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(2022届江苏南通一调) One afternoon after school, Mary and her brother, Keith, were eating at a cafe near their home. That afternoon, they had to share their table with another person. That person was a young lady in her twenties. After eating, she went to the restroom. Without realising, she had left her cellphone on the table. Five minutes later, she came out and walked out of the cafe without looking back.
Mary saw the cellphone on the table. She quickly told Keith, “Keith, the girl left behind her cellphone.”
Keith looked at the cellphone. It took his breath away. It was one of the latest models on the market. Keith had always wanted a cellphone. But his parents had told him, “You don’t need one. You can always use the house phone.”
He stared at it for some minutes. Then he said slowly, pausing on every word, “I want to take the cellphone.”
Mary could not believe her ears. She merely stared at her brother. “You can’t! What if the owner comes to look for it ”
Having made the decision, Keith quickly grabbed the cellphone and put it in his schoolbag. Then, he took Mary’s hand and led her out of the cafe quickly.
Once back home, Keith locked his house door with trembling hands. Inside his room, he took out the piece of beauty. Oh, he liked it so much. Now he had his own cellphone. Soon, he was polishing it happily.
But Mary told him, “Keith, you cannot keep the cellphone. What will you tell Father about this He will ask you how you got the cellphone.”
Keith said quickly, “I will say a friend lent it to me.”
Mary said, “Now you are lying too.” Oh dear! When had Keith turned so dishonest
Then Mary saw a house phone number on the plastic cover of the cellphone. “This is the girl’s phone number. Why don’t we just call this number We will talk to her and ask her to come and take back her cellphone.” She was trying to talk some sense into him.
Paragraph 1：
That night, Keith was tossing and turning (辗转反侧) in bed. ________________________________________
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Paragraph 2：
Mary was very happy to hear that. _______________
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1. Read for the main plots（情节）:
2. Read for conflict（矛盾冲突）:
3.Read for hints （伏笔）:
4.Read for emotional change(情感变化):
5. Read for the theme（主题）:
Read for the followings:
The main idea:
Mary 和Keith去小餐馆吃东西，Keith把同桌女孩留下的手机拿回家，Keith在还与不还手机之间挣扎。
主题：
诚信或知错能改
1.From this event, he learned that honesty was the most valuable virtue in our life.
2.It‘s never too late to mend/to correct the mistake.
1. It was one of the latest models on the market.
暗示丢掉手机后女孩的感受
2. Keith had always wanted a cellphone.
想顺走手机的原因
3. He stared at it for some minutes. Then he said slowly, pausing on every word, “I want to take the cellphone.”
内心挣扎，尚有良知，为归还手机作铺垫
4.Once back home, Keith locked his house door with trembling hands.
良心不安,为归还手机作铺垫
Some key sentences:
5. Oh, he liked it so much. Now he had his own cellphone.
不想归还手机的原因
6.What will you tell Father about this
不敢留下手机的原因
7.Mary said, “Now you are lying too.” Oh dear! When had Keith turned so dishonest
揭示主题
8.Then Mary saw a house phone number on the plastic cover of the cellphone.
提示归还的联系方式
Paragraph 1：
That night, Keith was tossing and turning (辗转反侧) in bed. ________________________________________
___________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
Mary was very happy to hear that. _____________
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
Plot:
Para 1:
1)__________________________________________________
2)__________________________________________________
3)__________________________________________________
4)______________________________
Para 2:
1)__________________________________________________
2)__________________________________________________
3)__________________________________________________
4)______________________________
难以入睡，不知如何抉择。
不想归还，自己确实喜欢。
想到丢手机的人的心情或无法向父母交待又想归还。
女孩感激不尽。
一夜无眠，告诉姐姐决定归还。
打电话给女孩，和姐姐一起去归还。
如释重负，Keith很高兴。
感悟。
Paragraph 1：
That night, Keith was tossing and turning (辗转反侧) in bed. Guilty and ashamed ,he had difficulty sleeping, not knowing what he should do because he had a strong desire to possess the new cellphone,the latest models on the market . However, he was feeling sorry for the owner. When he thought how sad the young lady would be at the loss of her cellphone. What troubled him most was that he didn’t know how to tell his parents about the cellphone. The next morning, after a long and restless night, he told Mary ,“I am going to return the cellphone to the owner.”
Paragraph 2：
Mary was very happy to hear that. They mustered up courage to phone the owner and asked her to go to the same cafe to take back her cellphone . Ten minutes later, she arrived anxiously. Holding her recovered（失而复得的） cellphone,she expressed her gratitude repeatedly. Seeing her smile happily, Keith felt all the frustration and stress disappeared.He was in cheerful spirits with the choice he had made.From this event, he learned that honesty was the most valuable virtue in our life. /it’s never too late to mend.
__________ adj. 发抖的；颤抖的
_______ vt. 擦亮；擦光
_______ adj. 塑料制的
____________________ 令某人惊叹
________ 凝视，盯着看
______________________ 表达感激
________________________满是罪恶感和羞耻感
________________________鼓起勇气做某事
—————————————心情愉快（悦）
trembling
polish
plastic
take sb’s breath away
stare at
express one’s gratitude
guilty and ashamed
muster up courage to do sth
in cheerful spirits
THANK YOU!

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