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(共13张PPT)
Continuation writing
Step 1:Read for the basic information
who when where what
(1) I am a proud mother of three children, my last little one being delivered in the middle of this pandemic(全球性疫情). She was born in August and her name is Aida.
(2) Shortly after having Aida, my mother-in-law Ann showed me something she learned from her friend’s mother in an art class she attended weekly. She had showed me how to knit (编织) a scarf. She showed me stitches (针) and gave me her half done project.
(3) I spent a lot of time breastfeeding my sweet little girl, so I had some extra time to do something with my hands throughout the day. I enjoyed making the scarf so I purchased tons of yarn (线) since it was winter. I wanted to make scarves for my three children as Christmas gifts.
(4) There was a new family that moved in down the street. The only daughter of the family was Jane, a shy girl, aged 14, the same age of my oldest son David. It seemed that she came from a financially disadvantaged family, for she always wore old clothes. Worse sill, in such cold days, she had no more clothes to wear and trembled with cold.
(5) Due to the pandemic, society was thrown into crisis mode. Schools were closed, food supplies and deliveries were suspended and children were stuck at home. In such discouraging times, however, they became good companions, talking and playing at home or around the houses.
(6) It was dreadfully cold this winter. Every time David came back from outside, with red face, he always cried, “Mum, it is freezing outside!” Then, he came over to see whether I finished the scarf. I could tell how impatient he was to wear my scarf sooner! I had to speed the project to satisfy his expectation. But David comforted me saying he could wait a few days. What a kind and considerate boy he was! Then my great art project finally was accomplished on the morning ahead of Christmas.
(1) I am a proud mother of three children, my last little one being delivered in the middle of this pandemic(全球性疫情). She was born in August and her name is Aida.
(2) Shortly after having Aida, my mother-in-law Ann showed me something she learned from her friend’s mother in an art class she attended weekly. She had showed me how to knit (编织) a scarf. She showed me stitches (针) and gave me her half done project.
(3) I spent a lot of time breastfeeding my sweet little girl, so I had some extra time to do something with my hands throughout the day. I enjoyed making the scarf so I purchased tons of yarn (线) since it was winter. I wanted to make scarves for my three children as Christmas gifts.
Step 2: Read for the plot
(4) There was a new family that moved in down the street. The only daughter of the family was Jane, a shy girl, aged 14, the same age of my oldest son David. It seemed that she came from a financially disadvantaged family, for she always wore old clothes. Worse sill, in such cold days, she had no more clothes to wear and trembled with cold.
(5) Due to the pandemic, society was thrown into crisis mode. Schools were closed, food supplies and deliveries were suspended and children were stuck at home. In such discouraging times, however, they became good companions, talking and playing at home or around the houses.
(6) It was dreadfully cold this winter. Every time David came back from outside, with red face, he always cried, “Mum, it is freezing outside!” Then, he came over to see whether I finished the scarf. I could tell how impatient he was to wear my scarf sooner! I had to speed the project to satisfy his expectation. But David comforted me saying he could wait a few days. What a kind and considerate boy he was! Then my great art project finally was accomplished on the morning ahead of Christmas.
Step 2: Read for the plot
I wrapped the scarf around David’s neck.
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Later that day David came back saying Jane also deserved a scarf.
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得到围巾
打算编织围巾
等待围巾
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送围巾
Step 3: Predict the plot
scarf
Para1：I wrapped the scarf around David's neck.
Plot1：His reaction.
Plot2：My response.
Plot3：He went out to play with Jane.
Para2: Later, David came back saying Jane deserved a scarf.
Plot 1：explained his reason；my response.
Plot 2：went out to give away his scarf to Jane.
Plot3：My feelings----theme
Step 3: Predict the plot
1. I felt gratified(欣慰的) and was blessed with(有幸拥有) a kind and considerate boy as my son.
2.I was happy that both of them received the best gift for Christmas. For Jane——a scarf to keep warm and for David ——a taste of happiness of giving.(给予的幸福滋味)
3. I felt a burst of pride and did believe that the scarf can warm all of us and help us go through the freezing cold even the severe pandemic.
theme
(kindness and love)
Plot 1：his reaction
Step 4: Organize language based on the plot.
(his feelings ；his action；his words)
普通版：He was happy and jumped with joy, saying “Thank you, mum.”
VS
To Tell
To Show
To show : to write with more sensory(感官的) detais ,allowing your readers to hear, see, taste, touch and smell the same things your characters are experiencing .
概括描写
细节描写
Plot 1：his reaction
Looking down at the scarf, he was overjoyed, his face lighting up the whole room and dark eyes twinkling like diamonds.
低头看着我刚刚完成的围巾，他喜出望外，他的脸照亮了整个房间，黑色的眼睛像钻石一般闪烁。
升级版1. 现在分词作状语，独立主格；描写他的脸；比喻手法描写他的眼睛
升级版2. 形容词短语做状语，细化动作；
Unable to contain his excitement, he threw himself into my arms， murmuring,“Thank you, mum.“
不能抑制住他的激动，他一下子扑到我的怀里，喃喃道：妈妈，谢谢你。
Step 4: Organize language based on the plot.
(his feelings ；his action；his words)
普通版：He was happy and jumped with joy, saying “Thank you, mum.”
Unable to contain excitement, he gave me a big hug, saying“Thank you, mum. This is the best gift I have ever received.“
不能抑制住他的激动，他给了我一个大大的拥抱并说到：妈妈，谢谢你，这是我收到的最好的礼物。
Plot 2 my reaction
Stroking his head affectionately and patting his back，l answered, “With this scarf，you needn't worry about the freezing cold any more.“
我慈爱地抚摸着他的头，拍了拍他的背，说，“有了这条围巾，你不用再担心严寒了。
Step 4: Organize language based on the plot.
基础版：I said, “With this scarf, you needn't worry about the cold weather.”
my words; my action
升级版：运用比喻形象的描写了David的心情； 运用with复合结构
Plot 3 He went out to play with Jane.
Then，he dashed out like a happy deer to play with Jane，with his scarf around his neck flying in the air.
然后，他像只可爱的小鹿一样跑了出去，脖子上的围巾在空中飞舞着。
At the moment, Jane called David to play outside as usual. He dashed out……
Step 4: Organize language based on the plot.
Plot 4 explained his reason & my respond
基础版：He said that Jane didn't have a scarf to wear and was very cold when they played. Hearing his words，I said ok.
Obviously, David noticed Jane could hardly bear the freezing weather with worn-out clothes. “Can I give this to Jane as a Christmas gift ”David looked at me full of expectation. I nodded with smiling.
“Mum, it is dreadfully cold outside, but Jane doesn’t have a warm clothes even a scarf!” he explained with a hint of sadness in his tone. With tears blurring my eyes, I was touched by his words, promising to knit a scarf for Jane. “But I want to give this to Jane as a Christmas gift, isn’t ok ”David looked at me full of expectation. I nodded with smiling.
Plot 5 David went out to give away his scarf
After getting my permission, David rushed into Jane’s house like wind, with the scarf in his hand
1. I felt gratified(欣慰的) and was blessed with(有幸拥有) a kind and considerate boy as my son.
2.I was happy that both of them received the best gift for Christmas. For Jane——a scarf to keep warm and for David ——a taste of happiness of giving.(给予的幸福滋味)
3. I felt a burst of pride and did believe that the scarf can warm all of us and help us go through the freezing cold even the severe pandemic.
theme
(kindness and love)
I wrapped the scarf around David 's neck. Looking down at the scarf, he was overjoyed, his face lighting up the whole room and dark eyes twinkling like diamonds. Unable to contain his excitement, he gave me a big hug, saying“Thank you, mum. This is the best gift I have ever received.“ Stroking his head affectionately and patting his back，l answered, “With this scarf，you needn't worry about the freezing cold any more.“ At the moment, Jane called David to play outside as usual. He dashed out like a happy deer to play with Jane，with his scarf around his neck flying in the air.
Later that day David came back saying Jane also deserved a scarf. Obviously, David noticed Jane could hardly bear the dreadfully cold weather with worn-out clothes. “Can I give this to Jane as a Christmas gift ” David looked at me full of expectation. I nodded with smiling. Seeing David rush into Jane's house with the scarf in his hand, I felt a burst of pride. I was happy that both of them received the best gift for Christmas . For Jane---a scarf to keep warm and for David ---a taste of happiness of giving .

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