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2022上海高三英语二模作文汇编
1.宝山区
VI. Guided Writing
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
现在，除了在实体店购物以外，线上购物的方式也是多种多样，有社区团购，有抖音带货，还有自己直接在线上商家购物等等。你最喜欢哪一种线上购物方式，请介绍一下。
文章必须包括：
1. 简单介绍一种你熟悉的线上购物；
2. 对你所购买物品及售后服务做反馈评价。
（注：文中不要出现真实姓名和学校）
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2.崇明区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是中华中学的高三学生徐晶，最近，学校拟定了今年高三毕业典礼方案的讨论稿如下，并公布在了校园网，征求师生意见。你看到后很想发表你的意见，写一封邮件给负责的王老师，内容须包括：
你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议；
你的理由。
中华中学2022届高三毕业典礼方案（讨论稿） 时间：2022年7月25日（星期一） 地点：学校小礼堂 参与对象：全体高三教师与学生、学校校级领导 典礼内容：高三教师代表发言、高三学生代表发言、颁发毕业证书
注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
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3.奉贤区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，最近你校“解忧”社团（Anxiety Relieving Club）正在招新，旨在帮助同学们排忧减压。你很想成为其中一员，请给社长写封申请信，内容须包括：
1. 你想加入该社团的理由；
2. 你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。
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4.虹口区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120 -150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。某英语杂志最近发起了一个高中生英语征文活动，其主题与内容见下表。要求参加征文活动者除了写出规定的内容外，还须补充至少两点内容，并进行进一步的阐述。请按要求写一篇作文，参加这个征文活动。
英语征文活动
主题 the power of a smile
内容 微笑有助于缓解压力，提高学习效率；微笑是有感染力的（contagious），可以影响身边的人。
你补充的内容 1. ……； 2. ……; (3. ……)
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。
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5黄埔区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是启明中学高三学生李明。临近毕业，你校学生会即将组织一次校园文创产品义卖活动，已在校园网公布了如下方案，征求师生意见。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包含：
1.提出你认为需要改进的地方及改进建议；
2.给出你的理由。
校园文创产品义卖活动方案 时间：2022年7月11日（周一）12:00—13:00 地点：学校操场 拟售文创产品：明信片、帽子、书签、笔记本等
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6.嘉定区
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在征集学生对于“网红景点”（Instagram places）的看法，你对此很有兴趣，决定投稿，内容须包括：
1. 你对“网红景点”的态度；
2. 结合你的亲身经历说明理由。
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8.金山区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
青年强则国强，榜样的力量是无穷的。假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在进行主题为“My role model”的征文活动。你有意参加，写一篇文章，内容须包括：
1）你心目中的青年榜样是谁？他（她）有怎样的优良品质？
2）用一个具体事例说明他（她）的品质。
3）他（她）给你的学习或生活带来了怎样的影响？
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9.静安区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
当今社会，短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一，日前，某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状作了调查，结果如下:
获取短视频内容的类型 受访者平均使用时间占比（该内容浏览时间/总浏览时间）
辅助学习类 48%
娱乐休闲类 31%
生活技能类 12%
其他 9%
请简单描述该图表，并结合自身或他人情况，谈谈你的看法。
（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）
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10.闵行区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设今年暑假你们学校学生会组织部分学生开展支援边远地区一所学校的志愿者活动，正在招募志愿者。现有两个活动方案：一是暑期自费去当地一所学校开展教学工作；二是在暑期开展募捐，购买几台电脑和一些书籍寄往该学校。你有意向参加志愿者活动。
请你写一封信给学生会，信中包括：1、简要介绍你自己；
2、你报名参加哪一个项目；
3、简要说明你选择这个项目的理由。
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11.浦东新区
假如你是李明，你的班级将举行一节班会课，主题为“我喜欢的一句话”。请从下面两句中选择一句撰写发言稿，内容需包括：
1. 你对这句话的理解；
2. 你喜欢这句话的理由（结合生活实例）。
·There is a crack in everything. That’s how the light gets in.
——Leonard Norman Cohen莱昂纳德 科恩（加拿大歌手、诗人）
·Knowing is not enough; we must apply. Willing is not enough; we must do.
——Johann Wolfgan von Goethe歌德（德国作家、诗人）
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12.青浦区
假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，应邀在与海外友好学校的“云班会（virtual class meeting）”上就“居家生活/学习新技能”的话题做交流，你的发言必须包括：
简要介绍你学会的一项有关生活或学习的新技能；
学会这一项技能给你带来的变化。
（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）
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13.松江区
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。你校学生会将代表全体高三学生在毕业典礼上送一份小礼物给本年级的每位老师，现正在征集礼物创意。请你给学生会写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法。你须在邮件中：
1）推荐一份你认为合适的礼物；
2）说明你推荐该礼物的原因。
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14.徐汇区
假设你是明启中学学生王磊，长期以来，一直是个科幻小说迷，甚至还自己写过一些短篇科幻小说。 然而，最近你忽然决定不再看科幻小说了，写了一封信告诉你的好朋友李明，告诉他你的这一段经历，信的内容包括：
1．是什么导致你做出这个决定；
2．你做了哪些事来替代科幻小说；
3．这一段经历给你的启示。
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15.杨浦区
假设你是明启中学张华，你收到好友王磊的邮件，邀请你在暑假期间一起参与志愿者活动。邮件中含有关于志愿者岗位的相关信息(见下表)。写一封回信，告诉他你的选择及理由。
工作场所 工作职责 工作时间
动物收容中心 喂食、洗澡、遛狗、清扫 周一至周五 18:00 -19:00
老年活动中心 介绍智能产品的功能； 教授如何下载和使用应用程序 周六或周日 8:00 – 11:00
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16.长宁区
假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，最近在学校英语报“Advice Column”中看到一则启示，关于征询同学们“提高在线学习有效性”的建议。请给该报的编辑写一封邮件，内容须包括：
1）你的建议
2）你的理由
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2022上海高三英语二模作文汇编
1.宝山区
VI. Guided Writing
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
现在，除了在实体店购物以外，线上购物的方式也是多种多样，有社区团购，有抖音带货，还有自己直接在线上商家购物等等。你最喜欢哪一种线上购物方式，请介绍一下。
文章必须包括：
1. 简单介绍一种你熟悉的线上购物；
2. 对你所购买物品及售后服务做反馈评价。
（注：文中不要出现真实姓名和学校）
【答案】With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. There are various ways to shop online, including group purchasing, Douyin delivery, and so on, among which group purchasing is my favorite.
Group purchasing is very convenient and what is special is that it provides products with low prices, therefore, it saves people a lot of money. Besides, because there are many familiar people participating in group purchasing, it can reduce the risk of buying fake products.
Recently, I bought a laptop through group purchasing. The store shipped quickly and after I received it, the customer service staff carefully explained to me the performance of the computer and how to maintain and update the system to get the best experience. All in all, it is a very pleasant shopping experience.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。现在，除了在实体店购物以外，线上购物的方式也是多种多样，有社区团购，有抖音带货，还有自己直接在线上商家购物等等。请介绍一下你最喜欢的一种线上购物方式，并对你所购买物品及售后服务做反馈评价。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：various→a variety of/varieties of
参加：participate in→take part in/be involved in
减少： reduce→minimize/lower
令人愉快的：pleasant→enjoyable/entertaining
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Besides, because there are many familiar people participating in group purchasing, it can reduce the risk of buying fake products.
拓展句：Besides, many familiar people participate in group purchasing, reducing the risk of buying fake products.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There are various ways to shop online, including group purchasing, Douyin delivery, and so on, among which group purchasing is my favorite.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Group purchasing is very convenient and what is special is that it provides products with low prices, therefore, it saves people a lot of money. （运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
2.崇明区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是中华中学的高三学生徐晶，最近，学校拟定了今年高三毕业典礼方案的讨论稿如下，并公布在了校园网，征求师生意见。你看到后很想发表你的意见，写一封邮件给负责的王老师，内容须包括：
你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议；
你的理由。
中华中学2022届高三毕业典礼方案（讨论稿） 时间：2022年7月25日（星期一） 地点：学校小礼堂 参与对象：全体高三教师与学生、学校校级领导 典礼内容：高三教师代表发言、高三学生代表发言、颁发毕业证书
注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
【答案】Dear Mr. /Ms. Wang,
My name is Xu Jing. I am a senior 3 student from Zhonghua Middle School. Seeing the discussion draft of this year’s senior three graduation ceremony, I am very glad to give you some of my opinions.
First of all, I think the graduation ceremony should be held in June after our college entrance examination. At this time, our high school studies have just finished and we are relatively relaxed. In addition, the graduation ceremony should be held in the playground, where we can see the blue sky and white clouds, and feel closer to nature. Most importantly, the participants should include some parents’ representatives, so that our graduation ceremony will be full of family affection.
Hope my opinions can be of great help to you.
Yours,
Xu Jing
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，对学校拟定的今年高三毕业典礼方案的讨论稿提出自己的意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
观点：idea→opinion
结束：end→finish
此外：besides→in addition
希望：wish→hope
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am a senior 3 student from Zhonghua Middle School.
拓展句：I am a senior 3 student who is from Zhonghua Middle School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Seeing the discussion draft of this year’s senior three graduation ceremony, I am very happy to give you some of my opinions. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】In addition, the graduation ceremony should be held in the playground, where we can see the blue sky and white clouds, and feel closer to nature. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
3.奉贤区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，最近你校“解忧”社团（Anxiety Relieving Club）正在招新，旨在帮助同学们排忧减压。你很想成为其中一员，请给社长写封申请信，内容须包括：
1. 你想加入该社团的理由；
2. 你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress. As a warm-hearted and outgoing boy, I am eager to become a member of it.
At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure. Thanks to the help of teachers and classmates, I came out of the haze, so I have the experience of helping other students reduce pressure. I have found that many students under great pressure are shy and don’t like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key. It’s a good choice to let them join study groups and sports activities.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为学校“解忧”社团的一员，信中介绍你想加入该社团的理由和你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy
创立：set up→establish
害羞的：shy→self-conscious
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure.
拓展句：At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure, which made me sad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I have found that many students under great pressure are shy and don’t like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key.(运用了that引导的宾语从句
4.虹口区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120 -150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。某英语杂志最近发起了一个高中生英语征文活动，其主题与内容见下表。要求参加征文活动者除了写出规定的内容外，还须补充至少两点内容，并进行进一步的阐述。请按要求写一篇作文，参加这个征文活动。
英语征文活动
主题 the power of a smile
内容 微笑有助于缓解压力，提高学习效率；微笑是有感染力的（contagious），可以影响身边的人。
你补充的内容 1. ……； 2. ……; (3. ……)
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。
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【答案】The power of smile
Smile is important in our life. Smile can help relieve your stress, making you relaxed and stress-free. When I was in senior three, I often felt great pressure. Then my teacher recommended that I should face everything in life with a smile. I learned to smile to everything, good or bad, and then I felt a sense of relief as I freed myself from the stress that comes from study. Smile is contagious. A smiling face will always be greeted with smiling faces. Smile has a magic power, bringing happiness to people around you. When you smile, you appear kind and attractive. Smile will bring you good luck. People always say the one who likes smiling will never lack luck. Smile can help us succeed. Nobody will refuse to cooperate with someone with a smiling face. Nobody is unwilling to help you when you smile to everyone. Therefore, success will always be accompanied by a smiling face.
【解析】
【分析】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生根据表格中提示的内容给某英语杂志写一篇题目为“The power of smile”的征文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：recommend→suggest
好运：good luck→good fortune
合作：cooperate with→join hands with
拒绝：refuse→reject
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Smile can help relieve your stress, making you relaxed and stress-free.
拓展句： Smile can help relieve your stress, which makes you relaxed and stress-free.
【点睛】【高分句型1】People always say the one who likes smiling will never lack luck. （运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】 Nobody is unwilling to help you when you smile to everyone. （运用了双重否定表示肯定和when引导的时间状语从句。）
5黄埔区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是启明中学高三学生李明。临近毕业，你校学生会即将组织一次校园文创产品义卖活动，已在校园网公布了如下方案，征求师生意见。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包含：
1.提出你认为需要改进的地方及改进建议；
2.给出你的理由。
校园文创产品义卖活动方案 时间：2022年7月11日（周一）12:00—13:00 地点：学校操场 拟售文创产品：明信片、帽子、书签、笔记本等
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【答案】Dear Students’Union
My name is Li Ming, a student of our Qiming Middle School. I’m more than happy to give you some advice on the Campus cultural and creative products charity sale.
First, I think the time of the charity sale should be between 5:00 and 6:00 on Monday, on July 11, 2022, when we will be free. Besides, the place of the charity sale should be in each clas, where we will not be exposed to the sun. What’s the most important is that we can sell anything as long as they are cultural and creative.
Hope my suggestions can be of great help to you.
Yours
Li Ming
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写一封邮件就将组织的一次校园文创产品义卖活动提出你认为需要改进的地方及改进建议并给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
十分：more than→very
建议：advice→suggestions
只要：as long as→so long as
有空：be free→have free time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My name is Li Ming, a student of our Qiming Middle School.
拓展句：My name is Li Ming, who is a student of our Qiming Middle School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, the place of the charity sale should be in each class, where we will not be exposed to the sun.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】What’s the most important is that we can sell anything as long as they are cultural and creative .(运用了what 引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
6.嘉定区
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在征集学生对于“网红景点”（Instagram places）的看法，你对此很有兴趣，决定投稿，内容须包括：
1. 你对“网红景点”的态度；
2. 结合你的亲身经历说明理由。
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【答案】 I am concerned about the phenomenon when the term “Instagram place” was coined to describe those scenic spots in China, which have gone viral online overnight due to the influence of those popular photo-sharing apps. Objectively speaking, being an Instagram place is a double-edged sword, and its negatives outweigh its positives.
Take my trip as an example. Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to our local Instagram place, a wetland park. The shuttle buses overcrowded, the aggressive and choked traffic disappointed us. Worse still, hardly had we followed the endless stream of people into the park when we became shocked at the rubbish everywhere, uncollected. What we experienced changed our perception of the park. How I miss that quiet, clean park where I used to kill time by reading my novel peacefully!
In the face of a flood of tourists, those “Instagram places” make an immediate profit, but they tend to confront awkward problems, such as traffic congestion, a messy environment, and tourists’ poor experience, which, in turn, will have an adverse effect on the “Instagram places” themselves.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对网红景点发表观点，并结合亲身经历说明其中理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心的：concerned → worried
由于：due to → on account of
令人尴尬的：awkward → embarrassing
改变：change→ alter
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Worse still, hardly had we followed the endless stream of people into the park when we became shocked at the rubbish everywhere, uncollected.
拓展句：Even worse，immediately we followed the endless stream of people into the park, we became shocked at the rubbish everywhere, uncollected.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am concerned about the phenomenon when the term “Instagram place” was coined to describe those scenic spots in China, which have gone viral online overnight due to the influence of those popular photo-sharing apps.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，动词不定式作目的状语，which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Worse still, hardly had we followed the endless stream of people into the park when we became shocked at the rubbish everywhere, uncollected. （运用了倒装句）
8.金山区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
青年强则国强，榜样的力量是无穷的。假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在进行主题为“My role model”的征文活动。你有意参加，写一篇文章，内容须包括：
1）你心目中的青年榜样是谁？他（她）有怎样的优良品质？
2）用一个具体事例说明他（她）的品质。
3）他（她）给你的学习或生活带来了怎样的影响？
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【答案】When comes to role model, people always think about some pop stars or heroes, but my role model is my cousin.
My cousin is a simple math teacher. When I was a child, I always thought to be weak because I’m thin and weak in sports and math. Not only my teachers and classmates, but also my mother always scold that how stupid I was. But cousin didn’t think so. Instead of scolded, she always encouraged me that “don’t give up, just try again”. Besides, she also helped me with math. Because of her patient and good teaching, I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. Because of her encouragement, I overcome lots of difficulties and find back my confidence. What’s more, I became to know that very often a disappointment some times can becomes a turning point for a wonderful experience.
Now I want to express to cousin that how grateful I am, and her words “don’t give up, just try again” are always in my heart.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于“My role model”的征文活动，写一篇参赛文章。
【详解】1.词汇积累
愚蠢的：stupid→ foolish
此外：besides → what’s more
感激的：grateful→ thankful
由于：because of→ due to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Now I want to express to cousin that how grateful I am, and her words “don’t give up, just try again” are always in my heart.
拓展句：Now I want to express to cousin that how grateful I am, whose words “don’t give up, just try again” are always in my heart.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only my teachers and classmates, but also my mother always scold that how stupid I was.（运用了not only…but also..连接的固定句型）
【高分句型2】When I was a child, I always thought to be weak because I'm thin and weak in sports and math.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句
9.静安区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
当今社会，短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一，日前，某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状作了调查，结果如下:
获取短视频内容的类型 受访者平均使用时间占比（该内容浏览时间/总浏览时间）
辅助学习类 48%
娱乐休闲类 31%
生活技能类 12%
其他 9%
请简单描述该图表，并结合自身或他人情况，谈谈你的看法。
（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）
【答案】A survey conducted by a website is aimed at figuring out the situation about high school students’ use of short videos as a channel for gaining information. As is clearly shown in the table, about 48% of their total screen time has been spent on contents that are of benefit to their study while time distributed to videos related to entertainment and leisure accounts for 31%.In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos concerning some important life skills. And 9% is spent on random contents.
As far as I am concerned, it is the advances of the Internet that make it accessible for students to help with their study, relieve themselves of stress and improve their knowledge of life skills through short videos. Thus, it is no wonder that a large proportion of their time is spent on short videos. I am sure that this trend will continue and last forever.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇图表类型作文。要求考生表格展示的内容去描述某地高中使用短视频的现状。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在：be aimed at→ be intended to do
与……相关：related to→ with regard to
除此以外：in addition→ additionally
提高：improve→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos concerning some important life skills.
拓展句：In addition 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos that are relevant to some important life skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is clearly shown in the table, about 48% of their total screen time has been spent on contents that are of benefit to their study while time distributed to videos related to entertainment and leisure accounts for 31%.（运用了as引导的非限制定语从句以及that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As far as I am concerned, it is the advances of the Internet that make it accessible for students to help with their study, relieve themselves of stress and improve their knowledge of life skills through short videos.（运用了强调句型以及make it+形容词+for sb. to do sth.的结构
10.闵行区
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设今年暑假你们学校学生会组织部分学生开展支援边远地区一所学校的志愿者活动，正在招募志愿者。现有两个活动方案：一是暑期自费去当地一所学校开展教学工作；二是在暑期开展募捐，购买几台电脑和一些书籍寄往该学校。你有意向参加志愿者活动。
请你写一封信给学生会，信中包括：1、简要介绍你自己；
2、你报名参加哪一个项目；
3、简要说明你选择这个项目的理由。
【答案】Dear Students Union,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old student in N.6 High School. Hearing that our school will organize some students to hold volunteer activities aiming to support a school in the remote area, I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher and teach at the local school in this summer vacation. And the reasons why I choose it are as follows.
I love teaching and I’ve been dreaming to be an English teacher since I was young. So I will put great enthusiasm into teaching at this local school. Additionally, I have proficiency in both written and spoken English which you can tell from my academic performance, and thus I’m qualified to offer professional guidance to students there.
I do hope that you can consider my application so that I can make some contribution to the voluntary cause of our school and this remote school.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是一篇应用文，学生会正在招募志愿者，开展支援边远地区学校的志愿者活动，写一封申请信，表明自己申报志愿者的具体内容和原因。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
举办：hold→carry out
支援：support→assist
投入：put into→ devote to
考虑：consider→take……into consideration
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher and teach at the local school in this summer vacation.
拓展句：I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher, who can teach at the local school in this summer vacation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that our school will organize some students to hold volunteer activities aiming to support a school in the remote area, I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher and teach at the local school in this summer vacation. (运用了非谓语现在分词结构)
[高分句型2] Additionally, I have proficiency in both written and spoken English which you can tell from my academic performance, and thus I’m qualified to offer professional guidance to students there.(运用了定语从句
11.浦东新区
假如你是李明，你的班级将举行一节班会课，主题为“我喜欢的一句话”。请从下面两句中选择一句撰写发言稿，内容需包括：
1. 你对这句话的理解；
2. 你喜欢这句话的理由（结合生活实例）。
·There is a crack in everything. That’s how the light gets in.
——Leonard Norman Cohen莱昂纳德 科恩（加拿大歌手、诗人）
·Knowing is not enough; we must apply. Willing is not enough; we must do.
——Johann Wolfgan von Goethe歌德（德国作家、诗人）
【答案】Dear classmates,
Today I’d like to share my favorite sentence with you. It is “There is a crack in everything. That’s how the light gets in.”
This sentence means something bad may make good things happen. I still remember the day when I was left alone at home. I carelessly broke the vase, which was much treasured by my father. When he came back, I was so fearful that I didn’t tell him the truth. The cat was my excuse. My father said nothing, but I could read his distrust. The next morning, after a restless night, I admitted to my father that it was my fault. I saw relief in his eyes. He smiled to me. From then on, I never told lies. My honesty won me great trust from others, which benefited my growth a lot.
The accident or exactly the “crack” forced me to mind my behavior. It is the “crack” that is reminding me all the time that I have a long way to go. With the light through the crack can see the road ahead clearly.
Thank you!
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生从下面两句中选择一句撰写发言稿，内容需包括：1. 你对这句话的理解；2. 你喜欢这句话的理由（结合生活实例）。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
发生：happen→occur
珍爱：treasure→cherish
害怕的：fearful→afraid
迫使：force→oblige
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Today I’d like to share my favorite sentence with you. It is “There is a crack in everything. That’s how the light gets in.”
拓展句：Today I’d like to share my favorite sentence with you, which is “There is a crack in everything. That’s how the light gets in.”
【点睛】[高分句型1] I still remember the day when I was left alone at home. (运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I carelessly broke the vase, which was much treasured by my father. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12.青浦区
假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，应邀在与海外友好学校的“云班会（virtual class meeting）”上就“居家生活/学习新技能”的话题做交流，你的发言必须包括：
简要介绍你学会的一项有关生活或学习的新技能；
学会这一项技能给你带来的变化。
（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）
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【答案】Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Qing, a senior 3 student studying in Purun Middle school. It’s my great honor to be invited to attend this virtual class meeting and to share with you what kind of life skill I have learned when staying at home due to the pandemic.
In fact, the new skill is that I have learned to cook delicious beef noodles. Since it was my first time to cook something, I had met several difficulties such as how to slice beef and when to put the ingredients to make tasty beef noodles. Fortunately, with my repeated attempts, my hard work eventually paid off. A bowl of delicate beef noodles giving off pleasant scent was made. It was at that time that I realized that nothing could be done without a willing heart. And it has also taught me to be patient with what I do until success comes.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，应邀在与海外友好学校的“云班会（virtual class meeting）”上就“居家生活/学习新技能”的话题做交流。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸：honor→privilege
遇到：meet→encounter
意识到：realize→be aware of
事实上：in fact→as a matter of fact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A bowl of delicate beef noodles giving off pleasant scent was made.
拓展句：A bowl of delicate beef noodles which gave off pleasant scent was made.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s my great honor to be invited to attend this virtual class meeting and to share with you what kind of life skill I have learned when staying at home due to the pandemic.(运用了it作形式主语，what引导的宾语从句和when 引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】It was at that time that I realized that nothing could be done without a willing heart.(运用了强调句句型)
13.松江区
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。你校学生会将代表全体高三学生在毕业典礼上送一份小礼物给本年级的每位老师，现正在征集礼物创意。请你给学生会写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法。你须在邮件中：
1）推荐一份你认为合适的礼物；
2）说明你推荐该礼物的原因。
【答案】Dear Students’ Union,
Knowing that you intend to give some presents to all teachers of Senior 3 on behalf us at the graduation ceremony, I’m writing with utmost pleasure to offer my recommendation to you.
What I strongly recommend is the vacuum cup that can keep the water heated. As we all know, teachers need to talk a lot in class, so there is no doubt that drinking hot water is good for their throat. What’s more, if a name or a sentence can be inscribed on the cup to show our sincerity, it will be better.
I sincerely hope that you take my recommendation into account. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写信推荐一份礼物给高三年级的每一位老师。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚：sincerity→genuineness
此外：what’s more →besides
对……有益：be good for→do good to
表示：show→ present
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Knowing that you intend to give some presents to all teachers of Senior 3 on behalf us at the graduation ceremony, I’m writing with utmost pleasure to offer my recommendation to you.
拓展句：Because I know you intend to give some presents to all teachers of Senior 3 on behalf us at the graduation ceremony, I’m writing with utmost pleasure to offer my recommendation to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What I strongly recommend is the vacuum cup that can keep the water heated.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】As we all know, teachers need to talk a lot in class, so there is no doubt that drinking hot water is good for their throat.(运用了there is no doubt that…的固定句型)
14.徐汇区
假设你是明启中学学生王磊，长期以来，一直是个科幻小说迷，甚至还自己写过一些短篇科幻小说。 然而，最近你忽然决定不再看科幻小说了，写了一封信告诉你的好朋友李明，告诉他你的这一段经历，信的内容包括：
1．是什么导致你做出这个决定；
2．你做了哪些事来替代科幻小说；
3．这一段经历给你的启示。
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【答案】Dear Li Ming,
I am Wang Lei. I have been a fan of science fiction for a long time. I even wrote some short science fiction stories myself. Recently I decided not to read science fiction any more. I am writing to tell you about my experience.
You know I was addicted to science fiction before. After entering senior three, I found my study was tight and my exam results were not ideal, so I make up my mind to devote myself to studying. I try my best to cultivate my hobbies. For instance, I play badminton to relieve my stress, and join clubs to gradually quit novels. Reading novels is especially consuming because people are engrossed in the novel. After reading, we will be particularly tired. Moreover, my life was extremely irregular, which seriously affected my health and life. This experience made me understand the truth of balancing study and entertainment.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好朋友李明写信告诉他自己不看科幻小说的这一段经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决心做： decided to do→am determined to do
上瘾：be addicted to → be obsessed with/ be hooked on
投身于：devote myself to→apply oneself to
全神贯注于：be engrossed in→ concentrate on/be absorbed in
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：After entering senior three, I found my study was tight and my exam results were not ideal
拓展句：It was after entering senior three that I found my study was tight and my exam results were not ideal.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You know I was addicted to science fiction before（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Moreover, my life was extremely irregular, which seriously affected my health and life. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
15.杨浦区
假设你是明启中学张华，你收到好友王磊的邮件，邀请你在暑假期间一起参与志愿者活动。邮件中含有关于志愿者岗位的相关信息(见下表)。写一封回信，告诉他你的选择及理由。
工作场所 工作职责 工作时间
动物收容中心 喂食、洗澡、遛狗、清扫 周一至周五 18:00 -19:00
老年活动中心 介绍智能产品的功能； 教授如何下载和使用应用程序 周六或周日 8:00 – 11:00
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【答案】Dear Wang Lei,
I’m happy to receive your email. Thanks for your recommendation and invitation. I already made my choice.
I think the animal care center fits me well, because I’m an absolute pet lover. I always want to have my own pet, but unfortunately my parents don’t allow it. So, this is a precious opportunity for me to enjoy living with pets. I can feed, bath, walk dogs and cats as well as do the cleaning for them and I’m sure I can complete these tasks much better than others. Also, I’m available from 6 p.m. to 7 p.m. at weekdays.
How about you What is your pick Please let me know and I can’t wait to see my cute kitties and doggies.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于普通书信。好友王磊邀请在暑假期间一起参与志愿者活动，要求考生给他回信，告诉他自己的选择及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
收到：receive → get
选择：choice → pick
不幸地：unfortunately → unluckily
机会：opportunity → chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So, this is a precious opportunity for me to enjoy living with pets.
拓展句：So, this is a precious opportunity for me where I can enjoy living with pets.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I think the animal care center fits me well, because I’m an absolute pet lover. (运用了省略连接词的宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] I can feed, bath, walk dogs and cats as well as do the cleaning for them and I’m sure I can complete these tasks much better than others.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)
16.长宁区
假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，最近在学校英语报“Advice Column”中看到一则启示，关于征询同学们“提高在线学习有效性”的建议。请给该报的编辑写一封邮件，内容须包括：
1）你的建议
2）你的理由
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【答案】Dear editor:
I'm WangLei, a senior 3 student of Mingqi middle school. Recently, I saw a message in the advice column of the school English newspaper and it asked students for suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning. I’m writing to give my advice.
First of all, you should find a quiet room and put your phone outside the room. The reason is that you should concentrate all your attention on the study and make sure you are not disturbed during your study. What’s more, you should communicate with teachers and students actively in the discussion boards. By doing this, you can not only share your thoughts and experiences but also remember the knowledge well.
I hope my suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
WangLei
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语报的编辑写邮件，对于“提高在线学习有效性”提出建议，并且给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
集中精力：concentrate on→focus on
此外：what's more→besides
交流：communicate→exchange
2.句式拓展
并列句变成复合句
原句： Recently, I saw a message in the advice column of the school English newspaper and it asked students for suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning.
拓展句： Recently, I saw a message in the advice column of the school English newspaper, which asked students for suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason is that you should concentrate all your attention on the study and make sure you are not disturbed during your study.(that引导表语从句)
【高分句型2】By doing this, you can not only share your thoughts and experiences but also remember the knowledge well.(not only…but also…引导的并列句）
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