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01 动作描写
|Seeing the mess in the kitchen, he immediately understood what had happened, but he wasn’t upset.
|Seeing this, his mom realized something.
|Looking at the paper, I found the questions were too hard.
|Instead, he applied some medicine to Jeff’s hand, and then set out to help them clean up the mess, throwing away the burnt toast.
|Next, they began to make breakfast, and by now the twins looked cheerful.
|Their father instructed them to fry the rest of the bread.
|Opening her eyes, she couldn’t believe what she had seen.
|Before she could ask any question, their father turned up and told his wife about how the twins had made preparations to give her the surprise breakfast, and what trouble they had gone through when making the porridge and toast.
|After checking my body, the doctor comforted me, saying that I didn’t need to worry.
|Hearing what I said, Mom smiled and patted me on the shoulder.
|She shook her head with disbelief.
|He scratched his head, not understanding what his Dad said.
|Her head drooped(低垂,耷拉) and tears rolled down his cheeks.
|She shed tears of joy.她流下快乐的眼泪。
|After coming to my senses, I rose to my feet on shaky legs.当我苏醒后,我双腿颤抖地站了起来。
|Dad sank into an armchair and crossed her legs.爸爸坐到一把扶手椅上,翘起了二郎腿。
02 心理情感描写
词语类
◎喜悦joyous, joyful, overjoyed, delighted, glad, happy, cheerful, pleased, amused ◎满意content, pleased, satisfactory, satisfying,
◎惊讶surprised, amazed, astonished, shocked, open-eyed, breathtaking, open-mouthed
◎忧郁blue, down, gloomy,depressed
◎悲伤sad, sorrowful, heartbroken, grief-stricken
◎生气run out of patience, get angry/annoyed, make sb’s blood boil, drive sb. crazy, get on sb’s nerves, take offence, burn with anger
◎可怜feel sorry for, poor, pitiful, miserable, unfortunate
◎紧张nervous, stressful, anxious, high-pressure
◎害怕alarmed, fearful, afraid, frightened, scared, terrified
◎恐慌panic, horror, alarm
◎失望/沮丧in low spirits, in an unpleasant mood
◎嫉妒envy, jealousy
◎尴尬awkward, embarrassing
◎感动moved, touched, affected, impressed
◎感激thankful, grateful, appreciative
句子类
◎喜悦|I felt like a million dollars.我感觉好极了。
|He was so delighted that he could hardly speak.他如此高兴,以致于说不出话来。
|He jumped to his feet with joy when hearing the news.当听到消息时,他高兴地跳了起来。
|The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她的脸上仿佛笑开了花。
|A bright smile appeared across his face.他的脸上露出灿烂的笑容。
|I was pleased beyond description.我特别开心,难以言喻。
|His eyes twinkled with pleasure.她高兴得双眸闪闪发光。
|Her face lit up when I gave her the present.我给她礼物时,她的脸上焕发出光彩。
|My heart was as sweet as honey when I met my old classmates and former teachers.遇见老同学和以前的老师,我的心像吃了蜜一样甜。
|She wore a shining smile on her face.她的脸上带着闪亮的笑容。
|Dad’s smile lit up the whole room.爸爸的微笑照亮整个房间。
|Mum shed tears of joy.妈妈流下喜悦的眼泪。
|Her red face was shining with excitement.她的脸通红,泛起激动之光。
|A gentle smile spread over mum’s face.妈妈的脸上荡漾着柔美的微笑。
|I was floating on air when I got the news.当得知消息时,我飘飘欲仙。
|He jumped with wild joy.他开心地跳起来。
|These children were so glad that they thanked me again and again.孩子们如此开心。以致于一遍又一遍地谢我。
◎愣住|A terrible scream froze the passers-by.一声可怕的尖叫吓得路人愣住了。
|Dad and I were frozen at the scene.爸爸和我当场愣住了。
◎尴尬|I put my hands to my cheeks in embarrassment.我尴尬地把手放在脸颊上。
|I felt quite embarrassment, not knowing where to rest my hands.我感觉到十分尴尬,不知道把手放在哪里。
|I scratched my head, hoping to find a hole to hide myself.我搔了搔头,想找个洞藏起来。
◎紧张/焦虑|I was nervous in the beginning.一开始我很紧张。
|I became nervous about it, but my teammates didn’t get angry at me.我十分紧张,但队友没有生气。
|Before exams, I had butterflies in my stomach.考试前,我紧张不安。
|I was so nervous taht my breathing was speeding up.我如此紧张,以致于呼吸加快。
◎嫉妒|When my deskmate saw my grade on the paper, she was green with envy.当我的同位看到我试卷上的成绩时,嫉妒万分。
◎犹豫|When it’s my turn to make a choice, I felt quite hesitant.当轮到我做选择时,我犹豫了一下。
◎好奇|Burning with curiosity, I got online to explore more about the writer. 带着满满的好奇心,我上网探究了解该作家。
◎惊讶|To our surprise, by the end of that day it had over 1,000 views.令我们惊讶的是,到那天我是我们收获了1000多分观看量。
|At the sight, the little boy was speechless with shock,as if rooted on the ground.看到此情此景,小男孩震惊得说不出话来,好像钉在了地上。
|On the way, we were lost in admiration of the breathtaking scenery in the countryside.一路上,我们沉迷于欣赏令人惊叹的乡村风光。
|My parents looked at me in amazement.我的父母惊讶地看着我。
|Both Tom and I froze with shock when we saw the big snake.当我和汤姆看到这只大蛇时,我们都惊呆了。
|Looking at the grade on my physics paper, my jaw dropped to the ground.看到物理卷子成绩的那一刻,我惊得下巴掉在地上。
◎恐慌|I was seized by nameless panic/horror.我为不可名状的恐慌所控制。
◎害怕|Dad and I were struck with horror when we heard the noise of thunder. 当爸爸和我听到雷声时,我们被恐惧笼罩。
| Her face turned pale when she found that her daughter got lost.当她发现孩子丢掉了,她脸色煞白。
|At the thought of spending the whole night in the forest by herself, she felt frightened.一想到独自一人在森林度过一个晚上,她感到害怕。
|Scared and shocked, I hid ourselves behind the big tree, holding my breath.既害怕又震惊,我躲在大树后面,大气都不敢出。
◎愤怒|Dad lost his temper.爸爸勃然大怒。
|He glared at me with burning eyes.他带着怒火燃烧的眼神瞪着我。
|Boiling with rage/anger, Dad shook his fist at me.爸爸怒不可遏,朝我挥拳揍了我。
|So angry was I that I could feel the blood rush to my cheeks.我如此愤怒以致于双颊发烫。
◎激动|Grace felt her heart race.格蕾丝感到她的心跳加速。
|I was so excited inside, like a rough sea.我激动万分,内心想汹涌的大海。
|I was overjoyed and ran three steps at once.我欣喜若狂,三步并作两步跑过去。
|Disbelief gave way to excitement .激动代替了不信任。
|Dad couldn’t contain his excitement about the result.听到结果,爸爸无法抑制他的兴奋之情。
|It’s breathtaking to watch my classmates performing so wonderfully!看到我的同学表演得如此精彩,我很激动。
◎感动|I was so touched when I knew I passed the test.当我通过考试时,我很感动。
|Touched deeply, the passers-by couldn’t help clapping their hands.被深深地感动,路人们禁不住鼓起了掌。
|It was quite moving to see how much strangers can care for each other.看到陌生人之间如此彼此关照,实在令人感动。
|The speech was inspiring and touched my heart.演讲鼓舞人心,让我很受触动。
|Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶地表达了发自内心的感激。
◎感激|I was so thankful to her, who improved not only my study but also my confidence.我对她非常感激,她不仅让我的学习提高,也使我信心倍增。
|Jim felt grateful for what his classmates had done for him.我很感激我的同学们为我做的事。
◎悲伤|An air of sadness and depression settled over the two children.悲伤和沮丧笼罩着两个孩子。
|She burst into tears when she got the news.当她听到消息时,放声大哭。
|She was overcome with sorrow when she got the news.当她听到消息时,悲伤不已。
|It is heartbreaking for him that he can’t see his children.无法见到孩子,这使他很伤心。
|She stood there silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着,眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。
|As I looked at the left-behind children, great sorrow clouded my eyes.当我看着这些留守儿童,眼睛充满悲伤。
|Great sorrow clouded mother’s eyes when she learned that I failed the College Entrance Exam.当妈妈得知我高考落榜时,她的眼里不满悲伤。
|It was heartbreaking for him that he couldn’t see his daughter.无法见到女儿,她很心碎。
◎忧郁|I was overwhelmed with depression.忧郁笼罩着我。
|He has been really down since he failed the English examination.自从英语考试不及格后,他一直情绪低落。
◎羞愧|I felt my cheeks burning with shame.我羞愧得两颊滚烫。
|So ashamed was he that she could feel the blood rush to her face.他如此羞愧,以致于脸如充血般滚烫。
|She dropped her head in shame.她羞愧地低下了头。
◎顿悟|Seeing the mess in the kitchen, he immediately understood what had happened, but he wasn’t upset.看到厨房乱七八糟,他立即明白发生了什么,但是并没有不高兴。
|Hearing it, his mom didn’t seem angry.听到后,妈妈好像并不生气。
|At the moment, I learned what my dad meant.当时,我理解了爸爸的意图。
|I was about to give up when a cool idea occurred to me.我正要放弃,此时冒出一个美妙的主意。
◎冷静|So I kept calm and focused my attention on the questions.我保持冷静,关注试题问题。
◎同情|Immediately, I felt sorry for them.突然间,我同情起他们。
◎失望/沮丧|Overcome with disappointment/frustration, I left the classroom.被失望/挫败笼罩,我离开了教室。
|With a sinking heart, I left the classroom and walked slowly towards my dormitory.带着沮丧的心情,我缓步走向寝室。
|Feeling discouraged, I left the classroom and walked slowly towards my dormitory.带着沮丧的心情,我缓步走向寝室。
◎人生感悟|That day, I learned that doing something meaningful for others could also be a wonderful thing.那天,我懂得了为别人做点事也是很棒的。
|That day, I learned a big lesson and understood the importance of being honest.那天,我学到了一个教训并理解了诚实的重要性。
03 表情描写|The twins looked cheerful.这对双胞胎看上去很开心。
|She smiled with great satisfaction.她满意地笑着。
|She looked at me with encouragement.她带着鼓励的眼神看着我。
|She smiled heartily and waved goodbye.她由衷地笑着与我挥手道别。
|A smile lit up her face.她的脸上洋溢着微笑。
|She had a big smile on her face.她开心地笑着
|Hearing that, all the children were excited/thrilled.听到消息后,孩子们很激动。
|Her eyes twinkled with pleasure.她的眼中闪烁着泪花。
|He put his head in his hands, greatly annoyed.他双手抱头,十分生气。
|He was frozen with his mouth open wide at the sight of his parents.当他看到父母的时候,一下子愣住了,嘴巴张得大大的。
|Color rushed/flooded to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched on the platform.意识到有人在看着讲台上的她,她顿时涨红了脸。
|His eyes were wide with horror.他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。
|He looked his mother in the eye and told the truth.他直视妈妈的眼睛,说出了真相。
|Jack laughed, his eyes shining with excitement.杰克笑了,眼睛闪烁着激动的光芒。
|His eyes scanned the cave as he entered.他进屋时眼睛扫视了整个山洞。
|When he waved his parents goodbye, tears were welling up in his eyes.当他与父母挥手道别时,眼泪涌了出来。
|Tears streamed her cheeks when she learned that she failed the exam.当获悉自己考试不及格,她的眼泪沿着双颊流下。
|He stretched and yawned and couldn’t help lying in the bed.他伸了伸懒腰,打了个哈欠,禁不住躺在了床上。
|My mouth was watering when I smelled the toasted chicken.当闻到烤鸡的味道时,我忍不住流口水。
|My heart was in my mouth when I walked into the deserted house.我走进这座废弃的房屋时,紧张得心都到了嗓子眼。
|Lily’s face wore a satisfied expression.莉莉一脸的心满意足。
|Both my parents were astonished at the unexpected news.听到这个突如其来的消息,父母十分惊讶。
|Seeing her parents, his face lit up with delight.看到父母亲,他的脸上露出了快乐。
04 环境描写|On a warm morning一个温暖的清晨
|Dark clouds were gathering in the sky.天上乌云密布。
|Dark clouds massed on the horizon.空中乌云密布。
|The clouds look soft and pure against the blue sky.白云在蓝天的映衬下柔软而纯净。
|In the evening, there was a terrible storm and it rained cats and dogs.傍晚的时候,暴风雨来袭,大雨滂沱。
|The rain seemed to be streaming down more heavily.瓢泼大雨似乎下得更大了。
|Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.沐浴在阳光下,享受着美丽的风景,我们向目的地出发。
|Birds were chattering in the forest.鸟儿在林中唧唧喳喳地叫着。
|Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.顷刻间,黑暗统治了森林。
|The thunder was rumbling in the distance.远处雷声隆隆。
|The sun was beginning to set, the sky full of red and soft clouds.太阳西下,空中写满红色柔软的云朵。
|The sky was dotted with sparkling stars.天上满点星星。
|Stars winked at me in a darkening sky.夜空中星星向我眨眼。
|The wind stood up and gave a shout.大风凌冽,发出怒吼。
|The breeze gently kissed her cheeks.微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。
|A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。
|Flowers are waving in the breeze of the early spring.花儿在早春的微风中摇曳。
|A cold breeze sprang up.一阵凉风袭来。
|The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞,像一幅美丽的图画。
|The mist swallowed him up, and he could see nothing.薄雾把他包围起来,他什么也看不见。
|There was a deathly stillness in the house.房屋弥漫着死寂。
|A little stream ran quietly along its narrow way.一条小溪沿着狭窄的河道安静流淌。
|Fallen leaves danced down in the cool mid-autumn air.落叶在凉爽的中秋空气中缓缓落下。
|The stars lit up the night.星星照亮夜空。
05 上下文衔接
but, instead, and then, next, and by now, before long, soon,very soon, but then, immediately, soon, luckily, fortunately, unluckily, unfortunately, joyfully, that day, on the way, in the shop, at the dinner, hearing this/ that, seeing this/that, seeing..., looking..., smiling..., after getting some medicine, then, two hours later, at the same time, meanwhile, however, at the moment, during the process,all of a sudden.
表人物喜乐
难以形容地开心:indescribably wild joy高兴地跳起来:dance/jump for joy
极为感动:be overwhelmingly moved 欣喜若狂:be wild with delight
既兴奋又开心:a mixture of excitement and心满意足,非常幸福:on the top of the world对…感到非常高兴:overjoyed at/to do happiness 心情愉快:in cheerful spirits 流下幸福的泪水:tears of happiness flowing满意的表情:a satisfied look down 乐得大叫:yell with delight 对…感到满意:be content with 使某人心情愉快:brighten sb's heart对...很高兴:be delighted at为成功而欣喜:be excited with joy at the success使某人安心:set one's heart at rest喜爱,对...着迷:be keen on感到鼓舞的:feel inspired/encouraged快乐至极:be overwhelmed with精神高涨:be in high spirits
表人物悲忧
强烈的失落感:a strong sense of loss 沮丧的:with a sinking heart
忧郁的:with sorrowful heart 陷入绝望:fall into despair 惊慌失措:be seized with panic让他很伤感:put him into a sentimental mood避免陷入消极的旋涡:avoid getting sucked into有点惊讶:come as something of a surprise感到极度疲劳和难以招架:feel exhausted and a whirlpool of negativity 减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼:ease sb of his overwhelmed 很可能引发一阵挫败感:be extremely likely to pain/trouble 因某人的死亡而痛心:break one's heart over raise a storm of frustration 感到一阵悲伤:a flash of grief came upon sb.one'death情绪低落:be down in spirits使某人悲痛:make one's heart bleed 伤心而死:die of a broken heart垂头丧气:lose one's spirit 悲痛欲绝:cry one's heart out心里悲伤:be sad at heart
怀着沉重的心情:with a heavy heart 意志消沉:a broken spirit
表人物怒怨
引起某人的不快:arouse one's displeasure对抱怨不予理会:ignore/disregard a 对某人的行为感到不满:be displeased at one's
Complaint 对...表示不满:express/voice a complaint conduct易为琐事而恼火:be easily annoyed at trifles about气得说不出话:be speechless with indignation愤怒地踩脚:stamp one's foot in anger不断地抱怨:complain constantly感到尴尬的:feel embarrassed对某人大发脾气:rage at sb.感到困惑的:feel puzzled/confused怒火万丈:flame high感到恶心的:feel disgusted/sickened 气得满脸通红:flame with anger感到恼怒的:feel annoyed勃然大怒:fly into a rage感到愤怒的:feel irritated 感到泄气的:feel discouraged对某人生气:get irritated at充满怨恨的眼神:a resentful look对某人勃然大怒:get mad/cross at sb.愁眉苦脸:have a worried look
全文最后一个句子可以适当对全文进行总结或提升,让阅卷老师觉得文章完整且有深度,读完回味无穷。优秀结尾例句如下:
Even small acts of kindness can make a big difference.即使是小小的善举也能带来很大的不同。
The memory of this unexpected encounter will never fade from my mind.关于这次意外相遇的记忆永远不会从我的脑海中消失。
Even today, I still regard this experience as treasured memory.直到今天,我仍然把这段经历当作珍贵的回忆。
The family made me really moved, and I finally understood it is kindness and help that make the world go around.这个家庭让我很感动,我终于明白,是善良和帮助让世界运转。
心理描写美句欣赏
1.The last word went like a bullet to my heart.最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。
2.A ripple of sadness welled up inside him.他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤
3.He felt the warmth surging through his body.他感到身体里涌动着一股暖流。
4.The loneliness and grief comes in waves.孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。
5. So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.她是如此羞愧以至于脸如充血般发烫。
6. Her eyes misted over as she immersed herself in their good memories.当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时,双眼蒙上了一层水雾。
7.Her brain quickened and all her senses were alert.她的大脑快速运转,所有的感官都处于戒备状态。
8. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.一看到那只凶猛的狼,我就被深深地恐惧感所控制,手心出汗.
9. When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她激动得心砰砰跳。
10. Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench.她的愤怒像潮水一样席卷了她,像恶臭的气味将她包围。
I.词的积累:
名词:appreciation,gratitude,thank(s)
动词:move(感动),appreciate,thank,realize形容词:appreciative,grateful,thankful,moving(动人的),moved(感动的),touched(感动的)副词:gratefully,thankfully
Ⅱ.词块和句的积累:
1. be touched to the heart内心深受感动
2.be moved to tears 感动得流泪
3.Deeply moved by...,I......被...深深感动,我......
4. Touched deeply/immensely,I...深深感动/无比,我......
5.I brimmed over with(满溢;充满)gratitude when.......当......我充满感激。
Ⅱ.词块和句的积累:
6. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears. 我感激地点了点头,眼睛里闪着泪花。
7.I dissolved into tears of gratitude.我开始感激地哭起来。
8.I was deeply affected by her kindness.她的善良深深地打动了我。
9.Words cannot express how thankful I am.言语已不足以表达我对你的谢意。
10. With my thumb up, I expressed my thanks/gratitude again and again/repeatedly.我竖起大拇指,一次又一次地表达我的感谢。
II.词块和句的积累:
6. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears. 我感激地点了点头,眼睛里闪着泪花。
7.I dissolved into tears of gratitude.我开始感激地哭起来。
8.I was deeply affected by her kindness.她的善良深深地打动了我。
9.Words cannot express how thankful I am.言语已不足以表达我对你的谢意。
10. With my thumb up, I expressed my thanks/gratitude again and again/repeatedly.我竖起大拇指,一次又一次地表达我的感谢。
续写微技能——动作描写
head
1.He hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了头。
2.They nodded their heads in agreement.他们点头同意。
3. She shook her head in disbelief.她怀疑地摇摇头。
4.He scratched his head,not understanding a word.他挠了挠头,一个字也听不懂。
5.She buried her head in the pillow.她用枕头捂住脑袋。
face
1.A bright smile appeared on/spread across/crossed his face.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
2.Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.我给她礼物时,他的脸上焕发出了光彩。
3.His face suddenly grew serious.他的表情突然严肃起来。
4.His face looked a little confused.他看起来有点因惑。
5.Jack's face flushed/burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。
续写微技能——动作描写
cheek
1.He rested his cheek on her shoulder.他将面颊靠在她的肩上。
2.He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
3. Her cheeks were wet with tears.她泪流满面。
4. Color rushed/flooded/rose to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.意识到有人在看她,她顿时涨红了脸。
5.A tear slid down her cheek.一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。
eye
1.His eyes were wide with horror.他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。
2.The dog's hungry eyes were on my sandwich.那条狗饥饿的目光落在我的三明治。
3.He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning.听到门把转动的声音,他向门那边看去。
4. Tina squeezed her eyes shut and bit her lip.蒂娜闭上双眼,咬了咬嘴唇。
5.She looked her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.她直视父亲的眼睛,诚实地回答了他的问题。
续写微技能——动作描写
mouth
1.She opened her mouth to say something.她张开嘴要说什么。
2.He covered his mouth to hide his yawn.他捂住嘴偷偷打了个哈欠。
3. Our mouths dropped open in surprise.我们惊奇地张大了嘴。
4.My mouth started watering when I smelled the food.闻到食物的香味,我开始流口水了。
5. His mouth widened to a smile.他的咧开嘴笑了。
hand
1.She took the child's hand and helped him climb the steps.她拉住孩子的手牵着他爬上台阶。
2.He reached for her hand and held it tightly.他伸手抓住她的手并紧紧握住。
3.They walked along,holding hands.他们手拉手并肩走着。
4.He held the key in his hand.他手里拿着钥匙。
5.He grasped the rope with both hands.他双手抓着绳子。
续写微技能——动作描写
heart
1.With a heavy/sinking/broken heart,she watched him go.她看着他离去,心很沉重/心碎了。
2.He set off with a light heart.他出发了,心情很轻松。
3. His sad story touched her heart.他的忧伤的故事打动了她。
4. Her words pierced my heart.她的话刺痛了我的心。
5. Just follow your heart and you'll be happy.听从你的内心,你才会快乐。
back
1.He bends/hunches his back when he walks.当他走路的时候,他弓着背。
2. He yawned and stretched his back as he got out of bed.他起床的时候,打了个哈欠,并伸了个懒腰。
3.He leaned his back against the bar.他斜倚着这根棍子。
4. He smiled and gave me a hearty slap/pat on the back.他笑笑,在我背脊上热情地拍了一下。
5. They tied his hands behind his back.他们把他的双手绑在他的背后。
续写微技能——动作描写
foot
1.He got shakily to his feet.他颤抖地站了起来。
2.She jumped to her feet when she heard the news.当她听到这个消息时,她跳了起来。
3.She was tapping/stamping her feet impatiently.她不耐烦地踩着脚,来回走动。
4.She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.她不情愿地跟在父母后面,拖着脚步。
5.My feet slipped as I was about to shoot and I missed the ball.我脚下滑了一下当我正要射门的时候,一脚踢空。
knee
1.Suddenly her knees buckled/weakened and she fell to the floor.突然,她双膝一软,跪倒在地。
2.He hugged his knees to keep warm.他抱膝取暖。
3.He went/got down on his knees and begged for forgiveness.他双膝跪地,祈求原谅。
4.She sat on her father's knees while he read her a story.她坐在她爸爸的膝盖上,她爸爸给她读故事的时候。
5.He was on his knees,searching for the missing ring.他跪在地上,寻找着丢失的戒指。
美句欣赏:
1.He scratched his head,not understanding a word.他挠了挠头,一个字也听不懂。
2.A bright smile spread across his face.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
3.Her face glowed when I gave her the present.我给她礼物时,他的脸上焕发出了光彩。
4.Jack's face burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。
5. He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
6. Her cheeks were wet with tears.她泪流满面。
7. Color flooded to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.意识到有人在看她,她顿时涨红了脸。
动作描写
美句欣赏:
8. Tina squeezed her eyes shut and bit her lip.蒂娜闭上双眼,咬了咬嘴唇。
9. Our mouths dropped open in surprise.我们惊奇地张大了嘴。
10.They walked along,holding hands.他们手拉手并肩走着。
11.With a sinking heart,she watched him go.她看着他离去,心很沉重/心碎了。12. Her words pierced my heart.她的话刺痛了我的心。
13.She jumped to her feet when she heard the news.当她听到这个消息时,她跳了起来。
14.She was stamping her feet impatiently.她不耐烦地踩着脚,来回走动。
15. She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.她不情愿地跟在父母后面,拖着脚步。
一、表示人物喜乐
既兴奋又开心a mixture of excitement and happiness
心情愉快in cheerful spirits
振作精神keep up one's spirits
满意的表情a satisfied look
高兴地跳起来dance/jump for joy
流下幸福的泪水tears of happiness flowing down
感到鼓舞的feel inspired/encouraged
精神高涨be in high spirit
二、表示悲忧消沉
强烈的失落感a strong sense of loss
陷入绝望fall into despair
悲痛欲绝cry one's heart out
怀着沉重的心情with a heavy heart
沮丧的with a sinking heart
情绪低落be down in spirits
垂头丧气lose one's spirits
意志消沉a broken spirit
三、人物动作或心理活动
鼓起勇气muster up courage
无力改变的结果be powerless to change the outcome
面对斗争与改变in the face of struggle and change
赞赏的眼光an admiring gaze
没有履行职责fail to carry out one's duties
嫉妒的眼光an envious glance
向某人投以爱慕的目光cast admiring glance at sb
完全一团糟be completely in a mess
一项有意义的活动a meaningful/rewarding activity
沮丧的with a sinking heart
好奇地向某人看了一眼throw a curious glance at sb
相信in the belief that
抱着疲惫的双腿回家go home on tired legs
一听到声音就知道是某人recognize sb at first hearing
全心全意be devoted to sth.whole-heartedly
爆发出阵阵喝彩声break into shouts of applause
不耐心地听listen impatiently
感觉很不适应feel out of place
10.毫无倦意show no signs of tiredness
身体动作
head
他羞愧地低下了头。
He hung/ dropped/ lowered/ bent/ bowed his head in shame.
他们点头同意。
They nodded their heads in agreement.
她怀疑地摇摇头。
She shook her head in disbelief.
face
A bright smile appeared on/spread across/crossed his face.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.她的脸上焕发出了光彩。His face suddenly grew serious.他的表情突然严肃起来。
心理描写
horror
His heart was pounding, as if he were frightened.他的心坪坪跳,似乎被吓坏了。
I was frightened,but excited at the same time.我既害怕又兴奋。
● I have never been so scared in all my life.我一生中从来没有这么害怕过。
● My brain is blank. I just want to leave this horrible place.我大脑一片空白,只想离开这个恐怖的地方。
thinking
An idea flashed across his mind.他脑子里闪过一个念头。
● An idea formed in his mind.他脑中有了一个主意。
● An idea occurred to/hit/struck him.他突然有了一个主意。
● He looked out of the window, biting his lips, as if thinking.他一边看着窗外,一边咬着嘴唇,仿佛在思考。She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.她在沉思,几乎听不见周围的话。The opportunity had gone and his mind scrabbled for alternatives.机会已经失去了,他苦苦思索别的方案
环境描写
the blue sky 蓝天 the songs of birds 鸟鸣 the thundering clouds雷霆万钧的云the fragile flowers娇嫩的花 the green grass 青草 the fragrant roses 芬芳的玫瑰the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳
Dark clouds were gathering in the sky.乌云密布。
The night sky was lit up by flashes of light.一道道灯光照亮了夜空。
The clouds had spread and nearly covered the entire sky.云彩扩散开来,几乎遮住了整个天空。
The sun was now high in the southern sky.太阳正高挂在南边的天空上。
The sun went in,and the breeze became cold.云层遮住了太阳,微风有了些凉意。
The mist melted rapidly in the morning sun.在早晨的阳光下,薄雾涣然消散了。
The mountain area is covered entirely in dense jungle.山区完全掩映在茂密的丛林中。
We climbed up a winding track towards a mountain refuge.我们沿着一条蜿蜒的小道爬向山上的一处避难所。The mountain top was covered with snow. 山顶被积雪覆盖。
The region is uninhabited except for a few mountain villages.除了几个小山村之外,这个地区杏无人烟。
What is plot
Plot is the way an author creates and organizes a chain of events in a narrative. The plot must follow a logical, attractive format that draws the reader in. Plot differs from" story" in that it highlights a specific and purposeful cause-and-effect relationship between a sequence of major events in the narrative.
Plot is a literary term defined as the events that make up a story,particularly as they relate to one another in a pattern, in a sequence,through cause and effect.
情节构建
The exposition introduces the characters, describes the setting and establishes the problem in the story.
The rising action is where the suspense builds and the problem gets worse and becomes more complicated.
The climax is the turning point in the story. It is usually the most exciting part in the story and the part that makes the reader eager to keep reading.
The falling action is the events that happen after the climax and lead to a resolution.
The resolution is the outcome of the story. It is how things end up or turn out for the characters.
Evaluating
□Does the writer continue the story based on an understanding of the setting, the characters and the plot of the original story
□Does the continuation start with a reasonable new plot
□Does the writer use descriptive language
□Does the writer include enough sensory details, actions and thoughts
Does the writer create dialogues that sound real and natural
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