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人教版必修第一册
Reading For Writing
Unit1 Teenage life
---Write a letter of advice
talk with a friend
find a way by yourself
go to an school adviser
......
ask parents for help
turn to a net friend
When you have some problems in life or in study, what will you do
Lead-in
Write a Letter of Advice
Pre-Writing
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very hard to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Letter of Advice
Structure
Date
Greeting
Body
Close
Signature
Heading(Date)→
Greeting------→
Body----------→
Signature-----→
Close(ending)-→
10th September 2018
Dear worried friends,
All the best,
Susan Luo
Learn about the format of a letter
①
②
Read the letter and answer the question:
What is Worried Friend's problem
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very hard to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
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Pre-Writing
Pre-Writing
What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.
Why not discuss the problem together
suggestion 1:
suggestion 3:
suggestion 2:
Read the letter and answer the question:
What is main idea of the underlined sentences What is the function
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very hard to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Pre-Writing
Organization
Find out the organization
of the letter.
Mark the parts of the
letter that match the
following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason.
D. I think my advice will help.
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very hard to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Language features
What expressions does Susan Luo used to make suggestions Circle them in the letter
What expressions does Susan Luo used to show her understanding Circle them in the letter
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei.
I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very hard to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Advanced words & phrases
1. be worried about __________
2. make it adj to do sth ______________
3. recommend sb that sb (should) do _________________
4. It is adj for sb to do sth _________________________
5. _________________对...上瘾
6. __________________专心于; 喜爱
7. _________________聚精会神
8. encourage sb to do sth _________________
担心
使做某事变得...
建议某人做某事
对某人来说做某事怎么样
be addicted to
鼓励某人做某事
focus on
be attracted to
More Expressions
Showing understand
I understand ...
I feel sorry to hear/know/learn that ...
I know how it feels ...
I understand quite well that...
It happens to everyone...
What the problem is
You wrote that ...
I understand very well that you...
You asked me for my advice about/on...
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
②I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
③I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
More Expressions
Making suggestions
I recommend that
I think you should
Why not do
I suggest that you should
It’s helpful to...
If I were you, I would
Explain your reasons
Because...
As...
since
Linking words
First/Firstly,
Second/Senconly
Moreover/Besides/In addiction/ What’s more
Third/ Thirdly
Finally/Lastly/Last/In the end/The last but not the least
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
②I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
③I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
More Expressions
What will happen
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
Hopefully, you will take my advice into consideration.
Hopefully, will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
I hope the information above will be of some help.
Group discussion
Work in groups. Choose one of the three situations and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons.
My parents won’t listen when
I tell them things. I guess it’s
because they’re adults and
can’t understand me. Do
you have any suggestions
I always feel lonely after
school because my parents
work in another city. What
can I do
There is a girl I like in my
class, but I’m too shy to talk to her. Please help me!
Eric, 15, Chicago
Min Ho, 15, Seoul
Xu Ting, 14, Hangzhou
Group discussion
Name Suggestion Reason
Eric
Xu Ting
Min Ho
Try listening to your parents.
Invite them out for a dinner.
It can help you understand them.
This will give you a chance to speak to them in a relaxing way, so that you all can concentrate on the conversation.
Join a club you like.
Connect with your parents
online.
This will give you a chance to be around other people.
Just because they are far away, it doesn't mean you can't talk with them.
Ask a mutual(共同的) friend to introduce you to her.
Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group
member.
Your friend will be able to help you break the ice (破冰)with her and encourage you.
If you are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.
Write the date and greet the reader
___________
Dear_______,
You wrote that ___________.
I understand that _________.
I think ___________________
because__________________.
I'm sure that ______________.
Best wishes,
__________
Show the reader that you know what the problem is.
Tell the reader that you understand how he/she feels.
Tell the reader what you think he/she should do.
Explain your reason(s).
Tell the reader what you think will happen.
Close and sign the letter
While-Writing
Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner's draft.
Are all the parts of a letter included and organised in good order
Does the writer give reasons for the advice
Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions
Does the writer use commas and stops correctly
Is the handwriting easy to read
Checklist
Post-Writing
Revising and sharing
Get your draft back and revise it.
Recommend one group member to share his/her letter of advice.
Select the “Best Adviser of the Class”.
Summary
the structure of a letter of advice
some useful sentences about the
letter of advice

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