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Uuit 4
Reading for Writing
Tsunami Hits Asia: Over 6500 Dead
Lead in
Where did you first know the tsunami
What does a piece of news include
Do you know
Pre-reading
Parts of News
lead 导语
summary
explanation/summary
details and more information
Tsunami Hits Asia: Over 6500 Dead
1st sentence in Para1
headline 标题
body 主体
the rest of the text
Outline 框架
Read the headline（标题）
1. What happened
2. Where did it happen
3. How many people were
dead
Tsunami Hits Asia: Over 6500 Dead
Read the lead（导语）
1. When did the tsunami happen
2. Why did it happen
3. Who were the victims
The most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years caused a tsunami 【that crashed into coastlines across Asia 】yesterday, killing more than 6500 people in Indonesia, India, Thailand, Malaysia, and at least four other countries.
a tsunami
Asia
yesterday(Sunday, Dec.26,2004)
caused by the most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years
more than 6500 people in Indonesia, India, Thailand, Malaysia, and at least four other countries
what
where
who
why
when
southeastern Asian countries
提取“五要素”
Read the body（主体）
Para 1&2
influence of the tsunami
southeastern Asian countries 东南亚的国家
Relation between the lead and body
Read the body
Para 3
results & rescues 海啸的结果和救援
results
结果
The number of deaths and missing is expected to grow even higher.
the rescue work
foreign aid
1.dangerous conditions
2. damaged roads
留谁？
删谁？
只能有60字
化减
The most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years
caused a tsunami 【that crashed into coastlines across Asia 】yesterday, killing more than 6500 people in Indonesia, India,Thailand,Malaysia, and at least four other countries.
A tsunami killed more than 6,500 tourists, fishermen, and other locals in Southeast Asia.
留谁？
what
when
where
results
删谁？
why
process
过程
合并同类项
化简
四 改写
全文主旨句
化简
怎么化简？
方法：减法+合并同类项+改写
如果文章首句不是主旨句
怎么找？
找 what when where
Thousands of people are missing and the number of deaths is expected to grow even higher over the next few days.
Thousands of people are lost
and the number of deaths is still increasing.
改写
要点 1
However, dangerous conditions and damaged roads will make it difficult to deliver food and
supplies.
However, the damage caused by the tsunami is making it difficult for rescue workers to help the survivors.
改写
概要写作的本质
本质
用自己简洁的话去除次要的,只留文章的核心（重点）
概要写作的形式
主旨句
若干拓展句
总结
概要写作的方法
“减法运算+合并同类项+改写”
写作要求
评分标准
概要步骤
第一步：读第一遍;
判断文章体裁
找全文主旨句
The night the earth didn't sleep
全文主旨
如果文章首句不是主旨句？
怎么办？
全文主旨
时间 when
地点 where
发生了什么 what
合并：when + where + what
找
第一段主旨句
when: on 28 July 1976
ｗhere: in Tangshan, Hebei
what: a earthquake struck
合成主旨句：
A serious earthquake struck Tangshan, China.
文章体裁
文章体裁 主题句的构成 拓展
说明文 说明的观点、对象、现象 解释/分述
（3句左右）
议论文 文章的论点 文章论据
（1句）
叙事类 when+where+ what 事件的发展；
高潮；结尾；
概要形式
第二步：再读一遍；
找每段的主旨句（支持性的信息）
第一段主旨句
Strange things were happening in the countryside of northeastern Hebei.
第二步：再读一遍；
找每段的主旨句（支持性的信息）
第二段主旨句
第一段主旨句
At 3:42 a.m., everything began to shake.
In less than one minute, a large city lay in ruins.
第二步：再读一遍；
找每段的主旨句（支持性的信息）
第三段主旨句
第一段主旨句
There were nothing but ruins.
Nearly everything in the city was destroyed.
Another big quake shook Tangshan again.
第二步：再读一遍；
找每段的主旨句（支持性的信息）
第四段主旨句
第一段主旨句
But hope was not lost. The army sent 150,000 soldiers to Tangshan to dig out
those who were trapped and to bury the
dead.
第二步：再读一遍；
找每段的主旨句（支持性的信息）
第五段主旨句
第一段主旨句
Tangshan started to revive itself.
A new Tangshan was bulit upon the earthquake ruins.
第三步：
（1）判断各段主旨句之间的关系
（2）判断各段主旨句与全文主旨句 之间的关系；
第四步：根据行文的逻辑，使用衔接词，
将各段大意串联。
①必须使用衔接词；
②不可使用原句、原词；
③不可出现例子；
④不可出现过于细节的内容；
第二步：再读一遍；
找每段的主旨句（支持性的信息）
第一段主旨句
write
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第二步：再读一遍；
找每段的主旨句（支持性的信息）
第一段主旨句
Check out
1. 是否为 《一段》；
2. 是否在《60-80词》左右；
3. 有没有使用衔接词；
4. 有没有涵盖所有的要点；
5. 有没有细节和例子；
6. 书写
7. 拼写和标点

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