高中英语高考二轮专题复习讲义 第四部分写作 专题二 第2讲励志类学案(有答案)

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高中英语高考二轮专题复习讲义 第四部分写作 专题二 第2讲励志类学案(有答案)

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once, there were several researchers in a forest, trying to study the rarest creature in the world. No one had ever seen it, and its existence was only known by some remains, and by its highly characteristic call. The call was similar to that of a dog with a toothache: “Oooh ... wa ooOOOH!”
Everyone expected to be the first to photograph and study it. The “beast” was active at night, so during the day the researchers would pass their time making a study of other matters or in discussion. The most remarkable of them was Sir Walter Tick Fondler. He was a very pleasant and reliable man, with a tiny little moustache and a huge explorer's hat. Every day, before tea, he would spend an hour sitting at his desk, putting all his equipment and bits and pieces in their proper place. He did this with careful precision. The notebook went right at the far edge of the desk, on the right hand side, slightly beyond the recorder, and next to the five pencils which were always in the same order: black, red, blue, green and yellow. The lamp was always towards the end of the desk, next to the camera, on the left ... and so it was with all his things, even with the smallest of details. Everyone was amused that this gentleman was such a perfect example of the famous English obsession with order.
The researchers spent a great many nights in that area before the creature appeared, and before it did so some of them even doubted its existence. It, however, appeared suddenly, while everything was quiet.
Only a few meters away, the researchers heard its call which was the famous call of the dog with a toothache, loud and clear. It lasted only an instant, because all the commotion (骚动)of the researchers scrabbling for their cameras and notebooks scared the creature, and it shot off before it could apparently be seen or studied in any detail.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
The next morning the researchers all compared their findings.                                    
                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
They were all wondering how Sir Walter Tick Fondler made it.                                     
                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
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所给故事内容
几名研究人员在森林里试图拍摄一种没有人见过的、在晚上比较活跃的稀有动物。白天他们都在研究讨论其他事情,只有Sir Walter Tick Fondler一直在有条不紊地把所有大小设备摆放到合适的位置。一天晚上,稀有动物突然现身,但大家匆忙做记录的骚动把动物吓到了。在大家还没看清时,它就消失不见了。
续写段首句分析
(1)根据段首句1 “第二天早晨研究者们都在比较他们的发现”,我们可作如下思考:
①他们都记录了些什么呢?
因为在研究者还没有看清这只动物之前,它就被吓跑了,所以研究者记录的东西肯定不太全面,由此可推测,有的人记录了叫声、有的人记录了它是如何移动的,有的人还拍到了(photograph)它的尾巴和腿等。
②谁的记录最完整呢?
结合原文及续写第二段的开头话可知,Sir Walter Tick Fondler总是将一切都安排得井井有条,在那么仓促、突然的情况下,他的记录应该是最完整的,可推测他不仅拍到了几张完整的照片,而且还记录了它的叫声。
(2)根据段首句2 “他们都很好奇 Sir Walter Tick Fondler是怎么做到的”,我们可作如下思考:
①他是怎么做到的呢?
因为他总是把东西摆放得井井有条,所以在黑暗中他也可以快速地找到录音机、相机、笔记本和笔等。
②这一出色表现会给他带来什么呢?
这次完整、清晰地记录这一罕见动物使他名声大噪。
安排续写情节
①:第二天早上,研究人员比较他们的发现→有的人记录了叫声,有的记录了它是如何移动的,有的甚至拍到了它的尾巴和腿→他们为记录到的东西互相祝贺→当他们看到 Sir Walter Tick Fondler 的记录时都震惊了→他拍到了几张完整的照片,且录到了它的叫声,并就此做了一次详细、完美的展示
②:其他研究人员很好奇他是怎么做到的→他们祝贺Sir Walter Tick Fondler,也明白了他为什么总是把东西摆放得井井有条→他可以快速地找到录音机、相机、笔记本等→Sir Walter Tick Fondler 对世界上最稀有生物的研究贡献使他为众人所知
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The_next_morning_the_researchers_all_compared_their_findings. Some had managed to record its call, others had noted down how it moved, and the most fortunate of all had even managed to photograph parts of its tail and legs. They all congratulated each other on what they had got, but when they saw what Sir Walter Tick Fondler had got, they were shocked. He had taken several complete photos, as well as recording its cry. Then he made a perfect full color presentation on the creature in detail!
They_were_all_wondering_how_Sir_Walter_Tick Fondler_made_it. Then they ran to congratulate him as the best researcher of them all. And they understood that his obsession with order had been the best way to prepare himself for working in the dark. This had meant Sir Walter Tick Fondler had no problem in finding and using the recorder, the camera, the notebook and the pencils, all in a flash and without having to look for them. Of course, the work Sir Walter Tick Fondler did on “the rarest creature in the world” made him well known.
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My mother once read me a speech she had made at a local high school that life is learning to deal with Plan B, hoping that she'd answer my endless questions.
Ever since I was very young, I have turned to my parents, grandparents, friends and teachers for guidance. Afraid to make a mistake, I've asked countless what to do, because I only wanted to do things in the “right” way, even if it didn't mean doing something.
Sometime during my high school years, I changed. Maybe it was when I decided to try for the lead in “Beauty and the Beast”. Never mind that I would have to memorize lines, I would take the chance that I might fail. The day of tryouts I was still telling myself, “If you don't think you can do it in the right way, just don't go.” My heart was pounding so quickly when I got up to sing that I wasn't certain the people holding the audition would hear me.
But something happened. When I opened my mouth to sing, the sound was loud, powerful and sweet. I reached the high notes that sometimes were beyond my reach and nailed them. With no crack in my voice, I was trying to do my best even though I might fail. But I didn't.
That audition probably wasn't the end of the trap that kept me from trying but it was definitely an important part of the process. I realize that if I want to live life to the fullest, I have to take chances.
Now, I do take these chances, with steps every day, voicing my opinions in class discussions, reaching a high note when I sing, performing in other school plays, riding my horse over a three foot jump, and doing running, my favorite sport.
However, three years ago, I fell from my horse going around a hunt course, hurting my legs so I couldn't carry a bag or take gym for four months.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
It was both frightening and limiting for I couldn't ride for nearly a year.                                    
                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
I have come to realize what my mother read me.                                    
                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
写前导读:本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。文章讲述了“我”高中时期抓住机会让自己的人生变得更充实的事情。“我”在一次狩猎课上坠马导致脚受伤,将近一年不能骑马,“我”会放弃跑步吗?“我”从母亲的话中又得到了什么启发呢?
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It_was_both_frightening_and_limiting_for_I_couldn't_ride_for_nearly_a_year. The injury meant I couldn't ride my horse, which I loved. However, I still liked to run, so I started running with my mother. No stopwatches. No cheering crowds. But I have finally pulled through and learned to push myself. I'm taking a tough science course now and have overtaken my classmates in many courses. I'm taking chances. If I try hard enough, I'll get improvement in my acting and science course regardless of making a mistake.
I_have_come_to_realize_what_my_mother_read_me._ Even though my parents, grandparents, friends and teachers don't always have the answer to my what to do question, they will be there to support me. I try, because my mother stated in her speech that life is learning to deal with Plan B. More importantly, I now know that the plans I make for my life will become easier and easier with every chance I take.

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