. (as though引导表语从句;现在分词做伴随状语)
13.【江苏省南通市通州、兴化、泗洪2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次质量监测考试】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Here is a secret that everyone knows: I don’t like to ask for help. Of course, my disability means that I need assistance when I get dressed and have to be driven everywhere, but that is precisely my point.
One night a few years ago, after my caregiver helped me to bed, I enjoyed my favorite part of my routine — playing with my service dog Marshall. When the rest of the world made me feel “lacking”, Marshall made me feel like “enough” .
As usual, he jumped off the bed after a few minutes, but the pain in his eyes told me something was wrong. A few days later, a trip to the vet confirmed my worst fears. Dr Tom said, “I must perform an operation to treat him.”“Is he in pain ”I held my breath. Then I got the answer “Yes.”
I felt heartbroken. I couldn’t remember talking about the details. I had one huge question:“How much would the operation cost ”“About$2, 500. It might as well have been a million.” I couldn’t afford it. Each day, I searched for ways to raise money for this operation.
A beautiful bike trail was close to the apartment where we lived. On most of the days of our eight years together, Marshall and I used it. I loved the trees, the fresh air and being outside. Over the years, many of the neighbors got familiar with us. Everyone loved Marshall.
Then one day, an idea occurred to me. Could I ask these people to contribute to the cost of Marshall’s operation If I could push my wheelchair a certain number of laps (圈) and get money for every lap that I completed, might I raise enough money for Marshall to have his operation Our regular route was a mile and a half long. My goal was to push my wheelchair ten laps, a total of fifteen miles. Next, feeling very bold and a little nervous, I set a date. Then I made posters and posted them around my apartment and all over the bike trail. My neighbors were concerned for Marshall.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With hope, I started to train myself.
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The big day finally came and I went out at 6:30 a.m.
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【答案】范文
With hope, I started to train myself. For the first few days, I nearly gave up. Pushing my wheelchair made me feel great pain in my back and shoulders, but my love for Marshall kept me going. Instead of listening to my body, I focused on the voice in my heart. When I was training, I thought to myself. “One more lap. You can do this. Don’t stop. Marshall needs you.” After weeks of daily training, I could finish all fifteen miles.
The big day finally came and I went out at 6: 30 a.m. The first few laps were long and lonely. Slowly the donors and neighbors came to watch. Some even cheered as I passed them. With every mile, more people came and donated money. There was hope after all. Donations from the neighbors continued. Many hours passed, and I finished all fifteen miles. I succeeded in raising enough money for Marshall’s operation. I could never have made it without these kind people’s support.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了身患残疾的作者并不喜欢寻求帮助。然而当他的爱犬Marshall身患重病需要大笔钱做手术时,作者想到一个主意:推动轮椅15英里去筹钱。作者战胜身体的疼痛,刻苦训练,最终实现了自己的既定目标。在好心人的帮助下,成功筹到钱的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“带着希望,我开始训练自己。”可知,第一段可描写作者战胜疼痛刻苦训练。
②由第二段首句内容“重要的一天终于来了,我在早上6:30出门。”可知,第二段可描写作者成功跑完了15英里,为马歇尔的手术筹集了足够的资金。
2.续写线索:训练——疼痛——战胜疼痛——出发——捐款——筹款成功
3.词汇激活
行为类
①关注:focus on/center on/pay attention to
②完成:finish/complete
③捐赠:donate/contribute
情绪类
①爱:love/affection
②欢呼:cheer /be in high spirits/acclaim
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Pushing my wheelchair made me feel great pain in my back and shoulders, but my love for Marshall kept me going.(运用动名词作主语和现在分词作宾语补足语)
[高分句型2]. I could never have made it without these kind people’s support.(运用了without含蓄条件句的虚拟语气)
14.【Z20名校联盟(浙江省名校新高考研宄联盟)2022-2023学年髙三第一次联考】
阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had a dream from primary school: to work in television. My parents owned a little grocery store, so we were definitely not fancy people. Thankfully, my dad had raised me to have a lot of confidence. He often said, “You can do anything you want to do.” My dad was particularly supportive. He was my steady rock — always there for me.
With his help and encouragement, I was admitted to the radio and television ar

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