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Continuation writing——Emotion
读后续写之人物情绪描写
Writing
播放视频：inside out
Fear
Anger
Joy
Disgust
Sadness
She was so sad that she burst into crying.
She was standing by the door, crying sadly.
Please make a sentence to describe how Zhen Huan felt.
She was so angry that she couldn’t help shouting.
She was shouting at Maruko angrily.
Please make a sentence to describe how Maruko’s mother felt.
Suffering and despair defeated her, and she fell sobbing by the door.
痛苦和绝望击垮了她，她靠在门上哭泣。
Maruko’s mother felt that a wave of anger swept over her.
小丸子的妈妈感到一阵愤怒。
She was so sad that she burst into crying.
She was standing by the door, crying sadly.
Suffering and despair defeated her, and she fell sobbing by the door.
She was so angry that she couldn’t help shouting.
She was shouting at Maruko angrily.
Maruko’s mother felt that a wave of anger swept over her.
“无灵”主语句
情绪名词拟人化
运用“无灵”主语句，突出人物的心理、情感，使续写语言更加生动形象、栩栩如生。
句式①
(a burst/wave/surge/sense/feeling of +)表情感状态的名词+有灵动词+sb.
表“某人感到...” 或“一阵/一种...向某人袭来”。
Suffering and despair defeated her.
A wave of anger swept over Maruko’s mother.
“无灵”主语句
Check your answers
情绪 名词 情绪 名词
高兴 后悔
激动、兴奋 焦虑不安
惊讶、震惊 厌烦
失望 孤独
伤心 痛苦
惊慌失措 沮丧
害怕、恐惧 困惑
绝望 恶心
担心、担忧 生气
内疚 宽慰
happiness
excitement
surprise
disappointment
sadness
panic
scare
despair
worry
guilt
regret
anxiety
boredom
loneliness
suffering
depression
confusion
disgust
anger
relief
袭来：
sweep/flood/rush over
击垮：
defeat
get the better of
掠过：
flash/ cross
把...撕碎：
tear...into pieces
吞噬；淹没：
swallow
“有灵”
动词
抓住：
seize
get/take hold of
使失望；有负于：
fail
逃离：
escape
>>>Practice makes perfect!
I. 根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵。
1. 她感到一阵惊慌，但是强迫自己镇静地离开了房间。
___________________________(主语)_______________________________(动词) her, but she forced herself to leave the room calmly.
2. 她站在门口,绝望得说不出话来。
She stood by the door, and ___________________(主语) choked her words.
3. 她慢慢走出屋子，内疚和担忧一阵阵涌上她的心头。
She slowly walked out of the room, and __________________________(主语) _________________________________(动词) her in waves.
A wave/burst/sense of panic
seized/took hold of/swept over
despair/hopelessness
guilt and worry
rushed over/flooded over/swept over
>>>Practice makes perfect!
4. 她焦虑不安，在比赛前突然失去了信心。
_________________(主语) tore her into pieces, and before the competition her _________________(主语) suddenly ___________________________(动词) her.
5. 意识到小男孩说了谎时， 她的脸上掠过失望的神情。
When she realized the little boy had lied, _________________________(主语) ____________________(动词) her face.
Anxiety
confidence
escaped/failed
a look of disappointment
crossed/flashed
>>>Practice makes perfect!
II. 根据 I 中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。
1. 她忽然怒从心头起，但她强迫自己镇静下来。
2. 我抱着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。
3. 他开车驶过那座桥时，阵阵孤独与痛苦涌上心头。
4. 她压力很大。她想坚持，却鼓不起勇气。
5. 他注视着那个沉默的男孩，一脸惊讶。
>>>Practice makes perfect!
II. 根据 I 中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。
1. 她忽然怒从心头起，但她强迫自己镇静下来。
A sudden wave of anger seized/took hold of/swept over her, but she forced herself to calm down.
2. 我拿着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。
I held the present, and excitement choked my words.
>>>Practice makes perfect!
3. 他开车驶过那座桥时，阵阵孤独与痛苦涌上心头。
When he drove by the bridge, loneliness and grief rushed/flooded/swept over him in waves.
4. 她压力很大。她想坚持，却鼓不起勇气。
Stress tore her into pieces. She wanted to insist, but her courage failed/deserted/escaped/ abandoned her.
5. 他注视着那个沉默的男孩，一脸惊讶。
He stared at the silent boy and a look of surprise crossed/flashed his face.
句式②
表示身体部位/音容笑的名词+有灵动词
My fingers shook with anger.
I was relieved when a bright, sweet voice interrupted us.
常见名词：eye, face, heart, hand, finger, laughter, smile, tears, voice...
常用动词：照亮：brighten/ light up 涌出：well up
浮现：spread across 掠过：flash
用...装满：fill... with...
显得阴沉(恐惧、愤怒、忧愁等): cloud over
“无灵”主语句
>>>Practice makes perfect!
I. 根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵。
1. 他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。
The moment he saw the familiar handwriting, _______(主语) ___________(动词) in his eyes.
2. 激动人心的时刻到了，她的心提到了嗓子眼儿。
Then came the exciting moment when __________(主语) ___________(动词) her mouth.
3. 看到那头可怕的狼，我吓得喉咙发紧，两腿发软。
At the sight of the frightening wolf, I felt so scared that __________(主语) ________(动词) and __________(主语) felt weak.
tears
welled up
her heart
flew up
my throat
tightened
my knees
>>>Practice makes perfect!
II. 根据 I 中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。
1. 当老人多年后回到家乡时，激动得热泪盈眶。
When the old man returned to his hometown after so many years, tears of excitement welled up in his eyes.
2. 接着到她表演了，她的心都快跳到嗓子眼儿了。
Then came she to perform, and her heart flew up her mouth.
3. 看着那头发怒的北极熊，我们吓得心脏狂跳，两腿发软。
At the sight of the angry polar bear, we felt so scared that our hearts were pounding and our knees felt weak.
III. 微续写：根据汉语提示利用无灵主语句填写空白部分，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It took 8 hours to rebuild Kelly’s injured face. During the long 8 hours, Rocky was waiting alone outside the operation room.
①____________________________________ (他的小脸苍白，愁云满面). Fear, depression, anxiety, ②______________________________________ (他心中涌现这些负面情绪) as he waited.
③___________________________________________ (因为痛苦和绝望将他撕成碎片), the five-year-old boy just couldn’t stop crying his heart out. No sooner had the doctor told Rocky his mother was fine than he rushed into the room. What first entered his eyes was his mother’s face covered with bandage.
His little face was pale and clouded over
all these negative feelings suddenly swept over him
As suffering and helplessness tore him into pieces
As tears streamed down his cheeks ④______________________________ (用with结构升级划线部分), the boy greeted his mom with a big hug and the warm words that said “I know you can! And I love you no matter how you change!” Kelly held the boy tightly in her arms, ⑤________________________________________________(她的双眼涌上高兴和宽慰的泪水).
With tears streaming down his cheeks
and tears of happiness and relief welled up in her eyes
Homework
I. 记忆无灵主语句。
II. 翻译句子：
1. 我兴奋得说不出话来。
2. 焦虑将他撕成碎片。
3. 嫉妒使我疯狂。
4. 我完全丧失了勇气。
5. 看到我们的飞机和听到飞机隆隆的声音，令我特别神往。
6. 他突然感到不寒而栗。
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